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MUKAMMAL MOHABBAT KI ADHURI DASTAAN ( MMKAD ) – ISHQBAAZ FF – EPISODE 17

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Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB….. please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

Anika/Anjali’s car was in front and Omkara’s car was behind….the cars neared the signal and both the car were blast into pieces………

——–OM

SJM received a call from his men ……he spoke and smiled…….and then he looked at Ragini and smirked…….

SJM POV ‘’ BLAST TOOK PLACE and it was so heavy that they are burnt alive nothing can be recovered now ……One chapter Closed ….only one step more’’

The day was coming to an end and the Malhotra’s took leave from the Oberois and started towards their home…..

Pinky ‘’Ragini from tomorrow you will be staying forever’s in this mansion’’

Ragini ‘’why not Aunty ji even I want this to happen ‘’

Pinky ‘’whaat?’’

Ragini ‘’I mean even I want to live in this mansion along with you all as a happy family’’

Pinky smiled while Gauri-Rudra-Saumya and Shivaay looked on irked…….

—————-SOMETIME BEFORE

Ragini disconnected the call to SJM and turned to see Shivaay standing…….

Ragini ‘’Woh Shivaay …I was talking to my’’

Shivaay ‘’brother …you were talking to your brother and I listened everything…so you are behind Riyanshi…you want to marry me for some other reason….why …why are you doing all this’’

Ragini smiled evilly

Ragini ‘’Good you heard everything atleast after marriage you will not be in shock’’

Shivaay ‘’marriage …don’t dream …this marriage will never happen’’

Ragini ‘’it will and you will get married at the same muhurat’’

Shivaay ‘’never’’

Ragini ‘’not even for your brother Omkara Singh Oberoi’s, that little girl Riyanshi I mean Yashi’s and your brother-in-law Sahil’s life’’

Shivaay looked at her in shock

Shivaay ‘’What do you mean?’’

Ragini ‘’Poor Omkara he went to save Anjali and he fell in our trap….our motive was something else and now in few minutes his car will blast and he will die…..we have fitted bomb in his car and as soon as he crosses the first signal the trigger will activate and his car will blast….so if you want to save him …you just need to agree to me and this marriage …and your obedient secretary Khanna , your brother-in-law Sahil and off course Riyanshi are with us now…’’

Shivaay ‘’stop your drama…you are just saying lies’’

Ragini ‘’I never lie…..if you don’t believe let me show you the proof…’’ she showed a video where SJM ‘s men were fitting bomb under Omkara’s car……and the trigger was placed at the mid of the road near the first signal after Malhotra mansion…as soon as the car nears the frequency of the bomb under the car will match with the frequency of trigger and it will get activated and then booom’’

Shivaay was shocked and looked at her in rage…….she then showed Khanna, Riyanshi and Sahil’s video

Shivaay ‘’why are you doing all this …what’s your enmity with us?’’

Ragini ‘’didn’t Arjun say you anything Shivaay…I am sure his diary must have some secrets right? ’’

Shivaay ‘’how did you know about his diary…it’s known only to me , Gauri and Sumo’’

Ragini ‘’what do you think we don’t know what’s going on in this house…you are an educated fool…I need not to answer anything and now if you want to save your brother’s life do what I say…be prepared to get married to me tomorrow…else not only those but every Oberoi family member will die’’

Shivaay sat in shock while Ragini went smiling towards the hall

———–PRESENT SITUATION

After Malhotra’s left Shivaay broke everything in anger in the house ……everyone was stunned …he sat down crying much to shock of OF…….

Jhanvi ‘’What happened Shivaay …why are you crying? ‘’

Rudra ‘’yes bhayya ……please tell us …what happened’’

When they were asking the landline rang and Gauri picked the call…………she heard the other side of voice and fell unconscious

Sumo ran towards her and woke her up ….Gauri sat and cried heavily

Jhanvi ’’now will someone say something what’s happening?’’

Gauri ‘’Rudra …Shivaay bhayya…….mummy ji……..Omkara ji’s car….omkara ji’s car got blasted ‘’ She cried

Jhanvi ‘’noooooooooo………this can’t happen……..’’

Everyone in OM stood still……..

Sumo quickly switched on the news and they were showing the clips of blast and the news was :

‘’ Today at the first signal of Bandra very near to the Malhotra mansion a blast took place…..one of the vehicle was identified to be Omkara Singh Oberois car…police are trying to get information about the other car…the blast was so severe that the bodies were not found…it is not known whether there were people in the car or not…if there were people then there is no chance of being alive… as it is expected that people in the car have been burnt alive…….due to roadworks nearby the traffic has been diverted to other routes…….so there were no causalities reported……we will keep you posted with further episodes’’
OF members couldn’t believe what they were seeing

Jhanvi ‘’Shivaay do something…nothing can happen to my Om…please bring my Om back…’’ she pleaded him while Shivaay and Rudra couldn’t utter a word …….

Shivaay finally spoke ‘’this is all because of me……..this is all because of her….my stubbornness caused Om’s life not only that Sahil, Riyanshi and Khanna’s lives are at stake…….he cried’’

Jhanvi looked at him ‘’What are you saying…’’

Shivaay ‘’ragini Malhotra did this blast…I don’t know the reason but I know she is behind all this…before leaving she said that if I don’t agree for marriage she will take Om’s life…I agreed but still she did so……my stubbornness to acquire that chawl by marrying Ragini caused all this destruction……had I not agreed for this marriage Om would have been alive…..’’ he cried

Jhanvi turned towards Pinky and looked at her in rage……..she went near her and slapped her hard……..everyone looked at them in shock

Pinky ‘’jhethani ji…’’ she screamed with her hand on her cheeks

Jhanvi ‘’shut up…you have lost that right to call me as jhethani ……..all this is because of you…if something happens to omkara I will make your life hell…a mother can do anything for her child and I am no ordinary mother…now I will tell your truth …enough is enough now’’

Shivaay looked on …….

