MUKAMMAL MOHABBAT KI ADHURI DASTAAN ( MMKAD ) – ISHQBAAZ FF – EPISODE 12

Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB….. please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

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FIRST OF ALL A BIG SORRY TO ALL THE READERS FOR BEING LATE….I WAS NOT KEEPING GOOD HEALTH SINCE FRIDAY AND DIDN’T HAVE ENOUGH STAMINA & ENERGY TO POST THE STORY OR REPLY TO ALL YOUR OPINIONS…….ONCE AGAIN SO SORRY TO EACH AND EVERY READER OF THIS FF………

SECONDLY THANK YOU SO MUCH ‘’PRITIKA’’ FOR ALLOWING ME TO USE YOUR DAUGHTER’S NAME ‘’RIYANSHI’’ FOR THIS FF……I KNOW AND UNDERSTAND THAT HER NAME IS AS CUTE AS SHE IS…..THANKS A LOT ONCE AGAIN……

Here we go with the next episode!!!

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Anika/Anjali POV ‘’Who is this little one and why is she calling me Anjali didi……I don’t know her and I know that I came here for some purpose and I changed my name to Anjali only a few hours before…then how can she call me with the same name? Before I think about all these what should I reply and how should I react?’’

Anika/Anjali came out of thoughts and looked around her…everyone was looking at her in shock……

Shivaay ‘’Do you know this little girl?’’

Anika/Anjali nodded ‘’no’’

Shivaay ‘’Then how come she recognised you?’’

Anika /Anjali ‘’I don’t know…wait I will try to ask her’’

Anika/Anjali lifted Riyanshi and placed her in her arms and spoke

Anika/Anjali ‘’Beta aapka naam kya hain?’’

‘’ Riyanshi ‘’ the little one replied

Anjali / Anika ‘’Aap mujhe jaante ho ? ‘’

Riyanshi ‘’haan…….bahut acche se …aap mere papa ke dost hona …mujhe sab pata hain’’

Anjali /Anika ‘’accha theek hain…par aap ke papa ka naam kya hain?’’

Riyanshi ‘’PAPA’’

Anajli / Anika ‘’haan papa theek hain…par unka naam kuch tho hoga na…jaise aapka naam Riyanshi hain …mera naam Ani mera matlab Anjali hain …jo aapke saamne suit pehen ke khade hain unka naam SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI hain …ye jo lambe baal lekar khade hain unka naam OMKARA hain aur ye jo yaha khade hain woh RUDRA hain…waise aapke papa ka naam kya hain?’’ she spoke pointing SHIVOMRU

Riyanshi ‘’Offo didi…papa ka naam papa hi hoga na…aur kaise kuch aur hoga?’’ she spoke innocently

Anjali / Anika was about to speak when Sumo said

Sumo ‘’Anika Didi…I mean Anjali didi …I will ask her …’’

Anika / Anjali smiled ……….

Jhanvi, Pinky, Dadi couldn’t believe what was happening…first Anika was present before them as Anjali and then the little girl identifying her as Anjali ……everything was spinning around in their head……..

Shivaay looked at all the happenings and went to his room in a huff…….he felt as if his every attempt was getting wasted …….he was moving far away from reality and was getting into deep confusion…….

OmRu ‘’Anjali Bhabhi…hope you don’t mind if we call you bhabhi’’

Anika /Anjali ‘’No problem’’

Om ‘’Come we will take you to your room’’

Anika /Anjali nodded and picked up her luggage

Rudra held it and said ‘’When two Devars are here why should Bhabhi pick up the burden alone….we will bring the luggage you please feel comfortable’’

Anika / Anjali SMILED and looked at them teary eyed

OmRu noticed and now they were sure she was their Anika Bhabhi…….they quietly walked towards Guest room………..

They placed the luggage and closed the doors……..Anika turned towards them……..

They both stood there and looked at her with tears rolling out…….Anika tried to act as Anjali but was losing this time…..

Rudra ‘’Bhabhi….aap Koi Anjali nahi ho sakti …aap Anika hona…hamari Anika Bhabhi……batayiye na?’’

