MUKAMMAL MOHABBAT KI ADHURI DASTAAN ( MMKAD ) – ISHQBAAZ FF – EPISODE 8

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Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB….. please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

————–OM

Shivaay took Sahil with him and made him sleep ……..all the while he was caring for Sahil he couldn’t forget what Jwala spoke to him…..he thought to get the truth out from her , but then dropped the idea thinking it doesn’t matter to him now……

Sahil cried way too much about Jwala not being Anika didi and couldn’t believe still…he slowly slipped into sleep as he knew his Shivaay Jiju was still there for him and would make everything right…….

Soon after Sahil slept Shivaay got up to go to his room …while going he was passing by Om’s room where rest of the family members were present……….he stayed back to listen to their discussion

Om was explaining what all happened and Everyone else were startled to the core…….

Pinky was smiling………

Pinky ‘’I knew …I knew she can’t be Anika…why don’t you understand she died…she died for good and I am happy she left our lives forever…..but onething makes me really feel bad…she left her brother on our head………now we should be taking care of him whether we like or not for my heera beta Shivaay’’

Jhanvi-Om-rudra were very much agitated by now and Jhanvi spoke

Jhanvi’’Pinky !!! I am for the last time letting you know …don’t you dare to talk bad about Anika and /or her brother Sahil…you know the truth and you also know why we have been silent all these days…the day when my patience breaks I will not take a step backward to let Shivaay know the truth…then imagine what will be your condition…..’’

Pinky ‘’my son will never believe you on this and I bet’’

Om ‘’Fine choti maa we will do onething…come we go to Shivaay right now and tell him the truth and then we will see who wins the bet…….come’’

Rudra tried to stop but Om was in no mood to give up………

Shivaay who was listening was confused

Shivaay POV ‘’what is such truth that…Badi maa, OmRu are going against my mom…specially Om who doesn’t say a word against any elders in this house, except bade papa….he is speaking in such a tone to my mom….what are they hiding…everytime they make up mind to let me know they stop…but not this time…today I will confront them…confront them and reprimand them for not letting me know the truth…….ohh wait that means apart from Badi Maa the other two who knew the truth are Om and Rudra…..i can’t believe they have hid another truth from me knowing our deal that we three brothers will not hide anything from one another……Fine I will ask the one who created the mess…..as I am sure even this time my brothers will not come to me and let me know the truth’’

He stepped back and got down the stairs…and started his car………

It was nearing to morning and there was silence everywhere …….due to this the sound of car starting was heard by OmRu and rest of the OF members who were awake at that time….

Rudra ran towards the window to see Shivaay going somewhere……….

Rudra ‘’Om we can handle choti maa later…first come..donno where Shivaay bhayya is going’’

Om and Rudra ran down and followed Shivaay in his car……….

Shivaay in his car called Khanna and asked him to track Jwala’s number…

(FLASHBACK….SHIVAAY TOOK JWALA’S NUMBER FROM BHAVYA AFTER THEY GOT TO KNOW SAHIL WAS KIDNAPPED BY FAUZI)

Khanna gave him the location details which startled Shivaay as Jwala was residing in the same chawl where Anika and Sahil used to live earlier……….

Shivaay was driving way too fast and OmRu who were following couldn’t understand why he was doing so……..and when Shivaay took the turn towards Anika’s chawl both looked at each other in astonishment…….

Rudra ‘’O …Shivaay bhayya is going to Anika bhabhi’s chawl at this hour…what might be the reason’’

Om ‘’How will I know Rudra ……but this is surprising for me too…as in the past two years he never went there…anyways concentrate on driving and we will know soon why he is going there’’

Rudra ‘’Okay’’

Shivaay finally reached the house where Jwala was residing…….he saw the car parked near it and knocked the door………

—————————-CHAWL, TEMPORARY RESIDENCE OF JWALA/ANIKA

After stepping into her temporary residence with a heavy heart she fell down on bed and cried her heart out……

Anika POV
‘’ I missed him for two years and I have no idea how am I still alive…..yes how am I still alive without him…my life..my love…my soul…my husband ….. What has happened to my life…why did it get so much complicated…after those words to Sahil..Shivaay’s anger grew more…he was hurt and the anger that comes from pain doesn’t go away so soon…..
i know Shivaay…and I know he hasn’t still moved on in his life……atleast I am fortunate that I forgot partially these two years but he …..he didn’t have even that chance….i shouldn’t have come infront of him …because atleast he would have had a peace that I was dead……why do I always hurt him ….first with those heart crushing words two years before and now with my attitude towards him……

