Mohe Rang Do Laal…… IKRS Fifth Shot

Mohe Rang Do Laal…. IKRS Fifth Shot
Hello everyone….. First of all toh I want to apologize for the irregularity in posting fictions… I have been telling that due to hectic schedule… I am not able to post the episodes….that too REGULARLY… So let’s begin the journey ….but before that a short recap…. VIPLAV FINALLY COMES TO KNOW ABOUT HIS Dhaani…. and now let’s proceed towards a brand new episode….
And yes…if you want to know what happened in the previous episodes…..the links are posted towards the ending of the episode………..
On the count of 3 …let’s begin……. 1………2……..3…. Go

The episode starts with Viplav looking at Dhaani who is far away with school kids. He has tears in his eyes and a wide smile on his face….. He says Dhaa..He feels short of words… He smiles and says Dhaan…. he gets little irritated for not being able to call his Dhaani….. He raises his head…..takes a deep breath…and says my SHIKAYATI PUDIA…. He smiles…. Mere ishq ka rang safed hai yaara ishq ka rang safed….main hi nahi jag bole…kahe kitabe ve…. ishq ka rang safed hai yaara ishq ka rang safed plays…All the recent happenings flash in his mind…. He smiles …and looks back at Dhaani who is unaware of his presence….. And then goes back with a smile… On reaching the gate…he stops and turns back to see Dhaani once again…. He smiles…Mast magan..mann mast magan bas tera naam dohraye…. this line plays… Viplav with a smile on his face…caresses his hair patting his head…and goes back……

Scene shifts to Dhaani who while playing with kids…looks here and there… She gets restless… After sometime…office assistant comes with Dhaani’s bag and says one man said to give it to you. Dhaani reminisces the jeep wala moment…and asks if the man went. OA says already Ma’am..and goes… Dhaani takes the bag ….and smiles saying Raakchas is not that bad…itna bhura bhi nahi hai…She goes to kids and leads them to the class…
Scene shifts back to Viplav who is coming back home….Dhaani’s home …from his site…… He is smiling and looking at himself in the mirror….He thinks he cannot just reveal now who is he?? warna Shikayati Pudia will think..he is showing sympathy…. and says Dhaani… now no sorrows can touch you…. I regret that I could not be there when you needed me the most…but I promise…ab se aisa nahi hoga….. He smiles…. and proceeds to home….. He comes out of his jeep and sees BA doing some chores…. BA sees him and stands up to go to bring some food for him… Viplav asks her to stop and stay with him…. and says he has to talk… BA comes to him and asks what happened Beta???

Viplav says Thank you….. BA asks why?? But then Viplav thinks this is not the right time…. And says for letting me stay in your home… BA smiles and says Beta…..what’s the need of thanks … Viplav smiles and says just like that….. He goes smiling… BA finds something fishy…but still smiles back and asks Viplav to rest while she brings food.
Back to Dhaani…she is coming back home from school…in her scooty… Dhaani is walking towards the door….She sees Viplav smiling and having food. She opens to gate looking at Viplav….. she is unaware that her eyes are fixed towards Viplav….BA says Dhaani came… Viplav looks back… Dhaani who is looking at Viplav hurts her hand by the handle of the gate….. She gets hurt and screams…. Viplav hurries towards Dhaani… BA goes to bring ointment… Viplav comes running and holds Dhaani’s hand….. Dhaani looks at him….. Dheere dheere instrumental plays…….Viplav looks at her finger…and says Kya karti ho Dhaani….dhyaan kaha tha…. where were you looking?? etc etc….

Dhaani keeps looking at him…. Viplav while talking looks at her…and they share an eyelock..while Viplav is still holding the hurt finger of Dhaani and Dhaani is also looking at him…without resisting…lost in each other’s eyes… Both compose themselves hearing BA bringing ointment… Viplav asks BA to give him the ointment.Dhaani sees Viplav still holding her hand… and asks Viplav to let it be… Viplav asks why?? because Rakchas is going to apply ointment?? Dhaani looks at him… and takes the ointment from his hand. Viplav widens his eyes…and says Shikayati Pudia….. Dhaani freezes hearing that from him… and loosens her hand… Viplav realizes this and says I will call you that from now on because you have complaints for everything…. you see the excuse to complain in every single thing…. BA and Dhaani look on.. Dhaani says but…. Viplav looks at her and says Shushhhhh!!! Chup baitho….let me apply the ointment…. Dhaani looks at Viplav …. SURKHIYAAN HAIN HAWAAONN MEIN DO DILON KE MILNE KI…. HOOO ARZIYAAN HAIN…. LAMHA HAI THAM JAANE KI…. from shor in the city…. plays…while Viplav is busy in applying the ointment and Dhaani is looking at the man who is taking so much care of her…. While applying ointment… Dhaani shouts Ahh silently…