Anika /Anjali ‘’Mein…mein..Anika nahi hoon…’’ she said with voice choking and as if she was giving up…….

Om ‘’Hamari kasam kha ke kahiye ki aap hamari Anika Bhabhi nahi hain?’’

Anika/Anjali ‘’no…I …I am not going to do any such thing’’ she said looking here and there

OmRu ‘’You can’t do this to us Bhabhi….you can’t cheat us this time…whatever may be the reason’’ they said with tears unstoppably rolling out of their eyes

Anika broke down……..

Rudra ran at once to her and hugged her

Anika reciprocated the hug with tears……Om joined them both…….after two years they had a hug which was much necessary at that moment……..

After a long hug ….they parted and Anika caringly brushed both their faces and wiped their tears

Anika ‘’How are you both?’’

Rudra ‘’We are not fine Bhabhi and nothing is fine……you left and took away the happiness of this house with you…everything changed……Shivaay bhayya has stopped living as
Shivaay Singh Oberoi …..’’

Omkara ‘’Bhabhi …we thought you died in the terror attacks …but how come you survived …and above all you came here as jwala first and now as Anjali…why bhabhi? Everything is a mystery…’’

Anika /Anjali ‘’Om, Rudra…I can’t tell you anything now…but I will definitely tell you everything in a very short time……..till then no one except you both must know that I am

Anika……while we three are alone I am Anika for you…rest everywhere I am Anjali for you…….till my purpose of coming here resolves this must be a secret….’’

OmRu ‘’Okay Bhabhi…but one question…..do you know Riyanshi? ‘’

Anika ‘’No OmRu…I changed my name to Anjali only yesterday and no one except Advay and I know this…….i don’t know how the little one called me with the same name …….but as of now I have to keep the little one’s matter aside and solve something else…..’’

Om ‘’don’t know what you are upto but please let Shivaay know that you are Anika at the earliest otherwise it will become difficult to him much more’’

Anika ‘’I promise…. give me sometime and once everything is solved I am gonna tell him that I am Anika…his Anika…..also at the same time I will inform Sahil that I am his Anika didi……’’

Rudra ‘’fine bhahi…..but if you need any help don’t forget to let us know’’

Anika smiled and said ‘’who better can help me other than you two?’’

They smiled and hugged her again….

Anika ‘’thank you OmRu for keeping shivaay’s secret a secret even after you got to know I was no more’’

Om’’we never believed you died Bhabhi so we didn’t reveal……everytime when we got angry on choti maa we decided to tell Shivaay the truth but we remained silent because we didn’t want to break the swear given by you…..and see our belief turned right…you are here alive infront of us..with whatever name but you are with us’’

Rudra ‘’But Bhabhi…Shivaay bhayya has now decided to know the truth by himself…..he understood that you did all that deliberately and now he is behind to know the real reason…..this time we have not stopped him because we can’t see him in more pain…from past two years he was living but his originality died…he woke up from an open eye sleep only few days before …precisely the day we all saw you in maha arthi………and Bhabhi I feel this time he will get the truth out’’

Anika ‘’ but………’’

Om ‘’Bhabhi…this time we request you…please don’t stop him …..let him do what he wants atleast he will get the inner peace which disappeared from him …above all chotii maa has become much more reactive now….there is no stopping of her and the peace of this house has gone miles far away …..’’

Anika ‘’fine…I will not stop him because after finding truth even if he breaks down I will handle him and ensure he doesn’t turn away from his life as he did these two years’’

They smiled ……and OmRu left the room……..only to see Shivaay standing outside…..

All three of them were shocked …….Shivaay looked at Anika/Anjali angrily and left from there……..

Anika felt bad and sad but did not speak……….OmRu looked at Anika and followed Shivaay

Anika left to freshen up but she wanted to tell about her working for Samarjeet Malhotra to OmRu and came out and walked towards Living room………

——————————LIVING ROOM

Shivaay was waiting for OmRu

Om’’ Shivaay what were you doing outside that room?’’

