MUKAMMAL MOHABBAT KI ADHURI DASTAAN ( MMKAD ) – ISHQBAAZ FF – EPISODE 10

Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB….. please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

OmRu reached near Shivaay’s room and Pinky opened the door …….her eyes were red and tears formed in her eyes…she was stressed and frustrated …….OmRu looked at her …Pinky too looked at both of them in anger and went in a huff……OmRu were puzzled……….

Sometime before :

Shivaay brought pinky into his room and locked the door

Shivaay ‘’why were you threatening Gauri? ‘’

Pinky ‘’threatening? Have you gone mad? Shivaay’’

Shivaay ‘’what do you think mom I didn’t notice or listen….you were threatening her for letting me know the truth of innocence of Anika’’

Pinky looked on at Shivaay and she was scared

Shivaay ‘’aapne aise kyun kiya mom..mere saath aise kaise kar sakti ho aap? Mujhe aapse ye umeed nahi thi…’’

Pinky ‘’shivaay tu ye sab kya bol raha hain? Maine aise kya kar diya?’’

Shivaay ‘’Mom…aapko sach mein nahi pata ya fir se ek aur natak kar rahi hain jaise two saal pehle kiya tha?’’

Pinky ‘’Shivaay…ye tu kya keh raha hain?’’

Shivaay ‘’mom…please…I know you have seen everything standing behind the door and I also know you wouldn’t accept anything too…so let me show you what I am saying’’

He played the CCTV footage and showed to her how she opened the door after Anika came thus helping Priyanka and Ranveer to elope ( two years before ) ……..

He looked at Pinky…..

Shivaay ‘’Mom…wouldn’t you want to say anything about this amazing work of yours?’’ he said sarcastically….

Pinky ‘’woh..woh….i opened the door for air…how can I go against you’’

Shivaay ‘’Mom…..atleast give a proper reason so that I can trust you …for air…really…when the whole house is fitted with central AC……I mean seriously mom’’

Pinky ‘’what do you want to say Shivaay…put your point straight’’ she asked out of frustration

Shivaay ‘’still you did not understand or are you acting ? Fine mom…why did you do this…why did you help Ranveer and in turn Kamini..why did you blame Anika ..what was your
intention? Leave about Anika and me…didn’t you for a moment think Prinku’s life may get ruined? How can you do this mom, with your own son and daughter of this family…how can you?‘’

Pinky ‘’are you suspecting me Shivaay…your mom…I thought you changed after Anika left …but I never thought you changed so much that you don’t care about anything be it business or be it family…….nothing……… and now you are becoming more crazy……. You never cared for me , your mom but I am surprised that now you started suspecting me ‘’

Shivaay ‘’Bas mom…..mein ye sab kuch sunna nahi chahtha….you clearly did a mistake…and this time you are badly caught…it’s better you accept your mistake….i never expected you to blame Anika for what she had not done ….you acted so well that I never suspected you then…..why did you do this mom?’’

He shouted holding Pinky

Pinky ‘’Shivaay…whatever I did was for your good…no one can think better for a person more than his/her mom…I too did the same…Anika was not fit for you …so I blamed her….. it was you who threw her away from your life …it wasn’t me’’ She spoke taking away his hands off her shoulder

Shivaay ‘’Fine mom… I agree I threw her away from my life…..i also agree that no one can think better for a person other than his/her mom……but FOR THE FIRST TIME I AM FEELING LIKE I AM NOT YOUR SON….’’

Pinky was shocked

Shivaay ‘’why are you so shocked mom…..i am saying so…now I am feeling like you never cared about me , about my happiness…….i fear now that what if I get to know you are the real reason behind Anika leaving me and going…..how should I react then…what should I do then…’’

Pinky ‘’What nonsense are you speaking? Don’t you trust your mom?’’ she retorted

Shivaay ‘’no mom ……in this case I can’t believe anyone anymore …not even you… after what all I heard from OmRu, Badi maa and Gauri my suspicion on you is growing…….so I will also find out the real reason of Anika going against me ……..and if in any case I find you being the reason behind all this …then I promise you mom….i will take such a step which you wouldn’t have thought of ever in your life, neither in your dreams…and you very well know Shivaay Singh Oberoi always keeps his promise’’

