Mohe Rang Do Laal…… IKRS Tenth Shot

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MOHE RANG DO LAAL… IKRS 10th SHOT
Hello guys….so back with a new episode of MRDL ….hope you will like it….

The episode starts with Viplav and Dhaani coming back to home…. Dhaani is looking at Viplav who is driving and is angry on Phoolchand….On anger…he bangs the sterring wheel… Dhaani looks on… Viplav then looks at Dhaani and then says sorry… Dhaani weeps… and Viplav says pata hai Dhaani…. Seeing you I felt like you will not bear the injustice happening with you…. But today you proved that I was wrong.. you could have fought back with that brainless pandit.. but even without your fault you kept on listening to his shitty talks… you could have answered him back… when will you change Dhaani… you are all the same… Dhaani looks on and says same… Viplav realizes what he said and quickly says… maaji told me… you kept quiet whenever these kinds of situation occur… you know that you are not wrong then why don’t you get up and fight back….. you know you are right… you have that power within you…and Dhaani the day you start adoring your power and use it to give it back… trust me you will feel so happy…. Jab koi galti nahi ki…toh tum kisike attyachaar kyoon sahogi… tell me do you agree… Dhaani looks at Viplav with tears in her eyes…Viplav thinks kaash …I had never gone…toh ye sab nahi hota…..

Dhaani then says Viplav… I am thankful to you for what you did… Viplav smiles weakly and says that’s okay… par next time koi aisi baat kare jo tumhare self respect ke against hai toh fight back….har baar mein nahi rahunga… Dhaani asks kya… tum kaha jaaoge…. Viplav looks at her and says Dhaani…humesha toh I can’t live here.. I have to go one day… tab you have to be strong enough to let yourself fight back with those people who talk against you….. Dhaani looks on and says theek hai theek hai… Jo tu mera humdard hai….suhana har dard hai plays….. They reach home……Dhaani sees wound in Viplav’s palm on coming down of the jeep.. She asks what is that?? Viplav asks what?? Dhaani takes his hands on her hand and shows this…. She continues dusro ko lecture desakte hai…. Baatein suna sakte ho…lekin khud ka dhyaan nahi rakhsakte… Viplav smiles and thinks …100% typical Dhaani… khud jitni bhi takleef mein ho..dusron ka chota sa dard bhi ise pareshan karta hai….. She takes Viplav with her…goes to bring first aid kit after making Viplav sit…Viplav keeps looking at Dhaani with that killer smile….

Dhaani brings first aid… Viplav is still smiling…Dheere dheere instrumental plays…Dhaani sees him and asks kyoon has rahe ho…Viplav says aise hi… Dhaani looks at him and continues…. Lecture desakte ho… par apni chot ke baaremein bol nahi sakte… Viplav says theek hai Dhaani… Dhaani says kya theek hai… you can fight with entire world… chot bhi khasakte ho..hero bansakte ho…par bol nahi sakte chot hai… Viplav says ab hogaya Dhaani…Dhaani looks at him and says Shssssshhh.. ekdum chup…what was the need to fight…sabke saamne boldiya humari Dhaani….do you know this thing’s meaning…jaante ho uss Foolchand ko… woh chup nahi baithega..aaj photo khichi…misinterpret kiya…god knows kalko kya karega… Viplav asks what will he do?? And gets up… Dhaani asks him to sit down… she says pata tha..daadagiri chaalu hojaayega…

I knew it…if a dog barks at you…will you bark back or continue doing your work… bolo…Viplav tries saying woh..Dhaani looks at him…and says not a single word…and finishes aiding Viplav’s injured hand…She then stands up and says take care…and there is no need to do something like this from now on…. Viplav listens to her like a kid…and says okay… Badi Amma also comes there listening Dhaani lecturing Viplav…BA asks kya horaha hai… Dhaani looks at Badi Amma… and says you ask your Viplav beta….Dhaani rushes to her room.. BA looks at Viplav who tells her everything… BA says Dhaani is trying to hide her feelings by shouting on you… she is hurt that she could not do on her own.. She is like this… she is tolerating this since years…. Some are so good…and some are so bad that they thing being widow is a sin…and don’t leave a single chance to torture us… Viplav gets angry… BA asks him not to think much now.. He should rest….Viplav complies…

