MUKAMMAL MOHABBAT KI ADHURI DASTAAN ( MMKAD ) – ISHQBAAZ FF – EPISODE 13

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Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB….. please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

Sumo ‘’So where are you planning to start with bhayya?’’

Shivaay showed the letter owritten by Arjun to Sumo and Gauri…….and said first I need to solve the lines he meant

Sumo and Gauri read the letter and were thinking……………

Sumo ‘’Shivaay bhayya…I think we need to decode the lines para by para……so why don’t we start with first para’’

Shivaay looked on and said

Shivaay ‘’ I already understood what he meant………’’

He explained

Shivaay ‘’this first few lines state that on maha arthi I will be seeing someone who will turn my life upside down …I am sure that is jwala…and then he wrote all myths will be broken and memories will be faded……that means clearly he is stating Jwala is Anika ….then he said he will be on next mission or he might die…….which implies he is either a police officer or a cop…he was strong and never seemed to be unhealthy so he is not a patient to die next moment…and the way he saved me and got shot only a police officer can do….had he been a thief he would not risk his life …so my conclusion is right he is some police officer…..which means Jwala I mean Anika was a police officer….her shooting, saving me and Sahil , her stunts and then having licensed Gun and authority…most importantly to call Bhavya as ACP Bhavya which none of us knew …….all this relate that she is also a police officer…might be Anika changed her name to Jwala because of her profession…but how is this possible …I mean she was not the same before she left this house…what happened that she came back as Jwala more precisely as a cop….and now she has come back as Anjali…….. though I couldn’t here the whole conversation between Anjali –Om-rudra few hours before but I could understand that Anjali is Anika …..there might be again some that she again changed her name….but why ? what is the purpose?’’
Gauri and Saumya were shocked

Sumo ‘’if Anjali is Anika Bhabhi…then how did Riyanshi identify her as Anjali?’’ she asked

Shivaay ‘’this is the major truth that is concerning me…we will find it out in our own way…don’t worry…it seems we are going in correct way’’

Gauri ‘’there are many more things to find out Bhayya’’

Shivaay ‘’yes …’’ he continued with what he heard

Shivaay ‘’one thing is confirmed Anika might have persuaded, forced or given some sort of swear to Om and Rudra to not reveal something very important about me two years back…probably Om and Rudra might have informed Badi maa too…..that’s why they three haven’t revealed me anything till now……which in turn means she did all that thing to hide a major truth about me…what can the truth be that lead her to take this drastic step?’’

Sumo ‘’Don’t worry bhayya…everything we will find out together….but first we need to list out everything that we are due to find out ‘’

Gauri ‘’Correct , wait I will bring pen and paper’’

Shivaay ‘’no need…we have tab’’

Shivaay took his tab and typed :

1. Who instigated / blackmailed Anika to do so
2. Truth because of which she left me
3. What happened after or during terror attacks two years back
4. Why / how did she turn into police officer
5. How did Riyanshi identify her as Anjali
6. Arjun’s letter to be decoded

Shivaay ‘’I need to find out all these and clear the raita that is spread in my life………but this time I will have to start from Arjun’s letter’’

Sumo ‘’bhayya why don’t you let Anika didi know that you areaware of fact that she is not Anjali but Anika’’

Shivaay ‘’yes…I will but let right time come…first we need to decode the lines and get to the truth of how Anika became police officer…so that I can confront her with proofs to which she will not deny’’

Sumo ‘’correct so shall we start with the first para…….’’

All three of them looked at it ……….
’’
In panno mein sambhala maine zindagi ki kuch yaadein
Nibhanein tumse kiye hue sari wadein
Padhke pata chalega kayi aise batein
Jo banaye aur bigade kai rishtey natein
Par pehle karna hoga usse mulakatein
‘’

Gauri ‘’I think ..i think…mmmmmmm……….hmmmmmmmm’’

Shivaay ‘’gauri…gauri…relax……we all are thinking….’’

A few minutes passed when Gauri said

Gauri ‘’I got it’’

Sumo ‘’What’’

Gauri ‘’he is referring to some book where he wrote something about his life….’’

Sumo ‘’I was thinking about papers but yes book and …and yes……we usually write DIARY to keep the memories of life…..’’

