MUKAMMAL MOHABBAT KI ADHURI DASTAAN ( MMKAD ) – ISHQBAAZ FF – EPISODE 21

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Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB….. please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

Anika ‘’what? What did you say ? our journey of togetherness ends here? How can you say so?’’

Shivaay ‘’Yes I did say that and whatever I said is what you heard and I can say that after what you did to me…….. two important women in my life has played so much with my emotion that I feel being cheated ….the truth of illegitimacy is nothing before the pain you both have given me…so I decided to stay far from both of you’’

Anika couldn’t control her tears anymore…she thought that if he vents out his emotions he will become normal but he has now took a decision to leave her and she didn’t understand what to do…..

Anika ‘’ will you be happy if I stay away from you’’ she asked him while crying

Shivaay ‘’yes’’ he turned his face away and repliedhaving tears in his eyes

Anika ‘’look into my eyes and say that Shivaay…and I promise I will leave you forever…….’’

Shivaay looked at her after wiping his tears and said ‘’YES …I WANT TO BE ALONE’’

Anika wiped her tears and smiled and said …..’’I PROMISE YOU SHIVAAY THIS TIME I WILL LEAVE YOU AS PER YOUR WISH …UNTIL YOU COME TO ME AND CALL ME BACK TO YOU , PROMISING ME TO STAY WITH ME FOREVER…..’’

She took a pause and continued…..

Anika ‘’Shivaay …you now know the truth about what happened two years before that made you give me divorce and that I had to leave you …but one more truth is yet to be known to you …you are an OBEROI and YOU ARE NOT ILLEGITIMATE……..before I leave you …I wanted you to know this because you can start hating me but you cannot start hating yourself of not being an Oberoi or being illegitimate’’

Shivaay looked at her in disbelief

Shivaay ‘’Arjun’s letter has clearly mentioned that I am an illegitimate child of Mr. Shakthi Oberoi and Kamini…so how can you be sure that I am not illegitimate and I am an Oberoi’’

Anika ‘’did you read about the rivalry between Oberois and Sultan ?’’

Shivaay ‘’No…but how is it connected to my legitimacy?’’

Anika ‘’ I will be waiting read it first’’

Shivaay took Arjun’s file and started reading the incidents Arjun mentioned in the file….

Arjun filed till the Grandfather of Shivaay made the will……Shivaay looked at Anika and spoke

Shivaay ‘’I understood Ragini aka Shenaay wanted to marry me for that land …in all these how is my legitimacy proved’’

Anika ‘‘I will tell everything but before that Please listen to me carefully and then you will understand why I am so sure……’’

Shivaay again looked at her in disbelief, but decided to listen to her…..he nodded to go ahead….

————-NARRATION CONTINUES BY ANIKA (‘’YOU / YOUR’’ REFERS TO SHIVAAY IN THIS NARRATION; ‘’ ME’’ REFERS TO ANIKA)

Learning about the death of RSJM’s grandfather because of that land …Your grandfather Mr.Oberoi wrote the will that the eldest grandson of the Oberois and his wife will be the legal holder of that property and till then his son’s Tej and Shakthi Singh Oberoi will be the custodians…..he mentioned few clauses

1. If he had no grandson’s then the property will go to the Government of India……

2. Tej and Shakthi can put up any business on that land or give the land on lease with proper documents but cannot sell the land …..however the decision has to be mutual that is together by Tej and Shakthi………

With these clauses Your grandfather registered the will……….However he never said why he wrote the will so…he was actually protecting his children from any unwanted situations…..

Taibu got to know about this will and he had his hands cut off to harm the Oberois……….so he made a plan to deal with Tej and Shakthi Oberoi by taking the land on lease…….but he had to wait as they both were to US for their education and business……..

Both Shivaay’s grandfather and Taibu died……..and then came the generation of Tej Oberoi, Shakthi Oberoi and Sultaan and Fauzi…………

Everyone in the sense whoever knew about this…thought that the matter had subsided……..But Taibu has said everything about the land and what all he did till then his children
before dying…..

