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Home»Fan Fiction»Murder , Revenge , Love /// RAGLAK \\\ Chapter 1
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Murder , Revenge , Love /// RAGLAK \\\ Chapter 1

AthiraBy AthiraDecember 20, 201620 Comments4 Mins Read
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hi guys… tq for the coriousity that you showed… tq tq tq so much for your support.. tq,, i hope it’ll continue as it was… i hope.. even swaragini ends, the couples are the we remember still…even the couldn’t get the trp but the couples got more fans… hope, the fans will be always support them… like thaahaan, we hope one day our Raglak also will act a serial together.. waiting for that one day..

Scene 1,
a apartment is shown, there were a big shouting sound.. the camera zooms into the apartment to the shouting side.. there is girl shouting..
girl:(agrily shouting):oh, laksh.. get out of my side, you idiot just go.. I know you told to that girl about me badly.. I knew..
she threw a suitcase at the boy who was standing infront of her and he also shouts..
boy(angrily while taking the suitcase): uffo, ragink just stop your drama and listen.. it’s not what you’re thinking. listen, yaar..
ragini:(angrily and shuts her ears up and looks at him)oooh, stop it, laksh.i won’t listen to you anymore.. I’m not a toy who can tolerate anything you say.. okay?
they shouts at each other.. there is a crowd around them watching their fight..
yes, they fight always everyday atleast, 2 times a day but got patch up in a small time.the people have the entertainment to watch their fight as a daily routine in their every day life..
a girl came out and watched their.. she looks like just got up from sleep now only…
Girl :(frustrated)erghh,fighting again.. why god kept them here? they taking out my beautiful sleep from me every day.. do something..
then, the girl got into her house and closed the door..
while, there ragini throws out laksh’s all related things out from their house..
Laksh (angrily): get lost, Ragini.. I won’t ever see you.. get lost..
he then takes his things and walks to the opposite house to ragini’s house… he opened the door and got in…
ragini stopped anything and thinked. she hears the one word now.. “GET LOST” she got more angry and it turned half a cry.. she was having a perfume bottle.laksh house door closes.. ragini turned and saw the door.. the tears falls from her eyes.. she suddenly threw the perfume bottle fastly to the door. it hitted the door.. laksh stopped walking inside and turned..

Scene 2,
the people start to see their own works..ragini is sitting in the sofa and was crying thinking his word.. “Get Lost” it rings in her ear like restless thing..
on the other side, on the opposite house.. Laksh was angrily making a sandwich.. he looked so angry ..he took the sandwich in his hand and about to bite it but stopped as abruptly.. he thinks about ragini.
he got up from the seat and the walks ragini’s house..he stopped there looking at the door..
laksh :(thinking)should i knock or not?
he turned away and stand.. while one hand still have the sandwich.. ragini opened the door.. Laksh turned with the door sounds… they looked at each other.
Laksh:(his voice shivering like he was about to cry) sorry, ragu. mera baccha..
ragini:(already crying) Sorry, laksh.. mera baccha..
they couldn’t control their emotions for even a second and tightly hugs each other..

Scene 3,
it’s been take a long time to broke their tight hug..
Ragini:(wiping her tears) come in, laksh.
they gets in and closes the door.. Laksh gave the sandwich to her… they shared it and eats it..
after a while, they got a call from someone unknown… ragini took it and heard the talk of the person…. blah blah..

To Be Continued..

prologue link…

http://www.tellyupdates.com/murder-revenge-love-raglak-prologue/

si guys… hope you’ll like it… keep support me and read it… bye… tq.. see you on next episode… bye…

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    20 Comments

    1. Sindhura on December 20, 2016 7:46 am

      Nice

    2. Raglakholic on December 20, 2016 9:11 am

      Awwww…..
      So cute raglak
      D fought nd patch up
      D loves each other
      Totally loved this
      Who’s call is it???
      Eagerly waiting to read more
      Please do continue soon

    3. Fairy on December 20, 2016 9:37 am

      awww!!!!heheheh raglak r soooo sweeeeeet…hehehe dey fight lyk kid ๐Ÿ˜€ …realllly loved it athi ๐Ÿ˜‰ ..awe!!mera baccha ๐Ÿ˜€ ..
      waitng eagerly for nxt part…update ws damnnnnnnn fantastic…keeep rockng n stay blessed sweeety ๐Ÿ˜‰
      yeah dr even i hope dat v cn get our TEMISH together as a couple in some other show sooooooooooon!!!!love dem lotzzzz ๐Ÿ˜‰

    4. nikky on December 20, 2016 9:43 am

      love raglak they amazing plzzzz next part soon Don’t take to long gap soon as I can’t wait and yes I hope we see them together actually we can do something fore them we can Twitter Twitter to some channel like Sony status and producer like Ekta Kapoor and we can post video of raglak in Instagram to request to producer and channel taken in new show plzz I did it I need support

    5. saranya on December 20, 2016 10:04 am

      amazing

    6. Samanta on December 20, 2016 10:06 am

      Superb update
      Raglak moments are outstanding
      Loved their understanding

    7. lovely on December 20, 2016 11:09 am

      Omg! Hahah

    8. Asw on December 20, 2016 12:26 pm

      Nice raglak fight in fraction of seconds & patch up in seconds keep going

    9. j on December 20, 2016 1:15 pm

      awesome

    10. IQRA222 on December 20, 2016 3:35 pm

      Aww the epi was cute and sweet

    11. jazzy on December 20, 2016 4:13 pm

      amazing dearrr

    12. Pooja on December 20, 2016 4:13 pm

      Awwwww suprbbbb yr

    13. Anju on December 20, 2016 5:20 pm

      So cute part

    14. Ammu on December 20, 2016 8:46 pm

      Interesting episode dear and waiting for next

    15. lisa on December 21, 2016 2:41 am

      cute

    16. asra on December 21, 2016 2:59 pm

      awesome dear….omg raglak fight superbbb….waiting for nxt one…tkcr akka….

    17. Vk on December 21, 2016 4:24 pm

      Aww so cute

    18. hemalattha on December 21, 2016 9:12 pm

      nice

    19. A.xx on December 23, 2016 8:26 am

      Aww loved them xx

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