Naadan Dil Ki Manmarziyaan (Episode-9) Musical Journey of Love ,Ardhika-Ishq-e-mohabbat


Hey my dearieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees I am back again , What bahut intezaar karwaaya , intezaar ka fruit choclate hai nahi samjhe to chalo Aradhika ka Ishq-e-mohabbat dekhte hai

Arjun and neil are on the way on the jeep, and neil suddenly Stop the jeep in front of the Dhaba and arjun said

Arjun: Why you stop here.
Neil: Because You stop eating after falling in love but we are normal human beings and folding his both hands in front of him and says Baba arjun let us eat..

Arjun: Arjun smile a little and said stop creating your drama again.

And they both came out of the jeep and sit on the charpoy outside the dhaba

And a person (chotu) came

Boliye saabji kyaa laun? (what do I get for you sir)By watching arjun face. Arjun not seeing him and lost in his thoughts

and neil said.

1 katori pyaar . The chotu smiled immediately and neil said

Oye listen now he doesn’t eat food, Let me ordered. 2 glass Lassi (malai maarke) 1/2 shaahi paneer and 1/2 daal makhni , 2 paneer tikka with 4 naan

Yaah that’s it .

Arjun shift his eyes to see neil and said we are just two and you ordered for the whole Baarat..

Its ok dude , You are not hungry may be the girl need to came herself to feed you and he punch on his stomach and said don’t you dare say something about her.

Neil:Ok , Ok, I am not saying , now you didn’t even see her and you are angry on her name

Arjun is not saying anything but just open his diary and staring her face with amusing eyes.

And Neil said , with his devilish smile by watching his state

Kate Nahi Kat Te Yeh Lamhe Intezaar Ke,
Nazre Bichaye Bathe He Raste Pe Yar ke,
Dilne Kaha Dekhe He Jalve Jo Husn Yarke,
Laya He Kaun Inhe Falak Se Utarke. and signing his hand to the photo.

And arjun blush a little with a smile giving back to neil .

When she came in front of your eyes God knows what you do then. Neil said and then suddenly chotu came there

And The chotu get all the food one by one here.

Neil watch the food with pleasant eyes and said I am gonna eat all this by myself , hey dude came here or else I left nothing for you.

Arjun: Go a head , I don’t want to eat.

And Neil smiled and said Yeah I am right, now the girl has to come and start eating but arjun ignored his stare and stand near by the charpoy watching the serene atmosphere,

The black sky fun of stars in a brightening light of moon , the cool breeze that blow softly touch his skin . The atmosphere is cool. a little fog is here and there white fog .

Its night midnight , and in the dhaba a person is watching TV a Black and white Old Tv and a person sitting with his collegue in dhaba said

this song whenever this song plays my wife don’t allow me to turn off the tv or change the channel when I ask she said this song make her remember about the first time when we met , and the chotu said , How and the person said, Aye te mai vi nahi jaan paaya hale tak ( even I can’t understand this till now he said with a bursted smile)
and the song plays ………………….
The guitaar tune begins ………….
and arjun move his face watching his phone with a hope , she call, she will call, and plays………………
Pehla pehla pyar hai, pehalee pehalee bar hai
Jan ke bhee anjana, kaisa meraa yar hai……………

and two hands soft white came from behind of arjun on his eyes close his eyes and leave a smile on arjun’s face of the happiness of her to came here , he suddenly try to hold the hand and move behind but find nobody there and get up and see here and there and all the person eating there and his eyes get stuck on one girl , who stare arjun with her pleasant eyes in white attire pure white lehanga plain white with dupatta hiding herself behind the persons who eat at the dhaba , she watch arjun with her pleasant innocent beautiful brown eyes , and arjun’s eyes get mesmerized by watching her , he just couldn’t move his eyes to another side continously watching her slowly move his footsteps towards her and plays………………

Usakee najar, palko kee chilman se mujhe dekhtee, usakee najar

when she see him coming she sit on another seat behind that and hide behind a lady having a blushing smile on her face and her heart beating fast with his each footstep. and arjun watching her with amusing eyes and coming towards her with slow footsteps and plays……………
Usakee haya, apanee hee chahat kaa raj kholatee, usakee haya

and he reach there but nobody is there the lady is watching him with questioning eyes and he just said to her sorry , I I I am sorry and left in search of her and plays……….
Chhup ke kare jo wafa, aisa meraa yar hai
Pehla pehla pyar hai
Pehli pehli baar hai…………….