Sultaan and Fauzi decided to continue the leftover work of their father…….

On learning about Your dadaji’s death Tej Uncle and Shakthi uncle came back to India and they decided to stay back here…..

After an year ..Sultaan made his next move and met Tej and Shakthi uncle and asked for that land to give it for lease……Tej uncle was a pucca businessman …he didn’t approve for it…..but Shakthi uncle wanted to give it on lease…Shakthi uncle tried to persuade Tej uncle but he failed….Shakthi Uncle was much angry on Tej uncle as his ego was hurt…he decided that one day he will take away all the position that Tej uncle enjoyed…..

To add fire to fuel … Sultaan wanted to cash with clash between brothers….so he met Shakthi uncle personally….he made a deal with Shakthi uncle to help him in his business but to allow him against the will to use the land without knowledge of Tej uncle…….Shakthi uncle agreed without knowing how big mistake he was doing by allowing them…….

This matter was not known to Tej uncle and Sultaan and his brother Fauzi were doing the illegal transfer of Uranium to our neighbouring nation….

Later Pinky aunty and Jhanvi aunty got married to Shakthi Uncle and Tej uncle respectively…Shakhti uncle was in love with Kamini but he couldn’t go against Dadi’s wish and got married to Pinky aunty…their married life was never happy as compared to Tej uncle’s married life…so shakthi uncle used to spend time with Kamini ji too……very soon Jhanvi aunty became pregnant and two months later Pinky aunty too became Pregnant……

Knowing Both the ladies being pregnant Sultaan met Shakthi uncle again and advised him that it was best opportunity to become the owner of Oberoi empire…..Shakthi Uncle was confused when Sultaan suggested that in any case Tej should not become the father of a baby boy, so that Shakthi uncle can still have a chance to rule the Oberoi empire…..

Kamini ji was the midwife at a hospital……Jhanvi aunty completed her nine months and a day came when she had started getting pains …. still Pinky aunty was 7 months pregnant and there was still two months’ time for her delivery…but complications arrived in Pinky aunty’s health on the same day as Shakthi uncle deliberately gave pains medicines to pinky aunty without her knowledge….his plan worked and Pinky aunty had early pains….she was also rushed to hospital where doctors insisted to do delivery of Pinky aunty on the same day…all this was plotted by Shakthi uncle to become father of a baby boy first …… Kamini ji helped Shakthi uncle in this seeing his desperation…

While Pinky aunty gave birth to a dead baby gal because of the stupidity of Shakthi Uncle…… Jhanvi aunty gave birth to twin baby boys ..YOU AND MAHI

Kamini aunty helped the doctors in both the deliveries……. She informed Shakthi uncle about the deliveries……

Shakthi Uncle spoke to Kamini and asked her to take one baby boy with her and raise him, while the other baby boy should be placed beside Pinky…..and the dead gal child to be placed beside Jhanvi…..

Kamini did so ….but while doing so Kamini had other plans to hurt Pinky aunty…she placed YOU beside pinky aunty saying you was her and Shakthi’s child and she had given birth to a dead child as her jhetani….and upon Shakthi uncles request she is giving her one son to her while other son of her and shakthi uncle would be with her…….Pinky aunty was shocked and cried …….this was all listened by a daima who was supposed to enter the room to look after Pinky aunty…..

By the time everyone came to meet Pinky aunty and Jhanvi aunty the swapping of children was done….

Shakthi uncle stuffed the doctor who did delivery of Jhanvi aunty with money to keep her mouth shut…….

Tej Uncle felt very bad but Shakthi uncle was very happy……Pinky aunty remained quiet waiting to confront Shakthi Uncle……

After they came home ….Pinky aunty confronted Shakthi uncle about the child being his and Kamini’s …..

Shakti uncle was first horrified but he thought it was in a way good because even if the truth comes out the child will be called illegitimate but not be known as son of TEJ & JHANVI OBEROI…..

