NaiRan os- first time without umbrella ☔?

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Hi guys….??… I got a good response for my previous os ..So thanks a lot for that…. Now I’m back with another os… This idea cracked me today… So I thought to give it a try….. I hope the comments will increase…. And now the title is… ” NaiRan – first time without umbrella…” …I don’t know whether this will suit the os…Or not …. But i just gave it yaar… Happy reading….

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(As usual…. NaiRan r wearing the gloves always…??)..

Karan opens the door of their room and saw naina walking here and there while talking in the phone…
Naina: nahi yaar….
Pause…
Naina: y don’t u understand…
Pause..
Naina : array nahi ho payega… Yaar..
She stood in front of the dressing table…With a hand in her forehead….. She saw Karan’s reflection in the mirror… And turned to him…. She faked a smile and walked out of the room…
Karan stood there confused….

He walked back and peeped outside of their room…And saw naina..Still talking in the phone….
Naina cuts the phone and turns to come inside… Karan saw this and went inside the room…..And pretended that he did nothing….
Karan: Kya hua..
Naina faked a smile: nothing …..
Karan: ur hiding something from me..
Naina: no…Karan…aisa Kuch nahi…
Karan: I thought..U really considered me as ur friend…. But I was wrong …
Naina gave up…
Naina: Karan… U r really my best friend… And actually I was talking to my Friend Riya…
Karan: OK…Then..
Naina: wo … She is getting married… Tomorrow…..
Karan : toh ..
Naina: today night is sangeet… Tomorrow morning is haldi…And then in the afternoon is the marriage….
Karan: naina if u want to go …Means u can go…
He said keeping the books in the shelf. ..
Naina: Karan…She want both of us to attend the wedding…
Karan turned and looked at her..

Naina : I know u won’t come … Don’t worry Karan I’ll take care of it… I..
Naina’s phone rings … Flashing Riya…
Naina: Riya… I’m sorry yaar but we won’t be…
Karan: naina … We’ll go to the wedding…
Naina: really …… She asked excited..
Karan smiles and nods his head…
Naina: thank u … Thank u soooooooo much Karan…..
Naina: hey Riya I’m coming for the wedding yaar…..
After sometime she cuts the call…

After 2 hours….
Karan wears his coat…( Guys that coat during the party for Meghna ).. and comes and stands behind naina who was sitting in front of the dressing table… Wearing saree…..And was putting blush….

Karan was just staring at her….. Naina after putting blush… Takes sindhoor and fills her maang…. Which makes her his.. which proves that she belongs to him…..
After that she wears some necklace..And at last she takes her mangalsutra and puts around her neck..And tries to put it… But she was not able to do it…
Karan sees her and goes near her… Naina sees his reflection in the mirror and withdraws her hand….
Karan takes the mangalsutra in his hand and ties it….
They both look each other through the mirror…… Oh Piya plays….
Naina remembers how he didn’t tie the mangalsutra properly during their wedding…….
A tear escapes from her eye …She wipes it….And both smile looking each other through the mirror…..

She stands… And both come out of the house and head into the car…. Naina sitting back…While Karan sitting front in the passenger seat…..

After few hours travel …. Naina shouts….
” Gadi ruko…….” … The driver puts sudden break…
Karan: Kya hua…. Why r u shouting…
Naina: Karan we didn’t buy any gift for my friend…
Karan shakes his head in disbelief…
Karan to the driver : bhaiya … Stop the car at any gift shop….

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Karan: naina …. Jaldi karo yaar…. It’s been half an hour…U r wandering around this shop….
Naina looking at gifts…: Karan ……Ruko na…
She stopped …. Looking at a big heart shaped frame. ….. She takes it in her hand…And smiles…
Naina: bhaiya ise pack kar Dena….
Karan gets relieved… .. that at last she chose some thing….
After packing the gift… They get into the car ….

