MUKAMMAL MOHABBAT KI ADHURI DASTAAN ( MMKAD ) – ISHQBAAZ FF – EPISODE 23

Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB….. please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

After sometime Om and Rudra came to Shivaay’s room as he called both of them……..OmRu came to Shivaay while Shivaay looked at both of them in anger……He kept the file aside and stared both of them once again…….

Rudra ‘’Bhayya…you seem to be very angry…please calm down bhayya…we cannot change whatever happened now…but we can change what will be happening further’’

Shivaay ‘’exactly …that’s why I am angry on both of you’’

Om ‘’Shivaay what’s the matter?’’

Shivaay ‘’You know what every married woman want…they don’t want their husband to be only theirs…they want their husband to : value her , trust her , give time to nurture their relationship and above all respect their relationship…Our father Mr.Tej Singh Oberoi and Mr.Shakthi Singh Oberoi Failed in doing so……. and having been bron to one and bought up by other , I failed in doing so …..and you are very clearly seeing the consequences…but I am warning you both beforehand … don’t do the same mistake as we all did….learn from the mistakes OmRu…it’s high time and before any unwanted situation arises set everything right’’

Om ‘’Shivaay what exactly do you mean’’

Shivaay ‘’I am talking about your equation with Gauri and Rudra’s equation with Sumo….Gauri and Sumo are perfect match for you and Rudra respectively…..but you both are unable to understand this fact…..you have so many misunderstandings between you and you haven’t taken even a step to solve those…I know may be I was the reason for this as you were busy in solving my issue and taking care of me……but now it’s high time OmRu…go and get the love of your lives before you come to my state….’’

OmRu looked on ………while Shivaay was extremely sad for his state and tears formed in his eyes……

Shivaay ‘’Om …I want you to know some truths which did not come to your notice…may be after knowing that you will also value Gauri’’

Om frowned

Shivaay gave him the file that Arjun left for Shivaay and said

Shivaay ‘’Om ….read this file page number 10 …….you will know that truth which I am talking about …after you read meet me……..’’

Om took the file and left…….

Shivaay turned towards Rudra and said

Shivaay ‘’Rudra …Sumo is angry with you and her anger is justified too’’

Rudra ‘’bhayya …I never hurt her…I don’t even understand why she is angry with me’’

Shivaay smiled seeing the innocence of his little brother and brushed Rudra’s hair and spoke

Shivaay ‘’Rudra, Tell me onething can you be able to see Saumya being with someother person anytime in your life ?’’

Rudra instantly said ‘’no way…I will just kick the person who is with Sumo…sumo is my wrestler…only mine ‘’

Shivaay ‘’exactly …then when you were with Bhavya …what must have Sumo undergone ?’’

Rudra ‘’Bhayya…but Bhavya ..i mean we had no relation between us…you know it’’

Shivaay ‘’I know what happened…you know what happened…OF members who were present here then know what happened…but how will sumo know what happened……was she is OM then ? No…….so being somewhere else and knowing that I announced your marriage with Bhavya under whatever situations it may be…anyone in Sumo’s place will get hurt…..’’

Rudra ‘’you mean that’s why she is hurt …thinking that I had affair with Bhavya soon after she left’’

Shivaay nodded his head in agreement

Rudra ‘’ohh shoot !!! I am really Duffer bhayya…I didn’t think this way and was all the while thinking why is she avoiding me…..’’

Shivaay ‘’we always knew you were duffer …..nothing new…So go now….talk to her…explain her…and if required apologise her…I am sure she wouldn’t be and can’t be angry for much time…..go Rudra…get your love back…..’’

Rudra hugged Shivaay and walked towards his room……Shivaay smiled and sat back thinking how stressful the past days were and how stressful the coming up days would be turning up for him……

Riyanshi and Sahil entered just then…….

