Naadan Dil Ki Manmarziyaan (Episode-3) Jashn-e-Yaariyaan

Hey my dearieeeeeeeeeeeeeeees, How r u all. Really feeling these days like a ride on a rollercoaster ride emotionally.
But today Coming here coz of my 2 beautiful lovieeeeeeeeeeees manha and roma and my beautiful all friends .

Thank you so much for ur heart warming love. It gives me strength to come here again and write.

Seriously , It is just like that Jeena yaahan marna yaahaan iske siwa jaana kahaan.

Missing u naty a lot, mansi(mandy) tasnim zara. if u find them tell them to come Can’t find them these days .

So lets start where we left.


Radhika came to her house running with babloo.

She came into the house with all in wet condition. Head to toe.

Mala(her mum cames) : Radhika where have u been. Its been afternoon now. This is the time to came. Its been raining outside see your condition.
She take a towel and making her sit and start rubbing her hair.

Radhika: She start coughing and sneezing and say maa, We are coming at home its raining in the mid way and anshika told us to wait and thannnnnnnnnnnnnnn.
She stops while saying it.

Mala: She took her chin up and make her see into her eyes and say when u know you can’t lie to me . I caught u in one second. She hold her nose and said.

See ur nose become red when u lie. I know very well you . I am ur mother . Never forget my child.

Now take this cup of tea , give this another one to Dadaji also.

Radhika nodded and return a smile to maa.
And go to dadaji.

Radhika : Dadaji, Giving him a cup of tea with a huge smile .

Dadaji: Giving a big smile in return , and sing

Koi Ladki Hai Jab Vo Hansti Hai
Baarish Hoti Hai Chhanar Chhanar Chhumchhum

And radhika also sing with dadaji

Koi Ladka Hai Jab Vo Gaata Hai
Saawan Aata Hai Ghumar Ghumar Ghumghoom

Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom

And then they both smiles .

Dadaji: I remember, I sang this song for ur dadi, When she doesn’t talk to me ,
I sang this song and this song made her smile. and his eyes got teared when he remember those days.

Radhika gives him tight hug. and say this is not the magic of this song but the magic of ur love that made my dadi smile because she loves u a lot.

And suddenly she starts coughing and sneezing then.

Dadaji: you also got this kind of Red cute nose just like ur dadi . But your dad have got really different nose not like ur dadi or not like mine. Always get on the top with lots of anger.

They both laughs then.

Radhika ate the dinner with family and then Changing clothes wearing a kurta (a cotton white) with a salwar and going to bed after saying good night to everybody.

She is going to sleep . Off the lights and All the lights off and everybody sleeps
And a sound heard.

What??What sound it is ??

Have any idea??

Annnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnd the entry of the Junglee billeee. Sammmmmmmmmmmmy. Radhika’s college friend. ( telling u later their story)

Radhika is sleeping and heard a sound of a cat.

Meow Meooooooooooow This one is in anger
Then three times altogether.
Meow ,Meow,Meow

Radhika, I don’t know why this cat is shouting so much.

She take one pillow and put it on her ears to shut the noise.

Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Ohhhhhhhhhhhh why this cat noise soo much. (rads mind)

Then after a second. Radhika eyes open like in shock.

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh shit!!!Holy shit !!!!!!!!!

She wake even less than a second in a rush and said shit shit shit.

How can I forgot . She is going to kill me and lock her room door, made a bed full of pillows hiding it and go in the balcony
Her balcony is attached with a tree. An old tree with heavy thick branches. Its one branch straight attached to her balcony .
She get on to the tree and murmered.
Radhika: I am going to dead one day. God knows how many times I have to go like this outside. I am not going to leave u for this .
And then she jump.

Ooch Ouch, Radhika said, my leg.

A girl with a black trouser and white shirt with a Purple hoodie jacket standing here . Chewing Bubble gum.

And said . Good , you deserve this. YOu are late she said in an angry look.

Radhika: yeah sure. If my family get to know about this , they will kill me for going so late.

Sammy: Janneman, who cares about the family , When I am there for u and u r there for me. Come on now. Don’t waste time I already getting so late because of u.

