Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB….. please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

Shivaay dropped the mobile and with the sound OmRu came to Shivaay and saw the mobile broken and Shivaay teary eyed……

Om’’Shivaay…are you alright? What happened?’’

Shivaay jerked away Om’s hand and spoke

Shivaay ‘’I didn’t expect this from you…you both started to hide things from me? What did you think …I am so weak not to take harsh truths…….’’

Rudra ‘’but bhayya first let us know what happened…why are you angry and why are you saying all these words’’

Shivaay ‘’I received Sumo’s call on Om’s mobile…….she was speaking of seeing Anika in Australia and you both knew this…….and you didn’t feel important to let me know this…why ?’’ he shouted

Om ‘’Shivaay……Shivaay relax…we wanted to let you know once we confirm so that we can see happiness on your face…we didn’t mean to hide anything from you…trust me this is the only truth’’

Shivaay ‘’trust….i am losing trust on myself what will I trust someone else……you have hurt me OmRu…you have deeply hurt me’’

He looked at them for a moment

Shivaay ‘’and happiness …happiness left me the same day when everything ended ‘’

Saying this Shivaay left from there

Rudra called up sumo and asked what she found …Sumo explained everything and this was listened by Rudra and Om as Rudra kept speaker on mobile……later after they dropped the call…..both of them became sad and lost their final hope too……..


Arjun and Jwala stepped into the chawl disguised as a Gujrati couple and entered the chawl……Jwala felt some old relation with the chawl….she felt as if she lived there earlier too…and stood still looking around…..a kids words were ringing in her ears…….and she was turning around…Arjun saw her in stress and made her stand still holding her by her shoulders……

Arjun ‘’Jwala what are you doing? Why are you behaving so odd? Please control …you must always remember : one wrong step will lead to a hell of disaster …so please understand and concentrate in the work we are here for’’

Jwala ‘’sorry Arjun …I will concentrate from now on’’

Arjun ‘’that’s ok…come let’s move’’

They both entered a house and closed the door……..

Jwala ‘’Arjun please let me know what’s the next plan and why are we here…if you don’t say anything how will I do my job?’’

Arjun ‘’Fine I will say but just check if anyone is around…I can’t take risk’’

Jwala looked outside the windows and for safety sake she closed them for a while

Arjun ‘’Jwala …our chief has got information that someone has tried to verify our identity in Australia…this indicates someone is following us…and coming to the next steps…we
have got to know the criminal whom we have come here….. his men are in and around this chawl and the criminal might be having a secret meeting held near by this chawl…this was from our intelligence report…so we are staying here disguised…our immediate step is to identify his men in this chawl and get to know what is he planning during Ganesh puja…tomorrow we will be meeting ACP Mumbai and will get to meet the lady officer who is working on this case starting from Meerut since last one and a half year’’

Jwala ‘’lady officer on this case right from Meerut …what’s her name….’’

Arjun ‘’ACP Bhavya’’

Jwala ‘’Bhavya…Bhavya……..’’

Jwala POV ‘’Why am I feeling I know her…not know her but know her very well……..what’s happening with me ….why am I getting so much troubled after coming to Mumbai…what’s my connection with this place…No Jwala you cannot be disturbed this mission is important for you…so concentrate on this mission first, later you can solve the disturbances in your personal life’’


Bhavya ‘’Hello sir!’’

ACP Mumbai ‘’Bhavya come to the office tomorrow at sharp 9:00 AM , we have RAW agents coming in and you will work in association with them’’

Bhavya ‘’But why RAW in this sir…I have tried my best in past one and a half year and I am very close to get him …then suddenly why they are being involved’’

ACP ‘’It’s government order and believe that there is something more to this case’’

Bhavya ‘’sure sir you say …Jai hind sir’’

The call ended and Bhavya was in thoughts when Rudra entered the room

Bhavya ‘’Rudra what happened why are you sad?’’