Jhanvi ‘’Shivaay you are not the reason for anything .. this lady…this Pinky Shakthi Singh Oberoi is the reason for everything.’’ she cried vigourously……….

When Jhanvi was about to say the truth of Pinky ….Rudra came to her and hugged her and whispered to her

Rudra ‘’mom…we have kept the secret this many days…so we need to keep this for some more days…….also Shivaay bhayya is almost on verge of getting to know the truth …so please don’t say anything further mom…I assure you nothing will happen to Om bhayya because Anika Bhabhi is with him…Anjali Bhabhi is none other than Anika Bhabhi……keep trust mom…don’t fall weak….’’

Jhanvi’s face expression changed with Rudra’s words…she kept her cool ……but listening to Jhanvi’s words …Shivaay was stunned and shocked and more than this pained ……he looked at Pinky in anger and said

Shivaay ‘’do you have anything to say mom…for the first time I am feeling low about being your son…I still don’t know what you did but seeing badi maa’s pain I am feeling like leaving you right away’’

Pinky was about to say when Shivaay asked her not to speak anything……he left from there towards his room……

Gauri’s tears were uncontrollable and so were Jhanvi and Rudra………..

Sumo was scared with the thought of Riyanshi’s life at stake ………she left towards her room and cried sitting on her bed……..when she saw Riyanshi’s bag……….she was touching it and was reminiscing about her

Rudra too was lost when he remembered something suddenly……..

He quickly went to Shivaay’s room , held Shivaay’s hand and took him to Anjali’s room…….

Shivaay ‘’Rudra have you gone mad?’’

Rudra ‘’Bhayya please listen to me once…..yesterday Anjali Bhabhi asked me to bring you here after Malhotra’s leave…..she said she had something to let you know and give you …she also promised me to make everything fine …I believe her so I brought you here…’’

He went to her bed and pulled out the mattress and opened the wooden plank…a packet was placed on the name of Shivaay……….

Shivaay took the packet………..he opened it and there was a letter for him

‘’Shivaay …you were right and you can never get wrong about my presence when i am around you…I am Anika YOUR ANIKA…..I know you must be annoyed but I will explain everything once I meet you in person…I am now on a very dangerous mission involving Oberoi’s, Malhotra’s and Nation’s safety….the entire OM is being fitted with Microphones and your security system has been hacked…in short whatever happens in OM can be viewed and listened by Malhotra’s …when I say whatever it means everything …all your words, deeds and actions everything are visible and heard….when I stepped in this house , i made this room bug free and took off the CCTV camera’s and microphones too…..also I did the same with Omkara’s room…….so if you want to talk anything in person to your family then ensure you are either in my room or Omkara’s room ……also when I call you from further please come to this room and talk to me….i am giving you the bug detector and an untraceable SIM card…..get a new mobile and place this new SIM card…I will call you soon…..and for God sake don’t break the phone with this SIM in anger….remember when you are in my room switch off your mobile with the old sim…….if you don’t get a call within 24 hours then use the bug detector and deactivate the microphones and then call the number I have given below, a police force will arrive for your rescue……i am giving the instructions to use the bug detector too……..but I request you not to manipulate CCTV camera’s as they must see you if they can’t listen to you…also continue to use your old number as they need to track you to seem everything normal……please do what they ask for without any hesitation …I promise I will not allow anything wrong to happen….I know you don’t trust me with whatever I have done two years ago and what I have been doing from past few days…but please trust me this time…I will set everything right and in this I need your help….i know I am asking more but to save all the Oberois life I need you to be with me……because without you I am incomplete…..I hope you will do as I am asking …the phone number to get police rescue 009190******09 ’’

Shivaay looked at Rudra and said

Shivaay ‘’rudra you could have told about this to me earlier’’

Rudra ‘’bhayya I was keeping an eye on Malhotra’s as per bhabhi’s order’’

Shivaay ‘’fine…now will handle everything’’

Shivaay placed SIM in his new mobile and stayed there switching off his other mobile with old sim…he asked Rudra to assemble everyone in Omkara’s room except PINKY………
Rudra did so……..

When Rudra was out Shivaay sat there in thoughts thinking about Arjun’s letter, his diary notes, Mrs.Malhotra’s warning and Anika’s words……

———————–

SJM and Ragini reached the mansion and took their important stuff and took mrs.Malhotra from there ………they reached the place where Khanna along with Sahil and Riyanshi were present…….

SJM went near Riyanshi

Riyanshi ‘’Papa ….yeee yuppieee…papa I am so happy to meet you….where were you and why did you not come to meet me’’

SJM ‘’Yashi….please calm down…I have come now na’’

Riyanshi ‘’why are sahil bhayya and Khanna bhayya tied with ropes…please free them papa …they both are my very good friends…and papa I will make you meet Shivaay bhayya and Anjali didi too …Shivaay bhayya is very nice and sweet person…and Anjali didi is just khidkitodh….you know Shivaay made me get admitted in school’’

SJM ‘’Yashi…yashi…calm down…I will meet everyone but before that tell me how do you know Anjali didi…I mean I never introduced you to her………..’’

Riyanshi ‘’papa …mama showed Anjali didi’s pic and she said that you , mama and Anjali didi are best friends……if we are in trouble Anjali didi will help us……so I identified Anjali didi as soon as I saw her…why are you asking me so papa is Anjali didi not your friend ?’’