But now I will leave from his life forever… and before he again meets me…….this is the last time I will give a pain to him ….and with this I suppose he will never want to come back to me…….i will have to talk to chief and let him know my decision……I will have to leave from here……

But Sahil…..what about Sahil…how can I forget all the time I spent with him…also I am indebted to him and his parents for my entire life…..but I am happy atleast he is in safe hands….. and now I have no option left than to let him believe for sometime that I am not his Anika didi and his Anika didi died two years back …I am just an imposter for him…..after everything gets settled I will take back his responsibility without anyone’s including Sahil’s knowledge….

Rather than giving pain everyday staying infront of them it is always better to go away and end their pain once for all ……

Yes this is the only way ‘’

Anika came out of thoughts and dialled her Chiefs number

Chief ‘’Hello Jwala….good job …I am glad you have tackled Fauzi and got him arrested….so how did you remember me at this time?’’

Jwala ‘’Thank you chief …with the help of Oberoi family this was possible….sir….’’

Chief ‘’yes Jwala…..which dilemma are you in now? Speak out?’’

Jwala ‘’sir I don’t want to continue in this Job anymore…please relieve me from this duties…I want to go away far from Mumbai and settle somewhere as myself …as an independent woman …’’

Chief ‘’whaat?’’

Jwala ‘’please sir…after death of Arjun and recent happenings I am not sure I can be of any more help to you or to my country…so please sir’’

Chief ‘’Meet me in person in Delhi…your tickets will be arranged in few hours from now …we will discuss then…and remember decision taken in haste will always be regrettable’’

Jwala ‘’fine sir…I will meet you ’’

Jwala heard the call disconnected and she returned to her room to pack the bags to leave from Mumbai the next day………

While she was packing she heard the knock on the door…….she looked at time with frowned eyebrows……she very silently picked up her revolver and went towards the main door……

She stood at the side of the main door with Gun in one hand and peeked through the keyhole to see Shivaay standing outside…

Anika POV ‘’he at this time? Should I open the door or not? No let him wait for somemore time and leave …I will keep silent as if I am not there in this house’’

Shivaay knocked the door again……..Anika didn’t respond……

Shivaay ‘’I know you are in and are deliberately not opening the door……..open it else I will do such thing that the people living in this chawl will wake up at this hour of the day-night…’’

Anika remembered how he buzzed the car horn when she came to chanda’s house getting angry over him and then the consequences after that…she dearly didn’t want the same to get repeated again……

In thoughts she moved towards the door to open it …forgetting the fact that she was still holding the gun in one hand and with other hand pulled the bolt …..

OmRu parked the car outside the chawl far from Shivaay’s car and started walking towards the chawl …they were searching for Shivaay when they saw Jwala’s car infront of a house…they understood Shivaay came to meet Jwala…….

Shivaay stepped in and Anika pointed gun towards him still unknowingly…….

He looked at her and she stared at him as if she was getting involved in him……

Later she composed herself and decided to speak to him as Jwala NOT Anika…….

Shivaay ‘’Ohh……I guess you have started living with lots of enemies around you? ‘’

Jwala/Anika ‘’ what? What do you mean? ‘’

Shivaay showed her the Gun …She quickly placed it on the table near by and said ‘’nothing like that’’

Shivaay ‘’I am sure it must be nothing like that …but still Gun and you …is it necessary…you can kill people by your words what’s the need of Gun? ‘’

Anika was hurt ……she trying to compose herself asked

Anika/Jwala ‘’And by the way why are you here at this time?’’

Shivaay ‘’to know the truth?’’

Jwala / Anika ‘’what truth? ‘’

Shivaay ‘’you act good…..but I am sorry …I know you are Anika……..and you are acting as some Jwala…..’’

Jwala ‘’Stop it…how many times should I say you I am not ANIKA …I am JWALA…and for the final time remember and understand that I AM JWALA’’

Shivaay ‘’Jwala…….jwala………ok fine …I will remember much better if you tell me what is your surname…Jwala what?’’