Shivaay took both of them near him and hugged both of them …he pampered Riyanshi a lot ……

Riyanshi ‘’Shivaay bhayya…today papa is coming to take me…’’

Shivaay ‘’I know…it’s good ..you will be staying with your Papa now…he will give you lots of love’’

Riyanshi ‘’I don’t want to go with him…I want to stay with you…’’

Shivaay ‘’You shouldn’t say like that Riyanshi…because papa is very good and he loves you more than anyone’’

Riyanshi ‘’no..papa used to come once in three months to meet me…I used to miss him a lot…but you are not like that…you every day come to me ..spend time with me…you have also got me admitted in a school where Sahil bhayya is studying….i love you shivaay bhayya…please don’t send me with papa’’

Shivaay hugged her again and wiped his tears and later Riyanshi’s tears and said

Shivaay ‘’Riyanshi…papa is alone now and also your dadi…so you should take care of them…you are big girl now na…so stay with them..i promise I will call you everyday and talk to you everyday without fail…..also every month I will send you a gift ……’’

Riyanshi ‘’Pinky Promise’’ she smiled and extended her little finger ……

Shivaay reminisced Anika and sadly extended his little finger saying ‘’pinky Promise’’

Riyanshi Kissed his cheeks and said ‘’I LOVE YOU BHAYYA’’

Sahil looked at their bonding and smiled…….

Shivaay ‘’Sahil …today your Anika didi is going to pick you …from now on she will be taking care of you as she used to do earlier…so make sure that she never feels sad…keep her happy …..make her smile….and yeah…take these papers’’

Shivaay gave him some papers….Sahil looked on…..

Shivaay ‘’you asked me to take you to the chawl two years back when we all thought Anika died….that day I decided that I will gift you the entire chawl …and these papers are those…from now on the entire chawl is yours…that entire land is yours….do whatever you want to do…go whenever you want to go….are you happy’’

Sahil gave him back the papers…….

Sahil ‘’you are very bad jiju’’

Shivaay was shocked and asked ‘’Why are you saying so? Did I do anything wrong?’’

Sahil ‘’yes…you asked my didi to stay away from you…you are very bad…..why can’t you both stay together….why should I always get divided between you two ? if she is there , you will not be with her…if you are there, she will not be with you……I asked you to take me to the chawl and you bought me the entire land …now I am asking you get my didi back to you and then own me…else I am never yours and I don’t want anything from you’’

Sahil left in anger from there …….Shivaay was heart broken………….

————Om’s room

Om opened the file and went to page 10 as specified by Shivaay…….He started reading Arjun’s words to Shivaay about him

Arjun’s words

‘’Shivaay…..Being an agent I had to find out everything about every family members of yours…so I had to find out about Gauri too……
Gauri as her name and as she looks… she is the same …innocent and clean hearted…..the circumstances had never been good to Gauri….Her mom being sick and her aunt and uncle cruel …she had fought with every circumstance…..but somehow she couldn’t fight with one trouble named Kali Thakur……..
—————–Arjun narrated all the incidents involving Om, Gauri and Kali Thakur…….he also went to tell about Buamaa and her mental state… ————————– ‘’

Om completed reading and closed his eyes ……his guilt started eating him…he was almost in the same state as Shivaay was sometime before……….
Tears welled up in his eyes…he couldn’t understand how to apologise to her…..he went to his craft room and started painting ……..

—————————Sumo’s room

Rudra knocked the door of Saumya…..she came and opened the door…as soon as she saw Rudra she tried to close the door but Rudra was adamant enough and pushed the door and entered…..

Sumo ‘’what do you want Rudra?’’

Rudra ‘’I need to talk to you………’’

Sumo ‘’there is nothing left to talk Rudra…I am leaving tomorrow to Australia…as my work of coming here ended’’

Rudra ‘’you will not go anywhere’’

Sumo ‘’who are you to stop me?’’

Rudra ‘’your husband’’

Sumo was shocked listening to him……….Rudra nodded and repeated his line ‘’I am Your Husband Sumo and this time I am not letting you go anywhere’’

Sumo ‘’you can’t stop me saying this nonsense’’

Rudra ‘’Non-sense…do you really think so…that I being your husband is non-sense’’ he held her tight and close to her looking into her eyes with much intensity

Sumo ‘’leave me Rudra…you are saying nonsense…because you are married to Bhavya..and that too ….’’

Rudra ‘’have you gone mad Sumo…it’s true I announced marriage with her…but that was just fake’’

Sumo ‘’Rudra..initially our marriage made no sense to you…it was fake according to you…then you are saying your announcement of marriage with Bhavya is also fake….what is real then’’

Rudra ‘’sumo let me explain you what happened …….’’

