na jaana dil se door pt 9

Hey guys its sobia back with part 9…I truly read everyone’s comments and I reply back to each one of you…please support me and don’t leave my fanfiction midway….today might be a bit long but please support me and you will see some romantic scenes between couples for those who were asking…anyways let’s get startedI would sincerely like to thank all my silent readers who commented on my previous fanfiction…thanks a lot….and a big thank you to those who have been reading my fanfiction from day 1

Recap: swalak and ragsan funny moments and cute talks
@MM
Sanlak both came home last night at around 3 am…laksh was sleeping when ap walks in….she smiles to herself and thinks of something….ap screams ahhhh ragini what are you doing in laksh’s bed with him? Laksh wakes up with a jerk and says what!? Ragini? Here? But how I met her last night and made sure she went to her own home…he was in his sleep so he didn’t know what he was blabbering….suddenly ap starts laughing and laksh realizes she was teasing him…he gets into realization and asks ap ma how did you know?
She says I’m your mom and I know everything….swara is still sleeping so ap gestures laksh to not say a word….he complies and thinks what will maa do to swara now? Ap gets a dummy and places it on top of swara…laksh knows what his mom is about to do and giggles…ap also can’t resist….she starts her acting…arrey sanskar beta you here? O sorry I think I came in the wrong time….swara starts waking up a little but not all…she can now hear everything ap is saying…laksh also plays along and says oh my god…why did I become a kabab mein hadi….maa come let’s leave…swara starts waking up and she feels a person like on her body….she smiles and says sanskar…you stayed here? Ap and laksh ran behind the door and are listening to swara…..
Swara continues saying oh my dear hubby….I missed you so much….I’m so happy you stayed with me the whole night…she goes to kiss him when ap and laksh blurt out laughing…swara gets into her senses and wakes up with a jerk and says maa…bhaiiiii….what are you two doing here? They come out and swara looks down and screams ahhhh what? Who the heck is this? Laksh says aww my swara….isn’t he your hubby sanskar? Ap and laksh start to laugh….swara makes a pout and says haha very funny….what about you huh? You want me to say…laksh knows what she means and he hushes right there….
SCREEN SHIFTS TO GM
Ragsan are sleeping on the couch outside in the hall…sumi comes and thinks aww my two kids….they were so desperate to meet swalak that they didn’t even bother going back to the room to sleep…she wakes up ragsan and says come have breakfast now…ragsan say ji maa we will come…before leaving she says oh yeah I forgot to say that next time you meet swalak make sure to go sleep in your rooms…ragsan in sleep say okay maa but later realize what she says and scream what!!!….sumi says yes I know you both met swalak last night…they feel embarrassed and looking down ask how….sumi laughs and says ap ji called and informed me….don’t worry you two…I’m sure ap ji did the same with swalak…they fake a laugh and rush to their rooms…
SCREEN SHIFTS TO MALIK MANSION
Sahil suddenly receives a call…without looking at it he answers the call…sahil says hello…no one from the other side speak….the person is crying that they can’t speak….sahil again says hello….he keeps saying it until a light flashes in his mind….he thinks then says ut..utt…uttara….she gets stunned knowing how sahil can know it’s her…she replies ye…yes sahil….he gets a little smile on his face while uttara is overjoyed that sahil recognized her….she says sahil I want to meet you please come to café sweet in 2 hrs.…he says okay in a serious tone but smiles from the inside…he wanted to hear uttara’s voice since long and uttara thought today I will clear everything and smiled….
SCREEN SHIFTS TO MM
Uttara comes down and says maa I’ll be back before bhai and sister’s wedding….ap looks at her angrily and doesn’t reply….uttara thinks today you will talk to me maa…swalak come down and laksh is still mad at uttara for hiding a big matter from them…plus she is pregnant too….swara doesn’t like this much of a difference so she asks uttara where are you going….she says di I am going BUT BEFORE SHE COULD COMPLETE LAKSH SCREAMS SWARA WHY ARE YOU TALKING TO THIS GIRL…WHO IS SHE? Uttara gets shocked and says bhai…swara looks on shocked….laksh screams you can go wherever you want….we don’t care….she cries and leaves while swara says bhai you should’ve let her complete….
