MUKAMMAL MOHABBAT KI ADHURI DASTAAN ( MMKAD ) – ISHQBAAZ FF – EPISODE 16

Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB….. please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

When Shivaay was in thoughts Riyanshi came to him and patted him …Shivaay came out of thoughts and lifted her and made her sit in his lap……

Riyanshi ‘’Shivaay bhayya….you didn’t completely see the card….you just saw smiley and left from there…I felt very bad and I am annoyed……’’ saying that she showed him the card

Shivaay ’’oooo..Sorry Riyanshi…..i am so sorry……give me the card …I will read everything right now….’’

Riyanshi ‘’he he he he….’’ she smiled

Shivaay ‘’why are you smiling…I just said Sorry’’

Riyanshi ‘’Shri shri shri 108 tadibaaz bagad billa is saying sorry to little Riyanshi’’ she smiled again

Shivaay was shocked listening to her words……..

Shivaay POV ‘’is Riyanshi connected to Anika…I mean she is speaking as Anika…same lines same wordings…how?’’

Riyanshi ‘’shivaay bhayya what are you thinking?’’

Shivaay ‘’the line you said just now….who made you learn?’’

Riyanshi ‘’ohh that…..Rudra bhayya…….he was saying about his best friend …mmm…what’s her name ..yeah …Anika Bhabhi and was telling me how she used to speak with you …I liked it and used it against you…I am so intelligent na?’’ she did the intelligent wala sign as Rudy does…….

Shivaay ‘’Ohh GOD …you are learning all these from that dumbbell Rudra…I can’t let this happen….tomorrow Khanna will take you to school where Sahil is studying….i will get your admission done there…….’’

Riyanshi ‘’Yee…yuppieee…really Shivaay bhayya will you join me in school……..’’

Shivaay ‘’off course Yes……..tomorrow Khanna will take you…happy ?’’

Riyanshi ‘’very much happy……….thank you ‘’ she kissed Shivaay and jumped in happiness….

Shivaay for sometime forgot his worries and was looking at her happily……….

Riyanshi then gave him the card again and said ‘’I didn’t want to give this card back as I was annoyed but now I am not annoyed anymore…read this card …I want to sleep now’’

Shivaay took the card and kept it under the table lamp and left from there taking Riyanshi to her room and made her sleep……..

————————DAY 2

It was morning and everything was going as per plan……..Om was keeping eye on Shivaay while Rudra was helping everyone in his way……..while doing Shivaay asked Rudra to get Sumo here as Riyanshi is going with Khanna to school and she wants to meet Sumo before going ……..Rudraleft towards Sumo’s room

Sumo was getting ready………..Rudra knocked the door ……Sumo without seeing asked to come in…….

Rudra was mesmerised to see Sumo so beautiful…….Sumo too was looking at him in a trance……..

Sumo ‘’what are you doing here?’’

Rudra ‘’thank God you at-least said something’’

Sumo ‘’tell me what work do you have here?’’

Rudra ‘’Sumo why are you angry with me…I mean everything is fine between us then why are you acting cold with me?’’

Sumo ‘’does everything look normal to you Rudra…if yes then I have nothing else to say…if no then there is nothing I need to say’’

Rudra ‘’You can’t do this with me Sumo…we are ‘’ He stopped

Sumo looked at him

Sumo ‘’we can discuss about this later…there is much more to solve before all this …so tell me why did you come’’

Rudra ‘’to take you with me’’

Sumo ‘’what?’’

Rudra ‘’I mean Shivaay bhayya asked me to bring you down…Riyanshi is leaving with Khanna to Sahil’s school for admission …she wants to meet you before leaving…’’

Sumo ‘’ohh okay…let’s go then’’

They both came down and Dadi was the most happiest to see them together while they were descending the steps……..

Riyanshi hugged Sumo and expressed her happiness…while Shivaay instructed Khanna to be careful and get Riyanshi’s admission done…also he asked to bring Sahil back during their return…….Khanna agreed and took Riyanshi with him………

——-AFTER SOMETIME

Malhotra’s arrived and Oberois welcomed them………they all sat and were chatting …after half an hour ….Anika/Anjali spoke to SJM and said that she needs to go to Malhotra mansion to complete the remaining work there…..

SJM smiled and said ‘’house is all yours Ms.ANJALI …all the best’’

Anika/Anjali sensed something different but she was in no mood to get delayed………..she thanked SJM and left from there signalling Om and Rudra….they too nodded their heads in positive……..

Anika /Anjali left from there…….

