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MUKAMMAL MOHABBAT KI ADHURI DASTAAN ( MMKAD ) – ISHQBAAZ FF – EPISODE 11

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Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB….. please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

————–SHIVAAY’S ROOM , OM

Shivaay walked to his room and sat back to open the envelope…he was expecting something major to get known …while he was about to open..he received a call and spoke to the caller ………he agreed and said he will take care…….the call ended and he gave a smile for a moment…a smile after a long time……..

He again turned to open the envelope…………..the letter stated

‘’Mr.Shivaay Singh Oberoi…you might be thinking why did I leave a letter for you….i could have handed it over to you on the day I met you………but some truths have to be found out to be believed…the truth I am referring to is about your life………I very well know the fact that after or during maha arthi you would have seen a person… who have the ability to turn the lives of Oberois upside down..myths will be busted and memories will be faded……..so I am leaving this note ……all the answers have been filed …but you need to get them yourself …..you might be wondering why should you work hard to get what you want, why can’t I directly give you ? the answer is , I might be on my next mission and will be unable to meet you…….or I might not be in this world…well my job is such that there is no guarantee of life the next moment……so you need to get it yourself…..i am bad at writing things directly so I am giving clues through the below lines…hope you get your answers soon……

In panno mein sambhala maine zindagi ki kuch yaadein
Nibhanein tumse kiye hue sari wadein
Padhke pata chalega kayi aise batein
Jo banaye aur bigade kai rishtey natein
Par pehle karna hoga usse mulakatein

milna hoga tumhe uss se
Takkar huin sabse pehle jis se
Kholo sambhal ke apna dimaag aur uski sari darwazein
Mil jaayega woh jo poori karein tumhari khwayishein
jaana hoga waha tak
jis din huan sara natak
hoga dekh ke tumhara haal behaal
par dhoondna hoga uss roshni ko jo dikhayegi apna kamaal

Aasaan nahi hogi itna bhi
Kyun ki paaoge tum sirf aadha sach
Jaan ne sari sacchayi
Lagana hoga daaon mein sab kuch

Dhoondna hoga usse tumhe
Jaan aur jigar ka thukda meri
Fir jaroor milegi tumhe
Razoon ki woh chaabi

Keep this letter safe Mr.Shivaay as this is the only one which can help you to reach the final destination !!!

BEST WISHES ——–ARJUN ‘’

Shivaay read the letter and was totally confused….it seemed as if he reached a dead end because they made no sense……the lines, the sentences everything was spinning around in his head !!!

He carefully kept the letter back on envelope and decided to decode it at the earliest…but before that he wanted to take care of everything as promised to the caller…

He went to the living room and called everyone and said

Shivaay ‘’Tomorrow someone is coming from Australia to stay here with us…….so ‘’ he turned towards Badi maa and spoke

Shivaay ‘’Badi maa …please can you look in personally to arrange a guest room for the guest’’

Jhanvi ‘’Sure Shivaay…anything for you…don’t worry’’

Shivaay ‘’thank you badi maa’’

Rudra ‘’From Australia……….ohh wowwwww bhayya….but her room is already ready na’’

Shivaay nodded his head in no thinking nothing can change when it is Rudra…….he smiled and left without responding making Rudra confused……..

————-NEXT DAY MORNING

‘’Shivaay bhayya……..’’ a shout was heard ……

‘’Om bhayya’’ one more time a shout was heard………..

All three and rest OF members came out……….everyone had a smile on their face ……..she ran towards them and hugged Shivaay and Om and looked at Rudra…………

A little girl was standing behind with her bag and a doll………

Om ‘’ You here …I can’t believe……I am so happy…and I missed you soooo much’’

‘’Me too bhayya’’ she replied

She walked towards Shivaay bhayya…..and hugged him…..

‘’I am sorry bhayya…..that day’’ she continued to speak when Shivaay cut off

‘’Forget it …I know you did your best …..but that’s okay…’’ Shivaay spoke

‘’Dadi……….’’ She ran to Dadi and took her blessings and then hugged her

Dadi ‘’we missed you so much…thank God you are back’’

Pinky ‘’OMM….you are again back..this time what are you upto? And who is that little girl?’’ Pinky said pointing towards the little girl and looking at her

‘’I will let you know everything aunty ji’’ she replied

Rudra ‘’mujhse gale nahi milogi MOTIIIIIIIII……meri SUMO WRESTLERRRRRRRRRR’’ he said with a puppy face

Sumo ignored him……….

Rudra became sad…….

Shivaay ‘’Whose this little girl?’’

