Mr. Maheswari and Miss. Gadodia – Part 2 – O. M. G

Friends is my FF boring… because I got almost 70 Comments for the introduction part and now its only 13…If its boring just tell me, I will stop it soon

And thanks to Lovely, Swasan fan, sara, sujatha,alia,s priya, kittu, kriya,nikki, rakhi, rapunzel,Zoya, Anaita, Dhara for supporting thri=oughmy comments and my silent readers.
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What is this ??? It’s a palace ragu… Swara exclaimed while entering into the mansion. I pinched her when I saw I girl noticing us and giving us whatever looks.
Ouch ragu… swara exclaimed…

The girl came to us having a sarcastic smile on her face…she was wearing a backless short dress, high heels. Our mom introduced us. Oh no what was the need to do that and that last sentence “my beautiful and hot girls”. Yeah that I see saying this she scanned us top to bottom and told I am Kavitha.. Sanskar Maheswari ki Friend.
Oh no may be Sanskar will be MY Mr. Handsome. I blushed a little when that thought came into my head.
Saying this she left to her friends. She is beautiful right di…Meera asked…..I and Swara just smiled each other..
They were talking with Roli and other frinds. Suddenly lights go off. Here comes the hosts with their beloved friends. Ragini why are you sweating. Swara asked without giving any attention to the hosts. Nothing ragini replied.
Lights come in with music and they started to dance
Ragini (in mind): oh God he is here. Ok take a deep breath ragu..relax
After dance light comes in. Every one started to dance with the themMusic.. Ragini and Swara was standing there only when Mr. Maheswari comes to them.
He walk past ahead of Ragu and stand behind swara and told Hey beautiful Iam Laksh Maheswari, naam tho aap suna hi hoga.
Ragini: (in mind)Oh God he will die.
Swara: to laksh— No Who are you??? And modiji is our prime minister right not any laksh maheswari
LAksh: Hey I like your answer.your good name please
Ragini : Swara
Laksh: Not yours
Ragini: that is what Iam saying she is Swara, and iam her sister ragini
Laksh: I didn’t ask that, (to swara) – Would you like to dance with me.
Ragini : No, she is not interested
Laksh : hey Miss, Iam talking to your sister, not to you. Please shut up and let miss beautiful speak.
Swara: Don’t speak to her like that. Ok. And I am not coming for a dance and with you never.RAgini smiles by looking at Lakshs puppy face.
Laksh: So. Can I dance with your sister atleast… and don’t say no
SWara : Take her permission first.
Laksh: Miss gadodia, will you like to dance with this charming Lucky.
Ragini: Oh…..K, but only one round.
When they were walking towards the dance floor,
Lucky: Hey Miss. Gadodia, Your sister don’t like to dance right
Ragini: not dance, she doesn’t like parties at all.
Lucky: then one minute. Hey bro Lucky called someone
That person: Ha lucky bol
Lucky: Sanskar bhai she is Miss Gadodia, Ragini. I am going to dance with her. Her sister is standing over there. Please give her some good company. Ok. She is getting saying this lucky move towards the dance floor with a smirk.
Lucky: (by dancing) u know miss your sister is gonna pay for rejecting ma offer.
Ragini: you don’t know Mr. my sister is tigress
Lucky : then my Bro is tiger…grrrrrrrrrr. He smiled. And said lets dance

Raginis POV
We were dancing. My heart were beating fast whenever he pulled me closer. I tried my best to not blush. Oh thank you babaji. I just wanted to meet him once and you give me an opportunity to dance with him. I just looked around. Every one was jealous seeing me dancing with him. And I saw my mother smiling by looking at me. And when my eyes met his eyes, every thing stopped around me. Only my heart beat. His intense eyes, his touch every feeling was new for me. I just wanted to stop the time their only. What is it?

She was beautiful. And her eyes OMG. When I see her talking with friends and Swara, I wantedto talk to her. What if she say no.then I worked my head and went to Swara and asked for dance and look now. I won. Iam dancing with her. She only permitted for a round, andit is almost the end of fourth round. I smiled at myself and the beautiful girl dancing with me.