Ragini looked at SJM and he smiled ….Ragini too smirked

Ragini POV ‘’the mouse will be falling in trap now……..’’

Shivaay came out and greeted and met SJM and Ragini…he bent to take blessings of Mrs.Malhotra…

Mrs.Malhotra hugged Shivaay and whispered ‘’Don’t let this marriage happen…please’’

Shivaay looked at her in shock…..but he couldn’t understand why she said so…….

Mrs.Malhotra signalled him to be quiet and think about her words…….Shivaay was in thoughts…….

—————–MALHOTRA MANSION

Anika stepped in to the house and looked around…she saw the decorations that were done yesterday were intact……..she wondered how come Ragini and SJM didn’t change them even after they knew that they cannot see the cctv camera recordings…..

However she was not going to stop………she directly walked towards Store room……..

The store room door was different…….it was protected by fingerprint lock system , it was sound proof and water resistant…….it was double sealed room , which means the outer portion was made of Wood but the inner portion was made of steel…so breaking the door was impossible……..Ragini and SJM have taken precautions to place a CCTV camera right infront of the room……also microphones were fitted near the store room door to listen to any conversation going on……..

Anika/Anjali saw the store room door and assessed everything…she then took a white-noise generator which transmits voice signals at lower frequency and placed near the microphones so that it gets corrupted….the device did it’s work…….later she placed a laser beam light straight towards the cctv camera placed before the store room…the laser beam distorts the camera lens of cctv camera…..she took out the gloves from her bag which had fingerprints of SJM…..

——-flashback in daffodils restaurant when Anika met SJM a day before

Anika called one of her team mate to meet him in Daffodils…the team mate was disguised as waiter…..SJM held a glass of water to drink while talking to Anika……his fingerprints were placed on the glass…….after the discussion was complete Anika signalled the waiter /teammate to take the glass …he took the glass carefully and collected the fingerprints….the made gloves with those fingerprints and delivered them to OM as a courier…….that was the courier Anjali/Anika received a night before while Shivaay was spying her……..

————–Flashback ends
Anika took some white-noise generators and placed them in her pockets …wore the gloves and placed them on the scanner…….the door was open……….all the lights were on …….she was surprised to see the lights on when she expected the lights to be off and the room to be dark…she stepped in leaving the door open and moved in looking here and there………..where-ever she found microphones she fitted the white noise generator devices……and went deeper inside the room……..when she finally found a person laying unconscious……….

She turned the man and shocked to see him……….Samar Jeet Malhotra………..her lips spoke ……….while her eyes were horrified to see him..……..

She quickly came out of shock and took a glass of water placed by and sprinkled it on his face….she later rubbed his hands and legs and did all basic things to bring him into consciousness….after an hour of attempts she was successful…….

Real Samar Jeet Malhotra (RSJM) ‘’Who are you and why are you here? I am not going to say anything to you even if you kill me…get lost and do whatever you want to do but I am not going to give in’’ he spoke

Anika / Anjali ‘’relax Mr.Samar Jeet Malhotra….i am Anjali , a RAW agent and I have come here to help you and take you out…we have very less time and we need to go out before the fake Samar Jeet Malhotra comes in…’’

RSJM ‘’no I wouldn’t believe you…I know you are also a traitor as the ones living here…….so just leave and don’t try to fool me’’

Anjali quickly showed her ID card and made him trust her………

RSJM ‘’please save YASHI…please they will kill her…please …go fast and save her’’

Anjali ‘’relax …Mrs.Malhotra was also saying the same…who is Yashi ..till I don’t get any details how will I know and save her…’’

RSJM ‘’YASHI is my daughter….she is living in Australia with my wife…….few days before the fake SJM has shot my wife but my child somehow escaped ……please save her……..’’

Anjali ‘’okk fine…do you have any picture of her?’’

RSJM ‘’yes…he took a pic of her daughter from inside his pillow which he saved without the notice of Fake SJM and showed it to her…..’’

Anjali stood up in shock ‘’RIYANSHI ‘’ she whispered seeing the pic and then looked at him

Anjali ‘’she is Riyanshi right?’’

RSJM ‘’Yes…but how do you know?’’

Anjali ‘’first tell me why did you change Riyanshi’s name to Yashi’’

RSJM ‘’ no it’s otherwise…her actual name is YASHI….due to security reasons we had to change her name to Riyanshi…Riyanshi also knows that her actual name is YASHI but we thought her to say her name as Riyanshi to any stranger ….also we ensured that her pic was not taken or developed…rest details I will let you know later …but please save her first…if she is caught disaster will occur’’

Anjali ‘’Fine relax…she is safe as of now…but she will be in danger sometime later…I will inform the one who can give his life for your daughter’’

She picked up her phone when……..the lights went off in the store room and the signal jammers were switched on……..Anika stood in shock thinking how foolish is to leave her bag outside……..

