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MUKAMMAL MOHABBAT KI ADHURI DASTAAN ( MMKAD ) – ISHQBAAZ FF – EPISODE 7

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Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB….. please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

Jwala ran towards Arjun and took him in her lap …..she was teary eyed and was trying to wake him up…….

Jwala ‘’Arjun get up…you can’t leave me and go…wake up…….we have many more things to solve…get up Arjun …for God sake get up ‘’’ she cried miserably………

The scene of Jwala crying for Arjun made Shivaay even more weak and disturbed…he looked at Jwala and then at Om and Rudra and closed his eyes while falling down……..

OmRu shouted ‘’S….H……..I………V……….A…….Y / B….H….A….Y….Y….A’’

Jwala turned to look at the sound of scream and was shocked to see Shivaay falling unconscious……She felt uneasy seeing him like this …….as if her heart was aching in immense pain……she quickly put Arjun’s head out of her lap onto the ground and ran towards Shivaay………

Jwala ‘’ why are you still here? Quick take him to hospital’’ she shouted at OmRu…..

Om ‘’okay Bhabhi…we will take him…but please you too come…he needs you now?’’

Jwala was shocked listening to the word BHABHI

Jwala ‘’Bhabhi? Why are you calling me Bhabhi? I am Jwala and I cannot say you anything more about me…first rush him to hospital…you both very well now about him having heart problem ……and now he needs immediate medical assistance’’

OmRu stood in shock and surpise with the contradicting statements she made :
1. She said she was Jwala not their bhabhi
2. She knew Shivaay had heart problem

Rudra ‘’But Bhabhi you are our’’

Jwala ‘’whoever you are whatever is your name …take him to hospital first can’t you understand…it’s urgent….leave …just leave…’’ she shouted at Rudra at peak of her voice

OmRu obliged and shouted for Khanna to bring their car……Jwala was teary eyed and turned to go while her hand touched Shivaay……

Shivaay murmured unconsciously ‘’ANIKA…..ANIKA’’ with the touch of hers…

Jwala listened to the name ‘’ANIKA’’ and stood still and turned towards Shivaay…….

OmRu left towards their car and placed Shivaay in the car …Rudra came back to Jwala and said ‘’Anika Bhabhi Please come to City hospital …please for our sake…please…’’

Saying this he hurriedly ran away from there and they drove off……

Jwala came to Arjun and cried vigorously……..

Sultan and all his men who came there were being killed on the spot by police, Arjun, Jwala and Bhavya…….

Jwala controlled herself and prepared herself to be strong and contacted the RAW Chief that Sultan was being killed and the mission was accomplished however they lost Arjun …….

Arjun’s body was taken by police……….Jwala came back to the chawl and started packing her luggage sadly reminiscing her encounters and time spent with Arjun ………slowly her thoughts started to turn towards Shivaay ……..

Jwala ‘’why do I feel I know Shivaay Singh Oberoi…I feel as if he is very special to me…how could I know he has heart problem…what’s the relation between him and me…not only that why were Omkara Singh Oberoi and Rudra Singh Oberoi calling me Bhabhi….why was Shivaay Singh Oberoi murmuring Anika …..then why did Rudra Singh Oberou call me Anika bhabhi……who is this Anika……why does i feel i know this name……and i have deep connectivity with this name……i need to find answers …for which I need to know about me first and so i will talk to Bhavya may be she knows something that can help me more about who Anika is…..’’

While she was thinking about Shivaay ……she got a call from RAW Chief……..She picked the call and

Jwala ‘’Sir’’

RAW CHIEF ‘’Ms.Jwala…our mission is not accomplished Sultans brother Fauzi is getting ready to end Mr.Shivaay Singh Oberoi and his family …so rush there and tackle him’’

Jwala ‘’but Sir’’

RAW CHIEF ‘’It’s an order’’

Jwala ‘’ok sir…but I need some special permissions..’’

RAW CHIEF ‘’will get it arranged as per your plan…proceed ‘’

Jwala ‘’Thank you sir…I will handle’’

Call was disconnected………..

