MUKAMMAL MOHABBAT KI ADHURI DASTAAN ( MMKAD ) – ISHQBAAZ FF – EPISODE 14

Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB….. please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY NIDA…….WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY, HEALTHY AND PROSPEROUS YEAR AHEAD AND I WISH AND PRAY THAT YOU CELEBRATE MANY MORE SUCH BIRTHDAYS……
REQUEST ALL THE READERS TO WISH OUR FRIEND NIDA ON HER SPECIAL DAY AND MAKE IT MORE SPECIAL…THANK YOU FOR DOING SO IN ADVANCE…………..
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Gauri and Sumo came to him and asked them to show the card…the card had nothing in it ….it was also empty……they looked at each other and all three of them ran to the hall where Riyanshi was sitting next to Anjali/Anika …….

OmRu were also there and they all were chatting……..

Shivaay ‘’Riyanshi …come here’’

Riyanshi went near him

Shivaay ‘’Why did you give me a blank card…….’’

Riyanshi smiled ………and so did OmRu and Anjali/Anika

Shivaay ‘’What !!! why are you all smiling?’’

Rudra ‘’she made such a beautiful card and you are saying blank card’’

Shivaay ‘’what ? have you gone mad? See this is a blank card’’

Om ‘’it’s not blank card…it’s magic card……’’

Sumo ‘’magic card?’’

Om ‘’Yes Actually Anjali Bhabhi was teaching her some paper magic tricks and Riyanshi made this card with one of those tricks……’’

Shivaay looked at Anjali…..

Shivaay ‘’ok fine……..how to read this?’’

Rudra ‘’I will explain and he bought a light bulb and placed the card near to the bulb and the smiley was seen in brown……’’

Shivaay , sumo and Gauri looked at each other………they smiled as they now got what Arjun meant ‘’ par dhoondna hoga uss ROSHINI KO JO DIKHAYEGI APNA KAMAAL’’

Shivaay kissed Riyanshi , thanked her and all three left in a hurry to Shivaay’s room leaving the card in Rudra’s hand……..

OmRu and Anika looked at them………..

Riyanshi ‘’Par Shivaay bhayya ne poora card nahi dekha…….aise hi chale gaye aur Rudra bhayya ne poora card light ke paas nahi rakha’’

Anika /Anjali ‘’koi baat nahi Riyanshi…aap mujhe poora card apni magic trick ek aur baar karke dikhado aur iss baar aap khud light ke paas aapka card rakho’’

Riyanshi ‘’No I have made this card for Shivaay bhayya , so I will show it only to him…’’ she said being annoyed ………

Anjali/Anika-Om and Rudra cheered her up but she didn’t budge on showing the rest of the content to anyone of them…….

Later Riyanshi was taken by Jhanvi….after they left………

Anika ‘’OmRu …I need some help………’’

Om Ru ‘’yes bhabhi’’

Anika ‘’I want this marriage to be preponed to three days’’

OmRu ‘’whaat?’’

Anika ‘’please listen to me carefully………yes I want this marriage to be preponed to three days …you need to convince Shivaay……..second you need to keep SJM and Ragini busy when they reach here for the pre wedding functions……..till I call you ……….i need this to be done as soon as possible …else some major destruction will occur’’

OmRu ‘’but why Bhabhi?’’

Anika ‘’Will let you know very soon…now start convincing Shivaay to prepone this marriage’’

OmRu ‘’Don’t worry Bhabhi…we will do as you say’’

Anika ‘’Om …’’

Om ‘’yes Bhabhi……..’’

Anika ‘’nothing…….had to tell you something but forgot’’

Anika POV ‘’Gauri’s truth has to be said to Om and I have to bridge the gap between them …but first I need to tackle Ragini and SJM…once they are out… I will be burden free and can concentrate on OF affairs…..’’

Om ‘’No problem Bhabhi…let me know when you remember’’

Anika and OmRu left for their next works…………

—————OMAKARA’S room

Rudra ‘’O …how to prepone this wedding’’

Om ‘’if I know I would have taken some action by now ‘’

Rudra ‘’But we promised Bhabhi …we have to do it soon’’

Om ‘’yes that’s what I was thinking’’

They were thinking and then Om spoke

Om ‘’guru ji……..yes Guru ji …we will take help of Guru ji whom Chotii maa believes ……and ask him to prepone the date…….’’

Rudra ‘’perfect…choti maa will never deny for guru Ji’s words…….but’’

Om’’but what?’’

Rudra ‘’Will Shivaay bhayya agree?’’

Om ‘’Rudra do you think Shivaay will disagree to us?’’