Jwala ‘’What do you mean’’

Shivaay ‘’I mean like I am SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI…’’ (he stressed the word Oberoi) ‘’you are what ? Jwala Kapoor, jwala mehra, jwala Khanna, jwala Bajaj, Jwala Malhotra, Jwala
Ambani, Jwala Reddy, Jwala zindal, Jwala Sharma, jwala chaudary ….etc…tell me what’s your surname’’

Jwala / Anika POV ‘’has he really changed back to that Tadibaaz akdu Singh Oberoi? I can’t believe he is asking me this’’

Shivaay ‘’What are you thinking? I have asked you something answer me’’

Jwala ‘’why should I answer you’’

Shivaay moved towards her and held her hand by twisting it backwards…. she forgot she was an RAW Agent…..she forgot how to tackle such situations….She was gasping for breath….she looked into his eyes and drowned in his orbs…she still had the same effect and impact on her when he was near , so close to her……she couldn’t utter a word…..

Shivaay too looked at her and came much closer to her…..now her heartbeat was raising…….

Shivaay ‘’because I have questioned you and I need an answer…. as SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI doesn’t leave anyone so easily without getting what he wants’’
he spoke… then smiled and finally left her but didn’t move away…….she didn’t move or took her hand forward …she stood still……….

Jwala ‘’leave my hand’’

He once again smiled and said

Shivaay ‘’I have left it long back …….I must say and you must accept that you still have the same effect on you whenever I am near to you’’

Hearing his words she first fumbled and calmed herself and then looked at him and said

Jwala ‘’I don’t need to answer you and you can leave now’’

Shivaay ‘’what the wuck…how dare you ask Shivaay Singh Oberoi to leave…..’’

Jwala ‘’dare …what is the need of dare to say that..a mouth, tongue and vocal chords are enough to say that ……..’’

Shivaay ‘’seriously…you are saying this to me….’’

Jwala ‘’are you mad or have you lost it……now please just leave me alone’’

Shivaay was much angered with her words and held her tight by her waist, twisting her hands in anger and she was writhing in pain….

Shivaay ‘’What happened two years back ? I need to know the truth …and I have come at this hour to your place only to know the truth…so better say that’’

Jwala POV ‘’That means he still doesn’t know the truth of his illegitimacy …OmRu and Badi maa had kept my swear even after they knew I died ……Thank God he doesn’t know the truth…I know he cannot bear the truth…….and now my decision is correct…I must go far away from him and make him believe Anika died and I am Jwala not Anika….else many questions will be raised …many hearts will be broken and above all Shivaay will break into pieces and no one may be able to join him…not even I as Anika probably’’

She came out of thoughts composed herself and spoke

Jwala ‘’I don’t know about what you are talking……..you better ask the correct person not me…….’’

Shivaay ‘’do you think I am mad to ask you if I don’t know you are the right person to ask’’

Jwala ‘’yes you are mad , arrogant and un-convincible person…who in one go cannot understand when explained ’’ she shouted

Shivaay ‘’enough of the drama …it is going over head now’’ he pressed her hands giving much pain and pulled near her once again……..

Jwala quickly looked around her and saw glass of water ……..she decided to deal with him using brain rather than strength….

Jwala ‘’Okay fine..leave me …it’s paining …I will answer you’’

Shivaay smirked and left her……….she quickly took the glass of water and splashed it on Shivaay’s face……..

Shivaay stood still and OmRu who were watching this from outside cupped their mouths………..

Jwala ‘’iss se pehle mujhe aur michmichi mache aur mein koi aur raita phela doon …aap chale jaiye’’

Shivaay and OmRu stood shocked listening her words……

Shivaay POV ‘’no doubt she is my Anika…I am so happy today…atleast I know she is alive…but why is she not accepting this…what’s the reason that she is refraining in accepting her original identity…why am I coming close yet staying far from truth everytime……how will I find out what happened two years earlier , why did she do all that, I can now sense and understand that she did in some pressure…if I ask OmRu or badi maa they will not say anything…….so it’s a waste of time and here she is adamant on not accepting the truth…above all how did Anika become Jwala….’’

Shivaay ‘’I am sure and it’s confirmed that you are ANIKA not JWALA …..how much ever you try to lie or act truth comes out..’’

Jwala ‘’truth ? what truth ?’’ she fumbled and asked

Shivaay ‘’you actions , your words revealed everything’’

Jwala ‘’I don’t understand anything’’

Shivaay ‘’knowing about my heart problem while I fell down during Ganesh Pooja…….throwing water ….michmichi….raita failana……..these are not regular actions or words of any person…these are synonymous to what Anika is MY ANIKA is……..’’