SJM ‘’no..nothing like that …your papa is growing old na so he forgot…and what else did Mama say?

Riyanshi ‘’Mama also said about one more best friend of you …but I don’t know his name’’

SJM ‘’was it ARJUN’’

Riyanshi ‘’no papa…it wasn’t Arjun…mama used to call him SIR…I remember just this…..’’

SJM ‘’ok fine leave it…accha tell me where is that locker key that your mama has given you?’’

Riyanshi ‘’ that key is in my suitcase in OM …take me there papa and I will give you the key’’

SJM ‘’Is it are you sure?’’

Riyanshi ‘’Yes Papa … a day before mama was shot by some bad people… mama said that we are going to India and she packed my bag…at that time she placed the key in my favourite dress in suitcase and asked me to keep it safe and give it only to you or Anjali didi if asked ….Anjali didi never asked so I never spoke about that….…but then mom died and I had to come all alone with Sumo didi ’’ she said sadly

SJM ‘’don’t worry now your papa is here na so nothing will happen…ok fine go inside and I will ask Sahil and Khanna’s ropes to be untied…and onemore thing Yashi please don’t go anywhere from here okay…it is very dangerous…’’

Riyanshi ‘’ok papa…I will not go from here until you ask me to do so’’

SJM smiled and ordered the men to take Riyanshi inside

Ragini ‘’Let’s go to OM and take the key’’

SJM ‘’relax….we cannot do that now…we will take it tomorrow’’

Ragini ‘’but bhayya….what if Oberois get it?’’

SJM ‘’no they wouldn’t because right now they will be in deep sorrow ….they cannot think about that….also they don’t know where the key is’’

Ragini ‘’one more day and everything will be ours…’’

SJM ‘’but tomorrow I want everything to go perfect’’

Ragini ‘’I have left no option for Shivaay’’

SJM and Ragini returned to Malhotra Mansion along with Mrs.Malhotra and Sahil leaving Khanna and Riyanshi in the unknown place …….they took necessary precautions

——————————MUMBAI POLICE HEADQUARTERS

Anika/Anjali ‘’Tomorrow I want all these arrangements in and around OM …no one should know Singh Oberoi and Real Samar Jeet Malhotra are alive….I am now leaving to bring Riyanshi, Sahil and Khanna along with me‘’

Commissioner ‘’but Anjali we can’t let you go alone……’’

Anika / Anjali ‘’I will not go alone …I will take Shivaay Singh Oberoi Malhotra with me and in this plan Rudra Singh Oberoi will play his part’’

Commissioner ‘’what? ‘’

Anika /Anjali ‘’yes because I know if he is with me no one can touch us…as they need Shivaay Singh Oberoi alive to complete their mission’’

Om who listened all this was stunned and so was Real Samar jeet Malhotra

Om ‘’bhabhi…I will also come’’

Anika / Anjali ‘’no Om…we both must not be seen …..they must assume we both are dead along with RSJM ….otherwise all our efforts can go in vain’’

Om obliged……..

She saw the SIM which she gave for Shivaay being active…she understood Rudra did his job….

(FLASHBACK..when shivaay was following Anika after she received a packet the evening before…Anika spoke with Rudra something on the stair case …she was explaining about Rudra to take Shivaay to her room after Malhotra’s leave and give him the letter and packet …after her talks completed Shivaay confronted Anika in her room…FLASHBACK ENDS)

She called Shivaay ……….

————————OM , Anjali’s room

Shivaay was in thoughts when the phone rang…….he quickly picked the call………

Shivaay ‘’Hello ‘’

Anika ‘’Om zinda hain aur sahi salamat hain ’’
(Om is alive and he is hale and safe’’)

Anika POV ‘’I know I wanted to talk many things but first this is important because Shivaay’s first love is his brothers then anyone else…I hope he will be calm and peaceful now’’

Shivaay ‘’you are saying truth right…make me talk to him once please’’

Anika called Om and gave him the phone

Om ‘’Shivaay…’’

Shivaay ‘’Om …you are alright? Where are you? I am coming right away…you can’t understand what we went through and are still going through..Gauri and badi maa along with
Rudra have lost all their hopes and were crying uncontrollably’’

Om ‘’shivaay …relax and also make them relax….i am completely fine…you know what Anjali Bhabhi is Anika Bhabhi…yes Shivaay Anika Bhabhi, your Anika is alive and she had been with us as Anjali in our home all these days….and when Bhabhi is with me …will she allow something to happen with me’’

Shivaay ‘’I know Om…Anika left me a letter that she was Anika not Anjali …we will talk about it later but first tell everything how are you safe because we saw in news and got a call that your car blasted’’

Om ‘’that’s true Shivaay…but I wasn’t in my car..that’s why the news never said that bodies were found and when call was made they never said that I died’’

Shivaay ‘’but where did you go and what happened?’’

Om ‘’bhayya the SJM whom we are meeting is not the real SJM.. he is fake…he has teamed with Ragini against us…I don’t know the reason of enmity… but Anika Bhabhi was on this mission to save us and the RSJM …Riyanshi aka Yashi is the daughter of real SJM …Anika Bhabhi saved RSJM and he is with us now…I came to help Anika Bhabhi and we started towards our farmhouse in our respective cars

————–SOMETIME BEFORE

Om’S NARRATION OF INCIDENTS FROM MALHOTRA’S HOUSE TILL THE BOMBBLAST TOOK PLACE

Anika ‘’ok fine …ensure you don’t take Yashi or Riyanshi’s name infront of Malhotra’s…..please keep me updated…..i am directly going to your farmhouse …Om will be back to OM’’ she spoke to Shivaay

Anjali and RSJM started in Anjali’s car and Omkara in his car……meanwhile my car stopped for unknown reason …..i got down and she too got down…….while checking my car she found that a bomb was fitted beneath…it was one of a kind bomb…it was not based on time …it was based on frequency match ….she then explained that Fake SJM has planned to kill me along with Anika Bhabhi and RSJM ……she also said that she was actually thinking how come everything was going on so smoothly without any hurdles when both Ragini and SJM knew about her visit to Malhotra mansion…and this was what fake SJM actually wanted …first to know about Yashi and then kill all of us……

She called the bomb squad and asked them to check where the trigger can be…the bomb squad gave her the details of estimated distance of trigger…….she took the device from bomb squad and fixed it in her car….