Rudra ‘’ohh yaaa…….i forgot this point’’

Om ‘’duffer DUMBELL’’

Rudra listening to those words remembered Saumya……….since she came to OM she never spoke a word with Rudra…….he tried and tried but she didn’t utter a single word…

Rudra didn’t understand why she was doing so but he was much hurt with Sumo’s annoyance………

Rudra POV ‘’Once Shivaay bhayya and Anika bhabhi’s matter comes to a proper end I will confront Sumo and make things fine between us…she has to come back to me……and she cannot stay annoyed with me for so long’’

Om ‘’rudra what happened?’’

Rudra smiled and nodded his head indicating nothing happened

Om ‘’then let’s get onto work’’

They both started their work…………..

———————–MALHOTRA’S MANSION

Ragini ‘’Moooooooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm…where are you?’’ she screamed

A lady came out ….she was in her mid 50’s……lean but attractive

Ragini ‘’Where were you? You know na I don’t like to wait for anyone…so please when I call you come quickly mom’’

Mrs Malhotra ‘’sorry beta I was in kitchen’’

Ragini ‘’And what were you doing in kitchen?’’

Mrs.Malhotra ‘’was preparing salad’’

Ragini ‘’did you add poison in it mom?’’

Mrs.Malhotra ‘’why will I do so….why are you saying so’’ she asked getting scared

Ragini ‘’first you eat the salad then I will eat’’

SJM ‘’Ragini…what’s this…behave yourself…….she is elder to you so respect her age atleast’’

Ragini ‘’ok fine…….i am sorry mom’’

Mrs.Malhotra ‘’it’s okay beta’’

SJM ‘’Mom…did you have food ?’’

Mrs,Malhotra ‘’no..not yet…’’

SJM ‘’Come sit then we will have food together……and ya by the way …Ragini and Shivaay Singh Oberoi ‘s marriage is in a week…so start preparations…I have appointed one of my staff member Anjali to help you out in wedding arrangements …she will help you’’

Mrs.Malhotra looked at both of them in shock …….

They all finished eating and left to their rooms………

Anika/Anjali reached Malhotra mansion to meet Mrs.Malhotra………SJM Welcomed her……..he took her to Mrs.Malhotra…..and introduced Anjali /Anika to Mrs.Malhotra

Anika /Anjali all the while was looking around the house…..she then looked at Mrs.Malhotra and she was looking as if she was living in a very dreadful environment being scared……

Anjali /Anika folded her hands and said ‘’Namasthe’’

Mrs.Malhotra reciprocated and gave a light smile………

SJM ‘’So Ms.Anjali you might carry on with your work and ensure everything is perfect…I will leave towards office now…have a nice day’’

Anika /Anjali ‘’Sure sir…you too have a nice day’’

SJM left and Anika/Anjali started doing her job………as a part of her job she asked Mrs.Malhotra to show her entire house , so that she can take pictures and design the wedding plan accordingly……..

Mrs.Malhotra nervously got up and asked her to follow….Anika/Anjali was taking pictures of entire house when she noticed a closed room…..

Anjali / Anika ‘’Aunty why is this room closed? I mean why aren’t you showing me this room?’’

Mrs.Malhotra ‘’No…..this …this room is never opened …I mean it’s store room and only sometimes Samar and Ragini access this room and I keep away from this….and it’s better if you too keep away from this room…’’she said as if she is warning

Anika/Anjali POV ‘’I can’t say aunty that I came here to help her…..as I can see CCTV camera’s are present everywhere …how to let her know…..’’

she was in thoughts when she saw file and papers in her hand……

Anika /Anjali ‘’Aunty ji …I have bought some designs….i will show you and I will also explain you my plans…..shall we go to living room’’

Mrs.Malhotra ‘’Sure…come’’

They both went and Anika looked at CCTV camera positions so she deliberately sat where what she is writing and showing is not caught and she asked Mrs.Malhotra to be seated in a position where what she is viewing cannot be seen in CCTV ……..

Anika / Anjali opened her file and gave few designs and asked Mrs.Malhotra to see it while she will draw few design right there and give it…….

She wrote on a paper

‘’Aunty … please act as if you are seeing a design…. please don’t look at me now as we are observed through CCTV camera’s fitted everywhere in your entire house…..….. I am Anjali …an RAW agent….i am here to help you … I know all truth about you and people living here….please don’t worry and just let what is happening as usual…we are working on getting back what you lost…..very soon you will get to know the wedding preponed…you just have to agree from your side …rest assured from our side…we are ready with all backup’s……after you read this letter …keep it in the file I leave here and then tear this letter and flush it in washroom or keep it safe without reach of anyone…….i know you would be asked what did I give you …so under this letter you will have a design paper just show them…..please be normal as you always are after I leave…….trust us aunty ji we will make everything fine in coming three days…also when Ragini and SJM enters store room please let me know somehow as this is very important to us I know this is difficult but just use the code ‘’ Hello WEDDING Designer’’ ‘’

Then she drew a design and handed both papers in such a manner as if it is a single paper…….