Already told u , that we need to go and u sleeping beauty, This is not the time of sleeeeeeeeeeeeeep. . Come

Sammy : Sitting on a activa . Holding the helemt and said come on dear. . Its party time.

Radhika : yes, Yes , yes my sammy who can say no to u???God himself will have to take the permission from u to saying u no for anything. she folded the white dupatta on her face. properly.

Sammy: NO doubt in this and they both start laughing radhika sit and they hug each other . Rads front on sams back and they go .

And the song plays as sam play it on her phone while going and they both sings loud on road .

Chadhi mujhe yaari teri aisi
Jaise daaru desi
Khatti mithi batein hain nashe si
Jaise daaru desi] x2

Ladkhadane lagi muskurane lagi πŸ™‚
Bewajaah har jagaah aane jaane lagi
Tu mujhe main tujhe
Jo bhi ho dil me woh khul ke bataane lagi

[Chadhi mujhe yaari teri aisi
Jaise daaru desi
Khatti mithi batein hain nashe si
Jaise daaru desi] x2

They stop the activa and sammy says: we reached the party destination.

Get ready to shake ur legs dear.

Rads: YOu have a doubt?? Lets get the things . I think our guest wouldn’t wait so long.

Sammy : Then come my Lioness. lets go and meet them.

Waqt bhi sarfiraa sa lage
Bhaagta saa rahe har jageh
Waqt ko in dino sujhne hai lagi dillagi
Ho, yaariyaan gadiyaan jab huyee
Aaj kal marziyon ki jagah se thhagi zindagi

Sath hum jo chale
Bann gaye kaafilein
Aur koi hamen ab mile na mile
Mauj hai roz hai
Roke se bhi naa ye rukte kabhi silsile

Chadhi mujhe yaari teri aisi
Jaise daaru desi
Khatti mithi batein hain nashe si
Jaise daaru desi

Sammy and rads both came with 2 tiffins in both of her hand and they open it. and

Sammy blow a big whistle after that.

2 and 3 times. Hey guys no more wait , sammy and rads are here.

Ladkhadane lagi muskurane lagi
Bewajaah har jagaah aane jaane lagi
Tu mujhe main tujhe
Jo bhi ho dil me woh khul ke bataane lagi

Any guesses who’s the guests there in the party????????????????

Hai chadi hai chadi iss kadar
Ghoomti jhoomti har dagar
Befikar befikar saa lage zindegi ka safar
Yaar ko yaar ki hai khabar
Pyaar se pyaar si baat kar
Yei Jahaan hai jahan
Hum rahein ab woh hi umra bhar

Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo many dogs and puppiess are came , running towards sammy and rads.

They open the tiffins . Chicken made by both sammy and rads they make the plates ready for them already there .

All dogs and puppies eat the food and fastly and more fastly move their tails

Dhup ko thaam ke chal pade na thake
Fursaton mein rahe, kaam ho naam ke
Befikar befikar subah suhaani ho khali ho pal shaam ke

[Chadi mujhe yaari teri aisi
Jaise daaru desi
Khatti mithi baatein hain nashe si
Jaise daaru desi]-2

After all that they all are gather towards sam and rads . And they start rubbing their forehead and rubbing them all over .

Rads take one puppy in her hand and say . Awwwwwwwwwww day by day you are getting weak . My batman.

Wait let me make u eat some food. She serves him and make him eat. and

Both are smiling all the time and spending some time with all of them.

Chadi mujhe yaari teri aisi
Jaise daaru desi
Khatti mithi baatein hain nashe si
Jaise daaru desi]-2

Ladkhadane lagi muskurane lagi
Bewajaah har jagaah aane jaane lagi
Tu mujhe main tujhe
Jo bhi ho dil me woh khul ke bataane lagi


Hey my dearieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees love u all my loveeeeeeeeeeeees

Thank u soooooooo much for ur sooooooooooo much love.

loving u all seriously from my heart . manha and hayathi thank u for ur extreme support.

love u both my loveeeeeeeeeees. And all seriously who read this .

One secret from my side want to hear.

When I heard this song first time I start dancing on it and imagine in my class.

What ???sabke saamne nooooooooooooooo never

In a break . We me and my friend listen to it and shut the door of the class and dancing on it and enjoy this song.

