Mujhe tumse pyaar hai -RagLak ff part 6

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Mujhe tumse pyaar hai 6
Hi friends…am back with the next chappy of minijalebi ff…so here we go…sorry haven’t proof read…
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Ragini was about to leave…
Laksh holds her wrist and pulled her towards him…
Ragini was panting with his changed behaviour…he tucks the strands of hair that was falling over her face…

Laksh(smiling):MiniJalebi…I wanna say this to you the very first time we met…when you pulled me inside the train…that time itself I got mesmerized by you…if not today then I don’t know whether we will meet again or not…am Lakshman…your good thief have fallen for you…will you marry this thief…
Ragini’s breath caught in her throat…

Ragini(closing her eyes):please laksh…leave my hands…please na…

Laksh shooks her…she came back to normal with a jerk…
“kya madam…day dreaming uh…”laksh giggles…
Ragini felt embarrassed and left from there immediately…
Laksh(murmurs):what do you think about me Jalebi…you alone do this kind of tricks and make me believe that I hallucinated…hehe!!(cute smirk)…how about my acting…
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Laksh sees the lip mark in the mirror when Ragini was rubbing his cheeks saying that there is a dirt…
So he also expressed his feelings to her and made her believe that she hallucinated about him…
Tit for tat…hehe!!
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“Everything is fair in love and war…”laksh smirks…
Ragini keeps on thinking his words…
“it seems to be real…why did I am hallucinating about him often…my mind and my heart lost it’s control…it’s all because of you…you are really a bad thief laksh…”Ragini said under her breath by biting her nails…
Laksh opened the door and smiles at Ragini who was lost thinking about him…

“a bad thief…hmm…”Ragini makes a cute pout…
Laksh heard it and smiles…
Ragini without recognising what she said before leaves from there hearing his giggles…
Laksh(chuckles):what a change over…within 5 minutes it turned out from good thief to bad thief…haha!!
Laksh (in mind):but whatever I said…i said it from my heart Minijalebi…i am really falling for your cuteness…i don’t want to express it because I don’t have any quality to stand near you in all aspects…but still you are the only girl in my life…i love you Ragini…
Ragini goes to kitchen and finds nikitha cooking…
Ragini (eagerly):Bhabhi…may i help you!!
“Ragini devi…what’s the matter tell me fast…i have other works too…”nikitha switch off the gas and was curious to know what she really wanted…
Ragini:not like that Bhabhi!!

Nikitha:not like that in the sense??what da laadoo…
“Woh…bhabhi…wo…woh…”Ragini stammers…
Nikitha:it seems like someone is calling me sister for name sake only…
“Bhabhi don’t say like that…you’re the one who showered me with the motherly love for which i was dying those years…please don’t say like that Bhabhi…”Ragini eyes turned wet…
Nikitha:laadoo…i was just kidding yaar…ok tell me what you wanna say…ok let me guess.. Hmm…got it…good thief right…

Ragini opened her mouth in ‘o’ shape…
“according to your reaction…i think my guess was right…ok let me surprise you with another guessing…”said niki…
Ragini:what!!
Nikitha:the guess…no no am damn sure…your good thief is this Laksh hai na laadoo(pointing towards laksh who came to drink water)…
Laksh chokes hearing nikitha’s words…Ragini rushed and rubbed his back…
Laksh was admiring her eyes while Ragini keeps on rubbing…
Nikitha huffs…
Both came back to reality…
“so you’re the good thief who saved our laadoo right…”nikitha said which makes laksh little nervous…

“Bhabhi!!chup karo…”Ragini glares…
Nikitha:chill na Ragu…i don’t want to talk indirectly…am asking you straightly… laksh do you like Ragini…

“what!!”raglak looked at eo with ‘noway’ expression…
Vikrant hears everything and rushed towards Arjun…
“paapa…paapa…”Vikrant runs towards Arjun and sat on his lap…
Arjun:haan Vicky…bolo…
Vikrant:mamma found out pinky bua’s good thief and he is none other than that uncle who came with you today na…haan…that laksh uncle only…
“what!!laksh…so he came here with intention only…i won’t leave you laksh…”Arjun was in hell anger…
Arjun moves to kitchen and sees the trio chatting…he placed the gun on laksh’s head…
“hands up”Arjun shouts…
Laksh(funnily):oh no…am shivering really…doctor sir you too joined Vicky and making fun of me…

