NaiRan OS…

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Hi guys….. This idea was there in my mind from 2 days… But I thought to post this after I get a good response for my previous post….. But I got only 7 comments yaar…. I mean …I thought I would get at least 10 ….. So I thought to not post this…. But again I thought that it would be better if I share this with u guys….And the title for it is…NaiRan os.. …coz I really don’t know what title to give yaar…???… So happy reading.. ??…..

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( NaiRan r wearing the gloves always and this all is happening at night)

The whole Chauhan family r standing near the door….
Nirmala: naina take care of the house …Beta..We will be back tomorrow morning only….
Naina: ji maa…
Dadaji : beta…Have ur dinner soon and go to bed… Karan u also take care of naina bahu..
NaiRan : ji dadaji..
Meghna: chiku…Be careful..
Naina chuckled : di…. U all r treating me as a kid….. Mein badi ho gayi hun di…
Meghna: mere liye tum hamesha meri choti chiku hi rahogi…
Meghna and naina hugged each other and smiled……
The chauhans waved their hands to NaiRan and headed towards the car… And one by one all cars goes out of Chauhan house…
NaiRan was standing there till the cars vanished from their sight…..

Naina turned to Karan: Karan you go to room I’ll get the dinner for us …And we can have it in our room…
Karan smiled: OK….

Naina took all the dishes in the tray and was heading out side the kitchen… …
When suddenly the lights go off….

Naina stood where she was…..
She looked around her…..
It’s not that she is afraid of darkness … However indeed it would be scary for anyone who just saw a horror movie and this all happen….
” I’m not scared …” She said to herself…And took few steps ahead…. But she bumped into the dinning table …
Naina: ouch..!! ….Shall I call Karan … But he will think that I’m afraid of darkness….. Lekin mein aise kaise ja Sakti hun …. bina light ke…. …
After few minutes of battle with herself whether to call Karan or not… She decided to call him….
” Karan…..plss niche aao na..”….
There was no response from him….

Suddenly she saw a shadow moving at her right side….
She turned to right side ….But there was no one…
Then she felt a shadow moving behind her…
She turned behind and saw no one…
Now she was really getting scared….
” Ka…Karan…P..Pls jalti aao na…” She said in a shivering voice..
Suddenly she felt someone’s hand on her shoulder….

She was sweating …….Her eyes were moving here and there… Her lips was quivering…..
She slowly turned ……. And saw a black figure standing in front of her……
” Aaaaaaa….” She screamed…..And started moving back…

“Naina” she heard his voice…. …She turned and saw Karan standing there with flash….
She ran to him and hugged him…..

He stood numb…..This is the first time she is hugging him…..This is the first time they r this closer… This is the first time someone touched this much….. However he hugged his maa with the help of gloves ….. But this hug was something different…. And he could feel it… And he somewhat liked that feeling too……..

” Ka….Karan there ….There is someone…” She said still hugging him…
Karan : where…
She withdrew her one hand which was hugging him and pointed at her back…” There” she said…And again hugged him…
Karan: lekin naina wahan toh koi nahi hai….
Naina: no…..I saw….
Karan : what..??
She broke the hug and looked at him…
Naina in a shivering voice : gho….Ghost…..

Karan looked at her for sometime and started to laugh…. Naina looked at him confused…
“Sach me Tum Bhoot se darti ho…” …. Naina narrowed her eyes at him….

The lights come…..
She looked at him…. And went near the tray…
Karan stopped laughing ….And went towards her……
” Naina I’m sorry..”….
She didn’t reply him …And was about to move …When Karan came Infront of her and stopped her…
” Let’s eat here itself” he said …
Naina let her anger go and smiled….