Sumo ‘’I don’t want to hear anything…just leave and let me live in peace….the pain you have given me is enough for a lifetime Rudra…I am not in a position to take more pain’’

Rudra ‘’what you are thinking is wrong…Bhavya and I have no relationship between us not even friendship…she used me ….she just used me……this is the only truth…whether you believe it or not…and I have only one relationship with one woman…that is you and you are my wife…this is the only truth’’ he said in one go……..

Sumo just looked on ……she had tears …but she couldn’t forget and forgive Rudra so soon……

Sumo ‘’you said what you wanted to…now listen to me…..i just can’t believe you…so leave from here’’

Rudra felt very sad and left from there……

———-Om’s ART ROOM

Om painted all the events which he misunderstood about Gauri…he depicted his feeling through those paintings as to how wrong he was and what all wrong he did with Gauri…the last but one painting depicted him holding his ears infront of Gauri and the last painting depicted him folding his hands asking forgiveness from Gauri …

After completing his paintings… He left a note to Gauri …later he messaged Gauri to come to his art room as he had something very important to talk to her….Gauri read the message and started towards Art room…….Om left the art room before Gauri came

Gauri entered and looked for Om and found him nowhere…she was about to return when she saw a note for her……she opened it……

‘’Gauri …probably today what I am going through cannot be explained through words …so I painted everything…open the paintings and see them …I hope you will understand and forgive me….i am not able to face you …so I am leaving ….I AM SORRY GAURI…I HAVE DONE AND BEEN SO BAD TO YOU…I AM SORRY…PLEASE FORGIVE ME’’

Gauri was confused and she went to the paintings and opened one by one…after she saw each painting her heart started melting….and when she reached the end she was crying….she then understood what Om meant in the note…..she being teary eyed reached the garden……

————Garden

Sumo after asking Rudra to leave ..cried in her room …she was feeling miserable and suffocated …she reached the garden to have some fresh air and to calm herself…..she sat in the garden and was in thoughts……..Gauri too reached there….

They both looked at each other and smiled……

Gauri ‘’saumya …you here…is everything fine?’’

Sumo ‘’yeah…yes Bhabhi…everything fine….’’

Gauri ‘’but you don’t seem so’’

Sumo ‘’tomorrow I am leaving from here….so feeling sad’’

Gauri ‘’but why are you leaving…this is your house …you can stay here and even Rudra will be happy if you are with him’’

Sumo ‘’no Bhabhi…I must go back where I came from…’’

Shivaay who saw both the ladies being in the garden came to them……..Sumo and Gauri smiled and he hugged them both……

Shivaay ‘’so I think Om and Rudra have spoken to you by now’’

Gauri and Sumo looked at him in surprise

Gauri ‘’Omkara ji didn’t speak to me…but he said every unspoken thing through his’’

Shivaay ‘’through his paintings ..am I right?’’

He turned towards Sumo and said

Shivaay ‘’and Rudra must have continued his childish behaviour of being adamant and screamed that his announcement of marriage with Bhavya is fake and he wouldn’t let you go anywhere this time’’

Again it was turn of Gauri and Sumo to get surprised

They both together said in union ‘’but how do you know all this bhayya?’’

Shivaay ‘’because they are my brothers and I know them…and today I want to say something to you too…I know I could say this to you both earlier…but I first wanted my brothers to correct their mistakes…so I waited till they convey you in their own way….also I know I shouldn’t interfere in your personal matters ..specially matters between husband and wife…but seeing the circumstances and situation I had to do this………’’

Sumo and Gauri looked on while Shivay looked at Gauri and said

Shivaay ‘’

Gauri…there is one major difference between thinking of men and thinking of women regarding the relationships.…when a women sees or knows something about her husband or the one she loves …most of the times ,she immediately doesn’t believe..she tries to analyse, think about every aspect and finally if she is completely satisfied to believe… then she believes that what she heard or saw is truth…….