Love u all friends .Dancing with me all . I am already dancing .And yaa this is the link to see the video . Dance my friends khatthi mitthi yaari nashi se jaise daaru desi

Happy diwali to u manha roma hayathi, my sweethearts

And liya , nandhini, tanya, kfar, thena, naty sweetheart, anna love u all. my lovieeeeeeeeeeees happy diwali

Yeh din jahaan mein har kahi bhar de roshani usi ke pyar ki
Dil dil se woh mila de har chehra woh khila de
Rut laaye aaj khushiyon ki
Yeh din yeh din jahaan mein har kahi kahi
Bhar de roshani roshani (usi ke pyar ki) – 2
Dil dil se woh mila de har chehra woh khila de
Rut laaye aaj khushiyon ki
(Mere tumhare sabke liye happy diwali
Saare sitaarein uske liye happy diwali) – 2

Ham sabhi mein har kisike dil mein hai wahi
Ho zameen ya asmaan ho woh hai har kaheen
Roshani – 3 yeh music ka naam hain
Yeh jahaan – 3 saara usi ka kaam hain
(Usne banayi sabke liye happy diwali
Saare sitaarein uske liye happy diwali) – 2

Usne kaha ke jab main kahu aayega woh mere liye
Kyun na bhala main duurr rahu aayega woh mere liye
Usne kaha ke jab main kahu (aayega woh mere liye) – 3
Duniya meri kaise chamke jaise roshani ne roshani ho bhar di har kahi
Duniya saari aaise mehake jaise iss khushi mein har kali ho mehaki har kahi
(Aaj jahaa bhi tum raho chalo saath hamare ab kaho say (happy diwali) – 2
Aaj miley tumse koi use tum bhi bade dil se milo say (happy diwali) – 2) – 2
Mere tumhare sabke liye happy diwali

Credit to: Nisha


  1. Biya

    Waited eagerly for this part ……………..It’s fabulous nd d song dedicated is awesome!!
    U ROCK ….!!!!

  2. Pathanga

    Awwww…. Very nyc story nisha….
    Really d way u write makes me imagine those characters in front of ma eyes… Excellent…
    And tat song s jst awesome yaar..
    Tx fr d link…
    Nd a very very happy deepawali to u… May ua life be filled wid lights of knowledge, health nd blessings…

    And happy deepawali to al d readers..
    Safe deepavali save environment.. Lol..

  3. Ameena

    Nishuu just loved it dear….ur story is fabulous just like u…plzzz i request u to never stop writing…eagerlg waiting for next part dear…love u from all my heart..??
    One lovee?

  4. nandhini

    Hi nisha
    This is so lovely episode
    But confused what happened in the college of arjun and Neil
    Happy Diwali to everyone
    This Diwali brings all happiness and success to everyone’s life
    Nice episode yaar continue your work
    Very good please update the next one asap

    My semester exam starts from Friday
    So I will be absent on tu for several days
    So I make this one to everyone
    Please do update and continue writing
    And I try to come whenever time permits
    Miss you all so much
    Once again happy Diwali to all
    Enjoy the fullest of yours

  5. kirti

    hahaha nisha great episode……just loved it dear………and lots of love to u too………….muuaahhhh


  6. Tanya

    Lovely Nisha!Day be Day your story is getting interesting and also with songs which fit perfectly to the song.Way to Go!Happy Diwali everyone in advance.
    As today is Dhanteras,I am dedicating a thought:
    Dhanteras hai aaj,
    Na rupaiye,Na gehne,
    Na Dagine,
    Chahiye hai toh bas Asli dhan,
    Joh hota hai Ishq,Dosti aur attoot bandhan ka saath,
    HappY Dhanteras to all.
    Love you all. πŸ˜€

  7. Manha

    Hi nisha, loved tdy chap. Sam n radz no words. They r as cool as ever. And u too be cool. Plz update daily. Cant wait long. So plz. And ya love the song. Waiting.

  8. Natasha

    Nisha just love the way u write story and fit songs in it.
    @Nemi hello im natasha. Will u be my friend? And yes like nisha consider me as ur friend. Wont u? Im waiting for ur reply.
    @Biya hello its first time im seeing ur name. I hope we will continue to share our views.
    @Pathanga nice to see u back in our manmarziyan.
    Good night.