Sumo ‘’Bhayya a long story …but will try to tell in short’’

Omkara ‘’Okay…go ahead’’

Sumo ‘’Bhayya her name is RIYANSHI…….she used to stay with her mom in Australia…..till few days before everything was proper with her life …but I donno what happened that now her life turned upside down……..someone shot her mother in Australia at her house…you know na th egorimh violence against Indians in Australia in the recent past…Police were suspecting the same…we have no idea about her father…..’’ she was into tears……

Omkara went to Riyanshi and picked her up in his arms…….Riyanshi gave a cute smile …….

Shivaay ‘’but how are you connected to her’’

Sumo ‘’Bhayya you know right I went to Australia for higher education and in my free time I used to go to an Indian NGO and help the needy….Riyanshi’s mother is one of the board member of that NGO …when we got to know about her untimely death…the management asked me to take her to India and asked me to make an attempt to find out about her family ..the only information they knew about her was she belongs to Mumbai….and if I don’t get any details then they asked me to join her in any NGO here……..when I asked about her father or her grandparents she has no reply…except that , that her father came to meet them nearly a month back and then left….her Australian VISA is also expiring and getting it renewed is not possible because of the unfortunate events……..so I was helpless and brought her here…….i will try to find out about her family…else I will have to join her in any NGO …….’’ She ended

Shivaay took her in his arms and kissed her with love………everyone was surprised to see this side of Shivaay………

Shivaay ‘’ Sumo …try to find out her family…take help of Khanna if needed ….and if you don’t find then she will be with us along with Sahil’’ he said brushing Riyanshi’s hair….

Sumo smiled and said ‘’thank you Bhayya’’

Rudra ‘’And I will help you in finding this child’s family’’ he said confidently looking at Sumo

Sumo again ignored him and this hurt Rudra really bad……

Shivaay took her to Sahil’s room and asked her to take rest……..she held his hand and cutely spoke

Riyanshi ‘’Aap mujhe chod ke nahi jaaoge na ? Papa ko dhoondoge na?’’

Shivaay ‘’hmmm…Rudra aur Sumo tumhari madad karenge aur kuch bhi ho jaaye tumhe mein chod ke nahi jaoonga.. jab tak tumhare papa nahi milthe…par abhi mujhe kuch kaam hain isliye bahar jaa raha hoon…aake tumse miltha hoon……..tumhe kuch chahiye ? khelne keliye ya khane keliye?’’

Riyanshi ‘’nahi…..i am fine …thank you’’

Shivaay ‘’theek hain fir aap so jaao…bahut thak gaye hoge na……mein thodi der baad milta hoon’’

Riyanshi slept on the bed and Shivaay waited till she was into deep sleep

Shivaay kissed the little one and left from room………….

Shivaay came back to the living room where everyone was busy discussing about the little one and were talking to Sumo

Shivaay ‘’Badi maa…….is the guest room ready ? ‘’ he spoke ignoring Pinky

Jhanvi ‘’but who is the guest? I too thought it was Sumo…….‘’

Shivaay ‘’I don’t know but someone is going to bring the guest here and the one who is going to bring the guest is my very dear friend….and I never knew Sumo was going to come here…it is equally an surprise for me’’

Jhanvi ‘’ok fine…no problem we will take care of your guest as our own family member …don’t worry’’

Shivaay ‘’thank you very much’’ he replied

Pinky ‘’OMM…….This is house or dharamshala…….first that handicapped Sahil, then these two SUMO and RIYANSHI and now one more guest…….i don’t understand why does everyone want to stay in Oberoi mansion…as if they have no other place to stay’’

Jhanvi ‘’Stop it Pinky…what less do we have…we have place and can accommodate…then why does it hurt you or pinch you so much?’’

Pinky ‘’You leave it jhetani ji….this house is not seeming like a house anymore it seems as a GUEST HOUSE’’

Sumo felt bad and said ‘’It’s okay jhanvi aunty…..i will take Riyanshi and stay somewhere else…why to argue over this…but she slept now so once she wakes up we both will leave’’

Rudra ‘’no need…….you both can stay in my room and I will stay in Shivaay bhayya’s room if choti maa has so much problem’’ he looked at Pinky angrily and hurt

Shivaay ‘’No one need to shift anywhere……I still take the decisions of this house and if someone agrees or not whatever I have said needs to be followed’’ he very rudely spoke looking at Pinky

Pinky made faces listening to him…….Everyone left towards their room………

————–FEW HOURS LATER

‘’’So you are here after long time haan’’ Shivaay smiled looking at him

‘’Had to come because it ‘s already late ‘’ He spoke

Shivaay ‘’Advay Singh Raizada……ASR…..didn’t change much’’

ASR ‘’Shivaay Singh Oberoi …SSO…..you too didn’t change much’’

They both hugged each other

ASR ‘’Heard lot much happened in your life and you forgot to live too’’

SSO ‘’Yes lot happened in my life ….when nothing was happening in your life’’

They both smiled……..

