MUKAMMAL MOHABBAT KI ADHURI DASTAAN ( MMKAD ) – ISHQBAAZ FF – EPISODE 26

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Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB….. please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

Sahil who listened to them called Sumo and put the call in conference with OmRu…….who were in Pune then trying to find Mahi………

Rudra ‘’that’s great Sahil…now they must confront each other and once they do …everything that is in their heart must come out……only then will they live in peace together and for each other……’’

Sumo ‘’I hope so…atleast our plan worked till here’’

Om ‘’don’t worry Sumo everything will go fine’’

Gauri ‘’any news about Mahi Omakara ji’’

Om ‘’not yet …we are searching for him with the help of local police’’

Sahil ‘’ok fine ..all the best…if there is anything important I will let you know’’

Everyone disconnected the call………

————ANIKA’S CABIN

Shivaay ‘’why are tears dwelling up in your eyes…it must be me who must have them …you should be happy ‘’

Anika ‘’stop it Shivaay …..’’ she looked around and continued

Anika ‘’you will and can never change…..you always had a wrong impression on me and today too you are no different……you just never understood me’’ she was crying and left the room wiping her tears……

She went out and asked Sahil to stay back in office and she will come back in sometime……she took her car and started driving……..Shivaay too followed her in his car……….he speeded his car and brought it in front of her car which was more of a secluded place…Anika applied sudden brake and looked at him…..He went to her car opened the door and pulled her out…….

Shivaay ‘’you know how irritated I get when you don’t complete the matter and leave’’

Anika ‘’when there is nothing left to complete what should I complete and even if I am moving on how does it matter to you…you are right… I must be happy …why am I crying?’’

Shivaay threw his mobile in anger….Anika too was agitated …she didn’t know what to do …she bent to puncture the tyre of Shivaay’s expensive car…..

Shivaay ‘’what the wuck?’’

Anika just looked at him in anger and tried to move away from him………..Shivaay was all the way more irritated and angered…….he pulled her towards him and

Shivaay ‘’ sumo and Gauri said me in OM that they would be talking to you about your marriage….is it wrong ? when I came near your cabin , you all were talking about proposal with
Samar is it wrong ?…tell me were all these lies ?’’

Anika ‘’yes……yes ……’’ she screamed…. ‘’ all these are lies ..’’ she replied looking into his eyes….

They both looked at each other with pain, anger and being hurt

Anika ‘’I know even this time you would not believe me …but this is the truth….you want to know what proposal we were talking about and what did sumo and Gauri speak to me when they came here…then listen …..

—————–FLASHBACK ..SOMETIME BEFORE

Sumo and Gauri reached Anika’s office and met her in her cabin…….

Anika ‘’sumo , Gauri what a pleasant surprise…how come you are here?and where are the kids Riyanshi and Sahil…Rudra was to bring them here…I think he must be parking the car right…’’

Gauri ‘’Bhaujaii !!! Shivaay bhayya is waiting for your men to reach OM …once they reach he will come here along with kids……’’

Anika ‘’Sounds good…but then you both here … what’s the matter? ‘’

Gauri ‘’bahu jaii ..we wanted to talk to you something ‘’

Anika ‘’yeah…tell me Gauri…why are you looking nervous ?’’

Gauri ‘’please come back home bahujaii….Shivaay bhayya is missing you badly…he had made me and Omkara ji and Sumo and Rudra patch up and set our lives…but he is very sad as his life has stopped at the same point where you left two years ago……’’

Anika ‘’Gauri…it’s too late…because he has decided to part ways with me…I know he feels guilty to not understand me …so he decided this…but I cannot go against him…I have always respected his wish …so how can I deny this time…as I said we are not destined to be together…so please don’t force me…..few more days and I am gone far away from him…giving him no chance to meet me again’’

Sumo ‘’but Bhabhi…did you ever think in between your fight how much Sahil is suffering…when you weren’t there Shivaay bhayya has taken care of him as his father not as his Jiju…and he is now attached to Shivaay bhayya as he is attached to you…..when Sahil was given the chawl papers by Shivaay bhayya..Sahil did not accept them and instead became angry on him…..he asked Shivaay bhayya to patch up with you and then own him ….Sahil said me about this just sometime before ….you both are not doing it right bhabhi’’

Anika ‘’Sahil is still a kid Sumo…with time he will understand everything and I am sure I can make him explain…so don’t worry about him..’’