Pinky ‘’When my own son doesn’t trust me what can I expect from others…everyone keeps on blaming me…I thought you wouldn’t but you too have started the same’’

Shivaay ‘’you are right mom, everyone blamed you but I never suspected, asked or questioned why they were doing so…today I got the first reason and very soon I will get the real reason too.. because with this evidence onething is sure …Anika did everything deliberately that day……and I am sure Anika did all that under some pressure …else she is not the one to do such a stupid and heinous act…’’

Pinky ‘’What more can I expect from you…you always were, are and will be devoted to her…..ANIKA….i don’t understand what magic she has cast on you…you never get anything beyond her…and she …she after her death is also not leaving peace in this house’’

Shivaay ‘’enough mom…not a word more against her’’

Pinky ‘’why? Is it hurting you? Then the words you just spoke did it not hurt me? Did you ever think about that? No…why will you think about me?’’

Shivaay ‘’yes I wouldn’t think anything beyond her …you want to know why ..because I just got to know how she decided to stay mum even after you blamed her for Ranveer and
Priyanka’s eloping…only for me…..only for sake of us…a relation of mom and son…and then she met you and things changed…what did you do or say that she went against me? Tell me mom…give me the real reason and then this blame game will end here…what did you speak to her…just say it mom’’

Pinky ‘’Enough Shivaay…don’t forget you are talking to your mom, your elder…….for that badtameez sadakchap ladki you are going against me…….i am happy she is not alive else I don’t know what more mess she would have created’’

Shivaay ‘’I knew mom …your answer would be this…and I expected that you wouldn’t say anything…I have also decided to find it out by myself…but now I will suspect everyone in this house…I will dig out every thing from now on….truth has to come out now……and I will make it come out…’’

Pinky ‘’fine…bring the truth out…I don’t care but remember onething truth always hurts and breaks everyone…whether it is you or me………’’ She spoke

Shivaay ‘’yes …truth always hurt…and one such truth is Anika is alive…and this might hurt you….’’

Pinky looked on shockingly and said ‘’Whaat? How can this be possible…she died 2 years back…’’

Shivaay ‘’Jwala is Anika and this is truth….and very soon I will prove this and get the rest of truth from her’’

Pinky ‘’I don’t care if Jwala is Anika or someone else…..but you must care about one more truth which you forgot…….you agreed for marriage …so I suggest you to stop thinking about Anika and move on’’

Shivaay ‘’you insisted on this alliance right ……so now I am saying this marriage will not happen until Anika’s truth is out and it will never happen if I find you to be the reason….and if you still further make any plan to get me married against my wish with your poisonous ideas then you will lose this remaining Shivaay forever ….. remember onething time changes for everyone…..if I find that this game was started by you then I will end it in my own way……’’ he warned pinky………

Pinky didn’t say anything and was dumbstruck……..

while all this confrontations were going on Pinky was scared and her voice trembled, her eyes red and tears formed in her eyes…she felt she was losing the won battle…this time very badly ..because she knew Shivaay will not give up so easily…..above all she was angry on Gauri for giving the lead to Shivaay to prove Anika innocent……..she walked away without any delay and opened the door only to find OmRu standing infront of the door…they looked at her puzzled while Pinky gave an anhry look and left …OmRu quickly went in:

Om ‘’Shivaay…everything fine?’’

Shivaay ‘’yes…everything will be fine’’

Om ‘’why did choti maa leave in anger’’

Shivaay ‘’ohh was she angry…I thought she should have been sad and concerned …….’’

Rudra ‘’bhayya…please no more puzzles…tell us what happened’’

Shivaay ‘’Rudra relax…….i said right I will find the truth ..i have taken my first step …you both promised to let me do whatever I want to find the truth…so now keep your words and let me continue to do what am doing now’’

Om ‘’fine shivaay…but remember your promise and you will not hurt yourself too’’

Shivaay ‘’I very well remember’’

OmRu left from there …………

——————–OMKARA’S ROOM

Om entered his room where Gauri was busy setting the room……..he saw Gauri from distance and remembered Shivaay’s words

‘’ Shivaay ‘’I didn’t expect you to say this Om…because without knowing truth you are hating Gauri too……’’ ’’

Om came in and sat on the couch looking the ceiling…..Gauri observed him ad tried to leave the room

Om ‘’Gauri ruko’’

Gauri stopped and turned towards him…….