Jwala remembered Rudra asking her to meet them at CITY Hospital….

She called up the CITY hospital Deen and asked him to Shift Shivaay Singh Oberoi to a newly constructed hospital which was not yet opened to public …..she also ordered his best of doctors to be present in the hospital to take care of Shivaay Singh Oberoi……..

The deen spoke that , it was against rules…she gave a threatening response that legal papers will be sent to him in a short while and it is a question of lives of many patients along with the lives of Oberois…….

While the conversation was going on a nurse handed the deen the Government order to shift Oberois to the newly built hospital……..

Deen agreed to Jwala and made the necessary arrangements……..

Jwala called Bhavya and asked her where were everyone…Bhavya responded that few were in OM and few were in hospital with Shivaay…….Jwala explained Bhavya the situation and asked her to convince and manage the situation…she also ordered Bhavya to bring all the members of Oberoi Family to the hospital as saving them separately is out of hands…..Bhavya agreed and dropped the call……..

Jwala took her car and drove off to City Hospital………

Bhavya convinced the OF that there was another threat to them and that police have informed her to shift Shivaay to other hospital and asked all of them to stay together…..

The situation was tense and no one were in senses to say anything so they just obliged…as planned Shivaay was shifted to new hospital ad was accompanied by doctors along with Oberoi Family members who were present there…

Shivaay was still unconscious and OmRu and Tej and Shakthi were outside the room…..

Rest OF members also reached the hospital

Tej ‘’what’s all this happening? ‘’

‘’Nothing Mr. Tej Singh Oberoi…and please don’t worry ’’ a voice was heard

Everyone turned towards the voice and stood in shock seeing the lady…….

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(READERS REMEMBER JWALA WAS DISGUISED AS DHOL PLAYING MEMBER AND ALL THE WHILE SURROUNDING shivomru……Bhavya was doing her duty away from OF as she didn’t want to get caught…hence Bhavya and Jwala has till now not come face to face)

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Bhavya ‘’are you J..W..A..L..A ?’’ she exclaimed with wide eyes as she too saw Jwala for the first time..

Jwala ‘’yes …I am Jwala….and if I am not wrong you are Bhavya.’’

Jwala was feeling as if she know all of them for many days and as if she was related to them…she took steps heavily, uneasily and uncomfortably…..she was confused and was feeling strange …but she controlled her emotions……

Jhanvi came near jwala and touched her lovingly and caringly…..OmRu came to her and hugged her while Gauri cried happily…….

Everyone were calling her ‘’ANIKA/ ANIKA BHABHI/ANIKA BAHUJAII’’

Jwala was having an unknown feeling…she was feeling happy and overwhelmed but confused too….

She broke the hug and looked at OmRu and entire Oberoi family and spoke

Jwala ‘’why are you all staring at me? And why are you reacting as if you are seeing a ghost’’

Pinky ‘’OMM Anika …tum yaha….tum tho marr gayi thi na? tho tum wapas kaise aayi?’’

Jwala ‘’excuse me……aap kya bol rahi hain?’’

Pinky ‘’don’t act …’’

Bhavya ‘’aunty…aunty …please …abhi nahi…yeh hospital hain..ye sab ham baad mein dekh lenge’’

When Jwala heard a voice inside the room…She quickly got into the room and saw a person trying to take out the oxygen mask from Shivaay’s face precisely from his nose….

Jwala ‘’hey You ..stop…don’t you dare to move else you will be killed unnecessarily’’ she spoke while pointing gun towards him……

With Jwala’s voice Shivaay opened his eyes and was shocked to see jwala holding the gun pointing towards him…

He turned his head to see an unknown man standing behind him………

The unknown man quickly pushed a trolley towards Jwala and tried to run away through window when Jwala pulled the trigger …the bullet hit his hand and he writhed in pain but safely jumped from the window and ran away………

She ran towards the window , but it was late as in darkness he wasn’t to be seen…….