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Both were sitting in the dinning table and were having their dinner… Well actually it’s only Karan who was eating….
And naina was making circles in her plate with the spoon and lost in thought …..
Karan noticed her and called her name ” naina”…. She was still lost…..
He called again a bit louder ” NAINA …” …
She turned to him…
Naina: ha..Haan Karan Kya hua…
Karan: naina where r u lost….
Naina was silent…
Karan: naina u can tell…
Naina: but u should not laugh at me….
Karan : tike ab batao…
Naina: Karan I really saw …..I really saw someone….There…I ..I really felt someone’s hand on my shoulder…
Karan: naina….Relax…It’s all ur imagination….
Naina: Karan….But they were so…Real….
Karan: it’s just ur imagination…. There is nothing such as ghost…. Chalo ab yeh sab chodo aur kao…..
Naina was not convinced with what Karan said….. Even Karan could sense that she isn’t relaxed…..

Karan: OK wait a minute…
Naina: where r u going…..
Karan: abhi ayi…
Saying he goes….And switches off the power…..
Naina: Karan….Kahan ho Tum…..
Karan comes towards her using flash….
Naina : y again the lights went…..
Karan: I turned the power off…
Naina: kyun…
Karan: now don’t ask me all this….I’m going to turn this flash off and u have to follow me…
Naina: par Karan agar Tum flash off karoge toh mein tumhe kaise Piche karunge……
Karan : Haan ur right….
Naina: Karan… Agar Tum bura na mane toh me ek baat kahun….
Karan nods his head….
Naina: Karan Tum mera haath pakad sakte ho….I mean ur wearing the gloves na…So…..

Karan was just looking at her……
After sometime he smiles at her and holds her hand.. ….
( Oh…Piya….Plays….) …
They share an eyelock…

Karan switches off the flash … And slowly takes her to the terrace…… It was a full moon day…..
Naina was awestruck my the beauty of the cold moon…..
They both were able to see each other in the dim light of the moon….
Karan let go of naina hand…
Naina took few steps forward and was just looking at the moon….
Karan: naina…
She turned…
Naina: Karan Dekho na…It’s so beautiful…
Karan smiled….
Karan: naina r u scared now…
Naina: nahi ….Kyun….
Karan: because u only said na…That u felt someone’s presence….
Naina gets upset…
Karan: naina…It’s just ur imagination…
Naina: par……
Karan: OK now tell me u saw any horror movie …
Naina: Haan Dekho toh ta…
Karan: that’s the thing…..See u saw a horror movie and the lights went off…So…It’s natural for someone to feel like that…..
Naina smiled at him…
Karan: naina see at the moon….Even in this dark sky…It fills some light….. Some light of hope….
Naina was convinced now…And she smiled brightly at him…
Naina: atcha from when u have started to talk about hope and all…???
Karan: from then….From when u started to teach me to have hope in my self……
And still if ur not satisfied…And u think that there was really a ghost or someone ……Don’t worry I won’t let anything happen to u….
Naina was surprised to hear this from Karan…
They both looked at each other with a cute smile…..
Karan: can we go down…
Naina nodded her head…

They both went downstairs finished their dinner and went to their room….. And were lying in the bed with of course the umbrella dividing the bed….

Naina was facing Karan’s back i.e., Facing the umbrella…
Karan was smiling remembering how she said ” Tum mera haath pakad sakte ho …” …. He smiled and dozed off to sleep…

Naina was smiling remembering how he said ” I won’t let anything happen to u….” …..She smiled and gently touched the umbrella and whispered ” thank u…”….
She turned to the other side dozed off to sleep…

Hope u guys liked it….Pls drop ur valuable comments…..It really means a lot ……
Chappals and eggs r also welcomed….
Bye….

With love,
Devihaa

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25 Comments
  1. Awesome!!!!
    I really loved it.

    1. Devihaa

      Thank u sooo much mehreen…..

  2. Shruthy

    Awww this is so cute! NaiRan were left alone at home, and we got some cute romantic horror scenes. <3
    Just the cuteness of these two is something unique, and anything like this just suits them.
    Thank you for such cute NaiRan moments Devi 🙂 Loved it!
    Hopefully there will be any continuation. Waiting 😀

    1. Devihaa

      Hey shruthy….. Thanks a lot for commenting…. Yeah they look sooo adorable together… .. well actually there won’t be any continuation… I’m really sorry for that… But I’ll be back with another os whenever I get any ideas….