Mrs.Malhotra read the letter and looked at Anika/Anjali for one second …while Anika/Anjali looked at her and closed her eyes for a moment and opened as a gesture of assurance…..Mrs.Malhotra stood up and took the file…she smiled and Said ‘’THANK YOU FOR YOUR HELP’’ ………Anika/Anjali ‘’THIS IS NOT HELP AUNTY JI…THIS IS MY DUTY !!! NOW I SHALL TAKE LEAVE FROM YOU’’ saying that Anika/Anjali left from there………

——————-SHIVAAY’S ROOM

Sumo bought the night-lamp and took of the shade off the night-lamp and then Shivaay placed the first page of diary near the bulb…….nothing was visible…he did for second page..third page..nothing was visible…after 20 pages …he got irritated……….

Gauri ‘’bhayya……we are doing it wrong……remember the lines……..’’ JAANA HOGA WAHA TAK JIS DIN HUAN SARA NATAK ‘’ ……..that means check the date when Arjun came to your house’’

Shivaay remembered the date and turned the pages of the diary to the day before Ganesh Pooja……he placed the paper and then it started showing the words…..

Sumo-Gauri-Shivaay smiled looking at each other……….

The page in the diary read as

‘’
Shivaay by now you might have understood that Jwala is Anika…..truth is we both are undercover agents …we work for Research and Analysis Wing (RAW) …..this might shock you but yes this is the truth …we came here on a mission to tackle Sultan and his allies……he had planned to destroy you and create chaos among people there by creating communal threat to the country……….. for security reasons we could not disclose anything to anyone and I had to trouble you this much…this diary is very important and please keep it safe with you…understand that this should not reach anyone’s hand …….it’s not only related to Oberoi security but it is related to our Country’s security….i hope you would act responsible…….

Every details about Oberois and every details about Anika becoming Jwala has been filed…..How Sultan is connected to your family, why did Anika leave your family and what happened afterwards with her are present in a file……the file is in my bank locker and also you will find something else along with the file, if I have not taken it…in any case clear the bank locker and take everything with you and keep everything safe with you…..apart from the file whatever you find return it to RAW office in Delhi…..Be careful, as I said earlier , it is not only matter of security of Oberois but also the security of nation…..I have given permission to bank authorities to allow ONLY YOU to open the locker…..the bank locker can be opened with two keys along with YOUR finger prints……one key is with the bank the other key you need to find out…remember the clue to the key is still in the same letter I have left for you……..if you can find out who is YASHI then understand you have reached the file……and believe me you would know YASHI through someone who is trying to be part of your family, but who is not your family !!!

ALL THE BEST Mr.SHIVAAY AND I HOPE YOU REACH THE LOVE OF YOUR LIFE SOON…..YOU BOTH ARE MADE FOR EACH OTHER AND YOU CAN NEVER GET MUCH BETTER PERSON AS YOUR PARTNER THAN HER…….

‘’

All three read the page of the diary and looked at each other …….everything was trying to get clear yet still there was much to find out………

They three were about to read letter by Arjun when they heard Pinky calling everyone in the living room………

So Shivaay gave the diary to Gauri and asked her to keep it safe …….

Gauri ‘’par bhayya …why me?’’

Shivaay ‘’after reading the page in diary …someone wants to destroy Oberois and the country too…so destruction of Oberois would start with me…….i can allow destruction of me but not this diary…he asked to act responsible…..i have to and should fulfil his last wish when he is helping me so much…….so keep this diary with you…no one can ever know that it is with you because no one can suspect you……’’

Gauri nodded and slipped through back door to her room while Sumo and Shivaay started to go to the living room from separate routes…….

Anika/Anjali also reached OM just then and all OF members also gathered there……

Dadi ‘’Pinky…what happened why have you gathered everyone here? What’s so important?’’

Pinky ‘’mummy ji …pandit ji called and said the muhurat Ragini’s family chose after one week is not good for Shivaay…I mean he said his life would be at risk if he gets married on that day…when I asked him the solution he suggested to get Shivaay married in three days from now…I know it’s difficult but I agreed…so this marriage will happen in 3 days from now’’

Jhanvi ‘’What 3 days from now? Have you gone mad Pinky? How can you think marriage can happen in 3 days…no arrangements…no guests …nothing started and you have agreed without consulting anyone of us?’’

