MUBARAK HO EID [Love me like you do ‘OS’]

Hey guys I know you all are angry on me for not updating my ff…yaar what to do…I was bzy with this os and also…Ramazan Eid..I know this is just bakwas…boring…sorry sorry for that…I thought not to post this os…but friends are eagerly waiting for it.. so I posted this for my friends….Allah bak bak…what is this pls stop your bakwas and start you’re os…
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[I wanted to be the first one to say Eid Mubark to my sweet TU family…. I hope you enjoy each and every moment of it. May God accept our fasts and prayers…. Happy Eid Mubark to everyone. May you all have a very happy and blessed Eid. Enjoy these amazing day and remember those who need our help. May this happy day be the brightest and the best Eid you have ever had….
Sada haste raho jaise haste hain phool,Duniya ki sary gham tumhy jay bhool,
Charo taraf phalao khushiyon ka geet,Eisi ummid ka sath Yaar tumhy… MUBARAK ho EID……..
Do you know the Meaning of EID???
I think it means “ENJOY in DUNIYA!!”
So, In your life all moments bring EID for you….
Wish You…love you all of my friends…. NITU,UFAQ, SAYOO, MAHI, LOVY,MARIA, LADDOO, NAZ,MARIYAM, ANGEL, KACHOO, SABY, RINU,PANCHI, VRU, BRIN, ZUHA, VISHU, SREE, LOVELY….Did I missed anyone…Now Guys your are became part of my life….Without seeing each other without knowing we just connected to each other’s hearts…strange nah…A big walla thanks to TU from giving such wonderful friends…I am not going to thank you guys…you’re responsibility to support your friend…so I don’t want to do formality manasilayo (malayam)….I mean did you understand hahaha…love you lots guys really you guys means a lot to me…ummmmmmhhhaaaa…]
I made you guys bor nah..sorry sorry….so here we go for my boring OS….
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AROUND 7:00 CLOCK…
IN AJMER…
MUHALLA…
Many peoples are gathered and discussion is going…Everyone early waiting and too excited …suddenly one man: haiiiiiii chand approached…. RAMDAN MUBARAK….
A huge smile spread on everyone face…In happiness they don’t know what to do…They hugs each other by wishing Ramazan Mubarak…All enters to their respective houses…to start preparation for Ramazan…
SCENE SHIFTS TO ONE BUNGALOW…
(A beautiful bungalow in traditional model…Each and everything is arranged traditionally…The bungalow was amazing.. its not only a bungalow it’s also an a sweet house… )
One women enters to house….
Women(her name is Aysha): Noora…where is you’re bahaijaan…
Noor(she is Noora a cute little sis…A good daughter..she is doing 10th): I don’t know Ammi…
Aysha:look whether he is in his room or not…
Noora(she was texting with her friends and wishing them Ramazan):jii Ammi…
Noora to herself: ohh god… what is this every work should myself…
By say that she claims staircase….

ROOM…
One boys is sitting by face to study table…In his hand there is one letter…
(Guys this our hero Aadil…A good looking charming boy and also handsome…guys I told about a letter which he is reading…first I will say about that letter…..that letter is very special for Aadil…from childhood itself he receive that letter..its an unknown letter…when he was in 5th he started to receive that letter…earlier he was very eager to know from where that letter comes and tried to find but he failed in that so he left that hope to find from where that letter comes….letter comes once in week he always wait for that letter…..by reading that letter makes him happy makes feel special…)[sorry sorry I made you guys bore nah on this special day]( okay now coming letter what is written on that letter…
Hey Aadil…I hope you’re fine…Aadil for last 15th years we’re connected to this letter…I hope now you’re considered me as you’re friend Right…
(A cute smile spreads over his face)
Aadil why are you smiling??…I am serious..(Aadil stops smiling)
Aadil like always one shayari for you…
Ek raat khuda ne mere DIL se pucha,
tu dosti me itna kyo khoya hai,
tab Dil bola Dosto ne hi di hai saari khushiyan,
varna pyar karke to Dil hamesha roya hai….
Aadil always be what you’re no need to change…Aadil Tum har taraf pyar se dekha na karo…
Allahaffiz
With lots of love…