Om ‘’why are you leaving …this is your room too…so you can stay back’’

Gauri was puzzled by his words ….

After Omkara came out of coma , her fake pregnancy news was got to be known by Omkara…..in order to not hurt any of the OF member…Gauri acted to fall down the stairs and lose the baby……..Bhavya helped her in all this drama….Omkara had no other reason to allow Gauri to stay in OM.……also Gauri couldn’t prove Bua maaji’s intentions neither could she clear his thinking about Kali Thakur……only reason he allowed her to stay in OM was because Buamaa was adamant of her staying back to bear another child ..….Gauri again took help of Bhavya and made the doctor say that she should not bear a child for three years to avoid any risk……Gauri knew she had only one more year to stay back in OM………

Om ‘’Gauri..what are you thinking?’’

Gauri ‘’nothing…I have work so I will leave…’’ and turned to go

Om ‘’Gauri wait’’

Gauri stopped again

Om ‘’Gauri …I want to talk to you …so come here and sit’’ he pointed towards sofa

Gauri obliged and sat down

Om ‘’Gauri why did you lie about everything? I want to know the truth and today I will listen…just explain me’’

Gauri looked at him

Gauri ‘’Omkara ji when your question has started with suspecting me your heart will never believe that whatever I am saying is truth……so there is no point of discussion now…..and coming to truth …as you always believe that truth comes out one day breaking all the barriers …I am waiting for that day when you will by yourself get to know my truth …that day I will be free from all the clutches for ever’’

Om looked on while Gauri left the room……….

———————-RUDRA’s Room

Bhavya was packing her luggage…….she knew Rudra was much annoyed and she knew her mission was also complete……

Rudra came and saw her packing the bags……he calmly went and lied on the bed closing his eyes……he was recalling his encounters with Bhavya and finally his heartbreak when he got to know she was an ACP and came here on a mission trapping Rudra…..he was getting anger …but he calmed himself……..

Bhavya completed packing the bags and went near him

Bhavya ‘’Rudra…I am leaving now…….’’

Rudra ‘’good for you’’

Bhavya ‘’would you not give me a proper send off like you did for Saumya?’’

Rudra got up and looked at her

Rudra ‘’after what all games you played do you still expect me to give you a proper send off? I mean how can you? And don’t you compare yourself with saumya…she is my …she is my ……. she never cheated me as you did….she was , will and always be my first priority because she is mine just mine……. forget it …why am I even saying about her to you……’’

Bhavya ‘’I am sorry Rudra…I didn’t think this matter would get so much complicated’’

Rudra ‘’yes …you never thought anything…you were using every member of this family all these days…you understood everything but still you didn’t try to say the truth…’’

Bhavya ‘’no Rudra you are wrong…I never wanted to use members of this family…I was trying to protect you all……I knew’’

Rudra ‘’protect us……it was you who made us all fall in the trouble..hadn’t you used me then our paths would have never crossed……all these troubles are because of you…thank God atleast now we have got to know the truth….otherwise I can’t even imagine what would you have done further….’’

Bhavya ‘’Rudra please…atleast don’t blame me..i know you are annoyed and angry and it is justified too…but trust me I never wanted to hurt you or any other member of this family’’

Rudra ‘’yet you did na…….so now…please…..please stop acting and leave from here and I hope we never meet again…..’’

Bhavya cried and picked her suitcase and left the room…Rudra was teary eyed……..

——————————–LIVING ROOM
Everyone gathered in the living room to send off Bhavya…everyone knew she hid the truth but still they spent two years with her and they couldn’t deny the fact that she protected them too…so they kept aside their anger and came to her to bid bye…….