So he accepted before Pinky aunty that the child was the illegitimate child of his and Kamini …..and also explained Pinky aunty the benefit of having a first boy child…….Pinky aunty calmed down and agreed to bring you up as an proper Oberoi and she did so…….

Later Sultan who was unaware of this swapping came to Shakthi uncle and asked him to extend his lease….Shakthi uncle initially agreed but later he came to know about the wrong doings of Sultaan and his brother Fauzi……Shakthi uncle knew the consequences if he was caught…so he called up Sultan and straight away said him that he will not help him anymore….This irked Sultaan and he promised himself that he would destroy the Oberois in the same way as he killed RSJM’s grandfather……but Shakthi uncle in fear of getting caught and saving himself complained against Sultaan for his doings……Sultaan was arrested by the police under TADA act….he got released two and a half years before…But his aim was still the same… Sultaan saw Shakthi uncle talking to a doctor and giving her money….also he kept an eye on OM ….this was the same time when Kamini aunty and Mahi drama was going on in OM……..Sultaan then found out the truth of all the child swapping ……

He again met Shakthi uncle and started blackmailing him to tell the truth to Tej uncle…….Shakthi uncle couldn’t let go off the chance to enjoy the power of being father to the eldest heir of Oberoi empire……so he compromised with Sultaan…….

In return Sultaan asked Shakthi uncle to get you married to Shenaay…daughter of his brother Fauzi…Shakthi uncle disagreed stating that You were married to me…..But Sultaan didn’t budge…he just put only two options …1 . Either get you married to Shenaay aka Ragini who was then in Malhotra mansion . or 2. He will reveal truth to Tej uncle and entire OF……

Shakthi uncle was in a fix but decided to go with Option 1…….He went to Pinky aunty and instigated her…..by that time Pinky aunty was annoyed with me and was insecure about you …….so it worked and from then on you know what all happened.

——————–NARRATION ENDS BY ANIKA

Shivaay looked on……..

Anika ‘’yes Shivaay ….you are the eldest son of TEJ & JHANVI SINGH OBEROI, REAL BROTHER TO MAHI, OMKARA SINGH OBEROI, RUDRA SINGH OBEROI & PRIYANKA SINGH RANDHAWA….hence you are NOT ILLEGITIMATE…you are Legitimate child of Oberois’’

Shivaay ‘’what is the guarantee that you are saying truth’’

Anika ‘’I knew you would question this…after I got my memory back I went to Delhi to meet my chief Ranjit……while talking to him Ranjit sir said this to me and he provided me all the proofs….when Arjun digged out the history of Oberois he got the link between Sultaan and Shakthi uncle….he was about to probe further but some other incidents took place and so Ranjit sir further probed into this issue…..he took Shakthi uncle into custody and questioned him…during this questioning Shakthi uncle accepted he did all this…..Ranjit sir asked me to save you from marrying Shenaay there by saving Malhotra’s and Oberoi’s …therefore I came back to OM as Anjali …and I knew I will be relieved of the burden and making you relieve even if the truth comes out’’

Shivaay looked on and as she read his thoughts……

Anika ‘’If you still don’t believe I have the statements recorded from Shakthi Uncle & Fauzi in my office..and still if you have doubt then we will get the DNA tests done’’

Shivaay was in thoughts now……his entire life till then replayed before him and his bonding with Tej Singh Oberoi & Jhanvi were getting recalled…..his childhood with his brothers…Jhanvi’s affection towards him …Tej making him learn Business ethics and tricks….His ruling over Oberoi Empire and Tej’s appreciation …his bonding with his brothers and sister everything replayed before his eyes…his memories atonce shifted to Shakthi and Pinky’s parenthood too……..in total he was again in trouble….

Anika went near him and placed her hands on his shoulders…he looked up at her…….she made him stand and gave him the car keys…….