Gauri ‘’but bahujaii…you decided to part ways with Shivaay bhayya only…but what about rest of OF members…we are also a part of your family…wouldn’t you think about us?’’

Anika ‘’Gauri I love you all and you all know this…but I am related to all of you through Shivaay ……when he doesn’t want me I am no one to anyone now…..i am just an outsider to all of you …so let’s not discuss this anymore’’

Gauri and Sumo were about to say something when…….RSJM and Mrs.Malhotra arrived…….

RSJM ‘’Hello Ms.Anika……’’

Anika smiled and offered seats to both of them…….

Anika ‘’I got to know Shivaay is bringing Riyanshi and Sahil…so once they come we will start the paper work’’

Samar ‘’not a problem …we will wait’’

Anika ‘’will you have something?’’

Samar ‘’no…but if you have some time we wanted to ask you something? Hope you don’t mind?’’

Anika ‘’yeah ..please ‘’

Samar ‘’yesterday Riyanshi called me and said she doesn’t want to come back with me as she prefers to stay back with Mr.Shivaay……I somehow persuaded her but she is adamant of not coming…after lot of time she agreed …but she has asked me something probably for the first time…and that is..’’

Anika looked at Samar

Samar ‘’that she wants to be with Sahil for sometime before she goes back with us’’

Anika ‘’ohh okay…it should not be a problem…I will take her with me and she can be with Sahil till you wind up everything here…off course only if you are willing to send her with me…’’

Samar ‘’but…I had something else in my mind’’

Anika looked on

Samar ‘’nothing…I have a proposal for you…hope you would listen and think before rejecting it’’

Anika frowned her eyebrows

Samar ‘’actually we know Sahil is your responsibility and I also got to know from Ranjit that you are looking for some onsite assignments as your next mission ….and he is also thinking of sending you to NewZealand…..so it is obvious that you would also take Sahil with you for your onsite assignment… ‘’

Anika ‘’yes..it’s true I am looking for an onsite assignment as my next mission… probably this time I might go to NewZealand ….and it’s obvious Sahil will be with me wherever I go..but I didn’t understand your point behind saying this’’

Samar ‘’if you would accept… the safety of Sahil…. and your purpose of onsite assignment… both will be solved’’

Anika ‘’I didn’t get you’’

Samar ‘’we will want to take Sahil along with Riyanshi to NewZealand…..We will take care of Sahil completely and Ranjit has already arranged for our security there……so whenever you want to meet Sahil you can come and meet and you need not to worry about Sahil too…Riyanshi is alone and she needs a sibling at this age with whom she can play, share and be with all the time….she has bonded with Sahil very well ….so I thought of asking you about this’’

Anika ‘’whaat? ‘’ she stood up

Samar , Sumo, Gauri Mrs.Malhotra everyone stood up …

Anika ‘’have you lost it Mr.Samar…..I have only Sahil as my family and I have after great difficulty got him back from Shivaay…and now you want to take my Sahil with you…how can you even think of it’’

Samar ‘’ms.Anika please relax…I am not taking Sahil away from you….i am just helping you in all ways and in turn helping myself …you will be in Newzealand and busy in work …so it’s just that Sahil will be with us in our home rather than being alone in your house….when you are in your house he will stay with you…rest other time he will be with us in our home….i know your type of work and the risks involved in it….so Sahil being with us will help you in concentrating on your work without any worries…my mother will be there to guide them in right path..Sahil will have his younger sister Riyanshi , dadi along with you as his elder sister … i am not forcing you or trying to snatch him away from you for my selfish reasons…I just want both kids to have a sibling relation and a family bond…..’’

Anika relaxed after a while and was in thoughts…….Sumo and Gauri also felt it apt ……..

Just then Gauri’s phone ringed ……..

Sumo ‘’bhabhi what do you think about the proposal ?’’

