Never let u go (Chpt 23)

Chapter 24
11 pm
One hour before Radhika’s birthday
Arjun was standing at parking lot of Radhika’s apartment like he was waiting for someone. Suddenly his phone started to buzz.
“ Hey..Where are you?? I’m waiting here…” He frowned
Someone speaks on other end.
“Okay..Have you brought all the listed things which I told you?” He asked
“Yess sir…” voice said at the other end
“ Fine…come fast…” He ends the call and smiled.

Radhika was lying on her bed waiting for slumber to grab her and she could sleep peacefully.
This would be her first birthday when she was all alone. Suddenly she heard a noise from kitchen and got up to find out.
She entered into the kitchen without switching on the lights.

“ Who’s there..” She whispered and found none in the kitchen.
As she turned to go towards living room she collided with something..something very strong like a wall..but due to sudden encounter she slip and fall but with her she felt that wall also falling.

Light gets on.
She found herself on Arjun‘s strong body;they fall on sofa, she got shocked.
“Happy birthday to you..happy birthday to you..happy birthday dear RADHIKAAAA…Happy Birthday to you…..” She heard chorus sound
And found Teji, Zubin,Kritika,Aditya and Rita holding balloons, ribbons and cake…
Arjun whispered in her ear
“ Happy Birthday Radhika…”
She blushes and her skin turned crimson with his whisper.
Aradhika got up.
Radhika was very happy with this surprise she couldn’t stop smiling.
“ Oh My you guys plan this? Means literally I didn’t even know when guys slipped into the apartment…” Radhika exclaimed

“ Thanks to Arjun sir..He made this all plan..and we entered in by spare key given by Sam…and its credit again goes to Arjun Sir..” Teji answered

She looks at him who was busy watching her leaning to the wall having sweet smile on his face.
“ Okay…let’s cut the cake Radhika ..I’m damn hungry this Kritika didn’t allowed me to eat something while we came here…” Zubin said teasingly to Kritika

Radhika nodded.
Teji lit up the candles and brought cake before Radhika which was of butterscotch flavor her favorites.

“ Wow it’s so lovely…It’s my favorite…Thank you guys…” She took picture of cake in her mobile.
“ Make wish and then blow off the candle in one go..” kritika instructed
She closed her eyes in order to make a wish and then excitedly blew out the all candles in one go..
After feeding piece of cake to all she came to Arjun.
Radhika decided to shove her piece of cake onto Arjun’s face..
“ Ah..”
All turned around to see Arjun’s face covered in butterscotch and whipped cream.
All waited to see Arjun’s reaction. He stood there with cake dripping down on his t-shirt and Radhika laughing uncontrollably. With that he took big piece and gets hold of her and shoved it on Radhika’s face. With this real entertainment started and all other started to apply cake on each other’s face.

“ This is crasy…We were supposed to be celebrating my birthday and not wasting such yummy cake. I am putting an end to this…” Radhika said peeping from behind curtain where she hides herself from cake holi.
Eventually with that all started to laugh and all stopped playing and clean themselves.
After giving her gift all started to leave.
At last Arjun came close to her and wished her birthday again.
“ Thank you So much Arjun for making my birthday special ..” She said with sparkling eyes.

“ Still many more surprises are waiting for you…”
He muttered and went downstairs.

She waved good bye to all from balcony of her room and turned to found four boxes on her bed with small note on upper box.

“ Radhika,
I hope you enjoyed my little surprise. I just want to shock you and make you feel special. There are 24 surprises coming your way with the sun shine. Out of 24, four presents on your bed which has a gift for you. Tomorrow, neither of us going to office. So be ready at 12 pm sharp..i will be waiting for you…
Radhika took out gift wrap from of one the boxes and find a rich baby pink color chicken work Anarkali salwar kameez. The baby pink cum peach color churidar looking lovely with net peach color dupatta.
She unwrapped the next box having small pendant necklace with matching jhumake in it. Third box contains a peach color diamond bracelet. And last box contains matching stilettos with dress with note
“Do wear it tomorrow…Please accept this gifts…for me”
She was surprised with all the gifts and excited for next day morning. Rather than having gifts she was happy to spend time with him.