  9. Hayathi


  10. Biya

    I was a silent reader of manmarziya ….bt know I thought it would b enjoyable expressing our views and encouraging all writers and more than that u r all so friendly….dat I cannot stop myself commenting n knowing u all…
    Well I’m a student of huddard high school nd live in kanpur.
    Thanx a lot Natasha..Ameena ..kirti and all of u deeeaaarrriieeesss…!!!!!!
    I think we can know each other after a short introduction by all of u ….
    And i just forget to write I m a science student of 11th grade…

  11. Liya

    Realy luvd the sng:-) i hav a requst, pls updt a lngr 1 dr. . . Luv u 2 dr. . Wishng u al my frndz( i hop i can cal u guys as frndz) here a HAPPY DIWALI. . . And b safe frm fire crakers:-)

  12. Roma

    Hi Nisha, just read this update… love the friendship bond of SaRa… thx for updating your story, I’m getting addicted to it and love you so much for mentioning my name….. it feels really awesome when someone very far listen to your plead and reply back with sweet smile , it filled my eyes with tears… loved this update very much and the song was really heart touching, just loved it…love you loads my dear. ..eagerly waiting for the next episode. ..take care sweetie

  13. Hi nisha- what’s up my dear. Every thing is fine ? ? I missed u too dear. And all my tu frnds. soo sorry for didn’t came to meet u. I really want to keep in touch with my lovely frnds but our duties always opposes.

    ohhhhh nishaaaa….. I really like your writing style. It is totally different yarrr πŸ™‚ πŸ˜‰ which is gives me pleasure a lot. superb story narration!!!
    loved today’s episode. specially dadaji and radz scene. they conversed in songs style…. really it is true dil to pagal hai for your nadaan mmz πŸ™‚ …. I’d read second episode too. arjun’s family location is in ajmeer belongs to royal family. after that first day of college thn ragging, our charming Neil’s entry- simply whole fb is superb…. haha sammy our jangli billi seems soo hot with radz in pats party. And eagerly waiting for next dazzling episode.
    Always writing like this… keep smiling and giving us your fabulous mmz stories in nishu’s style!!!!
    And thnx for remembering me. may Allah bless you.
    Love you my sweetiee β™‘β™₯β™‘
    ” Happy diwali ” to all my tu frnds.

  14. nisha

    Hey my all lovieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees loved u my dearieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.

    I made this to give u lots of smiles that straight comes from ur heart. And makes u whole heartedly happy.

    I love u all. Day by day my love goes stronger for all of u.

    Have a very happy diwali choti and badi dono hi Rehti to saath saath hi hai. Choti diwali today and badi diwali yesterday . Dono sisters mubarak ho.

    Hey deepthi even me luv u sooooooooooo much excited to update. next part.

    hey my hayathi dear. , Arjun and rads encounter ke liye even I am whole heartedly exiting. waiting for next what cooks in plate.

    Hey biya . Already consider u my friend my lovieeeeeeeeeeeeee. I secret to share with u . when manmarziyaan is on even I am also a silenty reader for some time. bUt can’t continue for long time coz stories have been start created since that time on tu page and me too comment can’t stop my feelings and commenting on it and made manmarzziyaan friends. Luv u yaar. Share ur feelings dearalways

    Yaahaan pyaar ki koi kami nahin hain. Bhar bhar ke milegaa.

    hey nemi , Luv u my friend , at least u visit this page. Doesn’t care that my story is nice or bad or worse. . Coz the reason for writing is just the beautiful heart to give lots of smiles.

    Just want ur beautiful face to smile dear. Share anything u want . Write anything what ur heart says what makes u happy . Here everybody want to be a friend with u and luved u to the core of my heart my lovieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

    If u r here,me too start dancing with u on daaru desi song just like my buddy in class . luv u dear.

    Thanx pathangaa loved u yaar , actually me too when writing this one , need to imagine the whole scene how it looks if it will get aired. Loved u dear .
    Always loves u once a friend always a friend.

    Thanks ameena my cutest one lovie. Loved u that u liked it . Its a try to make u smile . Gives u heartedly smile.Loved u to the core of my heart.

