NaiRan os : I love you ??

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Hello guys… So actually this my fourth os… And I’m really happy for this… Thanks u all for the love and support you all have given me till now…So now I’m back with another os..” NaiRan os : I love you??”. … This is a new thought which cracked me… So just gave a try…. this OS is kinda different from my previous one shots…Hope u will like it..
So happy reading. ….

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( Guys in this OS… Karan is now totally cured from his allergy…And yeah of course all the credit goes to naina..)

Karan : I…I.. want to tell u something…
Karan in mind : come on Karan …Just say it… He closes his eyes…
Karan: I love you… I love u soooooooo much…. I really love u…
He said this all in one breath…
He slowly opens his eyes…And smiles….
Karan in excitement: I did….Omg…I really said it… .
He then looks at whom he his saying all this..
( Any guesses guys… Do tell me in the comments..)

It was actually…His umbrella…???
Karan: OK…Karan….Easy…Just repeat it to her….
He took a deep breath..And walked towards his room…And was standing in front of the door… And was fighting with himself whether to go in or not..
Karan : I’ll tell her tomorrow…
Saying he turns back to go… But again stopped..
Karan: but tomorrow never comes… I’ll tell her now itself…

He gathered courage…And opened the door..And found…Naina sitting in the bed and was reading her MBA books…
She looked at Karan and smiled… Karan too smiled back….
She noticed his umbrella…Which he was clutching tightly in nervous…And

Naina: Karan… Why ur having this umbrella even now..
Karan : wo…That…I mean… He was thinking of some excuse to say… When he got …He shot his answer…
Karan: I’m having this since a long time na… So I’m habituated to it…
He smiled like idiot…And poured a glass of water from the jug ..And was drinking it..While glancing naina…
Naina looked at him confused…
There was something which was running in her mind….About Karan’s unusual behavior from the past one week…. So she decided to confront him now…
Naina: Karan…Yahan aao….
Karan looked at her and went and SAT beside her in the bed …

Naina: Karan…Kya hua tumhe….
Karan : ky…Kya.. hua..??
Naina: I’m noticing ur behavior…From past one week …. Something is wrong… Mujhe batao Karan…Kya hua…??..
Karan: naina…Mein Kuch kahna chatha hun….
Naina: Kya..??
Karan: wo…Mein…I want to tell u something…Mein tujhe Kuch kahna …
Naina: Karan….Relax…. Take a deep breath… Saying she holds his hand. ..
Karan in mind: come on Karan….She is ur wife…Tell her .
Karan looks into her eyes…
Karan: naina I love you . …
Naina was taken aback. ….She was frozen…. ” I love you ” echoed in her ears. ..
Karan held her palms softly..
Karan: I really love u naina…. I’m trying to say this from a long time …. But I was really nervous..To open myself…
Naina came back to reality….
Naina: KY….Kya..
Saying she stood up …. Karan smiled and knelt down…
Karan: yes naina…. I really.. really love u… Ur my angel who came into my life ….. Though our marriage was a forceful one…. But u know what…. That was the best thing that happened to me… U took my darkness out . …. And filled it with colours….I totally accept u as my wife naina …… I love you Mrs Naina Karan Singh Chauhan……

Naina stood there numb…. She didn’t knew what to say… She was standing there confused….
Karan stood up…
Karan: so naina what is ur answer….
Naina .:… I think….Maa is calling me …
Saying she was about to go….When he held her wrist and pulled her back…
And snakes his hand around her waist….
Karan : maa is not home….She went to mandhir.. now give me my answer…
Naina : I…I…Have some work….To do ..
Saying she pushed him…And ran out of the room…
Karan blushed …And ruffled his hairs…

On the other side….Naina was walking to and fro ..In the lawn…
Naina:. …How could….He… say it… He should have thought about me ….And that too ….He asking my answer now itself….Uurghhhh ….