Shivaay ‘’you took long time to drop Anjali in her room…so I came to check if everything was alright?’’

Rudra ‘’Anjali? Who Anjali?’’

Shivaay looked at him suspiciously

Om pressed his hand

Rudra ‘’yeah Anjali…Anjali Bhabhi…….’’

Shivaay ‘’Anjali Bhabhi…I mean seriously Rudra you are calling her Bhabhi? Whoever looks like Anika you will call her Bhabhi…….first Jwala you called her same then Anjali you are
calling her too as Bhabhi..grow up Rudra……’’

Rudra ‘’why are you having problem bhayya…..these days you are finding wrong in everything we are doing/ how does it affect you if we call her Bhabhi or spend time with her…..’’

Shivaay ‘’it doesn’t effect me Rudra….she is ANJALI not ANIKA…so why will it effect me’’

Om’’so if it was ANIKA then it would effect you’’

Shivaay ‘’Ok stop it both of you…I was just saying that you cannot call everyone who looks like Anika as Bhabhi……and Om it doesn’t affect me anymore whether she is Anika or Jwala or Anjali…..’’

Om ‘’Fine relax Shivaay…we will have this argument sometime later……by the way we were just letting her know about our family and family members, and everything related to this house…you might have heard ?’’

Shivaay ‘’How will I hear anything when the door is closed and locked…..by the way letting her know about our family and family members was not needed…I mean she is guest and she will go to her own accommodation after few days…so what’s the need’’

OmRu ‘’Ohh …ok do you have something to talk to us …you seem to be a bit stressed’’

Shivaay ‘’ Actually I was waiting to talk to you something important’’

They both looked at Shivaay

Shivaay ‘’Anjali would be working for SAMAR JEET MALHOTRA…’’

OmRu ‘’Whaat?’’

Shivaay ‘’yes …so be careful …we are not going to discuss anything about business specifically the ongoing rivalry / deal between me and Samar before her……I don’t want to get her into trouble because of us’’

Rudra ‘’OOOOO….So you care for her’’

Shivaay ‘’No it’s not about Anjali …and it’s because I care for Riyanshi…’’

Om ‘’what do you mean……..?’’

Shivaay ‘’Riyanshi just knows and recog……..nises only Anjali so for the little one we need to protect Anjali……..and to get the details of Riyanshi’s family , Anjali must be safe’’

OmRu nodded …………Shivaay left…….Anika/Anjali Listened to their conversation and then messaged OmRu to meet her in coffee shop in half an hour……..

————COFFEE SHOP

Anika ‘’OmRu what’s the rivalry/deal between Samarjeet Malhotra and Shivaay?’’

OmRu were silent

Anika ‘’Om I need to know the truth as this is related to the security issue of Shivaay and more precisely all the Oberois’’

OmRu looked at her in shock

Om’’ security issue……what do you mean bhabhi’’

Anika ‘’I said right I will let you know everything at right time but now you need to tell me about this’’

Om ‘’ Fine Bhabhi…’’

———————FLASHBACK OMAKARA’S NARRATION

After the terror attacks we all came to know through news that you died…..though I, Rudra , Mom and Shivaay never believed but we didn’t even know where you were…it was as if Shivaay was living for the sake of living………few days passed and we got call from Sahil that he was coming back for a few day vacation…Sahil was not aware of your death………
Shivaay went to pick up Sahil and seeing him Sahil identified that something was wrong…..After Sahil’s repeated questioning …Shivaay broke the news of you being killed in terror attacks……he denied to believe and we all assured him that we will be with him……that day Sahil for the first time asked something to Shivaay

Sahil ‘’Shivaay bhayya….can I ask you something?’’

Shivaay ‘’yes Sahil…I will do anything you ask for’’

Sahil ‘’Shivaay bhayya….can we go the chawl where me and Anika didi lived , I want to stay there for sometime as I am missing her badly…I want to get all my memories with Anika didi ’’

Shivaay then decided to buy the chawl and gift it to Sahil, so that he can go anytime and do whatever he wants without any problem……..