    Hey nandhini , wooooooooooooooooooow yaar u made me ur fan by ur loyal hearted comment seriously Luved u soooooooooo much.

    Neil and arjun scene will surely tell u . U know our sammy is also important naa, She needed a jhakaas entry in the story What say????

  15. nisha

    Hey kirti yaar thank u soooooooooo much for liking it. Luv u sooooooooooo much dear. LOts of hugs for u tooooo.

    hey tanya , Luved it u loved it dear. , Ur thougths and your stories are shadow of how beautiful ur heart is my lovieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.. U have a very beautiful heart . I can see while reading ur thoughts and story. Happy dhanteras. my lovie.

    Hey manha thank u soooooooooooooooo much dear. I can’t have words to express my love to u my dear friend. U are a saviour for me . Always love u to the core of my heart. Have a happy diwali manha

    Happy diwalii to u too hayathi and roma Luve u too ooooooooooo somuch Always be my angels luv u the 3 lovieeeeeeeeeeeeees.

    Hey naty my princess dear , thanx for visiting here, my lovieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee luv u soooooooooooooo much always be happy . God will give u lots of happiness and give u lots of success in future too. Luv u happy diwali.

    Hey daizy luved u dear. happy diwali Stay safe play safe be happy always. Luv u dear Lots of hugs for u.

    Hey biya on the last comment I leave a message for u the story of ours is similar both are silent readers and will read. will u be my friend. Dear Its my pleasure to get a friend like u who have such a nice loyal and beautiful heart Reflect throught ur comments. Luv u sooooooooooooooooo much. Be happy always .
    Once a friend always a friend.

    Hey liya and joyi lots of hugs and love to both of u dear. Surely try to update longer and mee too want to update fast of rads and arjun encounter. my lovieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees. Luv u alwyas.

    Hey ritu luv u sooooooooooooo much dear.A nice connection with ur name dear. A question just if u tell is it ur real name or ur nick name by friends or family. Luv u dear.. Wish to know what ur likings. Luv u
    sooooooooooo much.

  16. nisha

    Hey roma , naam to update karnaa hi thaa, ur words give me strength to write. And to make all the beautiful hearts to smile.

    YOU have been an angel in my life dear. Luv u loads . Always smiling .

    • Roma

      Thx youuuuuuuuu soooooooo much nisha, I’m blessed to be your friend. You have very pure heart and soul of angel. You can make anybody smile with your magical words and this magic can only created from precious mind. Always be like this, never change your specialty your friendly nature. Life is very hard and only positive thinking and hope can give us strength to achieve our dreams and keep us steady on this roller coster.
      Love you loads my musical friend (I gave you this name coz u love music and find songs for every situation, I hope you don’t mind it).
      Keep smiling my sweeeeeet friend…β˜†β˜†β˜†β™‘β™‘β™‘β˜†β˜†β˜†

      • Manha

        I agree with u roma. Nisha u r really sweetheart. Dont ever change dear. And ya i know nisha is here for spreading happiness. So u too be happy and keep smiling always.
        Roma i like ur cmts. U write so well that people get convinced easily. U r pure hearted so u hav unique qualities. Lov u and keep smiling always.

  17. nisha

    Hey zara, zara zara ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh my lovieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

    Luv u sooooooooo much my eyes were teared when i see ur name . Luv u sooooooo much Read ur updates on the last epi too.

    Luv u yaar at least i try to make u smile.

    But seriously more than received the commment about my writing . What makes me happy .

    That a dearest friend of mine came here to meet in my home. It make me feel alive.

    Luv u yaar aati rehna aur koi nahi read nahi kiya aati jaati hello keh jaana friends kaa to naam hi kaaafi hai.

    and yaa yaar tasnim mile to happy diwali wish karna and told har nisha ne yaad kia hai.

  18. nisha

    Hey mandy missing u soooooooooooooo much my dear, don’t comment on stories u don’t want. But at least u can come here to talk my loovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvee always love u soooooooooooo much missing u dear.