Shivaay ‘’correct …that means he was referring to Diary…so this means

In his diary he wrote some secrets , as promised to me…and after I read I will get to know some information which may join or destroy some relations……but I first need to get that’’
‘’
Sumo ‘’Exactly bhayya…but question is where will we get the diary from’’

Gauri ‘’Aree …aagey padho woh bhi tho likha hoga’’

Sumo ‘’haan’’

‘’
milna hoga tumhe uss se
Takkar huin sabse pehle jis se
Kholo sambhal ke apna dimaag aur uski sari darwazein
Mil jaayega woh jo poori karein tumhari khwayishein
jaana hoga waha tak
jis din huan sara natak
‘’

Shivaay ‘’milna hoga usse se..takkar huin sabse pehle jisse – whom did I get clashed with first? ‘’

Sumo ‘’We don’t know bhayya…you should know’’

Gauri ‘’Anika bahujaii …you first clashed with Anika bahujaii…..that means you must meet Anika bahujaii who is living as Jwala ….go to her house and get the dairy bhayya’’

Sumo ‘’no..Gauri didi…wait wait relax…….i don’t think this is so easy….there must be something more to it’’

Shivaay ‘’yes Arjun can’t make this one…., this simple…. if he was referring to jwala or Anika then even if I confront her or check the house in her absence I am not gonna get anything …because she will not say and if she has diary she will not give’’

Gauri ‘’that means this cannot be Anika bahujaii because , when a person writes diary he wouldn’t give it simply like that…he would keep it as secret from everybody…so diary isn’t with Anika bahujaii…so this line refers to something else’’

Sumo was reading the lines again and again and shivaay asked her to read the third line…and sumo did read it…….he slowly started saying ….darwazein…pehla takkar………

Shivaay ‘’I understood…….’’

Gauri – Sumo ‘’ what?’’

Shivaay ‘’he was referring to Car……..i and Anika came face to face when my car and her champa collided and that was our first meet .…collision – takkar……sabse pehle – yes for the first time’’

Sumo ‘’But bhayya….how can he know your first meet?’’

Shivaay ‘’even if he is not referring to our first meet near temple …after two years I saw her talking to Arjun near the car…in all senses he is referring to Car…but question is whose car…my car or her car?’’

Sumo ‘’what’s there bhayya…let’s check both’’

Shivaay ‘’ok fine….let’s go…first we check my car’’

Shivaay Gauri and Sumo went outside in hurry and were shocked that Shivaay’s car wasn’t there……and then he remembered something and held his head…….

Gauri and Sumo looked at him and

Gauri ‘’Don’t worry Bhayya…your car will come may be Omkara ji and Rudra might have taken it’’ Shivaay ‘’No…I am not worried about my car…I am worried about Anika’s car…I mean Jwala’s car…I broke it and I am sure she might have given it for servicing……and all the more I am worried because if we give car for servicing they wash the car and clean it…..then Diary which might be in that car will be ……..’’

He didn’t complete the sentence………

Sumo ‘’So what now……’’

Gauri ‘’we will search for car service center where bahujaai’s car is there…since it is only two days I think we have still time’’

Shivaay looked at Gauri and smiled and hugged her

Shivaay ‘’You both are amazing……..we need not to check all service center’s …..we need to check the service center’s which are nearer to chawl….because the car can’t be taken far away to be given to sevice……..so I think I know where to go’’

Sumo ‘’bhayya we will also come’’

Shivaay ‘’No…….wait here…as soon as my car comes home…check it and if you find the diary call me…while I will go and check anika’s car’’

Shivaay smiled and left……………

————————-OUTSIDE COFFEE SHOP

Anika bid bye to OmRu and asked them to find truth of Riyanshi …While she was waiting for the cab OmRu asked her to take Shivaay’s car and reach on time…she obliged and left in Shivaay’s car……. and she went ahead to meet SAMAR JEET MALHOTRA (SJM) in his office………

————————- MALHOTRA INDUSTIRES

Anika/Anjali knocked the door of SJM’s room

SJM ‘’Come in’’

Anika /Anjali ‘’Good afternoon sir’’

SJM ‘’Yes …who are you and why are you here?’’