Rudra explained everything and Bhavya listened to him in shock…

Bhavya ‘’that’s okay Rudra don’t worry …we should move on letting the past go…otherwise we can never see the future’’

Rudra ‘’may be you are right …but I am worried for Shivaay bhayya…he is not able to move on’’

Bhavya ‘’try Rudra …try to make him come out of this…this is the only way…isn’t it too late we haven’t done so’’

Rudra ‘’yes…we have to bring him back to his old self otherwise we might lose him forever…’’

Bhavya ‘’that’s the spirit’’

Rudra ‘’thanks for everything Bhavya…thanks a lot’’

Bhavya ‘’my pleasure…. And one more thing Rudra ….tomorrow morning I am going on some by the time you wake up..i might not be in OM’’

Rudra ‘’that’s okay…take care’’


Shivaay POV ‘’has Sumo really seen Anika in Australia……is Anika still alive……I am sure she cannot leave me and go so early……I know how I managed myself all these days in past two years……..more than managing myself……. the pain that Sahil underwent is terrible..Sahil had only Anika with him and now he feels he lost everything…..I had to act very strong infront of him and assure him that I am there for him…..but he is a kid……and me ……I lost everything the moment I sent Anika out of OM…..what an unfortunate day it was…the darkest day of my life…how it started and how it ended…….but how could Anika do that with me……why did she try to divide me and my brothers …till few days before that she was very normal and enjoying….what was that sudden change within her…what was she hiding? And what was badi maa saying two years ago when the news of death of Anika broke out………why was badi maa taunting my mom.what truth was she talking about….’’ we three know the truth ‘’ …one is badi maa who are the other two…OMRU ? or my dad and bade papa? Or Gauri and Bhavya ? apart from Badi maa who are the other two who knew the truth? Above all what is the truth? So many questions and I have no answer…..Anika what mess have you created ? where are you ? I have never believed you left me so if I am true please…please come back…I just want to see you once …just to ensure Sahil that you haven’t left him if not for me…….’’

Om came to Shivaay……Shivaay came out of thoughts and saw Om…shivaay turned away his head….Om went to the direction where Shivaay was looking…he knelt down and looked at Shivaay

Om ‘’still angry with us Shivaay?’’

Shivaay ‘’how does it matter to you Om? You both have broken the basic rule between us. And I am very upset because of that’’

Om ‘’Shivaay …do you really think we can hide such a big matter from you? Shivaay when Sumo called I wanted to ensure she was right or wrong before informing you….so I called up external affairs ministry and got the job done…’’

Shivaay ‘’if it was Anika you would have said me for sure…I believe you…what if instead of me you picked up sumo’s call and got to know it was not Anika….would you have still said me the truth?’’

Om bent his head down…..

Shivaay ‘’answer me Om? Would you have informed me?’’

Om couldn’t speak anything

Shivaay ‘’your silence says everything Om and that’s the exact reason why I am upset…..Om I know my heart is weak but I am not as weak as you think…Shivaay Singh Oberoi can never fall weak…..’’

Om ‘’everyone falls weak for their dear ones Shivaay and you are not any exception…’s true if I got to know before you that she (Sumo) was mistaken I would have never said it to you ……..because’’

Shivaay looked on

Om ‘’because if the point of discussion is Anika Bhabhi then you cannot bear anything …you go weak and the reason is you still love her….YOU LOVE ANIKA BHABHI EVEN TODAY SHIVAAY…and you cannot deny this fact’’

Shivaay ‘’stop it Om ..i don’t love her…she did much and she very happily died making my life terrible…if at all she comes before me the only feeling I will develop is revenge’’

Om ‘’really Shivaay…revenge? Then let me ask you why are you taking care of Sahil …Sahil is ANIKA bhabi’s only weakness …if you want to take revenge then not taking care of

Sahil is the best revenge right…then why are you taking so much care of him? why do you love him so much? When Anika Bhabhi gave Sahil’s responsibility to Rudra and me …you decided that you will take care of him….accept it Shivaay you still love her and if she comes before you, you will only love her not feel like taking revenge from her’’

Shivaay couldn’t speak anything else….

Om ’’Shivaay …..i just wanted to say if matter is about Anika Bhabhi…we will think twice before letting you know anything because it is the most sensitive matter of your life and we cannot take any risk as we cannot see you in pain’’

Shivaay looked at Om teary eyed and hugged Om ……Om allowed him to take his tears out and get rid of the pain…….


Bhavya reached on time and ACP and Bhavya were waiting for Jwala and Arjun….

Arjun entered just then

ACP saw him and gave him a frowned look…..