But men are not so….we believe what we see…we believe what we hear and we come to conclusion with what we saw and what we heard…..we never try to understand the intentions behind…because our method of thinking is not designed in that way….and this creates a major rift…as it happened in your case…’’

Gauri and Sumo Looked at Shivaay trying to understand what he exactly wanted to say…Shivaay looked at them and said

Shivaay ‘’

Om saw you with Kali Thakur…he believed that you were wrong…Om heard your war of words with Bua maa and he believed you were wrong….
I am not saying he is correct but I am saying he is not wrong too…..he was in a very different state of mind at that time …His father..i mean our father literally was about to kill our mom for other woman..and when he saw the Thakurain in same state and the reason for kali Thakur to burn thakurain was to gain you…he became helpless and disagreed to believe you….secondly in case of bua maa…you knew what has happened to her son…saving Om , Ratan died so Om was guilty from a very young age and he could not help himself but to agree with what bua maa said and did ..may be a way to repay what her son did for him……

Now tell me had you been in his state would you react the same way or would you react in other way…’’

Gauri nodded her head in agreement…….Shivaay Continued

Shivaay ‘’ You yourself agreed that you would have reacted the same way as Om did……so now it’s in your hands whether you want to forgive Om and move on forgetting everything or you want to continue with misunderstanding…I will not force you for anything …but all I can do is to request you to analyse and understand his situation…rest the decision is yours and whatever you decide I am always with you !!
’’
Gauri hugged Shivaay and said ‘’Omakara ji is lucky to have you in his life Shivaay bhayya and me too…because no one could have explained both of us better than you did today….i cannot live without Omkara ji and this is the truth bhayya….i always wanted him to understand my point of view…but in all this I forgot to understand his state of mind ……so you know what I am going to do now’’ she smiled

Shivaay hugged her back and smiled…she ran towards her room smiling …….

Shivaay turned to see Saumya smiling looking at Gauri…….

Shivaay ‘’so you decided to leave tomorrow…..when you have decided I think I cannot change your this decision…’’

Sumo ‘’bhayya I will always respect your opinion…if you say I would stay back and you know this..’’

Shivaay ‘’don’t stay because I said…stay if you are happy being here….happy being with Rudra…….but let me tell you whatever Rudra said is truth……..yes it’s true …Bhavya was here in the Oberoi mansion because of me…..it was me who spoke to Commissioner and brought Bhavya as wife of Rudra in very unexpected circumstances……Bhavya was friends with Rudra…I could see Bhavya developing feelings for Rudra but I never saw Rudra having feelings for Bhavya….We all were the witness of how much Rudra missed you……Sumo
in your case , Rudra did only one mistake and that was the biggest mistake of his life…he allowed you to leave for Australia not realising the importance of his relationship with you and not realising his feelings towards you….but you did much bigger mistake …you concealed your feelings thinking Rudra would never accept you…had you made him explain… then I am sure you both wouldn’t have faced this day…….Sumo marriage is not a game..it is a strong bond… in whatever circumstances it might have happened….and when a marriage breaks the pain that the couple undergo is unexplainable…and who better can understand this than me……so decide yourself what you want to do…..and as I said to Gauri …whatever may be your decision I will always be there for you and with you …’’

Sumo smiled and said ‘’You are the best bhayya and whatever Gauri Bhabhi said is true…we all are lucky to have you ….’’

Shivaay ‘’’I am not best…this is Anika’s thought…hadn’t she enlightened me to patch up you all …then probably this might have not happened anytime soon……go now…go and get your husband…before he does something stupid again’’

Sumo laughed and went towards Rudra’s room……

Shivaay felt satisfied that his brother’s life was going to get settled…….he smiled contentedly for that………

————OM Living room

Shivaay came from Garden and saw Tej, Jhanvi and Dadi sitting worried in Living room of OM…….

Shivaay ‘’what happened ? why are you all looking worried?’’

Tej ‘’as usual Media……they got to know Shakthi and Pinky being arrested and are telecasting all sort of fake news…..’’

Shivaay ‘’don’t worry dad…I will handle them’’

Tej smiled and said ‘’I know you will handle’’

Jhanvi was still in thoughts

Shivaay ‘’mom…I said I will handle so don’t worry…’’

Jhanvi ‘’shivaay I am not worried about that…I am worried about Mahi…we have to get him back home…he is your brother and my child…I want him back at any cost’’

Dadi ‘’yes Billu…we have to get him back’’

Tej ‘’I tried to find him out but I have no clue where he is now…he disappeared two years back and till now he is seen nowhere…….’’