Anjali / Anika POV ‘’very soon you will get to know everything ‘’

SJM ‘’Where are you lost and why are you not answering’’

Anjali/Anika ‘’Sir…I am new joinee in your office and came to report you as per the call letter’’

SJM ‘’Ok …please have your seat and give me the call letter’’

Anjali /Anika did so

SJM ‘’So MS Anjali ……..welcome to Malhorta industries…….your work shall be explained by the HOD and I hope to see good results from you…now you can leave’’

Anjali/Anika got up to leave saying thank you……..but stopped when

SJM received a video call from Ragini and Ragini saw Anika/Anjali

SJM signed Anika / Anjali to wait outside……she obliged and left

Ragini ‘’Bhayya the lady who just left is Anjali right?’’

SJM ‘’yes…but how do you know?’’

Ragini ‘’Bhayya I just came to OM and Pinky aunty was saying that a person by name Anjali came here and she is an exact look alike of Shivaay Singh Oberois ex-wife Anika…….’’

SJM ‘’what?’’

Ragini ‘’yes Bhayya…we cannot take a chance and you know I want this marriage to happen…so keep her always infront of your eyes…this time there should be no mistake’’

SJM ‘’ok fine relax…I will take care’’

They ended the call and SJM rushed towards the door to talk to Anjali/Anika and called her in…she again entered the room and started looking at the room…SJM diverting her attention spoke

SJM ‘’I think you have come from Australia right? So where are you staying…I mean as per company’s policy we provide accommodation only after three months’’

Anjali / Anika ‘’I am staying in Oberoi Mansion sir’’ she looked at him sharply

SJM Stood up and asked ‘’Do you know Oberois?’’

Anjali /Anika ‘’No sir…but my friend is a friend of Shivaay Singh Oberoi…so my friend spoke to his friend about my problem for stay …..and then my friend’s friend agreed to let me stay in OBEROI MANSION for three months’’

SJM ‘’perfect…now I will tell you what you need to do…….i mean what is your job’’

Anika/Anjali looked at him frowned and said ‘’I didn’t get you sir…I mean…you just now said my work would be explained by HOD

SJM ‘’no since you are designer I want you to work for the wedding of my sister Ragini with Mr.Shivaay Singh Oberoi………’’

Though Anika/Anjali knew about the marriage going to happen but she never expected that it would be her job to work as designer ….she was reminiscing Shivaay and Tia’s wedding……the she thought that this is a good opportunity to get the truth out

SJM ‘’Ms.Anjali…do you have a health issue of getting lost somewhere every often?’’

Anjali /Anika ‘’No …sorry sir’’

SJM ‘’Fine …you may leave now ….your work starts from tomorrow’’

Anika/Anjali ‘’If you don’t mind can I stay back for some time and interact with my colleagues’’

SJM ‘’Sure …go ahead’’

SJM started working and Anika/Anjali left from the room

Anika / Anjali started chatting with her colleagues and was slowly gathering information about SJM and Ragini………

After sometime she left……..

—————SERVICE CENTER

Shivaay finally found Jwala’s car in Service center and he started searching for the diary…….he searched again and again only to find nothing…he asked the service center guys too but they said that they have still not touched the car as they are yet to receive the glass from the company…he was convinced because he saw the car the same way as he left two days earlier……

He ascertained that the Diary was now in his car……..he started rushing towards his home and made a call in way to OmRu to ask about his car…..he got to know Anika/Anjali had taken car with her…….

His heart started beating fast thinking what if Diary falls in Anika/Anjali’s hand……he will not be able to find anything ever……..he was just praying to keep away the diary from Anika………

Anika /Anjali and Shivaay reached OM at the same time……Shivaay ran towards his car and Anika/Anjali got down just then……..

Shivaay ‘’Anika’’

Anika looked at him with surprise and Shivaay smiled knowing his target hit bull’s eye

Shivaay ‘’I was right …you are Anika otherwise why would you turn when I took Anika’s name…that means you have again changed your name…first jwala then Anjali…why are you doing this?’’