SSO ‘’Okay…..you said you wanted to accommodate someone in this house …where is he?’’ he looked here and there

ASR ‘’Relax …the guest is SHE…her name is ANJALI….a very good friend of mine since an year from Australia …….She recently got a job in SAMAR JEET MALHOTRA’S office….. so she is shifting here to Mumbai…….as per Malhotra’s companies rules …they provide accommodation to their employees after three months of internship…when she asked me to suggest her a best place to reside with minimum cost and maximum comfort ….I thought to accommodate her here in Oberoi Mansion…no rent and world calss facilities are available only here in OM ….also I thought she will be safe and happy too’’

SSO was shocked to listen to Samarjeet Malhotra’s name….he looked at ASR in surprise

ASR ‘’What happened ? any problem? I mean you are looking in surprise after I took Samar Jeet Malhotra’s name’’

SSO ‘’No…no…nothing …everything is absolutely perfect and I will be glad to help you…it’s just a matter of three months…no problem’’

ASR ‘’I knew this about you…so I assured her that she will be staying here’’

SSO ‘’Yeah …but where is she?’’ ………

His Anika meter was buzzing by now and he was clearly searching for so called Anjali here and there……..

ASR ‘’Relax SSO…you are growing impatient……..i will bring her’’

ASR left from there and returned with ANJALI…………..Shivaay stood shocked !!!

ASR ‘’SSO why are you staring at her as if you saw a ghost’’

SSO ‘’she is Anjali? Are you sure?’’ he said pointing towards Anjali ……

ASR ‘’what the ? off course …..i am sure …..i know her since one year …infact we worked together …and she is a very good friend of mine’’

Shivaay remembered Sumo’s call where she said about some Anjali who was look alike of Anika….he was getting confused…….first Anika, then Jwala and then Anjali….all were looking the same……a complete puzzle …but onething was common his instinct of Anika’s presence……which didn’t cheat him anytime……..

ASR ‘’SSO……what happened ?’’

SSO ‘’nothing……I am just thinking how my life is taking enormous turns each day’’

ASR ‘’Philosophy doesn’t suit you….by the way , I need to leave and thank you for the help…she will be here for three months before shifting to her company accommodation’’

SSO agreed and bid bye to ASR………

Anjali walked with ASR and thanked him ………she winked to ASR and smiled while ASR showed thumbs up to her and left………..

Shivaay turned towards Anjali and looked at her

Shivaay ‘’You are Anjali…right….’’ His anika meter was buzzing in high frequency now……

Anika/Anjali ‘’yeah…yes’’ she fumbled as he was nearing her

Shivaay ‘’I cannot believe you change your ……..’’

He was about to complete the sentence when he heard Jhanvi’s voice

Jhanvi ‘’Shivaay…’’

Shivaay ‘’Haan Badi maa…aaya’’ he went to the living room at once

Anika/Anjali took a sigh of relief

Jhanvi ‘’Shivaay what happened ? where is your guest? I mean where is our guest? I have made the room ready and we are all waiting to meet the guest’’

Shivaay ‘’Ms. Anjali…….can you please come here to the living room’’ he called her

Anjali again took a long breath and walked towards living room……….

Everyone stood up in shock looking at Anjali and then turned towards Shivaay…………

OmRu kept their mouths open in astonishment…………..

Rudra ‘’O…ye Anika Bhabhi ke paas koi supernatural powers hain kya? Kabhi aag se khelti hain, kabhi pani fekthi hain, kabhi Mumbai mein rehthi hain, kabhi Australia se aati hain..matlab Anika Bhabhi ke language mein ..ab mere dimaag ka dahi , makkan, cheese, ghee sab ban raha hain’’

Om ‘’meri bhi kuch aise hi halath hain…lekin ek jaisa teen…….ye mumkin nahi hain…lekin koi baat nahi ab woh jab yaha rehne aayi hain tho ham sara sacchayi bahar lekar hi aayenge’’

Rudra ‘’yes’’

Sumo bought Riyanshi from the room and was shocked to see Anika/Anjali standing infront of them…….

Sumo ‘’Anika di….’’ She whispered

Riyanshi got down and ran to Anika / Anjali and hugged her

Riyanshi ‘’Anjali didi………..aap aa gaye…….papa kehthe the ki aap mujhse milne jaroor aaooge……mamma bhi yeh baat bolti thi’’

Anika/Anjali got shocked listening to Riyanshi’s words……..so were Shivaay, Om, Rudra , Sumo , Gauri and rest all…….!!!!