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Karan and naina get out of the car…And move inside …..
Naina saw Riya and started running towards her…. .. Riya who was performing with her fiancee….Saw naina and came running…
They both hugged each other ….And were jumping…… All look at them…
Naina: Riya I can’t believe that u r getting married yaar….
Riya: Haan yaar….
They broke their hug and looked around and found everyone looking at them…
Naina bites her tongue : I think…. We did a bit much…
Riya: Haan yaar…
All started laughing….
Karan looks at naina admiringly…
Riya..: hey…Where is my jeeju…
Karan comes forward…
Naina: he is my husband Karan…. And by the way where is my jeeju…
Riya : oh shit…

Naina: what..
Riya: in excitement of seeing you…I left him in the stage itself..
Vikram( Riya fiancee): and ran from there….
Riya pouted…
Naina: OK Chalo… Now go and dance..
Riya and Vikram …Goes to the stage and started to dance..

While NaiRan sits in the chair…
Karan looks at naina who was laughing and cheering her friend…
Karan: I never thought that u r this … Much drama queen..
Naina : I’m not drama queen…
Karan chuckled…
Riya comes and drags naina to the stage..
Riya: now… My best friend… Is going to dance….
Naina: Riya nahi yaar ..
Riya: no…Ur dancing and that’s final..
Naina gave up…
And starts to dance for sun Sathiya…

She was dancing so gracefully… Karan was awestruck looking at her…
Riya: Karan jeeju… Go and join her…
Karan: no…It’s OK…
Riya: arrey …but it would nice if it was a couple dance…
” I’ll dance with her..”
They all turned and looked at a person…
Riya: AMIR……
She runs and hugs him…
She brokers the hug…
Riya: it’s great to see u….Yaar…
Amir: same here darling… OK where is my cupcake …..
Riya: ur cupcake is dancing alone in the stage…
Karan in mind: cupcake…..Is he calling my naina as cupcake…… How dare he…
Amir gets into the stage…
Naina sees amir…And hugs…Him…
Naina: AMIR……
Amir : hi cupcake…
They started dancing…

Karan was boiling in anger…. His fist balled…Yeah of course ….He is getting jealous seeing naina’ s closeness with amir…

Karan goes away from there…And stands in a corner…
Karan: how dare he touch my naina…. How can she hug him….. I’ll break his bones….
He stops the waiter…And takes a drink and drinks it( guys it’s actually alcohol…But he didn’t know it) ….He drinks one more..One more…One more…. ..
He gets totally drunk…..
Naina finishs her performance…And comes down and searches Karan… And finds him…In a corner…Stumbling …

Naina: Karan….What happened..
Karan: hey who r u….
He looks at her closely..
Karan: oh…. It’s Mrs.NAINA KARAN SINGH CHAUHAN…..
Naina looked at him confused…But the same time…Smiled… Listening to what he said…
Karan: go…Go and dance with that duffer..
Naina: duffer…??
Karan: Haan duffer.. that amir duffer…
Naina: Karan … Kya hua tumhe…
Karan: mujhe Kuch nahi hua… But something happened to u…
Naina: what happened to me…??
Karan: Haan…U were dancing with that duffer…. * He starts making some moves..* la la la la…..
Naina: Karan… What u drank..??
Karan: and…And u were hugging that duffer…. How dare he touch u…. I will not leave him….
Saying he starts walking… Naina stops him…
Naina: Karan he is my friend…
Karan: dosth…??
Naina nods..
Karan: but I’m also ur friend na… U never hugged me…
Naina blushed… Seeing how jealous her husband is…
Naina: but he is also like my brother… Kya Tum mere Bhai ho..??
Karan shaking his head..: no…No..No..No…
Naina laughs…
Naina: OK u be here… I’ll go and get key for room… And yeah u should not go anywhere OK…
Karan nods like a child..
Naina gets the key from Riya..And walking towards the room… With Karan…
Her one hand was around his waist… And his hand was around her neck… And both were stumbling while walking….