Anika/Anjali ‘’ I am not Anika I am Anjali and I looked at you as I thought you called Anjali…and rest I think I need not to answer you anything about me…I am guest here and I will leave in few months’’

Shivaay ‘’you need to…because I am owner of this house and you are staying in my house’’

Anika/Anjali ‘’I am staying because you agreed and if you have any problem then I will leave’’

Shivaay ‘’you will not go anywhere…..and this time I will not let you go anywhere’’

Anika/Anjali ‘’ok fine I heard about you and now I am seeing you….i am strong enough to face anything so do whatever you want but you cannot control me’’

Shivaay ‘’just wait and watch’’

Anika/Anjali bent to take her purse when Shivaay remembered about the diary……..

Shivaay ‘’WAIT’’ he screamed

Anika quickly looked at him

Anika/Anjali ‘’why are you shouting?’’

Shivaay ‘’what are you doing with my car’’

Anika/Anjali ‘’Omkara and Rudra asked me to take your car and I couldn’t say No to them …so I took your car’’

Shivaay ‘’next time don’t touch my car’’

Anika / Anjali ‘’fine …I will not’’ she again bent to take her purse…….

Shivaay ‘’I said don’t touch my car’’

Anika / Anjali ‘’but let me take my purse’’

Shivaay ‘’I will give you…just move aside’’

He picked the purse and handed it over to her …she took the purse and left from there thinking he is behaving weird

Shivaay waited till Anika / Anjali left and searched for the diary ……..

He opened all the doors of car and looked for it to find it nowhere …..he was feeling depressed…..when he suddenly remembered that he forgot to check the dicky and the bonnet……he ran towards the dicky to find it empty …..he was sure that no stupid would place a diary in bonnet ..so he decided to quit searching but still he wanted to give a try …so he opened the bonnet to see a Autoclavable / Heat sealer bag, fitted carefully not to create any disturbance to engine and car performance ……he detached the thermal case and opened it to find out the diary……he slipped it into his shirt and calmly stepped into OM……………

Gauri and Sumo waited for his arrival and he smiled …….they understood he got the diary………

While they were about to go to Shivaay’s room ….Ragini came and stopped Shivaay

Ragini ‘’Shivaay where were you? I was waiting to talk to you about our marriage’’

Anika /Anjali came just then after answering a call………..

Om Rudra , Sumo, Gauri , Pinky and Jhanvi also came down

Shivaay saw everyone and precisely noticed Anika/Anjali’s reaction…Anika/Anjali clearly showed inconvenience in her face…he wanted to make her jealous somehow and wanted to know her feelings for him……….

Shivaay ‘’I am sorry Ragini…I was busy with somework…yes …what did you want to speak’’

Ragini ‘’That’s okay Shivaay…actually I wanted to let you know that we finalised marriage date…in next one week there is a good muhurat…I hope you are fine with that’’

Pinky ‘’OMM…in next one week…how will we arrange and prepare everything?’’

Ragini ‘’don’t worry aunty ji….my brother has hired a superwoman for this….. her name is Anjali……she just joined today and see she has got such a big assignment……..she has
much work experience in designing and managing …so she will help us…I am yet to meet her but my brother was saying pretty good about her profile’’

Shivaay looked at Anika/Anjali and her face turned pale…he continued to talk to Ragini…….

Shivaay ‘’Ohh Anjali……you know what I guess your brother is referring to the same Anjali who is staying in our house…she came sometime before………come I will make you meet her……..’’

Shivaay held Ragini and came near Anika and looked at her

Shivaay ‘’Ragini she is Anjali………Anjali she is SAMAR JEET MALHOTRA’S sister Ms.RAGINI MALHOTRA very soon going to be Mrs.RAGINI OBE’’

Anika /Anjali ‘’Hello Mam…….i am Anjali and yes I am going to be the designer for your wedding…. SJM sir has asked me to take up this responsibility……so you can let me know how you want it to happen and I will work accordingly …….’’

She spoke without letting Shivaay complete his introduction of Ragini as Mrs. Ragini Oberoi……

Ragini ‘’I am impressed ….well I will give you my wish-list and you can take the rest from OF members and then come to our house for rest of the duties…..’’