Anika ‘’Sumo-Gauri…did I ever deny your thoughts…I will definitely think about it and will let you know very soon’’

RSJM ‘’Thank you very much Anika…I never thought you would even agree to think about this proposal …when I initially thought about this I was sceptical whether it would be correct or not…but if it’s about Riyanshi I can do anything…so I made up my mind and asked you about it…‘’

Anika ‘’please Samar …don’t embarrass me… if it is for the benefit of Sahil and Riyanshi then how can I not give a thought..’’ She smiled

RSJM extended her hands she forwarded her hand and they both shook each other’s hands……

Mrs.Malhotra ‘’Thank you so much beta…whatever you have done for us I cannot forget it anytime in my life and now by saying that you will think of this proposal …you made me extremely happy…we couldn’t have found anyone else better than you….so thank you…hope you will come to a positive decision very soon’’

Saying this Mrs.Malhotra folded her hands…Anika immediately made her leave her hands and said ‘’Aunty ji…you are like my mother ..so please don’t fold your hands before me just give me your blessings’’ and bent to take her blessings …

Mrs.Malhotra blessed her and sat back

Gauri –Sumo smiled and looked at each other and then turned towards Anika and said

Gauri ‘’bahujaii…our purpose of coming here is done..so we are thinking to leave now…see you soon and even waiting to hear good news from you…’’

Anika ‘’ok fine…hope I take right decision…by the way, you said Shivaay is bringing both the kids here …why isn’t he here till now…I mean Aunty ji and Samar are waiting since a long time…it’s not good to make them wait for so long’’

Gauri ‘’May be he is struck in Traffic or so…he might be arriving soon…don’t worry’’

Anika ‘’I think so’’

Gauri and Sumo got up and turned to go when Shivaay entered along with Riyanshi and Sahil …..He saw Gauri and Sumo in anger ..while they smiled in return…and left from there……..

———–FLASHBACK ENDS

—————-PRESENT TIME

Anika ‘’so this was the proposal that they were talking about Mr.Oberoi and if you don’t believe me then you can ask Gauri and Sumo’’

Shivaay ‘’but they said that they are coming to talk to you about your marriage’’

Anika ‘’and you believed them Mr.Oberoi……they were trying to pay you back by patching you up with me…they were trying to create Jealousy within you by raising a misunderstanding between us…so that you confront and we talk our hearts out…..and you fell in their trap..’’

Shivaay remained silent…

Anika ‘’ You know what they would have been successful if you…’’

Anika was about to continue when her phone ringed….she picked up the call and

Anika ‘’hello’’

Om ‘’hello Bhabhi…’’

Anika ‘’yes Om …how did you call me?’’

Shivaay became attentive at once and looked towards Anika

Om ‘’bhabhi I was actually trying to call Shivaay but he is not reachable…..do you have any idea about where is he?’’

Anika ‘’wait a minute…I will give the mobile to him….because his mobile is’’

Om ‘’don’t tell me he broke his mobile….’’

Anika ‘’yes …he did so…’’

Om ‘’bhabhi…put the mobile on speaker…I want even you to listen’’

Anika put the mobile on speaker…….

Om ‘’hello Shivaay…….’’

Shivaay ‘’Any news about Mahi..is he fine…when are you coming back…where are you now?’’

Om ‘’shivaay relax…we did not find Mahi…the local police was on their feet to search everywhere in Pune but they are now sure he is not in Pune…as per the locals he was not seen in Pune from past 6 months…that was what I have called to inform you’’

Shivaay looked at Anika…..Anika understood the meaning of his looks..she knew his tadi will not allow him to ask her to find Mahi somehow …..

Om ‘’Now tell me did you think of anything else’’

Anika ‘’Om …you and Rudra come back…I will take up this…I promise I will bring him back at any cost’’

Shivaay didn’t believe that she again read his mind that he needs help from her to bring back Mahi somehow…..he was looking at Anika admiringly……..

Om ‘’thanks Bhabhi…as you say…..we will be in OM very soon’’

Anika disconnected the call and moved away from there, after looking at Shivaay for a while…she knew if she stays there for some more time …she would lose herself to
Shivaay….Shivaay too went behind her ..but she walked almost in running manner and got into her car….Shivaay stopped her from starting the car and tried to apologise and spoke :

Shivaay ‘’Anika……I ..i am’’

Anika stopped him from saying anything further……..She started her car and drove away…..

Shivaay looked disheartened and kicked his car in rage……..he then looked at his car whose tyre was punctured by Anika…he looked for Stepney…but it wasn’t there…he kicked the car again and sat on the nearby rock……looking at the broken mobile and then the punctured tyre…he thought even his life is similar to both those…..

Anika while driving looked in the mirror to see whether Shivaay was coming or not…she didn’t find him …she then realised she had punctured his car tyre……so she turned back and reached Shivaay and stopped car in front of him……..and pushed the door……..Shivaay saw her and very quietly sat in the car not leaving his tadi though……

All the way , while returning he tried to speak to Anika but she did not allow him to speak anything…….finally they reached OM ….She looked at him……..

