MUKAMMAL MOHABBAT KI ADHURI DASTAAN ( MMKAD ) – ISHQBAAZ FF – EPISODE 22

Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB….. please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

Shivay wanted to wait till Anika left……..

Anika called someone and after sometime a police jeep came…Anika sat in the Jeep and looked at Shivaay while the Jeep started towards Mumbai…….

Later Shivaay also started towards OM as a cheetah running to catch it’s prey……..

—————OM

After OmRu and GaMya reached…… Tej & Shakthi Singh Oberoi made an entry to OM ……..they were just seated and started talking …

(Please Note: I almost never mentioned their presence till now in the FF as I wanted to make their entry now)

Om ‘’Chote Papa …you after a long time…where were you?’’

Shakti ‘’Was in some major issue ‘’

Rudra ‘’ohh…I hope now it got solved’’

Tej ‘’will someone ask about me ?’’

Before anyone could say anything Shivaay reached OM in a rage and anger……..Seeing Shakthi there his anger doubled……..

Om looked at Shivaay coming alone and ran to him and asked

Om ‘’Shivaay where is Bhabhi? Why isn’t she with you back home?’’

Shivaay looked at Om and said

Shivaay ‘’OmRu …I want our every family member to be present here…ask the staff to take care of Sahil and Riyanshi and make sure they both don’t come to the hall… we have an
important family meeting now’’

Looking at his anger and his way of speaking Rudra came to him and spoke

Rudra ‘’Bhayya…is everything fine? What happened? Why are you so angry? ‘’

Shivaay ‘’Rudra do as I say…today many truths will come out which might shock you and everyone else in this family…’’

Rudra did as Shivaay said and called everyone to the hall……..

Pinky , Jhanvi, Dadi also came while Tej, Shakthi, Om, Rudra, Sumo and Gauri were already present in the hall…….

Dadi ‘’billu what happened? What’s this meeting for and why are looking angry?’’

Shivaay ‘’Dadi…when one gets to know the truth of his birth …anger and pain only remains …….rest all emotions take a back seat…and today the same happened with me’’

Om ‘’Shivaay…you mean to say you found out the reason because of which..’’

Shivaay looked at him and said ‘’I promised you right…I promised you that I will find out the reason as to why Anika left me two years back…’’

He looked at Pinky and then spoke to Om

Shivaay ‘’I promised Mrs.Pinky Shakthi Singh Oberoi that the day I will get to know the truth.. I will take such a step which she wouldn’t have thought of ever in her life, neither in her dreams….and today exactly I am going to do the same’’

Jhanvi ‘’I am sorry Shivaay…we couldn’t tell you the truth because Anika’’

Shivaay ‘’because Anika stopped you from doing so….you know what MOM……’’

Everyone looked at Shivaay in shock when he called Jhanvi as MOM…much shocked was Shakthi who was now feeling that the truth of his birth might be known to him…..

Shivaay looked at everyone and more precisely looked at Shakthi who was sweating despite of the AC running continuously…..

Shivaay ‘’why is everyone shocked……’’

Gauri ‘’Woh …bhayya …you called Maaji as MOM na…that’s why’’

Shivaay smiled and said

Shivaay ‘’am I not right in calling badi maa as MOM…because she did what a mother should have done and Mrs.Pinky did that which no mother should have done’’

Pinky ‘’Shivaay…what nonsense are you saying’’

Shivaay ‘’enough Mrs.Pinky Singh Oberoi…not a word more…….i got to know the dirty tricks you played with Anika behind my back and all the drama you did…what was your aim …….to separate me and Anika…and congratulations you were successful……..i left Anika …….i left her forever by all means today…….’’

OmRu ‘’what nonsense are you saying Shivaay…where is Anika Bhabhi?’’

Shivaay ‘’I left her OmRu…I just asked her to live her life on her own terms…..i got separated from her by all means today…..from two years I was finding her….I tried to be with her.…I never for a second believed she died…but today I asked her to go away from me…..’’

Jhanvi ‘’Shivaay…you cannot do like this…..Anika did so much for this family…specially for you and you asked her to leave you…didn’t you understand what she means to you or are you acting stupid and ignorant’’

Shivaay hugged Jhanvi and cried…….Jhanvi pacified him …after few minutes he walked towards Pinky and said pointing his finger towards Jhanvi

Shivaay ‘’You know Mrs.Pinky ..this is what a mother is…when her child does a mistake a mother corrects him…when child does something good she appreciates him …whatever is the situation a mother never does something that will give pain to a child…and most importantly a mother never feels insecure with a new addition to his son’s life whether it’s his wife or it’s his child……you could never become a mother like her….’’