Jwala ‘’I guess you are safe for sometime , but please take care as he may come back’’ she said concernedly ……

Shivaay took off his oxygen mask and called ‘’ANIKA’’

Jwala stood back still and looked at him….her eyes became wet unknowingly and she moved towards him……

Shivaay ‘’Anika…..i knew you would be safe and you wouldn’t have died …my intuition was right’’ he said all in one go

Jwala was still looking at him………

Jwala ‘’Anika….Anika…why are you all calling me Anika…my name is Jwala ‘’

Shivaay ‘’please don’t say so Anika…please…this is killing me from inside..you can be angry but don’t try to ignore ‘’ he said with tears

She turned towards Bhavya and said

Jwala ‘’you know na tell them I am jwala …I am not Anika’’

Bhavya was about to say something when they saw a man near the door pointing to shoot Dadi…..

Jwala killed the person………..

Rudra ‘’Shivaay bhayya ab tak Bhabhi pani se khelthi thi ab bandook aur aag se khel rahi hain’’

ShivOm’’Shut up Rudra’’

Rudra sealed his lips……….

Gauri came towards her and spoke ‘’bahujaii …don’t you really know you are Anika or you are trying to act unknown’’

Jwala ‘’Bahujaii …what’s that…I am saying you all my name is JWALA not ANIKA and one more time you say ANIKA …I will not spare anyone of you…got it’’ she shouted but still she felt connected to them .

Shivaay was startled…..so were others

Shivaay ‘’enough Anika……….don’t try to act….i know that you are acting …enough of your acting…and what the wuck…why are you killing everyone coming in your way…and why were you crying for that Arjun? Who is he to you? ‘’

Jwala was now raged and turned towards Shivaay

Jwala ‘’have you lost it…don’t you understand if I say once …you all have gone mad and I am saying finally I am JWALA…JWALA remember’’

Shivaay ‘’no you have lost it…you are my WIFE’’

Jwala stood still in shock ..her second shock after death of Arjun…

Jwala ‘’what? What did you say? I am your wife?’’ she looked at Shivaay while speaking

Shivaay ‘’yes Wife…I mean my Ex-Wife ANIKA’’

Jwala was even more shocked and said ‘’what Rubbish…this is absolute nonsense….i am neither your ex-wife nor I am ANIKA’’

Everytime she took Anika’s name from her own mouth it gave her Goosebumps and an unexplained relief feeling but she brushed off all those

She turned towards Bhavya and Bhavya signalled her to remain calm…….she obliged seeking to Shivaay’s condition………

Jwala ‘’ACP BHAVYA…I am leaving now…if there is any emergency then give me a call…I am here in this city for few more days…and I guess your mission is completed here…SULTAN IS DEAD…so I think you can be back to where you belong…..far away from these mad people ….see you ACP…JAI HAIND’’

Bhavya ‘’JAI HIND MAM’’ she said in a flow

Jwala stopped for a while and looked at Shivaay …Shivaay too looked at her…after a distant eyelock she left from there …all others were in shock with the happenings……none was in a state to say or speak something as they were getting jolts over jolts……most importantly to Rudra

Rudra ‘’ACP BHAVYA’’ he spoke and looked at Om and Shivaay

Bhavya listened to Rudra’s words and came back to this world and turned towards him………..

Rudra was staring at her angrily……….

Bhavya moved towards him and tried to speak when he showed his hand to stop ….she stood still

Rudra ‘’so all these days you were playing games with us…you acted infront of all of us as innocent when you were actually an ACP and came here on a mission…how could you do this? You used all of us just for the sake of your mission? And especially me ? I was your trap to bring out Sultan am I right?’’ he spoke

Bhavya stood mum teary eyed…….

Rudra held her by her shoulder and screamed ‘’say it now’’

Bhavya ‘’yes Rudra…I am ACP …I came here to catch Sultan…and I had to stay here to protect you because’’

Rudra ‘’because you used me in Meerut and you knew I was not safe ‘’

Bhavya ‘’yes…this is true…but trust me I didn’t want to cheat you and neither could I say truth to you…I am sorry Rudra…I am really sorry’’ she cried

Rudra ‘’sorry….you should feel sorry….because you are a cheat…had you asked me help then I would have helped you…but you broke my trust…I always treated you as our family as my friend and as….’’ He couldn’t complete

Bhavya and others looked on……..