Radhika woke up with sun shine down on her face. She felt the birthday celebration, surprise, gift and all would have been her dreams but soon the boxes proved its reality.

She pulled of her cloths from closet and went to take her shower.
After shower she felt very refreshed and went to kitchen for some daily chores.
Doorbell bang
She went to open it and found a flower delivery boy. She laid him in. with that he brought 24 bouquets of red roses containing 24 roses in each bouquet with small greeting.
“You are special like these Roses…”
She blushed. Living room of her apartment got fully occupied by bouquets.
After some time doorbell rang again with courier boy who delivers soft toy of Tweety with a note..
“ You are like this tweety ..Looks cute when you smile…”
After sometime again bell rang with gift no. 18 having a big collage of her pictures from childhood to present

“ From cute to beautiful…”
“Oh my god..he has gone CRAZYYYYY….” She whispered. She checks the time its read 11 pm.
She rushes to the bedroom to get ready for ride which was complete surprise for her.
Radhika wore the dress which Arjun had gifted her. She looked fabulous and stunning in that peach color Anarkali. She wore same stilettos and white Jhumake having peach color stones. She wrapped the bracelet around her tender wrist and put on some kohl and lip gloss on lips which added to her beauty.
Radhika’s dress

She was all set to leave. She decided not to call him rather going downstairs and find that he remember his given time or waiting for her call..

She locked the front door and went downstairs.
She opens the gate and found Arjun already waiting for her leaning to car he was standing with his signature smile.
Arjun was dressed in dark button down shirt that showed how defined his masculine chest was along with the tight pair of jeans.

Her heart skipped a beat or two.
When he saw her coming towards him, he was floored by her beauty. She looked more beautiful than what he had imagined.She came near him and gave him a warm smile. He gazed her carefully from head to toe. He first time saw her in Indian attire.
“ You looks so should wear Indian outfits” Arjun said still looking at her in wonder.

“ Thank you Arjun. I have never felt this special before.Its just because you…” She said blushingly….

“ Let’s go…” He said, she felt his eyes deep warm…she nodded because shyness of his constant glare on him making her unable to form a sentence.

“ Where are we going?” radhika

“ Towards your next surprise…” Arjun winked while driving his constant glares on her.
After driving for half an hour they reached the destination.
Radhika got down from car and found Temple in front her. Her eyes lighten up with happiness, winked at Arjun.
AS they entered the temple premises felt the cool breeze from lawn.
“Arjun, I can feel such positive vibes here. I am in love with this place.” She whispered.
They entered into the temple which had golden kalash and white marble floor, white pillars decorated with marigold flowers.
Radhika enthralled with design of temple looked in all direction.
They took flowers from vender.She covered her head by dupatta.
They see lord Ganesha idol in middle of temple with priest worshipping the god.
They bowed down in respect, folded their hand for prayers.
Arjun looked at Radhika, Her closed eyes form making her look calm and innocent. Radhika opened her eyes slowly with a smile on her face and turned her face towards Arjun who was gazing at her.
Panditji gave them holy water and Prashad.
They came outside the temple, felt peace in the shed of supreme power. They seated silent under one big tree in the premises.
“ There is different sort of peace we can feel near the almighty God…” Radhika whispered.
“ Yeah..Thanks to you Radhika..Because of you I started believe on God again…” Arjun eyes shimmered.
She smiles at him.
As they got up to leave, one by one small kids started to came to Radhika,
“ Happy B’day Di..” A kid said and gave her kissy on her chin and this all the other 23 kids wished her the same.

Arjun was smiling at her because she was shocked with this sudden surprise.
Arjun gave chocolates and kids went happily with it.
After roaming all over city Arjun gave other gifts like chocolate box, her favorites author book with signed copy, her favorite dish, her favorite song CD like this, wrist watch etc…Now only four gift were remaining.