Dhaani is seen in her room… She looks at herself in the mirror and reminisces the whole moment when Viplav rescued her…. Then she opens the drawer and takes out the best friend locket… She thinks about her buddy Viplav….She thinks…ek hi naam…same habits….She reminisces Viplav calling her shikayati pudia…and kid Viplav calling her with that name… She reminisces each and every moment Viplav controlled himself from spilling the beans… She reminisces their dance….and the moments she got lost in Viplav… and says nahi… this cannot happen… and above all… Viplav does not know I live here… arrey he is totally unaware about me… there are thousands of Viplav in this world… But her heart gets restless…. She begans to think about the moment he came to rescue her and she finally goes to sleep….in between ISHQ ISHQ RANG RANG…ISHQ KA RANG SAFED plays…

Its morning…. Viplav is seen sleeping….Dhaani comes to knock at the door…. Viplav opens the door and wishes her good morning… Dhaani smiles and asks if his hand is better now.. Viplav looks at his hand..and realizes his band aid got loose and he threw it…. Dhaani looks at it and looks back to Viplav… Viplav bites his tongue… Dhaani asks him to go and sit in bed while she is bringing aid kit… He goes….Dhaani brings kit and sits down for his aid… She says ab… Viplav says bas bas …enough…bohot hogaya..

Dhaani realizes she lectured him a lot… She says woh…sorry… Viplav looks on and smiles… BA calls Viplav and he goes after Dhaani finishes doing his aid… Dhaani stands up to go to keep that kit when she notices a locket near Viplav’s pillow… She takes it out and looks in shock…. She goes to the flashbacks… and the moments she shared with Viplav till now… In between fast track of IKRS… remember the tune during stone pelting scene…that was playing in the background….. she is shocked…she then drops it saying that means Viplav…….Then she sees Viplav’s phone flashing and a message on it that read… I AM GLAD THAT YOU AND DHAANI ARE TOGETHER… WAITING FOR THE DAY JAB TUM DONO KI SHAADI HOGI…. (the message from Viplav’s dad) She runs from there and goes to her room…She locks the door…. And cries sitting on the floor….Koi na dekhe mere aansu…chup chup ke mein rooun…jeewan se hai…har rang chhota phir mein kaise bolu…. Ishq ka rang plays…She cries…

On the other hand… Viplav asks BA if he should call Dhaani..breakfast is getting cold..He goes to call Dhaani but sees the door locked… He calls Dhaani casually… He asks her to come down…Dhaani wipes her tears… She stands up …. She looks herself at the mirror and cries vigorously… Viplav hears it and gets shocked…he bangs the door… Dhaani throws away things… and cries…. She asks Viplav to stay away….stay away Viplav Tripathi….. stay away she says…. Viplav gets shocked… He asks Dhaani to open the door once…then he will explain her… Dhaani asks him to go away….. Viplav gets restless and breaks open the door… BA comes running and stops in the doorstep..She thinks she should leave and goes … Dhaani turns and Viplav gets shocked seeing her… Viplav asks her to listen to him once… Dhaani looks at him…and says You know… you are a big cheat Viplav Tripathi…. You are a liar… She then asks him to go away….