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Naina peeped into their room…And found Karan was not there…..She gets relieved… And she enters the room… Then she hears sound from the bathroom…
She runs towards the bed…And pretends as if she fell asleep…
Karan comes out of the bathroom …And looks naina lying in the bed…
Karan came and SAT in front of her in the chair…
Karan: naina mujhe pata hai ki Tum nahi soyi ho… Utto..Ab…
But she pretended that she is asleep…
Karan: naina mujhe ek zaroori baat kahni hai…
Still no response..
Karan: achha thike.. agar Tum nahi uttoge toh… I’ll lift u up…
No response…
Karan: tumhe lagta hai ki Mein nahi karungi… Ab Dekho…
Saying he was about to lift her… When naina rolled back saying…” Karan Ruko..
“…
Karan smirked as his plan worked…
Naina: Karan Kya chahiye tumhe…?? She sounded angry…
Karan : naina …I just….
Naina: Karan pls… * She gets off the bed* Tum kyun baar baar mujhse jawab Puch rahe ho… How can I tell u…. Jab mujhe kudh hi nahi pata…. Karan u said it easily that u love me…But did u ever thought about me…?? …From that time …I’m totally confused … My mind is not working…. ” Naina I love you ” ….Is just kept on ringing in my ears….I…I… Kaise samjaun Mein tujhe…???
Karan smiled and held her shoulder..
Karan: naina…Relax…Don’t worry I won’t question u from now… U can tell me when u want…
Naina relaxed a bit…
Karan: but… Mujhe pata hai ki Tum bhi mujhse pyaar Karti ho… But ur not realizing it…. Don’t worry u will realize it soon…
Saying he goes out….
Naina looks at absolutely confused…
Naina: I was relaxed a bit… And again… Jaane se pehle auto bomb daal kar Chala diya ..Yeh ladka… Urghh….. Tomorrow morning I should discuss this with di….

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Next morning…
In Meghna room…

Naina: di…
Meghna: hmmm…
Naina: di ….Wo…Mein…..
Meghna : chiku tu thik hai na…
Saying she checked her temperature..
Naina looked at her confused..
Meghna: matlab… Bina ruk ke bolne wali chiku aaj ruk ruk kar bol rahi …. Kya hua chiku…??
Naina: di… Wo.. Karan.. Karan..
Meghna: Karan…??
Naina : di …usne kaha ki wo mujhse pyaar krta hai…
She said it in one go..
Meghna: array chiku… It’s a good news na…Y r u sad….
Naina: Kya good news…. He told that he loves me…And from then he keeps on asking my answer… And at night… Usne kaha ki wo mujhe disturb nahi karegi… Par jaane se pehle auto bomb daal kar Chala gaya… Ki Mein bhi usse pyaar Karti hun … Lekin meine realize nahi Kiya… Ab Mein karoon di….
Meghna chuckled at her chiku…And
Meghna: agar Tum usse pyaar Karti ho toh batha dena…
Naina: that’s the problem di… Mujhe kudh nahi pata ..Ki Kya Mein usse pyaar Karti hun ya nahi….
She said sadly…

Meghna : OK…I’ll tell u what love is…
Naina excited : OK…
Meghna: OK I’ll tell some scenes …U have to tell what feeling is it..Or what is the reason for it..
Naina nodding: thike…
( Friends… This is going to be kinda stupid… But I hope u won’t mind it )
Meghna: hmm.. .. ok …”A girl is looking at boyfriend’s photo…And she smiles.”.. now tell me the reason…
Naina thinks for sometime…
Naina: hmm… Maybe ..She was thinking about some jokes..Which her boyfriend might have told…So she smiles…
Meghna looks at unbelievably..
Naina: di…It’s correct na…

Meghna: chodo…. OK now next… Lekin chiku answer dene see pehle… Think a little…Haan..
Naina nods ..
Meghna: ” a girl is thinking something…And her hair fly …
Naina : hmm….
Meghna: chiku… Think first…
Naina: Haan di… Wo hawa chal raha hoga …Toh isliye..
Meghna holds her head : urrghhh…. Chiku… Tu chale Jao… Warna Mein pagal ban jaunge….
Naina : par di… U didn’t tell about love..
Meghna: chiku….Dekh think all ur moments with Karan …U will get ur answer….
Naina: par di….
Meghna: chiku pls… Jao..
Naina pouted and goes from there…. While Meghna was holding her head….

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In NaiRan room…

Naina was standing in front of the mirror…. She remembers her di words… ” Remember all ur moments with Karan..” .. she slowly closes her eyes…. And starts to remember all the moments…..
The first time she saw him.. their fights …During meghnal marriage… How he held her hand when she was about to fall from the terrace…The moments during the haldi …Their marriage… The fights after marriage…How he rescued her during the holi…Their friendship…Their dance in the competition….How she motivated Karan to work…How she brought him out of his room by playing the mouth organ…. Their visit to darga…How he touched her accidentally…And many more…..

