na jaana dil se door pt 28

Hey guys its sobia back with part 28….I’m so sorry I didn’t reply to everyone in last update….I read everyone’s comments and most are saying to make raghavi as ragini…..I’m so sorry varsha dear but so many are saying to make raghavi as ragini but don’t worry I will also fulfil your wish…oh and thank you all for not hitting me with slippers and all after the dhamaka you learned yesterday hehe now let’s start…..

Recap: raghavi’s secret reveals that she is a con girl…raghavi promises ragya to be at her school…..laksh smiles seeing raghavi’s attachment with ragya…..

@amusement park
Ragya is seen sitting on a bench with raghavi….swasansahuttlak come there and see ragya and raghavi’s bonding….they smile while raghavi tells funny jokes to ragya….ragya laughs very cutely….laksh smiles and comes near them and says aww my bachaa….ragya looks at laksh while raghavi gets some voice in her head….she hears someone saying aww my sweeto….awww my ragu…aww my bachaa….raghavi opens her eyes and pants hard……it’s 8 pm now and everyone leave for home
The next morning ragya gets ready for school….she goes there and starts preparing for the competition….laksh tells ragya that he will go pick up raghavi and come….she smiles….laksh comes with raghavi to ragya’s school….the competition starts….teacher calls everyone one by one when finally it is ragya’s turn….she goes on stage and everyone jokes on her….one kid says aww ragya where is your mamma huh? She hears it…another says what will your papa come?? All laugh at her when suddenly they hear a voice…..
Ragya turns and smiles….she whispers mamma….it was shown as raghavi….she walks by ragya and says who said my daughter doesn’t have a mom?? I’m her mom….yes I know you haven’t seen me but the thing is na that I’m the toppest business women here….I have other work then to gossip…..she smiles and asks the teacher if they can start….the teacher counts 3….2…1….they sing…..

Ragya:
Main kabhi batlaati nahi, par andhere se darti hoon main maa
Yuun to main dikhlaati nahi, teri parwaah karti hoon main maa
Tujhe sab hai pata, hai na maa
Tujhe sab hai pata, meri maa
Laksh has tears listening to his daughter and ragya gets teary eyed too….raghavi feels bad from the inside and she feels like this is someone she knows for years….raghavi takes a deep breath and starts singing
Raghavi:
Bheed mein yuun na chhodo mujhe, ghar laut ke bhi aana paau maa
Bhejna itna door mujhko tu, yaad bhi tujhko aana paau maa
Ragya:
Kya itni buri hoon main maa
Kya itni buri hoon main meri maa
Jab bhi kabhi papa mujhe, zor zor jhula jhulate hai maa
Meri nazar dhoondhe tujhe, sochun yahi tu aake thaamegi maa
Raghavi:
Unase main yeh kehti nahi, par main seham jaati hoon main maa
Chehra mein aane deta nahi, dil hi dil mein ghabraati hoon main
Ragya:
Tujhe sab hai pata hai na maa
Tujhe sab hai pata hai na maa
O mein kabhi batlaati nahi, par andhere se darti hoon main maa
Yuun to main dikhlaati nahi, teri parwaah karti hoon main maa
Tujhe sab hai pata, hai na maa
Tujhe sab ha pata….meri maa

EVERYONE CLAP FOR RAGYA AND RAGHAVI WHILE LAKSH IS SO EMOTIONAL HE JUST RUNS UP THE STAGE AND GIVES A TIGHT HUG TO RAGYA AND SAYS AWW MERI BACHI YOU SANG SO WELL…YOUR VOICE IS JUST LIKE YOUR RAGI…RAGHAVI MAMMA….RAGYA SAYS THANK YOU PAPA…HERE RAGHAVI TOO IS TEARY EYED…SHE FEELS LIKE HER HEART IS BEING STABBED BY RAGYA AND LAKSH’S TEARS….LAKSH IN HAPPINESS HUGS RAGHAVI….SHE GETS SHOCKED BY THIS SUDDEN MOVE….SHE CLOSES HER EYES TO FEEL HIS PAIN BUT RAGHAVI HEARS THE SAME VOICE SAYING YOU KNOW I DON’T LIKE TO SEE YOU CRY….PLEASE NO TEARS….SHE QUICKLY OPENS HER EYES AND THINKS WHO’S VOICE WAS THAT???