Radhika thanked him with a ravishing smile for wonderful day.
While driving they could see beautiful sunset on horizon.

“ So where are we going now? What’s the special plan? “ Radhika asked in excitement.

“ Just a little more wait. You will see the real surprise which I have planned for your Birthday.” He winked and smiled, accelerated the car more speed.

Once they reached their spot, he parked the car and the staff escorted them to the “ Lindt Chocolatier café cum beach Restaurant “.
Radhika was thrilled at the thought of Arjun’s mysterious plan and was also nervous since no one had ever done anything of that sort for her. Arjun ensured Radhika was completely seated and disappeared for couple of minutes to talk to the manager.
Once everything was set, he took Radhika along with him to surprise her with one of the best evening of her life.

“ Can you please give away the suspense now?” Radhika couln’t controls her anxiety.

“ We are at private space I booked for us.. For this you have to have this…” He showed the black blindfold..
She made pout face and he holds her from back and ties the blindfold on her eyes.

As they walked to the spot he unfolds the tie of unfold.

Radhika was awestruck when she saw the scenic beauty and ambiance of the spot.
All places were decorated with light, candles and flowers. A wooden way was floating on sea, reached to a dies where table and two chairs were arranged with dinner plates. On top of it there was sky full of shimmering stars which reflection was appeared in sea water which making it look like sea and sky were met at the moment. Sound of waves and cold breeze were coming from sea side making it more romantic.
As she stepped forward she sees the rose petal spread all over the place.She was awestruck and couldn’t able to believe that it was real. She felt she was dreaming, her happiness was clearly visible in her sparkling eyes.
He holds her hand laid her to the tree on which different color of lights glowing with small notes on every branch..
There were 24 short poems written on the every note. She got mesmerized with the notes and busy got busy reading them.

“Radhika…” Arjun called her from behind standing on floating dies.

She turned and found him holding Guitar in his hand, she walks towards him. He makes her seat on one of the chair.
“ Very few know my passion about Guitar…Its just because you, I touched this Guitar after my college days….So these your 23rd means Second last surprise..I will play it for you…” Arjun brush his finger across the strings of Guitar and holding her hand makes her seat at the dining table in tent.

The whole day brought surprises for her she just left amazed at every surprise by him and couldn’t able to decide which one is best. But listening to Arjun singing and playing Guitar is the most amazing surprise she got she thought to herself. With strings sound she came out of her thoughts.
Placing his hands on strings he started to play and sing…

Kehta hain…
Khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye
Tera milana hai uss rab ka ishaara maano
Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisike liye….

Kuch toh hai tujh se Raabta
Kuch toh hai tujh se Raabta
Kaise hum jaane, hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujh se Raabta

Tu humsafar hai
Phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yehi hai
Marana issi k liye….ooooooohoooo

She leaned her chin against her hand and tears streaming down from her face.He continued to play and went on to the other song

Dil ka yeh kya raaz hai
Jaane kya kar gaye
Jaise aandhero mein tum
Chandani bhar gaye

Kare chaand taaron ko mashhoor itana kyun
Kambhakhat inse bhi khoobsoorat hai tu…

He stopped for a moment and come close to her. She stands when he came close to her.
He went to his knees and sang other part..


Radhika stood numb she couldn’t able to Say anything.. She stood frozen
Arjun got stand up and took her hand into his and continued. She felt electricity

“ This is your 24th gift, my proposal. I would like to tell you that you have wooed me from the very first meeting at the disc. You might have not noticed me there but I lost my heat to you at that very moment. You’ve touched my life so deeply that now there is no going back. Before meeting you, I never believed on true love since people like you were never around me.Yet you made it possible. You made me believe on true love. I don’t know what you think of me, but you are special to me. You are the most beautiful girl in this world for me. I feel your love in every song but I have kept hidden for so long. But now I have to say it….
With all the faith, I love you Radhika….”