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PLEASE LET ME KNOW IF YOU WANT ME TO DECODE THE LETTER GIVEN BY ARJUN TO SHIVAAY OR YOU ALL CAN UNDERSTAND AND DECODE IT ON YOUR OWN ? BASED ON YOUR RESPONSE I AM GONNA WRITE THE UPCOMING EPISODE…….. …ALSO THOSE WHO UNDERSTOOD THE MEANING OF LETTER DONOT DISCLOSE IT……..WE WILL TOGETHER DO IT IN COMMENT SECTION WHEN THE RIGHT TIME ARRIVES..BUT PLEASE DO RESPOND FOR THE QUESTION WHETHER I SHOULD DECODE IT FOR YOU ALL OR NOT…THANK YOU IN ADVANCE
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So this was the Eleventh episode of the FF ………..Please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad is welcome…I will reply as soon as possible….all credits to NIKITA !!!

80 Comments
  1. awesome,VHM di
    luvd the episode
    update soon
    take care of urslf

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Aashi….thanks a lot……yeah sorry today it got delayed …i posted it long back…but somehow it was published late

  2. I didn’t understand anything… Not even a single thing in the letter bcoz I don’t know Hindi…. Plz post in English yaar… I like the twist… Awesome episode yaar
    ..

    1. VHM

      Hey preetha…i am so sorry i didn’t realize that i need to translate it in english…i was writing it in a flow

      here’s the english translation of puzzle :

      in these pages have i managed memories of my life
      to keep the promise made to you
      you will know many such things after reading
      which will destroy and build some relations
      but that you need to meet first

      you have to meet it/him/her
      with whom you had your first clash
      open carefully your brain and all it’s/his /her doors
      you will get that which will fulfill your wishes
      you have to go till there
      the day this drama started
      you will get sick/irritated/frustrated seeing it
      but find out that rays which will show it’s magic

      it will not be so easy
      because you will find only half truth
      to know entire truth
      you have to put every effort

      you have to find out that
      which/who is a part of my heart
      then you will definitely get
      the key of secret

      Thank you so much for letting me know you liked the twist…thanks a lot dear

  3. Sairan

    Fantastic fabulous awsomeeee
    I think it’s relatedly to Anika only
    But decode it asappppppp Plzzzzzzzz and next one soon Plzzzzzzzz continue soon plz plz plz plz
    Can’t wait

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sairan…yes the letter is related to know truth about Anika…. but how ? the clues are in puzzle……….will upload next episode at the earliest

  4. Sagithya

    Awesome di… Loved it..
    Is Arjun riyanshi’s father???…
    U have again created a new suspense ….
    So curious to know y anika came to oberoi mansion with a new name…
    Pls don’t decode it di…
    Excited for the next part… post it as soon as possible…
    Take care di

    1. Sagithya

      N so happy as saumya returned back to oberoi mansion… N Annika also

      1. VHM

        Hey Sagithya……thank you so much dear…thanks a lot sissy……Is Arjun Riyanshi’s father??? i donno…..hope you are liking this suspense…..you don’t want me to decode…ha ha ha ha…i know the reason…let’s see what majority says…….will post the next episode at the earliest…….will take care and you too take care…love you loads

  5. Its really amazing!! But confusing too… 3 lookalikes: Anika, Jwala, and Anjali???? It would be really interesting to find the past of Anika? And yayy soumya is back!!!!! But who is this little girl? What connection does she have with Anika? Trust me, your ff is getting mysterious and interesting day by day. I love it. And can u decode it using Shivaay because I don’t understand it…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Prapti…all your answers will get revealed from next episode answers…this episode was crucial for me to move towards the ending of this FF…….and i hope as promised during teaser i will be maintaining the suspense while keeping in parallel to current track…..

      yes the letter will be decoded by using Shivaay ……that will how it will proceed only if majority says to decode it……..

      Thank you so much once again dear

  6. JhanviPatel

    OUSUM di… Superb…
    Yeahhh sumo is back…. Yupieeee and yes I love the name RIYANSHI…😍😍
    ANIKA ke dimag mai kuch to khichdi pak rahi hai… Par kya🤔…kahi woh pinky aunty ko sabak sikhane ka to nahi soch rahi… !! Jo ho par yeh ff hai bada kamal ka di… Amazing… Aaj to sapne mai bhi anika shivay omru yeh log hi ayenge😂😂… SUPERB… Love you di…thanks for this AWESOME, AMAZING, MIND BLOWING, SUPERB, OUSUM FF… LOVE YOU A LOT DI…😍😍😍😘😘😘

    1. VHM

      Hey Sweety….thank you so much dear……yes i too liked the name RIYANSHI …thanks to our friend pritika..it’s her daughter’s name and i took permission from her to use her daughter’s name for this ff……..

