“Just remember”- Shivaay Singh Oberoi stood with his full Tadi in front of Kameeni…The would be mother-in-law of his sister Priyanka…the marriage is not happening now..,”Can’t Shivaay Singh Oberoi buy a husband to his sister and a father to his unborn nephew or niece?”
“Oh my maatha!!”- Pinky cursed,”Talkings like we Oberoi all are not married and eloped for staying together in this house. We know the rituals of marriage too well. Hum bhi Punjabi hai ji”.
“I thought you are changed now and just cracking jokes by your sleeping pallu”-Shakti the peace loving devotee of devi maatha turned in to a real Kaali pita(maatha)..kalidev…,”not only your pallu… you are a fallen lady with no self respect and honour”.
“Last time I acted very good as a purohit while marrying that cheppadi Tia with my Shivaay bhaiyya”- Rudra praised his own self,”which pandit in India suggests marriage with in twenty minutes?”

“In addition to it which ACP will ask for this much dowry being the lamba lamba hands of law?”-Pinky was always against dowry,”have you made a safe for keeping the 200crore diamond or are you planning to keep it in EMF house like you kept my Shivaay?”
I don’t think he is in police even”- Omkara broke his mouna brata,”he was just after me and then after Prinku for the accidental hit and run case”.
“The Hawaldaar could have arrested Om or Prinku..or both and file a case for the coma causing accident of his sister if his sister exists at all”-Jhanvi became mother eagle to protect her children and respect law in one stone.
“She blamed me of chori in my house and then tried to kill me”-All knew Pinky never lies,”Kutti Kameeni..kidnapped my son and replaced him with some one else”.
” Kidnapping Shivaay Singh Oberoi from his private a trained air hostage in numerous BMW and then keeping guarded in EMF house needs money”- Shivaay Singh Oberoi used his classic business brain,”the source of money gave me a doubt”.
“In Karvachouth night,I saw two evil..dare was Tia with her husband Dushyant ..the other was you.. breaking Prinku’s fast by making her drink water”.
“I trust my Annika over a lady who claimed to be the mother of my child “-Shivaay felt proud,”you are just a character less man who lies about girls and their dignity”.
“I am a girl…I have social anxiety disorder”-Prinku get energy to strangle Roman Reigns.. ,” not a dump..I never felt like that with you.. this child was downloaded from Google I think”.

“You think We will believe that some electrolyte can help Prinku recover from the side effect of drugs you gave her”- Shakti disclosed,”I called doctor then only to check Prinku…”.
“How dare that cheppada 2rs ka china man act like my husband Shivaay.. imperfectly”- Annika shouted,”I didn’t felt any ghanti ..then his strange behaviour with all and water…and then the morning dream of plane crashing spread the doubtful raita in my heart..”.
“He looks like me except for his kanji eyes and was with you… the devil..who know Oberoi from a long time enough to plan against us..if this Maahi have any relation with us…”-Shivaay gave voice to his inner feeling looking at Annika,”I have send his blood sample to a doctor for DNA test”.
Both ACP and Kameeni blackmailed him in this plan for taking the Oberoi property.
” I have a doubt in you both.. first the kidnapping part.. then the implantation of Maahi to fulfill all the dowry ..”- Shivaay saw Khanna coming with a hurt head ..blood dripping from the back of his head with a highly weak Soumya,”Khanna..come and sit here”.

“Khanna called me as soon as he find Soumya”- Rudra,the hubby smiled,”It was your mistake to put Khanna at the same place where Soumya was..the basement area”.
“Shivaay Singh Oberoi is not a fool to appoint Khanna as the security head of OM”- Om smiled,”he is multi talented”.
“I want to slap you hard on yoir both cheek”- Prinku gave the right punishment ,”My hands will be dirty”.
“Khanna..dettol”- Rudra cracked the joke,” My Sumo need that now for the wounds not Prinku to wash hand”.
” I too need that now”- Khanna lost his voice in weakness,”Some one please help me”.
“The only sister of Oberoi brothers.. the princess of this house..can never get married to an ACP even if she is pregnant”- Tej roared,”We were just trying to expose you in front of Media.. thank you for the help of calling them from our side for your own insult”.
“Police…”- Dadi also joined,” They are here”
“kidnapping,blackmailing,dowry demand,mental torture, dhamki of murder.. and use of law in personal matter”- He list of charges went on…”
Real police dragged the villains out of Ranveer’s sasural to both Kameeni and Ranveer’s sasural..jail..
“Thank you Annika “- Pinky held the soft hands of her daughter in law,”For every thing”.
“We are family aunty”- The Mother Teresa answered.
” Bhabhi is Jhalli ki Raani”-Rudra thought he is very good at history.
“Jhansi… not Jhalli”- Shakti hit his head.
“DIL BOLE OBEROI”- This time Prinku also joined along with an injured Soumya.