Arjun ‘’I knew you were expecting my colleague too….but we had some other matter popped up…so she will not be making here on time today…we can proceed’’

ACP ‘’Mr.Arjun …meet Bhavya…ACP Meerut…’’

Bhavya and Arjun shaked hands

Arjun ‘’Nice to meet you ACP Bhavya….well I hope you know who I am now…and what’s purpose of my visit here’’

Bhavya ‘’yes sir…ACP sir told me’’

Arjun ‘’so whatever I am going to tell you…it must be confidential and should be between us three …I will not take a step back to suspect either of you if the information leaks out of this room….sorry but I have to be harsh in warning you both as a part of my duty’’

Bhavya ‘’that’s absolutely fine sir…so may I now know why have you taken up this case?’’

Arjun ‘’well to catch SULTAN’’

Bhavya ‘’but why is he under your radar’’

Arjun ‘’that’s confidential ACP …just understand he is a biggest threat to our country and now he is planning something big for the upcoming Ganesh Pooja and in his hit list are the Oberois’’

Bhavya stood up ……..

Bhavya ‘’ Oberois?’’

Arjun ‘’do you know them …I mean…. I know… everyone know them what I meant was do you know them personally?’’

Bhavya ‘’sir, I am residing in Oberoi Mansion from past one and a half year….so by now you might have understood how well I know all of them’’

Arjun was now surprised

Arjun ‘’great…so we are in good line…now I need one help from you….you need to make mine and Jwala’s entry in Oberoi mansion at the earliest…..’’

Bhavya ‘’sir, I know it’s confidential but still please let me know how are Oberois linked to this case?’’

Arjun ‘’I cannot divulge much details …but just let me tell you sultan has a long time rivalry with Oberois and he knows Oberois are going to do the Maha aarthi at coming up Ganesh
Pooja…so we need to take utmost use of the opportunity…keeping them safe and catching our target ‘’

Bhavya ‘’sir but you said threat to our country and now you are specifying threat to Oberois…I don’t understand anything’’

Arjun smiled and said ‘’ ACP…he is going to kill two birds at one shot…..his personal and professional rivalry………Personal rivalry with Oberois and professional rivalry with country …more than this I cannot let you know anything as …even as of now I donno anything…I hope you understand’’

Bhavya ‘’right sir…when do you want to enter the mansion?’’

Arjun ‘’will inform you sooner after talking to my chief and Jwala too’’

Bhavya ‘’as you say sir…I will leave now’’

Arjun ‘’jai Hind ACP’’

Bhavya ‘’jai Hind sir’’

Arjun greeted ACP Mumbai and left towards chawl……….he reached the chawl and saw the mess in their house at once he got alert and searched the house …to see all the glasses and utensils dispersed here and there except for a glass …..he went near that left alone glass and picked it up to see ….jwala leaving a code under the inverted glass….

Pno : 11 / 7 / 1980 was all that he found…he smiled and went near his suitcase ……..he searched for his personal notepad and opened the book and turned to 11 th page and looked at 7 th poem……

‘’Jaa rahi hoon us khoj mein
Milne un andekhon se
Jaha sunayi degi khamoshiyan ki awaaz
Aur khulenge un awaazon mein kuch chupe hue raaz’’

He flipped to page no : 19 and saw she underlined few numbers…………he started writing the numbers in an order and finally got the sequence

‘’1 18 1 2 9 1 14 : 12 1 20 5 18…21.. 10 15 9 14…23 9 12 12.. 9.. 13 9 19 19 9 15 14…15 21 18…23 9 20 8…16 18 15 3 5 5 4…21.. 21 19.. 15 14…5 25 5.. 11 5 5 16 9 14 7…9 19…19 15 13 5 15 14 5’’

Arjun smiled and left from there understanding where she went and what she meant !!!

Arjun called Bhavya and said that he want entry into Oberoi mansion the same evening…Bhavya questioned him about Jwala…he asked her to say that he will be entering with his wife…..Bhavya understood and agreed……..

Bhavya entered OM and saw everyone in the living room with sad faces

Bhavya ‘’What happened why are you all sad?’’

Rudra ‘’nothing…did your work get completed?’’

Bhavya ‘’yes…but what’s the matter Rudra? Why is everyone sad?’’

Dadi ‘’bhavya Puttar…what else can be the reason …tomorrow is Ganesh Chathurthi and it’s our custom to do maha arthi in the Ganesh temple…however this time Shivaay has disagreed to come for the aarthi….’’

Bhavya POV ‘’ohh no…if Shivaay bhayya doesn’t come then all the plan is going to fail…I have to do something and make him agree…the plan shouldn’t fail….i know I am putting them in risk but still this is needed for all good reasons’’

Rudra ‘’Bhavya…what are you thinking? ‘’

Bhavya ‘’no…no …nothing’’ she kept quiet……

Bhavya ‘’Rudra today evening my friend will be coming here with his wife to meet me…sorry I asked him to come …hope you don’t mind’’

Rudra ‘’that’s okay ..’’