Viplav notices and looks at Dhaani… Dhaani realizes she had been looking at him…and looks here and there… Viplav applies the ointment thoroughly and says DONE!! He looks at Dhaani…and says Dhaani…ho gaya… Dhaani realizes she is still gripping Viplav’s hand… She moves back…but stumbles… Viplav holds her…. and they share an eyelock… Viplav says Main hoon na.. now you don’t need to panic…. Dhaani looks at him… A tear falls from from eyes…down to her cheeks… Viplav notices this… and moves closer….. and kisses the tearful eyes…..

But then… Dhaani hears a voice… while still gripping Viplav’s hand when stumbled… She runs from there and goes to her room. Viplav thinks Dhaani… I know you love your Viplav… and I know what fear is keeping you from admitting it… BA looks on from far and thinks God… is it really true what she is thinking about ???
Dhaani is seen in her room…. She is leaning her head on the wall beside the window pane… She closes her eyes and Viplav’s face flashes on her mind. She opens her eyes and thinks there is nothing like that….he helped me so I am thinking about him…. She stands up and turns to go to bed… She sees the Viplav special pendant …and holds it… She reminisces Viplav calling her Shikayati Pudia…

Then looks back at the locket… ISHQ KA RANG SAFED PLAYS…. She raises her head and tears are seen in her eyes….She thinks why is she c rying… Someone is seen looking at her…Its none other than Viplav….he thinks these tears have no place in your life Dhaani… He sees Dhaani turning back and quickly sneaks to the corner… Dhaani wipes her tears… Then Viplav comes talking loudly saying.. Dhaani ji…. Dhaani looks at him…. wipes her tears and keeps the locket beside…. Viplav goes to her and says Dhaani ji… Dhaani says Bolo… Viplav walks towards her and asks what’s your favorite song?? Dhaani looks on…. And asks if his screws are okay… Viplav smiles and says Very funny… Dhaani asks him to go …. Viplav cutely nods NO… Dhaani asks what is this new drama??? Kya naatak hai yeh?? Viplav looks on and says GENERAL KNOWLEDGE….. Dhaani gives him and angry glare… and says I don’t like songs….happy……. Viplav looks on and says No….kuch to hoga…. anything……

Dhaani gets angry… Viplav then sees the locket and deliberately takes it from Dhaani saying nice one… Dhaani looks on and says HELLO… Viplav says oh haan..it suits me right…Dhaani looks at him…snatches the locket..and then looks at him and takes Viplav’s hand and sends him out saying…. you are here as a PG so remain as a PG…..Good night….. Viplav replies Don’t let the bedbugs bite…. Dhaani slams the door and the door gets closed on Viplav’s face… Dhaani locks the door and sits on sofa besides the locket…

Around late night…when Viplav comes to take water from the filter…. He hears Dhaani singing in a low melodious voice…. Viplav stops..smiles and says I knew it….. and gets happy……. When he hears Dhaani singing… Inside…Dhaani is holding the locket in her hand and singing…. Viplav peeps from keyhole and sees Dhaani with the locket and thinks… Dhaani…. and smile
s bright ……

Teri Yaadein Mulakaatein
Woh Raatein Aur Baatein
Teri Saansein Woh Baahein
Ab Mujhko Yaad Aaye
Tere Bina Mera Jiya
Sataayein Kyun Piya
Yaadon Ne Teri Mujhpe
Ye Jaadu Kiya Re

Teri Saansein Woh Baahein
Ab Mujhko Yaad Aaye
Woh Adaaon Ki Ghatayen
Mere Dil Ko Chhu Jaye
Pyari.. Hai Duniya Saari
Maine.. Hai Tujhpe Waari
Dil Mein Mere Dil Ne Tujhse
Yaari.. Ki Baazi Hari

Mere Khayalon Mein
Khayalon Mein
Bas Tum Meri Nigaahon Mein
Nigaahon Mein..
Bas Tum.. Wapas Aa Jaa
Mere Paas Tum Sadaa
Wapas Aa Jaa….
Mere Paas Tum Sadaa

Suna Mera Jahan
Bhool Main Hu Kahan
Jaane Hai Jaane Jaan Teri Rahoon Piyaaa…
Wapas Aa Ja Mere Paas Tum Sadaa
Wapas Aa Ja
Mere Paas Tum Sadaa
Piya Mera Jiya
Mere Paas Tum Sadaa
Piya Mera Jiya
Piya Mera Jiya….