Anika ‘’your Mansion has come….so…’’

Shivaay got down and bent towards the window and tried to speak ‘’Anika…I ..i am……’’

Anika ‘’Shivaay I need to pick Sahil from office it’s been long time and yeah one more thing I will work on bringing Mahi back …so just assure Jhanvi aunty and other members that everything will be fine’’

Shivaay nodded and again tried to say Sorry ……but this time Anika was not ready to listen to any of his words as she thought she had enough ……Anika drove away to her office…….She dropped Sahil to her home and then straight away went to Central jail where Fauzi, Kamini and Shenaay aka Ragini were held…….

She interrogated all three and got to know whereabouts of Mahi………she quickly called for an operation team and moved towards madh island……..she also called someone and ordered them to do something ……..

——–OBEROI MANSION

Shivaay was sad and in thoughts of the way he spoke to Anika and the way Anika reacted…her words were ringing in his ears ‘’ they were trying to create Jealousy within you by raising a misunderstanding between us…so that you confront and we talk our hearts out…..’’

He sat back in the garden and

Shivaay POV ‘’it is correct …we never spoke our hearts out…had we done that and expressed ourselves then things would have been different…we thought we understand each other and words were not necessary between us…that is true but sometimes words are also important…we could understand what we thought about each other…but we could not understand what we felt about each other….and now I again did a big mistake of alleging her…how can I do this…it’s just today I explained Gauri that we must first try to know everything, understand and react and I forgot what I taught…damn my jealousy has led to all this….how will I make everything back to normal…what must I do now…with whatever have happened I am sure she will never come back to me….ohh God …what have I done…how I really miss being with her and how desperately I want her back in my life …’’

He spoke to himself again and said ‘’No…this time I will do anything but get her back…get her back in my life as my wife…and this I will do it before she leaves me forever…Anika you are going no where …you will have to come back to me ‘’

Om ‘’good Shivaay finally you have decided to bring Anika bhabhi back into your life…we are so happy because of your decision’’

Shivaay looked at both of them and said ‘’OmRu you both here…when…when did you come here?’’

Rudra ‘’When you were speaking to yourself loudly about getting Anika Bhabhi back’’

Shivaay ‘’woh…woh..nothing like that..i was just..’’

OmRu hugged Shivaay and

Om ‘’we know you Shivaay…you are incomplete without Bhabhi…I know we created a misunderstanding so that you both can speak your hearts out…so did it work ?’’

Shivaay ‘’No…I again made your plan a disaster…I fought with Anika….and now she is much angry and she is not speaking to me if it’s something related to our personal matter…I tried to say sorry but she didn’t even let me say so’’

Rudra ‘’bhayya Sorry to say… but in this matter you are much more hopeless than me’’

ShivOm ‘’Shut up Rudra’’

Rudra ‘’What..i am right this time…but don’t worry I will again think of something to patch you up…’’

Shivaay ‘’no thanks Rudra…this time whatever has to be done…I will do and I know what has to be done’’

Om ‘’ok fine..let’s go inside Mom is waiting for you’’

They all left inside and Shivaay explained that Mahi will soon be with them and nothing to worry….Jhanvi was hopeful…..

Shivaay left somewhere

————–MADH ISLAND

Anika with her team reached Madh island fort and she ordered her men to take their position around the fort….She along with some police men entered the fort and started tackling the capturers…she slowly started moving inside the fort and finally found Mahi being captured and tied …Mahi was shocked seeing her …..he whispered A..N..I..K…A…..she could see the surprised and shocked face of Mahi but before anything else to think……she pounced towards him and tried to open the rope when a capturer pointed his gun towards her from behind, ready to release the trigger……

Mahi screamed ‘’ANIKA’’ …seeing the capturer……

Anika looked back to see the trigger being pressed…she immediately pushed Mahi to one side and she switched to other side …but the bullet hit her hand……but the next moment she shot the person who shot her and killed him on the spot and then writhed in pain.….the policemen tackled rest others and took them into custody…….Anika opened the ropes tied to Mahi and asked him to come………

Mahi sat with Anika in her car and looked at her still in surprise and Shock……..