“Forcing and black mailing you for marriage was not that bad”-Shivaay teased,” I am getting numerous benefits from that single deal”.
“You saved not only me from Gayathri murder case, today also all family”He Hugged her close to him,”Finally the problem get solved”.
“Shivaay I thought it as my family”- Annika accept the truth,”after marriage and before also”.
Shivaay smiled .. as he won the fort…all the forts in Rajasthan.
“Falling in love with you was the biggest truth I couldn’t accept then…
Forcing you for marriage was my worst crime to the girl I love…
But marrying.. trusting and loving you is the best decision I took in my life”
“I thought appointing Khannji come in this list too”-Annika slapped his chest lightly,”You are changing preferences”.
“I wonder people says they fell in love… “- Shivaay had a doubt on the hypothesis of love,”I am raising in love with you..every day ..minute and passing second”.
“Rudra was worried for Soumya..”-Annika felt happy,”thank you for bringing back Soumya”.
“No marriage in our house is happening with out problem.. I tries three times.. but failed..Rudra and Soumya .. now Prinku too”-,Shivaay sighed,”I have a doubt on the marital status of Om now”.
“Dadi ki bhi kara dete hain..”-Annika whispered near his red ear,” Shaadi”.
“The most elderly, experienced Ishqbaaz of Oberoi family and young active at heart”- Annika felt her voice lost as some air only came out from her mouth.
“This was a priceless gift from me that no one can snatch like the bangle I gave you”-Shivaay kissed her another cheek ,”the bonus”.

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  1. Very nice

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Fffan dear… keep loving…keep reading..

  2. Jerry_36


    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Jerry dear…

  3. Wow astha baby you really back with a is really a good ff.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Arpita Darling….( In Pravas Raju style)….

  4. Anah

    its good…
    that line “I am raising in love with you..every day”
    window breaking…simply superb dr…..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Anah… Shivaay Singh Oberoi is raising in her love.. isn’t he???
      That is the only truth now for SSO…without Annika its impossible to draw the next breath …

  5. Aryaraju

    Nice one dear ??

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Arya Raju..

  6. ‘HAPPY DANCE’…u r back with ur new os….its really impressive…as usual u always end it with a bang…loved the ending…nd I was just scrolling down the cmmnts of ur ff nd found out that things were not fine…I’m not asking whether what the problem is as maybe u wont be comfortable in sharing it with everybody…but I really hope that ur fine nd ur problem gets resolved soon!

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Some legal property issue dear.. felt very lonely so shared personal problem here…
      Thnx. I don’t have to keep secrets from you all as all are equal friends for me…

      1. Well,I hope that it gets resolved soon..

      2. Aastha_Reddy

        It will… I will make sure of it now.. kisika support milgaya hai…..

  7. Gayathri.visu

    Its really THE NEVER HAPPENING INCIDENTS in IB…. Wow…! di in ur os all the characters in IB are getting dialogues….last shivika scene is so cute…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Gayathri… thnx. dear.
      Till today I am against the spin off …Missed Om very badly.. so give dialogues to all characters in my ff is distributed equally…
      Here the never happening Incident is marriage ..but you gave it another amazing meaning we are not going to see it in IB….kash Om and Jhanvi hote wahan…

      1. Gayathri.visu

        Even I didn’t like spin off idea di. Already I stopped watching DBO. I am badly missing old Om and Obro moment di….
        By the way today ur comment is awesome di. Ur description for each OF member like great wall SSO , Anika cement….superb comparison di. Sorry di I m little busy thats why I m reply here.

      2. Aastha_Reddy

        Thnx. Gayathri… that was just for fun dear….ha ha…
        Pinky… Dr. fixit…lolz…

  8. Very nice os astha dear..”the NEVER HAPPENING INCIDENT”…???..
    Keep writing mere Jaan…☺..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      thnx. Meri Jhansi ki Raani…
      Title is some what ajeeb I know that…but keeping all ajeeb and weird title is perhaps my way…reader can easily recognise it is the torture of Astha Reddy from the title…ha ha…..

  9. Till date i have read all your os s and your ff “U….D….” too but never commented here.And all I want to say is you are excellent…….how I wish you could be the script writer of ISHQBAAZ.Once again hats off to your writing skills.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Zara…thank you for opening your heart and for commenting here in my ff…keep loving ….

