na jaana dil se door pt 22

Hey guys its sobia back with part 22….yes guys my fanfiction will have lots of twists and turns and a lot of suspense haha now let’s start

Recap: raglak moments
@night in bedroom of swasan
Swara: sanskar I am so so so happy….finally my brother and would-be-bhabhi will become one…sanskar says I know swara I can’t wait to play with di’s baby…swara says right sanskar….he says okay swara leave all that when are we planning to have our baby? Swara blushes and says sanskar…shut up okay…let’s focus on raglak’s wedding then we I’ll think about our family….sanskar says ohhh so even you want babies….then why wait? Let’s start now….swara smiles and says shut up and runs….sanskar goes after her and tries catching her….swara jumps on bed and says sanskar no stop there….
Swara looks here and there and gets pillows from the bed….she starts throwing them on sanskar and he says swara no this is cheating…you can’t use bombs to distract me….swara says oh really sweety….he also jumps on bed and messes swara’s hair….she says sanskar why did you mess my hair…he sticks his tongue and says haha….sanskar falls back on the bed and lays down while swara is still standing….sanskar says because I can jaanuuu….he moves his fingers up swara’s legs and she gets red…her heartbeat gets faster…..sanskar slowly moves up while swara says sanskar….stop sanskar but he is in no mood to stop and finally he holds swara’s wrist….he pulls her down
She falls on top of sanskar and swara says sweety….what are you thinking? Sanskar says nothing dear….he slowly moves his face to her ear and touches them softly….swara’s breathing gets faster….sanskar comes closer and kisses her cheek….she smiles and turns the other way….sanskar moves behind her and puts her hair to one side….he kisses her neck…she clutches onto the blanket….he turns her and starts untying her clothes….they wear nothing and go in a blanket and consummate their marriage all over again….bahon ke darmiyaan plays
AFTER 4-5 DAYS IT IS FINALLY WEDDING DAY

The whole house is a chaos and everyone is working here and there….ragini tries working but swara says no bhabhi you need rest….ragini says but swara I am tired of sitting…you know it is my wedding too na…even I want to do something…swara says no ragini you just relax….ap says is everything ready and good to go….all nod yes…..
SCREEN SHIFTS TO JAIL

Inspector comes and tells kabir that you may leave now because you got bail….kabir says who did it? A old aged man comes and says I did….kabir looks and says papa….he says yes kabir now come I need to tell you something….his dad takes him out and says what did you think that you tried forcing ragini….kabir says but papa….he says what but? You have brought us all to shame….kabir looks down and says but you said….his dad says I said to scare her not force her….you know she got pregnant after what you did to her and then she aborted the child….
I only wanted you to scare ragini….what shekar and dp did to us she deserves it….I didn’t tell you to get her pregnant so she can kill the unborn baby…kabir looks down and says sorry papa….his dad says okay beta listen what happened so happened….today is ragini’s wedding….I want you to finish her once and for all…..she has to die today….kabir smiles and says okay papa….after shekar uncle and dp uncle insulted you I will not forgive them….I will finish her today….his dad smiles and says that’s like my boy….

SCREEN SHIFTS BACK TO MM
Laksh comes downstairs and says to ap….maa is everything ready? Ap says yes beta but we just need to get some puja items from the market….ragini hears ap and says maa I’ll go….laksh says no ragini you rest I’ll go…ragini says no laksh I said na I will come…if I come I will get some fresh air too….ap says okay laksh beta if ragini insists then take her….laksh says okay maa….ragini I need to go to office first…I’ll be back by 6 pm….we will go to the market then….wedding mahurat time is 9 pm….we will get home on time too….ragini smiles and says okay be back…laksh leaves and ragini starts feeling restless again….

Swara comes in the kitchen to get sugar when sanskar comes….he comes behind swara and hugs her…swara says sanskar what are you doing? Someone will come….sanskar says let them….I don’t care…swara says I’m serious let me go….sanskar says no dear….remember last night…swara remembers their love and blushes….sanskar says I want return gift….swara says return gift? I gave yesterday night na? sanskar says no dear I gave that gift….I gave love to you….swara says I did too hubby….sanskar says no sweety….you were just laying on bed letting me do my work….he winks at her
Swara widens her eyes and playfully slaps sanskar and says behave yourself Mr. Maheswari….sanskar says make me…now c’mon give me my return gift quickly please….swara says okay fine close your eyes…here ragini comes inside and sees the whole scene…she thinks to tease them….swara has her eyes closed too….she slowly goes near sanskar…both their eyes are closed…swara finally touches his lips and kisses it….sanskar enjoys it….he also feels a kiss on his cheek…sanskar with his eyes closed and swara with her eyes closed sanskar says swara do you have two lips? Funny tune plays? Swara still with her eyes closed shouts what?

Sanskar says yeah I felt a kiss on my lip and my cheek….swara says how is it possible? Near them they hear a girl’s voice and says sanskar you have a di too na…swasan open their eyes in shock and turn to their left side….they are shocked and swasan say TUM!!! Ragini says yes swara….sanskar says di what are you doing here feeling embarrassed….ragini says offo sanskar if swara can kiss you why can’t I? I am your di…she kissed your lips and I kissed your cheek….you got a kiss from your di and swara right….sanskar says you….but before he could complete ragini already left….swara is so embarrassed

She runs too….sanskar says lo gayi bhass pani mein…ek hai gharwali of MM or ek hai soon to be gharwali of MM… (She left now what…one is MM housewife and other is MM soon to be housewife…)
Sanskar says swaraaaaa cutely and screen fades to living room
Laksh returns back from office and says ragini you are ready na? she says yes dear now let’s quickly go and get the items….raglak leave…they get to the market and laksh says ragini you go get the items….I’ll go check some other things…she nods and leaves….laksh went to the bangle vendor and said bhaiyya can you show me cute baby bangles for newborns….he thought I will get bangles for my gudiya….I am sure it will be a girl….vendor shows many when laksh finally likes the baby pink one….he says this is fine pack this….other side ragini is looking at flowers for puja when a roll of thread drops….because of wind it starts rolling on the street….