She quickly pulled her hand away to calm herself..
“ Arjun, please stop. You don’t know what are you saying. You wouldn’t be happy if you had me..Please I’m not best girl for you..You are too good for me. “ She blurred out whatever comes in her mind
“ Radhika you are the only best girl for me…I don’t want to anyone besides me except you…”
Arjun come and hold her at her shoulder.

“ No don’t understand I have past…Please ” Tears trembling down from her face

“ Don’t do these to me Radhika..I don’t care about any past of yours…” He held her tight making his grip tighten on her skin

“ Please forget me will be Good for you..because….”
She stop for moment sobbing in tears..

“ because I’m a divorcee…” She completed her sentence in started crying vigorously

Arjun got frozen with her word, he felt like someone pour hot iron on his heart.

Next chappy : Radhika’s whole past story

SOOOOO friends this the longest chappy I wrote..OMG I am very nervous please share your reviews…How this chappy??? Thanks for pouring your love on me…Please share your reviews about this chappy…
How many of you guys still watch MMZ on hotstar???
Love you.Take care.

Credit to: dipika


  1. natasha

    Dhi wonderfull epi tanx for uploading
    omg arjun proposed radhika
    poor radhika shez a divorcee donno wat arjun will do
    luv u dhi muah
    wen will u post nxt epi ?

    • natasha

      And dhi u knw wat raabta is my song tis is the 3rd tym ibam reading tis updarei am reading it again and agian u just nailed the update dhi its amazing
      i hear this song atleast 2tyms a day even nw

    • Thank you sooooo much Natasha darling.. m smiling continuously by ur comment.n raabat is also my fav..i too used to listen it whenevr i feel like it..don’t worry dear aradhika is meant to be together.. so
      they pass this phase too

      love you

  2. Rg

    Dipika tat was a huge bomb u dropped. Nevertheless interesting . Pls update soon. Pls don’t delay. It was toooo sudden . I can barely wait for d suspense. Awesome writing and I enjoyed ur ff. Pls update soon. Take care.

    • Rg dear Thank you so much for this support.. i m happy that u r enjoying the story..I will try to post ASAP…Loads of love..take care buddy..

  3. Nandini

    Deepu best best chapter and surprises omg i loved it kaash koi mujhe bhi aise surprise deta mere bday pe hehe par yaha to koi wish bhi nahi karta pink is also my fav. Colour mere liye bhi bhej do same anarkali suit and bracelet sab khuch my fav. Bas ek cake ko jhodh ke rabta song is 1 of my fav. 1st time hindi song likha tumne apne ff mein sabse best surprise my toy tweety ab yahan bhi tumne apna fav. Flavour dal diya butterscotch ab arjun peeche hat jayega radhika ke divorce ka sunke pura past ka khulasa to kar deti suspense mein dal diya at last chpt is gud aur gud ho jata agar past pura batate

    • Nandu darling Thank thank thank you so mucj for this love…I added all things which i likr the most..Teddy wali idea to tumse hi ayi hai..n raabata mera b fav song hai..maine bahot start me decide kiya that ki main ye song add krungi ff me….n itntejar me jo maja hai vo kisi chij me wait n watch..n aradhika ko kuch nahi

  4. Gauri

    Dipika loved it….this was the best birthday celebration ever…loved each and every line about it…and what a way to propose…all dreamy…any girl would say yes…atleast I would…and then her past…seriously I never expected this twist…you surprised me now I m eager to know the whole truth 🙂 Awesome update…pls post the next one soon 🙂 love you 🙂

    • ohhh..Thank thank thank you soo much Gauri…i m very happy that u liked the way he propose.. i was very nervous abt reviews..its a big thing for any girl na thats y kept rads past secret till…will come soon with the nxt you..take care.