    Happy diwali Stay happy. and stay safe

  19. Biya

    Hey Nisha just read ur comment dear I’m happy u shared ur thoughts n came to know we were similar(silent readers) after reading all of ur fabulous stories nd so frndly comments can’t stop myself being a part of manmarziyaan frndship and it is my pleasure to be a friend of urs and thanx to all of u loveeeeeiiiiiissss @ Kirti , Nisha , Ameena n Natasha.

  20. tasnim

    @mere NISHA NISHA A A A MERE NISHA AM VRY MUCH Missing u n SO SRY I CAN.T XPres my support as am busy n cn.t cm bt

    Am ALWAYS WITH U DEAR U R STORY WRITING STyle Is xtremly NICE N UNIQUE LIKE U Dekho Kitna sara frnd hua tmse impres Me to pehle sei fida ha ha ha am always in ur heart n u r also in my


    @hayathi:i like ur pataka oh they r blasting n shining brightly hw r u dr

    @mansi: Missed u too much Dewali kese manarahi ho luvd u deeary sweet heart

    @BIYA:nice 2 meet u n knw about u dr am in same grade same pinch n welcome whats up dr

    @ZARA:a lng time aftr Vry happy 2 see u dear 1 Hw r u…missed u frm lng time realy

    @MANHA @[email protected]
    @tanya @roma @kirty @nandini

    @daizy @Nemi @pathanga @joyi @deepthi
    @riya richa sree [email protected] AlL D NEW Frnds HW R U ALL N HW ABOUT UR DEWALI???

      • tasnim

        [email protected] also fine hayathi dry

    • Roma

      Hi tasnim, i m fine dear, how about you,. I’m soooooooo glad to see u here. I’m very thankful to mmz and TU coz of this I found the precious treasure of friends. you loads. Keep in touch, take care sweetie

  21. manha

    lagta hai ache mood me ho nisha. saviour i hav to think abt it. when did it actually happen. sam entry was jhakaas or phadhu. ardhika meeting is se bhi total crazy honi chahiye. jaise na kabhi huyi naa kabhi hogi type. i know u can do it.

  22. ritu

    Hey nisha dear forms its both my real n nick name by my fnds………..
    My likings r 2 writing poetry, seeing sky as it broadens my imagination n also how always they have diff shapes need matching with easch other, it makes me happy to watch their diff layers 2 cross one upon another………. Like they r having race in d heavens, sum times I also luv photography mainly after rain or when it is complete dark night n all the lights of ciie r on, its awesum but seasonal…………………….. Sumtimes I also enjoy writing captions.
    I luv reading Stokes mainly luv stories n my hobby is 2 collect butiful landscapes…………..
    Also I luv cooking specially for my father as we not r great foodie though our taste r always not same……………
    My one n only dream from my childhood is 2 explore difff place of India n 2 know abt their culture n their local trends………………
    Luv u muaaaaaaaaaaah…………..
    Happy diwali n safe diwali………….

  23. Natasha

    How r u guys?
    hows diwali celebrations going?

    Today my college is off because of diwali vacation.

    My morning started with a very beautiful incident. I today in morning i received a gift box from a postman. After receiving it wonder who sent these. Then i opened the box and saw theres a lot of fire crackers, chocolates along with a the letter theres a invitation of coming to play with crackers at evening. Actually i have a friend whos hindu. I once told her how they celebrate diwali. She told me that they do a lot of fun with crackers and all. I told her that i wish to play with crackers oneday. I told this to her a few days ago. And today she gifted me that box.

    Isnt it great? really friends r the greatest gift of the world. Im really happy to have friends like u all.

    @Nemi if u consider me as ur friend then of course im ur friend.

    @Biya from which country u r? And which city?

    • tasnim

      @BIYA Of COURSE we r already frnds yar…as u told ur silent readr if am n.t wrng kahi na kahi u read my cmnts

      Yaap i.l be vry pleased 2 u tell u tat Am 4r ur neighbour country BANGLADESH n i read in sirajgonj govt college hope u happy 2 knw that

      @NATASHA- WOW WOW WOW thats vry great Khub e sundor akta sokal as nisha told u princes am jst imaging it a slping beauty wake n then etc etc wow so nice…. Amr o clg aj cuti…taito

      @DEEPA-hw r u hw is ur Dewali?