Anika Bhabhi then tied my car behind her car through a hook as if the car were being towed…….

She called the Police to reach there and then called traffic control room to divert the traffic to avoid causalities of common man and public…..

The police has arrived in a very short time and they bought two dummy’s as ordered by Bhabhi………She asked me and RSJM to go to police head quarters with the police…

The dummy’s were placed in my car………we left with the police and reached the police headquarters while Anika Bhabhi drove her car along with my car being towed having dummy’s in it….

Later what happened I don’t know Shivaay but Anika Bhabhi reached safe to Police headquarters after a long time and we all saw that out cars got blasted ………

————–OMKARA’S NARRATION ENDS

—————-PRESENT TIME SHIVAAY IN CALL WITH OMKARA

Shivaay ‘’Om…can you give the mobile to Anika…I want to talk to her once…may be I should thank her for saving you’’

Om handed over the mobile to Anika

Anika ‘’hello Shivaay’’she took his name emotionally

Shivaay ‘’Anika’’ he too replied with tears in his eyes

Anika ‘’Shivaay aapke aankhon mein aasoon acche nahi lagte’’
(Tears doesn’t look good in your eyes)

Shivaay ‘’Jab tumhe ye sab pata hain tho tumne mujhe itna dard kyoon diya’’
(when you know everything why did you give me so much pain)

Anika ‘’ kal tak rukh jaayiye’’
(please wait till tomorrow)

Shivaay ‘’Kya woh kal kabhi aayega?’’
(Will that tomorrow ever arrive)

Anika ‘’jaroor aayega agar aap mera saath denge tho’’
(it will definitely arrive if you give me your support)

Shivaay ‘’kaisa saath?’’
(What kind of support?)

Anika ‘’Shivaay I need your help and this is very important for our family’’

Shivaay ‘’yes Anika tell me’’

Anika ‘’shivaay I am sending you location details where Khanna, Sahil and Riyanshi are captured….you need to go and save them’’

Shivaay ‘’what?’’

Anika ‘’yes…I cannot go because the Malhotra’s are assuming me and Omkara to be dead…you need to get them out safe…I will be with you ……and I know you wouldn’t be harmed because they want you to be alive and for them you and Ragini getting married is very important…..will you do this…or I will rephrase can you do this and help me ?’’

Shivaay ‘’anything for Sahil, Riyanshi and Khanna’’

Anika ‘’Shivaay I am telling you the plan listen carefully and do what I am saying exactly without any change…….

1. Go to your room and talk to Rudra as if you are saying a plan that you are going to find Sahil, Riyanshi and Khanna

2. Say that Khanna’s car has tracker so you can find out , where the car is.

3. Everyone’s car is placed with a tracker by SJM and Ragini, so take your car and Rudra along with you and ask Rudra to stop at First left of OM …I will be there with a taxi and I will drive you to the location where all three are captured…A police officer will be with Rudra…

4. Listening to your plan ..SJM and Ragini will take khanna’s car to someother place …..don’t worry we have hacked Khanna’s car tracker , so wherever they take Khanna’s car Rudra will drive his car to that location along with the police officer to ensure them that you are doing exactly what they are expecting you to do….

5. We will reach the location where Khanna, Riyanshi and Sahil are trapped….You will step in to save Sahil, Riyanshi and Khanna while I disable the microphones and CCTV ‘s and tackle the goons there……also I will manage to keep the CCTV in loop so that everything seems normal to them

6. We will take all of them to police headquarters and then you will meet Rudra at the same place you got separated…..

7. Once you come home react as if you didn’t find any of them ..hinting you still are under their control……

8. Tomorrow what is going to be done I will inform you while we are driving …….

Shivaay disconnected the call and went to Omkara’s room where all the OF members were present except Pinky……

Shivaay disclosed the truth of Omkara being alive and Anjali being Anika….Gauri and Jhanvi hugged each other out of happiness………

Guari POV ‘’Come back home once Omkara Ji and I will never let you leave alone…..i promise I will be beside you and protect you the same way as Anika bahujaii protects the entire OF’’

Sumo hugged Rudra and said ‘’Om bhayya and Riyanshi are alive…I am so happy’’

Rudra hugged her much tight ……..later they both parted the hug and Sumo left from there realising that she still needs answers from Rudra……

Afterwards as per the plan Shivaay took Rudra to his room and spoke what Anika has said him…..

Rudra and Shivaay left from OM and implemented the plan exactly ……..Shivaay met Anika …They both had tears in their eyes ……Shivaay just wanted to hug her tight and be in her wrap…same was case with Anika …but they both stopped the emotions as it wasn’t right time….they had an much important work and they needed to save all three of them…..

Anika asked Shivaay to sit while she drove…silence prevailed for much time when Shivaay finally broke the silence to ask her

Shivaay ‘’how did you survive the blast?’’