Oh so your are thinking you are the best dancer presented here…Swara smirked while sayinh this. Miss. Gadodia don’t challenge me. Sanskar was almost yelling at her. She give a sarcastic smile to this sentence and said lets see Mr. Maheswari.

Guys how is it? I know some of you are miffed with me because of pairs. Please Iam really Sorry for that. Please understand me and support me, please and suggest your comments
Bye Guys Good night.


Credit to: Jane


  1. Sonia

    Epic and laksh plan was superb, hahahha i like men with brains
    hahhaa apart jokes. I love your story line. Hope to read next part today only.

  2. Jwala

    hey don’t worry about comments.. there are many readers who are very lazy to comment.. I’m reading almost all swasan ff. but comment on 1 or 2.. it is very difficult to comment on every ff here. it not means it is bore.. your ff is good. and comments may increase or decrease . don’t take it seriously. your ff is very good.. may 100 people read it and 20 people comment. but many are reading your ff. so be happy..

  3. Dharsha

    Yaar actually my name is Dharsha not SwaSan fan…… I just thought to ask ur name coz u said this ff is based on the theme PRIDE And PREJUDICE which is written by JANE AUSTEN…So no problem..
    I am not going to ask ur name…..By the way, coming to today’s part it was just awesome and amazing…..loved it…..update next part fastly……waiting…….and About the pairs I think its SWASAN…..if it is am very happieeeee if it is not an not sad….waiting eagerly for next

  4. Rhea

    “ IF SOMEONE REALLY WANTS TO BE A PART OF YOUR LIFE, THEY WILL SERIOUSLY MAKE AN EFFORT TO BE IN IT” beautiful nd true lines indeed!!!!i totally luv ur ff…..btw im a silent reader…???

  5. tia

    the comments decreased because of pair u should see ur first episode more comments was by ragsan fans u said voting then u said u choosed the pair by ur self wat is this if u want see ur first episode

  6. Jwala

    hey tia.. you are loving a non existing sibling couple ok. . but here people can make many comments by using different mail id’s . so don’t say that rag…san fans are more. because such a couple not existed. even swalak existed . but your fav is not anywhere existed. and there are many swasan fans that is why they got best jodi award. here also so many swasan ff got many comments. 4 or 5 non existing jodi fans making comment from different mail id’s. if you want to see swasan fans come to IF or insta or twitter

    • Sweety

      I think u had a very good experience in doing comments like that…by changing name&ID…
      SWASAN best Jodi…bullshit….in GPA we also voted swasan only bcoz we love other swaragini couple existed there…in helpness we vote for them…DON’T EVEN DARE TO CALL RAGSAN. AS NON EXISTING sibiling…couple….

      Cv always show parshiyality towards…swara…they never gave preference go ragini….they also make swara as mahan…..if in that they should make only swara….so be in yur limit

  7. Sweety

    Bcoz u doesn’t care the voting of the audience…u r getting less comment…I hate u more….u made us fun….u cheated us ..I will never read u r ff…or even look into it….I will say to my frnds also not to read….I Really hates the person u cheat others core heart…if u have some pairing in u r mind…then u should not ask u….u should have mentioned before only swasan…we will even not look into it anymore…. I HATE U SO MUCH

  8. Nigam

    Yes,I agree with sweety.u cheated us I am withdrawing my view to watch u r ff.GOODBYE to u r ff

  9. faima

    Hey…who said there s no ragsan fan…Am also Rafsanjani fan…even ma family members…first thought that in serial sanky nd rags couple…but it changed…nd sme of r not commenting In fb…I think sme r flng joules..if ragsan fan comments then its fake…what a mentality…Am not commenting.but reading jwala s commenting…I cannot stop my self….even swara sanky also non existing couple…Am not saying to change pair…because it’s writter a wish…ragsan hve good chemistry between them..

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