Pinky ‘’Shivaay…I understood you got to know the truth…it’s true I pressurised Anika to leave you…because she was not correct for you……..and it is no wrong to take a right decision for you when you took a wrong decision ’’

Shivaay ‘’YOUR SON……are you sure Mrs.Pinky that I am your son…….you blackmailed Anika saying that you will reveal to me the truth that I am being an illegitimate son of Kamini and Mr.Shakthi Singh Oberoi…….

Pinky and Shakthi were shocked and Pinky fumbled and said

Pinky ‘’Shivaay …listen to me ..whatever I said to Anika was just to scare her…you are my and Shakthi ji’s son…and whatever I said Anika is a lie…why don’t you understand that I had no other option than saying this’’

Shivaay Smiled ‘’What a great mother you are Mrs.Pinky…you said those words that a own mother will or can never say…and how easily you said it……you just very easily said that I AM ILLEGITIMATE SON OF MR.SHAKTHI SINGH OBEROI & KAMINI………didn’t you feel bad while saying so even if it’s a lie…didn’t you get a strange and dirty feeling while saying so…….how could you say..do one thing say that to me once…not only me but everyone will definitely want to see your expression and understand your feeling when you said the same to Anika…say it Mrs.Pinky….just say it’’ he screamed……..

Pinky was into tears and Dadi was shocked seeing and listening all this……

Dadi ‘’What’s all this Shivaay and why are you calling Pinky as Mrs.Pinky and not maa or MOM……I know she did wrong but still she is your mother…I support you for your anger but I can’t support you for disrespecting her in your anger……you are Shivaay.. my Billu and you cannot behave like this ..because you always kept your cool and patience when the situation was worse in our family matters…specially when it’s about our family’’

Shivaay looked at Dadi ……

Shivaay ‘’I would have never spoken to her even after knowing her deeds but the fact doesn’t change dadi…I AM NOT THE SON OF MRS.PINKY AND SHAKTHI SINGH OBEROI, NEITHER I AM THE SON OF SHAKTHI SINGH OBEROI AND KAMINI…….’’

Everyone were surprised by that……specially by the second statement …….and looked at Shivaay in shock

Dadi ‘’What nonsense….how do you know… I was the one to first meet you in hospital when you were born…I was the one to welcome you when you first made an entry into OM in the hands of Pinky … you were the first child in the OM…you don’t know you gave smiles to everyone in this house when you came……I still remember …you were lucky enough to be bought up by two mothers Pinky and Jhanvi……you removed the pain that surrounded in this house when Jhanvi lost her baby on the same day you were born……and now you are saying you are not the child of Pinky and Shakthi…this can’t be true’’

Shivaay ‘’I am saying the truth and if you don’t believe ask your son Mr.Shakthi Singh Oberoi…he is the only one who knows the truth’’

Dadi turned towards Shakthi…….

Dadi ‘’Shakthi …tell me what’s the truth…why is Shivaay speaking all this…and remember I am still in the position to take decisions of this house…the property of Oberois may be divided but the power to decide and know everything is still with me……..so tell me the truth because I am sure my Billu will never say something like this if he is not sure……..’’

Shakthi ‘’Maa…he is angry know with what Pinky has done…I always warned Pinky not to separate him and Anika…and when she did ,this is the result…he is definitely our son maa…mine and Pinky’s blood’’

Dadi turned towards Shivaay and said ‘’Got your answer billu…now let’s leave this topic and I want Anika back in the house …this is my wish and order’’

Shivaay ‘’not so early Dadi…today I will take off all the masks of Mr.Shakthi Singh Oberoi and Mrs.Pinky Shakthi Singh Oberoi’’

Everyone looked on , while Shivaay narrated all the incidents that he got to know from Anika sometime before …He revealed himself to be the eldest son of Tej and Jhanvi……….Everyone were shell shocked knowing the truth……and everything was spinning in their heads….

Pinky was shell shocked and looked at Shakthi in Disbelief…….

Jhanvi couldn’t believe what she just heard and was about to fall when ShivOmRu ran to her and held her together…….The three sons looked at each other with an increased dose of affection and love… for they now knew Shivaay was their own brother from their own parents…….

Tej came to Shivaay and hugged him with enormous affection and smiled heartily….Jhanvi too was happy with the revelation……and she just didn’t leave Shivaay for sometime…though he always was infront of her but still she never had the privilege that Pinky held for Shivaay all these years…

Pinky collapsed in the chair in shock…Gauri and Sumo ran to her ……while Shakthi bent his head down unable to say anything as finally the truth was out……….

Dadi too was in deep shock with the doings of his younger son and daughter-in-law……..she didn’t knew to be happy for Billu or to be sad for her sons…….

After everyone came back to their senses……Shivaay went to Shakthi and said

Shivaay ‘’you might be thinking how I got to know the truth……’’ Shakthi looked on

Shivaay ‘’Anika revealed it to me………she proved me to be an Oberoi and she proved me that I belong to Oberoi clan…….’’

