MUKAMMAL MOHABBAT KI ADHURI DASTAAN ( MMKAD ) – ISHQBAAZ FF – EPISODE 24

Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB….. please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

Shivaay walked outside to talk to Anika…..

Anika ‘’hello Shivaay’’

Shivaay ‘’why are you feeling nervous listening my voice’’

Anika ‘’how did you know…I mean …how did you remember me ?’

Shivaay ‘’I need your help one more time’’

Anika ‘’I did whatever I could…what more is left Shivaay?’’

Shivaay ‘’mahi…we are trying to find Mahi but are not able to get any clue about him’’

Anika smiled

Shivaay ‘’Why are you smiling?’’

Anika was stunned …

Shivaay ‘’now don’t get stunned …I can understand your presence and your every action without seeing you…because I know’’ he stopped …….

Anika was happy and tears of happiness filled her eyes…….

Anika ‘’I think Arjun’s file will definitely have some clue ..because if he has filed about Gauri then I am sure he wouldn’t have missed about the whereabouts of Mahi ‘’

Shivaay ‘’You are right…I didn’t think in that way…thanks for your help…wait a minute how do you know he has filed about Gauri…’’

Anika smiled..

Shivaay ‘’what why are you smiling?’’

Anika ‘’ when I came in search of you to the cliff …..i found your car and the file you left in your car.. I went through the file… though in haste I saw Gauri’s info was in the file.. so I am expecting he might have filed about Mahi too…not sure though…check it and if you don’t find then let me know…if you find it I know you wouldn’t ’’ She stopped

Shivaay ‘’I wouldn’t what?’’

Anika ‘’nothing…when you know me …you might have understood what I wanted to say’’

Shivaay ‘’yes I understood …it’s just I wanted you to say…but I must say …you have become …fine leave it…thank you ‘’

Anika smiled again

Shivaay ‘’When will you learn Anika…when someone says Thank you ..you must say anytime or welcome along with smile….you shouldn’t just smile …..’’

Anika ‘’few things about me will never change Shivaay…bye’’

Anika disconnected the call …Shivaay was saddened….

Shivaay POV ‘’am I doing right making her away from me…I know her as much as she knows me……I also know that living away from her is similar to death for me…..hmmm…but I need to bear this punishment with what I have done with her…it’s true I am not capable of her…she deserves much better life and may be much better person……’’

Shivaay walked towards Om’s room to take the file……..

———-sometime before Omkara’s room

Gauri came running to Omkara’s room and entered it ……..she was looking for Omkara and saw him sitting on the platform near the window with tears flowing from his eyes…face shrinked out of guilt and looking into nowhere……

She neared him and sat before him…..Om saw her and was about to leave……Gauri held his hand and made him sit …….Om looked on

Gauri ‘’Don’t you want to say something to me?’’

Om nodded his head in no …..

Gauri ‘’but I want to say something…will you listen to me’’

Om nodded in yes and said ‘‘hmm’’

Gauri ‘’ I am sorry Omkara ji……I couldn’t understand your state of mind …I just wanted you to know and experience what I was going through…..had I known in which state of mind you came to Bareilly and why you believed what you saw… may be these differences between us wouldn’t have ever aroused…will you forgive me for my rude behaviour with you’’

Om couldn’t speak anything as his voice was not coming out and only his tears were running out…..

Gauri held his face and wiped his tears nodding her head indicating him not to shed any more tears….Om held her hands which were holding his face…..he cleared his throat and took his time to speak….after sometime when he got composed he spoke

Om ‘’I am sorry Gauri…you shouldn’t be sorry…I was a fool to not understand anything…I didn’t see that what you were trying to show me…many number of times you said that whatever I am thinking is not right…I was adamant, stubborn and what not….i always said to Shivaay to see other side of coin in case of Anika Bhabhi…but I forgot that point applies to me too…and when Shivaay made me realise before once …I came to talk to you and very foolishly I started my question with pointing your mistake…..you were right…..when a question starts with suspecting then answer can never be believable even if it’s truth…. I am sorry for everything Gauri…I am really sorry…..i have realized my mistake and I swear I will not hurt you anymore…I promise you about this….i am not asking you to forgive me right now…I am just requesting you not to hate me for my actions that I did before knowing truth….i will wait till you forgive me…’’