She was thinking of a way to get away from there but nothing was working…she knew what the lights off means and jammers on also means……then she pressed the button on her smart watch…….

————————Oberoi Mansion

Shivaay was feeling weird for all the happenings…Sumo and Gauri came to him and asked him to keep trust as everything will happen right……Shivaay smiled sadly and they both hugged Shivaay…….

OmRu came to them

Om ‘’shivaay are you sure , you have taken right decision?’’

Shivaay ‘’I have taken a decision long back to get married to Anika and you know after that what happened..and now I have taken another decision and now let’s see where my fate takes me’’

Rudra ‘’but bhayya…if you are not sure , we still have time…we can stop the marriage’’

Shivaay ‘’I wish i could but it’s late…a lady is waiting for me with expectations …it’s about her respect and dignity too’’

Om ‘’Please Ragini doesn’t seem to be what she looks…I always get negative vibes when she is around us and moreover Anika bhabhi’s place none can take’’

Shivaay ‘’this is all because of Anika…she spread all this raita and then she left me…….she left me disabled ……and now I am not in a position to think or decide anything…’’

Gauri ‘’bhayya please think once again’’

Om POV ‘’how I wish I could tell you Anjali is Anika Bhabhi…how I wish I could make everything right in your life…how I wish I could stop this marriage……’’

Rudra ‘’ok no senti talks today …tomorrow our Shivaay bhayya will become paraya dhan…so today let’s enjoy’’

Shivaay-om-Rudra-Sumo –gauri everyone went to the hall …Shivaay stared at Mrs.Malhotra……

Ragini came forward and asked Shivaay for dance…….Rudra sat with SJM and indulged in talks …

Om was keeping an eye on everyone…….the celebrations started and were going on in full swing…when Om and Rudra’s smart watch beeped……..

Om and rudra looked at each other…….Rudra walked towards Om

Om ‘’Rudra …you keep an eye on Shivaay while indulging in talks with SJM …I will ask Sumo to keep an eye in Ragini…I think Anika Bhabhi is in trouble I will call the person ad inform him to reach out to Anika bhabhi’’

Rudra agreed and Om spoke to Sumo…Sumo without any questions agreed to Om…….

All this while Ragini and SJM were exchanging looks and smirking

Om went away and dialled the number which Anika gave him…but with no use…no one was picking……he was going berserk…..and was unable to know what to do……..he then called his security persons and asked them to trace the last location of Anika/Anjali ….they gave him the address as Malhotra Mansion …….he meanwhile tried Anika’s teammate number but he did not pick the call …….finally he made up his mind to go to Malhotra Mansion……….

He messaged Rudra and wrote everything while driving hurriedly towards Malhotra Mansion

————STORE ROOM , MALHOTRA MANSION

Anika/Anjali spoke to RSJM and got to know everything …she was shocked with what all happened…all the points connected and she knew what and where everything went wrong……..she was just hoping that her team comes soon………

Om reached Malhotra mansion and found it be dark……..he returned to his car and picked up torch and came in…….

He was walking around the house and nothing was heard or seen….slowly he walked towards the corridor when Anika heard footsteps

Anika/Anjali ‘’Someone there? Hellooooooooo….’’

Om could listen a voice but it was almost inaudible…he walked towards the voice and reached store room door…he was about to step when

Anika/Anjali ‘’Whoever you are don’t step in….this room is filled with laser electricity …it can be dangerous if voltage is too high……so please stop there……….’’

Omkara ‘’Bhabhi it’s me Omkara’’

Anjali/Anika ‘’Om you here…but why did you come…where is my teammate?’’

Om’’bhabhi he was not picking call ..and I got worried and reached here’’

Anjali /Anika ‘’Om don’t step in….it’s dangerous…’’

Om ’’then how will you come out Bhabhi?’’

Anjali ‘’Om by door you will find a laser light and my bag……pick the laser light and focus it in to the room…….’’

Om did so……..

Anjali ‘’fine …now find such a device which will be like a sort of joystick or remote with voltage buttons…I am sure it must be nearby…….’’