She run from there and hide behind of the Parda( a wet blue glittering dupatta putting on the wire to make it dry by the local lady)Arjun is running after her and come on the other side of the parda and plays…………..

Woh hai nisha(mean-a beautiful night), woh hee meree jindagee kee bhor hai, woh hai nisha (the queen of night)

He just watch her eyes again and again walking slowly and she is now in veil below her eyes till her neck and arjun put his hand and start touching the parda to make her feel and plays…………….
Use hai pata, usake hee hatho me meree dor hai, use hai pata
and he take the parda and slid it to see her flrst glimpse and less than in a second she vanished in the heavy fog and plays………………
Sare jahan se juda, aisa meraa pyar hai
Pehla pehla pyar hai…
Pehli pehli baar hai.

She just leave arjun smiling blushing rubbing his head and thinking what’s wrong happened with him.

And then Neil came there with a plate full of food mixing here and there shaahi paneer is mixed in dal makhni and the whole plate is like a mixture of junk and he eat then also while walking towards arjun and says .

Dude, if your dream girl is gone then Would you eat something because I am gonna eat the whole if you don’t want . Arjun came into his senses. and see him eat like that . and says

If any girl would see you like this than she would run thousand mile away from you.

Neil: As if I care . hey its me Neil Girls run after me , my charming looks saying with a dimple smile on his one cheek.

And arjun came near by neil and start eating the food and said I think you have planned to eat the whole dhaba today.

NeiL:Who cares about this the bill has paid by you , my highness.

And arjun raised his eyebrows but still ignored his question and start eating the food.

And scene shift to Radhika’s house ,

Sam is shouting , Hey radhika did you sleep in washroom.
I need to come .
Sam: Come fast ………..

Rads: Coming ………..
Radhika is came out while rubbing her hair with the towel after having a bath.

Sam: Thank god you came and she ran fast into the washroom.

And rads came near the bed in her thoughts and think do I call why not . She saw the bathroom and smile a little and think this is the right time to do it .

She throw the towel aside and ran faster to see sam’s bag.

She saw here and there taking out each and everything and said.

Uff this sam making her bag like a junkyard . Getting an half eat apple and said eeeeww. Shit uhhh.

And said to herself Cam down I have to find it.

Sam came out of the washroom and said .

Sam: Hey do you find this showing her the chit. and said.

Rads: Oh you devil sam. and running beside her.

And try to take the chit but sam running on the other side of the bed .

I told you to wait . you call him in morning not now . Or else , You know what can I do.

Rads scared a little coz she very well knew sam go to any heights if somebody say no to her.

Ok Ok fine rads says , I am not taking it but don’t do anything with it.

Sam: Fine.Deal.

And they both went to sleep.

Rads and sam both in the same bed having one bedsheet pure white woolen.

Rads try to sleep on the bed but couldn’t sleep moving her head here and there
as she feel so restless couldn’t sleep for even a second and then the song begins………….
Ek Ajnabi Sa Ehsaas Dil Ko Sataye
Shayad Yahi To Pyaar Hai
Betabiyon Mein Dhadkan Meri Chal Paye
Shayad Yahi To Pyaar Hai

Kuch bhi kahaa naa
Kutch Bhi Suna Na
Phir Bhi
Bechain Dil Hai Humara

And watching towards sam and trying to slid her fingers towards her to find the chit and take it but sam taking a turn in the sleep to the other side and radhika change her face to sad and by folding her hands in an angry depressed mood watching towards the window and rest on the back of the bed while thinking about him and plays…………….
Behke Kadam Hai
Mushkil Main Hum Hai
Sambhle Bhala Kaise Yaara
She slid her hand from the bedsheet and watch her hand it has a bruise on her hand (Pyaar ke nishaan) his finger marks on her wrist . She saw it with pleasing eyes and caresses it with her soft fingers having feeling of him and thinking aboout him the time when he hold her hand and she kiss his forehead and plays……………

