na jaana dil se door pt 11

Hey guys its sobia back with part 11…thank you all for commenting and now I know that there are readers who enjoy my fanfiction. Thank you so much…now let’s get started

Recap: dance performances on raglak and swasan engagement and car accident
@some road
Laksh is still crying miserably…he screams raginiii….someone is watching them behind a tree…swasan also break down…sanskar is saying di please where are you. Stop joking and come please…swara says sanskar control yourself…I’m sure ragini is fine…laksh screams ragini how can you leave me knowing that we are meant to be one…they cry and cry…hours pass and swasan ask laksh let’s leave…he says no until I don’t find my ragini I will go nowhere…swara says bhai please let’s go…we will tell police…swasan forcefully have to take laksh….they take laksh till the car when suddenly someone comes from behind and starts laughing…
Swasanlak turn and are shocked…laksh says ragini…yes it is ragini…she continues laughing and sanskar says di…she says it was a good prank na…oh my god you all look so miserable…she continues laughing…laksh is really mad and he screams SHUT UP RAGINI…SHE GETS SHOCKED AND SAYS LA..LAKSH…HE SAYS JUST SHUT UP…YOU THINK IT’S FUNNY…NO ONE IS LAUGHING EXCEPT YOU…YOU KNOW HOW SCARED WE WERE…RAGINI LOOKS DOWN…SWARA SAYS YES RAGINI IT WAS REALLY BAD OF A PRANK…SHE SAYS BUT SWARA IT WAS ONLY A PR..BUT BEFORE SHE COULD COMPLETE SANSAKR SAID A PRANK RIGHT?
RAGINI NODS AND LAKSH SCREAMS NO RAGINI THIS WASN’T A PRANK…YOU HAVE REALLY HURT ME TODAY…SHE SAYS LAKSH BUT…LAKSH ALREADY SITS IN HIS CAR AND DRIVES OFF…RAGINI TELLS SWASAN THAT I WAS JUST TEASING YOU….SANSAKR SAYS BUT THIS TIME YOU WENT TOO FAR…SWARA SAYS I KNOW BHAI IF HE IS MAD HE DRIVES RASHLY AND DOESN’T COME HOME SOON…RAGINI FEELS BAD AND SAYS SORRY SANSKAR SORRY SWARA…I promise I won’t do this again…swasan forgive her and sanskar hugs ragini tight and says di please don’t ever do this again.
She says I promise…she says now I need to convince laksh…I feel so bad….ragini tries calling laksh many times but he doesn’t pick up…it’s 8 pm and she thinks to go home and see if he is there…she reaches home…swasan ask her did you convince laksh? Ragini looks on shocked and says you mean laksh isn’t home yet? Swasan nod no…sanskar says di I thought you went to find him…ragini says I did I looked everywhere but I didn’t find him so I assumed he came home…
Swasan say laksh isn’t here…ragini gets really worried and asks swara if she knows any place laksh goes when he is really upset…swara says yes ragini. Bhai likes to go to a very quiet place away from home…I think you will find him by the beach that is like 3 hours away…sanskar says ragini I’ll drop you. She says no I’ll go myself…I made laksh upset so I will convince him…she leaves and swasan pray for raglak
SCREEN SHIFTS TO THE BEACH
Laksh is sitting on the rocks crying and screams kyun ragini….why did you play such a nasty joke on me…I am very mad ragini…I will never forgive you…he continues crying…time passes and after 3 hours ragini gets there…she sees laksh on the rocks and cries hard…she runs to him and screams lakshhh…he gets stunned and turns around…he gets mad seeing ragini…she goes up to laksh and says please laksh forgive me I’m really sorry…he turns his face and says sorry’s not going to cut it today…ragini says I said na I am sorry please sweety forgive me…laksh smiles a bit but gets serious and says no ragini. You did such a big prank on me…you know how scared I was…I thought I lost you…but you were so busy laughing that you forgot there is someone who loves you…ragini holds her ears and says okay baba I am so so so so sorry…laksh still doesn’t say anything…ragini gets a little pissed and says fine laksh if you don’t want to forgive me your way then I guess I will have to show you the ragini godadia way…
laksh puzzled thinks what does ragini mean…ragini says Mr. Laksh Durga Prasad Maheswari you think only you know how to be angry…even I can but today I will let my anger slide and show you who the real ragini godadia is…he turns and amusingly says meaning? Ragini says meaning this…she grabs laksh’s collar and pulls him towards him and puts her soft lips on laksh’s lips….at first laksh is stunned but later reciprocates and soon enough both are digging into each other’s mouth and kissing passionately…it lasts for about 2-3 minutes and ragini breaks away from him…