      Ha ha ha ha ha…..sapno mein bhi…sweet dreams honge fir……kya khichdi pakegi kaise pakegi mujhe bhi abhi tak pata nahi …but this episode was very crucial episode …….and i am glad till now i got positive response……

      Thank you thank you thank you thank you………
      All credits to Nikita

      1. Pritika

        Thanks JhanviPatel for liking the name Riyanshi, yeh its my 3 yrs old daughter’s name and also thanks to Harika di for using my daughter name

  7. Ashwinee

    Akka are you fine?????????????
    Like seriously arjun jwala ASR anjali riyanshi . Paanch tareeke se Raita phailaaya hai aapne 😱😱😱na jaane aur kitna log hai is list mai. Upar se woh letter Ufffff😯😯😯. Pata nahi aage kya hoga. Jo karna hai kijiye aapki marzi . Mera toh sach me dimaag ka dahi, makkhan ,ghee, cheese, aur saath saath gangaram bhi hogaya. Actually mujhe yeh samaj mein nahi aaraha hai ki aapko daatun ya taareef karun .

    PS Nikita di , you are gonna pay for this . Akka ko bolona ki yeh Koi computer programme nahi hai ki Itni badi badi update mein Itna sophisticated language letter ke form mein likhe 😥😥😥😥. Agar aapko woh letter samaj mein aagaya hai to boldo na pleaseeeeee 😘😘

    Anyway bohat likh chukihoon . Take care both of you and love you both loads

    1. VHM

      Hey Ashwinee….why are you asking me?

      I didn’t understand whether you liked it or not…….have i confused you so much ? OMG …please bear with me till next episode and you will slowly get to know everything……aree accha idea diya…mein bhool gayi ki mein actaully comouter language bhi use kar sakti thi…kabhi aur use kar leti hoon…….

      ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ……..just kidding…….

      yeah all credits to Nikita

      1. Ashwinee

        Haawww akka not fair. How can I not like it????? Obviously I loved it . Only thing is I’m confused a bit. Since you have said that you will clear the confusions in the next update , will definitely wait for it☺☺. Thank You for translating the letter in English in preetha’s comment . Have a good day 😘

  8. Sakash.

    Superb update di.Sorry for troubling u,di please explain letter meaning & I am confused with jwala/Anjali double role.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sakash…..wait for the next episode and everything will be clear……and sorry for making you wait was not keeping good health so delayed ….

  9. Poonguzhali

    Arjun is Riyanshi’s father. Annika comeback to shivaay’s life. ASR helped her.
    May be am wrong.

    1. VHM

      Hey Poonguzhali……thank you so much for posting your opinion…second two statements are correct …first one let’s keep it a secret for somemore time……what say…..thanks a lot once again dear

  10. Sakash.

    Super di.

  11. AMkideewani

    I’m speachless di😉😉😉

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much CrazygirlS.P ….thanks a lot dear….

  12. Maryam_ishq

    U make me speechless day by day with ur ffs…. they are just so great…. arjuns letter was awesome… the way u put a mystery in it and made a poem kinda thing for shivay to decode 👌👌, i feel as if i kinda got wht arjun was tryin to say but not really sure of it, and plz make shivay use his brain wisely and decode it. Riyanshi was so cute 😚, and mostly arjun is her father. Anika/Jwala/Anjali are all one… tht is our khidkitod anika…. since she is RAW agent she needs to change her name for stuff. Di ur just great with writing, u should write a book and publish it am pretty sure it will be great… and this ff is keepin me hooked to my phone to see if u updated or not… the mystery is just great. Keep it comin 😃

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Maryam…thanks a lot…..that’s awesome Maryam…you decoded it….i am happy to know you are liking this FF……and yes few of your statements are correct..i have just started off with writing a book…donno when will it get completed…awee so sweet of you thank you so much once again !!!

  13. Lauren

    Amazinggggg dii…. I understood a bit of letter.. still trying to understand…. anyways dii loved it to d core… it was awesome, amazing, superb… waiting for d next… n yeah thanks for long updates …. when I read ur ff juzz feel like it should never end…post nxt asap dii.. waiting for nxt..
    Luv uhh…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Lauren…thanks a lot….awee so sweet of you…..sorry for today’s delay as i was not keeping good health…….love you loads dear…..

  14. Wow!!!! Nikita kya stry hain yr!!!!!! Nd di main toh apki writing ki bahat badi fan hun…,..
    Aj ka sbse bada high light Arjun’s letter…. Luv d mistry letter…. I think Arjun talk about Riyansi *jaan aur jigar ka tukda* a wild guess….. I hope i’m in write path….
    Aur Riyansi sso part was FABULOUS….. Luv this shed of shivaay…..
    Anika Anjali Jwala pata nahi kya mistry hain….. Hpoe u disclose it soon…. Eagerly waiting 4 ur nxt epi di….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Banita…thanks a lot……………….are you in right path or wrong i cannot reveal it right now…but i promise from next to next episode the mysteries will get resolved…..