She opened her eyes slowly with a bright smile…As she got her answer…. She blushed and looked herself in the mirror… And finds Karan’s reflection…
” Karan..” she whispers and turns…But there was no one…
She hung her head done and blushes and slaps her head… .. she raises her head and again sees Karan’s reflection…
Naina: again I’m seeing…U… I love u Karan….
Karan: say it again…
Naina gets shocked… She turns and finds Karan standing with a big smile..
Karan comes forward…And drags her towards him by her waist…
Karan : Kya kaha Tum??
Naina blushes and hugs him..
Naina: I love u Karan..
Karan: I love u too naina…

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Karan had arranged a candle light dinner for his naina….
Naina: Karan it’s so beautiful…
Karan smiles…
They both have their dinner… After sometime…Some musicians come and starts to play some romantic music…
Karan let his hand out and asked for her hand…Naina smiled ..And gave her hand.. and they did some slow moves..( guys u can imagine any romantic songs for this..) ..At the end….
Karan’s hands were on naina’s waist …And her hand was on his chest… And their foreheads joined..With a cute smile on their lips….
The photographer ..Who was arranged by Karan to take pictures of their first romantic dinner…Snapped this epic pose….

OK guys… I hope u all liked it… Actually I was thinking how it would be …When NaiRan love story starts… And this idea clashed my mind… Pls drop ur comments… Chappals and eggs r also welcomed….

Bye…
With love,
Devihaa..

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17 Comments
  1. Titli

    Cute, sweet and romantic.. loved the epi.. post more os like this☺️☺️

    1. Devihaa

      Thank u title… I’m glad that u loved it…
      Will try dr..

  2. Minerva

    So sweet and adorable. The story was absolute bliss and indeed incredible. Karan’s confession to his umbrella lightened up my dull and monotonous day in a jiffy. His way of admitting his feelings and his straightforwardness has won my heart over yet again. Karan never fails to surprise me, be it by his words or actions.
    Naina’s doubts and concerns regarding her feelings were wonderfully portrayed. Her ways and statements were extremely cute and lovely. Meghna’s small questions and naina’s answers to them all were just stupendous. The efforts needed to compose such a piece of art are so praiseworthy. The conception and presentation of naina’s supposed actions and reactions when karan confessed (or will confess) were magically captured. The methods applied by her to gauge the nature of her hidden feelings were really awesome.
    And the icing on the cake…
    The ways to confess and subsequent reactions were never so marvelloud as they were now. It was absolutely simple and had a charm of its own. A unique take on admission of feelings and the concerns regarding such acts of love. I am completely wordless to praise you presently. Magnificent and fabulous story with amazing wordplay.

    1. Devihaa

      Hey Minerva… Thanks a lot for commenting dr…I’m glad that u loved it…. I’m happy that u liked my way of presentation… It’s really means a lot…
      I’m glad that u liked Karan’s nervousness… Naina’s confusion… Meghna and naina’s stupid talk… In short.. everything …Thanks again…

  3. Wow..loved it…really a fantastic os..come soon with another

    1. Devihaa

      Hey hi Dr… Thanks a lot for commenting…. I’m glad that u loved it. …
      Will try to come soon Dr…

  4. Nila

    Amazing one thank u so much Devi for considering my comment(without skin allergy OS)

    1. Devihaa

      Hi Nila… Thanks a lot for commenting… I’m glad that u loved it… .
      Yeah actually….I dedicate this OS for u..Becoz u asked me to write an OS without skin allergy… But I forgot to mention ur name.. I’m sry for that yaar…

      1. Nila

        No sorry It’s OK Devi

  5. Aradhana

    a big sorry im late again..was searching ur ff all way..pls sent me link nxt time.if u dont mind.and the epi..woohhh..its complicated without skin allergy, karan loves naina..and that love instances…A clean, breezy Os loved it.It was soo good I liked it.tysm..take care..bye..

    1. Devihaa

      Hi Dr… Don’t be sry… Actually I don’t know how to send the link… .. can u tell me how to do it…
      And thanks a lot for commenting yaar… I’m glad that u loved it ..
      Take care…Bye…

      1. Aradhana

        clck ur ff and ull see link on the tab..copy it and paste it…

  6. Astra

    it’s awesome shot. i’m not naira fan but just came here looking at title… it’s a great one..

    1. Devihaa

      Hi Astra … Thanks a lot for commenting dr…. I’m glad that u liked it ….
      Astra…. Do u remember me…??

      1. Astra

        haha, ya… yes yar. i remembered u..

  7. Richa19

    Awesome!!! Such a cute os on our cute couple NaiRan!!!!!! Loved it so much!!! ?????

    1. Devihaa

      Hi Richa …. Thanks a lot for commenting…. I’m glad that u loved it…

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