Dadi ‘’but are you sure Anika is not mistaken’’

Shivaay ‘’Dadi …First thing Anika never lies …specially when it’s about me……she said that she had the proofs …she also said Mr.Ranjit chief of RAW had interrogated Mr.Shakti and he has accepted everything….Anika’s return as Anjali to this house through my friend Advay was to save all of us from the fake SJM and Ragini and to let us know the truth of my birth…not that I didn’t trust Anika ,but still I wanted to give benefit of doubt to Mr & Mrs.Shakti Oberoi , so while coming back I called Mr. Ranjit and asked him to tell me the truth …Mr.Ranjit exactly said the same thing that Anika said me …he sent me the proofs of recorded statements by Mr.Shakthi and Fauzi to my mobile….and all my doubts were cleared’’

Shivaay played the recordings before OF members………..everyone were shocked…

Dadi went to Shakthi and slapped him hard……..

Dadi ‘’Shakti …I never expected that you will fall to such an extent…it was good …it was good that after that dead girl child was born …you both never had the chance to have any other child else today ..if you had other child of your own …he /she would have died of shame …..the same way I am feeling shame to call you as my son and Pinky as my DIL……I wish I could say you to leave me…but I am a mother and I cannot do so……I can just pray that no mother should have a son like you and no brother or sister should have a brother like you…….you just couldn’t withstand the happiness of your own brother……’’

Pinky turned towards Shakthi and said

Pinky ‘’I wouldn’t have seen this day had you not those mistakes…you have ended everything …..it was you who instigated me to separate Anika from Shivaay ….and the result we are seeing now….before all this you were the reason to make me sterile….what wrong did I do to you……you have left me nowhere……literally no where…it’s all because of you’’

Shakthi ‘’Shut up pinky…..you were already insecure about Anika and even if I had not instigated you…you were already maiing plans to make ger away from Shivaay’s life…so don’t blame me because the amount of fault I made is equal to amount of fault you made’’

While Shakthi and Pinky were arguing… Dadi and everyone listened to their arguments and felt digusted…….

Dadi then screamed at pitch of her voice and warned them not to say a word more as they lost that respect and right to speak……..she asked Tej and Jhanvi to decide what should be done with Pinky and Shakthi as they are the major sufferers…… For few minutes the OM became silent ……..

Shivaay ‘’Dadi ..i am sorry but today I couldn’t help but bring out this truth…I had no other option’’ he spoke while keeping his head in her lap and crying…….

Dadi brushed his hair and said

Dadi ‘’Billu…you did right…one day truth has to come out …and today was that day…but if I ask you something will you tell me’’

Shivaay lifted his head up and looked at Dadi

Shivaay ‘’ask me Dadi…I know it’s about Anika’’

Dadi ‘’When you know …why don’t you tell me why did you leave her…and what did you mean when you said that you got separated really today?’’

Shivaay ‘’Yes Dadi…..i got separated from Anika in reality today…….’’

Jhanvi ‘’don’t do this Shivaay…no one can become a good life partner for you than Anika…she needs you the same way you need her…..you both are made for each other…don’t do this Shivaay’’

Shivaay ‘’Mom……’’

The word Mom pricked Pinky’s heart and tore it to pieces as she lost that credibility to be called as MOM by Shivaay her HEERA BETA….

Shivaay ‘’

Mom…I don’t deserve Anika……I know whatever she did was.. for me and for my happiness …but without knowing her and understanding her whatever I did …I don’t deserve her…I was initially angry on her for not trusting our bond…for not trusting our relationship…for hiding the matter from me….i said every nonsense to her ….but later I realised even I did the same….when I read the truth that Arjun left for me ….i was broken…I was broken with the fact that I am not an Oberoi…I didn’t know what to do where to go…my thoughts and my actions were paralysed….i was just angered with her and Mrs.Pinky to play with my emotions and hiding the truth……I felt that if she was with me she could have handled me to accept this truth……but she left me……and this angered me more than the lie of my illegitimacy…..later when my anger cooled…
I realised that : one fact didn’t change …..she gave away everything selflessly despite knowing the consequences of doing so…she was ready to leave me for my happiness…she saved me and helped our family many times before two years… and after two years when she came back she again saved us……even after doing so and even after I knowing her I said many cruel words to her because I knew I didn’t deserve her…….she deserves much better person than me…who knows how to respect her…who knows how to value her…who knows the value of her ……and who knows how to take care of her….so I had to say all those…I had to break her heart so that she goes away from me…may be this is the last thing I can do to wipe my guilt……

A guilt of not trusting her when many times she said what Mrs.Pinky’s intentions were…I kept my family front and forgot a simple fact that she has kept this family united much more than me…she took care of OmRu, she took care of Dadi…she helped you Mom…she respected Mrs. Pinky and Mrs. Shakthi, even after knowing the intentions of Mrs.Pinky…….