Chahe Bina Bhi
Nazdeek Hum Chale Aaye
Shayad Yahi Toh Pyaar Hai

In between the below lines this scene is played…………….Below narration of the scene…………

Nazrein Bichade
Pehre Laga De

Dil Pe

Rads stand from her bed and without any noise she came near sam side sit on the floor and check near by sam the chit by mermering where she kept it , where it is and plays…………..

Par Dil Kisiki Na Maane

and finally she saw the chit in sam front pocket of her night tshirt she get a smile on her face , talking to herself , calm down , she raised her hand a little slowly slowly and going to put her fingers in her pocket and plays………….

Kaaton Pe Chalke

and suddenly sam turn on other side her front is now towards the bed and cover the full bedsheet and radhika smiled hardly put her hand on her head and beat her forehead and said this devil can’t give this to me in her dream even. and plas

Sholon Mein Jalke
Milke Rahenge Deewane


And Rads coming on the other side and kiss sam forehead with a smile and put the bedsheet on her again and wait, wait for the right time, wait for the morning wait for listening his voice again and in these thoughts and plays………..
Chahat Ki Lau To
Aandhi Mein Bhi Zilmilaye

Shayad Yahi To Pyaar Hai

Ek Ajnabi Sa Ehsaas Dil Ko Sataye
Shayad Yahi To Pyaar Hai

Here Scene shift to arjun , Arjun and neil finish the food and near by the dhaba they arrange a tent . Neil kept it in the jeep . with two bedcovers also. They both make the tent fix it near by the dhaba on the hill in the woods . They both are fixing the tent .

Neil is saying his own things ,

Dude, you are so boring , If I have a girl this time than you don’t know this night this atmosphere make the night magical for me. By folding both of his hands with a smile . But arjun is busy to fix the tent in his own thoughts and again and again he is watching his phone kept near by the tent on the bedcovers. and heavy wind blows and he again see rads glimpse from the woods in the same white attire and he stand and keep follow her and plays…………………

Ye Mulaqatein
Yeh Teri Ankhein

Ek Pal Na Main Bhool Pau

Rads is running with her smile , and Arjun running behind her in the woods having a sweet smile to reach her and hold her in his hands and plays………..
Kitni Mohabbat
Hai Kitni Chahat

Kaise Bhala Main Bataoo

She stop her footsteps in the midst and see him by hiding herself behind the tree and showing her fingers and made something by her fingers , arjun getting confused to see this and he walk again slowly to reach her to know what this means and she ran again and plays……………….
Acha Lage Jo
Toh Samne Muskuraye

Shayad Yahi To Pyaar Hai

Arjun is then standing alone there as she again left him in fog . The fog take her again and he move his head left right again and again in search of her and plays………..
Ek Ajnabi Sa Ehsaas Dil Ko Sataye

Shayad Yahi To Pyaar Hai

And thinking about what she made with her fingers what she want to say and plays………..
Kutch Bhi Kaha Na
Kutch Bhi Suna Na
Phir Bhi

Bechain Dil Hai Humara

He slid his hand keeping it on his hair back side and smile on himself in his own state on his own feelings how he start changed and plays……………
Behke Kadam Hai
Mushkil Main Hum Hai

Sambhle Bhala Kaise Yaara

and neil reach there and said

What are you doing again in the woods at night what are you doing here ?

NO I just arjun said while watching here and there.

What? are you playing with the witches or animals here at this midnight .

Come on dude. I have to take you to your home safely and said to dadi hold you grandson he is gone mad in love.

And arjun is getting little angry punching on his stomach and said shut your mouth . I want to sleep . and they both are going to sleep in the tent.


Scene shift to radhika

RAds hugs sam tightly in thoughts of him and try to sleep and plays……………….