Anjali / Anika looked at OmRu and they winked at her

Om ‘’Mom…it’s okay we can and will handle if Shivaay agrees to get married in 3 days…’’

They turned towards Shivaay who was in deep thoughts and Gauri-Sumo were looking at Anika/Anjali

Shivaay was in deep thoughts…

Shivaay POV ‘’how to clear this mess….i know I will not marry Ragini and to stop this marriage I need to know every truth about my life and Anika too……and for all this I have to find out about Yashi…and get the file…….and now this marriage date is getting preponed …how will I manage?’’

Om came to Shivaay and jerked him

Shivaay ‘’ha…haan Om?’’

Om ‘’Shivaay …..where are you lost? I am sure you will not deny choti maa’s wish this time? Am I right?’’

Shivaay ‘’but …how will we make all arrangements in this short time…I mean we can postpone to next good muhurat if not in next week’’

Before OmRu could try to make him agree ,

Anjali / Anika ‘’Don’t worry Mr. Shivaay Singh Oberoi I will take care of all the arrangements …if you agree I will start my work from today itself…..and I assure it will happen as per your status within less time ‘’ she said assuringly

Shivaay couldn’t believe what he heard…he thought Anika/Anjali would get jealous and try to stop this marriage but she herself was asking him to go ahead…this hurt his ego badly……

Shivaay ‘’Fine….if everyone is okay…why would I deny…go ahead I will get married in three days’’ he left from there without listening anything else

Anika POV ‘’Sorry Shivaay…I need to make this move before they make their next move else we are gonna lose everything …….this marriage will never happen and I would never let it happen…for the last time I am hurting you…I promise after this mission I will be back into your colourless life to fill all those colors which I left incomplete’’

Pinky ‘’OMM …I have to inform Mrs.Malhotra, Ragini and Samar about this…even they need to hurry up …only 3 days and then this house will get the eldest bahu ‘’ she looked at

Anika/Anjali and spoke the last line stressing…….

Pinky dialled Ragini’s number……..Ragini was with Samar in her room …..she picked up the call and started acting ……..

Pinky informed about the date preponement and Ragini stood in shock saying ‘’WHAAT?’’ after listening the details she said ‘’Okay Aunty ji I will call you back in sometime and let us know our possibility ‘’

She hanged the call and informed Samar about the date getting preponed……..

Samar ‘’Fine …we will go ahead …don’t worry…I will handle everything’’

Ragini ‘’Are you sure? Because this is my last attempt ‘’

Samar smiled and Ragini knew when Samar smiles without answering what he meant………..

She called Pinky and informed that the wedding would happen as per the muhurat decided by Oberois

Ragini POV ‘’Get ready OBEROI’S …I thought to give you a week to celebrate but you want to get destroyed even before that…….YOUR COUNTDOWN BEGINS !!!’’

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ONCE AGAIN WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY NIDA….ENJOY, AND CELEBRATE YOUR SPECIAL DAY TO THE FULLEST…AND THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF THIS FF WHO ACCEPTED MY REQUEST TO WISH OUR FRIEND NIDA ON HER SPECIAL DAY

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So this was the Fourteenth episode of the FF ………..Please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad is welcome…I will reply as soon as possible….all credits to NIKITA !!!

106 comments

  1. AMkideewani

    AMkideewani

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    Superb dear, I love it happy birthday Nida and it’s my birthday today💖💖❤️❤️💗💗😍😍💙💙😘😘💝💝

  2. Prapti

    First of all, I wish Nida a birthday full of happiness and joyness! Have a great day dear. Second, this part was awesome! And interesting like always….. you always leave me with atleast one question wondering in my mind….. I mean what are ragini/samarjeet up to? And why is Mrs Malhotra scared and nervous? And who is YASHI? Everything is so mysterious! You and ofcourse Nikita are very good writers…. Waiting for the next part…

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Prapti…thank you so much …thanks a lot dear…and all your questions will be answered in upcoming episodes …awee than you so much for those lines and yes all credits to Nikita …
      thank you for accepting my request to wish our other friends too……

  3. Lauren

    Lauren

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    Wish uhh a very happy birthday Nida…. god bless you…..
    This chappy was really awesome as always…