And even after what all I did ..she gave me back my family…she said the truth to me knowing that I have asked her to go away from me…..she is something else mom and none would have seen any other person like her…..in short she became the great wall around me while I was considered the great wall of Oberois……

How can I justify my acts now Mom…how can I live with her and above all how can I face her…words will not be sufficient to thank her and my any act will not be enough to convey my sorry to her……how can I repay the gratitude ……..nothing can be changed now …..but I need to repent for my mistakes…I need to face this punishment …that’s why I asked her to part ways with me…and you know what mom..while doing this along with me, I know she will also be suffering…because I know her …I know she cannot live without me….as her tears communicated everything……she will leave me now mom…and she will go far away from me……this tale of ours was bound to be incomplete

’’ Shivaay spoke emotionally…….

Tej left from there………….while rest others looked on……..Gauri and Sumo came to him and tried to pacify him……OmRu didn’t know what to do…..they sat back ….later

Gauri ‘’bhayya …you are again doing wrong…….’’

Shivaay looked at them and remembered the words of Anika to patch both the couples…..

Shivaay ‘’Gauri, Sumo….we will not talk about this……..but I need to talk something else to Om and Rudra…’’

Sumo ‘’Okay bhayya..but promise us you will always share everything with us’’

Shivaay was about to say something when Anika made an entry………….Everyone was shocked to see her and stood up……….

Dadi ‘’Anika puttar…….You here’’

Anika moved aside and there were two lady constables and two male constables seen behind her ………

Again everyone were shocked……….

Dadi ‘’Anika why are you here like this..i mean with these police’’

Anika was about to say something when they heard the voice of Tej………

Tej ‘’Maa…I have brought her here to get Shakthi and Pinky arrested…….you asked me to decide what should be done with both of them and this is my decision…I want to get them arrested by Anika …….i went to police station and filed a case and requested commissioner to allow Anika to do these honors….’’

Om ‘’but Anika Bhabhi is not the one to be doing this …she is a RAW agent not a cop’’

Tej ‘’I filed a case against Shakthi for hiding the fact of helping Sultaan and thereby helping him indirectly and this case comes under RAW…..’’

Anika looked at Shivaay…Shivaay showed no expressions but she understood him very well……

Anika POV ‘’I know Shivaay …after knowing the truth you are angry with Pinky aunty and Shakthi uncle …but I am very sure you cannot forget them because they bought you up and played a very important role in you development…I understand that today you are again struck between right and wrong and you want the wrong to be dealt in a right way…I know you wouldn’t ask me to do something to make everything right…but I am YOUR ANIKA shivaay …I will not let any wrong happen….i promise they both will come back very soon to you with same respect…I also expect you to give them their respect back when they are back…right now I have to do my duty being an under cover cop’’

Anika moved forward and came near Dadi

Dadi ‘’I am sorry Dadi…I am bound by my job….i will try to make things fine’’

Dadi ‘’Anika puttar…you did lot for us till date…but we failed to do anything for you…so we will not ask you anything else…do your duty….you did your duty being the DIL of this house…now do your duty being a cop……take them away and believe me we will not see this as a fault from your end…because we know it was my son TEJ who had put you in this situation……take them away Puttar…’’

Anika went to Pinky and looked at her…Pinky was teary eyed……

Anika ‘’Aunty ji …please forward your hands …these handcuffs are to be put on you’’ she showed the handcuffs……..

Pinky couldn’t face her and she did what she asked for…Pinky lost her everything at that moment……..lost everything probably to the person she wanted to win over…….and today the same person is taking her away with authority…….

The lady constables took Pinky while the male constables handcuffed Shakthi and took them away….

Anika ordered the constables to get them into Jeep and she turned towards Jhanvi ……

Jhanvi came to her and hugged her and said ‘’THANK YOU for returning my child’’

Anika ‘’Jhanvi aunty …you have to get back your other child now…Mahi…it’s your duty to get him back in OM…I may not meet you further …so I am saying this now…take care of Shivaay and everyone in this house…..’’

Jhanvi ‘’why are you saying so? ‘’

Anika ‘’Aunty I have got a new assignment , a new mission …so I need to leave the country and this time probably I won’t come back….tomorrow my staff will come and pick Sahil and we both are leaving India shortly….’’

OmRu ‘’but Bhabhi…where are you leaving ..i mean to which country and when’’

Anika smiled and said ‘’OmRu …I know why you are asking…but mine and Shivaay’s story will be incomplete …so let this secret be a secret…if destiny decides I will meet you else this is my final BYE to you….’’

Anika hugged everyone in the family and took blessings of the elders…….before going she again turned back and said

Anika ‘’I just wanted to let you all know that RSJM is out of danger now and he will very soon come here to take Riyanshi with him …..they are planning to sell off everything here and go back to NewZealand and settle there….’’