And then came into picture Samar Jeet Malhotra, CEO, MD of Malhotra empire………he already bought the chawl, before Shivaay could buy……..

You know Shivaay na…once he decides to gain something he will do it by hook or crook……..so he destroyed the property board and spent a night in jail too……..

Afterwards the war in business started …..whichever property or deals Samar entered Shivaay used to enter only to compete……Shivaay took it as an ego….and from then on both have become rivals …..

But the twist in tale came when Ragini came into our life……….Ragini Malhotra sister of Samar Jeet Malhotra…..she was saved by Shivaay during an accident…..she used to come regularly and she was liked by choti maa………

Choti maa was behind Shivaay to get him married to Ragini……but Shivaay bhayya never agreed…and this irked Ragini and Chotii maa more……

Ragini did everything to lure Shivaay and get married to him…..initially we thought this marriage wouldn’t happen because of Rivalry between Shivaay and Samar but to our surprise Samar agreed for Shivaay and Ragini’s relation …….

And to our surprise…Shivaay agreed for the marriage too…….we were trying our own ways to stop this marriage but nothing worked till now

However we did not get to see Ragini or her brother Samar from past six months…as if they disappeared from Mumbai……..we were shocked initially but we were happy too because we never felt Ragini to be a good lady‘’

—————FLASHBACK NARRATION BY OMKARA ENDS

Anika ‘’and I know where they were for these six months and I know now they are in Mumbai too’’ she said in a flow

Rudra ‘’whaaaat?’’

Anika ‘’nothing…don’t worry…this marriage I will never let it happen and the land it will be Shivaay’s too’’

Om ‘’Land will anyways be Shivaay’s only ……Bhabhi !!!!’’

Anika ‘’whaat?’’ she exclaimed

Rudra ‘’yes Bhabhi…Shivaay bhayya agreed to this marriage for the deal of getting this land ‘’

Anika ‘’I am sure Shivaay is not happy with this marriage… I mean he cannot move on so easily…..am i right !!!’’

Om ‘’Yes Bhabhi…you are absolutely right…we never saw Shivaay having the same spark as he used to have with you being beside him…and I am sure he is doing this only to fulfil his wish of acquiring the land’’

Anika ‘’I will not let this marriage happen and the land will also be his…….’’

Om ‘’but how….? You are just an employee there…how can you make this happen?’’

Anika ‘’Om…remember onething a bad intention might win for few days but will lose within few days’’

Om ‘’I didn’t understand but I can understand that you are back and we know you will make everything back to normal…..’’

Anika ‘’I said right I came here to make everything right and I will do that…but I might need both your help’’

OmRu ‘’don’t worry Bhabhi…….. we are with you in this battle’’

They three joined hands and smiled and enjoyed their coffee……..

——————-SHIVAAY’S ROOM

Shivaay sat and once again read Arjun’s letter……..he was into thoughts about Arjun’s letter and recent happenings….he closed his eyes and started thinking…..he was slowly getting things which were getting connected……….

While he was in thoughts Sumo and Gauri stepped in

Sumo ‘’Shivaay bhayya……what are you reading?’’

Shivaay ‘’nothing come sit…why are you both standing there and where is Riyanshi?’’

Gauri ‘’Riyanshi is playing in the garden …badi maaji is there with her and we thought to sit and chat with you’’

Shivaay ‘’Good…..so Sumo what’s up? How was your studies and experience in Australia’’

Sumo ‘’bhayya…I am sure something is disturbing you…wouldn’t you let us know…..may be we can be of help to you…also Gauri Bhabhi has said everything that happened few days before so will you not share with us ‘’

Shivaay smiled and said ‘’I know you two are my little sisters and you will always help me but I will handle everything…don’t worry…Gauri you have to handle this house and Sumo you have to find Riyanshi’s family………..so let me do this alone’’

Gauri ‘’no bhayya not this time…we know you are salman khan of this house but this time we don’t want you to struggle alone ……we know you cannot take help of Omkara ji and devar ji but you can take help of us…and coming to me handling the house I can manage everything by proper planning’’

Sumo ‘’And I will find Riyanshi’s parents parallelly …but first we need to know truth of Anika bhabhi’s sudden exit in an ambiguous manner two years back’’

Shivaay stood up and brushed their heads and said ‘’ok fine……..i will take help from you’’

Gauri ‘’so shall we join hands?’’

