Naadan Dil Ki Manmarziyaan ( Another story- A horror Flick) Woh Ek Raat

A night in the winter , 4 friends make a plan to party in their guest house .

Saran, Sammy, Rony and Aashish

Aashish sit on the driving seat . and the others Saran sammy rony aashish are sit on the back seat.

Aashish: Today , Party is in my house , I am taking you all to my guest house

Saran: yaar , But tomorrow, I have some important work , I need to go , we should take party but some other time.

sammy: Why are you saying this. This is the day. When He is giving us party, The boring person ever , Mr Aashish no party person and you want to miss this chance

Rony: Hey aashish yaar waha I need food lots of non-veg kabab Yaar by touching his shouder , If this can be arranged by you then take me in.

Saran: Bhukhar , Tu hamesha khaane ke baare me hi sochta rahiyo.

And they all are talking with each other , Aashish is driving in the jungle area in the night.

He stop the car immediately .

Aashish: crrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.

Stop the car immediately.

Oh shit man.

he beat his stearing wheel and grinned his teeth and said Damn. Today this is going to happen.

Saran: what happened dude. Why you stop the car.

Aashish : Just see this .

Others: What What What ???All are asking one by one.

Aashish: Its a tea point came in between 2 ways are going to the farm house.

One is left , One is right .

It is possible to go to the farm house by going both of the ways.

On the right side a Board is watched by them written this way is closed under construction work is going on there.

Beware , A danger sign board they all seen.

Sammy: Shit man, these bloddy persons , today they want to do all the work.

Saran: Its ok Aashish we came some other time ,I think we need to go now I have to complete my important work.

Rony: Just shut the crap. You and your important work.

Take the left side. We can reach to your farm house from left side too. Aashish just take a left.

Aashish: Well I can take it , we never tried to go to left side since we start visit to farm house for the last 25 years nobody take a left side don’t know why.

Sammy: Why Is this place haunted. Ha aaa haa aaa haa ahaaaa haaaa. and he smiled like a ghost acted like.

Aashish: shut up you idiot. I think may be the roads are old and some other reason . Just leave it let’s go to the left.

And this is his big mistake that he start going left at the night

What’s is going to happened with them they don’t have any single idea about it .

What will be going with them.

This night is not the night they are not going to forget this night ever in their nightmares even.

Heeee hee ehee hee and

that’s it for today.

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Hey dearieeeeeeeeeeeeeees Iwrite in hush hush , coz Never think twice.

I really don’t know what I write.

Coz the reason to write is just make my manha roma, laxmi harisha tasnim, hayathi, harani, and the other readers to write write your name in the list and start writing a horror flick . I am saying to my dearieeeeeeeeeeeeees my lovieeeeeeeeeeees plzzzzzzzz . I start this one .

You all said naa You can write 2 to 3 episodes but not the whole story ok then It will be a short story but you will enjoy it. Love u all.

giving you song but later dearieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees now I am not going to listen I want you all to write.

I am so sorry if you not like this story but please don’t start cursing me I just write this one to say something to my friends coz I want them to write. I know I am worst writer but please comment anything but please don’t curse me please.

Credit to: Nisha

195 comments

  1. manha

    tasnim agar main aapke desh aaoongi toh aapko mil kar hi jaaongi. dekhte hai kab aana hota hain.

    nisha meri nisha. loveeee u soooo much. words really fail when comes to u . i just love u.

    hareem so exams over n i hav seen the comment where u told abt ur place. looks like u love ur place soo much.

    mansi ela unnavu.

    nats so what happen buddy. hw r u ?

  2. Natasha

    Hello guys how r u?

    Im sorry that i couldnt talk to u yesterday about my compitition result. The result that they told i mean i seriously didnt expect that. I only thought that i put my best and thats enough. But when they declared result i couldnt believe in fact i was surprised. U will be very glad to that im selected as the winner of the singing part of the compition. The judges declared me as winner as i sang songs of four different language song. English, hindi, bangla,punjabi.

    And seriously this credit goes to u all who helped me to win my fear by ur beautiful words. And of course to my family.

    Im really very sorry that i couldnt tell u all this news. Actually i was very tired. So after coming to home i went to bed to sleep. Today i woke up at 12:30pm.

