na jaana dil se door pt 1

Hello guys I’m sobia. This story is different from the current track…I read the comments and replied to each one of you and I must say I will definitely continue writing because I got so much love and support…the ones who want to know the pairs will know by reading this episode….thank you all and now let’s start with part 1

@MM 3 days before the wedding
In a big room there is a boy sleeping…a girl walks in the room and sees him sleeping….she says offo bhai your still not awake…c’mon bhai you need to get ready…it’s a big day for you….he wakes up and says uttara you go get ready….I won’t take time…bhai I know you….you always take a long time….the guy finally wakes up and out of his blanket and the face is shown…it’s none other than laksh….he says uttara shaadi meri hai aur tum toh aise bol rahi ho jaise ki tumhari shaadi hai….uttara gets tensed and says bhai you know na that I don’t want to get married but she seems lost somewhere else when she says this…laksh says oh my dramebaaz little sister and says okay I will go get ready…

SCREEN SHIFTS TO GODADIA HOUSE
Sharmistha and dadi are talking when Shekar walks in….he is really worried and stressing out because it is shaadi functions and it’s a lot of work…he asks sharmistha where is our dulhan….a voice comes from upstairs….camera rolls to her and her face is seen….she is none other than ragini….papa I’m here….Shekar sees her and says wow my daughter is looking so pretty….sharmistha says Shekar meri beti pe nazar mat lagao….she walks to ragini and gets teary eyed and says ragini 3 din baad tum tumhare sasural chali jaogi jaise….ragini also gets teary eyes and says maa don’t say that…your ragini will always be there with you….I wish woh yahan hota humare saath….Shekar gets teary eyed and says khushi ke din paar aise baat na karo toh aacha hai and leaves while sumi and ragini hug each other….

SCREEN SHIFTS TO A SMALL BANGALOW
A girl walks out of the kitchen and says here is you tea hubby…the guy replies thanks dear…suddenly swara gets a call…she picks it up and on the other side is a guy speaking….he says hi bubbly….swara gets happy and says bhai….he says yes your one and only lucky bhai….swara screams wow bhai after so long we are talking so how is everything? Did you find your special someone yet? Laksh replies of course swara and you won’t guess who….swara screams who bhai tell me please….laksh says she is related to your hubby…..swara thinks and says R..RA..RAGINI….laksh says yes ragini…my love…my everything….swara can’t control her happiness and says wow bhai you found a really pretty girl….laksh blushes and says why thank you swara and please can you come to my wedding…swara gets sad and says laksh you know na why we won’t return…laksh gets sad and says but swara it’s my wedding please come….swara thinks then says I’ll see….laksh says okay bye I have to leave now and make sure you come

They hang up and sanskar asks swara who it was….she replies bhai…he says why did he call…swara happily tells him that laksh and ragini are getting married and sadly replies he invited us….sanskar gets happy that laksh invited them to his wedding…on this pretext he can meet ragini….but then recalls what happened 2 years ago and says no swara we won’t go….she gets sad and says but….BUT SANSKAR INTERRUPTS HER AND SAYS NO MEANS NO SWARA….she replies sadly okay and leaves…..sanksar gets lost in his thoughts about what happened two years ago

SCREEN SHIFTS BACK TO MM
@uttara’s room
Her face is in the pillow and she is crying hard….she thinks after what I have done I can’t even tell anyone…why did I trust such a bastard….if I knew he would do that I would have never trusted him….because of him I’m in this condition…how will I tell my family members what deed I have done…I just want to die but I have to live for someone….don’t worry uttara you can do it yourself…you don’t need anyone….and she continues crying

SCREEN SHIFTS TO MM HALL
Ap screams sujatha come here quick…don’t you know it’s a big day….we have to go meet the ladki wale and talk about a good date for wedding….sujatha says offo jiji just chill na we will have everything done…ap gets stunned hearing sujatha talk all modern and when she said “just chill” ap got more stunned….she asks sujatha since when did you start speaking English….sujatha blushes and says never mind that jiji and leaves….ap is left sunned….she thinks what happened to her today?

SCREEN SHIFTS BACK TO GODADIA HOUSE
Sumi and ragini break the hug and sumi tells ragini to go make food because her sasural will be coming soon and she needs to have cooked food before they come….ragini happily leaves and goes into the kitchen…she thinks hmmm what should I make? She thinks about laksh and blushes and says laksh be ready for tonight’s meal…she thinks to make dal for laksh because he loves dal…she makes papaya pie for uttara, for ap and dp she decides to make dal batti, for sujatha and ram she decides to make rice, and for parineeta and aadarsh she decides to make rabbdi….she thinks today everyone will love her food….she goes and makes it and by the time she is done making it the ladke wale come….

Its 8 pm and they are here….ragini quickly goes to change and comes back and brings tea….when she comes she sees everyone except laksh…she thinks he didn’t come? I especially made dal for him and he won’t be here….uttara sees ragini wandering her eyes here and there and decided to tease her…bhabhi aap kisko doondh rahi ho? She feels embarrassed and everyone else start laughing…uttara tum toh chup raho….main koi laksh waksh ko nahi doondh rahi…..uttara says lekin maine laksh bhai ka naam toh nahi liya…now she feels more embarrassed and leaves the tea on the table and runs back inside…when she goes in she sees a back facing her…it turns and face is revealed to be laksh….he says toh mujhe doondh raha jaa raha tha….ragini blushes and says please I have more work to do then look for you and turns her face….laksh grabs the opportunity and runs and kisses ragini’s cheeks. She blushes and he runs off…he comes back and says by the way nice dal and runs and sits with his family…ragini laughs and says I love you laksh
SCREEN FREEZES ON HER HAPPY FACE AND LAKSH’S SMILING FACE
What happened 2 years ago? What is uttara’s secret?

Precap: more revelations….

GUYS I AM SO SORRY IF I DISSAPPOINTED THE RAGSAN AND SWALAK FANS…I AM A DIE HEART FAN OF RAGLAK AND SWASAN AND I CANNOT EVEN IMGAINE THEM WITH SOMEONE ELSE….THERE ARE OTHER FANFICTIONS WITH RAGSAN AND SWALAK SO PLEASE DON’T CRITIZE THIS ONE JUST BECAUSE IT IS A SWASAN AND RAGLAK FANFICTION….I HOPE MY RAGLAK AND SWASAN FANS ARE HAPPY ABOUT MY PAIRS AND WILL SUPPORT ME THROUGHOUT MY WHOLE FANFICTIONI will see you all in part 2.

Credit to: sobia

28 comments

  1. nikky

    may be ragini life is too get disturbed by uttar dead as she support her brother next part soon

  2. Ruhani

    Superb dr… Everyone seems to be happy.. It’s very interesting.. Plz update the nxt part soon

  3. Yashasvi

    |Registered Member

    hey even me a dieheart fan of RAGLAK………………soo happy with ur ff and i think uttara is prergnant……….waiting fr next…………luv u sobia.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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