UNKNOWN
He was about to hug that letter..
Noora knocks the door…knock- knock..
Noora:bhaiyjaan..
Aadil in irritated tone:Haa..
Noora:Are you there..
Aadil:No… I am not here…
Noora: okay fine…Abbu bhaiyjaan is not here…
Noora goes from there
Aadil:Noora….tum…
By saying that he opens the door…
Aadil:Nooraaaa..
He comes to hall…
Aysha:Aadi…
She feeds him sweet..
Ramadan mubarak…
Aadil in surprise tone:Ramazan Approached…
Aysha:Haa…
Aadil hugs his Ammi and kiss on her cheek:Ramazan mubarak Ammi…
Aysha caries his hair..
Noora in sad tone:Ammi not loves me…you always loves bhaiyjaan…you didn’t feed sweets to me…
Aadil: Ammi…where’s Abbu..
Aysha:he is not here…
Aadil:thank god…
(Aadil and his Abbu is big dushmans)
Aadil pulls Noora’s choti:Ramazan mubarak..chashmish..
Noora in anger:haaaa Ammi…
Aysha:Aadiii…
Feeds sweet to Noora…
Aadil: Ammi I am going out…
Aysha:come fast…
Aadil leaves from…
MUHALLA…
Aadil’s Friend:Aadil….
where you were…We were waiting for you last one hour…
Aadil:sorry guys….haiiiiiii Ramazan Mubarak yaar…
Aadil wishes Ramazan Mubarak to all of his friends….

Suddenly one fakirr comes to ask sadhaka..
Aadil takes his wallet and gives sadhaka to fakirr…
One coin from his pocket falls down and rolls on the room….
Aadil goes behind it…It stops middle of the road..He picks that coin…suddenly a small cold wind blows on him…to feel that wind he slowly close his eyes….A cute smile spreads over his face…The wind goes by hitting..He slowly opens his eyes…He sees one girl walking toward him…His heart beat were stop for a second by seeing her…. He was mesmerised to see her…
Her eyes were like the stars in the sky…The glow of her face was like mood…Her red lips was killing Aadil’s mind…Aadil was not able to believe his eyes.. her hair was hitting her face bcoz of wind…It was increasing her beauty…
Kehte hain…..Khuda ne iss jahaan mein….
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya…
har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara 
Maano mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta 
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kaise hum jaane, hume kya pata…
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta…
Tu humsafar hai
Phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yehi hai….Marna issi ke liye..

Plays….
(In Aadil’s mind: hai kudha who is she…any angle you sent from you…kudha please me strength to take my eyes off from her…Ya Allah why my heart beating very fast…)
Aadil slowly started to walk towards her…The road was empty…Only Aadil and that girl…
Aadil stops that girl by his hand…They were very close to each other…Aadil was try to again strength to wish her Ramazan Mubarak…suddenly Atmosphere had changed…The Atmosphere were planning to bless them by showering rain…
Suddenly lightning dam- dam thunder…fear of thunder that girl unknowingly shelters herself on Aadil’s Arm by closing her eyes tightly…He felt spl connection with her…Aadil want to hold her tightly…He was about to hug her…that girls frees herself and goes from there…Aadil turns towards her..
Aadil: haiiiiiii Ramazan Mubarak…
That girl turns and gives a sweet simile to Aadil…
That girl goes from there…Aadil keep hand on his chest..to himself: ohh god her smile….kills me…ya Allah I don’t know what you kept for me in my fate…but if there is a girl in Aadil’s life that is she…
(it was an love at first sight…This feeling new for Aadil…In first meet itself he gave his heart to her…He don’t know who is she….from where did she came??? Only he knows that he loves her)
Aadil leaves to his house back…At night he was not able sleep…when he close his eyes her smiling face was appearing in front of him…but Aadil had fixed in his heart if she is there only for him…