While she searched for the Laser electricity generator in the room………..she found out the generator ……

OM searched and finally after lot of attempts he found…

Om ‘’bhabhi I found it’’

Anjali/Anika ‘’Om just turn off the Voltage button……a red light should be on’’

Om did so but it was not getting off………

Om ‘’bhabhi….it;s not getting off’’

Anjali POV ‘’I am sure he did it…I must say he is expert…..now what to do…I must reach the generator first….she placed herself in a wooden barrel which was beside her and rolled towards the generator …she saw the generator wires were going outside through a small hole and finding the switch and stopping the current was right now not a correct thing’’

Om ‘’bhabhi what to do…….’’

Anjali ‘’tell me how much voltage the device is indicating?’’

Om ‘’replied the Voltage reading’’

Anjali POV ‘’not pretty much when it’s Laser electricity…….but why did they put such a less voltage….OMG that means they are listening everything……that means by now they got to know Riyanshi is Yashi …I have very less time and I must stop them from reaching Riyanshi’’

Anjali ‘’Om on my count of 3 … break the device………..’’

Om ‘’are you sure?’’

Anjali ‘’yes…break the device …but ensure you move far from the room…………a minor blast will occur as the laser voltage will fluctuate to maximum and burst’’

Om ‘’what about you bhabhi’’

Anjali ‘’we will get ourselves locked here in the washroom….placing ourselves in wodden barrel’’

Om ‘’fine Bhabhi…’’

Om broke the device which sent distorted signals to the generator …which in turn signalled the voltage rise in the battery and it bursted as expected …….

Anika brought RSJM out and looked for Om…Om was far away but the impact of burst made him faint …Anika sprinkled water on Om and he stood up and hugged Anika……and looked at RSJM and was shocked……

Anika remembered that she had less time as Riyanshi and Sahil would arrive in a short while from now to OM and if Fake SJM sees her it will be the end of story……..

Anika looked at Om in horror with that thought………

Anika ‘’Om lets go fast….’’

Om ‘’bhabhi…function has still some time to end’’

Anika ‘’Give me your phone now’’

Anika dialled Shivaay ‘s number

Shivaay picked the call

Shivaay ‘’hello Om…where are you ? why did you leave the function in mid way…come soon’’

Anika ‘’Shivaay…I …I am Anjali…please listen to me carefully…YASHI is RIYANSHI…please save her…’’

Shivaay ‘’what?’’

Anika ‘’I will tell details later …listen to me carefully….stop Khanna from bringing Riyanshi before Malhotra’s family…her life is in danger…please do something but she should not come in front of Malhotra’s…’’

Shivaay ‘’but why?’’

Anika ‘’don’t you understand I said I will explain later…first do what I say …stop Riyanshi from coming in-front of Malhotra’s and this is an order and you ought to follow my orders at this time …’’ she screamed at him at peak of her voice

Shivaay stayed stunned and spoke ‘’ok Fine …relax …I will call Khanna and ask him to take her to our farmhouse’’

Anika ‘’ok fine …ensure you don’t take Yashi or Riyanshi’s name infront of Malhotra’s…..please keep me updated…..i am directly going to your farmhouse …Om will be back to OM’’

Shivaay called Khanna who was on his way home with Riyanshi and Sahil …….but he was out of reach …..he tried again and again but no use….Shivaay threw the phone in anger with Anika/Anjali’s words saying Riyanshi’s life is in danger……

Ragini came to him and tried to talk but Shivaay was in no mood to talk ..so he left from there being disturbed………Ragini looked at him in surprise ….

She sat on his bed thinking what could be the matter when her eyes fell on the card made by Riyanshi under the table lamp…..

She took it and saw and was about to keep it back when she smelled lemon again at the bottom of the card…..

She immediately switched on the Night lamp and placed the paper near the bulb …..the rest of the words that Riyanshi wrote appeared…….

‘’
You are so sweet Shivaay bhayya…I love you so much …don’t be sad and keep smiling……

———with love YASHI (RIYANSHI)
‘’

Ragini read the name YASHI and smiled !!!

Ragini saw Rudra beside SJM and thought that it was not wise to take SJM away from Rudy and talk to him…so she called him……

SJM saw the call was from Ragini … he looked towards Ragini who signalled him to move away from Rudra… so he excused himself from Rudra in pretext of answering the call……

SJM ‘’Yes’’

Ragini ‘’Riyanshi is Yashi’’

(Ragini used ti update everything about the Oberois to SJM everyday…so SJM very well knew Riaynshi)

SJM ‘’Are you sure?’’