    I wish i could show u my prize. But………

    U know whats the tragedy of our friendship? We cant see one another, we cant touch each other, we cant really hug when we r in problem and want to cry hugging each other. Even if we want share something only within us isnt possible also. Because here r also many others who can read our sharings as this is open. I know i must be younger than many of u but for me age isnt matter. I now want u all to give me a group hug but…… we can just touch each other by our heart, our feelings.

    I think im talking crying facts. In fact im crying also. Now because of crying im not able write further. I will talk to u later. Okay?

    • Hareem

      Heyyyyyyy Natasha dear…
      #CONGRATULATIONS**#….for ur achievement…Wooooooooooow dear I guess the competition would have been amazing..u sang songs in four different languages…

      Love u loooooadzz?

    • Shree

      Natasha dear !!!! I’m so happy for you!! Congratulations!! So happy that you could overcome your fears …. No thanks n all.. It was our duty … Love you loads … Will surely pray that you reach great heights of success .. Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling… Bear hug 🙂

  3. manha

    nats congratulations dear. we r all very happy for u . congrats once again. and ya group hug toh banta hi hain. enjoy.

  4. Hey guys !!
    U no wat aaj main itni furios hu na really sab ladke ek jaise hote hai yeh mann ne prove kardiya !!

    Hey nisha !! Really sorry darling me late aayi n shayad meine tume wish hi nahi kiya tik tarah se !!
    Really sorry dr !! Love u n thank u so much for being in my life n sorry mene reply nahi kiya wen u cmnted on my page dr !! But thanq so much u made me feel very special !!
    Hey I need ur help !!
    Shud I write my story in hindi or ??
    U no naa hindi main lik ne se feel aatha hai !! Ab batao ??

    Hey nats !! U no y I said sab ladke ek jaise hote hai ! I said it bcos dis maan na sach me !! U no kal Christmas tha n dat ?? He did not evwn call me n dinn even receive my call ab batao me kaise enjoy karu yaar !! I feel lyk terrible n feel like killing him !!
    Anywa mera chodo !! Really tum winner ho I jus love it yaar n I kno how it feels but trust me yeh mere liya sabse memorable day ki pehli baar mene kisi TU frd help ki !!
    Hey if u dont mind kya tum muje apne songs bata sak thi ho jo tumne gaye !
    S batao na??

    Hey tasnim !! Pls read my cmnt of nats n nisha n help !! But thanq dr tumne muje yaad kiya ! Love u dr n mann ke saath me nahi reh payi kyu ki he is such a pagal !!
    But ami tomake valobhashi !!
    So enjoyed ur Christmas ??

    Hey manha !! Nenu ! I m fyn read my cmnt u ll no !! Nd anywa batao ki muje hindi me lik na chaye ya english me I mean d story ??

    Hey aastha !! Thanq tumne muje yaad kiya !! Love u so much ur in my life !!
    Take care dr !! N ya sorry I dinn wish u !! But I promise new year pe zarroor wish karungi !!

    Hey nisha, nats, tasnim, manha, aastha guys kabhi love maat karna !!
    Warna ap ki marzi ???!!!!

  5. Natasha

    @Zara did u forget me? So soon? I looked for u everywhere but u were nowhere. How r u? U know i missed u itna, nahi itna, nahi dekha sakti kyun ki mein tumhe bohot zada miss kiya.

    @tasnim amer tomake amar real name ar college er name bolte prob nai but this is a public place. Ekhane sudhu amra friend ra noi borong aro onek e dekhte pay. Tai i dont feel it right to tell here. Pls dont mind.

    @ameena if u tell like this then i will hit u. How can u say ur not good sis? I think u were busy. So couldnt come and i totally understand this. I too feel bad as u didnt see my performance and also u didnt see my prize. Par tum jab meri area mein ayogi toh mein tumhe jarror dekhaungi.

    @ aastha thanks. I will love to teach u.

    @Manha hug toh banta hai par kaise?

    @Mansi tumhari last line pardke mein hass rahi hoo. I think bhaiya was busy. Sometime it happens… but i too agree chirstmas par yeh nahi karna chahiye tha. Talk to maan. And agar phir kuch gardbar kiya usne toh phir batana. Aur mein iss bare me kya kahu kabhi aysi situation mein khud nahi phasa na toh………im little confused.