Karan: naina… I’m sorry…
Naina: kyun….??
Karan: that… I scolded u ….Because of that duffer…
Naina smiles..
Karan pushes naina…Naina looks at him confused…
Naina: Karan… Kya hua..??
Karan: u should not touch me naina…. Tumhe pata hai na… U will get my allergy….
Naina smiled ..Seeing his concern for her..Even when he is not in his sense..

Naina: par Karan…We r wearing the gloves na…
Karan: Haan…. Mein bool gaya.. saying he slaps his forehead… And smiles..
Naina smiles…And slowly takes him inside the room and closes the door..
And was making way to bed..

Karan: naina shall I tell something..
Naina: hmm….
Karan kisses naina’ s cheek….

Naina stood frozen…. She was rooted to the ground … She was blank… It actually took few minutes for her to register what happened actually happened…..That he had kissed her….
Karan: I love u naina…
Naina looks at him shocked…
Karan continues: matlab…. Pyaar Wala pyaar nahi… Friendship Wala pyaar…
Saying he smiles… Naina blushes…

She makes him lie in the bed..and removes his shoes…And was about to go… When he held her hand…
Naina turns and looks at him…And raises her eyebrows asking ” what”…

Karan pulls her…And she lands on his chest. … * Oh Piya plays..* … They share an eyelock… Naina gets conscious…And

Naina: Karan…What r u doing…. Chodo mujhe..
Karan: naina pls.. don’t leave me alone….
Naina: I won’t….But leave me now…
Karan : NO…. Saying he snakes his hand around her waist….
Naina shivers by his touch..: ka….Karan… Kya …Kya .Kar rahe ho…Tum…
Karan: nothing…Come on let’s sleep…
Naina: but how will I sleep like this…

Karan thinks for sometime and slowly makes her lie beside him and puts his hand around her waist…And holds her tightly…..
Karan: sleep now…
Naina: par Karan….
But he fell asleep…. Naina blushed remembering everything and caress his hair….
Naina in mind: I know Karan u r not in ur sense… But whatever u told …It was from ur heart…And this the first time we r sleeping without ur umbrella…
She smiles and sleeps…

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Next morning… ..
Karan wakes up and looks around him…And finds naina beside him and his hand was on her waist… He quickly withdraws his hand ….
He sits up and holds his head which paining…And was trying to remember what had happened last night……
After sometime … He shot open his eyes remembering everything….
And started waking up naina…

Karan: naina … Naina …. Utto yaar…Naina…
Naina slowly opens her eyes and stretches …And sits up…
Naina: y r u shouting in the morning itself..
Karan: Tum tik ho na …??
Naina yawning: Haan ……Y r u asking…
Karan: I…I .. touched u….
Naina: relax Karan …We r wearing the gloves ….
Karan: par. ….. I was not in my sense… But u were na… Y didn’t u go away from me…
Naina: array isme meri Kya galti hai….U were holding me tightly…That I was not even able to move an inch…
She said mockingly…. Karan glared at her…
Naina: OK…First I’ll shower…
Karan nods… Naina takes her things …And goes to shower….
After sometime… She comes out and sees Karan holding his head…
Naina handing him a lemonade..: have this u will feel better…
Karan nods …. They both smile…

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The haldi and the marriage gets over….
Riya,Vikram,amir and NaiRan r standing together….
Naina: congratulations yaar….
Riya & Vikram: thank u ….
Amir: congratulations darling…..
Riya& Vikram: thanks…
Naina: OK guys… We r leaving now….
Riya: array stay for some more time …
Amir: Haan cupcake…
Karan was controlling ….
Naina looked at Karan…Who was glaring at amir and smiles ….
Naina: no…Amir… Will come some other day…
Riya: OK then…Bye… Take care…..
They all bid bye to each other… And NaiRan left……

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On the way to the home.. .Both were silent…. Naina was tired …So she didn’t start any conversation…. While Karan was feeling awkward to start one… After what he did last night…

At night..
Naina was making the bed…
Karan: naina….Whatever happened last night….I was not in my sense…
Naina: Karan relax… I can understand that… Don’t worry I didn’t take u wrong…
Karan relaxed… Listening this…Both smiled …. And went to sleep…