Bhavya ‘’are you sure…the situation in our house….’’

Rudra ‘’it’s fine Bhavya…….the situation has been the same from past two years …because of someone who doesn’t care ‘’ he said looking at Pinky..

Pinky glared at him angrily……


Arjun arrived with Jwala to OM…….

Jwala started feeling uncomfortable …….she saw OM and flashbacks of her being there earlier was haunting her…….

Arjun ‘’Jwala please …why are you in thoughts ‘’

Jwala ‘’I am feeling uncomfortable here….i don’t why…but this place is giving me some memories which I am not able to recollect properly’’

Arjun ‘’But Jwala…….’’

Jwala was standing infront of Arjun facing her back towards the main door of OM……..she received a call on her mobile …she spoke and looked at Arjun …Arjun saw Shivaay coming towards them…..

Arjun saw Shivaay and then looked at Jwala who by then completed the call……

Shivaay’s sensor started working as he was feeling that Anika was somewhere near him……he saw a lady facing towards the gate …….and from the back she looked like
Anika…….Shivaay started moving towards her while his heartbeat was growing …….

Jwala ‘’Arjun there is something very important to let you know…’’

With the presence of Shivaay around her …her heartbeat was also growing fast and she was feeling as if someone who is so precious to her is around her…and started to turn around ………….

So this is the Fifth episode of the FF….please let me know how you felt after reading this……any comments good or bad are welcome…I will respond as soon as possible…all credits to Nikita

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  1. Jahanara

    Awsm akka as usual…… So shivaay jiju’s anika-meter started working aftr 2 years??….. he is going to be hell shocked to find tat he saw jwala wife of arjun not Anika didi ?? but jiju u can’t deny the fact tat u luv didi whn my om bhaiyya said ??
    U jst rocked akka luv u akka??

    1. VHM

      Hey Jahanara …thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…..yes finally anika meter worked after two years…..yes offcourse he would but when? wait for tomorrow’s episode to unfold the next mystery………..

      Thank you so much dear and love you loads…..

      All credits to Nikita too

  2. Priyadas

    Mi knew it that you will stop the part in the nick of time… you and nikata are bringing out teh best di.. i loved this part the most and the importance of ur ff is the suspense you create di…

    1. VHM

      Hey Priya… thank you so much and sorry dear…i had to stop there to continue the revelation in next episode……..awee thank you so much once again for those awesome lines…this FF is because of Nikita and i am just playing a role of making her imagination converted into words…..thanks a lot again dear

  3. Awesome…..
    ShivOm scene was emotional…..Beautifully written….
    Waiting to see Shivaay’s reaction after he sees Anika with Arjun….
    Again a cliff-hanger….
    Waiting fr d nxt…. 🙂

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shivika…thanks a lot…will he see or will he not will he react when he sees her? all these questions will be answered in tomorrows episode……

      Next episode i uploaded dear waiting for it to get posted……..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Anju…thanks a lot

  4. JhanviPatel

    Ohhhhh omgggg what an episode dii…
    It’s mind blowing…
    Feeling really bad for shivay… But now jwala is in om so every will be fine with shivay…?
    Omgggg jwala and arjun gujarati couple?????…
    Overall this episode is awesome…???
    Really enjoyed this episode by enjoying rain…and romantic atmosphere…???

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sweety….thanks a lot….don’t feel bad for Shivaay …he will soon gain his original form …very soon…will Jwala be in OM now or will she not …wait for tomorrow’s episode…

      Yes Jwala and Arjun as Gujrati couple specially for you and read tomorrow’s episode without fail …there is something special for you……..

      Enjoying rain with this FF …that’s awesome dear……

      Keep smiling take care and love you loads…….

  5. AMkideewani

    Mindblowing di❤️❤️❤️????????????????????????????????????

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much CrazygirlS.P….thanks a lot…love you too loads dear

  6. Waho,VERY NICE

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Arfa…thanks a lot…..