      Sorry for the delay was not keeping good health so next update got delayed…..

      1. Dii what happen!!!! R u alright????? Tc nd Get well soon di….

  15. Awesome superb mind blowing plz post ASAP and ha plz decode it plz

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Aisha…thanks a lot

  16. Nikita_jai29

    goes to harrika dii… Thanks for your time and commenting on MMKAD to all my friends and silent readers.

  17. Nikita_jai29

    Ohhh my comments is vanished half by mode uncle.. Ishqies.. This riyanshi /anjali mystery…. And Cameo of ASR… Idea is given by vhm dii… And this time the credit of this mind blowing idea is only goes to vhm dii… Love you dii.

    1. VHM

      All credits to you Nikita…don’t give me the credit as if you haven’t asked me to write this FF of ours would have never come up…….

      Love you loads dear…….

  18. Hair I’m silent reader of ur ff.. to b honest after long time the one ff I waiting for eagerly to read it is urs.. when I can’t see ur ff I really don’t feel like to read others ff too.. u r so awesome 😍😍 I really feel happy to read ur ff it’s really make me depressed if I can’t see ur ff trust me u rock it… 😍😍 so much of suspense and I really happy tat u choose saumya to rudra not bhavya thanks a lot for tat.. pls make the next update ASAP yar

    1. Sorry it’s a Hai not hair 😁😁

    2. VHM

      Hain Vigan…Welcome …..i am so happy you have posted your opinion …..thank you so much…thanks a lot….OMG So much of love for me..i am so glad dear that you are liking this FF….sorry for today’s delay was not keeping good health …next episode i already uploaded …i think it will be published in few hours……..thanks to you for support and i hope to see you regularly or whenever you are free

  19. Niriha

    Awesome di….what a great twist loved it 😍😍😍😍ASR &SSO scene was 👌 eagerly waiting for next part update soon di

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Niriha….thanks a lot…glad you are liking this plot

  20. Nida

    Hello..❤️️❤️️ Very well written.. first of all if you are not fine you can take a break from this ff for some days .. your health is more important than anything… and about the letter.. i am trying to understand.. and get well soon

    1. VHM

      Hey Bestie…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot..yes was not keeping good health…so today’s episode delayed…and about the letter i know by now you understood……thank you for the wishes dear

  21. Awesome akka just superb update post next one soon pls…. Take care bye..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much talli…thanks a lot….will take care …and you too take care

  22. Gayathri.visu

    Hiiiii di. Good morning!! And yeah, I m fine di.

    Really this is head spinning twist di! So many characters Jwala, Arjun, Riyanshi, cameo ASR, Anjali n that NGO lady the who helped Soumya in Australia….. OMG!! Interesting twist di……I loved it! Yayyyyyy…..Sumo is back. This pinky yuckkkk ponky is irritating!! And the letter…..as ur wish di. I m ok with any decision. But I must say u both r really intelligent not me. I can’t think much, my head is spinning. Is Arjun n that NGO lady are Riyanshi’s parents???

    Di what happened to u? Why all r asking that u r fine not?? Are u not well??
    Take care di….. Keep smiling

    1. VHM

      Hey Gayu,

      Thank you so much dear….glad you liked the twist….and as i said i will be merging with the current track of IB with mystery / Suspense as base i bought in ASR …..and about Riyanshi and Arjun’s relation …right now my lips sealed and i promise you will get to know everything very soon

  23. AMAZING BRILLIANT EXCELLENT FANTASTIC INTERESTING OUT STANDING SUPERB👌👌👌😘😘😘

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much UF…so i guess you are happy with Sumo back to OM…..thanks a lot once again

  24. Lulu_Ani

    Woow!!!!! This is wht a ff should be like… i justttttttttt luv it… i just luv ur stories… i luved it to the core…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Lulu_Ani…thanks a lot…am glad you like the FF

  25. Navz

    MIND BLOWING WORK DII…u and nikhita have grt talent in urselves..awesome.
    But i am not that intelligent na..soo plzz decode it..hahha.
    How is ur health?take care of ur health dii.

    1. VHM

      Doctor Chotii….you are more talented than me okay……..thank you so much dear…thanks a lot..am happy you are liking this FF……hope i make you happy like this with upcoming ones too

  26. Pritika

    arey di aapne to suspense ka mountain hi bna diya is baar, kya episode tha, i will try to decode the letter but not able to as i m not intelligent like u, but i will try again, don’t disclose it urself i mean in comment and Riyanshi is very cute name and i know she is very cute too.
    Thanks for the lovely episode….
    in comments i read, u r not well, what happnd di, take care of urself and get well soon di…..