Shivaay was in thoughts………

He picked up his mobile to call Khanna …while Tej informed that he has already ordered Khanna to find Mahi ……Khanna tried a lot and sent his men to every location in Mumbai but in Vain….he finally called up Tej and said that Mahi was found nowhere in Mumbai……

Tej, Jhanvi and Dadi were much worried…….

Tej ‘’I think one person can help us in this’’

All three looked at him

Tej ‘’Anika…….yes Anika can help us in finding Mahi…’’

Shivaay ‘’but Dad’’

Tej ‘’Shivaay …I got to know Kamini is in custody and is facing the interrogation for helping Shakthi…so even if we use our power and name we cannot go and meet her…also if we
ask her I am sure she will not respond to us…so in this case Anika is the only one who can help’’

Shivaay ‘’but’’

Jhanvi ‘’please Shivaay…talk to Anika and bring my child back…please’’

Shivaay ‘’but mom even you can talk to Anika about this…I am sure she will not deny you’’

Jhanvi ‘’She will not deny if we ask but if you ask her it will be more effective’’

Shivaay was in thoughts and he picked his mobile and dialled Anika’s number….Anika kept herself busy in some work and seeing her phone ringing…..she picked up the call……..

Shivaay ‘’Hello Anika’’

Anika was stunned and her heartbeat started raising ………..

Precap : Confession of feelings between Omkara – Gauri and Rudra – Saumya…… will Anika agree to help Shivaay in finding Mahi ?

So this was the twenty third episode of the FF ………..Please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad is welcome…I will reply as soon as possible….all credits to NIKITA !!!

74 comments

  1. Navz

    Navz

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    Just awesome dii….loved the way omkara expressed his feelings through paintaings.
    Shivays convo with gauri and sumo are 😍😍😍..such an sweet and caring brother.
    Felt really bad for sahil..poor kid.
    Again shivay and riyanshis talk is soo good.
    Now..SHIVIKA are again turning up into a team..and when they makeup a team..THEY ARE ALWAYS SUCCESSFUL.
    Loved d episode dii.

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Chotii…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i am so glad you liked the episode…hmmm will Shivika team up to find Mahi…not sure …let’s see ….love you loads dear..keep smiling and take care….

  2. Nida

    Nida

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    Soo proud of you … today i can totally say that you are an excellent in every field either it is this ff or your family… the way you have written this part seriously you nailed it….. and conversation between shivaay, gauri and samuya is something beyond the level

    • VHM

      VHM

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      OMG Bestie…you are taking me to highest floor of the building with your compliments…i am not sure about this FF but in my family i am the most immature and childish mentality person..i swear i am not saying lie…but in any problem scenario i behave matured…awee so sweet of you dear…for those amazing lines…love you loads…keep smiling and take care

  3. Nikita_jai29

    Nikita_jai29

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    It is awesomeeeeeee diii…. Love you…. And thanks for your time and commenting on MMKAD to all my friends and silent readers….. Dii you are my big sister… You have full right to scold me.. correct me…. appreciate me…. So don’t hesitate to do it… I will be happy as have a big sister now… Love you….

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Nikita…thank you for having trust on me and very confidently asking me to write this FF….hope i kept your expectations…and regarding scolding you…i never scold anyone dear…whatever might be the scenario…being an elder the maximum i can go to a limit is to give and advice in a strict way…love you loads…keep smiling and take care

  4. Priyadas

    Priyadas

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    Di I don’t have anything to convey. You are leaving me at loss of words and speechless. Just awesome. Everything is just apt and very perfect. You are just flawlessly describing Shivay and opening loads of shades which real Shivay might have not taken in ib too.
    And like you said in your previous comment on the last chappy I am not liable for that tag as an author instead you are the one who is decked with that tag. Right from the day I have started reading your FFS.

    Do come up with the next soon. Till then take care.