She looked at Shivaay and he too looked at her…….both walked away in different directions with tears in their eyes…….

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After sometime Om and Rudra came to Shivaay’s room as he called both of them……..OmRu came to Shivaay while Shivaay looked at both of them in anger……

Precap : Om-Gauri & Rudra – Saumya to patch up……..Shivaay to take help of Anika to bring Mahi !!!

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WE ARE NEARING THE END OF THIS FF…MAY BE IN TWO OR THREE EPISODES THIS FF WILL END….SO PLEASE CONTINUE THE SAME SUPPORT FOR THE LEFT OVER EPISODES……
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So this was the twenty second episode of the FF ………..Please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad is welcome…I will reply as soon as possible….all credits to NIKITA !!!

84 comments

  1. Katz

    Katz

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    Superb episodes back to back….. Awesome episode, I must tell you with lots of emotions and revelations. Anika arresting pinky is unexpected. But pinky deserved that. Again you put us in the edge of the seat. You never let us relax after reading your episode. Waiting for the next part. Bye and take care….

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Katz…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…ha ha ha…i haven’t put you this time at edge of seat…because i gave precap too…next episode i will upload in sometime from now…bye and you too take care…….

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Chotii…thank you so much for posting your opinion…thanks a lot…i didn’t want it to be emotional but this was needed for the story to progress and end…..

  2. Nida

    Nida

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    Felt really bad for my shivaay 😭😭 … i really got connected to this ff …and very few episodes are left … feeling sad but still sll good things comes to an end….. and again a super duper amazing 😉 part written by one ☝️ and only VHM

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Bestie…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…Awee YOUR SHIVAAY did commit a big mistake so he needs to repent for atlease sometime …well let’s see how i will be ending it…i am just typing blindly donno how tot end in a sensible way…love you loads bestie…take care and keep smiling

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Komal…thank you so much for posting your opinion…thanks a lot…so you have made up your mind that i must unite Shivaay and Anika…will definitely think about it…but whatever i do i promise i wouldn’t disappoint you

  3. Fffan1234

    Fffan1234

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    That is super duper update. Totally awesome. My anger towards Shivaay is reduced to some extent but not completely. He is making a mistake I think, because Anika still gets hurt due to his idiotic decision. He can repent and grovel while staying with her.

    I am really glad that other things are cleared now and am waiting for RiKara and RuMya patching and Mahi’s entry.

    Sorry if I hurt anyone’s feeling by my anger towards Shivaay. I am looking forward towards the next part.

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Dipti…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…he can repent and grovel while staying with her true but will Anika allow him to repent if he stays with her…no worries here all are shivika fans so no hard feelings…you can post your opinion without any inhibitions and feeling sorry…love you loads…take care and keep smiling

  4. Priyadas

    Priyadas

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    Speechless after this episode Di… I was just imagining the things which you described… And what to say it was emotional yet awesome part. The best of what you have posted till now. I am literally running sort of words.
    Do post the next one soon do.

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Priya…thank you so much dear…getting a compliment from a super awesome writer is something very precious …thank you tons for this…next episode i will upload in sometime from now…love you loads…keep smiling and take care

  5. Dhar

    Dhar

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    Di loved the fact that Shivaay was jhanvis son as she really deserves to be his mother…. In the show too, jhanvi acts like his real mother…. Plzz do post the next update ASAP… And what to do about this emotionally a fool Singh oberoi…. He’s hurting himself as well as Anika…. God so many emotional moments dii….. U wrote them just perfect…. I’m looking forward for another one from you…. And this ff is really close to me.. I always wait to see ur updates.. Love ya… Take care

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Dharani…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode i will upload in sometime from now…ha ha ha…pain is needed to build an unbreakable relation…currently they need to undergo this pain…and i am not yet sure how i am going to end their relation…let’s see what my hand types…awee so sweet of you dear…thank you so much for those amazing lines…love you loads …keep smiling and take care

  6. UF

    AWESOME EXCELLENT FANTASTIC GREAT INTERSTING OUT STANDING SUPERB👌👌👌😘😘😘

    Dear Vhm
    Aap Ye End Kar Rahi Hai😞😢I Really Miss Your This FF.Please Come Back With Another FF.And Ya Please Try To Add RuMya In Your Next FF Okay😊

    Take Care😘

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much UF…thanks a lot…

      Hey UF,

      Yes am gonna end this FF very soon and when will i come up with next and what will i write is still not known and not yet decided…will Rumya be there is also not known …because we have to move on from Rumya to Ruvya…everyone needs a chance so why don’t we guve a chance to RuVya…moreover giving a chance to RuVya doesn’t mean that we will be forgetting RuMya…anyways our this discussion will go on …let’s first complete this FF…what say?

      keep smiling and take care

  7. Lauren

    Lauren

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    Totally speechless…… it was juzz phenomenal .. amazing.. loved it to d core…. dii plz dont separate anika n Shivaay…. waiting for d nxt one…. post soon… n yeah after completing ur dis ff plz come back wid another one soon as I have got addicted to ur ff ….
    Luv uhh dii….