    1. VHM

      Hey Pritika…first of all thank you so much for the permission to use your daughter’s name…secondly thank you so much to let me know you are liking the FF..and coming to letter decoding …i will start decoding as and when the right time comes……i know and i am sure the name and the baby doll is actually very very cute…love you and the little one loads…take care

      Yes …i am having fever…but right now nothing to worry…hope i am back to normal at the earliest

  27. Madhuani

    Di,
    Guess what i got to know the meaning of this letter but i won’t disclose it as you said so 🙂
    It took me nearly 20 mins to decode it but finally done with it.
    N u are so good in it.
    suspense…suspense…suspense…
    Riyanshi is so cute she bonded well with shivaay as they are connected by a common thread named…
    Finally saumya is back how happy i’m today…:)
    Her ignorance with rudra is totally justified n i wanted it too.
    Shivaay’s anika meter is so much good must say.
    So ASR is involved in this all as he showed thumb’s up to ANJALI.
    There is again something that’s going to happen i think so.
    Anjali was shocked to see Riyanshi there as she wasn’t expecting it,right??
    But now eagerly waiting for next one.
    N yes decode the letter when needed as it’ll be much more fun then while reading.
    N yeah don’t forget to take care of yourself.
    Are you alright now?
    Love You…:)

    1. VHM

      Hey Madhu….

      You are awesome dear…..20 minutes is a very short time…..this particular episode took me around 7 hours to write..out of which to write that puzzle/clue i took around 4 hours and you just solved in 20 minutes ..that’s amazing….

      They are bound by a common thread named ?
      Ha ha ha…i had to merge this plot to the current storyline of IB …so had to use ASR entry …
      Anjali was shocked ..she wasn’t expecting ..well that question will be answered in next episode for sure……
      yeah letter decoding will start very soon…..and i hope i live upto the expectations of the readers including you…..

      i am much better than before but much worse than being normal….it will take time but i am in recovery mode……..will take care for sure dear…and thank you for the wishes …love you loads…keep smiling

  28. Dhar

    Itna dimaag aata kahan se has ….. I think I understood half of the puzzle but the other half went a bouncer….. anika , jwala then this anjali. .. so many names for a single person …… riyanshi was cute…. is arjun her dad …… plzz plzz plzzz plzzz do post the next update ASAP

    1. VHM

      Hey Dhar…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…dimaag hai hi nahi mere paas isliye aise utpataaang cheezein likh rahi hoon…koi aise karta hain kya…sabko pareshaan/confuse karke rakh diya……

      is arjun her dad? i too donno …….we will see how this case of Riyanshi is solved…….and trust me till now whose ever comment i read the focus was who is Riyanshi…none asked me how will Shivaay find truth of Anika…….i am successful in deviating the core plot and making the sub plot come forth…kinda feeling proud…lol…just kidding…….

      Sorry for this dealy Dharani…was not keeping well else i would have never delayed in posting…

      love you loads …keep smiling ….take care

  29. Fffan1234

    Hey that was suspenseful intriguing super fantastic update.i absolutely loved it. Especially the letter from Arjun. I have understood it,I think, but it will be fun to read how Shivaay uses his brain to decode it.

    Loved Riyanshi and glad Sumo is back. Hating Pinky the way she is acting is just too much

    Take care 😊 and update next part when possible…

    1. VHM

      Hey Dipti/Asmi…..thank you so much for those beautiful lines….ohh that’s great…..so now you can relax and enjoy the upcoming episodes….thank you so much dear….

      Will definitely take care and you too keep smiling …love you loads……

  30. Sairish

    welll.. …a VERYY big wala sorry for commenting late…coming to this
    this was soooooooooo amaaazzing…
    I understood the code ✌✌😁😁😎😉😉…
    in love with your story and the way you write,describe things….every thing in amazing ..
    ASR entry was also amazing …..
    at first I didn’t understood the code but after reading the whole chappy everything was clearrr…..riyanshi what about her …a very cutee namee and yaaaa suspense to koot koot k bhara hai is story Mai… i can’t control myself from praising you..uffffff maaar dala yaar…and ya one more thing i commented on chappy previous than last but somehow it didn’t got posted ..donno whyy???..well you are a wonderful writer especially for My kinda mystery and suspense lover …what a great twist….
    if you want then you can decode the code as well to get a clear picture of it for others u know 😎😎
    loads and loads of love
    Sairish

    1. VHM

      Hey Saiiiiiiiiiiiiiriiiiiiiiiissssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhh….awee so cute name…..

      Thank you so much dear..thanks a lot….so finally you decoded ……that’s amazing as i wrote earlier …it took me 3 -4 hours to create the puzzle and you decoded it in some time …kudos to you dear…keep going…as you are amazing…….

