Mr.Khadoos and Ms.Kareli destined together by SAMMIE (PART-15)

Hey guys…I M VERY UPSET FROM U ALL …FROM PAST 2-3 CHAPPY I NOTICED THAT U ALL R NOT AT ALL RESPODING TO MY FF AT FIRST I USED TO GET ABOVE 50-60 LIKES BUT NOW A DAYS I GET LIKE MAYBE ABOVE 40…..

GUYS I UNDERSTAND U DONT WANT SANCHI AND RISHAB’S MARRIAGE BUT GUYS WITHOUTVTWIST AND TURNS A STORY IS NOT SO INTERESTING ..PLSS TRY TO UNDERSTAND BUT STILL IF U DONT WANT TO READ AND PLSSS TELL I WONT WRITE ANYMORE ..I WOULD JUST DISCONTINUE IT…OR WILL JUST SWIPE THE GROOM ..THAT IS KABIR WILL SIT INSTEAD OF RISHAB IN MARRIAGE AND WILL SIMPLY FINISH THE STORY……

PLS TELL ME IN COMMENT SECTION…

 

SO PREVIOUSLY WE READ…..

Suni..Jaya..and Sunny came to India for Sanchi ‘s marriage…they visited SDCH and Sanchi was ovrwhelmed and hugged them…The hospital staffs came to know that Sanchi is Sunil’s daughter..Kabir was very upset……

TODAY’S PART……

Sanchi ..Isha…Pragya..Rishab..went to Malhotra Mansion…for dinner party…

They all came in the same car and while coming Sanchi was thinking about Kabir….and same was happening with Kabir who still in the hospital …pacing right to left thinking about his feelings which r making him so restless

Kabir:Oh good what should i do?? I dont’t whats happening to me….let me just check my mob ….atleast will be better than going home and facing emotional disorder …

He took his mob out and was just scrolling through the updates…..but suddenly his eyes went to pic…..and he was shocked….

Kabir:Oh My God!!! No it can’t happen…but this pic….i have to go home and confirm everything …….

After this he went home as soon as possible….

On the other hand Sanchi and gang had already reached Malhotra Mansion…

Kabir came inside and was immideatly hugged by Gayatri(Sorry guys i think in past one or two epi i wrote Savitri instead of Gayatri by mistake…but Kabir’mom is Gayatri so dont be confused)

Gayatri:I m soo soo soo happy for u ….

Kabir:Lekin kyun??

Gayatri:Kyun matlab??Veer-Ria-Dev ne tumhe bataya nahi??   (Gayatri turned to see Veer-Ria-Dev …who were looking very upset)

Kabir: Kya nahi bataya??

Jaya :Yahi ki tumahara rishta pakka ho gaya hai…SAMAIRA KHURANA ke saath…

And it was the moment which almost made him paralysed for a moment…he was just stunned right there!!! HE was not able tpo move from there as if his foot was glued there…..

Jaya came and made him eat LADOOS …u know jale par namak chirakna…

Kabir:Main kapre badal ke aata hun…

After saying this he directly went to his room …He just sat on the bed ….He was not at all anble to understand what just happened …

Kabir:No it can’t happen …i can’t marry her….i dont want to marry some else…wait a minute Kabir some else matlab?? Agar woh nahi toh kaun??

***SANCHI***

Echoed a voice…

He lifted his head up which was facing the ground disappointed by his life to see who the person who spoke his heart out…

And yeah that was Veer …standing there on the doorstep of Kabir’s room accompanied by Dev and Ria…

They came inside ….

Veer:Yes bhai ..Sanchi is the only one made for u..

Kabir:But its too late

Veer:Too late?? That means if the marriage was not fixed u would have married Sanchi??

Kabir:Veer pls go from here

Ria:No bhai ..Veer is right …and what late? Who said its late?

Dev:Yes bhai its not at all late…the marriage has just been fixed thats it ….and also u wont do marriage without ur happiness.when Badi Maa will ask u about the marriage u just say that u dont want to do!!

Ria:Yes bhai we have seen ur love and care towards Sanchi..and we know that u Both r gonna make best couple!!!

Kabir:But what about sanchi’s marriage ?? I will cancel my marriage but why would Sanchi cancel…she loves Rishab not me…

Veer:But we saw her love towards u ..

Kabir just laughed …

Veer: bhai why r u laughing…did u get mad…

Kabir:Se na when i had chance i didn’t realised my love and now when its Like i have no chance at that time i realised this…

Just than Gayatri called them for dinner …Ria-Veer -Dev. Left the room nd went downststairs giving him time to take his decision..

After that Kabir thought a lot and decided to tell everyone that he dont want to marry..and went to take a shower..after changing into casuals he went downstairs …..

They all were having dinner …..but while serving food DAAL fell on Sanchi’s dress…

Gayatri:Sorry sorry beta galti se gir gaya..

Sanchi:No aunty its ok..