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Lauren…thank you so much…thanks a lot…next episode i will upload in sometime from now…i will not separate them but will i unite them is also not yet planned……so i am unable to say anything now…and one more thing whatever i will write or plan i will not disappoint you …i promise this…so keep reading this till the end and do show your support…..Love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care

  8. Zaveesha

    Zaveesha

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    Great…… Stupendous… Magnificent… beautiful… wonderful… marvellous… Spectacular work… Phenomenal… awesome.. mind blowing…
    How thoughtful of u….
    Very well written…
    Best wishes…

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Zaveesha…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….OMG so many compliments…awee so sweet of your dear…thanks a ton…love you loads …keep smiling and take care

  9. chaithu

    amazing so emotional episode .
    oh we missed the ff
    pl come back soooooooooooooon with another one ………..

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Chaithu…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…we still have some episodes left…so i hope you would come back to read those and show your support to those remaining episodes

  10. Nikita_jai29

    Nikita_jai29

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    It is awesome dii….. Har ek safar KI manzil hoti h or humsafar bhi…. Thank you so much readers KI aap MMKAD KI safar m hamare humsafar bane… Shivika KI MUKAMMAL MOHABBAT KI ADHURI DASTAAN AB bs puri ho ne jarahi h or ye safar bhi MUKAMMAL hone ja rahe h… Thanks for your time and commenting on MMKAD to all my friends and silent readers… And once again thank you so much friends for your wishes and prayers… I got selected in bhu…… Thank you ishqies…..

  11. Nita D

    Nita D

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    Awesome episode……full on high voltage drama……wow….just wow…..major part was of Shivaay….which is so beautifully written…..Shakti-Pinky were still playing the blame game…..my God…..Pinky toh thik, par Oberoi factory ka yeh piece itna zada defective kaise nikla……
    N best was the ‘she deserve someone better’ wala whole thing by Shivaay…..it is so well written….every emotion so beautifully portrayed…..
    Tej bring Anika(I kinda knew that when he left, but bringing him to arrest Shanky was unexpected), was a bang on……

    That typical hindi film mein kal jaa rahi hu des chod ke humesha humesha ke liye always bring that sad feeling but also a suspense that how will hero bring his heroine back…..Plz don’t make it a adhuri dastan….

    Just was thinking, u have given so many new angle to the illegitimacy track of IB…..in previous, I made Shivaay leave via Tej n then proving it to be kamini’s game where Shivaay is the son of Shaky….N Tej helping in there….N here it was all the game plan of Shakti….. N no role (yet) of Tej….
    Also there mahi was in from starting n here he’ll come at the end….
    Wondering what u had planned for TASHAN…..there Tej seemed to be a villain-cum-cupid and SJM (Arjun there), Ragini n Anika were friends…

    Was also wondering about prinku….she hasn’t been mentioned since starting….

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Nita…so happy to see your opinion posted…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…

      Real IB mein dono bade Oberois anokhe tareeke se defective hain…maine bas yaha ek ko defective banaya….

      Those lines i donno somehow i felt like penning down glad that i was successful in creating the right emotion through those…

      Ha ha ha…ab Shivaay ke nazaron mein upar uthne keliye Tej itna tho kar sakta hain akhir businessman jo hain…

      Ha ha ha..typical hindi film wala dialogue…true mujhe bhi padhne ke baad aise hi laga..par mujhe laga woh waha accha rahega …

      Hero heroine ko layega ya nahi abhi tak decided nahi hain…mein separate nahi karoongi kyun ki already woh dodno separated hain..ab milaoongi ki nahi ye plan nahi kiya…

      Abhi Nikita ka opinion padha..Adhuri dastaan poori hogi …par kaise …mujhe sochna padega…kyunki i swear aagey kya likhoongi abhi maine na socha na kuch plan kiya..

      Sacchi Nita mein itne tareeke illigitmate ko legitimate prove karne ke nikale ki agli baar agar mein kuch FF ya OS likhi tho mere paas ideas khatham hain…

      Yaar ye poora FF SHIVIKA ke base par aadhaar tha…ye start usi se huan ..beech mein Rikara aur RuVya ko le aana pada..fir Bahut sare readers RuVya ko hata ke RuMya ko le aane bole uss wazah se RuMya ko fit kii bina storyline hilaye…isliye baaki OF members ko priority dena mere liye almost naa mimkin sa ban gaya…

      I don’t think iss mein Priveer ka kuch role hoga..aree baap re kitna long comment post kar rahi hoon….