Chahe Bina Bhi
Nazdeek Hum Chale Aaye

Shayad Yahi Toh Pyaar Hai

And both of his and her face shown while sleeping in each other thoughts and plays……………………
Shayad Yahi Toh Pyaar Hai
Shayad Yahi Toh Pyaar Hai
Shayad Yahi Toh Pyaar Hai
Shayad Yahi Toh Pyaar Hai

And scene ends ……………………………………………………………………

What ??

That’s it ??

Naa??Come on lets check out their heads . What ever it is ??Its going to be more interesting.Both are dreaming this time and we can see what their dream is Come ………………………….

And the tune beginsAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaan Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan

and the scene starts…………..

So much fog is showing here and there white serene atmosphere all over

and slowly slowly a room is showing .

here arjun is sleeping in a bed having bedsheets above on him. And sleeping peacefully by folding both of his hands on his chest.

And the door open and slowly slowly a girl came in the room having a towel on her head with wet hair. She took the towel and keep it on the bed . and

Slowly slowly she came onto bed and came near by arjun first by his side and watching him with her pleasing eyes .

She keep both of her hands her right hand on arjun right side near by his head and her left hand on his left side she is upto arjun now.

She keep all the hair tresses wetty hair tresses and smiled a little with her pink cheeks and slid her head to make him feel her . and said ” Arjun” with her soft voice sweetly just like a small kid. with her soft tender voice filled with so much love. and arjun open his eyes a little and plays……………….

Tu mile, dil khile

Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye

Arjun suddenly hold her waist and make her close towards him and make her lie on him hold her with both of his hands and Rads say it again “Arjun” this time with a little shyness and plays…

Tu mile, dil khile

Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye

He start caresses her hair make it slid behind her ear with his hands softly and start caresses her cheeks her face and making her sleep with him and plays………….

Na ho tu udaas, tere paas paas

Main rahoonga zindagi bhar

Na ho tu udaas, tere paas paas
Main rahoonga zindagi bhar

Saare sansaar ka pyaar maine tujhi mein paaya

Tu mile dil khile

Aur jeene ko kya chaahiyee

And rads moving in between him saying Arjun, Arjun and somehow she able to loose his clutches and stand up and smile and she succedingly move up on the bed and rush to the right side near the mirror and start caresses her hair with the comb. and arjun sleep on the bed while just watching rads again and again and plays………………
Tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye
Haan tu mile, dil khile

Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye

and the tune begins …………………….

Rads shout on him . Arjun Arjun Wake up . YOu getting late for work.

And she wake him up and by holding his back she make him walk towards the washroom.

And arjun is bathing and rads keeping the clothes and the towel on the bed.

arjun is shouting “Jaan” Towel . And rads Smile and walk towards the door . holding the towel in her hand and knock the door And she doesn’t notice the door is already open and arjun take the towel but she just watch the floor and smiling in herself with her hand doesn’t realize he already take it.

and suddenly arjun open the door in a rush and hold her hand tightly and push her into the bathroom .

Rads shout arju arjun………. and plays………………..

Chanda tujhe, oh dekhne ko nikla karta hai

NOw you can’t run away from me he said. By holding her hand and his other hand on the wall.

Rads smiled devilishly and said with a cute smile very cutely.

***Achaa*** Then catch me .

And run below his arm and came into the glass door ( the Shower area covered by the glass wall all over and close the door immediately and arjun watch her with folding his hands and plays…………..

Aaina bhi, oh oh oh oh deedaar ko tarsa karta hai

and he came near by the glass door and rads keep both of her hands on the glass came her face near towards the glass and on the other side arjun also keep his both hand on the glass just right there where rads hands placed and came near towards the glass and plays…………….

Itni haseen koi nahin

Itni haseen koi nahin

And they both kissed on the glass rads on left side arjun on right side. Rads also put a lipstick mark on the glass and both smiled and plays……………….
Husn dono jahan ka ek tujh mein simatke aaya and arjun in other side open the door and came in and said now I am not gonna leave you at all. and plays……………
Tu mile, dil khile

Aur jeene ko kya chaahiyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Scene shift to the room where Rads is watching a picture what sam sent her a DVD She insist her to watch it as it is important stated.