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Priya…thank you so much dear..thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you dear to write such sweet words…i always wanted Shivaay to open and speak his inner voice in real IB so i am writing all these scenes as per my imagination…and i am glad most of you are liking it…thanks again dear…love you loads …keep smiling and take care

  5. AnuluvsIB

    AnuluvsIB

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    Wow.. now the story in turning from mystery into emotional family plot.. vey well woven.. the kinda continuity u guys maintain is amazing!! But sad that it will get wrapped up soon 🙁

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Anu…thank you so much …thanks a lot…had to keep up the mystery and suspense aside for sometime as this track was necessary to bring the FF to an much sensible end….mystery will be back very shortly …..thank you for the support

  6. Lauren

    Lauren

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    Amazinggggg…. phenomenal….. loved it.. great…. awesome… hell desperate to read d nxt part ….. post nxt soon… as usual no words to express…
    Luv uhh dii…

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Lauren….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode i will upload in sometime from now….awee so sweet of you dear….thanks a lot again…love you loads …keep smiling and take care

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Chaithu…thank you so much …thanks a lot…next episode i will be uploading in some time from now

  7. Niriha

    Niriha

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    Awesome di…Om expressed his feelings through paintings was👌shivay, gauri and sumo conversation was fabulous loved it 😍😍di update next part soon di
    Take care… Love you 😍😍😘😘

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Niriha…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you dear to let me know that you liked the episode…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care…next episode i will upload in sometime from now…….

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Komal…thanks a lot…OMG so many amazing words are making me feel so special…thanks again dear

  8. Zaveesha

    Zaveesha

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    Outstanding….
    Superb…
    Excellent….
    _________________________
    Fill words by youself di…as I’m not having any words left….
    Love nd wishes…

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Tanzeela…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i don’t know what to fill so let’s leave the blank like that…because i know and feel that you liked the episode…that’s enough for me to become so very happy….lots of love to you dear…keep smiling and take care

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much UF…i was actually thinking to reply to you in bold letters as you always do…i am really gonna miss this after i end this FF off course with the permission of Nikita

  9. Madhuani

    Madhuani

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    You are my TABLATODH DI.
    After reading this part:
    I’m so glad that you consider me as your sister.
    There are a lot of things that I need to learn as an individual from you.
    I guarantee that you are an amazing person inside out.
    Your family is so lucky to have you by their side.
    You indirectly many a times have given a solution to my problem through your writing.
    I would love to learn a lot more things from you.
    Through this part I got to know you more.
    How thankful I’m of almighty n tu also to give me a sister like you.
    You are truly an inspiration for me.
    Zyada senti hogai na mai…kya kru aap ho hi itni zabri ki mai khudko rok hi nhi paayi aaj.
    The way shivaay made 4 of them understand was superb.
    Omkara’s way of apologising I liked it.
    You thought of this way as he made gauri’s maa sketch when the frame broke,right?
    Rudy’s way was as per his character childish.
    What a bond shivaay-yanshi n shivaay-sahil had developed brilliant.
    Yanshi n Sahil are really sweethearts.
    Tej is being behind anika for some reason I think as first he asked her to arrest shinky n now want her help for finding mahi??
    Maybe I’m overthinking don’t know.
    See you made me jassos suspecting everyone.
    But ssly tablatodh update.
    Take care.
    Love you loads😍😘😍😊😘😍

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Madhu…OMG you are praising me …like i didn’t do any such thing that i had to be praised for my personality…i don’t know whether my family is lucky or not…but i am sure that i am so lucky to have so many sisters through TU and every one is equally special to me…and regarding learning from me…i am a very normal person dear…like literally ordinary person…nothing special …

      coming to this episode …Omkara’s way of apologizing through paintings is coincidental to what had happened in real IB ..but the fact is .. when i am stressed or depressed…i usually paint or craft something to let my stress released…i used the same idea and somehow Om being an artist in real IB helped me in writing those scenes…..

      True when i wrote those scenes of little riyanshi and Shivaay i myself smiled reading those…those were the best in my personal view as a reader of the episode…

      I haven’t yet planned who will help whom in bringing Shivaay and ANIKA together because i haven’t yet decided about Shivika’s reunion…i don’t want to rush as this will give lot many loopholes so keeping myself cool and trying to write sensible episodes further so that i get no chameli’s…

      Ha ha ha Jasoos ..this ff definitely had made you that…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care….