      Thank you,..thank you…thank you…….and no worries if it didn;t get posted sometimes this sort of problem arises …i missed you that day nothing else…….

      Yes i can see majority wants me to decode so further episodes will be revelations planning and plotting ……

      Loads of love to you dear..take care and keep rocking

  31. Prajkta

    I understood a few things but please decode it soon…..loved the update…..waiting for Anika/Jwala/Anjalo mystery to solve…..amazing story line

    1. Prajkta

      Anjali*

    2. VHM

      Thank you so much Prajakta…thanks a lot…….i am glad you are liking this FF….yes all mysteries will be solved in upcoming episodes…

  32. Jahanara

    wow awsm akka u again lft us in the twist…….. in loads of happiness as sumo returned thaks a lot akka .. how do rianshi know jwala/anika/anjali..?

    1. VHM

      Hey Jahanara…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot……answer to your question you will get as the ff proceeds ……till then you have to wait…….why thank me …i had to because you all wanted to get back Sumo and as i said this FF dynamics changed with her bringing Riyanshi to OM……now this story will revolve around every character hopefully…….

  33. Awesome di

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Komal…thanks a lot

  34. Ashlyn.G

    It’s totally awsome…another khidkitod episode di…loved it…
    Hey Nikita dear….thanx for giving us opportunity to read such a nice plot….
    Take care always both of you cuties….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Ashlyn…thanks a lot…..all credits to Nikita……..thank you for the wishes and you too take care and keep smiling

  35. Alekhika20

    Fabulous update

    1. VHM

      Alekhika…….thank you so much …thanks a lot…i am still feeling like when will i get to see her writing few lines……will my dream to read more lines from you ever come true?

      I have no count as to how many FF’s /OS’s/TS’s i have written till now …..Excepting for few episodes on my previous FF – Past &Present …i never did get to see a long opinion from you…..

      Hope you make my wish come true !!!!

  36. Zaveesha

    This episode was mind blowing…. fantastic amazing….
    The Shayri code r awesome… now I got to know ur this skill too…u r just simply awesome… well I have decoded some lines but waiting for all the revelation… eager to know how everything gonna solve…
    Take care…

    1. VHM

      Hey Zaveesha …thank you so much and sorry for thee very late reply…i somehow missed this…sorry again but thank you so much dear…

  37. Jerry_36

    Hello Harika Di !
    The update is just superb. I loved it totally, the letter was written really well. Enjoyed it to the fullest.
    Fabulous work and kudos to both of you. Love you !❤

    1. VHM

      Hey Vedika…thank you so much dear…i had something in my brain when i wrote this letter and after it got published i was like what have i done…well many more episodes are already published so you need not to wait…and i read your response on the previous episode and i promise next time i will not do any such silly thing…pinky pormise…ab tho gussa chod do

  38. Nita D

    Baap re….letter padh ke toh meri OMM ho gai…..wapis se, kuch toh hum baccho ke liye chod…..ek cid mein toh mein apni setting jar rahi thi….waha bhi aap hi senior banke aaoge…..

    But I could decipher a few lines (ase hi thodi wahan jaane ka plan hai)…..But when it’s yours ff, I must “expect the unexpected”…..the day drama started will be 2 yrs ago, pinky and/or anika’s drama….
    Banae n bigade rishte obviously Shivaay’s relation with Pinky, Mahi n Anika…..
    Sab kuch daav pe…..his NKK ideology cause for him that is everything……Jaan jigar ka tukda meri…..Arjun’s Jwala, or maybe riyanshi is his daughter( the way she knows anika n papa said she will come…. so made this wild guess)

    Sumo is back……Rudy ko mast wala ignore kar rahi hai…..he deserves it…..But Riya knowing Anjali was a surprise…..But world the world is round na….

    Shivaay ko toh lagega woh pagal ho gaya hai…..bichare ko har ladki mein Anika dikh rahi hai(which is true BTW 😝)…bichare OmRu bhi……

    Ab Sameer ka naam jod ke, aapka wapis cross connection karke cheeze uljana chalu…..so I’ll read on to see how u suljao it….

    1. VHM

      Hey Nita…dance mein tumhari shishya banne aaoongi…dekha tumhare liye bahut kuch chod diya…ha ha ha ha…i was all the way smiling reading this response of yours…

      seriously dear never had confidence that i can create some lyrical puzzle…this was my first experiment…well the result of your guesses you would have found it by now….

      Yes Sumo did what she had to do…i didn’t know how else to tackle their relationship so wrote like that…and Shivaay meter dhoka nahi dega…first rule of IB….Samar bhi aa gaya na …so abhi khud ko uljhan mein daal dii …apni uljhan ko uljhate hue sari uljhano ko suljhana padega

      thank you so much Nita as always you rock with your khidkitodh analysis and opinions

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