Anika smiled and said ‘’I had to meet you so I survived’’

Shivaay looked at her

Shivaay ‘’had you not left me that day, this day wouldn’t have occurred’’

Anika smiled and said ‘’it was destined’’

Shivaay ‘’now answer me how did you survive’’

Anika ‘’After Om left along with real SJM I drove my car along with Omkara’s car…Om said you right that I took the device from bomb squad …it was giving me the direction towards the trigger…..i drove towards it…when I found SJM ‘s men keeping an eye near the signal….i understood that they would find dummy’s in place of Om and RSJM and would inform
SJM that Om and RSJM escaped …..so I killed all his men except one and made him call SJM that bomb blast took place and we all were dead……..SJM believed……later I started my car and before the trigger activated I jumped out……..my car and Om’s car both got blasted as expected by SJM….making his and my plan successful……’’

Shivaay ‘’You are killing people as if they are some ants or mosquitos…I can’t believe you changed so much’’

Anika ‘’they are threat to you Shivaay and I cannot leave them like that…when it’s about you everything matters …….’’

Shivaay looked on and so did Anika for a while…….

Anika ‘’I mean they are threat to nation and when it’s about my nation everything matters and change is inevitable Shivaay’’

Shivaay ‘’ya right…nation….matters…but why did you say they need me alive’’

Anika ‘’Shivaay I can just tell that your life is precious to them till the marriage happens so they will not allow even a scratch to you….rest I cannot reveal anything till I catch them alive….you need to wait till tomorrow‘’

Shivaay didn’t pressurise her as he understood she has her own limitations…with all these talk they reached the destination where Khanna and Riyanshi were captured…….

Anika first disabled the Microphones and then kept the CCTV in loop …………she asked Shivaay to wait in car and left to tackle the goons ….Shivaay too helped her as he couldn’t see his lady love fighting alone….They successfully saved Riyanshi and Khanna but got to know Sahil was taken away by SJM and Ragini……….

Anika and Shivaay were in shock as they did not expect Sahil to be under SJM and Ragini’s capture…….

Precap : SHIVAAY-RAGINI’S WEDDING …….ANIKA HELPLESS……HOW WILL TRUTH COME OUT…MYSTERY REVELATIONS AMID THE WEDDING !!!

So this was the Seventeenth episode of the FF ………..Please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad is welcome…I will reply as soon as possible….all credits to NIKITA !!!

68 Comments
  1. Priyadas

    Finally the truth broke out that anjali is Anika. God was so waiting for this revelation from animals itself. And from reading yesterday’s part I had even guessed that your suspenseful FF is going to end. Well Di this part is as usual spellbounding and awesome. The mysteries are getting unfolded. Waiting for the next update.

    1. Priyadas

      *anika not animals

    2. VHM

      Thank you so much Priya…thanks a lot…yeah the mysteries are getting revealed slowly and at their own pace…i don’t want any glitches and yes this FF is going to end pretty soon…even i am wating for your next shot….

      where are you these days? busy ? everything allright? not getting any messages from you…….so was worried and asking you…….take care keep smiling and love you loads

    1. VHM

      Thank you for posting your opinion Adia…thanks a lot…i am sure there must be something funny about this FF….will be glad to know if you can let me know which part was funny…..

  2. AMAZING EXCELLENT FANTASTIC GREAT INTERESTING OUT STANDING SUPERB👌👌👌😘😘😘

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much UF…thanks a lot

  3. Alekhika20

    Emotional update
    Hope they came together by crossing all hurdles

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Alekhika….thanks a lot

  4. Lauren

    Amazinggggg dii loved it…. it was fab… juzz luv ur writings…hell desperate to read d nxt one… plz post nxt as soon as possible

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Lauren…thanks a lot…next episode i have uploaded just now

  5. Nikita_jai29

    Hii dii…. You are impossible dii… Maine jitna socha tha… Aapne usse bhi jayada accha likha or minute to minutes described Kiya…. Oh dii.. I am so glad KI Maine ye idea aapke sath share Kiya kyoki is idea ko aapse better koi developed nhi kr sakta tha……. Love you dii…
    Thanks for your time and commenting on MMKAD to all my friends and silent readers…..

    1. VHM

      hey Nikita…first of all sorry…this episode got less comments when compared to others and i owe an apology to you for this…will try to write in a better way so that your wish to see loads of comments will come true…and thank you for having and keeping trust in me

  6. AMkideewani

    Fantabulous❤️❤️❤️

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much dear…thanks a lot

  7. Aashi26

    DIDI……………………………
    I’m back read all the chapters just mind blowing……….seriously Didi raw and Anika……just superb loved it splendid job done by you hats off Didi for writing such an amazing interesting thriller story……… I’m really really really really really really really EXCITED to read the next part….
    Love you Didi and your work and yaa I wanted to say this from a long time my angel is sooooooooo cute and pretty……. I’m just in awe seeing her…..

    1. VHM

      Hey Aashi…good to see you back…thank you so much dear..thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you to write such amazing words for me…you are saying about my daughter…if i am right then thank you so much dear…thank you…loads of love to you and keep smiling

      1. Aashi26

        Yup I was telling about ur daughter my angel…..