Ragini goes behind it….here laksh takes the bangles and says thank you bhaiyya and leaves to find ragini….ragini reaches the road and she spots the roll of thread….she slowly bends down to pick it….at the same time an car is coming in high speed….the camera rolls to the car…it is shown kabir driving the car….he says I will not leave you ragini…you have to de today….he comes very rashly and laksh sees the car….he screams raginiii….she gets scared and drops the thread and turns….but it’s too late….as soon as she turns the car hits her and drives away…..ragini is on the ground screaming and shrieking in pain….laksh is shocked….

He runs to her and cries bad….he says ragini please get up…ragini no you cannot leave me….he gets his phone and calls MM….swara picks up and says hello….she is shocked and drops the phone….she runs to sanskar and says san..sanskar….he says what is wrong swara? What happened? Swara says san….sans…sanskar bhai called and….a..and he sa…sai…said….sanksar says he said what? Swara says ragini met with an accident….sanskar is shocked and says what? They run and get in the car and drive to hospital….laksh rushes ragini to the hospital and tells doctor to save ragini….doctor says I will try….sanskar calls ap and says badi maa come to the hospital with the whole family…

Ap says what happened? Sanskar says just come…ap tells everyone and they rush to the hospital…ap gets to hospital and swasan tell her everything….everyone are shocked…laksh is in such a state that no one can describe….after a few hours doctor comes out….laksh says doctor ho..how’s ragini? Doctor says listen mr. maheswari she is in a critical state…she fell on her back which caused her head to hit the floor…the baby was given a sudden jerk….we can only save one person…either the baby or ragini….everyone is shocked….laksh says can I please talk to ragini….doctor says just for 5 minutes…

He goes inside ward where ragini is breathing for her life and death…laksh says ragini….she is breathing heavily and says laksh please save this baby….I don’t care if anything happens to me but this baby is our memory….please save it….laksh says no ragini I can’t lost you…ragini says la..laksh th..the b..ba..baby is ou..our…mem..memory…laksh says no I will not lose you…he goes outside and tells doctor to save ragini…she says I will try wait outside….after a hour or so the doctor comes….everyone is tensed…laksh says how is ragini….everyone ask the same….doctor said congrats mr.laksh it is a baby girl…laksh says but ra..ragini? doctor says I am sorry mr. maheswari but we couldn’t save your wife…everyone is shell-shocked…laksh gets mad and says but I said to save ragini…doctor says I know but….inside she told me that she wants the baby alive….
I told her but she didn’t say….before dying she told me to hand over the baby to yo
u and asked me to tell you that she wants her to be named ragya (rag from ragini and ya from lakshya)….laksh is still…no tears nothing…the doctor hands over the baby to laksh and leaves….he looks at her and it reminds him of ragini…her eyes…her cheeks….swasansahutt console laksh….laksh says I will be back…he gives the baby to swara…hold her swara I will just come….he goes inside the ward….ragini is on the stretcher with just memories….laksh comes to her and says that is it? That’s how much you loved me? Why ragini? Why did you do this?

We could’ve had other babies but where would I find someone like you? Where is my soulmate? My unique ragini? Where will I find one like you? You were one in a million…you did not do right ragini…you did not do right….my breath, my life, my everything is you…where will I find someone like you? The camera shows a shattered laksh and ragini deep in sleep…no movements….she is dead….
We hear background voice and it says when one door closes then another opens….this is not the end…not the end of the story…raglak were always meant to be….they will unite once again….the voice continues saying god has created one for everyone….this is not the end of raglak’s story….background music plays

Tum hi ho..tum hi ho..kaisi wafa hain ye khuda jo…chaha jise kho gaya who…deke hansi hain jise rulaaya..dil mein badaa ke….
SCREEN SLOWLY FADES OFF AND IT FREEZES RIGHT THERE BUT A SUDDEN WIND COMES AND LAKSH SAYS TUM AGAYI?

PRECAP: LEAP OF 5 YEARS….EVERYTHING HAS CHANGED….LAKSH IS NOT THE BEFORE LAKSH….RAGYA IS THE ONLY THING THAT REVOLVES AROUND LAKSH….HE CHANGED….EVERYTHING CHANGED….JAANE KYA HOGA NA JAANA DIL SE DOOR KA? KYA LAKSH KO WAPAS MILEGI USKI RAGINI? KYA USKA SOULMATE USSE MIL JAYE GA? KABHI RAGLAK BANN PAYE GAYE EK SAATH?

I AM SO SORRY FOR MAKING RAGINI DIE…I HAD TO DO SO FOR SOME TWISTS AND TURNSDON’T WORRY THO….RAGLAK WILL BE ONE ALWAYS

22 comments

  1. Varsha

    |Registered Member

    OMG dear i m really sick of suspense pls dnt giv a huge shock lik our rags is dead n pls unite thm na dey r made fr eo

  2. Yashasvi

    |Registered Member

    OMG!!!!!!!!!!! ragini dead !!!!!!!!!……………… yrrrrrr me thak gyi tere suspence k liye!!!!!!!!!!! UFFF KITBA SUSPENCE………….. Maar hi dalega yeh suspence!!!!!!!!!!! Hope Raglak willl b together soon………..

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