Rudra ‘’now just get out…….leave…I don’t want to see your face anytime again in my life…just get out’’

Om and Shivaay called Rudra but

Rudra ‘’bhayya please…for the first time in my life I am taking a decision , so today please don’t stop me…she has broken my trust and she doesn’t deserve to be with us anymore…anika Bhabhi said while leaving right that she should be back where she belongs to so let her leave where she came from’’

Jhanvi ‘’Rudra…wait a minute…it’s night and we cannot send her now….so let’s leave home and tomorrow we will decide …now please calm down’’

Gauri ‘’haan Rudra…mummy ji is saying right….let’s wait till morning’’

Om was about to say something but Shivaay held Om’s hand…….and Gauri looked on……..

Pinky, Jhanvi , Dadi were asked to leave towards OM but they said they will be in hospital……

Everyone sat outside the room while Bhavya , Rudra and Om were inside the room with Shivaay……..

Slowly everyone slept in the room and outside too……

————IN CHAWL

Jwala returned to the chawl and reminded what hectic and strainful day it was …she got freshened up and slept…she was disturbed as Shivaay’s words were ringing in her ears…….

While she was in sleep she had this uneven dreams ……….. ‘’

’’Don’t ever dare to come infront of me again …because I will be compelled to do such thing what I never wish to do’’ ….

‘’aap theek keh rahe the shayad hamara ristha yehi tak tha….’’

‘’very funny…..here take this ..your favourite’’

‘’bhudiya ke baal……awe…so sweet of you……….but where did you get this’’

‘’can’t you say cotton candy …what’s that language’’

Maha Arthi of Ganesh ji was going on………Jai Ganesha deva …Jai Ganesha deva was being played…suddenly havoc was created among people…
Firings were taking place and a gun shot was fired………….

‘’’Arjun get up…you can’t leave me and go…wake up…….’’

why were you crying for that Arjun? Who is he to you? ‘’

’’no you have lost it…you are my WIFE’’
‘’

She woke up from the above dream sweating as her Phone was ringing at that wee hours…….

—————– HERE ENDS THE FLASHBACK FROM TWO YEARS BACK TILL THE PRESENT DAY AFTER SAVING SAHIL AND SHIVAAY FROM FAUZI BROTHER OF SULTAN …….FROM JWALA /ANIKA, SHIVAAY, OMKARA, RUDRA AND BHAVYA’S POV

Rudra stopped the car infront of OM and everyone got out of their thoughts while Gauri held Sahil in her lap……..they all stepped into OM with much of disturbed minds

Jwala too reached the chawl a little later and came out of her car and slowly stepped into her house with heavy heart…………..

PRECAP : SHIVAAY MEETS JWALA /ANIKA IN HER CHAWL…A TASHAN FILLED EPISODE

So this was the seventh episode of the FF ………..Please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad is welcome…I will reply as soon as possible….all credits to NIKITA !!!

76 Comments
  1. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome dii… Love you.. And thanks for your time and commenting on MMKAD to all my friends and silent readers……

    1. VHM

      Hey Nikita…love you and all credits to you …….my pleasure dear

  2. Sakash.

    Awesome,Superb.🌹🌷🌹🌷🌹🌷Love u di.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sakash…thanks a lot……love you too dear

  3. Sairan

    Greattttt one
    Waiting for the present day tashan 👌👌💐

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sairan…thanks a lot…some more time and you will get to read it…….

  4. Priyadas

    Hey Di super, awesome and fantabulous episode… No words to be said..
    Di every day you leave the episode on a cliffhanger but today you if didn’t but just made the episode spellbounded.
    Really all credits to Nikita for such a great story line and you on the other hand are taking this ff to other level by your writings skill.
    Love you di and stay happy Di.