He took a pause to ascertain himself that he really said MY ANIKA a while ago………

Jwala ‘’enough …I have heard more than I should ….now leave…for God Sake I am tired and want to rest after a hectic day……I don’t want to hurt you or complaint against you as I know you have also gone through much in these two days..so I am very politely requesting you to leave from here’’

Shivaay ‘’not till I get my answer of what had happened two years back …and this time I would like to listen only the truth’’

Jwala ‘’go and ask ANIKA…not me …and that too if she is alive…I am sure she will have all the answers for all your questions..and don’t pester me…just leave’’ she showed her finger towards the door………..

Shivaay was much hurt with her attitude…….he got up…. neared her and looking into her eyes spoke….

Shivaay ‘’one day you will regret…you will regret that why you lied …… I will bring that day in your life very soon…..Anika ……..remember……… by making me away you are making yourself away from you and you are punishing your only brother SAHIL too……accept what I am saying is truth or else……I ensure I will consider every angle, search every reason , take every chance, use every opportunity… only to get the truth out of you……the truth because of which you left me , then coming back with another identity and behaving as unknown ….i will also take revenge from you to hurt me so much…a revenge that you will remember for your lifetime….’’

Anika /Jwala ‘’When the truth is infront of you that I am Jwala not Anika why do you want to waste time…anyways it is upto you what you want to do…go find the truth …but leave now’’ she said pointing her finger towards the door……..

OmRu slowly slipped from there so as to not let Shivaay know they were following him and had seen the tashan between their Anika Bhabhi and Shivaay.

Shivaay saw the direction that her finger was pointing and angrily left from there ………Anika looked on……as soon as she left she locked the door stood by the door and cried again……saying I AM SORRY SHIVAAY…I AM REALLY SORRY SHIVAAY…..TRUTH WILL TROUBLE YOU AND I CANNOT SEE YOU IN TROUBLE….

After OmRu left towards their car Rudra suggested Om that they should meet Anika Bhabhi and should confront her …..but before they could decide anything they heard a sound of glass breaking and rushed to see towards the sound…….

Shivaay broke the glasses of Anika’s car and threw the stick away and left from there in a rage…..

Anika by then came out and saw the car glasses broken and she looked at Shivaay who was hitting his fist to the cement block near by and blood oozing out of his hands….she was broken and quickly ran towards Shivaay……

OmRu also saw this about Shivaay and ran towards him……

Shivaay and Anika were shocked to see OmRu there….

PRECAP : First Proof of Anika’s innocence to Shivaay

So this was the Eighth episode of the FF ………..Please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad is welcome…I will reply as soon as possible….all credits to NIKITA !!!

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82 Comments
  1. Awesome

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Charitha…thanks a lot

  2. Sairan

    Fantastic
    Awsomee episode

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sairan…thanks a lot

  3. Fantastic episode akka superb update post next one soon pls….Love u….😘

    1. VHM

      hey talli…thank you so much nanna…thanks a lot…love you loads talli

  4. Niriha

    Awesome di….feeling bad for shivika and thanks for your concern di..I’m fine now I’ll be read and comment on your ff regularly I love to do that waiting for next part update soon di love you 😘😘😘😘
    Take care

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Niriha…i am happy you are back to your form….i don’t mind dear if you don;t post your opinion but will definitely feel bad if you are unwell and still try ot read an post my opinion…all these can wait but health should be your priority….

      Next episode very soon i will upload ….love you too loads dear….take care and keep up good health

  5. Zaveesha

    Mindblowing….. Jhakkas…fantastic…loved it..

    Their meeting was so much full of tashan…nd u write it so beautifully that I can imagine it happening in front of my eyes….
    Now waiting for the next episode to find out Anika’s past nd innocence….
    Good luck…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Zaveesha…….awee so sweet of you dear…i am so happy to know you could imagine it….yeah in few minutes from now i will upload next episode

  6. Fffan1234

    This was full tashanwala episode especially loved to see some parts of the great taadibaaz SSO.