      Tablatodh..Plangtodh…i just love these words…i my next work whenever i come back i am gonna use these words through Anika and / or Rudra………i donno …i just love them…

  10. Ankita27

    Ankita27

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    Amazing update dii… loved shiv-shahil-riyanshis talk… Finally Rumya scene superb… hero of the story ‘shivay’ just phenomenal.. he is world’s best brother.. Eagerly waiting for the next update.. post asap…

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Ankita…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…gald that you liked the conversation between the kids and Shivaay and Shivaay’s brother role in the FF…next episode i will be uploading in sometime from now

  11. ammu

    hi diiiii, really loved the revelation part. Shivay being son of tejvi was unexpected. But I feel like this is the apt storyline for illegitimacy track. Shivay is not illegitimate. But pinky’s words are true in their own way. U know this is what I love most abt ur ffs. Well planned,well explained and logical.
    sorry 4 being late .Take care…..

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Ammu…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i am so very happy and glad to know you liked the revelation plot and found it apt…awee so sweet of you dear to say those words about me…no worries you can post your opinion any time…keep smiling and take care

  12. Dhar

    Dhar

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    Finally both the brainless Singh oberois got their brains back…….. Loved it to the coreeeee…. Dii u rocked it…. Plzz do post the next update ASAP

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Dharani…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot..yes finally all four have got their brains back to track…thank you so much once again dear…love you loads…keep smiling and take care…next episode i will upload in sometime from now

  13. Anu16

    beautiful epi di…. its one of those which brings a smile on ur face… omkara’s way of asking for forgiveness was suprerb… shivaay telling about his brothers and explaining the problems between a husband wife was nice…. awesome precap…, waiting eagerly for next….

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Anu…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i am so glad you liked the episode…and thank you for letting me know what all you liked…it just bought a smile on my face…next episode i will upload in some time from now…..

  14. Sagithya

    Sagithya

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    Awesome mind blowing fantastic fabulous lovely part di…..
    I loved the way of om saying sorry to gauri.
    N the way in which shivaay explain gauri n saumya about om n rudra…..
    I loved the idea of explaining om rudra gauri n somu…
    Excited for the next part
    . post it soon…

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Sissy…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you dear to let me know that you liked the idea…i am so happy that you liked the episode….don’t have too many expectations from next episode as he best is yet to come…next episode i will upload in some time from now…..

  15. Jerry_36

    Jerry_36

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    Super one Di !!!
    Just fabulous and marvellous !
    Every time you surprise us “Beautiful Shocks”😉😉
    But I love then as the way I love you, you are awesome girl with lot of potential, write a novel Di !!!
    Seriously I think you should.
    Love you !❤

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Vedika…first of all thank you for uploading the next episode of yours…it was as usual fabulous…whenever possible read my comment on your FF…

      Coming to this episode…thanks a lot dear…thank you so much for all those awesome words for me…actually i started writing a book obviously mystery one but kept it under pause as i want to dedicate most of my time to write it to perfection….but now with my daughter having holidays i can’t do so…and whenever i am done with writing the book i will definitely let you know….

      thank you so much once again dear…love you loads …keep smiling and take care

      • Jerry_36

        Jerry_36

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        Wow ! You are seriously writing a book. Well, will love to read it once it is published. Give some acknowlegements to me too !!😂😂😊😊😀😁, Jokes apart will be waiting for it.

  16. Fffan1234

    Fffan1234

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    Hey Harika that was absolutely khidkitod update. Sorry for writing a small comment today but I have no words to express my emotions.

    Anger on Shivaay reduced some more. Waiting to read motr

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Dipti…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…by the end of this FF you would again start loving/liking Shivaay …i would ensure you do so…this phase of hating to reduced hating to having no opinions to liking to loving Shivaay will be a process that i want to know through your opinions…hope i succeed in this effort….next episode i will upload in some time from now…..