  4. Zaveesha

    Zaveesha

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    Many many happy returns of the day dear Nida…May God bless u with all the happiness and prosperity… Keep Smiling and Stay Happy…
    Harika diiii……
    I have no more words to say about this ff nd ur writing skills amd Nikita’s amazing storyline…
    Everything was just perfect…
    Again loved ShivRiYa and AniOmRu bond…
    The way u have written the codes nd how they r decided iz fantastic…
    As always waiting for all the Raita to be cleared…
    Nd Anika will enter in the colourless life of Shivay to fill it with different colours..
    Take care
    Best wishes…

      • Sairish

        Sairish

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        well…i really don’t know you so well …but let time overcome that as well .
        di..a very very happy birthday to you though I’m late but enjoy your day to the fullest amd have a wonderful year ahead ..
        ❤❤❤🌹🌹

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Tanzeela…thanks a lot…all raita will be cleared in coming up episodes…no more mysteries will be created i promise…love you loads and take care

      thank you for accepting my request to wish our other friends too……

  5. Katz

    Katz

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    Great going vhm… what will be riyanshi’s and arjun’s message for Shivay?, why Anika preponed wedding…. what samar and ragini are upto… omg…. my curiosity is getting increased. I love the bonding of shiv-gauri-saumya and ani-om-rudra , and the trust between each other. You beautifully written the Anika and Shivay’s love and concern for each other without speaking directly. Waiting for the next best thrilling episode…. bye and take care….

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Katz…thank you so much dear for the compliment and i promise all the mysteries have been created… now from next episodes it’s time to clear the suspense…some action and some planning coming in your way…i hope you will like it…next episode uploaded already …waiting for it to get published

  6. Jahanara

    Jahanara

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    Happy birthday nida 😘😘😘 always keep smiling…… Di I think this yashi is Riyanshi coz 1st she knew anjali / Anika 2nd she stayed away frm Ragini 3rd tat Card 4th in tat clue it’s given tat Yashi will become part of your family by someone in ur family I.E Saumya…… Too much of suspence….. cacan’t wait for nxt part…… Mrs. Malhotra’s behaviour is something lyk Maya’s in Behaydh whn she is alone…… Too gud luv u Akka 😘😘

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Ajeeba…mmm…my lips are sealed so i am not gonna reveal anything or let you know if you are right or wrong…i don’t watch any serial dear except IB and IPKKND3.. sometimes KRPKAB …so no idea of Maya in beyhad….Thamk you so much dear…Love you loads….

      thank you for accepting my request to wish our other friends too……

  7. Vishnusri

    Awesome akka superb update post next one soon pls…
    Happy birthday Nida di keep smiling…

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much talli….thanks a lot…next episode i already uploaded e…waiting for it to get published…

      thank you for accepting my request to wish our other friends too……

  8. Nida

    Nida

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    Thank you sooooo much … thanks for making my birthday soo special.. today i am really getting princess feeling… thank you soooooooo much ….. every time you make me feel soo good .. every time you give me soooo much respect.. I couldn’t thank you enough… today i will thank god for giving me such a great friend… may our friendship live longer and longer …. thank you sooo much for being their on my day ….. and this ff is love ❤️ which i got addicted to it .. once again thank you 😊

    • Ahsana98

      Ahsana98

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      A very very happy birthday to you NIDA . may God bless you and fill your life with all the colours of happiness, joy and love . And give you a lot of Good luck snd

    • Gayathri.visu

      Gayathri.visu

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      Many more happy returns of the day Nida. I know I m very late. Hope u very well enjoyed ur day. May god bless u dear….
      Take care!!!

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Nida …bestie…i hope you are happy…i promised to fulfill your wish and hope i am successful…so happy to know you are feeling like princess…off course you are princess dear…so always keep smiling and enjoy your life to fullest….this is not respect …this is my love for you , my way of friendship with you…touchwood ,yes let our friendship grow stronger and stronger…

      thank you so much for letting me know that you are finally liking some mystery thrillers …lol…thanks a lot dear…keep smiling and enjoy your day

  9. Navz

    Navz

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    Happy birthday nida….enjoy ur day.
    Dii…EVERYTIME same comment….yess as always it is a SUPER GOOD EPISODE.
    TWISTS r unfolding and new twists are in store….waiting for them very excitedly.