  7. Navz

    Dii…awesome.. u and nikhita are doing great job…
    Shivaay and oms convo..very emotional..felt very bad for shivaay.
    Shivvays sensor on…and again at nick of time u stopped it .
    I know only tom i can see d next part..but ur way of writing and suspense nature Pushing me to say these words….POST THE NEXT PART AS SOON AS POSSIBLE DII.
    Luv u dii..bye.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Chotii…thanks a lot….and sorry…….

      suspense maintain cheyali kada..ala akkada aapakapothe repu naa next episode nuvvu chadavavemo ani naa bhayam…maa bhayalu maaku untayi kadha……

      Ha ha ha…just kidding…to maintain suspense i stopped at nick of time….next episode i uploaded long back…waiting for it to get posted….

      love you loads chotiii…


    1. VHM

      Thank you so much UF…thanks a lot

  9. Archisha

    Awesome one di.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Archisha…thanks a lot

  10. awesome
    luved it absolutely
    waiting for ShivIka face off
    update soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Aashi…thanks a lot……..shivika face off will happen for sure ……updated the next episode long back waiting for it to get posted

  11. Ashwinee

    akka and nikita di great work beautifully done.

    {kuch toh hai aapse raabta
    kuch toh hai aapse raabta
    kya hai yeh kaise hai nahi pata
    phir bhi hai aapse raabta
    do behene hai , phir kya fikar hai
    padne ki vajah yehi hai padna inhikeliye . }

    actually i was listening to that song while reading it and coincidently it matched the theme in the last part. so thought of writing with the same flow…
    PS: i know i have done a major blunder with the above one so whoever finds it incorrect please forgive me!!!

    1. VHM

      Hey Ashwinee….thank you so much dear…these days i have not been able to listen to songs properly…even this song is new to me…but i will listen whenever i get time……

      thank you once again dear…love you so muchhhhh

  12. Nithu

    Nice akkaaa…..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Mohitha……..

      first thank you and love you dear for dedicating your FF to me…i am really overwhelmed…..and above all didn’t expect this at all……..

      secondly thank you once again for reading this episodes though i know how difficult it is to write an FF and then carry on with personal life commitments…

      love you loads dear

      1. Nithu

        Ur the best akka…..

  13. Sairish

    an amazing chappy as always ….full of mysteries and suspense ….you stopped the story at the Nick of time ..well can’t stop praising u di..lovedd it totally
    I have a few doubts
    do shivaay know pinky’s truth or he has to found out bcz i got a little confused regarding that
    one more thing..was this chappy a flashback ..though i have read all the parts but my poor little brain …it eats up some of the stuff i need to remember and hence got confused ??

    1. VHM

      saiiiiiiiiiiirisshhhhhhhhhhhhh…your name na brings a big smile on my face….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot for all the compliments

      q> do shivaay know pinky’s truth or he has to found out
      a > no he doesn’t know Pinky’s truth….very soon the current track of real IB will start in this FF…..

      q> one more thing..was this chappy a flashback .
      a> yes this chappy is also the flashback……..once the flashback ends i will cleraly mention end of flashback in the episode….the flashback started while Anika and Oberois were driving after saving Shivaay and Sahil from Fauzi towards their respective homes!!!

      i know dear i should write recap and precap but because of lack of time and personal commitments and above all to give the best of experience from my end to all the readers i have avoided doing so…….however i will try to give recap for upcoming episodes…..

      no worries dear …everyone gets confused at one time or other and it is and should not be a big deal…you can ask me or point me wherever you feel something is missing or confusing…i will try to clarify i as soon as possible

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Pritika…i will ensure you give me a rating better than GOOD in the upcoming episodes…..thanks a lot once again dear

      1. Pritika

        di its much better than just good but i hv lack of words to appreciate ur writing, so i just write good bcoz i hv no words left

  14. Ankita27

    Wonderful update dear.. loved it to the core.. ??? Eagerly waiting for the next update.. plz post asap…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Ankita…thanks a lot….next episode i already uploaded waiting for it to get posted……..

  15. Dhar

    Diiiiiiiiiiiiii , why do you stop at such places , first priya diii then u , u both are making my head go bammmmmmmm , and di actually my real name is dharani?soooo it’s a sheeeeee , and plzz plzz plzz plzz do post the next update ASAP, U really do magics though

    1. VHM

      Hey Dhar…….you know what i was anticipating your name to be Dharani from the beginning i got to know you …but stopped myself from asking you as you might feel odd…….and i am sorry for all the confusion……Dharani beautiful name…..