Ragini ‘’I have proof from the horse’s mouth’’

SJM ‘’I know what to do now’’

Ragini ‘’good what about Anjali ?’’

SJM ‘’she did her duty …exactly what we expected her to do…it’s time to bid farewell to her…if I am not wrong she will be on her way to OM with the real SJM …..the moment she crosses the first signal …boooooooooom……….all three will reach heaven safely…..because our men have done their duty…tomorrow’s headlines A blast near the signal three dead’’

Ragini ‘’but whose car have you fit the bomb…..bhayya you know I can’t take a chance …we need Shivaay to be alive and I need to get married to him by hook or crook ….and if something happens to Omkara this marriage will never happen’’

SJM ‘’Anjali will take care of Omkara…ithis time Oberois are in our hand and shivaay has no option except to get married to you….enjoy the rest of the time…as expected everything is running as per our plan…this time we are gonna win’’

Ragini disconnected the call and turned to go from Shivaay’s room when she saw Shivaay standing behind looking in anger ………

Here Anjali and RSJM started in Anjali’s car and Omkara in his car…all three neared the first signal…….

So this was the Sixteenth episode of the FF ………..Please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad is welcome…I will reply as soon as possible….all credits to NIKITA !!!

80 comments

  1. swethakannan

    will anika and sjm and omkara and yashi die will the destruction of oberoi and family caused

    • VHM

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      Hey swetha…first of all thank you for posting your opinion…thanks a lot…and tomorrow you will get all your answers…..so stay tuned

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Was it that bad Chotii…you wrote no words…just kidding…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot …i will upload next episode in sometime ……

  2. Zaveesha

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    Again u stop in the nick of time….suspense is decreasing as well as increasing… u r just fab di…now the whole day I’ll think about this ff as usual….it has stored in my brains very much…it story always revolve in my mind…it means u r successfull in writing a mysterious story…..good going…
    Nd what a storyline nikita…
    Kudos to both of u…
    Nd Thank u soo much for the compliments on my dp….love u too…

    • VHM

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      Hey Tanzeela….awee so sweet of saying those lines dear…thank you so much…well in next episode you will get majority of suspense revealed ….off course with the flow of your mind…..all credits to Nikita…love you loads keep smiling

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Arfa…thanks a lot…..yes we are moving towards end 5 or less than 5 episodes left to end the FF….

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Raksha…welcome …thank you for posting your opinion…i am so glad to know you are liking this FF…all credits to Nikita

  3. Dhar

    Dhar

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    Omgggggggggg soooooo much of suspense……… again a cilffhanger …. Sorry I couldn’t comment on the last part….but as usual that was also an amazing episode 😍😍😍 plzzz plzzz plzzz do post the next update ASAP

    • VHM

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      Hey Dharani…glad to see you back…thanks a lot dear…and no worries take your time to read and if it’s not possible to post your opinion then it’s absolutely fine…next episode i will upload in sometime……

  4. Shivika

    Awesome….Loved it…❤
    Again a cliff-hanger I’m dying of excitement…🤗
    Ragini & Samar are so smart….
    Anika’s,Om’s,RSJM’s & Riyanshi’s life in danger….
    I guess Shivaay heard everything & he will save them…..
    Seems like mysteries r going to unfold soon….Completely thrilling Update….
    Waiting fr d nxt….😊
    Lots of love….❤

    • VHM

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      Hey Shivika…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…yes dear mysteries are going to unfold at their own pace in every episode from now…maximum 5 episodes this ff will end…..loads of love to you too…keep smiling and take care…next episode i will upload in sometime from now

  5. jane

    wow too good dear…you took my breathe away for a moment….you are too good really creative in writing…..please waiting for the next update please post soon i can’t wait to read the next part..thanks for writing such a great episode

    • VHM

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      Hey Jane …thank you so much …thanks a lot…next episode i will upload in sometime from now…thank you for reading the episode with so much of patience

  6. Nikita_jai29

    Nikita_jai29

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    It is superb dii.. Unexpectedly.. Move by your side…. Love you… Thanks for your time and commenting on MMKAD to all my friends and silent readers….

  7. Priyadas

    Priyadas

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    Suspense suspense this is all I can manage to say as if not. You again stopped the story at the nick of time. What more to say Di you story is just awesome and amazing. Waiting for the next. Take care di.

    • VHM

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      Hey Priya…thank you so much dear…few more episodes and then no more suspense as this ff will end….next episode i will post in sometime from now…thanks a lot once again…you too take care and keep smiling…love you loads

  8. AnuluvsIB

    AnuluvsIB

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    Omg! 😳 I am totally stunned! I wish this was a novel or a book where I cud just keep reading without stopping!!
    Y gals are awesome!