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Chotii,

      Thank you so much dear…thanks a lot..all new tiwsts have been brought…it’s time to end the mysteries and bring in the revelations…from now on the FF will pace up to reveal all the mysteries and in few episodes this will end…..

      thank you for accepting my request to wish our other friends too……

  10. Nikita_jai29

    Nikita_jai29

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    It is awesome dii….. Love the riyanshi….. And happy birthday to my birthday girls…..
    Episode is thrilling… Love you dii

  11. Aashi

    awesome episode
    luved Anjali-Anika today
    waiting for the nxt episode
    update soon
    p.s.-Happy Birthday Nida di

    VHM di today is the birthday of Sam di as well who goes with the name CrazyGirl.S.P
    Pls read my first FF;I gave it a try; The Abyss-Ishqbaaz FF by Aashi

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Aashi…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode i updated already waiting for tit to get posted…
      thank you for accepting my request to wish our other friends too……
      And i have read it and posted my opinion too…it’s just brilliant dear…

  12. Fffan1234

    Fffan1234

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    Hi Harika the episode was absolutely awesome. Loved it. I am falling in love ❤ with this story day by day.

    Sincerely hope that Ragini and SMJ plans fail

    Looking forward to next part

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Dipti…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you to write such beautiful lines…well the end would be mmmmmm…let’s see…
      next episode i uploaded it already…waiting for it to get published…

      thank you for accepting my request to wish our other friends too……

  13. jane

    wow…too good i’m speechless…really excited about shivay getting to read the diary…and i really love the bonding between aniomru…..i love everything about this part…you are really great…..waiting for the next post eagerly ……

    wish you a very happy birthday Nida…..many happy returns of the day…..have a blast…enjoy to you fullest..

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Jane thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…ohh no dear i am not great …i am just normal as everyone else…next episode i uploaded already and waiting for it to get posted…..

      thank you for accepting my request to wish our other friends too……

  14. Pritika

    Pritika

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    Happy Birthday Nida, may god bls u with all the happiness in ur life, enjoy ur day….
    and wish the same to CrazygirlS.P HBD,

    Harika Di
    di aapko main kya bolu ab
    aap kaha se lati ho ye ideas, everything is out of the box, twist and turns aise jo koi soch bhi na ske, aapne to Riyanshi ko celebrity bna diya, Thanks to mujhe aapka khna chahiye
    and i hope u r fine now, take good care of urself as this not the game of children to take care of baby aur aapko apni little princess akki ka khyal bhi to rkhna h

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Pritika…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…Riyanshi tho celebrity hain hi…usko mein celebrity nahi banayi…yes dear i am absolutely fine..thank you so much for the love and concern…true managing everything is not all a child’s game need to plan before hand…till now my planning was success hope in upcoming days i continue to do so…

      thank you for accepting my request to wish our other friends too……

  15. Shivika

    Awesome…Loved it…
    I’m curious to know sooo many things- Arjun’s message,Riyanshi’s card,Anika preponing the wedding, Mrs Malhotra scared and nervous & Ragini-Samar’s mission….
    So much of suspense….You are amazing at writing thrillers….
    ShivRiSau & AniOmRu bonding is what I loved the most….
    Waiting fr d nxt…. 🙂

    PS:- Happy Birthday Nida!!!!Hope your special day, brings you all that your heart desires!!!!.

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Shivika …thank you so much dear…keep your curiosity levels intact as from next episodes revelations will start marking the start towards the end of the ff…….next episode i uploaded already…waiting for it to get published

      thank you for accepting my request to wish our other friends too……

  16. Vigan

    Wow awesome epi as usual, a lot of suspense.. pls I hv some request whn u using Hindi can u pls translate tat in eng couz I dnt knw hindi 😟😟 plssss

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Vigan …first of all sorry…i forgot to realize that few readers including you don’t understand Hindi…i will try my level best not to write the dialogues in Hindi and if i write i would definitely translate in english…

      thank you so much for letting me know you liked the episode …thanks a lot

  17. Maryam_ishq

    Maryam_ishq

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    U leave me in awe with each episode of urs 😀… it was just soo great, the way ur unfolding the mystery is just fantastic. Yanshi is by no doubt riyanshi and i think the card she made for shivay has the next clue for him 🤔…. and arjun’s way of makin shivay knw the whole truth (hats off). It’s so nice to see gauri and soumya helpin shivay find out the truth. I wonder wht’s in tht store room of malhotra house… feel bad for mrs.malhotra the way ragini treats her 😕. Great story line nikitha and the way u have written the story di, it’s just amazing. Happy birthday nida… many many happy returns of the day, may ur life be filled with happiness and may u achieve success in life 😀.

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Maryam…thank you so much dear..thanks a lot for those amazing words for me…i am so overwhelmed….

      thank you for accepting my request to wish our other friends too……

  18. Niriha

    Niriha

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    Awesome epi di loved it eagerly waiting for next part
    Happy birthday Nida!! God Bless you dear…keep smiling

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Niriha…thanks a lot…how are you doing now? next episode i have already uploaded waiting for it to get published…

      thank you for accepting my request to wish our other friends too……

  19. Prajkta

    Prajkta

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    First of all, Many many happy returns of the day Nida. Hope you have a great life ahead. Keep SMILING !!!
    And about the epi, it is amazing as always, really like the progress in the story. excited for further twists.