    1. VHM

      Hey Priya…thank you so much dear..yeah all the appreciation and credit must go to Nikita….and i don’t know what else to say…thanks a lot dear…love you too loads and loads…keep smiling and take care

  5. Wow eagerly waiting for u next epi
    Pls update it fast

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Tashpre….thanks a lot…..next episode i will update in few minutes from now…

  6. AnuluvsIB

    Yaar it was awesome!!
    I actually missed to read updates from 3 to 7 and read them all at once now!
    I was like wow!!
    Seriously.. u have handled the mystery plot much better than how it is in original!!
    I simply loved it!
    Great job Nikitha and Haritha!!👍

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Anu…thanks a lot…….i am so glad that you liked the way the story is proceeding…..will try my level best to keep up the same level till end…..

      lots of Love
      Harika

      1. AnuluvsIB

        oops sorry.. I Harika* not haritha 🙂

  7. Waho.
    nice one
    this one post …….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Arfa…..thanks a lot…i will post the next episode in few minutes from now

  8. Awesome

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Charitha…thanks a lot

  9. awesome
    update soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Aashi…thanks a lot…next episode i will upload in few minutes from now

  10. Lauren

    Amazinggggg dii…. loved it… looking forward for Tashan wala epi… post nxt asap… I juzz njoy ur writings….
    Luv uhh dii…
    Post nxt asap

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Lauren…thanks a lot…..will upload the next episode in few minutes from now…

      love you too dear…….

  11. Pritika

    awesome, mind blowing, fantabulous episode, di y don’t u become the writer of the IB, agr aap story likho na IB ki to TRP to mtlb khidkitod ho

    1. VHM

      Hey Pritika……thank you so much …i read your reply on my reply to you in last episode… i was just kidding then …i knew and understood what you meant when you wrote ”GOOD” then………

      Thank you so much for those words dear……..and me as IB writer …well i wish i were …lol…just kidding…thanks a lot again dear

  12. Navz

    Hii dii…chaaala baagundi episode…Ippudu flashback ayipoindi kabatti…shivay and Anika face off next kada..wqiting for that.
    And yeah..that feeling of watching a telugu film is still there..while reading this episode also ,not able to get over that.bye dii.

    1. VHM

      Hey Chotii…thank you so muchh……movie laga anipisthonda…ammoooooo…nenu inka emi reply ivvanu neeku…….thank you so so so so much dear….love you loads and keep smiling

  13. Awesome Update….Loved it….
    Felt really bad for Shivaay….Emotional Encounter….
    Finally the mysteries are getting solved….
    That Pinky will never change, she started her drama even in the hospital….
    Read the last 2 parts at one go cuz I had been vry busy yesterday….
    Waiting fr the Tashan wala meeting…. 🙂

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shivika……..thanks a lot…..yeah finally the teaser mysteries almost got resolved ……he he he…Pinky and her drama….seriously right……..awee so sweet of you and no problem dear..take your time to read and respond…all these can wait…
      thanks a lot once again and love you loads

  14. AWESOME EXCELLENT FANTASTIC OUT STANDING SUPERB👌👌👌😘😘😘

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much UF …thanks a lot

  15. Alekhika20

    Superb update

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Alekhika…thanks a lot…i wish to see a double line opinion from you…hope i compel you to write so with my writings one day……..

  16. Zaveesha

    Awesome episode…fantastic…now eagerly waiting for the next tashan filled episode…
    I don’t know what else to say..as everytime u spellbound me with ur writing…
    Stay blessed
    Keep smiling..
    Love u..
    Nd good going nikita nd u…

    1. VHM

      Hey Tanzeela…thank you so much……awee so sweet of you to say so…thanks a lot dear…next episode i will upload in few minutes from now…

      love you loads , keep smiling , take care and enjoy

  17. JhanviPatel

    Omgggg Arjun died😨😧…
    It’s fabulous di as always…
    And finally flashback is end…
    Feeling really sad for shivay… I know how it feel when someone special ignore us.😢.. But overall this episode OUSUM… 😍😍😍😍… Today I imagine whole episode After reading it… And I was literally become emotional for shivay… As I feel his pain of ignorance… Bye di…
    Love you…

    1. VHM

      Hey Sweety…yes dear…Arjun died ..but Arjun’s presence will not be missed…..i promise that……..thank you so much Sweety…thanks a lot…….awee ….imagining and then feeling ..you just made my day saying so…i am so happy now…all credits to Nikita and not to forget i must thank you for translating in the previous episode and make it a hit……..