Laksh says what was this ragini? She says what I do….laksh smiles and says oh my sweety you are too cute…you know na I can’t stay mad at you for long…ragini says I know and laksh pulls ragini towards him from her waist and kisses her again while ragini’s fingers are brushing into laksh’s hair…laksh grabs onto ragini’s waist tighter and she feels pain in her waist and hisses in pain…laksh feeling guilty asks I am so sorry ragini if I am being too hard…ragini says it’s okay laksh…I like it when you be hard with me…laksh says ooohooo ragini and mischievously smiles and continues their kissing…
SCREEN SHFTS TO SWASAN
Swara and sanskar are having a talk…swara says sanskar do you think raglak will be fine…sanskar says yeah I mean I know my di she is really good at convincing people…swara laughs a bit and says yeah sanskar even my bhai…but today he was really hurt…I felt his pain…I just hope everything is fine…sanskar hugs swara and says yeah don’t worry…now let’s enjoy ourselves you know…swara breaks the hug and says meaning…hmmm really you are such a duffer…you are not even romantic huh…he looks away…swara smiles teasingly and says okay…she goes to leave when sanskar says wait…she smiles and turns and says yes sanskar need anything
He says uh…I mean no okay bye. Swara makes faces and thinks how stupid he is…I am giving him signals and he ughh…she runs to him and says wait hubby…he smiles and says yes swara…he turns and she says you forgot something…sanskar says what…he looks here and there…swara comes and suddenly gives a peck on his left cheek and says this…he smiles naughtily and says ohhh now my turn…she smiles and brings her cheek forward but sanskar looks elsewhere…
He turns his face sideway and kisses swara’s lips…she is stunned….she blushes so hard….but surprisingly she kisses him back….both are enjoying their moments….swara breaks away and says sanskar I want more….he smiles lustfully and says okay and walks to her but she says wait let me finish sanskar….he says I know what you want to say and continues walking to swara…great but I want to say I want more food…funny tune plays….sanskar says what? She says yes…he says oh okay and walks backward…swara giggles…she tells sanskar to get her food…
He sadly goes and says okay…when he leaves swara says oh silly boy you just come home…she starts decorating the room and all…1-2 hours pass….sanskar comes back and sees the room lights off…he says swara where are you…he turns around and sees someone…he says who are you…lights come on and sanskar looks at the person shockingly…all the food he got falls from his hands and says sw…swara…yes it was her….she was wearing a red knee length dress and standing seductively against the wall…sanskar says are you okay swara…she says of course sankie poo…he is stunned and thinks sankie poo…who calls that…he says swara I think your high…
She says no dear not at all….my sankie poo is the world’s best hubby….he is so shocked…swara seductively walks near him and says hubby…he says hmmm…she says come let’s take the night away…he is still shocked….swara slowly slides her hands up to sanskars chest and opens his shirt buttons….swara seductively takes his shirt out and kisses his chest…sanskar grabs onto her waist and pulls her to him…her thin back is in the arms of her hubby….they enjoy the night and lights fade away….
SCREEN FREEZES ON RAGLAK COZY NIGHT AND SWASAN ROMANCING

Precap: new secret…new mystery…what is next to be revealed….

GUYS PLEASE TELL ME HOW IT WAS AND DID YOU GUYS FIND RAGLAK AND SWASAN ROMANCE GOOD OR I COULD WORK BETTER ON ROMANTIC SCENES…I HAVE WRITTEN ROMANTIC SCENES FOR THE FIRST TIME SO PLEASE TELL ME HOW IT WAS…AND YES LIKE I SAID I WILL SOMETIMES HAVE UTTSAH SCENES MORE THAN SWASAN AND RAGLAK BUT IT WILL BE ONLY FOR A FEW EPISODES…PLEASE GIVE ME FEEDBACKS…THANKS AND SEE YOU ALL SOON

Credit to: sobia

22 comments

  1. SPP

    |Registered Member

    Awesome Superb Fantastic
    Romantic one
    Loved it a lot
    Waiting for the next one eagerly…………

  2. Yashasvi

    |Registered Member

    awesome sobia and do forgive me plz yarrrr didn’t commented from 2-3 days actually was busy with os soooooooo sooooooooorrrrryyyyyyy yrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!! loved the raglak scene…..

    • Sobia

      It’s okay Yashasvi. I’m glad u found time and commented even after a few days. Thanks so much!!

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