Bhavya took blessings of all elders……Gauri and Bhavya hugged and cried ……

Bhavya then went to Om…..Om hugged her and said ‘’few relations last for a small time yet they give lots of memories and our relation is one such…I know Rudra is angry on you but that doesn’t mean you should not come here back…….this house will always welcome you with open arms …and your this brother will always wish the best for you’’

She hugged him back and thanked him

She went to Shivaay and folded her hands

Shivaay too hugged her and said ‘’You will always be my sister as Prinku, Sumo and Gauri are…as Om said this house will always welcome you with open arms and you are free to come and go anytime without any second thoughts…and thank you…….thank you for staying by our side in tough times……’’
She smiled with tears and was about to leave…..but stayed back and took an envelope from her purse and walked towards Shivaay…everyone looked at her with frowned eyebrows

Bhavya ‘’Shivaay bhayya…Arjun sir gave this envelope to me and asked me to give you after my mission gets completed……I forgot to give you as everything got messed up……’’

Shivaay looked at her questioningly

Shivaay ‘’Arjun…..you mean the same Arjun who died getting shot by Sultan while saving me….supposed husband of Jwala? And what’s there in this envelope?’’

Bhavya ‘’Bhayya…..my occupation doesn’t allow me to say much about them …but I cannot keep quiet to say a fact that Arjun and Jwala are not married to each other…..and this envelope he gave me when he came here to meet me in person……on that day after explaining you to continue to proceed for Mahaarthi, we went inside and had some discussion…..after discussing he asked me about you and Anika didi …I said about you and your life after Anika didi left…he then wrote something and sealed it in the envelope and asked me to handover after my mission gets completed…I don’t know what’s in this and what he wrote and why he asked about you…..i am asked to hand over this envelope to you and I am doing so…..now I will leave……’’

Shivaay ‘’thank you’’ he slid the envelope in his coat pocket…………

Bhavya smiled and sadly looked at Rudra who was in no mood to bid her good bye or talk to her……

Bhavya left from Oberoi Mansion……….

————-DELHI

Jwala/Anika came to Hotel and dialled few numbers…..she spoke for about half an hour and ended the calls……

Jwala/Anika POV ‘’thank you so much Chief for relieving me from my inner turmoil……thanks a lot……..now I have decided what I need to do with my life’’

Jwala/Anika ‘’I am coming back…once again back into your lives…..to make everything right….’’

Jwala/Anika starts to Mumbai ……….Shivaay returns to his room to read what Arjun wrote to him…………

So this was the Tenth episode of the FF ………..Please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad is welcome…I will reply as soon as possible….all credits to NIKITA !!!

81 comments

  1. Navz

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    Shivaay and pinkys convo…..superb..Donno wen will this take place in serial.
    And even now..pinky is supporting her deeds…disgusting.
    Awesome …fabulous episode dii.
    Bhavya left from OM…lill emotional part.
    Anika back to mumbai…and what did she mean by coming back into their lives….ohyyooo very much excited dii.
    That envelope ..i think abt how Anika changed to jwala…rght dii??!!
    Bye dii.

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Chotii…thank you so much…sorry not able to answer you with a long message having fever…..thanks a lot again

  2. Fffan1234

    Fffan1234

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    Awesome. Hating Pinky as she is still supporting her previous deeds. Hope Om comes to know Gauri’s truth now.

    Hopefully Shivaay will also find all truths and Anika will soon be back with Shivaay.

    You are super duper writer dear. Am eagerly waiting for next part…

  3. Zaveesha

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    As usual awesome episode…
    Pinky nd Shivaay convo was good….
    Nd u started to clear the misunderstanding between RiKara…
    Feel sad for Bhavya…I like her character in IB nd DBO..but no worry as mostly readers want Rumya…
    Nd now Jwala/Anika will be back…
    Nd Shivaay will himself find out the truth…
    So eagerly waiting for the khidkitod further episodes…
    Love nd best wishes…

    • VHM

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      Thank you so much Zaveesha…thanks a lot….depending on what is posted in next episode we will get to know whether this FF will be khidkitodh or not…..sorry dear unable to type long reply as am having fever…..

      • Zaveesha

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        No problem di…Take care of urself…if u had fever then there is no need of replying to our comments so urgently…

      • VHM

        VHM

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        That’s okay Zaveesha…i should do atleast this much for all the love you all are showing towards us…this is the least we can do…..