Om made her leave her hand from his face and stood up to leave……Gauri just looked at him…Om took few steps …when Gauri spoke

Gauri ‘’Mein aapke bina nahi reh sakti….mujhe aapka saath chahiye…kal bhi chahiye tha..aaj bhi chahiye aur aagey bhi ….kya aap mera saath denge Omkara ji……’’
(I cannot stay away from you…I need you to be with me …I needed it before ..i need it now and I need it further…..will you be with me omkara ji)

Omkara stood in shock because he wasn’t expecting this reaction from Gauri in return of his apology…he turned at once and looked at her…

Gauri was looking at him with hope filled eyes…..Om just ran to her and stopped before her……Gauri’s tears fell from her eyes……Om hugged her and Gauri reciprocated her hug much tight….

Gauri ‘’you haven’t replied me’’

Om ‘’first tell me have you forgiven me’’

Gauri ‘’what else I can say and how else I can say….don’t you understand omkara ji…..i was not angry I was hurt …you should not ask me sorry and I am none to forgive you…I just need you in my life forever….and I realised this long back….your absence makes me go mad …when I saw in TV ; the blast of your car …I decided that I wouldn’t leave you for a single moment when you are back…..i just can’t live without you…’’

Om broke the hug and looked at her….he wiped her tears

Om ‘’you speak a lot…you say all those which I have to say…how can you do so…the lines which you said were my lines to be…I too can’t live without you Gauri…I am addicted to you…your absence makes me feel void….i promise I will never leave you …we will be together for rest of our lives…and this time we will be happily together ….and in this new journey of ours will you support me as you have supported me till now’’

Gauri nodded yes…….

Om hugged her and kissed her forehead…….she was feeling shy ……

Om ‘’Gauri … I …i..’’

Gauri ‘’you ..you..’’

Om closed his eyes took a deep breathe and holding her close said ‘’I LOVE YOU GAURI’’

Gauri felt too shy to face him and hugged him and replied ‘’I LOVE YOU TOO OMKARA JI’’

They both hugged each other and stayed in that position ………….

—————Rudra’s Room Sometime Before

Rudra was sad and disappointed … he didn’t understand how to make himself calm….so he was doing his push up’s and dumbbell’s………he was looking at his Protein shake and was sceptical whether to drink or not…..

Sumo too came running to Rudra’s room……and saw him and his condition …a smile appeared on her face and tears of happiness formed in her eyes….She ran to him…..He looked at her….

Rudra ‘’you here….’’

Sumo ‘’why …should I not come here’’

Rudra ‘’you can come anywhere …this is your house too….i am leaving’’

Sumo ‘’but why? This is your room’’

Rudra ‘’you asked me to leave you alone …so I am going…you know I cannot deny anything you say’’

Sumo ‘’but you said you will not let me go dumbbell’’

Rudra ‘’yes …I said …but I know you…how much ever I try to stop you…if you have decided you will leave….’’ He stopped and just reminded himself that she called him ‘’DUMBELL’’

He quickly looked at her and she was smiling……..He went near her and forwarded his hands to hold her but stopped again thinking she will be angry

Sumo held his hands and made him hold her face…Rudra looked at her and she too reciprocated the looks…..they shared an eyelock……

Rudra ‘’Sumo…I …i…’’

Sumo ‘’you what Rudra?’’

Rudra ‘’Whatever I said to you earlier was truth…I and Bhavya had no affair between us….she came here on a mission and had to stay here for our protection…that’s it…I swear…I am not saying lie…if you don’t believe me you can ask anyone in this house….please ..’’

Sumo closed his mouth making him to stop from speaking anything else…….

Sumo ‘’I know you said truth….and this time it’s not you, it’s me who should say sorry……..i am sorry Rudra…I couldn’t understand you…I felt that you would never accept me or our marriage …..also I was assuming that ..I am not so beautiful as other slim thin girls…and you prefer such type of girls…so I thought I am not fit for you….so I decided to leave……but I felt miserable living in Australia and remembered you every day , every hour, every minute , every second…I just couldn’t stay away from you…and then the misunderstanding about Bhavya made me go much away from you…..i always call you duffer but this time I behaved as duffer…….i am sorry Rudra…I am really sorry’’

Rudra smiled..while Sumo looked on

Sumo ‘’why are you smiling?’’