And she start watching………….with her big big eyes totally dark in room just the tv is on. and she is eating the popcorn and with a shocking expression with so much concentration she is watching . and suddenly arjun came into the room.

and the rads getting shocked as hell. the remote jumped from her hand and the popcorn is fall on the blanket. Arjun is getting confused a little.

raising his eyebrows and said what happened.

Rads is suddenly off the TV and said nothing nothing. usually watching tv serial.

And Arjun is slid his eyes to the tv in questioning stare.

And said Ok , I also want to see tv serial , I want to see the serial too.

And rads said No, NO, you are getting bored . No need , Its very boring.

Arjun: Well I like boring . And take the remote from her hand . Radhika make a cry mock face and keep her both hands on her face . And arjun open the tv .

And watch the movie. Its a movie. What sam sent a couple english movie some intense romantic scene is shown .and Arjun raising his eyebrows smiled devilishly and move his head towards radhika.

Stand in front of her taking the remote the popcorn bowl and keep it aside.

YOu are watching these kind of films he said in questiong tone.

And said. If you want to know than you need to tell me and removing his belt while saying it.

And rads murmered. Arj ar but Arjun…….and plays………

Darling, every breath you take

Every move you make, I will be there with you

What would I do without you?

and removing his t shirt immediately and jump on rads

Rads shout “Arjun” loudly .

and keep a pillow on her head while lying on the bed.

arjun is upto her and the pillow in between and they both smiled heavily his hand on her waist . and he remove the pillow and kiss her on her forehead and they both cover the blanket. and plays………………

I want to love you forever and ever and ever

Scene shit to another morning .

Rads is wearing a chudidaar suit and wearing a duppatta on her head Both gone to the Mandir(Temple)

And Wear the chunari to Maata both Rads and arjun ( Newly married couple do that in temple)

And both taking aashirwaad from pandit ji and he said

Arjun: Deerghaayu bhav(have a long life)

Rads: putravati bhav ( have a boy child)

and rads start blushing . They both take prashad.

And came outside the mandir .

Rads said you forget the teeka( on his forehead) and he came near rads and touch his forehead to her forehead and it make a mark on her teeka put on his forehead. and they both smiles and plays……………..

Pyaar kabhi, ho marta nahin hum tum marte hain
Hote hai voh, ho log amar pyaar jo karte hain

Arjun hugs rads after than and she make him eat prashad with her soft hands and they both walk while smiling to each other. and plays……….

Jitni adaa, utni vafa

Jitni adaa, utni vafa

and arjun embrace her in his hands and take her to the car and rads caresses his face with her hand and plays……………
Ek nazar pyaar se dekh lo phir se zinda kar do

Tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

They both reach the house and rads going to the kitchen . her eyes get sparkled when she watch the imli from the kitchen window.She theft one imli from the neighbourhood. and hide it in her dupatta .

And she came into house without any noise and straight goes into her room and open her dupatta want to taste the imli first .

She eat the imli one then another. In the mid time arjun too search rads came into the house. And try to find her everywhere. And came into the room and see rads hidingly eat imli.

and said what are you doing?

Rads alert and said nothing

arjun : REally . NOthing and came near towards rads.

and hold her waist with both of his hands and said YOu little thief . Doctor said you to not eat this and you eating it again and again .

What did you find in it.

Rads: Really want to know really, then eat it. and make an imli in her mouth and run from his clutches . and plays………………

Haan tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye

Arjun too running after her in the dinning area. both smiles and running here and there .