Viplav then asks her to give him one chance to explain… Dhaani looks at him and says You know what… I don’t need your sympathy…. And keep your feelings to yourself… Viplav holds her hands and asks her to listen… Dhaani shoves his hands away..and asks why did you come back?? Why??and Marriage?? Do you know what you are thinking…. Do you really know?? I regarded you as my friend…and you brought this day in my life… you cheated… you are a liar Viplav… Viplav …tired of asking her to let him explain…holds her hands…and nudges her asking her to shut up….He says…tumse pyaar karna tumhe dhoka dena hai…toh haan…hun mein cheater… tumhe apne dil mein rakhna cheating hai….toh haan…hun mein cheater…. (Loving you is a cheat…then yes I am a cheater…. Keeping you in my heart with love is cheat…then yes I am a cheater)…Dhaani looks at him and stays mum with tears in her eyes….Viplav takes her to his room holding her hand….He sees the locket fallen on the floor and goes to pick it up…. He shows it to Dhaani and says.. you know I used to carry this with me everywhere I go… one day dad said I have to come Banaras for work…

I agreed.. I came with this locket ahnd a plan that I would visit Mathura and meet you…. I reached there….but came to know about the hardships you had to go through… He says everyone in Mathura thought you were gone in that fire…but I knew you were there.. you cannot go leaving your Viplav… Dhaani looks at him…. Viplav says then I met you without any knowledge that you are my Dhaani… They reminisce their first meeting…. The tune that played in real IKRS…where Viplav Dhaani bend to collect the broken bangles plays in the background…. Viplav then says….that day when I came to give your bag… I came to know about you…. That was the time I realized I am love with you since long….

I wanted to tell you about myself but one day you told me …you don’t want Viplav to know your truth or meet you ever… I was heartbroken…but I was happy because you were with me…toh yeh meri identity matter nahi karti…. If after all this…you think… I cheated you….toh fine…. Yes I cheated you…. I cheated you because I love you…and trust me Dhaani….this is not sympathy… but my love for you… that will never die till I am alive… Dhaani looks at him…. IKRS SAD version plays….Dhaani says please…jaao yaahan se tum… please Viplav…. She cries… and falls on the floor… Dhaani asks him to go away… as she does not want him to spoil his life marrying a widow… Viplav says tum widhwaa nahi ho Dhaani…. Dhaani asks him to go away… please… Viplav asks her not to conceal her feelings… Dhaani gets up and says …she has no feelings for him… no feelings at all…. She cries and runs to her room… BA comes to her and asks her to think about her decision…. Dhaani asks her to leave her alone for a bit…

Viplav is heartbroken in his room…. PLEASE GO AWAY is echoing in his mind and he says how to make you confess that you love me Dhaani… how to do it?? Aakhir apne Viplav ke liye tumhara pyaar kab tak chupaogi….. The screen freezes on faces of determined Viplav…. And sad si Dhaani..shown in split screen….

PRECAP: MISSION… MAKING DHAANI ADMIT SHE LOVES VIPLAV….starts

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So guys…. Please do drop your comments… I want to know if you liked it or not….
Will be back soon…love you all 

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6 Comments
  1. how sweet…viplav says loving u is a cheat then yes i am a cheater…..ohhh…what a pyaarasaa dialogue yaar sujjie…
    the way viplav gives support to dhaani is marvolous…and dhaani bhi viplav ko lecture dhethe vakth i imagined very clearly what the viplavs expression is….
    Atlast dhaani ko patha chalgayaa ki viplav hi viplav tripati hu…i am so happy…
    i am very curious about precap yaar…
    plz come soon..
    bye…
    take care…
    keep smiling… 🙂 🙂

    1. Sujie

      Thank you so much Lalitha…for your wonderful comment 🙂
      That dialogue came in my mind while writing …actually it was unplanned… the whole episode was a bit unplanned actually…
      glad that you liked the scenes…
      I will try to post the episode soon… will try
      you too take care dear…. keep the love coming….
      lots of love….bye bye