  10. Navz

    Wow then u have written the ( i think mondays) track before hand..if cvs see this and if they follow it will be awesome but i felt that little more rumya scenes may be added that gives the full meal wala experience.haha. fantastic work with the dailogues…luved them. Awesome writing yaar…
    Good nt aastha

    1. Navz

      Aastha u have not replied to me on ur last os page??may be u r busy wid ur works if u r free ..then try to

      1. Aastha_Reddy

        Navya… usually I replies to all comments in that page only.. it was perhaps my busy schedule .. that I didn’t see the cmt.
        I will try to respond and reply all comments quickly…..

    2. Aastha_Reddy

      I wrote it in the afternoon only to double cross the Cvs of IB….
      I prefers Shivaay and Shivika in my all Ff as you noticed and Rumya got only a single dialogue..its ok i will try to put more Rumya in future if only my attention is diverted from Shivaay Singh Oberoi…
      Thank you Navya….

      1. Navz

        Then girl i think ur attention will never be diverted from ur bhaiyya…he is SSO na we cant get diverted from him..haha??

      2. Aastha_Reddy

        You are right Navya.. no one can get my attention more then My bhaiyya Shivaay Singh Oberoi…. same pinch.. once again.. our thought matched here…

  11. If real IB follows the same story line, it will definitely be at the top but NO.Our dear CVs won’t let this happen.
    This was funny romantic but mostly funny when every member of the family bashes them one by one. “Downloaded the baby from google”Prinku rocked it.
    LOVED IT. Waiting for other such updates.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Tanz… thnx.dear..
      It was just my wild imagination…lolz… I will try to post the next one soon..and all know the meaning of soon is with in 24 hours for Astha Reddy…

  12. Surbhi Sharma

    Astha di . It was just amazing . U are making me speechless day by day by ur ff’s. Loved it .

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Surbhi .. it is my aim to shut the opened mouth and open the closed mouths….I am happy I am doing it up to certain level…
      I am happy you like it….

  13. Awesome,mindblowing dii……. U nailed it……as always luv ur writing……….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Banitha…
      I hope you read my reply in previous page…and don’t feel lonely…OK dear…

      1. Sure dear…….

  14. Superb one dear…. just fantastic….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx..Lilly dear..

  15. shhh……!

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Liba…shh…!! koi laut ke aaya hai…bhoot bhoot!!!!!

  16. Nita D

    Wow…this is awesome….It’s different from your usual style of writing but nice….there were so many wow lines in this, for instance, raising in love, dadi ki shaadi, child downloaded from Google….N some more….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Nita… bahut taad liya mujhe and meri OS ko… Thnx. for that….ha ha…

      1. Nita D

        Hawww….. pehli baat toh abhi tak tumhe taad na shuru hi nahi kiya….N koi sab analysis kar ke likh ta hai toh kadar hi nahi…..(wiping fake tears) ???

      2. Aastha_Reddy

        Aww… Nita..a peeper spray for you.. next time real tears ( jocking)… and you are welcome mujhe tadne keliye…..kabhi bhi.. kahin bhi…
        Next time I am expecting more long comment from you..

  17. Ruksy

    This update is amazing and totally funny

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Rusky… thnx. I wanted to give a funny touch with Logic……

  18. Na ma Na koyi bhoot voot nai ayi everyone has writen awesome , amazing , nice , superb etc , etc., ee log tho kuch bi nai choda mera ko liknae keliyae isliyae i just kept my finger on my mouth nd said shh.., anyways keep smiling always…. God bless u abundantly nd keep rocking dr.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Kitni sweet baat bol diya tumne… wo bhi pure Tadi mein…( Annika style)…

  19. Hii astha I always read ur article but I don’t get tym to comment anyways this os is fantastic fabulous try to write more..nd one more thing will u be my frnd?? I m 16 yrs..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Adeeba Zain.. Thnx. for the first comment here…and of course we are friends…..

  20. Yee… Meri khidkhi todh astha dii wapas aagyi apne dhinchak os and comments k saath…. I am so worried about you dii… Hoping sab thik thak ho jaye….. And it is awesome update…. With lots of love diiiii……..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Nikku… sab thik hoga… mujhe yakeen hai…I too love you.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Alekhika dear…

  21. Awesome…
    Loved it specially d funny touch u gave… 🙂

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Shivika dear…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Rashi ….

  22. I just don’t know what to write….just simply wonderful and awesome…. keep writing… all the very best

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Zaveesha… I don’t get how to thank specially… just keep reading and commenting for me…..

  23. Piyuu

    jhakkas dear…child was download from google wht a line yaar i cant control my laugh.loved it…keep writing.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Piyuu dear…

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