“bhaiyya…please leave him…”Ragini comes in between them…
Laksh:what happened Ragini…is that a real one…
Ragini:am sorry laksh…i lied you…my brother is not a doctor…he is an IPS officer…
“what!!”laksh shocked…
Arjun clutches his collar and drags him with gun point…laksh sees Ragini with painful eyes…
“bhaiyya please leave him…”Ragini pleads Arjun…
Arjun pushed her away and tightens his grip towards laksh due to which his shirt gets torn near the collar…
Arjun was shocked and takes his hand away…
“Lakshya…”Arjun gets shocked and the very next moment Arjun hugged laksh…
Laksh simply blinks with his behaviour…

Laksh(in mind):it’s confirmed…this family is directly imported from mental hospital…
Ragini:bhaiyya!!what you’re saying…lakshman is our Lakshya…
“haan laadoo…he is our Lakshya only…”Arjun hugged him again…
Laksh:areyy what you’re saying…am not Lakshya and all am lakshman…Lakshman Kumar…
Ragini (pointing laksh ):tum chup kar…(to Arjun):bhaai tum bolo…how you’re saying that he is our Lakshya…

“our Lakshya”laksh gulped…
Arjun:how can’t I find my friend lakshya…don’t you remember about his birth mark above his left side chest…see this(pointing laksh)
Ragini was shocked and she hugged him the very next moment…Arjun too joined them…
Nikitha and Vikrant stands numb…

“what’s happening here…kaun Lakshya…which birth mark…”laksh shouts due to nervousness…
Arjun:we are sorry laksh…actually we didn’t explained anything to you na…you are our family friend dp uncle’s son…when you was 6 months dp uncle’s rivals kidnapped you and informed uncle that they killed you for taking revenge…but you’re alive…i identified you with your birth mark which ap aunty shows me in a photograph…
“what!!I have a family…is it real…”laksh was surprised…

Ragini:haan laksh..whatever bhaiyya said was 100% true…come I will show you the photograph…
Ragini takes Laksh with her and showed him the photograph…in which laksh sees the same birthmark in the same place…
He then remembered the orphanage head saying that he picked him from the dustbin when he was 6-7 month baby…
He cries bitterly and hugged Ragini…Ragini consoles him…
Laksh:MiniJalebi…where is my mom and dad…i want to see them..please take me to them na…
Ragini was controlling her tears but she can’t…she broke down on the floor…
Laksh:what happened Ragini…why are you crying…

“our parents died laksh…that rivalry played the game again…when I was 10 years old…I went to school excursion…bhaiyya was in hostel…maa,paapa,dp uncle,Annapurna aunty went to temple for Pooja organised by our family every year for you…that day the same rivals killed our family and made it as an accident…”Ragini cries and explained everything to him…
Laksh was in hell anger …Arjun controlled him…
Arjun:anger alone won’t help you laksh…I waited for almost 12 years…we need power to near them…

Laksh(shouts):you’re asking me to stay simply even after knowing the person who is responsible for our parent’s death…who separated me from them tell me Arjun…
Arjun:no I don’t ask you to do so…just a week stay calm…i almost neared them…but I need your help now…as a thief you know some ethics…am sorry laksh for mentioning you as a thief but you have to help me…
Laksh:don’t worry I will help you in all your ways…
Arjun thanked him and leaves…
Ragini hugged him…and says”I found my laksh…am so happy that my good thief is my laksh…”
Laksh:stay away Ragini…i don’t want to talk to you…you cheated me…how can you do that to me…
“laksh!!what did I do…”Ragini was about to cry…

But laksh laughs sarcastically…
Laksh:my sweetie Jalebi..no mini version…you believed it right…haha!!but you deserves a punishment…
Ragini makes a pout and turned away…
Laksh back hugs her and kissed her cheeks…
Laksh:now my Ragini Devi will talk with her good thief hai na…
Ragini blushes…
A big palace like building is shown…group of mens were tied and the rowdies were beating them badly…
A man who was sitting in his room and watching everything through the display screen enjoys his drink…
Someone excuses and entered his room and says “Gadodia have found you…”
“how did he…how can a common man reached this Jk…this gadodia and maheswari’s have tortured me in my past…so I killed them…but now his son…how could he found me…huhhh…”jk thrown the glass on the floor…

JK:Gadodia…do you think that it is easy to get me…no…i will send you to the same place where I send your family ….hahahaa!(evil laugh)

To be continued •••
Precap:
“I won’t leave him who is responsible for my state…i won’t leave him…”
Guess who said this dialogue…

So done with this chappy??comment your views friends…
Take care ?
~Darshu

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41 Comments
  1. Astra

    awesome darshu dear… and the pic is also awesome.