RAGLAK BREAK THE HUG…LAKSH SAYS SORRY RAGHAVI…SHE SAYS IT’S OKAY LAKSH….HE SMILES AND THEN GOES HOME
Its night and laksh has to finish some project…he decided to call raghavi home….he calls her and tells her to be ready I will come pick you up…she smiles….after some hours laksh brings raghavi home…he takes her to his room so they can work….they work for 3-4 hours and then they get tired…raghavi says laksh if you don’t mind can I go make coffee….he says of course and can you please do one favor….can you make me some too…she smiles and says of course…she smiles and goes when laksh stops her and says oh the kitchen is….INTERUPTTED…..raghavi says on the left….laksh is shocked and says how do you know?

You are here the first time na….raghavi is shocked too and says I don’t know laksh I just said it…he says okay…..she leaves and thinks how did I know where the kitchen was??? She forgets it and gets back to work…laksh feels thirsty but there was no water so he goes down….he thinks maybe raghavi will need help with the items…she doesn’t know where everything is put…he goes down but is shocked seeing raghavi…he thinks how is this possible?? He sees from far that raghavi knows every single place of the items…she knows exactly where milk is kept….where sugar is…where the pots are….everything….

Laksh comes inside and says raghavi how did you know where the sugar and all is kept….she sees in her coffee that she put everything right…she is shocked again and says laksh I don’t know I came in the kitchen and started to find everything easily…..he gets suspicious and thinks is this really my ragini?
They go back to their room and after a while raghavi says laksh I was wondering how will we break to ragya that I’m not her real mamma…..laksh is shocked but tells her not to worry….we will figure something out….raghavi says laksh I am your friend and I worry for you both…laksh is speechless while raghavi is shocked that she is saying this….laksh says look raghavi we are just friends right so don’t try to behave like my wife or ragya’s mamma….he says after ragini died she told me to move on but I just couldn’t forget her….then you came 5 years later with my ragini’s same face, same voice, same habit….everything…..raghavi kind of gets jealous hearing laksh say my ragini…my ragini but she doesn’t know why
Outside someone hears them and cries…laksh continues saying don’t try to be like my ragini…I enjoy you as a friend but don’t think it to be something more….outside its revealed and it is ragya…she says my mamma died….raghavi aunty is a look alike of my mamma….she is shocked….she sees tears in raghavi’s eyes and thinks why is aunty crying if she isn’t mamma….does she love papa??? She is so small but knows what’s happening….she thinks maybe papa has feeling for raghavi aunty deep down…she thinks of something
Its morning and raghavi and laksh are sleeping together….laksh is on the couch while raghavi is on the floor with her head on laksh’s chest…laksh wakes up and is shocked seeing raghavi sleeping close to him…he sees her face which reminds him of ragini….but then gets mad and says she is raghavi….he wakes raghavi up and says how dare you? She says laksh….he says why did you sleep so close to me….raghavi says we were working and….laksh says and what huh? If you were sleepy you could have slept on the bed or something why did you sleep so close to me…I have never let any girl close to me….she cries and says laksh….he says leave….she gets her bags and goes….
Laksh sits and thinks about ragini while ragya sees everything…she thinks I will have to do this for my papa….
SCREEN FREEZES ON RAGYA, RAGHAVI, AND LAKSH

PRECAP: RAGYA ASKS LAKSH AND RAGHAVI SOMETHING…..DRUNKARD LAKSH…..EMOTIONAL MOMENTS…..WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO THREE LIVES?? RAGYA…RAGHAVI….LAKSH??? WILL THEY EVER BECOME ONE??

OKAY SO HOW WAS IT?? I’M SORRY THIS WAS A SHORT ONE

I wanted to ask all the fan fiction writers if you guys were also having problem uploading your fan fictions and os for a day or something??? I tried uploading this part yesterday but it said telly updates is down and try again later…did anyone else receive that message???

20 comments

  1. Varsha

    |Registered Member

    No need to say sry dear, anyways i luv ur ff a lot n today’s epi ws awsm ragyaraghavi n raglak n ragya cmin to knw d truth r jus realistic. I enjoy readin ur ff evn wen it is ful of suspense

  2. nitu

    Sorry dear.. i just stopped reading this bvz incudnt imagine ragini as ragini.. and thank god.. I just opened it and read ur update that yu will.m ake ragini my Ragini.. thankyu…

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