Shivaay-Gauri-Sumo joined hands and smiled……….

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AFTER READING YOUR OPINIONS ON PREVIOUS EPISODE I BELIEVE YOU ALL WANT ME TO DECODE THE PUZZLE IN THE LETTER …….HOPE WE ALL ARE ON SAME PAGE ………

ONCE AGAIN SORRY FOR BEING SO LATE IN POSTING THE EPISODE AND THANK YOU PRITIKA FOR LETTING ME YOUR DAUGHTER’S NAME……

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So this was the Twelfth episode of the FF ………..Please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad is welcome…I will reply as soon as possible….all credits to NIKITA !!!

66 comments

  1. Prapti

    Its really good…. like always!!!! Eager to know what Anika is up to? Aniomru scene was really nice and emotional…. Update soon…

  2. Nida

    Nida

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    Great one ☝️ as usual.. i guess you are fine now ..? And no need to say sorry 😐… health is more important… .. waiting for the next amazing 😉 part

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Nida…very happy to see your opinion so soon besie…you made my day…yeah i am recovering …next episode i uploaded

  3. Maryam_ishq

    Maryam_ishq

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    Awesome epi !!! This devar bhabhi jodi is just too good. Shivay and gaya scene was also nice, atleast he also has someone to help him by his side. It’s ok di and hope ur feeling better now…. get well soon !!!

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Maryam…thanks a lot…yeah i am much better now…thank you dear for the concern and love

  4. Sakash.

    Sakash.

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    Hi di.Superb update i love Shivay,Gauri & Sumo team.
    Di u no need to say sorry for late update.
    I hope u r fine now.Whenver u feel free update it.Take medicines on time.We all wait for ur FF.If u struggle it’s not fine.U must write peacefully.U r great u got many works but u give ur precious time to all of us.
    Get well soon my dear sweet di🌹🌹🌹🌹

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Sakash…thank you so much…yeah dear i am much better now and thank you for the love and concern…i have uploaded the next episode sometime before… i am not so great dear…it’s all about time management ..that’s it…with your wishes i will definitely get well soon…thanks a lot dear…

  5. Niriha

    Niriha

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    Awesome di… fabulous part. i hope now ur fine di take care of yourself get well soon di..
    Love you 😍😍😘😘

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Niriha…thanks a lot for liking the ff , for the concern about me…i am much better now …love you loads

  6. Fffan1234

    Fffan1234

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    This is super awesome. I am absolutely loving it.

    The Riyanshi-Anjali convo was super cute and lovedd the way the trio of AniOmRu as and ShiRiMya hhas formed to help solve mystery.

    Am looking forward to the decoding of Arjun’s message and the next update.

    Take care and keep smiling…

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Dipti/Asmi…thanks a lot…next episode i already uploaded…yes the decoding , it will start with next episode…will for sure take care …love you loads …take care and keep rocking

  7. Sagithya

    Sagithya

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    First u take care di….. Tat s more important di……
    It was an awesome part…. Loved shivaay gauri somu bond…. N also Anika om n Rudy bond…..
    Again u gave suspense… But I am loving it..
    Excited for the next part…. Post it wen u r fine n fit…. Take care di😊

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Sagithya…yes i am taking care of health and you know this very well…
      thanks a lot dear…i am glad you are liking it…next part i uploaded sometime before…..will for sure take care and you too take care …love you loads

  8. Priyadas

    Priyadas

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    As always it is just awesome di. I really don’t know what should I say or how to express. The way you are unfolding the events are just mind-blowing. Anyways get well soon di and stay happy.