  9. Maryam_ishq

    Maryam_ishq

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    Awesome di… it is just fabulous how ur bringin in different twists in each episode… all the while we all were thinking tht riyanshi is arjuns daughter but she turned out to be samarjeet malhotras daughter 😱…. but how does riyanshi knw anjali 🤔… if some questions solve then more questions pop up… eagerly waitin for ur next epi. Seeing ur this ff am wonderin ur book is gonna be a great hit… u really got a way with writing out mystery in fact ur good in writin all sorts of stuff

    • VHM

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      Hey Maryam…thank you so much dear…awee so sweet of you to write such amazing lines …i am so glad you are liking this FF…truly speaking i had no intention of creating this much of suspense…it just got created with flow…thank you for all the compliments…donno about the book but before writing the book i need to learn many more things…specially english and vocabulary …i am very bad at that……
      love you loads …keep smiling and take care

  10. Niriha

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    Awesome…fabulous part di it’s very interesting loved it to the core 😍😍😍di waiting for next update soon

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Niriha…thanks a lot…next episode i will upload in sometime from now…love you loads …keep smiling and take care..

  11. Sagithya

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    Awesome di … It s like a triller action movie….. Loving it to the core …
    U have given a another suspense of real n duplicate Samar…..
    U n Nikita di r doing fabulous ……
    Excited for the next part.. post it soon….

    • VHM

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      Thank you so much Sagithya…thanks a lot…he he he…this had to happen sissy….all credits to Nikita…next episode i will upload in sometime from now…love you loads …keep smiling and take care

  12. Gayathri.visu

    Gayathri.visu

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    SPEECHLESS di!! OMG….interesting twists. Real Samar Jeet Malhotra n FSJM??! I….I didn’t expect this turning point. And Yashi is Samar’s daughter!!! Did that yuckini n FSJM are killed Anika’s teammate?? So that paper is Anika’s paper! Now Om is also in danger…But why the this yuckini is calling FSJM as her brother?? Is yuckini does not belongs to Malhotras family or FSJM and
    RSJM are twins?? When Shivaay kept that card under the night lamp, I was like…..dumb Shivaay just look that card carefully! What will happen next di???????
    Eagerly waiting for next part di….plz update next part asap…..

    And Hats off to Nikita too!!

    Take care n keep smiling di….. Love u sooooooooooooo much di!!!

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Gayu…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i am so glad that you have encountered unexpected turns…well when you encounter the unexpected it’s something for the one who created the mystery to rejoice and right now i am flying…awee thank you so much and love you loads dear…next episode i will upload in sometime from now…all credits to Nikita…keep smiling and take care

  13. Sairish

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    heyyy di …..
    this was not less than a thriller movie …
    my eyes were glued to like anything…i just can’t stop my self from not looking here and there while reading this……
    I must say..that u have an extremely great talent of writing and decrbing this …
    hope mmkad would be a novel..and if it would be true then i could have read it only in a day or two …..
    as i always say that I’m in love with this storyyy yaaaarrr😭❤😍😘…..
    u won’t believe I’m having my maths test but I preferred this over that though maths of my favourite subject 😂😂😂…
    and ya thanks for understanding me and accepting thing if I comment late …..and u know what from the beginning i had an idea that riyanshi is none other than yashi..can’t believe that it was true ✌✌😂😂
    At last do post the next one soon ……can’t wait to read the next one….
    lots of love
    Sairish

    • Sairish

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      di….
      one more thing..thanks for having interest in reading my ff …hope I would cope up with your expectations…
      it’s like an amazing feeling that I’m having with me thinking that u’ll read and comment in my work…..
      don’t know how bad it would be….
      And ya after reading don’t forget to pen down your thoughts in the comment box…
      suggestions are most welcomed and I truely need them right now 😋😋😋
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/12871/?profiletab=posts
      it’s the link for my ff..u’ll find all the 4 parts and I’ll be uploading the 5th one hopefully on Tuesday….
      take care
      love
      Sairish

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Sairissssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhh…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…OMG maths exam and you were reading this episode….i can understand dear so no need to thank me…you are calling me dii na so no sorry’s and explanations okay…thanks a lot for all the amazing words dear…keep rocking ..all the best for your exams and love you loads…by the way i have started reading your ff while taking breaks from writing this FF and trust me it’s a great relief….and you write so beautiful and amazing…i am nothing when compared to how awesome you write…thank you for giving me link ….keep smiling …take care