  5. deeva

    Hey dear u r amazing…. now I can’t wait for next and see my helplessness I have wait plz update soon fear…… desperately waiting….. love u a lot take Care……

    • hey Deeva dear Thank you so much for this love..i can’t say how happy i m seeing ur comment…will post soon dear… love you

  6. Deepu radzz is divorcee ???? Haaaaa im going mad u knw wat I was happy dt arjun proposed radz…..whn d movement I read d last one I lost……pls don’t bring saral n ds stry I hate to core pls ……..egarly waiting for next one. …… dr 🙂

    • ohhhh my swt frnd Gayathri thanks a ton dear…i am so much happy that u enjoyed the chappy..actually saral is going to be a part of story but he is different don’t worry all will u shoo

  7. Jessie

    Dipika.. loved it.. wat a lovely proposal n birthday celebration.. how much I wish., she cud said abt her past earlier and they cud have enjoyed these moments with no shock n tears.. Arjun singing n proposing.,????????????

    Eager 2 read next update.. I believe Arjun will accept her.. but abt Rads???!?!?

    • awww my Jessie so cute..actually i too don’t want to spoil arjun’s surprise but can’t help yar…but i promised they will have such romantic evening in future with their love.n abt rads will soon get to knw.bas thoda sa hi wait aur….n i loved that emojis u send. too cute…love you baby n tight

  8. Wow what a twist, Radhika is a divorcee, waiting to know what happen in her past 🙂 oh yeah you nail it, well done. 🙂

  9. Sweetie

    I just loved the episode.. 😀 Aww!! Raabta is one of my fav songs.. The whole proposal thing was out of the world.. And finally a cliffhanger.. No fair dear.. Please update soon.. Eagerly waiting to know the past of Radhika..
    Stay blessed and lots of love 🙂

    • heyyy Sweetie Thank you so much dear for liking the praposal idea… i knw that was a bomb..but bcos this bomb they will unite to eternity…love you too darling..god bless you…take care..

  10. Heroine what a birthday??? Wow for gifts…n not to forget what a bomb….bang…blast…i will not say anything till then ur next chapter…i will say in next that if I’ll give u a wow or a blow according to ur chapter….lol…??

    • ohhh my Rosie darling Thank you so much dear…n that birthday is my dream birthday n date…hope that my lyf partner will do such thing for me..haha….n ohh..m scared now about ur wow n you so much

    • hey Thank you so much Dhara dear…i missed ur comment..n ur dp is so cute.. is that ur baby in pic?? sooo cute

  11. Gianna

    Awwww Deepu so romantic ? somebody should celebrate my bday like this ? even though Arjun didn’t say it to me but yes I love u tooooooo ?. What a twist. So eager to know rads whole past. Loved loved loved the update. Post soon Deeepu. Love uuuuuuuuu ???

    • haha…awww oh my Giyu darling ur dream prince will do the same for you bcos u r so swt na..n actually it mine too dream date n dream bday celebration so i described the way i dreamt of..Thank you shoo much for this lovely n cute review…love you

  12. Jerly

    wow ……what an awesome proposal……hope some one does like this for me…….. 😛 ….. ha ha….don’t know what will happen…… 😉 😀 … moving to ur story,……it was awesome episode dear…….. loved it…..also shocked…..and confuse …… how will arjun react after knowing the truth….???? I don’t want Aradika to be separated ….so plz do something…… and apdate soon….plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz…

    • Awww shoooo sweet of Jerly…definitely someone will do it for u surely….Thank you soooo much Jerly darling m actually having wide smile on my face with ur comment..Arjun’s reaction will get to knw soon..i won’t separate Ardhika dear..Love u loads..tight hug buddy. tc

  13. Oh my deepu darling….muaahhhhh….iam speechless….I have no words to describe….u r just amazing writer yaar…..what a narration…u nailed it as usual. ….I don’t no how to express my feelings…..arjun he is gr8…..radhu soo lucky yaar. ..full of happiness…i liked arjun’s face covered with butterscotch…I taste it …its soo yummy yummy…oh my god 24 gifts for radhu …interesting…but I loved last one gift…arjun proposed her…soo cute n lovely ……omg!!! Radhu divorcee…I never expect this wala twist….full of masti…but end it suspense….itching to know rads past n arjun’s reaction…..writte soon…keep rocking …lots of loves n hugs for u…….

