MUKAMMAL MOHABBAT KI ADHURI DASTAAN ( MMKAD ) – ISHQBAAZ FF – EPISODE 6

Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB….. please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

SPECIAL THANKS TO JHANVI PATEL FOR TRANSLATING THE DIALOGUES IN GUJRATI IN THIS EPISODE….SWEETY YOU BOUGHT A NATIVE TOUCH TO THIS EPISODE…THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN

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Shivaay was looking at the back posture of Jwala while Jwala was about to turn towards Shivaay……

Seeing Shivaay’s frowning face…Arjun stopped Jwala from turning to other side and spoke

Arjun ‘’jwala are you fine? You were saying something?’’

Jwala fumbled and then gained confidence and spoke

Jwala ‘’sultan is in Mumbai ..he is also staying near by the same chawl…a meeting is going to take place in a short while…I will have to go to get the details…I will leave now while you tackle the situation here’’

Arjun ‘’okay be careful..’’

She started to turn when Arjun held her and looked at Shivaay who was walking towards them …

Jwala ‘’Arjun…’’

Arjun ‘’sshhhh…change the language and don’t turn back …’’ he said looking at her and then at Shivaay…..

Jwala looked at him confusingly and spoke

Arjun ‘’ Tame kem mari same aam ekdharu juvo cho?
(why are you staring ?)

Jwala ‘’ Have su karvu, koiye najar rakhvi padse’’
(what to do , someone has to keep an eye)

Arjun ‘’barabar…to su malyu tamne?’’
(true….so what did you find)

Jwala ‘’ mane su males jyare tya kai janva jevuj nathi to’’
(what will I find when there is nothing to know)

Arjun ‘’to mane lage che tamare have javu joiye bau modu thai jai ae pehla’’
(then I think you should leave before it gets too late )

Jwala ‘’barabar…mare maro agad no step bau jaldi upadvo padse’’
(correct I must make my next move soon)

Arjun ‘’tamaro khub khub abhar…mane bau khushi thai ke tamne samji gaya’’
(thank you…I am happy you understood)

Jwala started moving towards the gate….Arjun was seeing Shivaay all the time….

Jwala was leaving in a hurry and Shivaay neared them…..

Shivaay stopped for a minute and looked at Arjun and saw then the lady leaving…….he again started running towards her but was stopped by Arjun……..

Shivaay ‘’Who is she and why is she going away without meeting’’

Arjun ‘’you are Mr.Shivaay Singh Oberoi? Am I right?’’

Shivaay ‘’yes…but who are you and who is that lady?’’

Arjun ‘’I hope Bhavya has informed you about me meeting her here…Hi I am Arjun and the lady…she is my wife Jwala’’

Shivaay ‘’Jwala……then why did she leave’’

Arjun ‘’She had an important work popped up so she left in a hurry’’

Shivaay ‘’ohh fine…please come in’’

Arjun ‘’Sure…thank you…after you Mr.Shivaay’’

They both went in

Bhavya greeted Arjun and Arjun shaked hands with her………Bhavya introduced every member of Oberoi family and Arjun greeted everyone……

Arjun ‘’So you all will be doing Maha Arthi tomorrow at Ganesh temple’’

Shivaay ‘’no…I am not coming’’

Arjun ‘’what?’’ he stood up in shock and looked at Bhavya…Bhavya signalled him to be calm

Shivaay ‘’why are you surprised Arjun’’

Arjun ‘’I thought Oberois give priority to all these but I was wrong about you…I thought high but it’s not like this anymore…isn’t it Bhavya’’

Shivaay ‘’what nonsense…you are new and donno anything but you are speaking as if you know everything’’

Arjun ‘’I am sorry but I am like this …I cannot hide anything and just say it on face…I am really sorry…but you are right I know everything…………
I know that this temple was constructed by your grandfather and it is one of a kind of Ganesh temple…I know every year the eldest son of Oberoi’s does the maha arthi and distributes sweets, clothes and other items to every one who attends the aarthi……along with this you also arrange feast to around 20000 people attending……this maha arthi is one of the most beautiful event that people of Mumbai wait for…I also know that every political leader big and small comes to attend this…and for Mumbai people this is the most awaited moment too’’

Shivaay was shocked listening to Arjun……..

