Mohe Rang Do Laal……. IKRS First Shot

Hello everyone……
I was free today…so thought….why not post at least one episode…….

So here goes the first episode of MRDL…..

A yong girl….obviously Dhaani is seen coming out of bathroom with her hairs tucked in towel….. She is wearing light coloured salwar suit….. She folds her hand and closes her eyes and prays standing in front of the little idol of lord Ganesha…… A lady comes to her and keeps her hand on her shoulder addressing her as Dhaani beta…… Dhaani turns back and says ….Ji Badi Amma….(you can imagine Badi Amma of IKRS ….) Badi Amma smiles and asks her to come for breakfast. Dhaani complies…..
She is arranging her files and keeping it in drawer…. Just then she sees one liked with crroked end with BEST written on it…. She holds it and goes to flashback….. A kid comes running to her ….. And says shikayati pudia…yeh Le….. For you….She gets happy seeing candy floss….. Dhaani says…..Thank you Rakchas…… Viplav…the kid smiles…. And they both eat candy floss….flashback ends…… She holds it in her fist….clutches it then…and says…RAKCHAS…..
Screen shifts….. A boy is shown….. Grown up viplav of course…..sleeping ….with his cute face….
Alarm rings….. And he turns it off….. His mom Kanak enters and says….. I knew it….. She sits besides him…and asks him to wake up….viplav makes a cute face..and says Maa…please!!!not now…… Thodi der aur…..Kanak says…no way…… Viplav says Maa…. Kanak says beta….. You know …. Aaj mandir jana hai….Viplav makes irritated face…but then gets up….turns to mom and says…..Bhagwan jiko naraz nahi karte …hai na Maa ….Kanak pats him…and says…dramebaaz…..she goes ….. Viplav goes to take his clothes out from cupboard…but then sees same kind of locket…with FRIENDS written in it…. He grabs it…. Bolna….mahi Bolna…..plays….he goes to flashback…. Kid Dhaani and Viplav are praying in a temple…..
goes to grab laddoo…kept as prasad…Dhaani holds his hand…and says…bad manners ……Viplav looks at her…and says Shikayati pudia …..Dhaani says no…… Viplav looks at her again…… Dhaani also glares at him….but then bursts out into laughter…. And says BHAAGO…grabbing two laddoo…… They run ….. Dhaani Viplav come to ladder of temple and they start eating the
prasad……flashback ends….. Viplav smiles….. And says Shikayati pudia……both vidhaani are shown with lockets in split screen….. ISHQ KA RANG SAFED…..plays……
Later…. Dhaani is seen working at her home….. Then sees women going somewhere to perform a puja….. One of the lady sees Dhaani and taunts her saying……Haye Raam…..abshagun has happened….we ladies got to see a widow’s face before puja…. Dhaani looks at them… and turns to go inside…. She sees Badi Amma…. Who asks her to stop….. She comes out of the house and asks if they don’t have any other works ..that every time they come to taunt her daughter…. Another lady asks the group to proceed as now they have seen two widows…. Badi Amna fumes and asks the lady if she forgot…who saved her husband from falling on the road…and hitting his head…. The lady gets quiet… Badi Amma asks her and other ladies to leave them alone….if they cannot support them…. My daughter Dhaani is with me….and I am with my daughter……

The ladies then go…..Dhaani who is listening all this with tears rolling down her cheeks… hugs Badi Amma tightly…. Badi Amma consoles her asking her not to pay heed to the words of those ladies…. She makes Dhaani wipe her tears…. And asks her to be strong…. And remember the promise she made to her parents….. Dhaani nods ….and they go inside…..

Scene shifts..,….. Viplav is working in office….. His dad comes to him….and asks him to handle the new project …… Viplav happily agrees…. And his dad says…he should leave for Banaras soon… Viplav says Banaras…..he asks his dad to bless his so that he can be successful….. Dad Son discuss about project…..