Shivaay took the keys………

Anika ‘’and now as per your wish I will be leaving you….thank you for everything……I will pick up Sahil very soon…all these days you took care of him very well…I can’t thank you enough for whatever you have done for my younger brother despite having anger towards me…..but now I am capable enough to take care of him and bring him up…’’

Shivaay was about to say something when Anika cut him off and said

Anika ‘’please don’t make me away from my brother Sahil…he is the one whom I have now….you can atleast give me this in return of letting you know the truth about you being an Oberoi and there by giving you back your family…so please ..i request you don’t deny this’’

Shivaay couldn’t speak a word……he just let his tears off….Anika couldn’t see him in such a position and started walking towards the road…….

Shivaay ran to her and stopped her

Shivaay ‘’ Let me drop you till the city……. ‘’

Anika ‘’no thank you…but I have something else to tell you if you have time’’

Shivaay looked on……

Anika ‘’ This is about Om and Gauri and Rudra and Sumo…..you very well know both pairs love each other respectively…but there is a misunderstanding……the file that Arjun has given you has every detail about Gauri too…because he enquired everything about OF…..so give those details to Om so that they both can clear off their misunderstandings …and speak to Rudra to take a step forward towards Saumya…because Rudra never understood what was sumo going through…Sumo is hurt because she thought Rudra moved on very quickly after she left and he fell for Bhavya…..so explain both of them how wrong they were and make them patch up….Atleast both those couples will stay together…..bye Shivaay…take care’’

She spoke to him and left without looking back……….while Shivaay stared at her !!!

Shivaay POV ‘’KYA HAMARI YE MUKAMMAL MOHABBAT KI ADHURI DASTAAN KABHI POORI HOGI ? ANIKA‘’
(Anika , Will ever the incomplete tales of our unbreakable love get completed?)

Anika POV ‘’AB HAMARI ISS MUKAMMAL MOHABBAT KI ADHURI DASTAAN TUMHE HI POORA KARNA HOGA !!! SHIVAAY’’
(Shivaay !!! Now You have to complete this tale of our unbreakable love !!!)

PRECAP : ANIKA COMES TO ARREST PINKY & SHAKTHI OBEROI, OMRI & RUMYA PATCH UP MISSION TO START……….

So this was the twenty first episode of the FF ………..Please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad is welcome…I will reply as soon as possible….all credits to NIKITA !!!

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57 Comments
  1. Priyadas

    As usual superb. Now words to be rendered Di. Just awesome. This is for the second time that you ate leaving me speechless Di. Post the next part soon.

    1. VHM

      Hey Priya…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you dear…thanks again…yeah will post the update in sometime from now

  2. awesome
    luved it
    sumhow I always thought Shivaay was more close to TejVi
    update soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Aashi…thanks a lot….same pinch me too after seeing IB felt Shivaay is more like Tej excluding the baddest qualities of Tej……next episode i will upload in some time from now…

  3. Anu16

    Oh my mata double treat???😀😀😀
    so shakti is the main culprit in this mess,what a dramatic n shocking flashback…u have made a good plot out of he things shown in the serial…also ur background story is superb n logical…. so shivaay now knows the reason why he bonds so well with tejanvi n omrupri, n they r likeminded not selfish like pinky n shakti…
    now the its patchup time… For all couples….., fun times i guess…… waiting for next

    1. VHM

      Hey Anu…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…yep Shakthi is the main culprit but Pinky is also not innocent…true whatever you have written as per my imagination …and fun time i donno but next episode will be bit emotional…next episode i will upload in some time from now…

  4. Lauren

    Amazinggggg dii…. don’t know wat to comment……. it was just phenomenal….. post nxt soon dii…
    Luv uhh…

    1. VHM

      Hey Lauren…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode i will upload in some time from now…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care

  5. swetha kannan

    please dont seperate anika and shivay .unite them

    1. VHM

      Hey Swetha..thank you for posting your opinion…thanks a lot..i promise whatever i decide i will not disappoint you….so please keep reading the next episodes and do post your opinion

  6. Amazing…… No words to describe, I loved it waiting for next part … Plz post sooon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Somi….thanks a lot…next episode i will upload in some time from now…