    • Susi Darling m just overwhelm with your so lovely comment..actually m to speechless to describe my love and gratitude yarrr..Big Thank you for loving me n ff tasted the cake.. haha..i too taste it..bcos itsy fav flavor na..which is urs??
      this is big twist that y kept it secret for this much long time…Soon i will write n post next chappy..till thn take care my susi darling..loads of love n tightest hug for you babe..muhhhaa

  14. natasha

    dhi i am addicted to is episode completely tis is the 14th time i am reading it
    u have magic in ur fingers dhi
    hw did u manage to write such a wonderfull episode ?
    i am in luv tis epi comletely i always say tis to gauri dhi tat she has to strt telecasing DPO
    but nw i am telling tis to u also that u shld start telecasting never let u go in any of the channels .
    The day u will end tis ff ull make me cry lyk hell my house not only house my whole society will be flooded wid the tears .(i hate to tink of tat day) so its better u dont end tis ff jst keep on writing it if ur dne wid ardhikas scenes and nesams scenes then start writing abt their chlidren and then there children (zada hogya nah) but dhi a humble request frm my side not nly mine but many other silent readers plzz dnt end tis ff soon u shld complete minimum 300 -400 episodes ok ( ill be the happiest one if u write more than that dhi ) 🙂
    And u knw wat dhi tis the 1st tym i am giving such a big comment
    actually i am very lazy in typing
    see the magic in u . u made a lazy bug write such a big comment (not bad ah)
    seeing u all even i want to write an ff but i am not getting any ideas dhi and i am not creative lyk u ppl so i have to drop tis idea *_*
    chalo bye dhi
    i ate ur brain wid spoon and fork
    nw ill stop my self here bcz ull get fed up reading such a big comment which doesnt have any matter in it
    once again bye dhi luv u muah:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)

    • ohhhhh my god…Natasha darlingg m literally spellbound with this much love of yours fir me n our ff…this the longest n prettiest comment i have got till noe…Thank youuuuuuuuu shhhooo much..honestly i have broadest smile on my face actually mumma ask y i m smiling… so u can think how much u hv touched my heart…writting for show n completing 300 n 400 that would be honour for mr..but getting this a big compliment its like a best compliment of my life..the day this story i too will cry bcs while writing it m too living this story in my heart.. so i accompany you in crying.. haha…because of your love n support i can write this story..n i must say u should give try to ur pen n write a story..n definitely it will be good only…n u didn’t eat my brain bt touched my heart..thank a tonnnn dear for loving me this extent… loads of love n teddy bear hug for you…stay

    • ohhhhh my god…Natasha darlingg m literally spellbound with this much love of yours fir me n our ff…this the longest n prettiest comment i have got till noe…Thank youuuuuuuuu shhhooo much..honestly i have broadest smile on my face actually mumma ask y i m smiling… so u can think how much u hv touched my heart…writting for show n completing 300 n 400 that would be honour for me..but getting this a big compliment its like a best compliment of my life..the day this story i too will cry bcs while writing it m too living this story in my heart.. so i accompany you in crying.. haha…because of your love n support i can write this story..n i must say u should give try to ur pen n write a story..n definitely it will be good only…n u didn’t eat my brain bt touched my heart..thank a tonnnn dear for loving me this extent… loads of love n teddy bear hug for you…stay

  15. darling its really cute??? loved it??sure dis kind of suprise s fabulous ??? loved arjun’s love ???rads divorced ? i didnt expect dis? but like d twist ✌ waiting for d next part eagerly fo know who s d rads past✌? loved it ? love u darling?

    • Thank you sooooo much suga darling for this beautiful comment.. i m dancing here..haha…n emojis r so cute..will post soon dear…love you shooo much.take care.stay blessed..