  8. Dhar

    Diiiiiiiiiiiii I just wanna say that plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz do post the next update ASAP to the power of infinity. ………..U really do magics….this one was like having every damned thing in it …… suspense , romance , thrill , cuteness , sadness , and every similar emotions. …… I just loved it …. love ya di . Do post the next one ASAP

    1. VHM

      Hey Dharani…thank you so much dear…and please don’t say ”PLEASE” so many times…you know very well right …i post an episode everyday without fail and this ff is also no exception…i don’t do any magics dear…the magic is in you that you like all my works till date…thanks a lot dear…love you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode i uploaded just now

  9. JhanviPatel

    😱😱😱😱 SHIVAY – RAGINI WEDDING 😨😨😨😨… Yeh kaise ho sakta hai… Aur usme bhi jab shivay bhai ko anjnli bhabhi ka sach ke wahi hi anika hai uske baad to yeh bilkul nahi ho sakta😭😭😭😭… Plzzz di aesa mat karo na….😭😭😭😭… Just joking ha di 😂… Aap kuch bhi karo bcoz I know u app jo bhi karogi end mai to sab acha hi karoge😃… And the best part in today’s episode is that first meeting of ANIKA AND SHIVAY… after shivay know the truth of anjali as her ANIKA…Wow that’s superb scene and u describe that scene so beautifully😍😍😍😍 you are too good di… Just loved your ff kya likhti ho aap AMAZING… matlab abhi to mere pass words ki shortage ho gayi hai apko compliment dene ke liye… TOO GOOD SUPERB OUSUM FABULOUS😍😍😍😍😘… and yes aaj kitne dino baad itni jaldi comment kiya feeling happy😂… Just loved your ff di plzz continue this ff like this only SUSPENSE AND THRILLER… BYE DI LOVE YOU.😍😍😍😘😘😘

    1. VHM

      Hey sweety……thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…….he he he end hamesha happy chahiye hota hain sabko kyun sweety….is baar socha end sad kardoon kya kehthi ho? itna tareef mat karo sweety mujhse sehan nahi ho payega ..kyunki mein normal cheezein likhthi hoon kuch ajooba types nahi…tumna mujhse bahut pyaar karti ho isliye mere sari cheezein tumhe acchi lagti hain…aur please isis tarah mere saath dete rehna……sacchi aaj kitne dino baad tumhara opinion jaldi aa gaya …mein bhi bahut khush hoon iss wazah selove you loads dear…keep smiling and take care…….

  10. Amazing .Its very interesting.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Suganya…thanks a lot

  11. Niriha

    Awesome fabulous fantastic marvellous mind blowing amazing part di no words to say loved it to the core 😍😍😍😍😍it’s very interesting I’m so excited to know what going to happen next eagerly waiting for next part update soon di

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Niriha…thanks a lot…next episode i have uploaded just now…action packed sequence coming up…i hope you will like it

  12. Fffan1234

    Superb update. Glad Anika, Om and real SJM are alright. But totally scared due to precap. Hope that the wedding does not happen completely and all others are safe. Waiting for next part.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Dipti…thanks a lot…well will all others be safe let’s see…next episode i uploaded just now dear…

  13. Madhuani

    Superb di,
    Finally anjali being anika truth came out before of.
    I’m so tablatodh khush about it.
    Your description about each n every part was fabulous.
    Sahil with fsjm n ragini😱😱
    Nail biting precap.

    1. VHM

      Hey Madhu…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…tablatodh…my eyes search for your this cute words whenever i read you opinion..and when you write those my eyes twinkle and lips bend into a smiling curve….awee thank you so much for those amazing words for me…thanks a lot dear…next episode i uploaded just now

  14. Navz

    The screenplay and story are not less than any thriller movie……really dii…itsss 👌👌👌👌.u have a spl art of storytelling dii.
    Di…i have a question…did u work as RAW AGENT and disguised like harika dii.seriously..how did u write all those like bugs..cctv ..microphones…what not.
    This ques is really hitting my head.hhah.
    Waiting for next one.

    1. VHM

      Hey Chotii…thank you so much dear for those awesome lines for me…thanks a lot…i haven’t studied law, i was not an police officer, not an RAW agent …i was a software engineer and now i am not even that…i am just a ordinary normal lady…and this is the only truth Chotii…
      Bugs, cctv , microphones this is studied in my Bsc…so i knew about them …lol…i never used in real life but got a chance to use that here in this ff…….lol…….

      don’t hit your head dear…you are an would be doctor and we need you very much….love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care

  15. Hiii di, I was a silent reader. I was not able to comment till now as I used to read the chapters in one go when time permits.sorry for that.But i have read all ur stories and they are superb. Ur writing style is really amazing.U don’t give chance to any loopholes and doubts, everything is perfectly connected,logical and packed with emotions and full of suspenses . please post the next epi asap.. and keep writing

    1. VHM

      Hey Ammu…welcome…and thank you so much for posting your opinion…thanks a lot dear..OMG so many compliments at a time…awee so sweet of you to write such words for me…thanks a lot once again for that…i am so glad to know you are liking this FF….please do keep posting your opinions whenever it is possible for you…it’s an support and motivation to us …..keep smiling and take care

  16. Sagithya

    Awesome mind blowing fantastic fabulous lovely part di….
    Today’s part was full of emotion Revelation action n suspense too…
    At last Anika said the truth to shivaay…
    Who’s idea was the microphone CCTV n bug detector n all…
    U again kept a suspense in precap…
    Excited for the next part post the next part as soon as possible…
    Luv u di take care …

    1. VHM

      Hey Sagithya…thank you so much sissy…thanks a lot…well the microphone , bug detector and cctv idea was all mine…i hope it gelled well with this episode……i am so gald you liked the episode…next episode i uploaded it just now…love you loads …keep smiling and take care

  17. Gayathri.visu

    Finally Anika said truth to Shivaay! But half truth only…..!

    Today no long comments or questions di. Bcz now I m eargerly waiting for next part di. Getting interesting day by day……ur ff is not less than thriller n romance movie! Now whose name Yashi forget?? Oh didi……this is tooo much suspense!! Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update next part ASAP
    di.

    Take care di……n keep smiling!! Plz plz plz update very soon diiiiiiiiiiiii!!!