Om ‘’you are right…don’t be sorry…we used to be like that as you thought but since last two years everything changed…..because of someone irresponsible and selfish’’ he said looking at Pinky

Arjun ‘’I donno what and why but I know only one thing you have certain reputation in society and people have so much expectation from you…and I hope you keep up to it…as in all such situations personal matters must take a back seat and duty must take front seat…rest your wish…and I came here to meet Bhavya so I think I must go on with my work’’

Shivaay was in thoughts

Shivaay ‘’I think you are right …tomorrow we three brothers will be doing maha arthi as per the schedule…I cannot give up the reputation of Oberois……and I hope your wife Mrs.
JWALA would also attend’’

Arjun ‘’I think you were eager to meet her ‘’

Shivaay ‘’Yes..because she didn’t meet us and left even after coming here…..we treat our guests with much respect and if our guests leave from the gate then it is a point of disappointment to us’’

Arjun ‘’I understand and I hope you would feel glad after meeting her’’

Shivaay smiled and OmRu looked on at Shivaay……..Arjun got up and shook hands with ShivOmRu …….Bhavya and Arjun smiled while OF members were also happy…….

Bhavya ‘’Arjun…where is jwala? I thought she would be here with you today’’

Arjun ‘’Jwala came here but then sudden work popped up so she left…well Bhavya I have something very important to discuss so can we speak in person…only if your family doesn’t have any problem’’

Bhavya ‘’sure…’’ she smiled looking at Rudra

Rudra ‘’bhavya take him to our room and have your discussion there…no one will disturb you’’

Bhavya and Arjun thanked Rudra and OF and left to Rudra’s room

Shivaay was still remembering Jwala ….he felt some strange connection… as if he knew her …..knew her very well …and above all with Jwala around he felt Anika’s presence too……he thought he was thinking rubbish as Jwala was Arjun’s wife……

————–AT MIDNIGHT IN CHAWL

‘’ A lady and a man are having some sweet moments ….the man kisses on ladies cheeks …and she is shocked……a beautiful mandap is shown and the man and lady are standing in front of it.. the man asked did you like it.. lady was annoyed… lady was jwala but man’s face was unclear…’’

Jwala gets up from bed with a sudden jerk and she was sweating after seeing the dream…while wiping her sweat and looking around

Jwala ‘’ mujhe ye sab jaana pahechana kyu lag rahe hain ‘’..

Background voice.. Ye ishq hi hain jo yaad k bhul Jane ke baad bhi ehasas ko bhulne nahi deta …..

Jwala came back to her senses and

Jwala POV ‘’tomorrow is a big day and very important day for everyone …I must be careful and cautious and should not let all these thoughts come to me…I must sleep now’’

She slept ………….

Arjun wrote something in his dairy …and kept it safe in his suitcase………….and went to sleep!!!

——————AT MIDNIGHT IN SHIVAAY’S ROOM , OBEROI MANSION

Shivaay was remembering Anika …….he was searching for the bracelet and he was not finding it …..he was distressed and he destroyed everything in his room.. after all the mess he found the bracelet and sat back on his couch and started caring it..

Shivaay ‘’ Mai tumse aaj bhi pyar karta hu Anika’’

Back ground voice… Ishq hi vo taakat ya Bandhan hain jo aapko aapne pyar se dur nhi hone data usse nafrat Nahi Karne deta…

Shivaay set his room again proper and holding the bracelet slept on the bed and slipped into sleep…….

—————–NEXT DAY , DAY OF GANESH POOJA

Arjun and Jwala disguise themselves as a dhol playing members and enter the venue where the Oberoi’s were to perform maha arthi……..

Bhavya left from the Pooja in home in pretext of preparations for the evening event and meets ACP Mumbai…….

She calls up Arjun and she is in a conference call with Arjun and Jwala………..Arjun instructs about everything and asks her to safeguard Oberois during Pooja…….

The venue is set and everything was proper as planned…….

Here Sultan also arrives with his men who gets mixed with the devotees …Sultans goes on the top of a tree disguised as electrician ……

Arjun and Jwala misses to identify Sultan……….

The much awaited evening time arrives and Oberoi Family members proceeds towards the venue with a Z security….the ministers and CM were also arriving to the venue for the maha arthi…….

Sultan was very close and stood behind the side of first barricade checking the electric wires without getting suspected……

Oberois arrived and the Maha arthi started ……..