  3. Awesome..brainstrucking….i mean it was really good yaar..creative and sweet..srry i cant comment much coz of low battery

    1. Devihaa

      Hi Sneha…… Thanks a lot for commenting Dr… I’m glad that u liked it…. And it’s totally fine Dr…. There is no need for big comments….. Just a few words of appreciation is better enough…

  4. Threemaimai

    hey devihaa it’s a wonderful os… keep writing… day by day your audience will get bigger 🙂

    1. Devihaa

      Hi dr…. Thanks a lot for commenting…. Yeah I’ll do keep writing……. And yeah I hope the same….

  5. Aradhana

    Hey dr..I liked it very much..again some good and clean romance..I personally like it!.dont worry..keep writing..ull get good responses!! all d best!!!

    1. Devihaa

      Hi aradhàna… Thanks a lot of for commenting dr…. I’m glad that you liked it….I’ll do keep writing… I too hope so… Thanks again dr…

  6. I liked ur os. do more nairan os pls

    1. Devihaa

      They Dhani… Thank u for commenting…. I’ll be back with another os whenever I get any ideas on NaiRan….

  7. Nila

    hi Devihaa wow cute romance and i happy that u r continue the OS

    1. Devihaa

      Hi Nila …. First of all I’m really sorry I was not able to reply u I my previous post…. And thanks a lot for commenting…
      And actually this is not the continuation of my previous work… This is another os Dr….
      I don’t think of continuing… I’m really sorry for that ….. But I’ll be back with another os whenever I get any ideas on NaiRan…

      1. Nila

        y u r asking sorry devi?It’s OK yaar .No sorry and thanks . I like ur writing and keep going.???

  8. Pratha

    Loved d unending love of Nairan.
    U presented each n every scene from ur heart ♥….
    It was beautiful to read it….

    Keep writing n giving such beautiful OS

    1. Devihaa

      Hi pratha… Thanks a lot for commenting…. I’m glad that you loved…. ( U presented each n every scene from ur heart )Omg ….. This is seriously a big thing for me yaar…. .. ur sooo sweet… Thanks again..

  9. Minerva

    Beautiful and mesmerizing piece of art. This storyline was extremely unique and exceptionally wonderful. The way in which you portrayed every emotion and feeling through the dialogues and actions is just wonderful.
    Karan’s care and concern was beautifully portrayed The horrified naina was as good as gold and exceptionally depicted. This is a higely unconventional take on nairan and was indeed lovely. Amazing in all aspects..

    1. Devihaa

      Hi Minerva….Thanks….A loooottt for commenting dr……. This seriously a big thing for me….. I’m glad that u loved each part of it… Your comment made be much happy dr….. It was a bliss reading ur comment…. I’m really thankful to you…. Thank u soooooooo much….

  10. Hi….. sorry for not commenting on previous Os I loved the Os I loved the part when naina hugged karan in fear u r fabulous writer I loved every thing in the os

    1. Devihaa

      Hi juveria… Thanks a lot for commenting yaar… And don’t be sorry dr….. I’m glad that you loved this OS…. Thanks a lot …..

  11. Deviha dear nice update …first Tim hug scene was sooo cute..good dear keep going updt next asap …lots of love dear

  12. Devihaa

    Hi ayshakhan ….. Thanks a lot for commenting yaar… I’m glad that you liked it….

  13. I CAN’T TELL YOU HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS.IT WAS MINDBLOWING.AGAR SHOW MAI HOTA AISA TO KITNA ACHA HOTA.

  14. Devihaa

    Hi Shree…. Thanks for commenting dr…. I’m glad that u loved this… Yeah it would be great if something like this happen in the show…

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