Mahi ‘’Anika you were dead…then how come you are alive’’

Anika ‘’mahi it’s a long story’’

Mahi ‘’ I think we have long time to reach destination so you can tell me…but before that tell me how come you came to help me and if I am not wrong you seem to be a police officer now’’

Anika ‘’Mahi…relax…I am an RAW agent now …so you are right I am a sort of police officer and before I say anything let me tell you YOU ARE AN OBEROI …YOU ARE THE SON OF MR&MRS TEJ SINGH OBEROI’’

Mahi ‘’whaaat?’’

Anika explained him everything…and said

Anika ‘’mahi …Jhanvi aunty wanted you to bring you back ..so Shivaay, Om and Rudra went to find you in Pune and got to know you left Pune 6 months back…so I sprang into action and found that you were kept here…so came to rescue you…now I am gonna drop you to OM as everyone is eagerly waiting for you’’

Mahi ‘’thank you..so much for everything…you have given me back my identity..’’

Anika ‘’I did nothing… you are an Oberoi and you will always be…now enjoy your stay with your family’’

Mahi ‘’but Anika…tell me how you survived and what all happened’’

Anika ‘’How I survived you will know later …….what all happened I will tell you now’’

Mahi agreed

Anika explained him everything what happened two years back that she left the house and what all happened after she came back to Mumbai from Australia………Mahi was shocked and surprised…….

Mahi ‘’So now you have decided to leave India only because of Shivaay ‘’

Anika ‘’yes’’

Mahi ‘’but you are not doing right Anika..you both know it but still’’

Anika stopped the car….and smiled looking at Mahi

Anika ‘’Mahi…I can’t be right everytime…so let me be wrong this time…we have reached the destination …so good luck’’

Mahi ‘’are you not coming in’’

Anika ‘’no…I promised to bring you back …I am giving you back to them..my job is done and I have onemore thing to do before I leave…bring back Pinky aunty and Shakthi uncle …’’

Mahi ‘’but will Shivaay and others accept’’

Anika ‘’I need help from you’’

Mahi ‘’tell me what should I do’’

Anika ‘’explain everyone that people can sometimes be wrong but being a family we need to forgive and forget…only you can do this…because you have done and gone through the same…so explain in your way…’’

While they were talking Shivaay came there with Sahil……Anika was shocked looking at Sahil and Shivaay together……she quickly got down the car…….Shivaay was shocked looking at the condition of Anika….Mahi then got down the car…Shivaay was more surprised to see Mahi with Anika…

Shivaay ran towards Mahi and hugged him while Anika looked both of them happily…and then another car came and stopped beside………Pinky and Shakthi got down from the car …….

Shivaay-Mahi now looked at Pinky and Shakthi …while Anika and Sahil looked at all of them

PRECAP : WILL THE STORY OF SHIVIKA COMPLETE…..MAY BE THE CONCLUSION OF THIS FF !!!

So this was the twenty sixth episode of the FF ………..Please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad is welcome…I will reply as soon as possible….all credits to NIKITA !!!

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65 Comments
  1. Zaveesha

    Woowwwwwwwwwww……..Amazing Harika di… wonderful..the way u nd Nikita di have proceeded towards the story it is just awesome….
    But I was sad seeing that may be the next episode will be last…but no worry everything will come to an end…
    Keep going…
    Keep writing…
    Best wishes…

    P.S. Ahsana di get me a msg for u…She have not commented on ur ff from 19th part as she want a longer comment but she is not getting enough time…she was feeling very sad for this… but I told her that u’ll understand…

    1. Zaveesha

      Di I have a doubt…As much as I remember I don’t think u have revealed how Anika was saved from the accident two year back nd how she become a RAW agent….these questions were in my mind so thought to ask u…

      1. VHM

        Hey Zaveesha..thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you dear to say such awesome words for me and Nikita…..i am so happy that you liked the episode and the FF till now….yeah everything should come to an end…may be the end that will happen tomorrow will not be expected by many of you….so i wam more nervous as even Nikita is not aware of the final episode…..and regarding your question….read episode tomorrow including Author’s note that i added …your every question will ne answered…..love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care

  2. Katz

    Hey vhm. I’m doing well. Shivay always said about rudra that, ” iska kuch nahi ho sakta”. But now, I think about Shivay the same. ” Iska kuch nahi ho sakta “. He always complicated the situation.
    Anyways waiting for the next part and hoping for the best for shivika. Bye and take care….