OK guys….. I know this OS was too bad… I’m really sorry for that…. Actually I was pissed off seeing 12 th result…. Today…. I don’t what I’m going to do …Next yaar at this time I’ll be getting my result… OK leave that…. So to relax myself I wrote this… I know it’s not nice… I’m sry guys…
Chappals and eggs r also welcomed…

With love,
Devihaa

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18 Comments
  1. Nila

    Wow kya blushing OS yaar?Devi superb and ur title was The Perfect which state r u from?(bcoz of

  2. Nila

    Wow kya blushing OS yaar?Devi superb and ur title was The Perfect but one thing is skin allergy plz next time without SA give a OS yaar plz plz.
    which state r u from?(bcoz of 12th result i am asking)hope u dont mind

    1. Devihaa

      Hey Nila…Thanks a lot for commenting…Dr… And u said to write without skin allergy… I mean..I don’t get u… And I’m from Tamil Nadu…
      And can I know where u r from..( if u don’t mistake me..)

      1. Nila

        hey me too from TN(Madurai)and ya skin allergy pathi than solurean athu vendam next time unoda os la.

  3. Minerva

    I am literally having a mile long curve on my face right now. This was super amazing and fantastic. I am absolutely in love with this wonderful concept and story. The dialogues and scenes were absolutely priceless.
    Karan being drunk is as new a concept as the first rays of a sunlight radiating out from the glowing orb at dawn. The concept was utterly beautiful and magnificent. That ‘kiss’ was seriously magical and spellbinding.
    Karan’s jealousy and his subsequent words on amir and naina’s closeness was truly marvellous. The way he vented out his thoughts and desires before naina through his unanticipated actions is truly commendable. All the feelings were fabulously captured and presented in a brilliant fashion. This was seriously exemplary in all aspects.
    Your talents and way with words is absolutely stunning. I really cant find words and phrases to praise you presently. Praise and glory I offer unto you..

    1. Devihaa

      Hey Minerva…. Ur comment always brings a smile in my face… Ur each word inspires me…… I’m glad that u loved it… Thanks a lot for commenting… It means a lot for me… It’s just a idea that cracked …. I never that u will love it… .. thanks again..

  4. Wow..i loved it..good writing

    1. Devihaa

      Hi thanks for commenting… I’m glad that u loved it…

  5. Devihaa

    Hi thanks for commenting… I’m glad u loved it..

  6. Threemaimai

    it’s really sweet and trust me you manage to create a whole movie in front of my eyes with your words

    1. Devihaa

      Hi Dr… Thanks a lot for commenting… That really sweet of you… I’m glad that u liked it…

  7. Devihaa

    Hi Dr…. That’s really sweet of u…. Thanks a lot for commenting… I’m glad that u liked it…

  8. Devihaa

    Hey guys…Pls do comment..Even if it is negative… But pls do comment. ..
    I have another idea for os in my mind… But I’ll write it only if I get some response here..Plsss do comment yaar…

    1. Nila

      Devi plz post next one quick yaar I am searching for ur OS

  9. Superb..loved your os..hope you will write again

    1. Devihaa

      Hi seha… Thanks a lot for commenting…I’m glad u loved it…
      Will see dr… It’s based on the comments..I get..

  10. Aradhana

    heya girl!!!!!Was too good..atleast this time no umbrella…wow..it was some classical romance..I loved his jealousy..nd that awkwardness everything!!Too good..keep writing..all d best!!sorry for late comments..was lil busy..waiting for next one..never get disheartened if u get less comments..may be ppl get busy at times..its a gift to write such ffs,os and all not everyone can do..dont depend upon ppls comments..there may be silent readers even..

    1. Devihaa

      Hi dr… Thanks a lot for commenting… I’m glad that u loved it…. And don’t be sry.. dr. …
      Thanks u…For ur advice..Yaar.. it’s meant a lot … And yes I’ll write another os.. Which is running in my mind..But not now…As I’m stuck in work..

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