    Am loving it 😍

    Looking forward to next part…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Dipti…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you…i am glad you are liking it…next episode i will upload in few minutes from now

  7. Fffan1234

    Hey Nikita thank you so much from bottom of my heart that you gave this concept to VHM..
    😊

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Dipti on behalf of Nikit and also me

  8. AWESOME FANTASTIC INTERESTING SUPERB👌👌👌😘😘😘

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much UF ..thanks a lot

  9. Pritika

    awesome as always, thanks to u Nikita for the wonderful concept and thanks Harika Di for ur wonderful writing.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Pritika….thanks a lot…yeah all credits to Nikita for the amazing storyline

  10. Lauren

    Amazinggggg loved it to d core..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Lauren…thanks a lot

  11. i m specless year sooo beautiful year.
    very minbolwing

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Arfa…..thanks a lot…

  12. Alekhika20

    Amazing update

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Alekhika…thanks a lot

  13. awesome pl snd next episode fast waiting for shivika to meet again

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Isha….thanks a lot…will upload next episode in few minutes from now

  14. Awesome….Loved it….
    Shivika confrontation was emotional…..
    Felt bad for both…😞
    Omru r sweethearts……
    Waiting fr d nxt….😊
    Lots of love…❤

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shivika…thanks a lot…it will take time but at the end everything will be set..
      loads of love to you too dear….next episode will upload in few minutes from now

  15. Nikita_jai29

    It is lovely dii… Thanks for your time and commenting on MMKAD to all my friends and silent readers…. Love you all dear….

    1. VHM

      All credits to you too…..thank you so much dear for trusting me to develop this storyline…i hope i live upto your expectations

  16. Mindblowing , awesome update 😍😍😍😍😍

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Muskaan…thanks a lot

  17. Archisha

    Yay !!! Finally.. Awesome one di. Post soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Archisha….thanks a lot….next episode i will upload it in few minutes from now

  18. Dhar

    I’m waiting for the next update diii , why do u always take my words away 😟😟 I need my words to say something u know but u just deliberately took them away from my throat , It was awesome mind boggling, amazing , fantastic and all other synonyms for these , do plzz do post the next update ASAP

    1. VHM

      Awee so sweet of you Dharani….thanks a lot…..no dear i always feel happy to read your words…i am so happy to know you are liking this…love you loads dear..take care and keep smiling…next episode i will upload in few minutes from now

  19. AnuluvsIB

    Awesome man!! 😃 Nikita n Harika.. u guys make an awesome combo!!

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Anu…thanks a lot…so sweet of you dear to write such beautiful words

  20. Renimarenju

    Nikki awesome episode…..i felt sad for saahil when he slept on shivay’s shoulder…aww…my cute chota pathaka missing him in show…thanks for bringing him in this episode…Anika’s pov was so touching, felt it as much realistic rather than show……Brought initial episodes waali anika’s heart before me….Thanks a lot and specially i loved shivay when he said “u will feel regret anika, why u lied”…..So catchy line…..Specially luved it 2 the core……This one is mixed up with so many kind of complications, emotions, turns of life and that’s made this episode 2 reach next level….Definitely u and vhm had done a wonderful job by writing this one……Salute 2 ur imagination…..I loved it…guys…..

    1. VHM

      Awee thank you so much Renima for so beautiful lines…thanks a lot…hope you are doing good now…all credits to Nikita for the plot…and i hope you would like the upcoming episodes too….very happy to read your opinion…thanks a lot again

  21. Navz

    👌👌👌fantastic dii…both r dying for each other…but not revealing it….really tashan filled episode….waiting for toms episode dii.bye.

    1. VHM

      Hey Chotii….thank you so much…thanks a lot….next episode i will upload it in few minutes from now