  7. Madhuani

    Di,I just couldn’t believe my eyes.
    Double treat!!
    What a fb tablatodh one.
    Yeah shivaay is not illegitimate.
    You know mein kalbala gai thi after this but I know at the sab kuch sahi hoga.
    So in this the main culprit was shakti coz of his insecurities he made two children’s away from their mother n also made his wife suffer by killing their child.
    Coz sultaan n fauzi were just taking advantage of him n he being insecured fell in their trap.
    That part shivaay recalling everything tejvi,shinky’s care,love n also obro-sis bond was too good ekdum zabri.
    But why he didn’t stop her?
    Is he still mad at her??
    Also her care for omru n their relationship is awesome.
    Great wall ab sab kuch thik karenge.
    Take care.😍😘😊

    1. VHM

      Hey Madhu…thank you so much..tablatodh..zabri..kalbala jaana…awee such a awesome words that you use…i am in awee of these typical words of yours…i am glad you liked the episode…Anika is awesome and so will be Shivaay…and the answer to Shivaay’s being so you will know in next episode which is going to be a bit emotional……love you loads…keep smiling and take care…
      next episode i will upload in some time from now…

  8. Hey di!!! At first a bigg wala sry 4 not commenting on pre part becz i just read it a few time before nd saw ur another update nd thaught comment here….
    As usual both r Fabulous di….
    nd today epi What a revelation di!!!!! Shivaay is Tej- Janhavi’s son…..
    Sakti was just discusing…..
    Great idea Nikita…..

    1. VHM

      Hey Banita…no worries dear…it’s absolutely fine….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…all credits to Nikita….

  9. Katz

    Hi vhm…As usual its a kidkithod episode and what a grand twist. Shivay is tejvi’s son??????? I hope to see soon that Shivay and Anika clear their misunderstanding and reunite. Waiting for the next best episode. Bye. Take care.

    1. VHM

      Hey Katz….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…well even i haven’t yet planned anything about whether Shivika will unite or not….but i will not disappoint anyone with the end…next episode i will upload in some time from now…

  10. Niriha

    Awesome di…what a revelation shivay is tej and Janvi son wow 👌👌di but feeling bad for anika why shivay didn’t stop her waiting for next part update soon di
    Love you 😘😘Take care

    1. VHM

      Hey Niriha….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…well coming to Anika and Shivaay let’s see how the things turn around…..not yet planned anything…next part will be a bit emotional one ..hope you will like it…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care…next episode i will upload in some time from now…

  11. Nida

    Superb 🙏🏻👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 such flawlessly written…..absolutely amazing 😉…. waiting for the next part ❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️✅✅✅✅✅😍😍😍😍😍😍🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

    1. VHM

      Hey Bestie….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you dear…next episode i will upload in some time from now…

  12. AWESOME EXCELLENT FANTASTIC GREAT INTERSTING OUT STANDING SUPERB👌👌👌😘😘😘

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much UF…thanks a lot

  13. Navz

    Donno what to comment…..shivay ..son of TEJ SINGH OBEROI…
    And shakthi did more OMM of everyone than anyone’s imagination……sach mei meri OMM tho ho gayi….dii..how did ull think abt this much?!!
    Again…Anika and shivay have parted their ways…waiting for their union.
    Anika going to arrest shanki?????????
    Oh god dii…the story is fabbb.
    Luv u lots dii..bye.

    1. VHM

      Hey Chotii…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot..ela alochinchano teliyadu kani …chala twists create chesanu kada …so vattanitini solve chese panilo ee idea vacchindi….ade rasesanu…anthe…love you loads Chotii…keep smiling and take care…next episode i will upload in some time from now…

  14. Amy....

    Always u make me restless thinking at will happen next….. The way u connected each and every point was awesome….. Just mind blowing epi….. Loved it…..