Days Passed…
Aadil had strong believe in two things one is khuda and another one in his love for her…
Aadil day and night he had only dhua was meet her once again…only his relaxation was that letter…Aadil always wait for her in same place were he mate her for first time …but he never saw her again….where ever he go his eyes was searching for her….but he was enjoying that feeling for first time he fill in love that for whom he never mate before he don’t from where did she came… (Really guys love is strange…It changes us a lot…that 4 letter means a lot…In love we ready to kill someone…We ready to die for someone…We ready to give our all life to someone)
The days are passed last day of Ramazan…
Aadil like always he was ready to go that place where they mate first…
He was about to go…from back Aadil’s Abbu( Abbas):Aadil…
Aadil in his mind:ohh god..
Abbas: where are you’re going…
Aadil:wo…
Abbas : tomorrow is eid…so I was planning for a eid party…
Aadil:mmm..
Abbas :what mmm…so you have to do all the arrangements for party…
Aadil:what…me???
Abbas:Haa…what is there to shock in that…
Aadil: what need to do party now…
Abbas in anger: I didn’t say you to ask questions…do what I side….
Aadil nods his head…
He goes back to his room…

NEXT MORNING….
In Aadil’s room…
Aadil was praying to god: hai khuda you teached me to love…
Dil Se Hus ki Khayal Na Jaye To Kya Karu..
Tu Hi Bata….I have only one kwahish Ek Nazar huse Dubara Dekh Lun…Kismat mein wo lamha Kab Ayega…
Don’t why tears drops from his eyes…
Suddenly Aysha knocks the door…
Aysha:Aadi…
Aadil wipes his tears:haa Ammi…
He opens the door…
Noora: EID MUBARAK….bhaijaan…
Aadil hugs her: EID MUBARAK..chashmish…
Aysha:EID MUBARAK Aadi…
She kiss his forehead…
Aadil hugs her tightly…
Aysha:what happened Aadi…my son is tied a lot bcoz of eid preparation..
Aadil: No Ammi…nothing like that I fine…
Aysha forwards one dress to Aadil…
Aadil:Ammi what is this…
Aysha:you’re Abbu sended a dress for you…to wear tonight
Aadil opens that box it was blue colour sharwani…
Aysha: How is it…
Aadil:nice..
Noora: only nice…bhaijaan tonight you have one surprise…
Aadil:surprise??…what surprise…
Noora:wo…
She was about to say something…
Aysha interferes: Noora…come with me I have lots of work in kitchen…come and help me…
They both leaves from there…

At night….
Aadil was not in this world…His are just searching for her…He was looking very handsome in sharwani…
Suddenly Abbas:Aadil come here…
Aadil moves near his Abbu…
Abbas:This is my son Aadil…
Aadil:EID MUBARAK….
Aysha:Allahaffiz…where is my future daughter in law….
Aadil in surprise looks at his Ammi…Aadil was just shocked…
( guys I know I made you guys bor sorry for that…guys don’t you want to about that girl who stolen Aadil’s heart…I will say from first about her )
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RAMADAN APPROACHED DAY…
IN COLLEGE…
That girl:Allah Mia…today Abbu going to kill me for being late…
From back one of her friend:Zerra…here is your notes….
(Her name is Zerra…A cute, sweet, bubble and mostly very beautiful…This our heroine who stolen Aadil’s heart)
Zerra:Thank you so much yaar…okay bye see you tomorrow…
Good
Her friend: Zerra…Ramazan Approached or what…
Zerra :Don’t know yaar..
Zerra leaves from there…
She was very hurry to reach at her house…
Zerra in her mind: Allah Mia…Please save me from my Abbu…
Suddenly she stops in Road by seeing Aadil…
Zerra In her mind:Allah Mia….Aadil…
She started walk…
Zerra to herself: ohh god he looking very handsome as usual…why he is starring at me like this…ohh this hair…why this hair disturbing me.. let me look my Aadil clearly…Ya Allah I that my heart it skipping out…
She was enjoying it….Each step towards him was very difficult for her….
Zaree:why this Aadil stopped Me…Please Aadil don’t look me like this…I’m dieing….
Suddenly lightning dam-dam thunder…
In scared of thunder…she hides herself on his Arm….
Zerra in her mind: Ya Allah I went to be in this arms forever…I love you Aadil.. what are you doing Zerra….
Suddenly she comes to scene….
She frees herself and goes from there…
She stops…