Anika /Anjali smiled sadly….Shivaay observed this and didn’t react…

Shivaay ‘’Shall we go out and talk Ragini’’ he said holding her hand and looking at Anika

Ragini ‘’ya sure…..come’’

They both walked ….

Meanwhile Riyanshi came there and saw Ragini , Ragini also looked at Riyanshi and smiled……Shivaay took Riyanshi in his arms and kissed her ……

Shivaay’’ Did you play happily or not?’’

Riyanshi ‘’yes……but I am missing my school…’’

Shivaay ‘’fine don’t worry….you will also go to school……and in that school you will have a cute little friend too……very soon I will arrange okay’’

Riyanshi ‘’okkayyyyyyyyyyy……I LOVE YOU BHAYYA’’

Shivaay ‘’I love you too ‘’ he hugged her happily

Ragini ‘’Who is this little girl Shivaay? She looks cute’’ she said while taking her from Shivaay

Riyanshi resisted and ran towards Anjali / Anika and held her

Shivaay was surprised because he always saw Riyanshi going to anyone without resistance and this was first time she resisted …however he brushed off thinking it might be natural for kids……..

They both left and Anika left to her room teary eyed……

————–SHIVAAY’S ROOM

Shivaay too came after sometime and opened the diary of Arjun……it was blank…..all pages were blank…………he was shocked ……………

Sumo and Gauri went to him and asked the matter …….he showed them the Diary and they were also shocked to see the Diary empty……….

Gauri ‘’Please don’t worry bhayya there might be some way we can get the truth out….Sumo check the lines he wrote after getting the diary’’

Shivaay ‘’no use …everything is slipping out of my hands…when I received Arjun’s letter I thought I would get the truth …but this diary has nothing………it is blank..’’

Sumo ‘’but why will he do so?’’

Shivaay ‘’don’t know and I can’t even ask him…but it’s fine…..thank you …you both helped me a lot till now …but now I will ask Anika the truth or accept my defeat in getting to know the truth…’’

Sumo read the further lines
‘’
jaana hoga waha tak
jis din huan sara natak
hoga dekh ke tumhara haal behaal
par dhoondna hoga uss roshni ko jo dikhayegi apna kamaal
‘’

Gauri ‘’he has wrote clearly bhayya that your state will get bad after seeing the diary but you should find out a way ‘’

Shivaay looked on and he was repeating the lines…..’’par dhoondhna hoga uss roshni ko jo dikhayegi apna kamaal’’

All three were trying to decode those lines…….

Shivaay felt extremely sad with the happenings…at the same time Riyanshi entered with a card in his room……..

Riyanshi ‘’Shivaay bhayya …are you sad?’’

Shivaay smiled wiping his eyes and said ‘’yes …a little bit’’

Riyanshi ‘’Fine I will make you happy ……..see this card I made it for you….a surprise smiley card ‘’ she gave it to him and she stood there smiling for a moment

Shivaay was shocked seeing the card………….

So this was the Thirteenth episode of the FF ………..Please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad is welcome…I will reply as soon as possible….all credits to NIKITA !!!

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72 Comments
  1. Sairan

    Suspense suspense and suspense
    Amazinggg

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sairan…thanks a lot…….

  2. Fffan1234

    That was super awesome update. Really hope something happens to Pinky and Ragini. Looking forward to next part

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Dipti….thanks a lot….next update i will upload in some time from now

  3. awesome
    update soon
    a cliffhanger 🙁
    take care

    1. VHM

      Hey Aashi…thank you so much …next update i will upload in some time from now..and will for sure take care

  4. Niriha

    Awesome mind blowing..so much of suspense wow loved it di eagerly waiting for next part update soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Niriha…thanks a lot…how are you doing now? next update i will upload in some time from now

  5. Lauren

    Whoa again suspense…. post nxt soon dii… it was amazing as always…. loved it to d core…

    1. VHM

      Hey Lauren…thank you so much …thanks a lot…next update i will upload in some time from now

  6. AWESOME EPISODE ….. SUSPENSE
    SUPER EXISTED FOR NEXT EPISODE

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Chaithu…thanks a lot…next update i will upload in some time from now