  24. Biya

    I’m happy 2know about u Tasnim .
    It’s amazing ….. to know dat here (in Manmarziya) r frndz from different countries…nd sharing d beautiful bond of frndship…..

  25. hey nisha first of all wish u a verryyy happppyyyy Diwaliiiiii….so much love…..
    n m quite bsy so always hurriedly read ur story n cant do comments on it…bt nw got the time…..its really incredible….n songs selection outstanding….. song for every situation is best suited for it…it felt m in the story n living it…hats off for it to u….n story is going on interesting road… here is in ths story sam n rads r crasy really whch i like most….abhi ti hero heroin milane k hai si damn excited for it…waiting for ur updates…. love u dear….muhhhha

  26. nisha

    Hey my dear manha, Love u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much

    at least u remember .

    Now Listen to it carefully.

    Next up in plate already updated dear.

    Naadan dil ki manmarziyaan when deewana arjun met deewani radhika.

    My eyes gets teared writing this dear.

    If not liked by anyone please its is a kind request let me know. I stop my steps here and stop boring u immediately my loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.

    By this doesn’t think my love goes weak no my love always same for all of u. Love u manha love u all.

    • Hayathi

      Hi meri nishu why u r saying it will be boring dr…. listen dr if ur story was gud or bad that was secondary….. atleast u guys r trying to do something dr so dont get upset and u guys r doing superb job i appreciate dr… love u soooooo much my nishu…

  27. nisha

    Hey my biyaa dear . Wooooooooooooow u are from up kanpur really amazing dear.

    Pleasure is all mine dear, Aapne apne dost banne ke kaabil samjhaa. aapki inaayat hai my dear Luv u by heart. Lots of hugs for u dera.

    Hey deepa, Luv u sooooo much dear. I love ur story and my happiness in just that I want ur beautiful face to smile when u read it dera. Love u loads always Tight hugs dear. Hold hold

    I said pick ??nahi samjhi

    Ek flying kiss bheji hai pakad lena kisi ko dena nahi>>>>>>>>>>

    hey my dil kaa tukdaa tasnim , my bangladeshi sweet mishti, You are saying u r fidaa on me , Yaar fidaa to tumne banaaya hai, Pure tu team ko bheja tha apne comments se tumhe find karne kahaan gayee this

    Hey ritu , my lovieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee really love u loads to sharing ur manmarziyaan with us a secret sharing with u toodear

    I also loved to cook food for my family. It always gives lots of happiness. And yes its my dream also to explote diff parts of india and the culture too.

    Love u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much dear. Love u loads tight hugs for making me ur friend dera

    Hey my princess naty how r u dear. Lots of love dear. Really nice to know ur cracker received story Wooooooooooow har ek friend zaroori hota hai. Luve u dear. Keep writing and keep commenting dear . Love u my princess lots of love.

    Missing u sooooooooooooooooooooo much Love u dear Lots of hugs and kisses for u.

    aastha right things on right time dear , agar abi bataa diyaa to when the dish is coming on ur plate u can’t be able to get each and every taste of what comes in ur plate my lovieeeeeeeeee.

    Huzuur aapki choce sar aankhon pe
    choice at your own choice want to know now telling u for sure if u still want to know. dear. Let me know the answer my lovieeeeeeeeee. Luv u loads

    Hey dipika, read ur full comment dear, wooooooooooooooooooow Luved u tooo the core of my heart. My lovieeeeeeee I just visit here write here to give u lots of smiles dear. Ur smile is my strength that makes me to write. Luv u dear. Always smiling.

    A very happy diwali nooooooooooo late I am. Belated happy diwali to tanya and all my tu friends.

    Luv u alll by my heart my dearieeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.

  28. nisha

    The last comment is for one special dil kaa tukdaa

    Mansi (Mandy ) dear. I know u don’t like my story ,May be its so bad I can understand it fully dear. Koi baat nahi .

    But at least u can came into here to just talk with ur buddy, Its my pleasure always to talk with u my lovieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

    Intezaar rahegaa aankhon ko aapke deedar kaa.

    Luv u by heart. dear.

    Luving u sooooooooooooooooo much and missing u badly dear.

  29. ritu

    Another day without manmarziyan!!!!!????? When will they update ur stories…………
    Luv u nishàaaaaaa❀

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