Zerra to herself:Aadil wished me Ramazan Mubarak…He wished me first…
A sweet smile spreads over her face…
She was completely happy…This day was most beautiful day in her life…
She reaches her house…
She enters her house and runs to kitchen..
Zerra:Ammii…
Zerra run and hugs her Ammii…
Zerra : Ramadan Mubarak Ammii…
Zerra started to dance…
Ammii(her name is Fathima): kya huha..any special your very happy today Haa…
Zerra blushs:wo…Haa special Ramadan…Ammii where is Abbu…
Fathima:he is in his room….
Zerra:did Abbu know that today I’m late…
Suddenly someone folds Zerra’s eyes from back….
Zerra howls:Diii….
Zerra turns towards her Di:Di when did you came…where is jiju…
Di(her name is Nuha):Afternoon…
Zerra hugs her :I missed you Di…
Nuha:missed you too…zarru your very happy Haa….why..
Zerra: why I can’t be happy…
by saying that she to her room…
She close the door….she throws her bag to her bed…and she goes near mirror…
Zerra by looking at mirror: wah Zerra today you huged your dream boy….For whom you loves more than yourself….ya Allah from 5rd standard I’m loving him…I’m writing letter for him…I still remember that day.. when I mate for first time…
(Ya guys this love story started from 5rd standard…Aadil was in 7th standard Zerra was in 5rd… One day Aadil got punishment for not doing his work…so his punishment was to stand in front Zerra’s class…..that day Zerra saw him for first time…she felt very special feeling but she was not able to understand what was it…she never dare to speak him…so started to write letter for him….first she thought to say her feelings to him but she was scared by thinking if he rejected her….so she decided no to tell him who is writing letter for him)
Zerra opens one book..where she did Aadil’s painting…slowly she runs her finger on his painting…she kiss that painting…
Zerra:I love you Aadil…
The day pass…
Last day of Ramazan…
like always Zerra return her home back…
She enters to her house…she was about to go her room…
Her Abbu:Zerra…
Zerra:Abbu…
Abbu(his name is Razak):Zerra this is your finallyear in college right..
Zerra:haa Abbu…
Razak: okay….Fathima…
Fathima: what happened Zerra’s Abbu..
Razak: A good marriage proposal came for Zaree…
A huge smile spreads on Fathima’s face: ya Allah…Really…
Razak:haa…so we have to go that house tomorrow on eid…
Zerra was just broken to pieces she can’t imagine her life out Aadil…from childhood itself she dreaming her life with Aadil…
She runs to her room…
She hardly close the door and started to cry bitterly…
Zerra: haiiii Khuda Kehte hain Ramadan mein Kuch bhi maangu tu app dede thi hai…I’m asking my love Aadil…. (with fill eyes) I need him…I can’t imagine my life without him… uski mohabbat ne hamein benaam kar diya,Har khushi se hame anjaankar hai….only I can see him…Please khuda meri duha qubool kar du…
Next day Eid….
In Aadil’s house…
Aysha:where is my further daughter in law…
Aadil was shocked.

..In surprise he looks at his Ammi…
Fathima:Zerra…come here…
Zerra comes front with sad face…
Noora pat’s Aadil’s shoulder…In low voice :Bhaijaan…How is she…
Aadil in sad just looks at her…
Aadil was not able to believe his eyes…
Aadil in his mind:No Aadil it’s not she…
Razak:Aadil…did you liked my daughter…
By hear Aadil’s name..Zerra surprisely looks at Aadil….
Zerra was shocked to know that Aadil is going to marry her….
Zerra in low voice: di please….am I dreaming….
Nuha:why…know you’re not dreaming…
Zerra in Loud:that means I’m not dreaming…
Everyone looks at Zerra…
In shy she downs her head…
Aadil smiles by seeing her childish…
Aysha: Aadi…did you you liked her…
Aadil smiles and nods his head…
Zerra smiles by seeing him…

AFTER 2 YEARS…
IN AADIL’S HOUSE…
In Aadil’s Room…
Zerra with tear eyes..by holding Aadil’s photo: I miss you Aadil…
She kiss his photo…
From back…
Aadil:ohh my wify is missing me haa…
Zerra wipes her tears:Aadil…
She runs and hugs him:Aadil I missed you so much…
Aadil hugs her back tightly:I missed you too…
Zerra:How was your meeting…
Aadil:awesome…We got contract…
Zerra:Masha Allah…I know you’ll doing…
Zerra breaks hug:Allah Mia…I forgot…EID MUBARAK my dear Hubby…I love you
Aadil cuppes her face: EID MUBARAK my jaan…I love you….

THE END
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(I know it’s boring…and my bakwas…on this special day I made you guys Bro sorry for that I’m really very sorry…love you all…
Once again EID MUBARAK..)