    And sorry mansi. Mein toh already pyaar karti hoo.

  6. Hey natasha !! Me kya baat karun yaar !
    Dont worry wo zaroor ayega muje manane ! Agar nahi aya tho mera ek best frd hai na !! I will make mann jealous !!

    Wooooo pyaar hogaya tume !!
    Acha pls batao kya naam hai uska ??
    Is it one sided or both sided love ??

  7. manha

    mansi what r u planning. mann ko sataa ne ka iraada hai kya. enduku , kaani idea chala bagundi. 😉 enta prema inta namakkam, nenu pray chestanu atanu vachi ninnu batimala lani. 😉 christmas gift.

  8. Oh manha nuvu nakante pedha ?? Dat !!!
    Hey I love him I no he will cum actuallysaying when Ifurious I m our out of cntrol but mann can pacify me but if he sont as usual wat I wrote I will do it !!
    So manha do u hv any one side love??

  9. Brity

    Hey… Guys.. I think I’m late here… But I had read that story… But missed to join you guys…
    Hey.. Natasha.. Tomake onek Onek Shuvokamona…

  10. Natasha

    @Mansi mein ne kya ek baat kahi ki mein pyaar karti hoo aur tum usse kya soch liye? Meine bola ki mein pyaar karti hoo par mein vo wala pyaar nahi karti hoo. Mein toh apni family se, friends se aur tum sab se i mean mere tu friends se pyaar karti hoo.

  11. Natasha

    @Manha thanks that u congratulated me.

    @Hareem thanks. Yes, the compitition was very good.
    @Shree thanks. Love u loads.
    @Brity thanks.

  12. NISHA IS MINE...ONLY MINE

    Nishaaaa….on hangouts me and manha r fighting….abt u….just tell that manha that u r only mine….only mine….nd will always be mine….I LOVE YOU MORE THAN HER….she don’t love u….u r mine and only mine….
    ♥❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥
    ❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥❤
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  13. nisha

    hey tasnim how r u dear love u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much dear same here my sweetheart I don’t know when How I too doesn’t know much about u but draw a really sweet pic in my heart for u I have a special place dear. This relation made by heart and I never forget it dear. My bangladeshi mishthi May be u are far away from me but still very close to my heart dear. hey what are ur favourite sweets my mishti I love some sweets a lot what’s ur favourite ones. dear Study is the must for all of us dear and yes what u hve ask daer it is the same in itself dear. yes ti si eht emas ni flesti ym cin eman raed.
    Love u so much tasnim dear always by heart dear .

    Keep smiling my mishti always missing u a lot u are a sweet mishthi of my heart always for sure.

    Once a friend always a friend.

    hey hareem Merry christmass to u too dear May god give u and ur family lots of happiness dear. Mee too want to update next part eagerly but life is heavy on me dear Situations are opposite in my life now. I try to get time to update my jaanmemann. Love u by heart dear and yaa U know what Princess and Deepthi , renu, and today thena, also starting writing ff on manmarziyaan page dear. U can read that parts also they are awesome too Love u so much my soul dear . U are always close to my heart dear. U are my soul please forgive me to not update now. and give me some time dear.I do update soon for sure. Love u so much Keep smiling meri soul meri jaan. Always love u by heart dear. Once a friend always a friend.

    hey ammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
    Hey ammu meri jaan how r u dear. I really miss u a lot dear by heart My heart is crying to not see ur ff dear. I always wish to see ur ff as I think it is the way to see ur smiles with hearts dear. I love u a lot dear. meri jaan. hey ammu I don’t know what Kind of friend I am dear , I will not consider anything about that but I made a relation with all by heart . Yes, I couldn’t see u but yes I feel ur heart dear fully and love u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much and yeah why u share that u r 17 or 18 there is no need yaar We have to make ur dear one feel that u are not sharing anything here. and he or she allow you to write . So , its a dear sweet request to not share ur personal things here I am just happy to see u anywhere I can reach dear . Love u by heart. hey after seeing ur pic I know for sure that you can angry but it is the love of ur dear ones that may not get angry you for longer time. As they loved u a lot . ammu made for love . Tell me If I am wrong meri jaan.

    Love u loads by heart words are less when I am writing here. Keep smiling ammu always.
    Once a friend always a friend.