  22. Ahsana98

    Harika Di I was read 7th and 8th part of your ff today.
    7th part >> it’s was an emotional episode Di. I didn’t expect that Arjun was died . I thought may be he is injured. I’m very sad for his exit. Di is says na Arjun is exit from this ff but his memories are not leave. And Arjun ‘S dairy mystery is not revealed. It’s dairy surely tell the story of how anika saved from that accident and how anika become an RAW agent. I’m waiting for knowing that dairy truth.
    > shivay was happy after knowing her anika was alive. But he was broken again after seeing Anika/jawala goes to Arjun and cry for him instead of shivay. That’s scene makes shivay ‘S heart more weak. Shivay feel that she was acting but the truth is she is don’t know who she is. But unknowingly she knew that shivay is an Heart passient and asked omru to shift him to an hospital. She is don’t know who she is in that time but she knew his heart problem it’s was true love. And bhvya ‘s track also ends soon.
    ) Di is bhvya ‘s track ended?? I have a doubt rudra and oberios know the truth ie, Bhavya is an ACP in that the Ganesh pooja day, right and rudra asked her to leave from their lives and sahil is kidnapped the Day after Ganesha pooja, that time Bhavya is here in OM. Please clear my doubts Di
    And you surely bring our sumo back in OM. I’m waiting for watching (reading) sumo ‘s re entry in the lives of Rudy . Her re entry will change the whole story. Finally flashback ended. I know that it will end in 7th part.
    >8th part
    This part was an emotional episode. Sahil was sad after knowing jawala is not his anika didi. That part is very emotional. And finally shivay get some clue about the truth and find the other two who knows the truth expect badimaa, it’s was omru. Tashan wala meeting of shivika. Anika is wants to leave RAW and goes to away from shivay because she don’t want to hurt Shivay again. While shivay try to find out the truth from anika took a glass of water and splashes on shivay ‘s face and says “iss se pehle mujhe aur michimichi mache aur mein koi aur raita phela doon… aap chale jaiye “it’s was the best part of this ff.Iam smiled While reading this dialogue of anika
    . She is unknownly reveal that she is anika. Shivay is happy after listening this because he is sure that she is anika. When he talks about anika and says “My anika “it’s was prove that how much he loves her after her betrayal. He don’t know the truth but still he loves her. He is broke down because she is lied to him.
    ))finally all teasers are covered. I think you both ‘s will merge with the current track of IB. And shivay will surely know the truth of anika and real face of pinky. I don’t think shivay and Mahi are illegitimate son’s of shakti and kamini. I believe Both are shinky ‘s son’s. And kamini is their surrogate mother. So many twists and turns are awaiting. While reading this ff I was imagine all scene ‘s. Once again thank you to Both Harika Di and Nikita for this marvelous ff.
    Some times I am confused Di. Because I only read you and priya Di ‘s ff’ s based on current track of IB. In priya Di ‘s ff shivay know the truth of anika. In your story shivay don’t know the truth. Some times I confused but I know the story of both the stories .

    I’m waiting for your next episode update soon. Love you so much 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 Harika Di and Nikita

    1. VHM

      Hey Ahaana…again thank you for such a sweet long message…thanks a lot..Yes Arjun is dead …but Arjun’s presence will be felt ….Yes Bhavya’s track i had to end as none of the readers wished her to be continued …so track will end sooner or later…..Sumo will also be back and change the dynamics of the FF…….

      Well actually my previous writings mostly covered shivaay’s illegitimacy proving wrong….this time i don’t want to touch that…so i would ask you to wait for a different ending……may be an unexpected or a very expected ending…..till now nothing planned …

      Love you loads dear and next episode i will upload in few minutes

  23. great episode… please reveal the truth to shivay soon….and unite shivika Soon..I’m really enjoying your ff…please update soon

    1. VHM

      Hey Jane …thank you so much…thanks a lot dear….Shivaay will have to strive hard to know the truth as he very easily threw Anika away……thank you so much once again for those sweet lines…….next episode in few minutes from now

  24. Lulu_Ani

    Wowwww!!!! Awesome episode… i just luved it.. sorry dint comment on ur other episodes… but i just luv it…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Lulu_Ani…thanks a lot…no worries dear…i know you might have been busy

  25. Ashwinee

    Finally the first update according to me without much suspense has come . Ufffff loved to eternity.

    1. VHM

      Hey Ashwinee…ha ha ha ha…i knew you would be happy to see an episode ending without suspense….thanks a lot dear…thank you so much

  26. Sairish

    a simply wow episode….thoroughly enjoyed it while reading…had butterflies in my stomach…great as always ..”my annika”was something very touchy and I liked it very much…one thing I wanted to ask that till this chappy the flashback is over and fauzi ,sultan’s bro is dead or prisoned too..after that shivaay wanna know the truth and annika has realized her real identity…if what i am thinking is correct then I am leading the correct path….thanks to Nikita di as well for giving such an Amazing concept….precap is hell exciting ..will surely be waiting for it..
    love you loads
    Sairish

    1. VHM

      Hey SaiiiiiiiiiiRiiiiiiiiiiiiishhhhhhhhhhhhhhh….aweee cho cutee…..thank you so much dear…thanks a lot……

      Shivaay wanna know truth’s not truth…….why is Anika pretending to be Jwala and what happened in between these two years with her…….second why did Anika do all that with him two years before…..