  7. AMAZING EXCELLENT FANTASTIC INTERESTING OUT STANDING SUPERB 👌👌👌😘😘😘

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much UF…thanks a lot…

  8. Alekhika20

    Superb update

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Alekhika…

  9. Zaveesha

    Di I have no more words to praise ur writing skills nd this ff…..
    I became speechless after reading every episode….
    The decoding of the letter is amazing…
    Loved ShivRiSom bonding…
    Now Anika/Anjali will again plan the marriage of her love…but in the end True Love will meet…
    Waiting for the further decoding of the letter…..
    Good story Nikita…
    Take care..
    Best wishes…

    1. VHM

      Hey Tanzeela…thank you so much…thanks a lot…so sweet of you to write such awesome lines…am glad that you liked the episode…all credits to Nikita….love you dear…take care and keep smiling

  10. Nikita_jai29

    It is super duper awesome dii… Thanks for your time and commenting on MMKAD to all my friends and silent readers…

    1. VHM

      Thanks to you Nikita…..thanks a lot

  11. Pritika

    shocked to see the card and episode end, again suspense, main to decode kr hi nhi pati letter…
    episode to as always fantabulous, mindblowing…..
    Thanks for one more master piece Harika DI and Nikita thanks to u too!!!!!

    1. VHM

      Hey Pritika…….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you…thanks to you for reading this patiently and then taking time to post your opinion…

  12. JhanviPatel

    Ohhhooo fi again mysterious end…
    But I must say shivay and team became detective day by day….😁…
    Di are u sure aap software engineer ho…🤔
    Mujhe to lagta hai ki aap khud ek undercover cop ho… Tabhi to aapko itne brilliant and mysterious ideas ate hai…
    AMAZING di… Just loved your ff…
    THANKS FOR THIS AMAZING BRILLIANT FF…😍😍😍
    LOVE YOU DI…😍😍😘😘😘

    1. VHM

      Hey Sweety….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…haan promise mein software engineer hi hoon…lol…mein undercover cop ha ha ha ha…
      .aree woh aise hi aa rahe the …koi karishma nahi hain …jab likhna shuru karte hain tho aise ideas apne aap dimaag de daalta hain…tum bhi koshsish karke dekho tum bhi isse accha plot bana sakti ho….
      thank you once again sweety…..i must thank you for reading this and then taking time to post your opinion…

      Love you loads sweety…take care and keep smiling…

  13. Madhuani

    Awesome…
    Cliffhanger??
    Card is the way to read diary .
    Diary in shivaay’s car??that to in bonnet I hadn’t imagined this in my wildest dreams.
    The way letter was disclosed its meaning part by part awesome.
    Confusion created by second para n then it being sorted out amazing.
    Ragini-Sjm are threat to Oberoi’s I’m feeling so.
    N I think riyanshi knows ragini n that’s why she was distancing from her.
    Shivaay making anika jealous,hmm…
    Waiting for next part.

    1. VHM

      Hey Madhuani…you are coming close to understand the upcoming plot …way to go dear…let’s see what is in store for us in the upcoming episodes as i am yet to type upcoming plot…next update i will upload in some time from now…………thank you so much dear…thanks a lot

  14. Navz

    Dii…again u stopped at d most interesting part…making it more and more interesting.
    Ragini related to riyanshi???btw riyanshi..name is soo cute.
    Ff is going at a super good pace…nikhitha and u are doing grt job.

    1. VHM

      Hey Chotii…thank you so much …thanks a lot…let’s see who is who……next update i will upload in some time from now…all credits to Nikita

  15. AMkideewani

    Fantastic

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much CrazygirlS.P

  16. Swathi..

    Wow again superb update. Liked the decoding part… waiting for the mystery to unfold. Thank you for the early update di😘

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Swathi…thanks a lot…yes every episode will have one revelation along with confusion…….thanks to you for your time to read and post opinion on this ff…next update i will upload in some time from now

  17. Priyadas

    Fantastic di… Like always I am at loss of words. Again you ended your episode on a cliff hanger and left me still waiting for the new one to come up. Hope you ate fine by now and even doing well. Take care Di.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Priya…thanks a lot…ha ha ha ha …aadat se majboor to leave the episode at cliffhanger…….yes i did eat fine and am coping up fast…will definitely take care …thank you so much for the love and concern…you too take care and take rest…keep smiling and loads of love to you