      Thank you so much dear …thanks a lot…..i have posted the next episode long back…hope to see it get posted soon in the TU page after moderation……

      awee so sweet of you……this time magic has been done by Nikita

      1. Dhar

        Thanks diii, for ur complement , actually u know my parents have really found out a name which is not that common round here in Mumbai. ….so the reaction I get is likee , i say dharani and they say whaaaatttttt

  16. Fffan1234

    That was super Khidkitod mind blowing update. Absolutely loved it. Looking forward to next part.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Dipti…thanks a lot… episode i have uploaded long back waiting to get it moderated and appear in the portal soon

  17. Zaveesha

    Fantastic episode…u nd nikki r showing ur detective talents in this ff….very mysterious ff..amazing writing…loved it..nd as usual u stopped it on a point where we’ll think about it till the next episode… fabulous…
    Keep going…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Zaveesha…thanks alot…and i hope you are not scolding me for stopping at the nick of time……

      will keep going by all the encouragement from you and all the readers of this FF…thank you for all those compliments dear…

      hope you are enjoying with your family now!!! love you and take care

      1. Zaveesha

        No di I’m not scolding u…it is necessary for the reader excitement nd u r just doing that….
        Yeah m enjoying with my at my place…
        Love u too…nd u too take care of urself nd ur princess…
        Nd its raining now in Varanasi…

  18. Sagithya

    amazing mind blowing…. loved it….shivom bond was awesome… Excited to see shivaay reaction after seeing Arjun and jwala… Post the next part as soon as possible

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Little sissy Sagithya……thanks a lot…….keep up the excitement ……as you will get the unexpected twist in next episode…….

      next part i uploaded long back…….waiting for it to get posted in portal and then much more eager to read all your reactions!!!

  19. Alekhika20

    Superb update

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Alekhika…thanks a lot

  20. Mind blowing akka superb update post next one soon pls….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much talli…how are you? next episode i already uploaded dear…waiting for it to get posted in the portal…….

  21. Mind blowing di

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Komal…thanks a lot

  22. Ahsana98

    Before writing this comment A very very belated happy Birthday to Nithu aka Mohitha. Di please wish her on behalf of me. I don’t know her personally but I know her as the regular reader of your ff right he na Di. I saw her from your inseparable shots. I always saw her in your ff ‘s comment box. She is don’t Change her dp also. I remembered she have continued the same dp shivays wore light rose dress.
    About your and Nikita ‘s ff what to say it’s was super duper fantastic fabulous awesome, I didn’t get words to appreciate both of your work Di. I read almost all of your works. So I know that your all walks are fantastic, but this time you coming back with a combo work of you and Nikita, Both of your ideas and imagination gifts an super duper ff. Thank you Harika Di and Nikita for gifting such an awesome mind blowing ff.
    This time you come back with your companion an Thriller ff. I love the ways you describe the story. While reading this ff I know that jawla is none another than Anika. I happy that anika remember who She is. She is don’t reveal this to Shivay due to her mission. And I think some more reason are behind this. You both are introduced anika as an RAW agent officer. It’s idea was different from other IB ff ‘s. Arjun is anika ‘s senior officer and best friend too. I read all parts of your ff today, it’s was very amazing feeling reading all of your parts continuesly. While reading this ff I imagine all parts. While reading Arjun and Jawla part I remember Vikram ‘s irumukhan movie. Do you watch that movie Di? While reading that part I feel Arjun as vikram and anika as nithya. Like Irumukan movie, this ff also an Thriller ff while reading this ff I feel watching an Thriller movie. I like the friendship between Arjun and anika. For completing their mission arjun and anika disgusting as Gujarati wife and husband and live in anika ‘s old chwal, while reading that part I remember Dehlees serial .
    First some parts very emotional episode Di. Shivay was broken after seeing anika ‘s accident in TV news. He don’t know the truth but still he is love her. I hope shivay soon know the real truth behind anika ‘s changing behavior and realize the true face of Pinky that day he is realize anika ‘s sacrifice. I’m happy for bring back soumya in your ff Di. I don’t want bhavya is become rudra ‘s love interest. I still believe Bhvaya ‘s entry make rudra realize the importance of soumya in her life. Please bring back to OM Di.