Scene shifts.. Badi Amma comes to Dhaani….and asks if she talked to someone about paying guest…. Dhaani nods No…..as she could not do so because of work pressure…. Badi Anna asks her to do it soon… Dhaani says… She will manage … Badi Amma smiles and blesses Dhaani to be successful in anything she does…. And asks her to keep her head high….. Dhaani smiles and hugs her….. Badi Amma hugs her back…

Precap: Viplav is in phone call…..and asks the person on the phone….. If there are no hotels in Banaras… And gets shocked…..

So guys….this was first shot…… I hope you liked it….. Do drop your valuable comments for sure…….
Love you all…..πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€.
Keep smiling❀️❀️❀️

14 comments

  1. Mahaaijaz

    |Registered Member

    Hey Sujie! Dekha I’ve already told u that whatever u may write it will be a rocking one :-*
    So major mystery revealed dhani is playing a character of widow in this, interesting haan! As I especially love those stories in which she plays a character of widow but there are some new twists too like viplav and dhani are true childhood friends and their bonding can be seen in those flashbacks but the billion dollar question is that what exactly happened that they get apart from each other or may be nothing happened it’s just viplav went out for business purpose and didn’t know anything about dhani *like she became widow and leading a difficult life* yeah yeah I know I have to wait for getting answers so will wait.. Badi amma is her caretaker.. hmm! So something happened to her parents and her husband however I wonder if dhani was from well-to-do family plus if KT is of good soul in these shots moreover why viplav and dhani haven’t married though they were best friends which would gradually change into love well there are many more questions so getting impatient for upcoming ones
    Excited for twists and turns which are on the way *I guess*, how they will meet, their nok-jhoks and the major mysteries to reveal so post the next part ASAP!
    Keep it up <3
    Take care!

    • Sujie

      |Author

      Maha……..😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘
      Keep guessing rey…..and yes…
      Dhaani is playing the role of widow…..
      ViDhaani are childhood buddies…but we’re separated due to some reason…..which I will be revealing soon…..
      Keep supporting dearπŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€

  2. Maria

    |Registered Member

    It was too good!! And those flashbacks😍😍 awesome is the word I can say for you! Because you are! Post the next part soon!

  3. Areeb

    |Registered Member

    Yippee first serving of new shot! πŸ™Œ
    Liked Liked Liked!! πŸ’ƒ The locket scene attached with the flashbacks! 😍
    Ary waah! Like seriously Taliyyaaaan! 😘😘 Dhaani and Amma is looking for a paying guest and so wishing for them to get a Rakshas guest!! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Hmm. This is the first time, I’m unable to make any guess about their past. 😌 Actually, I don’t want to. πŸ˜‚ Will let the writer amaze me! πŸ™Œ

    • Sujie

      |Author

      Areeb…….πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜
      Thank you…….
      Thank you for πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
      πŸ˜‚trying to amaze the readers ….😘😘😘

    • Sujie

      |Author

      Aisu…..
      Thank you πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€
      Keep supporting dear……πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜

    • Sujie

      |Author

      Shrinjal……πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€ thank you dear……
      Of course….no need to ask…… Okay….. We are friends…..πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€

  4. AanyaSingh

    |Registered Member

    Hi Sujie😊. A wonderful one it wasπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. And the flashbacks, specially the temple one was so sweet, “laddoo uthaao aur bhaago”😊😊😊😘, so both of them were pretty naughty also in their childhood. But how they got separated, dhaani became a widow😞, lost her parents also, curious to know all this. Interesting precap. Waiting for the two to meet. And the exciting turns in the story too. Difficult to wait for the nxt one,Post the nxt soon yaar. Great jobπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

    • Sujie

      |Author

      Anyaa…..glad that you liked it πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜
      Thank youπŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€

  5. Meghs

    |Registered Member

    Wow sujie new ff
    .. start by powerbang…. u r rocked dear… will forward to see how stry moves
    I am sure it will rocking 😍

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