Gayatri:Kabir take her to washroom …..Sanchi go and clean ur dress

Sanchi nodded and went with Kabir in his washroom ..

Kabir:There clean it

pointing at  his washroom

Sanchi went inside but the tap was so tight that she was not able to open it so she called Kabir for help..Kabir went to help her…but while helping Sanchi..the shower got on mistakely ….Both got wet……sanchi was about to go but unconciously….he held Sanchi by her waist pulled her close to him and stood under the shower staring at her eyes….both were looking at each others eyes not understanding what was happening to him…Kabir eventually started moving close towards Sanchi and even Sanchi she too closed her eyes in anticipation ….

GOD KNOWS WHAT SUDDENLY CAME UPTO THEM BUT THEY JUST LOST IT…

The gap between them was about to close but Veer came and shouted from outside the room…..

Veer:Bhai…mom is calling u …and thats when they realised their position and felt very embarassed…Sanchi quickly went from there as soon as possible..avoiding the moment…

While Kabir just stood there under the shower…reliving the moment he just had a few minutes ago…..

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Precape:Shocking revelation maybe….

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Guys plsss give ur views in the comment box its an humble request…

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  1. Pls not rishab kabir

  2. RuCh23

    Well ??? if you want to show Sanchi and Rishab’s marriage, then I’d say go for it. Even I made Kabir marry Riya in my previous ff unwritten love of destiny. No one like what I did and I got many hate comments + dislikes. Some even stopped reading it ???. But in the end, that story gained love from many. So I’m just trying to say… in order to turn our ideas in to words and make a beautiful story, we have to take some risks for the sake of that story. I for one, would read this story till end. Coz I liked how you wrote it this far and I know you’ll do good till this end. Btw, nice epi today!! Love you ???

    1. 23SAMAIRA0906

      Thanq and as u say…I TRUST U

  3. Hey sammie don’t be upset, its your story nd your way of thinking so as a writer it’s up to you that what you want to write, so don’t worry dear ,we all definitely love to read your stories. Take care.

    1. 23SAMAIRA0906

      Thanq for ur words

  4. As usual I have to say there are so talented writers just guys pls do write countinusly I loved the sequel of all the episodes….

  5. Hey it just that in my account there no likes or dislikes button same thing could happen with many readers to…so don’t change the story just keep going as you want ….and ep was amazing post soon …

    1. 23SAMAIRA0906

      Thanks…and is it like ….If any of u dont get the likevor dislike button then wait for a minute it will appear itself

  6. Anee

    Hayyyy!!!!!!! Sammie Why are getting upset dear…. No need to be upset… and yes we understand the beautiful story is pass from many hurdles many twist and turns…. don’t worry about likes and dislikes… once I wrote about Likes and Dislikes and guess what our lovely readers motivated me a lot even they threat me that don’t you dare to think about leave this forum… and see I’m still here so the same I want to tell you Girl do your work and in upcoming episodes you will definitely get more likes and love from readers…. and this epi was just awesome good going….and post next part soonnn… Luv u little princess. bye tc…

    1. 23SAMAIRA0906

      Thanq so much di love too

  7. Hey Samaira the ff is wonderful please don’t discontinue it
    LOVE STORY mein twist and turns hote hain and I know that in the saachi and kabir are going to make a wonderful loving pair
    The episode was amazing
    Don’t be sad
    Take care
    Loads of luv

    1. 23SAMAIRA0906

      ThAnq and dont worry i wont discontinue

  8. Nice episode dear n don’t discontinue ff OK I always read urs n all writers fan fictions. So plz continue n post next part sooooooon . Love u TV ??

    1. 23SAMAIRA0906

      Thank u so much

  9. Poori

    Hey Sammie it is my fav FF don’t discontinue it whatever you write we are here to support you so don’t feel bad pls continue and today’s episode was superb?tc

    1. 23SAMAIRA0906

      Thanq So much for ur words of appreciation

  10. AAYU

    Hey Sammie
    First of all so sorry for not commenting on your earlier posts
    I was busy with my exams and admission procedures
    My hearty appologies
    Please accept it.
    Next I want to say that don’t give a damn to the no. of likes or dislikes you get
    You write what you want to write because it is your story and only you have the right to decide the story line of it. Of course you can ask for suggestions but then the ultimate power lies in your hands
    Don’t worry there are many people who read but do not comment or do not hit the like button. The main point is that they read which is a great thing so just don’t worry
    I promise to read your ff till the end because I really appreciate your writing and I am excited to read the upcoming twists.
    Post soon
    Take care
    Lots of Love

    1. 23SAMAIRA0906

      Thanq and no problem i can understand ..even i dont comment on any ff so i understand …but the thing is of response in the ff …so if people dont have time to comment they should atleast hit the like or dislike button thats what i meant..but leave it…btw pls post ur ff Mafia Devil …i m waiting for it…

  11. Anu88

    This episode is also amazing and superb yaar…………..and kanchi scene is really mind blowing and pura jhakas bala hae

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