At the background Jai Ganesha Deva …jai Ganesha Deva …was being played…everyone was immersed in a divine mood……

Jwala and Arjun were playing the dhol along with other members and were keeping an eye on everyone who were near to Oberois…Bhavya along with other police staff was keeping an eye on Oberois…….though not giving a hint to Oberois that she was an Police officer……

Shivaay, Om and Rudra were together doing Maha arthi and Gauri was standing behind them along with Jhanvi, Tej, Dadi , Pinky, Shakthi ………..

Panditji was about to take the Arthi from ShivOmRu’s hand , when Sultan signalled his men to start the chaos……

Sultans men started to hit the common man and started shoot outs…..background score was stopped and people started running everywhere…….the ministers and CM were safely taken from there , Bhavya took the Oberoi family members first towards their car and came back to tackle rest of the goons without being noticed by ShivOmRu ..while Khanna and Oberois security helped other people…Shiv Om Ru also started helping the injured people ……Sultan was busy in killing the police who were coming in his way ….Arjun and Jwala started to shoot culprits among the local people…….when Sultan jumped from the side barricade and pointed his rifle at Shivaay………Arjun saw that and immediately pushed Shivaay getting hit by bullet from Sultans riffle……

ShivOmRu and Jwala were shocked and stood still……Sultan tried to run away when Jwala screamed ‘’A..R..J…U..N’’ and then shouted Sultan’s name and turned towards him ….SHIVOMRU turned towards Jwala but her hair was covering her face and she shot Sultan with her gun at exactly the mid of his forehead…a point blank range……. Sultan started falling down and hit the ground ..

Jwala’s hair moved back at the recoil of the gun and now her face was clearly visible to Shivaay, Om and Rudra …….Shivaay Om and Rudra looked at Jwala in shock and Shivaay took a back foot and was held by Om and Rudra on either side…….

Shivaay said ‘’A..N..I…K..A’’ as if it was a whisper……….

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THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN JHANVI FOR THE TRANSLATION…IT’S SO NICE OF YOU TO DO THE TRANSLATION… THE VERY MOMENT I ASKED YOU TO TRANSLATE WITHOUT ASKING EVEN A SINGLE QUESTION ABOUT THE EPISODE OR FF ……..
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So this was the sixth episode of the FF………please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad if welcome…….i will reply as soon as possible…all credits to NIKITA!!!

73 comments

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Anju….thanks a lot…will upload the next episode in few minutes from now…i promise to upload an episode everyday..this has been my habit and will continue to do so further

  1. Aashi

    awesome
    loved the action scene
    bt how did Sultan survive & created the scene on cliff
    update soon

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Aashi thank you so much…thanks a lot….Sultan is dead …it was Sultan’s brother Fauzi who created the scene on cliff……next update i will upload in few minutes from now…..

  2. Priyadas

    Priyadas

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    Nothing to say di… As usual super and awesome. I dot get words by which I can appreciate your writings di. Today again you ended the episode on a cliff hanger. Which is really not so fair but I am waiting for the nxt update to come on now…
    Again I am saying the chap was awesome and super as usual

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much and same to you too Priya…….same to you as even i don’t get words to write about your few shots ff that you have been uploading daily what a marvelous
      one that is…

      Tomorrow’s episode will not be stopped at cliff hanger…i promise but still i will make readers wait for next episode …ha ha ha ha..it’s just the love of all the readers that they come back everyday and read the ff and comment …

      thanks you sooooooo much and love you loads dear…….all credits to Nikita

    • Zaveesha

      Zaveesha

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      Nikita ur storyline is awesome..nd Harika di is taking it to another level…good work..all the very best…

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Love you too Nikita……. all kudo’s, appreciations and love to you…as this is your FF , your imagination and creativity…my part is very less so great one from you dear………..

  3. Zaveesha

    Zaveesha

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    Woww…as usual fantastic episode…u r just simply awesome Harika di…love u…
    Nd Nikki ur storyline is also awesome nd Harika di is taking it to another level..good going..
    Nd yeah good work Jhanvi di..it was a bliss to read gujrati..
    All the very best for further episodes…
    Nd yeah thanks Ahsana in the last episode comment to decode Jwala’s code..as I read the episode in somewhat hurry so didn’t bother to decode it…but thanks to her…

    • Ahsana98

      Ahsana98

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      Thank you Zaveesha. The decode is correct it’s read ” Arabian:later..u.. Join… Will… I… Mission… Our… With… Proceed… U… Us… On… Eye… Keeping… Is… Someone”
      Arabian means by Arabian language it was read from right to left. Jwala /anika ‘s code is
      “someone is keeping eye on us u proceed with our mission I will join u later ”
      I understand the meaning of code in today.