Rudra ‘’it’s awesome actually..i am dumbbell and you are duffer…rab ne miladi jodi’’ he did his intelligent wala look……

Sumo ‘’Nothing can be done of you Rudra’’ she started hitting him

Rudra ran in the room to escape her beatings and finally gave up as he was tired……She came to him and started hitting him in fun…he quickly pulled her towards him and kissed her cheeks……..

Sumo ‘’Rudra …what are you doing’’

Rudra ‘’Sumo…I love you…….i can’t describe my feelings for you in a beautiful way like all other couples in love do…I just know that I love you and I want you to be with me always…so please don’t go leaving me…please …please…please’’

Sumo hugged him and said ‘’So cute Rudra…and the fact is I LOVE YOU TOO DUMBBELL…and I promise I will not go anywhere leaving you so soon….’’

Rudra again kissed her while she felt shy ………they both hugged each other happily…….

Sumo ‘’Rudra I think …you should go to Shivaay bhayya and thank him for clearing our misunderstanding…’’

Rudra frowned

Sumo explained him what all Shivaay spoke to her earlier……..Rudra was surprised

Rudra ‘’you are right…I should thank bhayya and then I need to speak to O too…’’

Sumo ‘’what?’’

Rudra ‘’you will know soon…see you later…’’

———–present time….

Rudra walked towards Om’s room when he got a call ……….

Rudra ‘’hello’’

Anika ‘’hello Rudra’’

Rudra ‘’haan Bhabhi…what happened?’’

Anika ‘’Rudra I need a help…will you do it for me’’

Rudra ‘’yes Bhabhi…’’

Anika ‘’actually you need to get Riyanshi and Sahil to my office…can you bring them’’

Rudra ‘’but RSJM and your staff were to come and pick them…suddenly me why …I mean is there anything to worry?’’

Anika ‘’no..no..nothing to worry…it’s just I need to submit some paper work…so I need RSJM , Riyanshi and Sahil to be at my office…so I called up RSJM to come to my office ..he will take Riyanshi from here …and thinking about the recent past incidents I don’t want to blindly trust anyone..not even my staff…I would have come but you know… Shivaay will be there and he doesn’t want me to see me again…..so I want you to accompany both of them…can you come with both of them’’

Rudra ‘’don’t worry Bhabhi…why fear when Rudy is here…I will be there with both of them’’

Anika thanked him and disconnected the call

Rudra messaged Sumo……..

————-

Shivaay reached Om’s room and knocked the door…Om and Gauri were still hugging and were in someother world…..

Shivaay called Om and Gauri’s name but got no response….as he was really desperate to get the file and find about Mahi…..he pushed the door ….and he saw both of them enjoying each other’s company….

He cleared his throat to bring them back to reality……with that both of them broke apart the hug and felt shy…Gauri tried to go away from there when Shivaay stopped her and said

Shivaay ‘’I am sorry Gauri..i didn’t want to disturb your moments but I need something very urgent from Om’’

Gauri hugged Shivaay and said ‘’Bhayya please don’t say sorry…all this happiness is because of you…thank you for making an attempt to clear our misunderstanding……you both carry on while I go and check others… ‘’

Shivaay nodded and Gauri left….Shivaay saw Om and Om tried to not meet Shivaay’s eyes……..

Shivaay went to Om and hugged him and said ‘’I am so happy for you Om…always stay happy and enjoy your life with your love and life’’

Om ‘’thanks Shivaay and same to you…I too wish that you change your decision and get back the love of your life or to get back your life’’

Shivaay ‘’we will not talk about it now or anytime soon.…but yes I need Arjun’s file …can you give me…it’s urgent’’

Om ‘’sure ..but what’s the matter?’’

Shivaay ‘’Mom asked me to find Mahi …and she is right … it’s time we bring him back….’’

Om ‘’but what has that matter to do with Arjun’s file’’

Rudra stepped in…….

Rudra ‘’what’s cooking between you two’’

Shivaay ‘’nothing we were discussing about Mahi as mom asked me to get back Mahi home…that’s it…but before that tell me …everything set between you and Sumo’’

Rudra smiled and said ‘’When you step in can anything go wrong mere pujya bade bhayya’’

Shivaay smiled and so did Om……..all three hugged happily and said ‘’DIL BOLE OBEROI’’

Om ‘’shivaay what’s the link between finding Mahi and Arjun’s file’’ he asked while giving Shivaay the file….