  18. Awesome….Loved it….
    So much of suspense…..
    AniOmRu & ShivRiSom seem to be 2 teams….
    Anika/Anjali came back to being the wedding-planner….
    I guess Riyanshi knows Ragini….
    Samar-Ragini~This duo is giving me michmichies….
    Waiting fr d nxt… 🙂

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shivika…thanks a lot…happy to read all the brief yet elegant analysis …next update i will upload in some time from now

  19. Awesome no words to describe.. so much of suspense and I love it to the core..😍😍😘😘😘 waiting for the next update eagerly..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Vigan …thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you ….love you loads …keep smiling and take care …next update i will upload in some time from now

  20. Katz

    Hi vhm…. this one is not less than a romantic thriller novel. You gave us a such a Intriguing update…. Can’t wait for the next part…. I always amazed at your way of writing. Stay blessed….. bye ….

    1. VHM

      Hey Katz…thank you so much…thanks a lot…awee thank you so much for such sweet lines and for the wishes…next update i will upload in some time from now…take care and keep smiling

  21. Dhar

    You do u do this with meeeeee ……….. I was soooooooooo waiting for the mystery to reveal and bammm u again stopped it ……it was just perfect to the power of infinity … Plzz plzzz do post the next update ASAP 😍😘 waiting for your next update

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Dharani…thanks a lot…ha ha ha…aadat se majboor hoon…cliffhanger par stop karne ki aadat ho gayi hain…aweee so sweet of you to write such amazing lines…next update i will upload in some time from now………

      I so much missed your opinion on the OS i wrote and uploaded on Sunday…here you go with the link:

      http://www.tellyupdates.com/everything-matters-ishqbaaz-shivika-one-shot/

  22. Sagithya

    Awesome di… Lovely part….
    Again ur giving lot of suspense….
    Is their any connection between ragini n riyanshi….
    Excited for the next part… post it as soon as possible …. Take care di

    1. VHM

      Hey Little Sissy….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…well the answer to your question is YES & NO ….next update i will upload in some time from now…will definitely take care and you too take care and keep smiling….love you loads

  23. Nida

    Suspense suspense…whyyyyy😢😢😂😂 please don’t give tension to my shivaay… and thank god u have given him two secretary .. tension is little bit decreased.. and off course you have written it amazingly.. hope your health is good 😊 too

    1. VHM

      Hey Bestie…first of all HAPPY BIRTHDAY in advance….YOUR SHIVAAY has done such a deed that some tension must be given to him na…but he has got two perfect secretaries…awee thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…yes dear i am coping up fast…thank you for the love and concern…keep smiling, enjoy and take care…HAPPY BIRTHDAY in advance once again

    2. Many many happy returns of the day…A very Happy Birthday to u dear…God bless u..Stay Happy…keep smiling…

      1. Nida

        Thank you 😊 🙏🏻🙏🏻❤️️❤️️❤️️

    3. Nida

      Thank you soooooo much in advance

  24. Sairish

    first of all sorry for commenting this late….was busy and a bit tired too…i am perfectly fine now..and thanks for your very kind concern regarding my eye …that really very sweet of u…
    COMING TO THIS …..
    the code revelation left me awestruck though it was not the whole 😉😋…but then also you nailed it completely….i wonder from where did you get this amazing talent of writing of your…big fan of yours
    lots of love
    Sairish

    1. VHM

      Hey Saiiiiiiiirrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiiissssssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhh…………AWEE SO CUTE

      Please don’t say sorry…i knew you were having some problem with your left eye so sorry was not needed….

      Awee thank you so much for those amazing lines…we are either friends and for suppose if i am elder to you then i am your dii…so no fan and celebrity relation here…

      Thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…and love you loads …keep smiling and take care

      1. Sairish

        well..in that case u r my di…or may be more elder than that cause I’m just 13😋😋

      2. VHM

        pretty much elder than you sairisssssshhhhhh……you can always call em Dii or Harika as you are comfortable

  25. Gayathri.visu

    Wow!!! Fabulous di… The way u r decoding the letter is really interesting…. Sooooooo many questions n suspenses di. Shivaay n RiYa…..superrr gang! Is Anika’s/Anjali’s new mission is related to Malhotras??? Eagerly waiting for next part di….