      Aur ek khaas baat batani thi…mein TASHAN ff ko scrap kar dii…mujhe pata hain tumhe gussa aayega par sacchi mein uss file tak ko delete kar diya……

      Love you loads dear…aur itna long comment keliye sorry…keep smiling and take care

  12. Amy....

    Amy....

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    Superbbbb diii…… U killed it….. While reading this I’m just imaging all those things in my mind and tats possible just coz of ur way of writing….. But dii pls don’t end this ff I’m loving this more than IB… Pls don’t stop it……..

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Amy…thank you so much dear for those amazing and heart touching lines…as they say everything has to come to end one day and so will be this FF…but don;t worry we still have few episodes to read…so cheer up….

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Niku…thank you so much for posting your opinion here…thanks a lot…and i am sure you might have received the links by now

  13. Maryam_ishq

    Maryam_ishq

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    Am so sry di for not commentin on the previous two episodes… was really busy these days. Coming to ur epi di
    It was just awesome… wht a twist u brought… shivay is the legitimate son of oberois… the eldest son of tej and jhanvi… am glad tht jhanvi is his real mother caz she cares for him like she cares for omru. Never expected shakti to do all this with his own brother just caz of business and his ego… somewhere down the lane the behaviour behind pinky is due to shakti… but her fault as well as she let the insecurity build up in her to a great extent.
    Anika… wht do i say abt her… she’s the perfect bahu in every sense… while leaving from the house she made sure shivay does the duty of eldest son as well as brother… she reminded them abt mahi being the son of oberois… and makin shivay do gaurika and rumya patch up… but her love stry is still incomplete… and even aftr so much insults she still doesn’t hold any grudge against pinky.
    Shivay…. his whole world turned upside down in these two three days… he feels he is not worth anika anymore… he had so much hidden inside him which came out today… the inner turmoil inside him has somewhat gone down… hope he realises soon tht his happiness lies in anika and he needs her in his life no matter wht.
    Jhanvi is the luckiest woman in the world right now… she got her sons back and she genuinely wishes happiness for shivay unlike others.
    Great work di… i don’t knw how ur able to come up with such twists… never had i imagined of tej and jhanvi being shivay’s parents. Btw di wht did anika say to shivay when they were in tht trap two episodes before i think…

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Maryam..thank you so much for your time and patience…i am so happy to read your opinion..you just made me feel special …you just made me remember all the previous episodes…i had to prove Shivaay a Oberoi and in that process this was the only way left because in my previous two to three FF’s i proved Shivaay as legitimate in someother ways and i didn;t want to repeat it…somehow this logic fit properly so used t and glad none of the readers dejected this…

      Well Anika said I LOVE YOU to Shivaay in Tamil……..

      Love you loads…keep smiling and take care

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Dala…thank you so much for posting your opinion…thanks a lot…pata nahi dear woh ek honge ke nahi par jo bhi hoga ..padhne wale jaroor khush honge

  14. Niriha

    Niriha

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    Awesome di…it’s very emotional part fabulous loved it di 👌 waiting for next part update soon di

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Niriha…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot..next episode i will upload in sometime from now…love you loads…keep smiling and take care

  15. Aashi

    awesome
    luved the episode
    make everything fine soon
    pls make ShivIka from Shivaay Anika
    update soon
    take care

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Aashi…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…will try to give a better end to the FF where everyone will be happy…love you loads…keep smiling and take care..next episode i will upload in sometime from now

  16. Sairish

    Sairish

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    ohhh my godd…what a spectacular episode it was……was really imagining the scenes in front of my eyes…….
    I never expected that we’ll reach till here in our journey of mmkad …I’m truly surprised….you are ending this…I’m sad but can understand it has to ended one or the other day….so …waiting for a grand ending of this amazing story from an amazing writer itself …..
    the emotional turmoil of shivaay was heart touching……
    I’m spellbound…
    can’t wait to read the further episodes…
    post soon plzz
    love you like anything..😉😉😉😉
    Sairish
    ❤❤😘😘

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey SAAIIIIIIIRRRRRIIIIIISSSSSHHHHH….thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…i am so very glad that you liked this episode..and what can i say…i never expected this response for this episode as i thought i made it a bit emotional but for me it was justified…but i am so happy that everyone supported me …thanks a ton dear…next episode i will upload in sometime from now….love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care

  17. Ashwinee

    Ashwinee

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    Akka aaj toh aapne 440volt ka jhatka aise hi dediya . Voh bhi baar baar. Sach mein meri toh mooh se Koi bhi shabd nikla hi nahi sivaay 😱😱😱iske . Kabhi yeah nahi socha tha ki shivaay tej aur jhanvi ke beta hoga. But I seriously didn’t understand the logic of them. I mean did Dadi really don’t know about shivaay or is it something else ??? Do clarify this. And coming to the update, it was as usual great and spellbound.😍😍😘😘