Shivaay ‘’ohh ya..actually Dad asked me to call Anika and take help from her to find Mahi as Khanna was unable to find him…so I called Anika and she said that may be Arjun might have some idea about where Mahi is and he might have placed that information in the file…so I came to check the file’’ he answered taking the file

OmRu looked at eachother……Shivaay looked at both of them and said ‘’now what?’’

Rudra ‘’woh..nothing..nothing…Shivaay bhayya’’

He turned towards Om and said ‘’O papa is calling us’’

Om ‘’Mr.Oberoi is calling us…but why?’’

Rudra ‘’how will I know…if we go we will know’’

Shivaay ‘’Om Ru I think you must go…’’

Om ‘’Fine Shivaay…but I will come and help you…so stay back here in my room’’

Shivaay ‘’ok fine…’’

Rudra ‘’O ..ab chale?’’
(O…shall we leave now?’’)

OmRu left from there… Shivaay decided to check the file from the beginning so that he doesn’t miss anything in the file that’s written…so he started with page 1 and immersed himself in reading the file………

——-Garden area

Om ‘’rudra why are we here?’’

He saw Gauri and Sumo there…….

Om ‘’what are you both doing here’’

Sumo ‘’bhayya Rudra messaged me to bring Gauri Bhabhi here and wait for him’’

Om turned towards Rudra and said ‘’First you said lie that Mr.Oberoi was calling both of us… then you brought me here…I am asking you again …what are you upto’’

Rudra ‘’O…I had something very important to discuss with you all’’

Om ‘’then what are you waiting for and what’s so important?’’

Rudra ‘’O, Bhabhi and Sumo…we all know Anika Bhabhi and Shivaay bhayya love each other …but they are just stupidly punishing themselves….don’t you think we must bring them closer…I mean Shivaay bhayya has cleared misunderstanding between me and Sumo ‘’

Gauri ‘’you are saying right Rudra bhayya…he cleared misunderstanding between me and Omkara ji too…it’s payback time…we must do something to bring them closer’’

Om ‘’and do you think this is possible so easily..’’

Rudra ‘’if it’s easy why will Rudra take up this challenge O’’ he spoke upping his collar and making his eyebrows up too……

Sumo ‘’duffer …say that if it’s easy task you wouldn’t need our help’’

Rudra ‘’haan…I mean yes..i need your help in this’’ he spoke accepting the fact

Gauri ‘’I am in…’’

Om ‘’I will do anything to bring both of them closer……so I am also in’’

Sumo ‘’I am already in when Rudra said about this’’

They all joined hands and decided to find a way to bring Anika and Shivaay closer………..

Om ‘’but what should we do’’

Rudra ‘’I have an idea…’’

Rudra said his idea to all three…

Om refused first then raised many questions then disagreed and finally all of them agreed ….

Later Om ran very fast towards Shivaay’s room… while Sumo left towards Riyanshi’s room and Rudra and Gauri walked towards Living room

Precap: What’s the plan of Rudra ? Will plan of OmRi and GaMya work in bringing Shivaay and Anika together……or will it be too late to do so ?

So this was the twenty fourth episode of the FF ………..Please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad is welcome…I will reply as soon as possible….all credits to NIKITA !!!

65 comments

    • VHM

      VHM

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      next episode i will upload in some more time……and coming to unite Shivika, i am working on the storyline…as this FF will end i want it to be loved by one and all

  1. Aashi9

    Aashi9

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    the update’s awesome
    I think even being a shrewd businessman man,SSO is a duffer who can’t see his lady’s love
    where the hell is Mahi gone now?
    update soon

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Aashi …thank you so much dear..thanks a lot…Don’t worry Mahi will be back soon as we are going towards the end…SSO’s realisation phase will be soon…so please bear with me………next episode i will upload in sometime from now

  2. Katz

    Katz

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    Hi vhm… yet another fulfilling episode.Finally rumya and omri’s cleared their misunderstanding. I hope they help shivika to clear their misunderstanding also And successfully completing the mission finding Mahi. Hoping and waiting for the best. Bye and take care

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Katz…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…yes they will help Shivika to clear misunderstanding but they will create a misunderstanding to clear the misunderstanding….you would definitely know what i mean in next episode…keep smiling and take care…next episode i will upload soon