      • Zaveesha

        Zaveesha

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        Yeah I understand after reading ur comment on previous part…I know Arabian Language very well..i know it is read from right to left…I can read arabian very well..nd to some extent understand also..

      • VHM

        VHM

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        Hey Zaveesha …thank you …thank you so much and thanks a lot dear…well i didn’t imagiune any actor for the role of Arjun but Nikita definitely did…i am sorry but i don’t remember his name …….and thank you once again for all the appreciation and beautiful lines you wrote…yes special thanks to Jhanvi too for helping me out

  4. Nita D

    Nita D

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    Wah di….maza hi aa gaya…..JwaJun ni Guju vaati ma hu toh hasi hasi ne gheli thai gai….khabar noti ke Jwala Australia rahi ne Gujju bolti tai jase…..

    Di….matlab leads ka crossing game khelne mein toh Ekta kapoor ko beat kar doge….pahale sumo, phir bhavya n then the whole OF…..
    Full on drama episode….I could imagine all the things on the Day of Pooja….it was like a movie playing…..
    N the two background voices poems were also very nice…..

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Nita…thanks a lot…….
      itna sara Gujrati…mujhe samajh nahi aata…..

      second line translate karne ki koshish karti hoon……..”pata nahi tha ki Jwala australia mein reh kar Gujrati bolti hain / seekhi ”…….don’t know if i am right or wrong…..

      ha ha ha ekata kapoor ko takkar dene ka koi idea nahi tha Nita bas ho gaya…….lol…ha ha ha ha…sacchi maine dhyan nahi diya…ha ha ha ha….

      Glad to know you imagined the scenes …so sweet of you to let me know

      background poems all credit to Nikita…mujhe mein itni talent nahi hain Nita……

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Sakash…thanks a lot…ohh no i am sorry dear next episode will have proper no cliffhanger pause…will update the next episode in few minutes from ow

  5. Ahsana98

    Ahsana98

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    Di today I was read your ff early. May be it’s was first comment. What did to say about this marvelous work Di. It’s was awesome episode and emotional episode too. Say my thank you to Janvi Patel for translating Gujarati dialogues. It’s was the first time I read Gujarati, it’s was an new experiences for me. The Gujarati dialogues are suitable for the situation, and it’s gave a special beauty of the ff. While seeing jawla shivay is feel that she was his anika but he stopped his thoughts after knowing she is Arjun ‘s wife. I like the way you describe the importance of Ganesh pooja and it’s role in the reputation of oberios lives. Shivay was accepted to join the Ganesha pooja. All are happy after knowing that.shivay was very frustrating to finding anika ‘s chand bracelet, after finding out the bracelet he saying “Mai tumse aaj bhi pyar karta hu Anika ” that’s was the best and emotional part of this ff . Shivay don’t know about the truth of anika and real face of pinky. For him anika is changed and broke his heart. He is pretending to be hating Anika but the truth is that he is still Love her.
    While reading this ff I was confused about who is this fouzy, he is saying that jawala /anika killed his brother. Now I understand fouzy is brother of sultan.
    While reading this ff I feel to I’m watching an telengue movie . For saving shivay arjun get shots. Shivomru and oberios are shocked to finding out jawala is look like anika. Shivay is happy for his anika is alive. But he is shoked to anika care about arjun rather than shivay. Arjun and jawala pretend to be husband and wife due to their mission. And don’t reveal their true identity because their mission is not complete. So shivay will again hurts seeing Anika’s caring towards arjun. So many twists are awaiting. I hope shivay will know the truth of anika after finding she is alive, may be omru and janvi will reveal the truth of anika. I think flash back will ends in next episode. Now anika know who she is I’m very excited to read next part of your ff Di. Thank you and Nikita for writing such an super duper fantastic ff. I already know that you are an amazing writer. The combo work of two amazing writers produced an fantastic story. Love you 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 Di. Update soon.

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Awee such a sweet long comment Ahsana …so nice of you to make me go through all the special moments of this episode…i didn’t expect that this episode will get so much of appreciation…all appreciations to Nikita…an i must first thank her for giving me this opportunity ……..