    1. VHM

      Hey Katz…good to know you are doing good……lol yeah Shivaay ka kuch nahi ho sakta true…yeah i uploaded next episode sometime back and more than you all i am waiting for the episode to get published and then know the responses from you all…..
      keep smiling and take care

  3. Lauren

    Amazinggggg dii… as usual u nailed it…. fantastic…. great thought….. waiting for nxt one… post soon….
    Luv uhh dii…

    1. VHM

      Hey Lauren…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you dear…thank you once again…love you loads keep smiling and take care….next episode i have uploaded some time before……..

  4. Fffan1234

    Superb update. Shivaay is still acting like a stupid.

    Why and how was Mahi captured? Waiting to read more…

    1. VHM

      Hey Dipt…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…his stupidity will turn into maturity in tomorrow’s final episode….and regarding your question ..the answer is also in tomorrow’s episode…….next episode i have uploaded some time before……..keep smiling and take care

  5. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome and a little funny for shivika confrontation…… Love you akka… Thanks for your time and commenting on MMKAD to all my friends and silent readers and.. Tomorrow is going to be last update… So I am feeling sad kyoki AB MMKAD khatam ho jayega…..

    1. VHM

      Hey Nikita…thank you so much dear for the trust on me…i hope i haven’t disappointed you and tried to match up to your creativity and imagination…….thanks a lot …he he he sab kuch kisina kisi time par khatham hona hi hain…iss FF ka end kal hoga…par sirf FF khatham ho raha hain hamara rishtha nahi…isliye dukhi mat rehna…ab ham milthe rahenge..mein aise kyun keh rahi hoon kal poora episode padhne ke baad pata chalega

  6. WOW SUPER
    OHH ONLY ONE PART VERY SAD
    PL COME SOON WITH ANOTHER ONE FOR US

    1. VHM

      Hey Chaithu…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…even i will miss everyone …i am also feeling a bit low now….anyways we will for sure meet tomorrow in next episode page…keep smiling and take care……

  7. Alekhika20

    Amazing update

    1. VHM

      Hey Alekhika…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…hope i will see a longer comment tomorrow on the final episode…fingers crossed

  8. Dhar

    Omggggggggg a mystery built up right at the end…… Dii loved it to the power of infinity…. Plzz do post the next update ASAP.. Waiting to see more from you…… This stupid Singh oberoi will always remain a stupid Singh oberoi…. U rocked it Dii… Plzz do post the next update ASAP

    1. VHM

      Hey Dharani…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….awee so sweet of you dear ……next episode i have uploaded some time before……..love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care

  9. AMkideewani

    Fabulous as always di????

    1. VHM

      Hey Sam…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot

  10. Kavinda1234

    Super. I dont hve any words to describe ur writing skills… really sad that only 1 more part to go ….

    1. VHM

      Hey Kavinda …good to see you after a long time…thank you so much dear..thanks a lot…yep one more episode and we are done with this ff……i too will miss all of you …but we will meet in TU messenger …but first we will meet in tomorrow’s episode page …keep smiling and take care

  11. Amazinggggg

    1. VHM

      Hey Nandhini…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…

  12. Awesome….Loved it…?
    Shivika confrontation was intense & Shivaay’s self introspection too…
    They really need to talk….
    Rudy is right he is more experienced than Shivaay?
    Omru d loyal Shivika shippers, they r d best…?
    Finally Maahi is back….
    How is Shivaay gonna react after seeing Shinky…?
    OMG only 1 more update left…Plz don’t post soon…I’m ready to wait…?
    Lots of love❤

    1. VHM

      Hey Shivika…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…yep i particularly picked Rudy to say that dialogue because i felt he was apt to say it….OmRu are the best brothers anyone can ask for……all your questions will be answered in next episode……yeah one more episode left…i posted it sometime before though with heavy heart…this was a completely special genre for me…well we will meet in the next episode page ..love you loads …keep smiling and take care

  13. Niriha

    Awesome asusual fabulous part di loved it shivika confrontation was ?eagerly waiting for next part update soon di
    Love you ??? Take care

    1. VHM

      Hey Niriha…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode i have uploaded some time before……..love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care

  14. Navz

    Dii..episode is Asusuasl superb..but iam not eeling good..as this ff is coming to an end…??