  16. Roma

    Awesooooooooooomeeee…..omg dips….my sweeeeeet darling friend. …what an amazing n outstanding birthday celebration. …..its really beautiful n took me to dreamland…I’m just soooo speechless n spellbound. …how beautifully you narrated each n every details of gifts n arjun’s surprises n emotions.. …the song raabta is my favorite. ..n last but not the least arjun’s proposal…wowwww. ….but rads past shocked me ….I’m so curious to know rads past n her divorce….ahhh….poor rads….mind blowing update n awesoooooome imagination …u stole my heart sweetie. …eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . . . Muaaaaahhhhhh. .. ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

    • ohhh my Roma di….i am so happpyyyy that u read the chappy…i thought u forgot to read.. nw i m on cloud 9…Thank you soooo much di for such encouraging n lovely comment….rads past is made twist in the story.. soon will be all you till orange grow apple..muhhhaa..Teddy bear hug to

      • Roma

        Hi dips….I read all mmz ffs…but with busy schedule mostly I’m the last one to read…lol…but even I’m the last one I always leave my feedback. …all you writer’s need application for your hard work. ..n I love you soooooooo muchhhhhh. .
        Muaaaaahhhhhh 😀

  17. Sathya

    Hey Dipu kutty… am so sorry for not commenting dear… actually 2 3 days i dint look at tu only and i dont know what and all i missed. AM really sorry darling. Now come to the episode… what have u written yar… i am speechless…24 gifts, surprises omg… unbelievable… and its blast from. radhika… like arjun i too frozed. Ok so that will. be her past and how u will reveal. it soon… so who will. be her ex? i really feel sad for arjun… u made my arjun cry. but you are tooooooooo good dear… fantastic concept and very well. narration. actually i could see those scenes.. uffff… its an ultimate episode overall…. ?????? love u a lot my sweet darling

    • Sathya darling ohhhh m soooooo happpyyyyyy seeing ur comment me laddoo phuta..haha…pls don’t say sorry…we all hav our life too..our loved one says sorry it didn’t feel good…oh now its my turn to say sorry that i make ur arjun cry…but surely soon he will all happy n smiling. haha..Thank you soooooooooo much…reading u always make me smile either ur or ur comment…love you hamesha…tc..stay blessed my swt frnd..

  18. feby

    lol…iam sorry di….. u know na…wat and all goes around me and i am sooo lazy too to comment….ya…i read the story actually i wanted to comment tat day coz its the best chappy of ur ff…but the end part…wat was it…u just jave us a heart attack….but i loved this di….those surprises was sooooo awesome….i wish i had someone to give me surprises..ll.. :-p as always u rocked it…i was waiting for ur next one and didnt get na so came to remind of tat ttoooo…but this epi was giving pain to both arjun and rad…. and moreover y does many of our society ppl think tat a divorced women does not deserve a good and unmarried man….i think here also u tried to tell tat…and tat too through rads coz she think she does not deserve arjuns love only because she is divorced…but u know…many of divorced man want unmarried women…woh kya baath hui…. and tats our society!!! lol…similar incident happened whn i was in defense estate…lol….and u know wat…. the blame went on the women… i wonder y the ppl poke their nose in such matters whn both the divorced girl and that unmarried guy love each other and does not have any probs evn whn they r of same caste and state…and as always we youth gang supported thm…. lol…. and some military uncles too…wat to say… of their age friends..hahaha…anyhow…ur tis epi reminded me of tat incident… but anyhow i know ardhika will b ultimately together…lol…love u……….. tc….update next one soon…..

    • Febyyyyyyy Darling you brought the widest amile on my face.n i m sure one day someone spl will do spl things for you bcos you hav such crystal ckear heart Thankkkkkkkkk you sooooo much for loving,understanding me this r right society always blames women for any mischief happened to her.. never try to understand her…if two loves each there is no ones right to restrict them..thanks for Sharing the incident.. n m too glad that ppl supported them..until we youth don’t stand for our right change will not happen….shooooo much love for my cute lil sis…stay blessed..

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