      Yes Fauzi is Sultan’s brother …that’s why he said he will kill her brother Sahil the same way as she killed his brother Sultan…….

      Obviously Shivaay would be stressed, angry, jealous and disgusted with Anika caring for Arjun….hmmm this was much needed twist for upcoming episodes…..

      Yes flashback will end in next episode…but will OmRu and Jhanvi reveal the truth to Shivaay…not yet planned how to take this forward but will definitely keep upto the expectations of nikita and you all………

      yes All credits to Nikita and special thanks to Jhanvi for the translation …she really helped me in need and saying thank you is not enough but that is the only thing i can do

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Sairan…thanks a lot…….no no no…i wouldn’t do so as i am uploading the next episode in few minutes from now

  6. Navz

    Navz

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    Asusuasl… wonderful episode…nothing less to a perfect serial episode..dii..u know..i had a feeling that i was watching a telugu..pakka action movie rather than reading than a ff.
    Waiting for shivay and Anika s face off.
    Bye dii.

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Chotii…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you to say those lines …i am so happy ……..the line you said will happen very soon

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Niriha…thanks a lot……is everything fine at your end? just wanted to ask you…hope you don’t mind

    • Niriha

      Niriha

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      I’m not well di….so I couldn’t comment on your previous epi..sry (puppy eyes)*but I read all the part asusual fabulous parts di

  7. UF

    AWESOME EXCELLENT FANTASTIC OUT STANDING SUPERB👌👌👌😘😘😘

    Dear VHM
    Sorry to disturb you and bore you.but I can’t handle this bhavya with out soumya.main ye ff iss barosa pe continue kar rahi hu ki last aap RuMya ko mila yengi.so please aisa hi karna.aap bahuth talented writter hai iss liye main aapki ff miss nahi karna chaathi.but RuVya ISS main couple hogi tho main aapki ff padna stop karung.iam really sorry agar main aapko hurt kiya tho😢😢😢😭😭😭I am really sorry😞😞😞😖

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much UF…thanks a lot…….

      Dear UF

      I remember you have asked many times to pair Sumo and Rudra ……even i confirmed many times to many readers of this FF that sumo will be back and will change the dynamics of this FF……however this ff is going at certain pace dealing with events one by one……..if suddenly i bring Sumo from nowhere the charm of this FF will be lost , no infact the charm will get destroyed….and i cannot do so because this FF is not my own … i am writing it based on the idea , imagination and creativity of Nikita…….

      Thank you for the appreciation and support that you have given me …i cannot explain how happy i feel when i read your opinion that you post everytime without fail……….but i have a sincere request …i will bring back Sumo but you need to give me time to do so….i cannot force you or infact anyone else to read my FF….when i released the teaser or when i post my episodes i keep my expectation levels to Zero to avoid any heartbreaks …

      i am blessed that you and every one else who read this have stood by me…..and i hope YOU WILL CONTINUE TO DO SO…….but all i ask you is to give me some time and have patience…rest i leave the decision to you…..

      Sorry if i have hurt you with my response ….

      Love you loads, keep smiling and take care

      Harika (VHM)

  8. Archisha

    Archisha

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    It was pretty awesome di. I am not able to write a long comment as my keyboard us sick. I wanted to ask a question.. Is it the flashback ?

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Archisha…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…yes dear this is flashback…it started after Jwala/Anika saves Shivaay and Sahil from Sultan’s brother Fauzi and everyone was remembering the incidents from few days before also two years before

  9. Sagithya

    Sagithya

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    Wow di it was awesome…
    Loved ur idea of Gujarati language..
    Thanks to janvi patel bcoz of her today for the first time I am reading Gujarati….
    So excited for the next part… Post it as soon as possible…

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Little Sissy…thanks a lot dear……
      Yeah credit to Nikita and thanks to Jhanvi who helped me without any questions or expectations……
      Next episode i will upload it in few minutes from now

      sorry i made you angry today but promise i won;t repeat it again…

      Love you loads dear…keep smiling ….