Na ho tu udaas, tere paas paas

Main rahoongi zindagi bhar

Arjun: rads don’t eat much as doc says to not eat this . No, I am gonaa eat it I loved it and she running to the room and .and arjun somehow hold her from her waist and pinned her to the wall hold both of her hands and plays………

Na ho tu udaas, tere paas paas

Main rahoonga zindagi bhar

And rads give all the imli to him and says eat it all now. and he says no , I want to eat this . Rads questioned what . and he see a little imli stain on rads face while eating it and slowly slowly arjun came near by rads and kissed her near by her lips licking her cheeks having the taste of it fully and slowly they kissed each other. and plays……………………
Saare sansaar ka pyaar maine tujhi mein paaya
Tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye
Haan Tu mile, dil khile

Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye

and then comes to reality.

Rads in her room hold sam tightly sleeping with her kissing on her cheeks in her dreaming state and sam came into consciousness.

hey hey what are you doing girl. And rads came into consciousness. and said nothing sorry sorry. and sam said.

I didn’t give you the piece of paper that doesn’t mean you are doing this shit shit . and she rub her cheeks and said eeeeeeeeeeeew I have to wash it all.

and rads hold her head with her hand and said what I am doing . and said sorry sam. and smile ………

Scene shift to arjun tent.

arjun too dreaming in his state and he shift himself near by neil bedsheet and came near by his face.

Hold his both cheeks neil snoring in night and doesn’t awake till now. and also holding his waist and squeeze it and neil feel something and murmered I am hungry need food maa get some food for me and slid a little and open his one eye and

arjun hold his both cheeks and came near by his lips just an inch away and neil eyes open. and ………..

Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy oh shit man.

and he pushed him away arjun on him all over . What you you doing.

What’s wrong with you man. Just because I eat your food last night that doesnot mean you are going to take revenge like this.

Arjun get into his senses Oh Goshhhhhhhhhh he said and rubbing his head. and said sorry dude.

No no no. What you you doing. Wait just wait . He think you are thinking about her . Yes, last night that aawara game in the jungle and now this.

Dude you are gonna full mad. I am not going to sleep here . My stake is now at risk.

and he take his blanket his bed cover and make it fix outside the tent.

and said it loudly I spent my whole night in the mid of the juglee animals even with that worms but not with you anymore.

Arjun : Suit yourself comfortable.

and they both sleep on their sides. Arjun in the tent and neil outside the tent.


and that’s it my lovieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.

I seriously feel lack of words while writing. Because seriously I am not at all a writer.

A true confession. I just want to be your friend and made a relation of friend to another friend not want any writer-fan relation.

So tell me each and all . Are we friends or Are we writer fan. Hey my lovieeeeeeeeeeeees Its my pleasure always to be a friend of you all.

Love you from my heart always. I start writing by and for my friends.and really want to be a friend of you all.

Deareeeeeeeeeeeees if you find anything wrong any episode wasteless to read then kindly tell me I stop my steps here. Coz the reason is just to make u all happy. That’s it .

Loving u all by heart.

And yaa one more thing to my friends to all of you.

Here rads experienced something something which is a beautiful feeling after marriage.

and really want to know how many of you have experienced in this.

Well I know a little name of my dearieeeeeeeeeeeees and want to know more names kindly tell

Experienced Non experienced

kirti Naty(natasha)

Roma nisha

Mansi(little) ???? kfar,thena,tanya,brity, tasnim,zara,sanyu,shakti,anna,ameena,roma,manha,nisha2,daizy,angel,sree, aaliyaa, hareem,vivi,snehahari,anwesha,devi,ritu,tais,hayathi,harani, need answer from you all and also silent readers.

Kindly tell maine toh bata diya I am non experienced but need answer from you all tooooooooooooooooooooooo. all my tu friends.

and yaa naty ask something who am I who is nisha and others also ask many times I didn’t answer to them Today I am giving it to all . Ok

When I search myself on google Then guess what I find

Nisha means a beautiful night in normal .

And when I find the mean of nisha name

This shows and I said Google baba ki jai ho. in shocking expression what the hell it is. ……………..