    1. VHM

      Hey Amy …thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you to write those amazing words….i am glad you liked it

  15. Dhar

    Omggggggggg…….. Shivaay son of tej Singh oberoi ….. It means he is Shivaay tej Singh oberoi….. Dii aapke paas aise ideas aate Kaha se hai… U just nailed it…. I loved it to the power of infinity

    1. VHM

      Hey Dharani…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…idea kaha se aay pata nahi …par maine kuch jyada hi raita phela diya tha pehle episodes mein…ab uss raita ko samethe samethe ye sab likh diya…shukar hain kisi ne object nahi kiya…warna chameli ka intezaar kar rahi thi aaj mein……love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care….

  16. Ankita27

    Phenomenal… Amazing update… so asli raita shaktiji ka felaya hua tha… what a twist in tale…. ab tarif ke liye kuchh bacha hi nahi kya bolu… Superb… mind blowing.. Fantastic di… Eagerly waiting for the next update… plz post asap…

    1. VHM

      Hey Ankita…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you to write those amazing lines…next episode i will upload in some time from now…

  17. Sagithya

    Awesome mind blowing fantastic fabulous out standing part di…..
    Shivaay son of tej…. I didn’t​ except tis twist di….
    Does​ pinky know about the truth of tej being the father of Shivaay???…..
    Make shivika unite soon di…
    Anika going to arrest pinky n sakti ah 😱😱
    Again another suspense di…
    Excited for the next part.. post it soon..

    1. VHM

      Hey Sagithya…thank you so much sissy…thanks a lot…shvika Union will it happen or not i haven’t yet planned…hmm what to do sissy this is a mystery suspenseful FF …so had to leave the ends with suspense….love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care…next episode i will upload in some time from now…

  18. Zaveesha

    Awesome…
    Fabulous
    Amazing
    Mind blowing
    Very well written…
    Waiting for their Adhuri Dastaan to be completed….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Zaveesha…thanks a lot…will the adhuri dastaan be completed …let’s see what’s in store for us…not yet planned how to end but planned when to end…lol…typical of me…next episode i will upload in some time from now…

  19. Fffan1234

    I am totally speech less by the awesome update. And yes completely mad at Shivaay for MU with Annika…

    I have loved this update. One question dear Harika, will we be seeing Mahi now in this story?

    1. VHM

      Hey Dipti…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…well i guess tomorrow’s episode will answer your question about Shivaay…and coming to Mahi…Mahi will appear just before end of the episode …his track and all i will not be writing…..next episode i will upload in some time from now…

      1. Fffan1234

        Thanks for clarification. Wish you could write Mahi’s track as well

  20. Nithu

    Akkkaaaa khidki thod undiiii

    1. VHM

      Hey Mohitha…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….

  21. Sairish

    ufff….confused from where to begin and where to end…
    you are an exeptional writer …
    soo….it was all shakti’s fault..poor pinky became the puppet..
    as i say…the quality of intermixing of events is the speciality of yours…
    still wander..how can u write so bliss …
    plzzz post the next one ASAP PLZZ ..
    tons of love
    Sairish

    1. VHM

      Hey saiiiiiiiirrrrrrrriiiiiiiiisssssssshhhhhhhhhh……….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot..,,i myself don’t know why can’t i write something very soft and smooth as you do…and this FF i created all sorts of raita and now i am involved in clearing the raita…….glad that readers are liking it else i was expecting chameli’s for writing like this…..next episode i will upload in some time from now…love you loads dear…keep smiling an take care….

  22. So good no words to say but a request please don’t separate our shivika😉

    1. VHM

      Hey Shreya…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i promise that in whatever way i end this episode i will make sure everyone will like it

  23. Nita D

    Charan di apke charan……hats off seriously…..
    Shakti…..really….the Shakti Singh Oberoi…..he was so calm, composed and devotional type of person….seriously he could have played this type of game….n he instigated Pinky….he was so good to Anika….seriously unable to believe it….

    Tejvi…five children…..OMG….no doubt they loved each other dearly once…..
    Shivaay bichara….he is somewhere correct, the two women whom he considered his strength have hurt him so badly…But then he can’t live without Anika as well….
    So now waiting for the confrontation n Anika’s story is still left…..