    Once again I says it’s was fantastic and fabulous thriller ff Di. So many suspense and twist and turns. Some are revealed other twists are awaiting. I always love your work Di. Love ???????????????????????????????? you Di and Nikita both are fantastic writers. You stopped today’s episode at the midpoint, may be shivay will misunderstand the relationship between Arjun and anika. And Di I find out the code word of anika ???
    Right he na Di . I’m waiting for your next episode, update soon Di. And don’t forget to send the link of your ff Di. Good night Di, sweet dreams

    1. Ahsana98

      Sorry Di I misunderstood Nida as Nithu aka mohita. I know Nithu. I think I read her ff

      1. VHM

        before thanking you for everything ……..


        now thank you so much for posting such a long and amazing opinion……it was a real pleasure to read such beautiful lines that were full of appreciating words for Nikita and me……….

        Ohh is it…… i didn’t watch Vikram’s movie nor did i watch Dahleez serial…i was writing this FF based on the story line given by Nikita…though disguising themselves as Gujrati couples was my idea of inclusion, to bring in the much needed base for upcoming story line……..

        well coincidences are always possible and i am glad you liked the FF till now ……

        How can i deny my friends, sisters and all the readers of this FF ‘s wish of pairing Sumo with Rudra and bringing back Sumo……..

        Saumya will definitely be paired with Rudra and Saumya will re enter and this time her entry will change the dynamics of this FF completely…….

        thank you once again dear…so much of appreciation and all this must go only to Nikita for this amazing story line…….

        And don’t worry NIda and Nithu are very dear to me…while speaking about Nithu and describing Nida you bought a smile on my face…….

        Yes You decoded it correct…….but i mentioned ARABIAN as Arabic language ios read from right to left…so the message has to be read from right to left ……..well i know you might have understood …so silly of me to say you this !!!

        next episode i uploaded long time back dear…waiting for the moderation to get completed and to appear in the portal……..

        Will definitely send you the links and ALL THE BEST TO YOU..and you know why i am saying this…….

        Love you loads take care and good night

      2. Ahsana98

        Thank you once again Di and Nikita for gifting such an super duper ff, while reading this ff I feel watching an thriller movie. Di if you have time then check that movie “Irumukhan “it’s was super movie Di. The film stars vikram in dual roles and Nayantara and Nithya menon in the lead roles. The film was dubbed into Telugu was ”
        Inkokkadu ”
        Iam very happy Di because you are surely bring back our sumo with a twist that change the entire story .
        I know both Nida and Nithu ,Di I saw both of them since your inseparable shots and I reads Nithu ‘s ff.

        Thank you Di for clearing my doubts. Actually while decoding that code word I didn’t understand what di mean by. I think you mentioned Arabian as code of Sultan. I know that arabi language is read from right to left. It’s was super idea the I salute both Harika Di and Nikitha. You both ‘s idea and imagination are fantastic ????????????????????????????? . Now I understand what anika mean by “SOMEONE IS KEEPING EYE ON US U PROCEED WITH OUR MISSION I WILL JOIN U LATER ” . Your next part is uploaded right. When I get time I will surely read Di. Good morning have a nice day

      3. VHM

        Hey Ahsana i will surely watch the movie once i get free from this FF…..thank you so much for suggesting the movie also taking effort of giving me the telugu version name of movie…..

        I thought of putting something else as code word but i didn’t want to make it more complex so settled with numbers ……and i knew you and everyone can decode so didn’t write the decoding answer too….

        Well i thought you would decode the poem and let me know the location too……no worries nothing urgent too…take care and loads of love and luck dear

  23. Ashlyn.G

    Totally awsome update as always Harika di…I have read most of your update but never been able to update on each one….I commented on some of your updates from my sister’s id …I’m really a huge fan of yours….You motivates me a lot…keep writing always for your fans……take care….
    With love

    1. Ashlyn.G

      And totally superb plot Nikita….very nice???

      1. VHM

        True Nikita deserves all the appreciation….sorry she couldn’t respond as she is having exams i suppose……but thank you on behalf of her

    2. VHM

      Thank you so much Ashlyn….thanks a lot….awee so sweet of you dear….is it ? did you read my previous works…thank you for letting me know…no worries …i know you might have been busy and couldn’t have got time to post your opinion but that is okay as i understand …….i am so happy to read those beautiful words written by you….thanks a lot once again……

      you are calling me dii na …then one request don’t say you are my fan..i don’t know but i feel michmichi …seriously i am neither a celebrity or a super star …so let our relations be of sister and a friend …this is more comfortable isn’t it?