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Nrithi….sorry dear…i first started with Ru Vya pair but as per demand from most of the readers i had to change the track to RuMya……i was helpless in this case……thank you for posting your opinion

  4. Aashi

    awesome
    luved it
    sorry for not commenting on last 2 episodes
    hope everything gets fine soon
    update soon

    • VHM

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      Thank you so much Aashi…thanks a lot and no problem i know you have your own busy schedules so not a problem…..about tomorrows episode i have no idea dear…let’s see what’s in store for all of us including me….thanks a lot once again

  5. jane

    this is mind blowing….loved it to the core..shivay going against her mom to find out the truth was awesome…he is the real man so manly…i’m dying to know what is in the letter written by arjun….i can sense good vibes ); hehe….dear you are really good..your imagination is awesome….i wish to read more and wish the page was never ending….you should write a book…please update soon waiting eager eagerly….thank you

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Jane …thank you so much …thanks a lot….i am so happy to know you liked it …sorry cannot post long reply having fever

  6. JhanviPatel

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    Didi apne to kamal hi kar diya…
    Shivay kya confront kiya hai pinky ko… Jabarjast… Abhi to sudhar jao PINKY…😠
    Kisi ke liye nahi to kam se kam apne bacche ke kiye…
    But this episode is damn superb di… I am waiting for this since so last few days when u tell me that u write this shivay pinky CONFRONTATION episode… Aab jake intezar khatam hua aab hoga dhamaka… But I want my omri together plzzz di unko saath lao na… And uss bua maji ka kissa jaldi se khatam karna ha plZ I don’t like her… Per ussse pehli shivika ko mila dena…
    I know thodi lambi list hai… Actually bahot lambi list hai… And so so so happy MY ARJUN BHAI is my lead fir shivay to know more about Anika’s truth YEAHHHHHHH😍😍😍😍😍… Di kya ff hai… MIND BLOWING… Thanks di love you and ha woh list jo maine kaha uske bare mai sochna ha plzz😜😁😂

    • VHM

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      Hey Jhanvi…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…he he he he…dekthe hain aagey kya hota hain…..bas kal ka wait hain …fir iss ff ka future pata chal jaayega…aur long comment karne ki himmat nahi hain fever hain……sorry for that…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care

  7. Shivika

    Awesome Update….
    Shivaay-Pinky confrontation was superb….Waiting fr something like this to happen in d serial as well….
    Seems like Rikara misunderstandings will be clear soon….
    Rumya will be back….
    Anika is coming back to Mumbai….I’m excited….
    Waiting fr d nxt…. 🙂

    • VHM

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      Thank you so much Shivika….thanks a lot…please don’t keep so much expectations dear…having fever so cannot write more…tomorrow what will happen even i don’t know

  8. Lauren

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    I loved d way shivaay confronted pinky… I was expecting this sort of confrontation in ib … but anyways uhh fulfilled mah wish once again… thank uhh for dat dii.. n it was amazing, splendid, overwhelming emotions as always…. waiting eagerly for d nxt part … post nxt soooooooon
    Luv uhh…
    Ur ff juzz made mah day…

  9. AnuluvsIB

    AnuluvsIB

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    Wow! Awesome as always!
    Esp Shivaay n Pinky confrontation was such a delight! Well written.. just the way pinky wid react if he confronted her now!!

    • VHM

      VHM

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      thank you so much Anu…thanks a lot…glad you like Confrontation part…was skeptical about it but guess it is okay…

  10. Jahanara

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    Woww….. akka what a mindblowing epi omg!!!!!! Jst loved it to the core😍😍😍😍 Shivaay jiju convo wit pinky aunty oh god…… Can’t express 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻 Hope Rikara’s misunderstanding gets cleared soon wanting them to be together….. Felt lil bad fr bhavya coz she helped Gauri didi hoping Saumya get back soon missing Rumya 😔😔…. Can’t wait to read what is in the envelope

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Jahanara….thanks a lot…well we all have to wait for next episode ..let’s see what is the future of this FF

  11. Dhar

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    Loved it dii. …….u rocked it…. I hope this happens in da real show….. hate u pinky , plzzz plzzz do post the next update ASAP loved it to the coree …. magic with words 😙😙😙

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Dhar…thanks a lot….next episode we all have to wait …even i don’t know what is gonna happen…

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much talli….thanks a lot…..next episode future naaku kuda teliyadu…..so wait cheddhamu prasthutham