27 comments

  1. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    Diiii….I know Eid is tomorrow but I want to wish u first….so Eid Mubarak to u….may ur fast and prayers be accepted by Allah….Allah bless u! Wonderful one shot! Now I will get the next episode soon….hehe…mera bhi to motive hai?! Other than that, Eid Mubarak to all of u. May Allah bless u all! I’m not a Muslim, but I know how imp this month is for all Muslims. So, I wish u all Enjoy in Duniya?! Di…aapke nikaale huye matlab bhi na!

    • Affaa

      |Author

      Ladddoooooo…..thank you oppppsss no thanks na i forgot about it….yaa im will post my ff as soo as posible

  2. RinaSivaguru

    |Registered Member

    Eid Mubarak to u affaa…..this one shot superb…….. wow….. I reall love the concept….. both of them get their love……

  3. Nusz Khan

    |Registered Member

    Eid Mubarak Hun xx.

    Loved this story it’s beautiful.

    May Allah always keep you happy aha.

    Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

    ~Nusz xx

  4. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Afooooooo………MashaAllah….kya likha hai ….itni pyari story …..U stole my heart with soooooooooo cute love story ….
    For so many days I was waiting for it …nd kehte hai na ke sabr ka fhal meetha hota hai …lekin mere sabr ka fhal toh jalebi se bhi Zayada meetha nikla…..
    I’m my life I have never read so cute story ….thanks for giving us such a wonderful OS on eid …meri EId toh aaj hi celebrate hogayi….

    Eid Mubarak to u …..may u get all gems of the world…. Love u …

  5. Mahi13

    |Registered Member

    Api the os is good. Y u said its boring? It’s not boring. Ur os has made my Eid more special. May Allah accept all ur prayers, grant all ur wishes n gives u all the happiness of the world. Eid Mubarak api. May this Eid bring enormous happiness in ur life n be very special. Love u api n have a very happy Eid. Allahafiz api.

  6. Angel_pari

    |Registered Member

    diiii it was amazing…. Suberb fantastic it was awsome diii and who says it was boring i enjoyed every bit of it and loved it……… Thanku sooo much for such a lovely os di 🙂

  7. Angel_pari

    |Registered Member

    and wishing u a very happy eid di may this eid fill ur life with happiness stay blessed and happy love u load 🙂

    • Affaa

      |Author

      I can call you pari…Thank you dea…your comment made my eid very special….love you sooo and haa you can call me Api

  8. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Hey dear! Aap ko bhi Eid Mubarak! May this Eid fill your life with colors! Affaa Api this OS was beyond imagination?And Sorry from Kachoo’s side maybe she will not be able to comment as she got hurt yesterday, because of our silly younger brother! But Eid Mubarak from her side as well? AND DON’T U DARE SAY IT BORING!

    Love you sissy???

    And once again a Happy EID MUBARAK?

    -Zuha Fatima

    • Affaa

      |Author

      Zuha thank you soo much you called me Api..love you baby…yaar I need your flavour please can you help…wo kya hai nah…you’re epic link is not getting….not only yours kachoo’s also can you please send me the link please..haa what happened to kachoo…its okay she can’t do comment…how is she now…say her I love her sooo much and you toooo

  9. angel (ami)

    EiD Mubarak all telly readers. ..I wish all of I hav a wonderful EiD….
    And Affa ur OS is rly NYC..log it …tank u dear ..

  10. ufaq

    Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Api what u wrote?????
    Amazing awesome super she upar its a super duper hit one shot I loved it amazinggggggggggggg very good keep it up
    Proud to b ur sister
    Eid Mubarak Api
    May Allah fulfil ur that wish for whom u have prayed ur whole life
    God bless u Api
    Basmana Api rocks
    Basmana Api rocks
    Api choti Behan ki eidi kahan h??????
    Love u Api enjoy ur eid
    Naae naaee kapron ki b mubarak bad
    Take care
    Love u lots

  11. Affaa

    |Author

    No chull bulli…I mean yes.
    Yesterday was eid nah….I didn’t replied you bcoz I thought for eid is today so thought not to disturb you….but now angle told me yesterday was eid for you….sorry baby for late reply…haaa how was your eid…For north today is eid….I miss you…and love you too

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