  3. Nida

    Nida

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    I don’t know 🤔 what to write but seriously u nailed it again by your brilliant story…. the bonding between shivomru is the most lovable and amazing 😉 part …

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey bestie…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you dear…thanks a ton…your opinion matters to me the most and when i see you write such lines i don’t how to explain what i feel…keep supporting me bestie

  4. Nithu

    Nithu

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    Akka…ninna night post iyyinappude chusa…kani mrng chadiva…nidra ochindi chala…… epi super undi

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Mohitha…no problem talli…nidra chala important so manchi pani chesavu…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…

      nenu nee ff kosam inka wait chesthuna….nee messages chadivanu moderation nunch inka bayata padaledhani…post aithe matuku link pampinchu….

      • Nithu

        Nithu

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        Uea akka nka post cheyyale vallu malli nit post chesta …..na cousin ochindiii……tana ni shopping teesukoni vellali

  5. Gayathri.visu

    Gayathri.visu

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    Awww!! Fantastic di.
    Shivika is always Shivika, whatever it is they will never change. Shivaay’s Anika Radar worked very well di…ha ha ha!
    Sooooo sweet Rikara. Awesome reunion!
    Aww!! Rumya….cute baby pair of IB. “I m dumbbell n you are duffer……….” LOL di!
    So it’s not Tej but it’s OmRu n RiYa……right di?? Is this ur surprise ending?? But more than surprise now I m curious about their plan di!!
    So eagerly waiting for next part di…
    Take care…..n keep smiling!!!

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Gayu…
      First of all i am so sorry to know about your cousin (brother) ……though unintentional i reminded him…sorry for that…

      Thank you so much Gayu…thanks a lot….i am so glad you liked this..though i could make it more smooth and long ..but i am in a rush mode to end this FF so this is the most i could write…

      Ha ha ha…i too liked that dialogue between RuMya…yes dear..it’s the brother-sister gang to try to unite Shivika…..yes dear this was the surprise ending…

      next episode i will upload soon…

      love you loads…keep smiling and take care

  6. Sairish

    Sairish

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    urghhhh ..how can u write so very well di…..
    SHIVIKA’S convo over the phone was really fantastic ….
    glad that the misunderstanding between gaurika and rumya got cleared…

    rumya were hell cute ..
    “I’m a dumbell and you are a duffer”..this line made my day early morning …
    post soon
    lots of love
    Sairish

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Saiiiiiirrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiisssssssssssshhhhhhhhhhh….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i am so glad you liked the episode…awee so sweet of you dear to say that line ”it made your day early morning”…next update very soon dear….loads of love to you too….keep smiling and take care

  7. Navz

    Navz

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    Aww..todays one is soo beautiful dii…..loved d 2 pairs.
    RUMYA…rab ne miladi jodi….my cutiepiesss…love them.
    Rikara too..soo lovely…
    Now waiting for SHIVIKA to create their spl magic again.

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Chotii….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…….i am so happy you liked the episode…next episode is much of a confusion but next to next will make it clear….loads of love to you dear…keep smiling and take care

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Nikita…thanks a lot dear…glad you liked it …but speacial thanks for the trust on me…akka you saying this is making me smile …i loved it when you wrote

  8. Nikita_jai29

    Nikita_jai29

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    Thanks for your time and commenting on MMKAD to all my friends and silent readers… I am not believing that we are reached till 24 and going to complete silver Jubilee…. Love you all dear for your support….

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Nikita…this is what we can do the least in response to the love and affection, we are getting in response

  9. Zaveesha

    Zaveesha

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    U just nailed it di…awesome.. lovely.. marvelous…wonderful…
    Finally Rikara nd Rumya r together nd happy…
    Amazing story by Nikita di nd very well executed nd written by u…
    Best wishes…

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Tanzeela …thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i am so glad that you liked the episode….awee so sweet of you dear…love you loads…keep smiling and take care..