      The story further will revolve around this keeping Suspense element still………

      Yeah all credits to Nikita

      Love you loads dear………

  27. Omg omg this is the best best part i hav read till now and shivaay dialogue of trying to find anika truth is well written
    “Every angle search every reason ……” i am flat reading those lines

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Tashpre…thanks a lot……i am glad you liked those lines

  28. Sagithya

    Awesome di… It was mind blowing fantastic fabulous part…
    Lovely one too….
    I am happy to know shivaay is taking steps to know about the truth …..
    So u have increased my curiosity in each and every episode di…
    Excited for the next part…. post it as soon as possible… Love u di😆😆

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sagithya…thanks a lot……yeah true…in reality too truth is hard to find and difficult to speak…so i am applying the same concept…oops said so much but i hope you will like the upcoming episodes too………

      next episode i will upload in few minutes from now ………Love you loads dear

  29. Kajol

    😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 Superbbbb dear

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Kajol…thanks a lot

  30. JhanviPatel

    Yeh kya hai di…
    Aap yeh kar kya rahi hai…
    Matlab…this is not fair…
    Aapke paas itna sara talent hai… Ek do boond idhar bhi bhej do…😋😁…
    This is just KHIDKITOD DHASSU JAKKAS episode…
    Di sachi aapne to ib real ke writer ki tai tai phis kar di… Mujhe to real ib se bhi bahot zyada aapka ff pasand hai… As u know mai real ib nahi dekhti but aapke ff ke liye mai literally wait karti hoon…
    Now for this episode…
    Feeling really sad for ANIKA more than shivay bcoz… Dard tab hota hai jab koi aapna dard deta hai but… Jab kisi apne ko majburi mai dard dena pade tab dard nahi hota zindagi khatam ho jati hai… It’s awesome di… But i wish ki shivay ko sab jaldi pata chal jaye bcoz I can’t see anika in this state…
    OVERALL it’s fab di… And very special thanks to you and nikki for this lovely mysterious and deep ff… Love you a lot di… 😍😍😍😘😘😘

    1. VHM

      Sweety first do-teen lines mein tumne tho mujhe dara hi diya…mein episode ek baar padhloon aise soch rahi thi…..

      mere paas koi talent nahi hain sweety bas aise ho jaata hain kabhi kabhi anhoni batein……awee so sweet of you dear…thank you so much …..haan mujhe pata hain tum IB nahi dekthi ho…

      Sweety tum tho poetry bade acchi likhthi ho…tumhe aur likhna chahiye…tho agla dose kab milega mujhe?

      Shivaay ko pata chalega par iss FF ka base suspense hain usko mein incorporate karte hue sacchayi saamne lane ki koshish karoongi……..

      Yes all credits to Nikita for everything……

      Love you loads dear…keep smiling and you now know what you need to do :-p

      1. JhanviPatel

        Kyu di har roz aap readers mai suspense rakhte ho aaj maine rakh diya…😋 Kya baat hai JHANVI tune to best suspense thriller story writer ko hi dara diya… Good job..😋😂

      2. VHM

        Sahi baat hain sweety…mujhe tumne sacch mein dara diya…mein tho suspense mein rakthi hoon darati thodi na hoon……chalo koi nahi…tum khush hona mere liye yehi kaafi hain…….

  31. Madhuani

    Fantabulous epi di…
    First shi-sa scene n their concern for each other too good.😍😊
    Than omruvi threatening pinky…zabardast…but she just can’t change..😏😏😒.uff.
    Chintusa fb much needed.😃
    This is what I like about you.no loopholes in story.
    Omru are sweethearts😚😘
    Shivika confrontation jabri😁n he saying that she’ll regret lying good.
    She reacting as her usual self…natural😊
    N lastly he breaking her car then banging his hand n she without second thought running to his rescue n finally both shocked seeing omru there.
    Total entertainment…
    Love you😍😘😍

    1. VHM

      Awee thank you so much Madhu (Hope you don;t mind if i call you like this) ………
      Lol…Pinky’s pot of worng doings hasn’t reached peaks yet…once it will fill then it will burst…….
      ”CHINTUS” such a cute trademark word of yours…….
      thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i hope you will like upcoming episodes too…….

      Love you too loads dear…

  32. Nita D

    Half truth is dangerous….or something like that says a very famous proverb….N Shivaay coming to know the truth in installments is making the situation worse….N Anika….I think she was better off without her memory….but she really put a brave face on front of Shivaay….hope OmRu will be with her as her support….
    N bichara Arjun…..usko bahot jaldi maar diya….