    1. VHM

      Hey Chotii……thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…even i am feeling low as this ff is ending…but that’s okay we will be in touch through TU messenger…well first we will meet in next episode page.love you loads …keep smiling and take care

  15. fab di… but unite them with a happy ending

    1. VHM

      Hey Sweety…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…expect the unexpected is what i can say now…so we will meet in next episode page and i would love to read your opinion posted there

  16. Madhuani

    Di,I’m sorry as I wasn’t able to comment on last maybe 2 updates as I’m occupied like hell.
    I’m really getting frustrated by this now.
    Well let it be as I can’t do anything of it.
    Updates were tablatodh as I have read them in one go n I felt happy as after reading first I was immediately reading the second one.
    The mu created were able to do some kind of help to make shivaay realise his doing.
    Yup I agree we are able to make others understand about someone’s pov but when it comes to us we really forget about it.
    I myself have given some solutions but when it comes to me I’m terrible.
    Nice to see mahi back.
    But why was he kept captive??
    Take care.
    Love you??

    1. VHM

      Hey Madhu…i will not lie but i missed your tablatodh opinion…however you need not to say sorry because everyone needs their time to invest it in personal matters …and that is understandable…….

      thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…..ha ha ha so you read both episodes at a time so that you are not in cliffhanger position…intelligent move i must say…yes the plan flopped but yet it benefited Shivaay…..i didn’t want to write some extraordinary way of patching up Shivika….so i took my time …hope my thought process is liked…

      The answer to your question is in next episode….next episode i have uploaded some time before……..meet you in next episode page…

      love you loads …keep smiling and take care

  17. Ankita27

    Amazing.. Superb… Fantastic… Mind blowing Nikita n Harika dii.. it is easy to give advice, but difficult for one’s self to follow… shivay ke saath bhi yahi hua.. thank god at last he understood his mistake… Finally shivika ka reunion hoga… Eagerly waiting for the next update.. plz post soon…

    1. VHM

      Hey Ankita…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….true advice is the only thing which is easy to give and difficult to follow….and this what i actually wanted to portray…next episode i have uploaded some time before……..keep smiling and take care

  18. Sagithya

    Awesome amazing mind blowing part di…
    Loved it to the core…. U again nailed it ……
    Y mahi was captured in madh island..
    I was so happy n sad seeing ur precap…
    I wish u to unite shivika n also not to end tis ff…
    Waiting for the next part.. post it as soon as possible…
    Luv u di ? Take care….

    1. VHM

      Hey Sissy…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…the answer to your question is in next episode…even i am feeling low thinking that this FF is coming to an end…but you know we will be in contact …….Shivika union will it happen or not i cannot reveal now…but this FF will end i can say it…there is no point in dragging sissy…i will try to come up with something new as and when something interesting strikes my mind…..but first we will meet in next episode’s page…

      Love you loads dear….keep smiling and take care

  19. Very very nice dear…..loved it..

    1. VHM

      Hey Jane…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot……

  20. Very very nice dear…..

    1. VHM

      Hey Jane thanks again

  21. another amazing epi…. so shjvaay as usual misunderstood anika… he will learn a lesson this time i guess… now therd will be raceoff betweeb Shivay-Mahi n Shinky… also waoting for some shivika nok jhok… so Mukkamal Mohabbat ki daastaan puri hone wali hai…… i don’t want u to end this ff, but as they say all good things come to an end… but llz come up with smthing soon… waiting eagerly for next…

    1. VHM

      Hey Anu…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…hope what you are thinking will happen….will MMKAD complete in all senses…let’s wait for the upcoming episode…i too didn;t want this FF to end so soon …but as you said all things good or bad must come to an end so i am hoping for the best……next episode i have uploaded some time before……..love you loads …keep smiling and take care

  22. Kiki

    This ff is fabulous. Everyday the first thing I do when I take my tab is checking whether u have posted the next part. This is so interesting.
    How do you manage this continuity? I really admire it.
    Waiting for the next update

    1. VHM

      Hey Kiki…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee sos weet of you to let me know that you check for the episode everyday…i am so happy knowing this…thank you once again….i donno about how i manage ..may be because of a very supportive husband and daughter and all the best wishes from readers like you…..thank you so much for the compliments dear…next episode i have uploaded some time before……..keep smiling and take care

  23. Nida

    Superb great ?… soo much of suspense…… I can’t handle anymore .. seriously u again nailed it…… mahi and shivaay union wah beautiful written

    1. VHM

      Hey Bestie…i am so happy that you liked the episode…thanks a lot bestie once again…i felt low for two things today…one this ff is ending …two i will miss you so much…because i get a chance to meet you only when my another write up starts and gets published in the portal…sometimes just to see your opinion i post my os or ff…i will miss you very badly Nida…if possible keep in touch through TU messenger …well but first we will meet in the next episode of this FF…..love you loads keep smiling and take care

  24. Nithu

    akka……………nuvvu super

    1. VHM

      Hey Mohitha…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…nee FF episode kuda superr….