      P.S. I read your message to not ping you the links…in flow of pinging links to many of the readers this happens with me…so please don’t mind

  10. Niriha

    Niriha

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    Awesome fabulous part di😍😍😍😍loved it I’m will be rudra plan I hope his plan will work eagerly waiting for next update soon di love you 😍😘 Take care

      • VHM

        VHM

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        Hey Niriha…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…well lets see whether the plan will flop or work…next update i will upload very soon …his plan will be shown in execution mode…love you loads …keep smiling and take care

  11. Shivika

    Awesome….😍
    Finally Rikara & Rumya reconciled…😍
    Rumya convo was too cute….I miss Saumya in d show….
    Shivika convo was intense….they r punishing themselves….
    I jst Omru & SauRi they r true Shivika shippers along with Khanna….
    I’m curious about their plan….🤗
    Waiting fr d nxt….😊
    Lots of love…❤

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Shivika…thanks a lot…i am so glad and happy to know what you liked…and yes Shivaay is punishing himself and Anika…there will be confrontation between Shivika……their plan will be shown in execution…..next episode i will upload soon….love you loads…keep smiling and take care

  12. Dhar

    Dhar

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    Finally omru.. Gaumya.. Got justice… Plzz do post the next update ASAP… Loved it to the coreeeee

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Dharani….thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…next episode i will upload very soon….awee so sweet of you dear…keep smiling and take care…love you loads

  13. Pritika

    Pritika

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    good one as always
    sry not able to comment on last few episodes, had some happenings at home
    but read all the episodes together and all are very good

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Pritika…thanks a lot…above all good to see you back…and so sweet of you to read all the episodes together and post your opinion…no problem private family life is very important so absolutely understandable

  14. Sagithya

    Sagithya

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    Awesome mind blowing fantastic fabulous n lovely part di…
    Happy for gauri om rudra n saumya…
    I loved the way of their patch up…
    I wish they all make shivika unite again..
    Excited for the next part… post it soon…
    Luv u take care di…

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey sissy…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…jope krisshi is fine now…awee so sweet of you dear to let me know you liked the patch up…next episode i will upload very soon…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care

  15. UF

    AWESOME CUTE EXCELLENT FABULOUS GREAT INTERSTING MIND BLOWING SUPERB👌👌👌😍😘😍😘😍😘💖💖💖

  16. Nita D

    Nita D

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    Love is in the air…..❤❤
    Awesome episode di….
    Shivika knowing what the other us thinking part was awesome….I had that Deja vu feeling remember the scene in your previous ff when Shivaay goes to pick Champa n Anika calls him? Just that scene came in my mind….
    Also OmRi and Rumya patch up was sweet….waiting for how Shivika patch up works out

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Nita…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…ha ha ha…i totally forgot about the previous FF …yes now i remember that scene…thank you so much dear to let me know you liked the patch up….will the patch up work or will it flop….love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Dipti…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode i will upload soon..and please don’t say sorry dear…it’s okay…today is weekend and it is meant to be a family day …so posting a opinion means a lot…

  17. Ankita27

    Ankita27

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    Amazing up.. loved it… Rumya part was too cute.. All joined hand for shivika reunion… wondering now what’s the plan of rudra… waiting for the next update…

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Ankita…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i am so happy you liked RuMya patch up…yes all joined for Shivika reunion….his plan will be shown in execution…….next episode i will upload very soon

  18. Renimarenju

    Renimarenju

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    Oh My God…Finally in one go, i read all parts….. What 2 say…..all are just amazing my nikki darling……
    Comment in my own style……

    Lamhein kabhi sikhate hein zindagi ko peeche mudkar dekhne ki tareeka

    Judaai kabhi jodte hein toote huye dilon ke rishton ko dil se dil tak

    Jazbein kabhi rulate hein khamoshi ke uss andhere mein jo tanhaa banate hein

    Rootthe hein hum apne aap se toh kabhi guthiyon mein ulajhte hein khud ko

    Raahon mein kabhi bhatakte hein toh do raaston mein mulaqat hote hein kaise ??

    Mohabaat ki iss dastaan ko aur kyaa hum sirf dher saare mohabaat hi de sakte hein…..

    THIS FF WAS A BEAUTIFUL JOURNEY WHICH PORTRAYED CHARACTERS VERY WELL, Nikki darling…. A big standing ovation 2 u……and vhm…… Thanks for sending links…bye….

  19. Jerry_36

    Jerry_36

    |Registered Member

    Hey Harika Di !
    The update as usual awesome and more than fantastic. All the emotions were perfect at their place and just made me appreciate you more. Love your writing to the core.
    Love to you !❤

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