    1. VHM

      Hey Gayu…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…thriller n romance movie ..OMG that’s a huge compliment to handle…whose name Yashi forgot good question but as usual my lips are sealed and you need to wait…next episode i posted sometime before dear…

      love you loads Gayu and you too take care and keep smiling

  18. Sairish

    heyyy di..
    what was this ….
    how can you do this ….
    from where do you get this level of talent do writing …
    I’m on a rolarcoaster ride …full of surprises and ups and downs….
    I wait for it to get uploaded though sometimes I’m late in commenting…
    I have read this one quite early but I slept while commenting as i was hell tired after returning from school ..
    one ques …….do RSJM and FSJM have same features ..i mean do they have similar faces and that’s why yashi aka riyanshi was not able to make out the difference between the two ….
    another request i have is..can u plz send me the links of your story so that i can read it ….it would be great if u could help me out in this…..
    have a great day
    loads of love
    Sairish
    ❤❤❤❤🌹🌹🌹🌹

    1. VHM

      Hey Saiiiiiiiiirrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiisssssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhh…..

      After i read first two statements i was like what wrong did i do …..then i quickly read what you have written further and i was so surprised …..thank you so much dear..thanks a lot…no problem dear…rest is very important and posting opinion late also chalega…and yes i will send you the links to make it easy for you…only few episodes are left so it’s not a big thing for me to do…..

      all you questions will be answered in episode 19…….till then you need to wait…

      loads of love to you dear…..take care and keep smiling

  19. Di you are an amazing writer

    1. VHM

      That’s a big compliment in a very straight way …thank you so much komal thanks a lot

  20. Nida

    Seriously ans one question… are you really a police officer 👮… what a writing … superb great 👍… always keep us hooked to your ff every time …….

    1. VHM

      Hey Bestie…i wish i was a police officer but unfortunately i am not…thank you so much bestie…thanks a lot…you liked it na then i can sleep peacefully….what to do dear if i don’t leave at such point then how will i continue to keep everyone in suspense……next episode i just now uploaded…….love you loads bestie…missing you too…keep smiling and take care

  21. AnuluvsIB

    Hey from where do U get such awesome plots yaar.. feels like seeing a policy story movie…. thought through so well… hardly any oh my mata of logic or science…
    So fast paced.. racy…
    Am waiting for the next one!!

    1. VHM

      Hey Anu…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot for those amazing lines…concept credit to Nikita….and thank God till now everything is going without any loopholes …i hope i continue the same….
      Next episode i uploaded just now…….

  22. Ashwinee

    Akka after reading this meri toh hosh udgayi👌👌 . I knew you were suspense writer, but to this extent no way!!!!! 😱😱Ab bhi Yakeen nahi hora hai ki Koi ff ko iss level tak le jaa sakta hai .😯😯 Par kya karen,aapki ff hai toh maan na hi padega😊😊. Mujhe sach me ye samaj mein nahi aaraha hai ki taareef ff ki karoon ya aapki, 😅😅Dono ek hi hai toh bus hum Sab aapki writings pe fidaa hai😇😇😇[email protected]

    1. VHM

      Hey Ashwinee …thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…iss baar mein thaan lii thi ki suspense story hain suspense aakhir tak maintain karoongi….lol just kidding…..aisa kuch nahi hain…bas likh rahi hoon apna poora time isi ff ko de rahi hoon…hopefully success ho jaaye aur Nikita khush ho jaaye….aur agar kisi ki tareef karna chaho tho Nikita ko karna kyun ki asli hakdaar tho wahi hain……

      love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care

  23. fantastic …..i love the way how anika plan out everything and how she wrote the letter for shivay…..i’m so so happy that shivay got to know the truth….but how come shivay and ragini wedding sob.sob..ughrrrrr……please do something this cannot happen….can’t wait to read next….thanks for this beautiful epi

    1. VHM

      Hey Jane thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…what to do Shivaay is still under control of SJM and Ragini so wedding has to take place na…well let’s see what’s in store for us…i hope i wouldn’t disappoint you…….thank you for your time and patience…love you loads…keep smiling and take care

  24. Ahsana98

    Hi Di like all the episodes it’s was an awesome episode and emotional too.You always reply the comments at night but today you didn’t reply anyone’s comment. What happens to you Di. I hope you are fine.

    #I always like the ways you describe the story .Every parts are perfect Di.
    #Shivay realise the real face of Ragini and SJM.But he can’t do anything because his brother and Khanna,Sahil and Riyanshi’s life is in danger. After hearing OM’s car blast Gouri and Janvi are very emotional .That part was emotional.And finally anika Reval half truth to shivay .It was anika who save On and SJM.When Shivika meet each other after anika Reval the truth that part was the best part of the episode.Both are want to hug each other but they will first save Riyanshi, sahil and Khanna ,so they both are control their emotions. FSJM find out the details of key from Riyanshi.With the help of Shivay anika rescue Riyanshi and Khanna.me too shock with finding that sahil is with Ragini and FSJM.Both are very smart they know that shivay will save them and cancel the marriage so they keep sahil with them .so shivay can’t able to do anything.The next episode is Shigni’s marriage. I know that it can’t happen. Only one person can help for stopping this marriage .That is none other than RSJM .Ragini and FSJM are believed RSJM is died in that blast.The Shigni’s marriage happens time FSJM is trying
    to find out the key from Riyanshi’s suitcase.That time May be FSJM are trapped and RSJM came to Ragini as FSJM and failed their plan and bring their truth.