  2. Maha_Aijaz

    Hey Sujie!
    Extremely sorry for being late actually my internet isn’t working properly that’s why I’m bit inactive. Hopefully today an operator will come and check the default then only I’ll be in peace (poore ghar ko sar par jo utha rakha hai😂😂)
    Coming to the episode, umdaaaah 😍😍 seriously I’m getting short of words yaar now I’ve to search some more, new words for you like you’re​ giving us perfect episode one after another.
    From the starting scene you’ve glued me, when he slapped the steering in anger then the way he was changing her mentality, asking her to fight back instead of staying silent.. just mind blowing 😍😍
    Dhaani doing her first aid while giving a cute lecture and the way viplav was showing a smile, hayeeee maar daala😍😍
    Then their comes the most exciting scene finally dhaani came to know about viplav’s identity Allah that part caught me the way you portrayed it like he broke the door then tried to explain but when she wasn’t ready to listen, he holds her hand and then his fantastic dialogue uffffhhhhh❤❤ us k dialogue na tou mera dil he jeet liya yaar itna koi khubsoorat dialogue and the credit goes to you but not the whole credit because Viplav (Mishal) ko bhe credit jaata hai as listening these words from him is beyond something definable. So I tou loved it and you nailed it for sure.
    Now excited for the precap yaar how viplav will make her realize her love for him. Ikrs ke tarah idhar bhe dhoom mache ge❤❤ Arey haan how can I forget those amazing tunes plus the song maza agaya bus. You know when I was reading your story my situation was like this💃💃💃 sachi mai because I literally starts jumping in excitement so… Aur pata hai I was listening sun yaara sun yaara tere ishq ka chowla paya hayeee kia sahi time par sun rahe thi haaiinaa 😍😍 yeh song, ViDha, tumhare story perfect combo ❤❤
    And lastly my heartiest request please aise intense beautiful dialogues likhte rehna and yes please at least one more time write a scene in which viplav may rescue dhaani, I know you’ve already​ done it and then it’s your story so I’m no one to ask you to add something but still it’s just my request because you’re​ too good in writing these kind of scenes even I’m not a lot good so meri yeh request hai. Okay ❤❤
    Lots of love ❤❤
    Take care 😘😘
    Ummmmaaaah 😘

    1. Sujie

      Hi dear…. that’s okay meri jaan… no need to apologize…. wish yeh internet ki problem hat jaye….
      that’s a huge compliment from you dear…. glad that you loved the episode…. waise itni tarrif matt karo…. mein nervousiya jaaongi… if you know what i mean….I am happy that I could make you happy with those scenes… thank you
      woh dialogue na…. cheat wala…likhte likhte likhdiya…
      sooo happy that you loved it… that’s one of my own favorite dialogues….
      haan…chalega …Viplav urff meri fiction ke hero…dil ke raaja… Mishal ko 100 % credit dogi…toh bhi koi gham nahi….kyunki if Mishal na hota…toh Viplav na hota… aur ultimately yeh fanfic bhi nahi hota….
      Accha…sun yaara toh aajkal repeat ho hoke bajta hai… i love it…. female version especially…. 🙂
      Arrey… i write for you…. my lovely readers… and its my duty mein suggestions follow karu… thank you for your idea dear… itni taarif… accha… I will think of that scene soon….kyoon ke ghayal FOOLCHAND ka revenge abhi baaki hai..you can wait for the scenes….okay… likhte likhte idea aajata hai dear… there is nothing like ONLY I AM THE BEST in writing those scenes… yeh toh readers ka pyaar hai….
      lots of love to you too….
      will post it soon….
      Mwaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh 🙂 No emojis of kisses though….

      1. Maha_Aijaz

        Thanks dear for considering my request 😘
        Arey haan that foolchand track is still left so excited yaar❤❤
        Acha there is one more song which you’ve to listen:
        Here is the link: https://youtu.be/95WGx0WxKfw
        Do check this out it’s my favorite actor’s Sami Khan’s Ost 😍😍

        Aur haan have you listened Baarish song of half girlfriend hayee Kia mast song Hai❤

    2. Sujie

      Suna hai dear… Baarish ….
      and will listen to the song from the link also….
      Actually I have posted the episode and will be on TU soon….hope you will like it….
      love you dear
      mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh 🙂

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