  14. Anu16

    Anu16

    |Registered Member

    Omg! ye ho kya raha hai? I’m feeling that I’m watching a movie.. u have potrayed so many minute details… just like any mystey novel…that is the highlight of ur ffs… but too many mystries and suspenses cropped up this time… real n fake SJM Ragini’s real motive…Anika’s plan… riyanshi’s truth……but how does Yashi know Anika if real SJM doesn’t know Anika…….. i can’t wait to read the next part n yet i don’t want the mystery to end… waiting eagerly for next……

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Anu…thank you for all those amazing words…thanks a lot…all the questions will be answered in next few episodes…that is all i can say you now….next episode i will upload in sometime from now…love you loads dear…thanks again…keep smiling and take care

  15. Jerry_36

    Jerry_36

    |Registered Member

    How could you, just tell me….

    How can you write a story such beautifully, Nikita And Harika didi, every time I read your chapter of the story its just the creates feeling one gets. Thoroughly enjoyed this one too. Hope you are fine now…

    Love you, post soon ❤

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Vedika…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i am glad you are liking this episode and ff…all credits to Nikita and yes i am fine now dear…thanks a lot for the love and concern…waiting for your next episode ……..love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care…

      next episode i will upload in sometime from now…

  16. Ashlyn.G

    Ashlyn.G

    |Registered Member

    Omg….you always make me speechless di..what a flow…like we are on a roller coaster ride…full of surprises…..loved it to the core….well done Harika di and Nikita….keep writing like this di….take care both of you cuties…love u….

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Ashlyn…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you to write such amazing words…all credits to Nikita …love you loads dear…take care and keep smiling…

  17. Fffan1234

    Fffan1234

    |Registered Member

    OMG!!! Another cliff hanger. I am absolutely loving it. Hope that Anika, Om and real SJM alright. Looking forward to next part

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Dipti…thanks a lot…i am glad that you are liking this…next episode i uploaded it

  18. JhanviPatel

    JhanviPatel

    |Registered Member

    AGAIN… SUSPENSE END…
    U again nailed it di… I just LOVE your writing skill… And the best part is the way you express each and every scenes, every characters and BEST EVER DIALOGUES…😍😍😍😍And today in clg jab ritika ne mujhe dekha she literally running like usain bolt and scream from the stairs that JHAN LA JALDI TERA PHONE LA…JALDI…and I was like ha bahen le le tere liye ff khol ke hi rakha hua hai and she just jump in bench and start reading your ff with bag on her shoulder and without saying Hi to anyone😂😂😂… And all other students in the class are like YEH EXACTLY HI KYA RAHA HAI😂😂😂😂… So much funny scene…😂😂😂😂😂 And yes one more thing yeh detective SSO and Detective ASSO/ANJALI/JWALA ko padh padh ke mai bhi Detective ban gayi hoon😁… I am not joking haan aaj maine sachi Detective wala kaam kiya😁😁😁… And mujhe to lag raha hai yeh ff padh padh ke mai ek undercover RAW agent na ban jau😂😂😂… Ok di plzz continue your ff with this much thriller just loved it… 😍😍😍😍 Love you loads di😍😍😍😘😘😘😘… Bbye take care…

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Sweety…thank you so much dear and thanks to Ritika too…i am so happy to know about your and Ritika’s excitement…few more episodes and we are good to end this FF…ha ha ha h…such a funny scene indeed and yes mujhe pata chal gaya tumhara sherlock holmes wala kaand aaj ka…and i am so happy and proud of you…aakhir behen kiski ho…lol just kidding…good job indeed…had i been in your place i would have never thought of doing such thing…love you too loads dear…keep smiling and take care

  19. Ahsana98

    Ahsana98

    |Registered Member

    Hi Di what an episode. It’s was fantastic and awesome.
    Today I understand that the letter in Ragini ‘s pass was anika’s letter written for Mrs Malhotra. So both Ragini and SJM are understand who is Anjali is and her targets.Both ragini
    and SJM are exicuted their plan of trap anika and find out Yashi.Shivay forget
    the card that given by Yashi.That card
    help ragini and Samar for finding who
    is Yashi is.Omika and RSJM are in
    danger. Iam happy finally shivay
    realise the true color of Ragini.And
    shivay surely Save Omika and RSJM
    and yashi from Danger.He is great wal
    l of shivay he Na Di so he will protect his family. So many twists and revelation are happen some are left.