    #Yesterday I was Gus’s Riyanshi’s mother is related to Anika.Now iam sure Riyanshi is Chanda and SJM ‘s Daughter, The another friend of
    Yashi’s mother is Arjun.I feel that Anika
    is SJM ‘s sister .Her real name is Anjali Jeet Malhotra. Both Aniri are Malhotra sister’s.They lost their family in childhood.May be SJM Shows Aniri’s childhood pictures to Chanda .So she identify Anika is Anjali .I don’t know why I feel like that.
    #iam very excited Di for reading next part of your ff ,update soon.

    1. VHM

      Hey Ahsana…thanks a lot dear for as usual rocking analysis, interpretations and expectations….thanks a lot

      secondly sorry for posting my response late as i was writing episode 18 and partly episode 19 today which required my complete concentration…so i was late in uploading the next episode as well as responding back….

      as i said earlier…this FF i don’t want to touch the topic of Anika’s background so this FF will not prove Anika and Gauri to be sisters…..

      However Shivaay’s redemption track would be coming up and then this ff will end……
      i hope whatever i write will make sense and i get no chameli’s in return

      Next episode i uploaded some time before ……..

      Love you loads …keep smiling and take care

  25. Fantastic update di….. Shivika sence was Fabulous…. Just luv it….

    1. VHM

      Hey Banita …..thank you so much…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you …

  26. awesome episode
    waiting for climax episide
    update soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Aashi…thanks a lot …next episode up in the portal…waiting for your response on that

  27. Awesome….Khidkitod Update!!!!
    So, Anika, RSJM and OM r safe….
    Finally Shivaay comes to know that Anika is innocent…
    The emotions were beautifully portrayed,the Shivika meet, You are an amazing writer!!!!
    You write the plot logically not like the show….
    It was complete roller coaster ride of emotions altogether….
    oops Saahil seems to be in danger hopefully he will b safe….
    You describe everything so perfectly be it thriller or emotional…. 🙂
    PS: Sorry for being late got stuck up yesterday….

    1. VHM

      Hey Shivika…thank you so much dear for the super amazing lines you wrote…thanks a lot…sahil is in danger but he will come back too…next episode already in the portal…hope you like it..no worries take your time …first take care of yourself ..the opinions and all can wait

  28. Shraddha-DBO

    Awesome… awesome…u r just unimaginable….I missed few chaps…but caught it together😊

    Seriously u should write some daily soaps di, can v expect in future.

    Anyways eagerly looking out for next part di😄

    1. VHM

      Hey shraddha…good to see you back…thanks a lot dear…thank you so much…glad to know you liked the episodes …me and daily soaps writing …..mmmm will have to think about it…lol…kidding…writing is my hobby never thought about it as profession…thanks again dear…next episode already in portal…

      http://www.tellyupdates.com/mukammal-mohabbat-ki-adhuri-dastaan-mmkad-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-17/

      love you loads …keep smiling and take care

  29. Nita D

    Wow di this is awesome as well….the whole planning….first the letter and then the rescue mission….mera shak(last episode’s comment) an takin mein badal raha hai….
    Do u mind writing the script for some crime thriller show?? The trp will definitely soar the skies….u should really try that once….
    Now the only thing that can save the whole thing is key to Arjun’s locker which is with Riyanshi….if Anika can get that taken out (it’s still in Oberoi mansion)…she just have to ask Rita what did SJM ask to Riya….

    N I was wondering, the paper which is read by Ragini some two episodes ago, was it the one where Anjali gave to Mrs Malhotra, abt her identity.???

    N the small shivika moment was beautiful…..that line, ‘kya wo kal kabhi aayega’ really touched me….. But I hope only the title says Adhuri Dastaan n it will be a happy ending, with all of them together at the end….( well I don’t mind if Pinky isn’t there)

    1. VHM

      Hey Nita…finally mujhe araam se tumhara aalysis padhne ka time mila…thank you so much dear..thanks a lot…kya karoon …hifi zamaane mein jaha sab kuch hack ho sakta hain waha khat aur diary se kaam sambhalna pada….

      script writing and me …OMG never thought about it….i know you have read next episode because i just replied you…so you know everything now…

      when i wrote that line ”kya woh din kabhi aayega ” i got a sukoon wala feeling…i donno that was my personal favorite too…same pinch haan…

      i have not yet decided whether i am gonna leave it as Adhuri dastaan or poori dastaan…will have to work out about that with Nikita…but i can definitely tell you we are definitely moving towards the end…….

      last but not the least thank you so much dear…thanks a lot for everything

  30. Jerry_36

    Harika di !!
    Awesome chappy ! Loved it !
    Excited for the next chapter, loved all the elements that you included and you too. Keep writing more and more.
    Love yaa❤❤❤

    1. VHM

      Hey Vedika…thank you so much…thanks a lot…i am so glad that you liked the episode…next chapter too is in portal and i have read and responded too…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care

  31. Ankita27

    Amazing, fantastic, superb, mind blowing n what not… aap ki tarif karne ke liye words kam pad rahe hai di… as always khidkitod update…

    1. VHM

      Hey Ankita…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…itna bhi accha nahi likthi Ankita…ye concept Nikita ka hain tho saari tareefein usko dedo…mein tho bas likh rahi hoon…aur kuch nahi….

      Thank you so much once again dear…thanks a lot…love you loads …keep smiling and take care

  32. Zaveesha

    Again Sorry for super late comment…this episode was like I’m seeing a thriller movie…bugs microphone cctvs nd all…it was just perfectly written…
    Well I was a viewer of CID so know very much about all these plans…
    But seriously yarr what a plan…
    Nd ur writing makes me say Wwoooooowwwww everytime I ended reading the episodes…
    I have commented on the next episode also…

    1. VHM

      Hey Zaveesha thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…this time i a sorry for the late response

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