  14. nisha

    hey aastha a big hug to u to meri jaan.Merry christmass to u too dear. I write something above also in christmass congrats in above message dear. Spending time with cousins is always awesome dear.

    and I hope the issue is with your friend is resolved now and if not then not to worry just stay with her . and always raise ur hand above for ur friendship sake always try to help her be with her that’s it and one day she hug u and always love u for all this . At last this is what we called friendship is . Love u by heart aasthu dear. Keep smiling Once a friend always a friend.

    Keeep smiling Once a friend always a friend.

  15. nisha

    hey manhu dear I love u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much dear. my sweetheart spooky saviour die hearted fan of yours dear. Love u so much always by heart. Love u manhu dear.

    always my sweetheart dear. Keep smiling always my manhu dear. U smile I smile . Once a friend always a friend. Love u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooomuch. Much more than these o’s .

  16. manha

    amu just stop. nishu tell her that u r only mine. we r fighting here for u. n u r nt coming here. plz come once my nishuuuuu jaaanemannn. we r waiting for ur story . we will continue fighting in that page. loveeeee u.

  17. nisha

    hey shree meri jaan somehow ur heart is reflecting by your pic and its so pure and sweet just like u my sweet silent reader. Love u so much . U are always pure in ur commnets dear. this is the thing what attached the chords of hearts of mine dear. Love u by heart always dear. Keep smiling really miss u a lot dear. Once a friend always a friend.

    hey deepthi love u so much by heart and soon updating dera and love u by heart always.

    hey brity my britiest cutie pie you are never late meri jaan. Merry christmass dear. above I leave messages for u all dear Christmass messages. Love u by heart dear. keep smiling dear. and waiting for ur update dear. Love u loads Keep smiling tight hugs for u cutie . and keep smilibg.

    hey mansi meri jaanemann dear how r u dear. Love u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much . when its come to meet u are never late dear. we are friends of heart dear. always loving u by heart and yeah mann is not coming and not calling naa no worries dear send him some shayeri dear it works show him what ur heart felt in shayeri way then see what he says . U are our sweetheart mansi . How can u give up so easily dear sent him something on phone and if he not replying then do messages calling again and again . or if the nature of him differeent then do the opposite of all don’t do call and messages then see what happens next what say the first one or the second one what he likes . Love u loads dear.
    and yeah I thing use hinglish dear less hindi and more english coz I think its working But I loved hindi dialogues totally of yours loved it a lot and another suggestion asked to them do they understand what u write and u get the answer . love u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
    much meri jaan.

    always by heart keep smiling
    Once a friend always a friend.

  18. nisha

    Hey ammu and manha both , I am all yours fully like totally dear.

    What to say One is my heart and one is my heartbeat If I choose one then I will have to die definitely . Tell me I think u want me to live what say. Love u both equally dear. I love u all by heart Love cannot be different it is always same and u know what it is increasing by sharing it love is increasing when u shared . Love u manhu and ammu both of u by heart and all of u my dearieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees by heart.

    hey natty dear sorry for late commenting dear love u so much by heart and u don’t know how much I am happy to get to know that u win the competition dear. Love us sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much dear
    Keep smiling meri jaan. always . and yes do tell what songs u choose in 4 language wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow.
    I am eagerly waititng for getting to know each and every detail tell what ur heart feel. I am standing with a mike in my hand in front of u dear. So tell me Ms. Natasha what ur heart felt.
    Love u so much by heart naty princess . Keep smiling
    Once a friend always a friend. and yaa I read that you write that you love someone that means that wala love mansi wala love dear if yes , I am very angry coz u write u don’t have someone at least now . I mean u need to tell us naa. I am very much angry dear. Love u loads
    Once a friend always a friend. .

  19. Harani

    Nisha dr pls update naadan dil Ki manmarziyan dr….plsss sweetie pls…waiting to read aradhika luv story wiith ur amazing choice of songs ?

  20. Natasha

    Nisha dear im in hurry so i will give my interview later, okay?

    Let me clear one thing i only love my family and friends. Mansi at first misunderstood me but later i clerify her. Really i dont have anyone like mansi wala love. I only know family and friends wala love.

    I dont believe in that wala i mean without family and friends wala love.

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