What Does Name “Nisha” Mean

You have a vivid imagination who can bring inspired messages to the world. You like to enjoy the pleasures of life, and when self is overcome, you can rise to the heights. You have an ability to avoid trouble – that is why you often fails to learn from experiences. You are restless, sociable people-oriented, a lover of change, and a seeker of adventure and new thrills.You are intuitive and might be interested in the arts, drama or science.You find the best contentment in life when you own your own home and provide well for your family and loved ones. You have a great sense of responsibility and duty. You are comforting, appreciative and affectionate. Your obligation in life is to hold justice and truth, and if you follow the Law, you can find the great happiness and satisfaction.

and my laugh burst out Oh MY God . First time search it on google and what the hell it is.

Love u all keep writing keep smiling always that comes staright from your heart.
Tu mile dil khile aur jeene ko kyaa chaahiye
Shaayad yahi toh pyaar hai
pehla pehla pyaar hai

Credit to: Nisha

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  1. Read this too.

    They have changed my story too. They didnt change the main theme but they have changed the words used by me and they have used their own words.

  2. Heyyyy nishu ab toh almost ek week ho gaya hai….plzzzz ab toh karo update….jaldi….want to know what happens next….love uuu????
    One lovee?

  3. hey dearieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.

    A sudden threat came into my mind that what if they used some vulgar dialogues or vulgar things by using our names.

    Its been dangerous in any way. I don’t know but I think to stop the story now. As if anything goes wrong then. I must be little scared now.

    If they take our stories and using not only one website therer are 5 or 6 websites which used our storieeeeeeeees and that to having different pictures.

    On facebook on tellyexpress and on so many websites. I am really sorry dearieeeeeeeeeeeeees but the reason to visit here is just to make u all smile but if they are doing this than it may harm us in any way. May be in future they can use our email ids too.

    I don’t know what to do next . May be I need to stop commenting here also.

    So sorry . I am also disheartened but don’t know . I think its safe to be a silent reader for now on.

    Love u all . You all are staying in my heart for forever.

    Love u all by heart.

    Good bye. And take care.

    1. Nisha come to my page. I want to consult about it with u.

    2. Hi nisha dear my sweeeeeet musical friend, ye kya keh diya tumne? Main to Mar hi jaaungi tumhare comments n story ke Bina …plzzzz yaar don’t do this….I totally agree with manha n hayathi, if Humne koi galat kaam nahi Kiya to Darna kaisa…and TU should suuu those websites and take serious action to stop this ….. but plz you don’t stop writing dear…I beg you my sweetheart…very anxiously I’m waiting for your story and comments….love you loads and very very tight warm hug

    3. Hey nisha just think once again about quitting from writing ur story and even comments because u all inspired us to comment and now ur going to stop. Take any action but don’t quit.

  4. Nishu what is this yaar ee like ur comments story dr plzzzzz dont try to stop it yaar agar hum kuch galat nahi kiya tho darna kyu yaar…. so plzzzz dont stop like this

  5. Nishu yaar plz aisa mat bolo. Yaar hayathi is right agar hum kuch galat nahi kar rahe hi toh kyun darna. They r just cloning ur stories with some english words changed. No comments r placed there. But u can TU to find out some solution for this. Plz kisi aur ke kiye keliye hame kyun dard de rahi ho. Plz aisa mat karo. I’m waiting here. Plz.

    1. Hey manha ela unavu ??
      So ur free now !!
      Sorry dinn reply back !!
      Hey so em chestunavu ???

      I also love ur meaning yaar its quite nice !!

  6. Hey nisha !! Hw r u ??
    Sorry I m late !!
    But ya
    Chahe main yahan rahu ya na rahu
    Mera dil or dimaag to yahin rahega na !!
    Hey nisha really u missed me a lot yaar I jus saw ur cmnts on my page !!

    So tell me which caste r u n which langu do u speak ??

  7. Hey mansi hw r u? Im not gud. Hav u seen previous comments. Nisha n nats r quitting bcoz of some people.

    Nisha plz yaar ek baar phir soch lo. Plz don’t hurt us like this. Mmz over in 4 months n now u people r leaving. I just came to tu for manmarziyan n thought of leaving it when serial ended. But when i saw ff i relieved n i used to study all stories n ur comments. But see when i started commenting n after making such lovely friends u r talking like this. Plz ya ameena ne bataya ke tu walone reply diya hi ke emails r safe n they cannot take them. Plz ek baar problem ke solution ke baare me socho. Plz. We can handle this.