      Love you loads dear…take care

  18. Dhar

    Awesomeness overloaded waiting for the face off plzz do post the next update ASAP

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Dharani…thanks a lot……so sweet of you dear ..and next episode i will post it in few minutes from now

  19. AMkideewani

    Fabulous di, I love and Nikita fantastic storyline😍😍😍

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much CrazygirlS.P…….thanks a lot

  20. AMkideewani

    Fabulous di, I love it and Nikita fantastic storyline😍😍😍

    1. VHM

      Yeah all credits to Nikita for this storyline…….

  21. Madhuani

    Hey di,
    See I told you if possible I would read it in a go n would comment on latest one.😊
    I’m here🙌
    It felt as if I’m watching a telugu/tamil movie.
    You have mingled the track so precisely that it could hook the readers to this ff as in your style which I love the most.😘😘
    But lemme tell you i was little upset with you as I thought that you would be pairing bhavya opp rudra but seems you have changed your mind😃
    I would be glad if this is true n if you pair rumya instead of ruvya as I really don’t like her as bhavya opp rudra.😃
    It was a thrilling experience while reading this n I loved all the parts.
    Saumya’s mission n blink appearance was good rudra’s concern towards her n anika mind blowing n also his first ever decision.😚😊
    Jwala was the most amazing of all.Her feelings you portrayed them so nicely.
    As anika she was really brave saving lives of others by giving up hers.
    Shivaay in such a turmoil after all this😖
    Omru n of 😔except some😠*I hope you get them* are in almost same condition.
    But I like how you portrayed bhavya here as an officer 😃
    After first episode I was just biting my nails out of curiosity even though next part was there it’s that amazing.😚😄
    Also tnq to nikita for giving you such an amazing idea.🙏
    Each n every part was fabulous if I now got to count down it would become a ff so just few of them here:
    1)sahil kidnapped one.
    2)saumya seeing anika n informing as well as enquiring about her.
    3)omruvi’s taunts to pinky auntie n their act to hold on with the truth vas they can’t see him in broken state.
    4)shivaay-jwala hit n miss part with gujarati dialogues awesome.
    5)Mahabharata-arti part n the hospital part as well.
    I think I have given all parts summary in these 5 points.
    But this is superb n I want to read more of it so plz update soon as I’m very excited for the next one.
    FINALLY in my style “TABLATODH N PALANGTODH”ff.😍😘😄😜😊😃
    LOVE YOU😍😘😍😘😊

    1. VHM

      Hey Madhuani…….thank you so much dear…you just made me remind all the episodes i have written till now in a single post….thank you so much for that…and i knew you would stay by my side to support whenever you get time too…i am so happy to see you back with such a long and amazing opinion…seriously i just loved every line you wrote…thank you…thank you so much once again……

      awee your awesome amazing quirky chirpy lines ………i just love them…..ummaahhhhhhh…thank you and love you loads…keep smiling

  22. Jahanara

    Wowwwwww😍😍😍😌 Akka just keep on checking TU for ur ff ……. Just loved it sooo much ……. This epi was filled wit action,emotion, women empowerment r their power keep on goin’…. Kidkithod prfrmnce by Jawla I was just dumbstruck too good ……. I used to wonder y don’t u script ishqbaaz in original I bet the TRPs will be at top 😉😉😉…… I can’t see Shivaay jiju in pain Evn Anika didi / Jwala was in pain too y can’t she suspect & find out her past🙄….. Asusal u Jst rocked luv u akka😍😍

    1. VHM

      Hey Jahanara……..