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Ashwinee…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…episode 21 mein maine ye khulasa kar diya tha ki Shivaay aur Mahi Jhanvi aur Tej ke bete hain aur kaise Shakthi ne ye sara game plan kiya…aur rahi baat dadi ki …

      True maine explain nahi kiya ki …Jhanvi ke twins ke baare mein aur Pinky ke mari huin bacchi ke baare mein Kamini ne sabse pehle Shakthi ko kaha…tho shakhti ne sabko rok ke raka doctor ko paise khilaye kamini se kaam karaya……taaki sab kuch uske plan ke hisaab se ho…..itna detailing de nahi payi kyunki episode aur lamba ho jaayega…

      Tho ye sab kisi ke kano khabhar Shakthi ne padne hi nahi diya…aur jab tak sab bacche ko dekhne pahunche tab tak saara kaand ho chuka tha…

      Sorry detailing dena chahiye tha mujhe…next time se dhyan rakhoongi…

      love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care

      • Ashwinee

        Ashwinee

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        koyi baat nahi hai akka.sorry ki toh baat aati hi nahi.Kabhi Kabhi Hojata hai .😀😀. And thank you for this explanation. Love you more akka 😘😘

  18. Shivika

    Awesome….Emotional Update…
    So beautifully written & experienced…..
    Felt really bad for Shivaay & u presented it amazingly…..
    Finally so many revelations….
    Anika arresting Pinky came as shock but then she totally deserved it….
    Feeling sad dat so soon we have come to d end of dis ff…..
    Waiting fr d nxt…. 🙂

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Shivika…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…we have few more episodes still so cheer up….keep smiling take care and love you loads…next episode i will upload in sometime from now

  19. Banita

    Fantastic epi di…. Sinky deserve this….
    Nd what wrong with shivaay only becz of his dicision he hurt himself as well as anika…. Hope they unite soon….
    In nxt chappy rumye nd omri unite… Excited 4 nxt….
    U end it in nxt 2 – 3 epi…. Miss u di… Cme back soon….

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Banita…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i tried to prove that everyone was correct in their own way but being correct in their way makes others to be in a difficult situation…so let’s see how they clear of their misunderstanding and try to be normal…yes next episode they will patch up if not completely but almost….
      yes dear i have to end this FF as it has nothing much left….will miss you all too…next episode i will upload in sometime from now…love you loads keep smiling and take care

  20. Gayathri.visu

    Gayathri.visu

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    Phenomenal…. Emotional part di, very emotional!! No words….
    Outstanding work di. Jhanvi only truly deserves Shivaay.
    Shinky deserves this…..especially shakti! Eagerly waiting for next part di. Sorry for short comment di, but really I like this part. Literally this part makes me cry…..

    And don’t sorry for ur last reply di, whatever u said in that reply was absolutely correct. I agree with u. They are just dragging! Keep smiling di……n take care!!

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Gayu…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode i will upload in sometime from now…

      No worries…take rest and take care …keep smiling and love you loads…..

  21. Madhuani

    Madhuani

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    Emotional one.
    I’m quite occupied so chotusa comment.
    I opened it just to relax for sometime but u made me emotional by this.
    I kind of thought when tej left that he maybe had gone to file a complaint but bringing anika to arrest them was something unexpected.
    Shivaay ki halat dekh k mein kalbala gai aaj.
    Accha ab bas nhi toh meri bakwass band nhi hogi.
    Take care.

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Madhu…thank you so much for this opinion dear…thanks a lot…i am so sorry dear…i thought this episode was needed to justify why Shivaay spoke so with Anika in the previous episode…i didn’t expect this will make you emotional keeping your relaxation far…

      Kalbaka gayi meri tablatodh Mahu…….
      Love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care…..

  22. Sagithya

    Sagithya

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    Awesome mind blowing fantastic part di….
    Emotional too ….. I loved it…..
    Pinky n shakthi deserves it ….. But felt sad for shivaay…. In real ib also janvi only support Anika n shivaay relationship ….
    Pls don’t end tis ff….. Excited for the next part.. post it as soon as possible….
    take care luv u di 😆…

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Sissy…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…this FF has to end one day or other… sooner or later…so let’s not think about it..i am so glad you liked the episode and i hope you have read the next episode too…..

      love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care

  23. Jerry_36

    Jerry_36

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    Heyoo Harika Di !
    See I am back again with my late comment but please tell me how do you get these ideas, they are phenomenal !
    Mind blowing and all the beautiful words that you know are coming to my heart.
    You are so talented it and I wish to borrow some skills from you, hope you don’t mind😉😉
    Love you dher Sara ❤

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Vedika…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…..ha ha ha ..i don’t put lot of brain dear…had i then this FF might have been better …well it’s all your love that make everything looks beautiful and if i really have talent then you can take it all from me…though i am not sure how talented i am…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care

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