    Take care di…..keep smiling! Lots n lots of love for u diiiii!!

    1. VHM

      Hey Gayu…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…yep many more questions to arise in upcoming episodes and then answer will be only one for everything…so keep reading…answer to your question will be known in next episode………next update i will upload in some time from now

      Love you loads …keep smiling and take care

  26. Awesome akka superb update post next one soon pls… How r u now??? Pls.. Take care..

    1. VHM

      Hey Talli…thank you so much nanna…thanks a lot…i am doing good talli…thanks again for the love and concern…will definitely take care..you too take care and keep smiling…love you loads…
      next update i will upload in some time from now

  27. Jahanara

    Di😍😍😍😍😍 Too cute ….. Whn saumya didi, Shivaay Jiju & Gauri didi Cracked the code it was lyk no words to explain….. Jst loved it 😘😘😘….. Still Riyanshi’s mystery is there still to be found…… Loved the part whn Shivaay jiju called Anjali as Anika & didi turned back suddenly…… Waiting fr ur Nxt epi …… Luv u di 😘😘😘

    1. VHM

      Hey Ajeeba…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i am so glad to know that you liked the way of the suspense getting revealed…and the situational stances…so sweet of you to let me know all these……next update i will upload in some time from now….love you loads and my best wishes to you and all your friends including your best friend…

  28. Ashwinee

    From decoding the message to that car mechanism with perfect timing Literally speechless !!!!!!!.👌👌👏👏

    1. VHM

      Hey Ashwinee …thank you so much…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you dear to write such amazing lines…so nice of you….thank you so much once again…love you loads…..

  29. Again u nailed it di….. Shivrimya were Fabulous…. Just luv it di….
    U r really an Amazingggg writer luv soooooooooo much nd tc….

    1. VHM

      thank you somuch Banita.. i am glad you liked it…thanks a lot for those awesome lines for me….love you loads…take care and keep smiling

  30. Jerry_36

    Again an awesome chapter by an awesome writer, just was filled with delight while reading it. Superb. Sorry for being late, and yes are you fine now ?? Take care and be happy, love ya❤

    1. VHM

      Hey Vedika…thank you so much…thanks a lot…..i am soo sorry being late in posting my reply actually didn’t get time to check the notifications…yes dear i am doing good now…coping up fast…love you too dear…keep smiling

  31. An amazing episode…. Shivsomri tri is awesome

    1. VHM

      Hey Komal thank you so much dear…thanks a lot

  32. Ankita27

    Amazing update… full of suspense… u just nailed it di…. Superb…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Ankita…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you to write such nice words for me

  33. Nita D

    Now again Anika will make preparation for Shivaay’s wedding n will end up marrying him in that mandap…..in Anika’s language; Shivaay toh bade chantu mai nikle….I like that how the letter got decides so quickly….yahan meri dupar ki need uda rakhi thi😂😂
    It seems that the malhotra siblings have some evil intentions…..
    Shivaay ki list is now like an index for rest of the story…..
    The line where Anika doesn’t let Shivaay complete ‘Ragini Oberoi’ is nice…..

    1. VHM

      Ha ha ha ha ha….tumhari dophar ki hi neend udhi huin hain…ye ff likhthe hue mere poore din ki neend udh rahi hain…maine kya raita phailaya hain ki mujhe sameethe hue dimaag ka dahi ban gaya hain…chup chap Nikita ne jo plot diya woh waise ke waise likh ke ff khatham karti tho tho theek hota …par nahi …mujhe tho extend karna tha aur maine uska extension aise kiya ki mein khud hi fas gayi…chalo ab aagey kya hota hain dekha jaayega…mujhe bhi tho aagey tumne kya analysis diye padna haina…

      Thank you so much dear for rocking analysis

    2. Nita D

      *letter got decoded quickly…..

      Di aap har baar sab bahot complicate karte ho n then its like taking out one thread at a time n solving the whole bunch like that…if u know what I mean….

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