      OMG do you to check the Tu for my update…i am so sorry dear…i didn’t know about it…i usually upload an episode a day….if you see an episode today then the next episode i will upload in a time so that it gets posted the next day….and this i do because i need to write, then read what i have written, then edit if necessary and while doing all this i need to handle my household responsibilities and most importantly my daughter……so i cannot post double episodes on a single day…….

      Awee thank you so much dear…thanks a lot for those awesome lines….oooooo…don;t worry this is our own FF na we will set everything straight but in a proper manner with no loopholes……..thank you so much once again dear……love you loads …take care and keep smiling

      1. Jahanara

        Yah one epi at one day itself is lyk a boon fr me …….. whenever I hv a boring periods in claz I used to think hw ur story would process further & used to write it down in my diary bt daily u used to post something jst above my creative lvl …… yah akka managing kids is really a tough job
        coz living in a joint family & being the eldest one I do understand ur
        worries…… is the one in ur dp is ur
        daughter too cute😘😘😘😘

  23. Niriha

    Awesome

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Niriha….thanks a lot…..i read your reply …my intuition was right……how are you feeling now….please get well soon as i want my dearest Niriha back in proper form , the way she used to be during my last FF……

      Love you loads, get well soon, take care and keep smiling

  24. Jerry_36

    Okay, so now everything is clear and just picture perfect, like literally it just looked like a movie. Everything so beautiful and wonderful.
    The flashback part also came clear, okay so Shivaay hates her because he thinks that she left her knowingly !!
    Well, you have portrayed it just awesomely. Eagerly waiting for their tashan bhari meet, love you❤

    1. VHM

      Hey Vedika…….thank you so much dear……i am so happy that i finally wrote everything about the teaser…i donno how much justice i did ….and glad that everything is clear now …thanks a lot again dear…love you loads

  25. Fffan1234

    Hey dear first of all sorry for small comment on earlier episode. Had eye infection which was causing problems while typing. It is a bit better now hence trying to post longer comment.

    That was a superb update and I am in love with this ff.

    A lot of the past is now in front of us. However it has lead to some questions at least for me => Enmity between oberoi’s and Sultan, how Anika became RAW agent, Bhavya’s mission etc. I am sure we will get all answers in the upcoming episodes.

    One question /request dear: Show what happens to Pinky, Kamini, Mahi and other Oberois lives in the past 2 years if possible…

    Looking forward to next Tashanwala part

    1. VHM

      Hey Dipti…thank you so much for the compliments dear….all credits to Nikita…..

      Ohh i didn’t know that you were having eye infection and please don’t say sorry…even a single word or line of opinion is precious to me ……

      yes lot of past has come before us…that’s true and coming to your questions everything will be answered …but at right time ……

      I am right now working on your demanded track and RuMya’s track………i hope you understood what i meant…so the track of pinky, kamini , Mahi and other Oberois lives in past two years i am afraid will not fit in this…..if by any means that is possible i will definitely try to include …but if i cannot then please don’t get annoyed…..

      Next episode i will upload in few minutes from now

      1. Fffan1234

        Thank you dear for working on my track. Am looking forward to it.

        Maybe you can write a spin -off ff like DBO for past track…. Just kidding… 😃

  26. Sairish

    awesomeness overloaded…fabbb chappy as always but this was extraordinary…as if a movie or a drama is being telecasted on t.v. sry for commenting late as I had my school today..had a tiring day and after reading this i am feeling a sense of great relief…the flashback part was awesome..jwala confrontation to OF members was amazing…do post the next one ASAP plzz…
    love you loads
    Sairish

    1. VHM

      Hey Saaiiiiiiiriiiiiiishhhhhhhhhhhhhh….choo cute…i will write this every time i take your name and respond to you…i just love your name and you too…but your name more …..

      Thank you so much dear…i am so happy your stress got reduced a bit after reading this…….thank you so much for those beautiful and amazing lines……nex t part i will upload in few minutes from now……

      love you loads dear…….keep smiling and keep rocking

  27. Kajol

    Just awesome dear …

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Kajol…thanks a lot…..