  8. Nisha plz baat to karo yaar. Aise chup rahogi toh kaise chalega. See i just want u to be my friend. If u r doing like this what is the need of me coming n commenting here. I wish i would hav stopped coming to tu after the serial ended. It would hav not hurt me like this, the pain now is increased. Plz dont do this. First they ended serial for just trp’s n now u r doing this. If u don’t want then i may not come to tu page again.

  9. Hi nisha…..waitng for cmmnts in epi 4 of pkyek

  10. Kya yaar nisha ab baat bhi nahi karogi mujhse. Plz come . Talk to us. There has to be a solution. Tum aise bhaag nahi sakti. Plz. Kuch to kaho.

  11. Nisha I always commented on mmz page bcoz I found a butiful and like u. Plz come back yaar for us.
    His is for u…….
    Hurdles will come on ur way
    It will make itself large,
    It will block ur way,
    Make u feel itself as a mountain,
    Calm itself, think anbt it,
    Look frtom a different angle,
    Always remember; every mountain has a pass,
    Search it, look for the solution,
    Overcome the hurdle with a nutiful smile on ur face,
    As it will lessen ur stress& will help in finding d solution
    Never feel u r alone in this situation
    U have us with u & lots of wwllwisher and fans
    Always waiting for ur butiful comments
    To bring back smile on their faces.

    Do my swt nishaaaaaa just relax n chilll, let the cool breeze play with ur tresses, bring back yjhe smile pon ur face & let’s fought wid the hurdle together.

  12. My nisha, my sweeeeeet musical friend, plzzzz yaar come back…kam se kam baat to karo…ye kaisi dosti hai…hum to yahan Marne ke liye tayyar hain aur tum to jawaab bhi nahi de rahi ho…tumhare gaano aur baaton n story ke Bina ye zindagi adhuri hai…love you loads my deariiiiiiieeess, muaaaaahhhhhh. ..plzzzz come back. ….

  13. hiii…nishu…lovely episode dear…we hav to appreciate for such a long updates dear….update ext part soon

  14. Hey manha, hari, roma natasha, ammu ritu love u allllllllllllllllllllllllllll so much and all my deraieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees .

    So sorry for leaving u all in the midst of the story and mostly leave you all in this as some security steps I also expected when it comes to take a step forward to any social life.

    I scared for some time , but then thinking all in reverse and all things are going to better leave this page this website that is the reason doesn’t be able to reach here for comment or write a story can’t read any message coz i know if I read any story or any comment I can’t stop myself to sya what my heart says.

    Love u all by heart. Hey ritu , I read the lines each and every and let the cool breeze goes on for some time and feel releax my jaan , the magic certainly happened.

    Well I posted my story even at that time But I wait and told them to not update the story as i am not sure it is safe or not.

    But now I sent a letter to them to reupdate it and you get the story in any time.

    Till then I post a spoiler for the story .

    Love u hayathi, manha , roma you all are comes as a saviour for me , hari even you are a silent reader but then also you give me so much strenth thank you by heart.

    I am not saying that I cried , no just that is the moment that scared me a little so many scary things comes in my mind and heart too and as a result I take a harsh decision.

    Love u all by heart. and You all are always are staying in my heart.

  15. Luv u mansi a lottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt.

    Seriously missing u jaanemann. Mere bhi di mein tum basti ho chahe tum dikho naa dikho hum bhi dhoodne aa hi jaate hai

    luv u by heart.

    Luv u sree.

    I seriously try so hard to find you , you know i find shree and calling her by your name and said missing ur storry and not getting reply. and I thought what happened.

    Luv u yaar always try to find your name anywhrere.

    Ye story yaa kisi bhi story pe milo par milnaa zaroor why Dil kaa rishtaa kaahani kaa mohtaaz nahi hota

    Luv u by heart.

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