  10. Dhar

    Dhar

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    Di, as usual u nail it always and u know that 😉😉, I u just made my dayyyyy , u know u always make me speechless just speechless

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Awee thank you so much Dharani…thanks a lot…….awwee really i made your day…i am so happy to know that and now you are making me speechless……..what more should i say and how to respind to your loads of love…

      So loads of love to you too, keep smiling and keep rocking

  11. AMkideewani

    AMkideewani

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    I’m speachless di, can’t tell you how I felt reading this episode😍😍😍😘😘😘😘 no words can describe my feelings about this one❤️❤️❤️

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much CrazygirlS.P …thanks a lot dear….awee so sweet of you to write so …i am so happy that you liked this episode…..love you loads dear

  12. Lauren

    Lauren

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    First of all, sry dii for being late on d previous one… it was awesome… fantastic… splendid… loved it… at last finally shivaay found his ANIKA… I wished for this track in ib… but uhh fulfilled mah wish thanks a lot for dat… I think u will beat all directors… juzz loved it to d core…
    Post nxt asap…
    Luv uhh..
    Waiting for d nxt

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Lauren….thank you so much dear…and please don;t say sorry dear…it’s not at all needed …what’s important is whenever you are free you post it and that is a big thing for me…i appreciate everyone who post their opinion on my writings by taking their time from busy schedules……..

      Awee so sweet of you dear …thank you thank you thank you so so so so much…….no dear i and beating all the directors is next to impossible …just writing as my hand goes and as expected by Nikita…….

      Love you too loads….next episode i will upload in few minutes from now

  13. Jahanara

    Jahanara

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    Really aka soooo cute ……. just u made us imagine the situation wit ur wndrfl words…… & tat Gujarati part 😆😆😆😂😂 cnvy my thanks to Jhanvi aka coz that Gujarati part gav us the real effect ……. Dhakkad Jwala she killed Sultan in a single gun shot😍😍😍 u know what this gun shot reminded me of a Tamil film thuppaki ……. Shivaay jiju was cute when he looked for Anika didi’s braclet…… Jwala shouting Arjun was also nyc……. As usual u just rocked akka luv u akka😍😍😍😘😘

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Jahanara…thanks a lot dear…tupaki i think i have seen that movie…isn’t it HOLIDAY movie in hindi ….that was a good film….awee thank you so much dear…

      All credits to Nikita …and special thanks to Jhanvi for giving the translations…..

  14. Sairish

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    this was superb di…..in love with your ff..thanks for clearing my doubts and now I am leading the correct path…sultan’s encounter scene was something truely fantastic..the gunshot and everything was amaazinggg …u know what while reading i have too many thoughts that I’ll write this or I’ll write that in my comments but at the spot i always fell short of words…..do post the next one soon …and ya thanks to jhanvi Patel di who translated the dialogues in Gujarati..it really enhanced it appearance giving it a very wala real touch …
    lots of love
    Sairish

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Sairishhhhhhhhh….choo cuteee…….

      Thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i am glad you liked the episode and i hope you will like the upcoming ones too….next episode i will post in few minutes from now…

      Yeah story credit to Nikita and Thanks to Jhanvi for giving the translations …..

      Loads of love to you too …keep smiling always….

  15. Shraddha-DBO

    Shraddha-DBO

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    Superb superb superb, couldn’t comment on previous ones…..
    This was superb than ur previous one..
    No words to say…
    Continue like this…😉

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Shraddha …good to see you back…was wondering where you disappeared not for posting your opinion on my FF but for your next update of RIKARA FF………

      Thank you so much thanks a lot dear …..will surely continue till i give a proper ending to this FF

  16. Ashwinee

    Ashwinee

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    After so many awesome comments what will I say??? Akka whatever you and niki di are doing , is not at all appreciable.
    Because you people are taking it to some other level which is out of the box and coordination between you two and jhanvi di is just uncommentable!!!!! 😯😯
    But still I have commented as I was not able to sit without commenting 😆😆😆😝😝

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Ashwinee thank you so much dear…awee so sweet of your dear…such a beautiful opinion…i am so so happy and don’t understand what more to say….

      Yes all credit to Nikita and thanks to Jhanvi for the translation …..

      Thank you so much dear…love you loads …keep smiling

  17. Jerry_36

    Jerry_36

    |Registered Member

    Hey Harika Di !
    This one was toh Khidkitod !! Kitna khoobsoorat ki shabd baayan nahi kar pa rahe hain !! Mind blowing di ❤
    Gunshot !! And the whole thing was truly gazab. Thank you Jhanvi di, for translating the dialogues, it helped us to enjoy more.
    Shivaay seeing Anika’s bracelet, awwww..
    Love you. Post soon💕

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Vedika…thanks a lot……itni khoobsurat shabdon se itni pyaara opinion post karna kaafi nahi hain kya…….