Ap changes the topic and says by the way swalak you two know what’s today….both look confused then put their hands on their head and say oh yeah we remember….ap smiles….swalak say your birthday right? Ap fakes anger and says oh so you both don’t actually know what’s today…swalak know but are just teasing her….laksh says your anniversary? Swara says papa’s birthday…swalak giggle and ap sees it so she smiles and says oh okay so you two don’t remember huh? Okay looks like I will just cancel it…swalak smile because they think ap fell for their trick…ap calls someone and they think who…
Sumi picks up a call and says hello…ap says Namaste sumi ji….swalak’s mouth open….they think sumi ji….ap ji what happened….ap says sumi ji swalak were saying to cancel….swalak quickly run to the phone…swara takes it and says Namaste aunty….me and bhai were just saying that…um…laksh takes it and says no aunty nothing like that…I don’t know what maa keeps saying…bye aunty and see you today at the engagement…sumi laughs and says bye beta…swalak put the phone down and angrily glare at ap…she laughs and swalak say maa what is this…she says huh? I thought you didn’t know….she laughs…swalak says MAAA NOT FUNNY HUH? Ap laughs and says sorry beta but I just love pulling both of yalls legs and swalak smile….
AT AROUND 6 PM IN MM
Everything is ready…ap goes to swalak’s room and says are you both ready…they turn and no doubt both look absolutely speechless…ap is mesmerized seeing her two kids…swara is wearing a yellow and green ghagra….she looks spellbound….laksh is wearing a dark pink sherwani with golden borders…he looks so handsome….ap hugs both and says may no one put their evil eyes on you….swalak smile and hug ap…ap leaves and before going says come down quick sumi ji will be here soon….she leaves…
Swara says bhai can you believe it…today we are getting engaged….next week is the wedding….oh my god and the best part is we both will get married at the same time in the same mandap….laksh smiles and says of course and I am happy that I will get the chance to marry with my love in the same mandap as my sister…both smile and hug…swara is getting some tears of leaving her bhai but she tries not to show….she whispers I’ll miss you bhai….laksh doesn’t hear and he whispers I’ll miss you swara…both think about when they were kids and their moments and hug…..
SCREEN SHIFTS TO GM
Ragsan are getting ready….both turn to leave for the door when sanskar says di I will miss you a lot…ragini is kind of on the verge of crying but stops herself and says no worries sanskar I will miss you a lot….both hug and cry silently….ragsan don’t get a hint that they are crying…suddenly sumi enters and says come let’s leave for MM….she sees ragsan upset and goes and hugs them…she says I will miss ragini the most…sanskar says what not me? Of course I will sanskar but you will be staying with me because guys don’t go to their sasural….only girls do….ragsan smile and hug their mom….
Sumi breaks the hug and says now hurry and come downstairs….ragsan nod and sumi leaves….ragini to change up the mood says by the way sanskar you look really handsome today….he is wearing a green sherwani with golden borders…he is looking absolutely stunning….sanskar smiles and says and my di looks the hottest in this world….ragini is wearing a baby pink ghagra with some blue….she laughs and says aww my sanskar….I will seriously miss you the most….sanskar thinks me too di….
SCREEN SHIFTS IN MM
Swalak are ready and come downstairs…ap looks at them and thinks oh my two little kids will be getting married soon…she brings them and introduces them to all…after a few minutes ragsan make an entry….swalak see their partners and are mesmerized….ragsan also think wow laksh looks so hot today….sanskar thinks swara looks so cute….swara thinks oh my god my hubby looks so handsome…laksh thinks so s*xy (looking at ragini)…
Ap calls raglak and swasan for the ring exchange ceremony…ap says laksh beta put the ring on ragini and ragini you put the ring on laksh…both comply and do as she said…everyone clap…ap says swasan your turn…they also exchange rings and smile…everyone claps…after sometime everyone is eating…swara is going upstairs to clean her dress because someone dropped something on it…she goes but midway sanskar grabs her and pulls her into some room…swara screams but sanskar immediately puts his hands on her mouth…