    From the beginning when Riyanshi
    come to OM with Sumo iam
    understand that she is not related to
    Arjun .I Gus’s that she is SJM daughter and iam sure that she is none other
    than Yashi. My All guss was true .Riyanshi is Yashi .she is daughter of SJM .But I didn’t think the fake and real SJM.
    May be both RSJM and FSJM are twin’s.
    But I didn’t not think like that.I Gus’s
    Ragini is Sister of FSJM . Both are using
    RSJM identity for accomplishing their task of destroy both oberios and Nation.MAY be FSJM is Using face mask
    of RSJM.And yashi says that her
    mother and father says that one day
    Anjali come to her for saving her. So
    both of her parents know Anjali.But
    when RSJM saw anika he didn’t identify
    her.I didn’t understand that.I think
    Yashi ‘s mother is related to Anika.I
    Gus’s Chanda(anika’s friend) or ishana
    is Yashi’s mother or Yashi’s mother is
    related to Oberios. I don’t know yashi’s
    age. You both are amazing Writers yar .what an idea and concept dear.iam eagerly waiting for your next episode update soon Di .

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Ahsaana…all i can say is you almost caught the plot…but let’s see what is awaiting…next episode is already in the portal…thank you so much for the super awesome lines and compliments …i always wait for yiur opinion to be posted…and now i am happy reading it

  20. Aashi9

    Aashi9

    |Registered Member

    Diiii…….Its awesome
    now I get the thing
    You put amazing twist & turns which I like
    waiting eagerlt to read the next episode

  21. Banita

    Diii ab main kya bolun…. U made me speechless…. I hve no word di…. I think it’s d bessssttttt thriller stry in tu…. FANTABULOUS stryline Nikita…. U both r nailed it….
    From d start i hve a guess that Riyanshi is Yashi nd it’s true…. Bt fsjm!!!! Again a new suspence.. U always solve sme mystry nd add more suspence uperse u stop it in a cliffhanger….. It’s n’t fair na di….
    I know u post one epi in everyday firvi Plzss post nxt one soon….. Tc

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Banita…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…ha ha ha..now i am not gonna add any more suspense as it’s time for revelation…hope you will like the upcoming episodes too…thanks again dear

  22. Nida

    Nida

    |Registered Member

    All i can say is you have nailed it …. plzzzzz 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍update next asap

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Nida…thanks a lot…bestie i am so happy and relaxed to see your opinion finally posted in the page…now the feeling of incompleteness vanished…thanks a lot dear

  23. Madhuani

    Madhuani

    |Registered Member

    Di,really you are fabulous n this update is out of the box.
    Now I got how was I partially correct.
    Really very interesting.
    I’m short of words for this chappy.
    Dhadakebaaz chappy.
    Omg rsjm n fsjm??confuse about it still but never mind as will get to know it soon.

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Madhu…thanks a lot…dhadakebaaz another cute word after tablatodh…lol…yeah all confusion clearance is on your way …so let me know how you felt after reading the next episode which is already in the portal..love you loads dear

  24. Renimarenju

    Renimarenju

    |Registered Member

    Too Gud yaar…….U rocked ….sorry comment is damn short because my eye has some trouble….nikki darling….monday ko stitches nikaal rahi hein…..if possble pray 4me…gud job guys

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Renima for taking your time to read even after having an eye problem…thanks a lot as this is something big and great for us….we will definitely pray for everything to get fine and normal and i am sure it will be so…thanks a lot once again for your time and patience

  25. Nita D

    Nita D

    |Registered Member

    Wow….this is awesome….taking a break was a good idea after all, it worked for me at least…..
    Di sach sach batao, are u related to some defense agency or something??? The whole thing of Anika breaking into MM n then coming out of the store room everything is so well written…..it’s awesome……

    But now the protagonists n antagonists are at par with each other, I mean both of them know the whole story now….so it’s all damn exciting….frankly speaking, kisi bhi ff mein itna dhak dhak nahi hua aaj tak….

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Nita…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i swear mera Defense se door soor tak koi rishtha nahi hain…..sacchi…ha ha ha…kuch tho logic hona chahiye ki kaise woh room se bahar aayegi…..isliye aise likhna padha…

      yes both the parties have their own motto to find Riyanshi and both know the truth about each other….OMG itna tesnion create karoongi socha nahi tha…ab maine khud itna raita faila diya tho isko sameetne mein aur dimaag lagana padega…kay kehthe ho ……

      thank you dear…tumhara khidkitodh opinion padke mera din ban gaya

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