    1. VHM

      Hey Nita…….HALF TRUTH IS MORE DANGEROUS THAN A LIE is the proverb if i am not wrong…….
      Anika yeah true now her halath is from worst to rags….lol…
      let’s see who is gonna support her…not yet planned but formed an idea……
      Lol…Arjun ko marne keliye Nikita ne hi kaha…..(blaming like a small kid)….actually this was plot given to me by Nikita so wrote it that way……….

      Thanks a lot dear for your tablatodh analysis

      Tablatodh – trademark word of Madhuani…took permission in my previous FF to use it

      1. Nita D

        Haan yaad aaya. That was the full saying…..
        Nahi nahi nahi…..ee na chale….nikita se baat karni padegi….
        Wase yeh aapka aacha hai….kuch accha ho toh bhi nikita n ulta ho toh bhi nikita…..just kidding…..u know me na….

  33. Jahanara

    Oh wow akka my paanika didi is back😂😂….. Bt shivaay jiju should know the truth very excited abt the precap….. too good akka jst luv ur ff …… wanna know the reaction of Didi & jiju whn they see Om bhaiya & rudy jiju on that spot…… Jst luved Shivika 2dy …… Luv u akka 😘

    1. VHM

      Hey Jahanara….read your previous reply……and i was amazed to read that…so sweet of you…well i am feeling overwhelmed at this moment ……..and thank you so much…thanks alot for all the beautiful lines…all credits to Nikita ……..love you too loads dear……

  34. FANTASTIC epi di… Nd AMAZING concept Nikita… Luv it… Hope Shivaay ka samne anika ki sach jald aajaya nd pinky ki OMM hojaya… Precap is SUPERB… Shivaay ko Anika ki innocence ki 1st prof milaga… Wow!!! excited 4 nxt….

    1. VHM

      Hey Banita….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot……truth will take it’s time to come out but i promise i will try to make the the way of finding truth interesting……….

      Next episode i will upload in few minutes from now

  35. It’s really amazing! Hope Shivaay gets to know the truth ASAP…. Update soon…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Prapti…thanks a lot……hope so…nothing planned yet but will try to make it interesting…next episode in few minutes from now

  36. Jerry_36

    Hey Harika Di ! This chapter was the best of all. Awesomeness overloaded ! Overjoyed by reading this chapter. You know the best quality of yours that you post long updates and that too regularly, unlike me. You know I need help, I literally don’t know how to manage everything, it seems very complicated. I am also not able to reply, and posting the ff is a long term investment. But leave all these, you are doing an awesome job and also Nikki di, thanks for giving the best of updates. Love you. Post soon❤

    1. VHM

      Hey Vedika…..thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…..actually my classes are finished and i have a vacation for two months now…so managing ….
      Coming to your case you are student so it becomes difficult to manage as you need to give and spend most of the time to study …that’s correct too…so don’t worry that you are not able to post your episodes regularly…….you are doing an amazing job…and we all can wait too….

      Thank you so much dear..all credits to Nikita ……..love you loads dear……take care and keep smiling….

      next episode i will upload in few minutes from now

  37. Nida

    Wah … seriously i am dancing 💃 now what a great part .. every time when ever i read your ff i start imagining it .. because you just write it with your heart ❤️.. and my shivaay has become a tadibaaz again ….plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update next part as soon as possible plzz

    1. VHM

      Hey Bestie…..dancing really….OMG…i wish i could see you dancing…anyways i will imagine ….thank you dear…thanks a lot……..awee such a sweet line for me…i am so overwhelmed……YOUR SHIVAAY yeah he doesn’t feel like Shivaay without his Tadi na so i wanted him to show his tadi before Anika………next episode i uploaded already might be under moderation now…love you loads dear………

  38. AMkideewani

    Fantastic, fabulous, superb, awesome, amazing, tremendous, outstanding, mindblowing❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍😍💖💖💖💖😘😘😘😘

    1. VHM

      OMG…..So many compliments……thank you…thank you…thank you…thank you…thanks a lot dear….

  39. Awesome di….. Lovely update 😍I was so busy these days phew 😰

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Komal…thanks a lot …and no worries dear…sooner or later you are posting your opinion that itself means a lot to me……..

  40. Ankita27

    Amazing update… loved it… n sorry for being late.. I hope shivay gets to know the truth soon…

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