  12. UF

    AWESOME BRILLIANT EXCELLENT FANTASTIC OUT STANDING SPEECH LESS SUPERB WONDER FULL👌👌👌😘😘😘

    Dear VHM
    Main aapki ff ka previous epi ka comment dekh thi hu.aur wo is liye ki kithne comments mil raha hai.iam really happy and proud off you.main tho aapki badi fan hotha ja raha hu.aur aap mujhe dhin bhar impress kartha jaa raha😘bass apna ye talent kabhi Kona math okay😊.ithna saara comment milne ka mathlab hai ki AAP bahuth brilliant and talented writer hai.mera ek request hai baaki Jo ff writers hai jinko Kam comment mil tha ho jinko ideas na miltha ho.un sabko help karna okay.thaaki unki mehnath ko bhi acha result mile.agar aapko acha lagtha hai tho unko help karna.kuch ff main unki writters ko comment kam hone ki wajah se upset hothe pada hai main.agar aap jaise talented writer unko ideas dega tho unhe bahuth help full hoga.aakhir friends hi friends ka kaam aatha hai aur help kartha hai.so try karna ki baaki ff,os,ss padkar uss writers ko apna story improve karne ka idea dena aur unhe support karna thaaki aapko bhi unka support mile.future pe kisi serial ka writter bane ka chance mila tho math kona.aap IB ka writter hotha na trp tho bahuth high hotha top 10 pe nahi top 5 pe hotha IB ka position

    Take care keep smiling and keep writing😊😊😊😘😘😘

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey UF …thank you so much…thanks a lot…sorry UF i am suffering from fever…i will give reponse to your opinion very soon…sorry for the same….

  13. Niriha

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    Awesome di….fabulous part loved it to the core 😍😍😍😍eagerly waiting for next part update soon di

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Niriha…thanks alot…how are you feeling now? next part donno what is gonna happen…let’s see

  14. Madhuani

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    Zabri part di,😘😘😊😚👏👏
    Shivaay-pinky auntie confrontation fabulous.
    You wrote it so beautifully.
    Pinky auntie would react the same way as you have portrayed if shivaay confront’s her now.
    I’m pankha of MMKAD.How big I don’t know?
    GAURI telling OM to find out on own n that he still suspect’s her n wouldn’t believe her was so true.👍
    Ruvya part was lil emotional😳 but I’m happy for bhavya’s exit.😁
    *I KNOW DI THAT I’M KODGI HERE*
    But what to do I like RUMYA most.😊😊
    But OF leaving their anger n coming to bid bye to bhavya was too good.😊😃
    Now what was Jwala/Anika saying??
    N what is there in that letter??
    Eagerly waiting for it😆😆
    Love you…😘😘

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Madhu…thanks a lot..i am glad you liked this episode …i am not in aposition to type more having fever…so please don’t mind…love you loads…thanks again dear

  15. Gayathri.visu

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    Good evening didi..
    Wow! Shivaay n pinky ponky convo….fantastic di!! In that convo I felt that he is not just Shivaay, he is Shivaay Singh Oberoi!! His straight n cold behaviour with pinky ponky…awesome!! Now also she didn’t felt guilty for what she did with Shivika!!! How disgusting woman…
    And Gauri n her words, feeling sad for her di. Bhavya….sorry di no words for her. So this is ur ending di??? Anika is back to Mumbai?!!! Is this is head spinning twist’s start?? Arjun’s letter………????? Eagerly waiting for next part di…. .

    Now bye…. And keep smiling di! Love u sooooooooo much di…

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Gayathri…how are you feeling now? thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…..yes bhavya’s track is ended…..as all readers wanted Sumo to be back…..nope if everything goes fine then as per my plan tomorrow’s should be the head spinning start…but i am not sure what will be going to happen tomorrow……

      Thank you so much dear…love you loads …take care

  16. Maryam_ishq

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    Awesome epi dii !!!! Pinky and shivay’s convo was smthn i have been waiting for, it was just superb, pinky srsly doesn’t deserve to be called a mother…. she doesn’t have a single bit of regret for wht she did to her son. Gaurika scene, gauri is right even if she says the truth om wouldn’t believe her as he has a blindfold over his eyes, waitin for both shivay and om to knw the complete truth of their wives. Can’t wait for the next epi to knw abt tht letter. I wish u were the writer of ishqbaaz, it would have been so much more better and intrestin to watch it. 😀

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Hey Maryam…..thank you so much dear…am glad you liked the episode…awee so sweet of you dear…thanks a lot once again

  17. Sairish

    Sairish

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    amaaaaaaaaazing …….awesome….fantastic ……superbbb….i am awestruck..loveddd it totally ….sorry for the chhotu sa comment..but short of words……and i am a bit busy too as school reopened but I always try my best to read almost every part and story

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      sairiiiiiiiiiishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh…kal kaha chale gaye the? bahut miss kiya tumhe……thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….