      Thank you so much dear once again…and yeah all credits to Nikita and thanks to Jhanvi for the translation

      Shivika ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

      Love you loads dear…keep smiling……..

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Fffan1234…….thanks a lot…next episode i will upload in few minutes…..

  18. JhanviPatel

    JhanviPatel

    |Registered Member

    Thanks a lot di… For this opportunity u gave me to translate ANIKA’S dialogues into my mother tongue…… And plzz don’t say thanks… Infact I feel too lucky to be a part of your ff (haan for few lines but still now I am part of this episode😋😁 just joking😂) thanks a lot di for this… Bcoz u and nikki di are best… The concept of nikki di is out of world the way u describe all the scenes and characters are aut of universe… So thanks a lot…
    And now thanks to readers woh appreciate me for my ITTA SA work😄… Thanks a lot guys (ZAVEESHA,AHSANA98,SAGITHYA,JAHANARA,SAIRISH,ASHWINEE,JERRY_36 and so sorry if I forgot anyone’s name plz forgive me) for appreciate me…I literally never expected that I would be appreciated to this extent…bcoz this is my first ever appreciation in TU portal and I will always cherish this…Thanks a lot once again… Today I feel like the QUEEN of the world(as I am a girl so no king😋😁) again thanks a lot guys and very very special thanks to hari di who gave me this brilliant opportunity…
    Now di come to today’s episode… As usual its awesome… But the best part is the way shivay say those line… ‘Mai tumse aaj bhi pyaar karta hoon anika’ is very heart touching the way u describe this scene is fabulous… And the second best part is the way arjun save shivay’s life…
    So anika is a sharp shooter😉… Nut still there is one mysterious… ARJUN NE DAIRY MAI KYA LIKHA🤔… Anyways aapka ff hai to mystery to hogi hi yehi to aapki speciality hai… So now eagerly waiting for this DAIRY WALI MYSTERY…😄… OVERALL ITS JUST OUSUM DI…. and again THANKS A LOT DI… Yes I know after reading this comment u will definitely scold me for saying thanks but mai phir bhi thanks bolungi😂… Bye diiii LOVE U A LOT DI… and yes I am eagerly waiting for the next episode bcoz o know little bit suspense😋😂😂😂… Bye di… LOVE YOU…

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Sweety…….

      This is not fair haan…you helped me and you are in turn saying thank you to me…not done……i always wanted to experiment with my writings ………
      (and here i made this experiment of including Gujrati dialogues without permission of Nikita)

      and you don’t understand you did a very big help in my experiments and that too gave away without asking the story-line or why and what…….so THANK YOU AND LOTS OF LOVE for being a wonderful sister to me and for everything you did…….and you deserve all the appreciation sweety …and i wish and pray you get many more in coming days as you are very special and very talented……..YOU ARE AND WILL ALWAYS BE A QUEEN

      yes all credits to Nikita for the concept, creativity and imagination……..thank you for the translation and thank you for those amazing lines…….

      well coming to what did Arjun write in the dairy …hmmm let’s keep this question a question for some more time …this will not be revealed so soon……..

      Thanks again Sweety for everything , for all the beautiful lines, for translation and for such an amazing opinion ……….

      LOVE YOU TOO LOADS AND ALWAYS KEEP SMILING

  19. Banita

    Amazinggg update di…. But again cliffhanger…..!!!!!! Sochi thi aj shivika face 2 face ayenga per…… Koi nahi…. Nd gujrati wala part bahat hi acha tha Thank u janvi…. Eagerly waiting 4 nxt….

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Banita….thanks a lot……yeah again a cliff hanger…..Shivika face to face ayyange aur proper tareekein se …….bahut jaldi…….

      yeah all credits to Nikita and thanks to Jhanvi for the translation……….next episode i will upload in few minutes from now

  20. Nida

    Nida

    |Registered Member

    Yaar … its top of the world 🌎 … why and how can u write soo flawlessly… it’s a khirkitur ff .. loved the story line .. waiting for the next part

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Nida…yuppieee yey…i read your opinion before posting the next episode…everyday i am missing this…..thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…and you know how and why i write so…because of you …just to see a smile on your face and read your khidkitodh opinion …why else tell me? thank you so much dear…next episode i am uploading right away………

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