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much asthu ? the pic I got frm ur dreams ff dear?? and credit goes to you da…

  2. Lovely7

    Amazing

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear lovely ? glad that you liked it…

  3. Sreevijayan

    Interesting update dear….

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear shree..am hpy that u liked it…

  4. AWESOME

    1. Darshini

      Tq Arjuna ? glad that you liked it…

  5. Interesting episode and loved Raglak scenes. I think it’s Laksh’s dialogue

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much dear ammu? no dear ur guess have gone wrong this time da?..

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear Sindhu ? glad that you liked it …

  6. Mintu

    Awesome sis..!!! laksh Voda proposal super da..laksh ragu Voda family frnd..!!! ohh.. Athn arjun laksh ah ecy ah manichutan..!!! Pic supr da..maybe andha dialogues raglak dialogue ah irukalam..!!! But na ena guess panalum nenga ilainu soliduvangalae sisy..hehe..!!! Take care dear

    1. Darshini

      Tq da sissy ? hehe!!epdi laksh uh maathitene avanga frnd uh…
      Pic credit goes to Astra da…
      Aama un guess turned out wrng this time da…hehe!!
      Tc too da..nxt prt will be shocking…

  7. Follybraverl

    Awesome update too good

    1. Darshini

      Aww tq dear sweetie ? glad that you liked it…

  8. IQRA222

    darshu di it was lovely loved it
    mini jalebi and good thief are too good
    lucky fooled ragu haww
    and lakshman to laksh
    waiting for the next part

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much da iqu??? haha!!ya he fooled her..
      Poor Ragu believed him easily…
      Tc dear…

  9. Dharani

    Aww darshu it is awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much da dharu? glad that you liked it…

  10. Asra

    darshu dear it’s fabulous yar….laksh propose panidu hallucination prove panidan….omg raglak family frnd’ah…what a twist yar….inimey good theif and mini jelabe oda love ku arjun naduvula varamadan…Ipa Indha jk yaru….superbbb dear….loved it alot…raglak scenes r supper….eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear….

    1. Darshini

      Tq da asra…
      And yes sariyana fraud daan laksh maathitan paaren..
      Hehe!!
      Aama da arjun vara maatan…bt jk is d new villain here…
      Will post soon dear…tc da

  11. Amazing dear ?????

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear ashnoor? glad that you liked it…

  12. Mindblowing as usual

    1. Darshini

      Tq da gayu? glad that you liked it…

  13. Shrilatha

    Am late……but awesome one loved the pic…

    1. Darshini

      That’s ok da shri ? am so hpy that you liked it..

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear aleeza ? glad that you liked it…

  14. superb

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear sara? glad that you liked it…

  15. Its beautiful dear…loved it….I think its raginis dialogue?

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear akshitha? glad that you liked it…no dear it’s not Ragini’s dialogue…

  16. A.xx

    amazing xx

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much dear ? glad that you liked it..

  17. Yashu24

    Diiiiiiiii finally​ I completely read all the parts…!!!!!??????
    All were amazing….aww…my mini jalebiiiii??? sooo cute and lovely and​ lucky the good Thief ???..awww the heart robber..they were sooo cute…???
    Post next part soon…???
    Take care
    Keep smiling ???

    1. Darshini

      Aww that’s so sweet of you sissy…infact I waited for ur cmnt dear…sry for replying late dear…
      Am so hpy that u njyd jalebi-gd thief combo…
      I have posted the next part dear…whnevr u gets free time do read it da ????
      Tc dear??

      1. Yashu24

        I read the next part and commented too..???

  18. Amazing….

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear teito? glad that you liked it…

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