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Priya…thank you so much…thanks a lot…with all your wishes i will definitely get well soon…love you loads and you too take care

  9. Navz

    Navz

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    Diii….bring it on dii…more and more suspense..more and more twists…i am experiencing a super thrill filled ride dii..woahh…waiting for next.

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey chotii…thanks a lot dear…thank you so much …awee so sweet of you to say such a line….next episode i already uploaded sometime before…

  10. Vigan

    Wow awesome epi.. is tat Anika have twin sis same look cal as Anjali.. who s real Anjali 🤔 Waiting for the next update eagerly …

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Vigan …nopes Anika is Anjlai …i wrote the following lines to confirm that

      Anika……”while we three are alone I am Anika for you…rest everywhere I am Anjali for you…….till my purpose of coming here resolves this must be a secret….’’

      Next episode i uploaded the episode sometime before

  11. Katz

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    Hi vhm…. how are you doing…? Sorry for the verrrryyyyy late message. Actually I was very much busy with my sister’s wedding for the last ten days. I didn’t have time to check TU. When I get back to TU, I missed lots of ishqbaaaz updates including yours.
    Coming to your story, I just realized that MMKAD is your work. And I read all the parts in one go… you are amazing as always. How do you manage to write with this ease without any influence of your previous works…. With unique plots.
    Looking forward to your next part dear…. And I will try to message you from the next part regularly…. take care….bye….

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Katz…how are you? i am so glad to see you back…welcome back……no worries …i am sure you would have enjoyed the wedding keeping aside all these and that’s very important….

      Thank you so much dear for those awesome lines…but this time the credit isn’t mine it goes to Nikita who gave me the plot and asked to develop the story…next episode i uploaded sometime before…no problem if you are busy then post your opinions whenever you are free…..

      you too take care and keep smiling…love you loads

  12. Sairish

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    heyy di…
    first of all hope you are in pink of your health now and there’s no need to say sorry we can totally understand and me i have not posted my ff since a week so who can understand better than me 😅😋😋😂😂…..coming to this… as usual superb..loved it to the core ..suspense is continued as always..to my utter shock how come anika/anjali don’t know riyanshi??? in last epi i thought i solved the mystery but now this lukka chhuppi ka game ..my gooddd totally enjoyed it while reading…do post the next one soon
    take care
    lots of love
    Sairish

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Saiiiiirrriisssssssssssshhhhhhhhh….i am much better now and thank you so much for the love and concern……awee so sweet of you to write such lines…thank you so much….next episode i uploaded sometime before…

      loads of love to you too…will take care for sure…you too take care and keep smiling

  13. Zaveesha

    Zaveesha

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    Di firstly wanna ask howz ur health now??..
    Nd don’t need to be sorry…Health is Wealth… Take ur time nd post accordingly…
    Nd now I’m sorry for not posting my opinion on the last episode…I had my computer diploma exam yesterday nd also had to go to a family function…but I have read the episode nd will comment now…
    Nd regarding this episode this is amazing..u r going in the way to connect ur ff to the real IB…good going…loved the AniOmRu bond nd ShivSomRi bond…waiting to know all the intentions of Anika/Anjali…
    Nd thank u for such a long update..I like reading long episodes…
    Nd lastly Pritika di’s daughter name Riyanshi is so cute…
    Take care…

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Zaveesha…..i am much better now…yeah will take time to post and reply as per my health condition…no problem Tazeela it’s weekend and you have your won schedules so i really don’t mind or get sad…post whenever you are free…

      Thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….from next episode onwards the revelation will start and all tracks will merge to one and end the ff………

      true her daughter name is so cute that when i planned to bring the little one i asked her to let me use her name…..it was so nice of her to let me use her daughter’s name….thanks to her….

      next episode i have already uploaded sometime before….

      love you loads …keep smiling and take care

  14. Dhar

    Dhar

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    Lovely little update diii , loved all the bondings …… Please to post the next update asap shivriya and anomru nailed it to the core loved episode

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Dharani thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….i thought it was a long update and i must cut short the length of episodes….next episode i already uploaded sometime before…..