  28. Sagithya

    Wow di it was awesome mind blowing…loved it
    First it was like a suspense movie wen u posted the promo…
    But now u have cleared the suspense….
    Today’s part was like a action and emotional scene….
    Excited for the tashan moments… Post it as soon as possible…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sagithya……thanks a lot sissy……..awee so sweet of you to write such amazing lines…..will post it in few minutes from now…..love you loads dear…take care keep smiling

  29. Nida

    Wah wah 👏👏👏👏👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️ I just loved it…. it’s super duper amazing 😉 ….. aww my poor shivaay.. .. please can you give me the half talent of yours of writing ff …. if you don’t want to give then always amaze me with this super talent of your by writing this

    1. Nida

      Ff*

    2. VHM

      Thank you so much Bestie……thanks a lot……oooo YOUR SHIVAAY….mmmmm……….heya what’s the difference i write or you write it’s the same isn’t it……….you just say/ask i will name all my writings on your name …i absolutely have no qualms , complaints or obejctions….anything for you dear…just keep smiling and always be by my side…….love you loads and i am dearly waiting for next Tuesday

  30. Mind blowing akka superb update post next one soon pls… I am fine akka how r u??

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much talli…….thanks a lot dear……next episode in few minutes from now will be uploaded

      1. VHM

        I am fine talli…and good to know you are keeping up good health…continue to do so…and love you nanna

  31. Ashwinee

    Akka by chance if you were a writer of real IB , I bet this story and all your stories would be definitely trptodh 😘😘. All the best for both of you.😘😘

    1. VHM

      Hey Ashwinee ….thank you so much for those beautiful lines dear…thanks a lot….love you loads

  32. AMAZING thrilling epi di… D way u explain everything was MINDBLOWING…. EXCELLENT plot Nikita… U both again nailed it… Many suspence reveled today Hope pinky’s truth reveled soon… Precap seem intersting… Waiting 2 see Shivika’s tashan….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Banita…thanks a lot…all credits to Nikita for the plot….Pinky’s truth will come out not at a time but part by part….next episode i think is already in portal…will wait to read your opinion as and when you post…

  33. To say the truth, when i read the promo and the first episode of this ff, I didn’t like it as it was too confusing…. and I decided to stop reading it. But I don’t know why… but something about the title of this ff attracted me and so I continued reading it. And I am glad I did that because this ff is just superb! I don’t know how, but your ffs are simply amazing. Waiting for the tashan meeting of SHIVIKA! Can’t wait! Hope u update soon……..

  34. VHM

    Hey Prapti…thank you so much for giving a chance to read this FF…i hope in the upcoming episodes too i would try not to disappoint you….and try keep up to your expectations……coming to my other FF’s i too don’t know what i have written or how they happened but this FF the total credit goes to Nikita……..next episode is already up in the portal…so waiting to see your opinion there…do take care and keep smiling…….

  35. Nita D

    Awesome episode…..but mere Arjun ko itna jaldi maar diya….not fair di…..
    Anika’s dilemma b/w Anika n Jwala is very well written….N i also liked Ruvya convo….
    Bichara Shivaay…..but don’t know why, this time I cannot empathize with him….

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Nita…….ha ha ha ha…Arjun mar chuka hain yehi sacchayii hain……..ise qubool karna hi higa tumhe ……..too melodramatic na…..yeah this was the plot given to me by Nikita and i followed her orders………Rudra convo with Bhavya is completely owned by me as i wanted to imagine an angry Rudra for a while…so foolish me na……..and yes Shivaay’s every color i wanted to see…this FF is owned by Nikita but i am like experimenting with her plot…donno what will Nikita say me now……wink wink

      1. Nita D

        Kya kya kya….nahi….asa nahi ho sakta….Arjun is ff ko chodkar nahi jaa sakta….nahi….yeh dekhne se pahale aasman phat kyu nahi gaya…..😂😂😂

        Angry Rudra is a rare sight (when Rudra itself means anger)…..
        Experimenting is what makes your every ff better that the previous one….

  36. Ankita27

    Fabulous update.. loved it..

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