    1. VHM

      Hey Nita…fir se …OMG ..ha ha ha Shakthi…haan seripusly Shakthi….jo itne shaanth rehthe hain woh utna kaand karthe hain…lol …isis base pe ye likhna huan…TEJVI 5 children…that was a funnily naughty one haan…….Shivaay was actually crushed between two women…i mean in real IB too…Pinky ne dhamkaya Anika ne chod diya…ab kare tho kya kare bichara…ab bhi two women ke beech mein fas gaya…Ragini aur Anika ke beech…dekthe hain….

      confrontation hoga …par anika jwala kaise bani batana hain ki nahi socha nahi…pata nahi…bas ek baat decided hain two teen episodes mein khatham ye FF itna yakeen hain mujhe…..

  24. Alekhika20

    Superb update

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Alekhika….thanks a lot

  25. Gayathri.visu

    OMGGGG!! Unbelievable man…..oops didi. Shivaay is SHIVAAY TEJ SINGH OBEROI………!!
    I think this is the best n interesting turning point in this ff di. So the main culprit is not- so-innocent Shakti!! Wow di…….what a unbelievable twist. But I just loved this twist. Sometimes I also thought same for IB’s illegitimacy story di. But still I believe that Mahi n Shivaay are Shinky’s twin sons only. So I stopped think like that di.

    And feeling sad for Shivaay! His dialogues are absolutely true. That’s why I really hate this seperation track n that story line di. Precap…..yahoo!!! Eagerly waiting for next part di..

    Last time forget to mention di, Anika’s narration scene(flashback story) was awesome(this time too)…. No loop wholes!!
    Keep smiling n take care di. And haan, yes di, I didn’t expect ur TAMIL surprise….good surprise!

    1. VHM

      Hey Gayu…….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you to say those words…i am glad you liked the episode….haina even i thought of the same in real IB…even i didn’t like the separation track Gayu and now whatever they are showing in the past two episodes that also is eating my brain…truly illogical…i mean when a baby cries the frequency of the volume of the cry of a baby is unbearable…and here they are showing as if the three brothers are in a sound proof room…IB never had logic i agree but this is utter nonsense…

      Thanks a gain dear…sorry to trouble you with the rants of mine about current track of IB…next episode i will upload in some time from now…awweee i am so glad you liked the Tamil surprise

  26. AnuluvsIB

    Omg!! What an update!! Phew!
    But norbither story line can make Shivaay birth so reasonable! How well u guys hve woven it and presented it..
    shivaays anger is reasonable.. annikas decision is also sensible..
    waiting to see how this goes forward…

    And in prev chapter, what was with the nan unnai kadhalikkiren all of a sudden.. felt good reading it😄

    1. VHM

      Hey Anu…thank you so much…thanks a lot..iam gald you liked the plot and episode…it’s really good to see your opinion whenever it is posted…thanks for your time and patience….
      ha ha ha…thought to add it as something refreshing hope it worked in previous chapter….
      thanks again

  27. Nikita_jai29

    Hii dii.. You are mind blowing…. … Thanks again for your time and commenting on MMKAD to all my friends and silent readers… And please forgive me dii and my friends … As I commit a big mistake not commenting on it as earlier …. I am angry on my self… How could I do this…. Please forgive me… Love you all

    1. VHM

      Hey Nikita…thank you so much for the trust on me…i hope i lived upto your expectation….don’t be angry on yourself …sometimes it happens…so no worries…

  28. Jerry_36

    Harika Di !!! Kya revelation tha appka. Initially I was shocked but then realised if it’s written by you we have to get used to the shocks. My curiosity is increasing by each chapter. Thank you for constantly sending the links.
    Love you❤

    1. VHM

      Hey Vedika..thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…Jerry i don’t want to give shocks but somehow it happens without my knowledge…will try to change this habit of mine…lol…just kidding…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care

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