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Prajkta…thanks a lot…the story will pick up it’s pace from next episode …all twists have been bought and now it’s time to reveal the secrets …hope you will like it…

      thank you for accepting my request to wish our other friends too……

  20. Sagithya

    Sagithya

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    Wish u a many more happy returns of the day nida…. May all your dreams come true.
    Today’s​ Part was awesome fantastic fabulous di….
    Is riyanshi is yanshi right???….
    Thr s some connections between oberios n ragini n Samar…
    I know ur solving all the suspense…. It’s okay di…
    Excited for the next part… post it as soon as possible… Take care di…

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Sagithya…thanks a lot…all the questions will be answered for sure in upcoming episodes …as i said now it’s time for the secrets to get revealed…next episode i already uploaded …waiting for it to get published……

      thank you for accepting my request to wish our other friends too……

  21. Dhar

    Dhar

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    Awesome to the power of infinity……… Loved it like hell …..awesomeness overloaded….dii u just stole my heart… Plzz do post the next update ASAP 😍😘

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Dharani…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you dear…thanks a lot…next episode i already uploaded …waiting for it to get published…

  22. Anu16

    Anu16

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    Hello di…….. ya its me… soo sorry for getting gayab from tu suddenly as I got busy with results college and classes… Just saw my mailbox with ur message notifications and my mood brightened… read all epis in one go… They’re mindblowing… A worth read and a mind refreser from Chemistry assignments!
    Mystery novel! My favourite after romance… but urs has a special oberoi element which makes it stand out… ur writing skills are a class apart… merging ur imagination with current track and using it logically is a difficult job…hats of to nikita for the idea n u for its execution…
    today’s epi: loved ur decoding… i had decoded a part of it on my own.. n it was partially right…totally loving the ShiRiMya n AniOmRu teams… waiting for SJM n Ragini mystery to get revealed…

    Ps. : A long comment.. sorry for that… is that ur daughter in ur dp she is really cute…
    N HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR NIDA HAVE A BLAST…🎂🎉🎊🎁

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Anu…glad to see you back…and i so happy to read your long opinion…even my modd got brightened…thank you so much for those amazing lines…all credits to Nikita….
      thank you for accepting my request to wish our other friends too……

  23. Sairish

    Sairish

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    omggg…..i am toooooooo late ….
    this was fantastic as always……
    post soon ..
    not getting words to comment 😅😅😅😅

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so muchh saiiiiiiiiriiiiiiiiiisshhhhhhhhhhh…thanks a lot…next episode i uploaded already waiting for it to get published…

  24. Gayathri.visu

    Gayathri.visu

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    BRILLIANT!! What an episode Madamji?!!!
    HATS OFF TO U BOTH, MY LOVELY DIDI AND NIKITA….

    Smiley card….unique thought in ff! Just loved it the way ShivRiYa are decoding that letter. Now what is going in Anika’s mind?? So I was right, Anika’s new mission is full n fully related to that Malhotras. And the danger, that Arjun mentioned in the letter is also about Malhotras??!! But he mentioned about country’s danger….also na? Yaar, really head spinning mystery di..
    Yashi is Riyanshi??? Eagerly waiting for next part di….

    Take care……n keep smiling di!
    Good night….. Sweat dreams.

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Gayu…how are you?

      Thanks a lot dear…thanks a lot…telepathy again worked ..yes you were right…ha ha ha ha…head spinning will stop from next episode as i am gonna reveal the secrets behind all suspense and mystery…

      thank you so much dear…love you loads and keep smiling…

  25. Banita

    Many Many Happy returns of this day Nida….. God bless u….
    nd coming to today epi it’s Fabulous di….

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Banita…thanks a lot…
      thank you for accepting my request to wish our other friends too……

  26. JhanviPatel

    JhanviPatel

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    First of all I am really very sorry di ajj maine bahot late comment kiya reason I already tell u on WA… So sorry di…
    And now mine and ritika’s comment…
    This episode is as usual fab di… You are just doing amazing…and the best part is aap pata nahi kaha aese ideas late ho like that paper magic… Wowwww😍😍😍…
    But I love that arjun is main lead for shivika reunion…
    And riyanshi is too good… I think i know what arjun is talking about YASHI…🤔…
    But I am not going to tell u in comment section😁… I was stuck on one place for atleast 20 mins while reading and imaging your ff so as ritika…😁… AMAZING work didu… FABULOUS… LOVE YOU DI…😍😍😘😘😘

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Heya Sweety…why are you saying sorry…i know everything right then…and thank you so much to you and rikita for those amazing lines…do take care dear ….am glad to know that you both are liking the episodes…awee so sweet of you for such amazing words…thank you to both of you …

      love you loads …keep smiling and above all take care

  27. Ahsana98

    Ahsana98

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    Sorry ……..Di for not commenting on the previous parts of it ff IE,11,13,14 . I was reads that parts but didn’t get time to comment ,sorry for that.