      Love you too loads dear,…ad do take care….keep smiling …Bye

  24. It’s n’t fair di…. U stop it in a cliff hanger…. Excited 2 see Sivaay’s reaction…. Nd coming 2 this one it’s Fabulous….. Luv d thriller part…. I luv 2 read thriller stries…. It’s just Superb….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Banita…thanks a lot…and am sorry dear…i marked this episode end at that point …so don;t scold me…very soon next episode will be available in the portal and you can read it then….

      Thank you so much Banita…thanks a lot…..awee same pinch …i also love thrillers and mysteries……

      Shivaay’s reaction will it be tomorrow or won’t ? you will have to wait for the next episode..

      Love you loads dear…take care

  25. Maryam_ishq

    Sry for not commentin on ur ff for so long, actually i was on a holiday so wasn’t able to get propr wifi. Am so glad u came back with such a khidkitod ff ?… the story line is really nice and different as well. Really appreciate ur writing style. When i first read the teaser… i was super confused on wht was goin on and couldn’t hold the anxiety in me and read all the parts in one go, it’s really nice. Waitin for shivay’s reaction when he sees his anika and tht too as someone’s wife. I hope arjun is just a friend of anika and doesn’t like her secretly. Anyways great ff di and plz post next one soon… (hope u don’t mind me callin u di ?)

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Maryam_ishq…thanks a lot…and no worries..hope you have enjoyed holidays…….awee so sweet of you to write such amazing lines …….i hope i am making all the confusions clear……

      Please do call me ”DII”…it’s an awesome feeling to get so many sisters from TU page and that includes you too…….

      And all credits to Nikita for this storyline

  26. Nida

    It’s really a thrilling ff … i hate these thrillers stories but trust me even once i didn’t get bored ? its really out of the world ? ?????????????❤️️❤️️❤️️?❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️?????????????????????????????

    1. VHM

      Hey Nida…finally found you my bestiee………oooooo…i didn’t know you hate thrillers….next time i write something i will make sure it is not thriller…….thank God you didn’t find it bored…..thank you sooooooooooo much dear…………thanks a lot

  27. Lauren

    Sry dii for being extremely late… was stuck in an stuff…. anyways it was awesome, amazinggggg, fantastic as always… loved to d core…. excited for the nxt so plz post nxt soon… waiting for it…
    Luv uhh dii

    1. VHM

      Hey Lauren……thank you so much dear….and don’t worry you have posted the opinion which means a lot to me……..yes next episode is up in the portal……would love to meet you there…

      love you loads dear…thanks a lot once again

  28. Nita D

    Wow di once again an awesome episode….the story is picking up place now….JwaJun in OM….bomb phat jayega….n Om nShivaay convo was awesome…i want to the mystery abt Anika’s memory loss really soon now……
    N again left it at a cliff hanger di…..
    I just saw in recent posts that part is 6 is updated. So can’t wait. I m going n reading it just now….

  29. VHM

    awee thank you so much Nita…thanks a lot…i guess you will be happy for something in next episode……Anika’s memory loss revelation will be definitely present …but few more things will come to front before that…….

    Hmmmmm….cliff hanger leaving na…bad habit of mine……but now next episode is up…….will meet you there

    1. Nita D

      Hmmm…then I’ll wait for that revelation…..which think are u talking about in the next episode di??
      The Gujju convo??? I enjoyed that thoroughly……
      N I have also commented on chapter 4. Probably TU shows notification only once

      1. VHM

        thanks dear…i will definitely reveal at the right time as i have made up mind for the plot of upcoming episodes ….

        Yeah i was saying about Gujju convo…i hope you might have liked it…didn’t yet gone through the opinions in the latest episode….

        Sorry dear …i missed the opinion in episode 4…i just saw and replied you…….no no TU shows all notifications …my mistake not to see that…sorry again

  30. Jerry_36

    Hey Harika Di !
    The update is super awesome. Loved it to the core. You are once again doing an awesome job, lovely one !!
    Poor Shivaay, and yeah the questions I asked were very well described in this chapter. Too good.
    Jwala aka Anjali aka Anika? in Oberoi Mansion, well the next chapter will be really interesting I guess.
    Love you !❤

    1. VHM

      Hey Vedika….thak you so much dear…thanks a lot……i hope you would find it interesting……will wait for your response …… you loads dear !!!

    2. Nita D

      Oh wow…someone else after me….Otherwise I have earned the late latif aka last commentator title….??thx Jerry….

      1. Jerry_36

        Well I have already earned this title, late lateef !! ?Your welcome?

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