Naagin Love OS (6)

Hi guys thanx for all the love in the comments and I would like to say that next part of this OS will be mature (18+) and it will have Strong adult references so should I continue it or not please let me know in the comment section….Please tell me if I should do any Mature OS’s or not thanx……

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Continued….

‘ Shivanya you are looking so beautiful. I wouldn’t be able to conrol myself more from taking you.’
Shivanya was red now.
‘Shivanya, I want to complete our marriage. I wish to complete you. I want to return you the first night we never had.
‘Thank you Ritik, thank you so much for coming in my life. I love you.’
‘I love you too.’
both looked into each other’s eyes. They had an eye lock. He pulled her and hugged her tight in his embrace.

Shivanya put her head on Ritik’s chest listening to his heartbeats. She loved being in his arms. It felt so peaceful. She closed her eyes. Ritik looked down at her smiling face and pressed his lips on her forhead.
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Ritik parted from the hug and took Shivanya’s face in his hands and made her look at him. His eyes reflected his desire for her. Shivanya blushed thinking what was coming. She looked away breathing heavily. Ritik realised her shyness and hesitation and smiled lightly. He promised in his mind to change this blush into desire by the night.

Ritik softly kissed her forhead…eyes…cheecks…chin… He tilted her head back and kissed her shoulder… He put his hand on her neck and caressed with his thump. His lips soon followed his hands and gave continueous kisses on her neck and licked whole neck with his tongue. Shivanya grabbed his arms and squeezed them. He bit slightly on her neck and she could only moan his name.
‘Ritiiiiikkkkkk…’

Guys thats was the update pls tell me if i should continue this story or write a new OS and tell me if you want my OS’s to be Mature or not

Mature=(18+, Detailed Suhaagraat)

Credit to: Tina ji

19 comments

  1. rivanya

    Yeah you should continue it but may be they should also talk about her pregnancy and should talk with other family members

  2. K Fernandez

    Tina ji if u wnt to write an adult ff then we r ready to read it.Hope that ur next ff would be hot and sizzling with some aww…. romantic momentsmoments.This one was superb.

  3. Shreyaa

    You can do mature OS. Hope in your next ff there is hot and sizzling romance between rivanya

  4. Harman

    ye OS ka meaning kya h ? Operating System? waise to ye sab padhke hume bohut hassi aaya :V

  5. Siddhi

    |Registered Member

    I think u should not write mature os as it will be not nice.many below 18 kids are their in this site and if they read it then it will be wrong.Address romance but not very much.It’s my suggestion so don’t feel bad

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