  15. Swathi..

    Swathi..

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    Hi di. Asusual awesome episode 😘😘😘. I read all the episodes Today. I requested for an early update u did it. But it’s me who was late in reading 😛.onside Anni omru team other side shiv Gauri Saumya excited for next update..😍

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey swathi…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i am glad you liked it and i hope you will continue to like the upcoming episodes too….i uploaded the next episode sometime before

    • UF

      AMAZING EXCELLENT FANTASTIC INTERESTING OUT STANDING SUPERB👌👌👌😘😘😘

      Dear VHM
      Don’t say sorry.health is important then work.so first you have to take care your health and after that work is imp okay.so you good take care your health.we always waiting for your ff😊😊😊😊😊

      Take care😘

      • VHM

        VHM

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        Thank you so much UF…thanks a lot….yeah i am taking care of my health but you know what i just can’t keep taking rest …i need to do something or other to keep myself busy …next episode i have already uploaded sometime before…

        thank you for the love and concern…you too take care and keep smiling

  16. Aashi

    luved the chapter
    but I decoded the message
    luved the bhabhi-devar bond and bro-sis bond
    update whenever u can
    take care of ur health coz too many people depend on u
    luv u

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Aashi…i am so happy to know you decoded the letter…but due to majority of people asking me to decode the f=next episodes might make you bored…but i will try to make it interesting for you as much as i can….

      updated the next episode sometime before….thank you so much dear for the love and concern….love you loads …keep smiling

  17. Gayathri.visu

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    Hiiiiii di. Good afternoon. Firstly tell me how r u now? Secondly check ur TU msgs then reply me di.

    Wow!! Awesome di…. In real IB still they didn’t give answer, why Shivaay wanted that Chawl??? But here u gives correct answer di. I liked that idea. AniOmRu convo is good! I always loves their bonding. But ShivRiYa bonding is sooooo cute….. Remember Shivaay consoling Gauri n Shivaay Sumo scenes……. Awwww!! Lovely bonding. I m pretty sure Riyanshi is Arjun n that NGO lady’s daughter!! And Anjali is somehow related to Arjun!
    Waiting for next part di…..

    But first ur health then only FF. So no need of stress….. Take care ur self di!!
    An

    And Nikita….very good plot dear!

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Gayu,

      I am much better dear…i checked and replied i suppose…

      Thank you so much dear for the love and concern…i am glad you are liking this ff …thank you so much for the lines you wrote…let’s see what’s in store for us……..next episode i uploaded some time before ….

      will take care and you too take care and keep smiling…love you loads…..
      all credits to Nikita

  18. JhanviPatel

    JhanviPatel

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    Hi di… How are u?…
    U should not take more stress di… Take rest… Otherwise I will not with you😥…plzz take rest fully that’s yours sweety’s order to you….
    And about this episode this is as usual OUSUM… Finally omru came to know about Anika… Hope soon shivay will also cone to know the truth… The cutest part is anika and riyanshi’s conversation… ‘PAPA KA NAAM PAPA HI HOGA NA’… 😁😁 So cute…. AND THE BESTEST part is aniomru joined hands as well as shivgauya also joined hands… Wowwww amazing… Ab ayega maza…
    Par maza to ayega hi but agar aapne rest nahi kiya na to… To… I will be angry on u…ok😢… Ok so take rest and take medicine properly… Ok… Bye di take care… Love you di… Miss you….😍😘

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Sweety…..i am taking rest and not taking any stress…promise….how can i deny your order ….

      thank you so much sweety…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you to mention what all you liked …hopefully ab mazaa aayega…par dono teams do dishaaoon mein kaam karenge ek dusre se complete alag hoke par at the end they will come to same destination….

      will take medicines on time and take rest…miss you too…love you loads …keep smiling and take care

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Ashwinee thanks a lot…an glad you are liking the ff…will definitely take care …love you loads …keep smiling and take care

  19. Nikita_jai29

    Nikita_jai29

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    It is awesome dii…. Love you… And take care of your self.. Thanks for your time and commenting on MMKAD to all my friends and silent readers…

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Nikita…all credits to you and it is our duty and responsibility to reply to all the readers who post their opinions…so i am just doing that…as this is the least we can do it…….and thank you so much for having faith on me and asking me to develop your plot

  20. Lauren

    Lauren

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    How r uhh feeling now??
    It was amazing n awesome n fantastic as always… loved it… loved d conversation btn anika oops anjali n riyanshi… n loved bond between devars n Bhabhi….post nxt soon….
    Luv uhh dii… n yeah get well soon💐

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Lauren…i am much better now…thank you so much for the love and concern….

      Thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i am so glad to know you liked the conversations and bonding….next episode i uploaded sometime before …love you loads keep smiling and take care

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Madhu…thanks a lot…no worries dear..small or big but you posted in your busy schedules and that is so sweet of you to do so…loads of love to you…keep smiling and take care

  21. Pritika

    Pritika

    |Registered Member

    Di y r u telling thanks again n again, it’s my pleasure that u use my daughter’s name in ur FF, i’ll give her ur love
    and abt FF it’s awesome as always, no words to describe ur talent to connect the facts, saumya is back and Anika-Om-Rudra one side and Shivaay-Gauri-Saumya other side, good team
    Good job all what can i say more

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Pritika…

      i must say thanks dear because you never knew how am i gonna use it…to whom i am gonna use it …you just gave permission which is a big thing to do….

      thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…i am so glad that you are liking the ff….thanks a lot…

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Komal….thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you dear to say such amazing words……love you loads …keep smiling and take care

  22. Banita

    Amazinggg update di…. Aniomru nd Shivrisom bonding was Awesome…..
    Get well soon di Tc….

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Banita…thanks a lot…yeah i am coping up fast …thanks a lot for the love and concern…

  23. Jerry_36

    Jerry_36

    |Registered Member

    I am so sorry for commenting after decades, the update is fabulous, not to mention. Loved it totally ! Loved the bondings of each group😘

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Vedika…thanks a lot…that’s okay dear…i also saw your opinions just now after ages…so i should be saying sorry….love you loads dear

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Ankita…thanks a lot…..and i too am sorry for my very late response…thanks again

  24. Nita D

    Nita D

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    Hawww di, u were not well, uthne ki haalat mein bhi nahi the n apne batana zaruri bhi nahi samja…N here I keep on telling u everything……this is not done….I m kitti with u now…..

    Acha so this was the whole story of Malhotras…..Anika’s side of story is so much unknown yet….But it was good that she at least told OmRu…..But look at the teams….it is said that devar bhabhi r best friends/ get along very easily (seen that in real life too) so they in one team n their better half in another….

    But if Anika changed to Anjali only few hrs before, then why did the airport authorities also knew her as Anjali….? N how is ASR related to this???.

    Anyways, I’m still angry with u, but take care n get well soon n don’t try any more stunts….

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Nita…pehle gussa nahi hona…actually maine socha episode mein hi likh diya ki meri ta biyet kharaab hain aur next episodes nahi post kar sakoongi…par dekha ki nahi likha tha maine aise kuch…haan mein teen din bahut bimar ho gayi thi….aur usi chakkar mein tumhe batana bhi bhool gayi…sachi wala sorry…gussa mat hona…aagey se dhyan rakhoongi ki tumhe sab kuch bataoongi…ab please maan jaoo………

      tumhara jo Anika ke baare mein sawaal tha woh shaayad kisi aur ne notice nahi kiya…uska jawaab aane wale episodes mein mil jaayega…

      Haan mujhe laga ki bhabhi devar aur jiju saaliyon ka team accha aur pakka rahega…isliye aise turn kiya….

      so please don’t be angry and now i am doing good……aur pakka promise koi stunts nahi karoongi

      • Nita D

        Nita D

        |Registered Member

        Di….meri toh baat chodo…mera level hi alag hai….jo kisi ko sawal nahi aata wo mujhe aa jaata hai….(self obsessed u know 😉😉)
        But jawab jaldi dena….

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