      • Sairish

        Sairish

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        really…but I commented on the previous one as well ….donn know how could it happen…but anyway i have read that one as well and it was superb.. .as u know

  18. Nida

    Nida

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    Shivaay and pinky conversation 😍😍😍 u just made me in love with this ff … still cannot get over it… I seriously loved it … 🎩 off 😍😍😍❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️👏👏👏👏😍😍😍😍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏😍😍👏🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Bestie…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot……..i am so happy you liked it …your opinion makes me feel so happy……thanks again

  19. Banita

    Wow!!! Di shivaay-pinky convo was Fantastic….. I want 2 see this in ib…. She deserve this…
    Ruvya part was Superbb….. Bhavya jate jate shivaay ko anika ka innocence ka bare main aur ek evidence de di #i think so#
    Rikara sence was Awesome…. Om also try to find out truth…..
    So d total epi was just Amazingggg.,… U just nailed it di….. Luv u…. Tc…

  20. Sagithya

    Sagithya

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    Awesome di… Lovely part….
    My half wish u have fulfilled by proving Annika is innocent in prinku marriage…
    I am little sad for bavya leaving n also happy that now their will be rumya….
    N soon expose buama also…
    So excited to know about the envelope n about wat Annika was talking…
    Post the next part as soon as possible…

  21. VHM

    VHM

    |Author

    Hey Sagithya…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…don’t have any idea of how tomorrow’s episode is going to be………let’s wait what is in store for us

  22. Jerry_36

    Jerry_36

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    Heyoo Harika di !
    Its just awesome. Loved it.
    Pinky and Shivaay’s confrontation was too good. Waiting for the letter part wala thingy. Take care of yourself, don’t stress too much !!😘

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Jerry…thank you so much….i am glad you liked it…and yeah got down with fever and was hospitalised for few hours came back an hour ago…checked to see the next episode was not yet published …so resubmitted the episode once again

      • Jerry_36

        Jerry_36

        |Registered Member

        Di, don’t talk to me now. I will not read your update…..you were hospitalised but was concerned about us..please take care of yourself I request you, don’t take strain . Don’t upload it till you are fine, pinky promise me or else don’t talk to me…please naa .I am concerned about you, don’t act childish, okay I know you are very big but what should I do if you do these things. Never repeat it again or else katti !!!

  23. Nita D

    Nita D

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    Hey di…..sorry….I m late as always…..I don’t why u r talking to me still…..
    Abt the episode,
    Wanted to see Shivaay confronting Pinky since so long….it’s really well written……
    Gaurikara…..glad to see Om giving gauri a chance(I don’t know whether he has that right. It should have been other way round…I mean he had actually told her to eat poison n die n that’s just one incident)….so I’ll rephrase, glad that gaurikara relation is developing…..I guess the same thing is happening in the show as well na? (I m lagging 2 months behind there as well😅)

    Farewells r always sad n it was sad to see bhavya leave even though I haven’t connected with her yet…..But her going means that makes place for Sumo so it’s all good….

    N the letter will definitely tell Shivaay abt this transformation from Anika to Jwala….But knowing u, I don’t expect that to be soon….

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Nita…finally got to see your opinion posted…as usual awesome analysis …i am sure you must have read further episodes too…and having known your schedule why would i saty annoyed with you…so need to be sorry….very few persons like you take some time out of their little free time to read and post their opinions…so that itself is a big thing for me……thank you so much dear…

      Yeah had been put under pressure to send Bhavya and bring Saumya…so had to give a better end to her role…..as she needs a chance to prove herself…but have to agree saumya fits better with Rudra so bent for the pressure…….Gaurikara’s and RumYa’s relation is still strained i mean still things have not mended …i need to write those episodes too…don’t know how i am going to tackle things ….

      All credits to Nikita for this FF…….

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