    # How are you Di ? I hope you are fine . I didn’t get my reply about your health so that’s why I asking here.your health is important Take rest Di and Take care of yourself.
    # About your ff it’s was like always it’s was awesome and fantastic ,marvelous work . Thanks to both of you for gifting such a beautiful story of obros.Its was not a Ff, for me it was a thriller movie .I am always love that type of movies ,while reading this ff ,it give the feeling of watching a movie . it’s was amazing experience. I love it .
    # I was trying to cover-up the important parts of story where I stopped to comment.
    #Bhavya’s exit ,when bhavya ask rudra do you not give me the farewell that you gives to Soumya ,that time he replies not compare you with sumo she is she is only mine that’s was best part of that episode.(
    I like Manasi srivastava but didn’t like
    her opposite rudra ,I love Rumya
    ),shivay and om consider her as like priyanga and ask her comeback to OM when she wants . Rudra ignore her .
    #Arjun’s envelope mystery
    # soumya ‘s dramatic entry in OM with Riyanshi . (Riyanshi was nice name. I like it )Riyanshi’s entry changed the whole situation. Soumya ignore rudra that was justified .
    #Anika change her decision of leave RAW.And her re-entry to OM as Anjali with ASR .You are correctly link the current track of IB with your ff ,I like it Di .shivay was shocks after seeing Anjali and Riyanshi gives him another shock to identifying anika as anjali
    #Omru identify anjali is anika .shivay too know this from their conversation bug didn’t reveal it.
    #Shivay get two companions in his mission to find the truth of Anika ,You both are very intelligent, The decoding of the envelope was superb.Shivay was very near to the truth iam waiting for know that,
    # iam sure Riyanshi is not related to Arjun . she is know Ragini .
    #Shigni ‘s marriage preponed and the whole truth comes out with in three days.
    #somany twists are awaiting. I am waiting for your next episode, update soon Di.

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Ahsana…first of all thank you for your analysis as usual it is awesome…a peffect recap of all the episodes…i am glad to know what all you liked and what interested you…yes so many twists and from next episode all the mysteries will get cleared and we will proceed towards the end of FF…
      secondly sorry dear…i really missed to inform you that now i am doing good and very fastly recovering…thank you so much for the love and concern.

      Thank you so much for the amazing words you wrote for Nikita and me…i am so overwhelmed…

      next episode i already uploaded …waiting for it to get posted…

      thank you for accepting my request to wish our other friends too……

  28. Madhuani

    Madhuani

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    First of all Belated happy birthday
    Episode was good
    Shivriya bond n aniomru bond is totally a bliss to read.
    I knew something fishy b/w ragini n sjm from beginning only.
    Mrs.Malhotra-anika scene was superbly written.
    Finally got to know some part of past n yeah shivaay was right about gauri keeping safe diary.

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Madhu…thanks a lot…i am so sorry i am very late in replying …i was busy the whole day and checked this just now…the next episode is up and i hope you liked it too…thanks a lot once again….

  29. Jerry_36

    Jerry_36

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    Awesome one Harika Di !
    Just fabulous, loved the chapter just like anything, so sorry for being late all the time, and I hope you will reply to my comment now….won’t you ! Still enjoyed every bit of it. A very happy wala birthday Nida di, enjoy it to your fullest😘😘

    • VHM

      VHM

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      hey jerry …thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee sorry dear i didn’t get time to check the opinion so didn’t reply…why wouldn’t i not reply otherwise…thanks a lot dear to read and post your comment taking your time off your busy schedules…i feel so happy to read all your opinions as they motivate me and also because you make me feel so special…

      thank you for accepting my request to wish our other friends too……

  30. Nita D

    Nita D

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    The plot is becoming more complex n ‘sinster’ with each episode….
    Arjun is like the knight in shining armour for Shivaay….now let’s see yeh file, yashi, riyanshi in sabka kya connection hai….

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Nita…plot sinster ban gaya…ha ha ha ha…sare connections ek ek karke suljhenge agar aisa nahi kiya tho readers mujh par chameli’s phekenge….thank you so much Nita…love you loads

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