Swara in fear has her eyes closed and says listen whoever you are please leave me…my hubby will not leave you…sanskar is amused hearing swara…he plays along…he touches swara’s shoulders sensuously and swara shivers and says please leave me…sanskar slowly goes closer to her and gives a peck on her cheeks…she thinks I’ve felt these lips before…she opens her eyes and it is sanskar…she playfully hits him and says hubby you scared me to death….
Swara gives a fake anger face and pouts…sanskar says so my wifey remembered me first huh…swara says ugh I hate you…sanskar says I know you do and slowly goes in for a kiss…swara lets sanskar and they share a lip-lock for a few minutes…sanam re plays
Tere kareeb jo hone laga hoon to toote saare bharam re (now that I am coming close to you, my delusions are breaking)
Sanam re, sanam re tu mere sanam hua re
SCREEN SHIFTS TO HALL
Ragini is busy looking for laksh…she doesn’t find him so she is getting restless…she rushes to a room but on the way a waiter drops a juice on her dress…he says sorry and she says it’s okay…she rushes into the first room she spots…she finds the washroom open so she goes inside…she wipes her dress with water but from the shower laksh comes out…he screams and ragini changes her eye direction and looks the other way…ragini says la..laksh you here?
Laksh says yes this is my room so obviously I would be here…ragini says haha very funny but tell me why you were showering when the guests are all downstairs….he says I was getting water for maa but some waiter had food plates in his hand so he collided with me and all the food fell on me…I had to take a shower…ragini says oh okay…she goes to leave but laksh holds her hand…her heartbeat gets faster…she says laksh please let me go…he comes closer to her….she is moving back and hits the wall…laksh closes the washroom door and locks it…
Ragini sees his mischievous smile and says laksh someone will come…he says let them…ragini blushes…laksh comes closer and in her ear says by the way you look s*xy today…like smoking s*xy…ragini blushes so hard and says thank you…you look hot and cute today…laksh puts one eyebrow up and in a mischievous way says hmm really? She blushes and nods….laksh says today I will not let you go so easily…ragini confused says meaning? Laksh says wait and watch…he slowly takes his hands and slowly slides them on ragini’s bare waist…she feels his touch and closes her eyes…laksh grabs ragini’s waist and pulls her towards him…their chest are touching that no air can go through them…
Ragini complies and moves her hands on laksh’s neck…she comes closer…laksh thinks what is she doing? I was only teasing her…I know ragini doesn’t like all this before marriage…he thinks to move back…he slowly drifts apart but ragini realizes what laksh is thinking so she gives him the signal and he gets amused…ragini pulls him closer and immediately kisses his lips…laksh at first is stunned by this act but slowly kisses her back….ragini is moving her hands on laksh’s neck and hair…laksh is moving his hands on ragini’s bare waist from top to bottom…it continues for a while…the song bahon ke darmiyaan plays
Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Mujhse keh rahi hai ki badhne de bekhudi
Mil yoon ki daud jaayeing nas nas mein bijliyaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hai
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
SCREEN FREEZES ON RAGLAK AND SWASAN ROMANCING
Precap: RAGINIIIII
Kya phir se juda hoge swasan aur raglak….keep reading to know
GUYS I REALLY PUT A LOT OF THOUGHT AND EFFORTS TO WRITE…PLEASE LEAVE YOUR FEEDBACKS FOR ME…I REPLY TO EACH ONE OF YALL…I REALLY NEED YOU GUYS SUPPORTI HOPE IT WAS A GOOD UPDATE…I KNOW IT’S PRETTY LONG BUT I HOPE I DIDN’T BORE YOU ALL

Credit to: sobia

17 comments

  1. Varsha

    |Registered Member

    Dear, Its jus awsm d way u shw RagLak n SwaSan romancing, ap n shomi kidding wid their children, SwaLak n RagSan bro sis bonding, its fab

  2. SPP

    |Registered Member

    Awesome Superb Fantastic
    Lovely epi DEAR
    Loved AP’s prank
    Loved Raglak and Ragsan scenes so much
    Waiting for the next one……….

  3. SPP

    |Registered Member

    Awesome Superb Fantastic
    Lovely epi DEAR ?
    Loved AP’s prank ?
    Loved Raglak and Ragsan scenes so much
    Waiting for the next one……….

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