  17. Sairish

    Sairish

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    speechless …😍😍😍😍😍
    neither can’t not want to say much ….
    just speechless…
    keep writing plzz
    i literally love u and the story
    lots and lots of love
    Sairish
    😘😘😘😘
    ❤❤❤❤

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Saiiiiiiirrrrrriiiiiiiiiiisssssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhh………..thank you so much dear..thanks a lot…sometimes feelings speak volumes than words and through your opinion i can feel what you want to convey…i love you too dear…love you loads…keep smiling and take care…

  18. Shivika

    Awesome…Loved it…..
    Shivaay explaining Omru & SaumRi…
    Om expressing himself through his paintings & Rumya confrontation was 😍
    Feeling sad for shivaay….
    Shivaay’s convo with sahil & Yashi was heartwarming….
    Khidkitod update u gave…..
    Waiting fr d nxt….😊
    Lots of love ❤

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Shivika…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i am so happy you liked the episode and the way of apologizing and/or convincing….awee so sweet of you dear…thanks again a lot….love you loads…keep smiling and take care…next episode i will upload in some time from now…..

  19. Shivika

    Awesome….Loved it……❤
    Rumya confroconfrontation & Om expressing himself through paintings was 😍
    Shivaay’s convo with Yashi & Sahil was heart warming…..
    Shivaay’s bonding with everybody is amazing…..
    A total khidkitod update….👍
    Waiting fr d nxt……😊
    Lots of Love❤

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Shivika….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…so happy to know you liked the episode and very glad to learn what all you liked…Shivaay had become vulnerable after separation and now he has to be back as Great wall of Shivaay and so i brought this…and i am glad most of the readers liked it…next episode i will upload in some time from now…..love you loads and loads…keep smiling and take care…

  20. Gayathri.visu

    Gayathri.visu

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    Excellent didi!! Really u r great writer n very good person in life. And I really want to meet u, I m waiting for u di.
    Shivaay’s words are evidence how much mature u r in ur life! Just wonderful!!
    Om expressed his feelings through his paintings…WOW! Perfect…..!
    Rudra….ha ha still cute big baby!!
    ShivRiYa……I loved them. Such a beautiful n mature bonding. Riyanshi n Shivaay convo was emotionally written very well di.
    Oh….poor cutiepie Sahil! So sad for him!! Di, Tej trying to unite Shivika????? And di, today Shivaay(ur ff Shivaay) reminds me my big brother(not real brother but more than real brother just like Obros). I miss him very much!
    Waiting for next part di….
    Love u loads. Keep smiling n take care di!!

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Gayu…i donno what to say regarding the first statement you wrote about me…so will not write anything about it…
      Yes the next time i an in Chennai i will definitely come to Kanchi to have darshan of Kamakshi amma and then you too…i will inform you before hand in FB so that we both can decide on time and place of meet…but we still have lots of time….

      Though it was coincidental with what was shown few days back in Ib …but i am like that in real life…if i get stressed i do art and craft and that made me write those scenes…glad most of the readers liked it…Rudra i just love his character in real IB so decided not to change anything about him …he should and will be childish….Shivaay coming back to being Great wall of Shivaay …i am loving this phase of Shivaay in the FF as a reader not author…..

      Who will unite Shivika whether Shivika will unite is still not decided …but…but…tomorrows episode end will definitely be surprising….

      Ohh is it…how lucky is he to have a sister like you…if you miss him talk to him …i believe in this when we miss someone we should not wait just contact them…

      next episode i will upload in some time from now…..love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care

  21. Nita D

    Nita D

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    Wow di this is awesome…..Shivaay once again fulfilled his responsibility of elder brother…..the way he explained to both of them….wow….N then to GauMya
    Riya-Shivaay moment was so sweet…..
    Sad for Sahil…..he has only shivika in the name of family……
    Painting….Wow so much the nature of Om…..
    Rudy…..sahi mein Duffer Singh Oberoi hai….
    ShivGauMya talk was also very well written….I so much miss having an elder brother n more after these scenes….

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Nita…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you to let me know that you liked the episode and the conversations…yeah when i am in stress i do crafting and painting so i applied the same logic here and it fitted with the character of Om in real IB…ha ha ha..Rudy is the best …his antics are his plus and he is definitely a lovable duffer…
      Awee…i have an elder brother but i know he will never speak to me like this …lol….this seems good in fiction Nita so nothing to miss about…

      Love you loads dear….keep smiling and take care

      • Nita D

        Nita D

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        Wow…same pinch di….even I love painting….

        Obviously my elder brother n me would not have talked abt these things (cause I hopefully won’t be having a troubled marriage😉)
        But still there r some situations where I miss having a brother and I will prefer an elder one….

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