  25. Sairish

    so…finally I finished reading this one too…can’t get enough of this amazing story from you and Nikita di….

    you are a true writer actually..I’m suggesting you to write a novel (may be on thrill or I can say romantic thrill ?❤?) similar like mmkad …plss ..I’m sure you would kill it….and …..”speechless” ..is what all I can say about my reaction after read both 25th and 26th chapter combinedddd….
    feeling sad that it’s gonna end but will be waiting for another such amazing story from you ..????…
    post soon plzz
    TAKE CARE
    loads and loads of love
    Sairish
    ?❤?❤?

    1. Sairish

      that’s reading **
      amm…one more thing i wandered..is the girl in you dp your daughter …
      if so …she is sooooo cute my godd ?❤?❤?..
      I

      1. VHM

        Hey SSAAAAAIIIIIRRRRRRRRRIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHH……..Thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you to see an writer in me…i have started writing a book …offcourse a mystery thriller but kept it in pause…because i have to dedicate completely to write it in alogical and presentable way…and now i don’t have that much time to write…so let’s see when will i complete that…..

        Awee so nice of you once again for that reaction…all credits to Nikita….next episode i have uploaded some time before……..love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care…

        And yeah the DP is my daughter’s pic when she was an year and half…thank you so much for the compliments on the DP…i will give it to my daughter from your end

  26. AMAZING EXCELLENT FANTASTIC GREAT INTERSTING SUPERB??????

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much UF…thanks a lot……

  27. Gayathri.visu

    Funny n bit tadibaaz type confrontation!! And that tyre puncture scene n phone broken scene…..still I can’t control my laughter di…especially Shivaay’s expressions n thoughts when Anika left that place without thinking about Shivaay….LOL!! Finally they confronted each other…uff! ShivOmRu talk n Shivaay’s himself talk….both scenes are awesome di. Wow….Mahi is back(he is back atleast in ur ff). But di who captivated him??? And why?? Sooooooooo sad bcz now only one part is left……but di still u don’t reveal how Anika becomes an RAW agent??? Or already u revealed it?? Shivaay bailed Shinky…..but I expect Anika instead!!!
    Excitingly waiting for next part di.
    Take care n keep smiling….

    1. VHM

      Hey Gayu….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i am so glad to know all the points you liked in the FF…..and regarding the answer to your questions , you will find it out in next episode…
      even i am sad that this FF is ending…how Anika became Jwala …i know this question is pending…read tomorrows episode completely including Author’s note that’s attached…you will know the answer…….next episode i have uploaded some time before……..love you loads…keep smiling and take care

  28. Seriously you nailed it. ..fabulous

    1. VHM

      Hey Komal…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…

  29. Raksha104

    ippayum kallakal akka….all time best……..mindblowing episodes and excellent……………..many mmore words to describe….romba nalla elludhuringa akka…loved it….continue updating…

    1. VHM

      Hey Raksha…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…though i know you have written in Tamil …i can’t understand Tamil…but my gut feeling says that you what you might have written is something like you liked the episodes…sorry if i am wrong …i am being too optimistic…next episode i have uploaded some time before……..keep smiling and take care

      1. Raksha104

        first what i wrote in tamil is “this time also u made a wonder in this episode”…and nxt at last i have written tht “didi!!!u are writing excellently”…..sry i thought u r a tamilian……didi……and just today i read ur last ff in mobile in which i could not signin so i could not comment but….it was awesome as usual…………love u di……always by ur fan……

  30. Wow!!!! Dii again u nailed it by this MINDBLOWING update…. Finally shivaay understand his mistake…. Nxt one is end of this ff…. Miss u di….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Banita…thanks a lot…yeah he understood his mistake in this episode…so i will be waiting to read your opinion on the next episode ……we will meet there and yeah i will miss you too….love you loads…keep smiling and take care

  31. Ashwinee

    Akka as usual great update and all the best for your book which you have started ??

  32. Jerry_36

    Hello Harika Di !
    Sorry for the late comment, but the update was just perfect. I loved everything and of course our adorable Shivika ??
    Great update, Glad that Shivaay accepted his mistake. Love you ❤

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