Tu Hai Kahan

Tera Karoon Intezaar
Tu Mere Dil Ka Karaar
Itna Hai Aetbaar
Manungi Na Main Bhi Haar
Viplav leans his head on the wall near the door to hear Dhaani…and he smiles thinking…you still love this song…. He hears some noise from BA’s room and thinks he should go now….He looks back towards the door…and passes a flying kiss saying….that day will come soon when his flying kiss will directly land to you SHIKAYATI PUDIA…. and goes…. ISHQ KA RANG SAFED HAI BABA…ISHQ KA RANG SAFED PLAYS….

Dhaani in her room has tears in her eyes…. and sleeps holding the locket thinking why is she missing him more like never before these days… Ishq ka rang safed plays….

So guys…. I guess this episode might not be that interesting like the previous one…but thought to share it just to give you ideas about Dhaani missing her RAKCHAS each day more and more……

HOPE YOU WILL READ IT AND DROP YOUR COMMENTS…. will wait for your views…do read it ……
love you all   
Have a lovely day  

16 comments

  1. Maria

    |Registered Member

    It was awesome! Just wonderful. Loved it to the core!! Dhaani falling in love with Viplav is so damn awesome!! Waiting eagerly for the next part! Post it soon please!!

    With Love

    • Sujie

      |Author

      Thank you for your comment Maria…glad that you liked it…. Love you a lot…Keep the supporting coming dear….Take care …love you
      And yes….. TO ALL THE READERS….SORRY FOR THE MAJORLY MAJOR BLUNDER….FIRST OF ALL TOH I FORGOT TO POST THE PREVIOUS LINKS…AND SECONDLY….. That was Dhaani’s imagination of Viplav so close to her….but that stumbling is the real one….Sorry for these majir errors everyone…

  2. Lalitha

    hi sujjie how are u? And urs ff is excellent yaar… Wow today viplav is so cute in my imagination when he looks back to see his love… 🙂 🙂 And plz update ur next epi asap… Thanks foq ur epi because i am waiting from a week to read atleast one ff thanq thanq so much… 🙂

    • Sujie

      |Author

      Hello Lalitha….. I am good ….How are you????

      Thank you ….for your wonderful words…. Glad that you liked the scenes… I am not sure if I would be able to post the episode soon or not…. Sorry for the inconvenience…keep the support coming 🙂 🙂
      Take care…. and no need to say thanks… I am writing fictions because of inspiration provided by my readers…. IF THERE ARE READERS…THEN ONLY WRITER EXISTS….. otherwise they vanish 🙂 and moreover when my lovely TU family is with me.. I won’t give up…but haan.. there are high chances of being irregular…and it kills me like nothing 🙁

  3. AanyaSingh

    |Registered Member

    Hello Sujie dear 😊. Who said the epi is not an interesting? It was such a WONDERFUL & soooooooo LOVELY episode. I have read it twice & feel like reading it again at least twice more😊, i enjoyed reading it so much. It was so lovely yaar right from Viplav determining to erase all sorrows from Dhaani ‘s life to his running to Dhaani wen she gets hurt, so caringly applying ointment, assuring her not to panic as he was there & afterwards trying to cheer her up( ha ha GENERAL KNOWLEDGE was quite amusing😜) the way u have described it is WONDERFUL👌👌👌👌. Vips’ LOVE is in the air & how can Dhaani remain untouched by it,the vibrations of Pure Love r so strong & so the unawared attraction towards Vips & her missing her RAKCHAS more & more. Vips peeping though the keyhole was so cute😄. Really enjoyed it from start to the end. Chalte OS songs us also👍. Though i haven’t listened the one Dhaani sings but suits the situation perfectly👌👍. Great job, keep it going👍👍👍👍. And yes, no need to b sorry yaar, infact it shud b hats off 👒👒to ALL OF U, ALL the WRITERS of our family, inspite of ur so hectic schedules, u take time out to post the ffs & keep this page going👍👍👍👍👍👍. Love to u😘😘😘😘😘 & all others too😘😘😘😊😊.

    • Sujie

      |Author

      Aanya dear…. Thank you so much for your good words…glad that you liked the scenes…. 🙂
      You know what such good comments on writing inspires me more and more and I am glad that you and everyone support me …that too always…despite of my irregularity…..
      LOVE YOU SO MUCH
      TAKE CARE……:) 🙂

    • Sujie

      |Author

      AND YES…. THAT SONG IS TERI YAADEIN…… FROM THE SERIAL LOVE STORY…. ANOTHER SHOW OF MR. HANDSOME MISHAL AS AKASH…… WHERE YOU CAN FALL IN LOVE WITH HIM YET AGAIN WITH HIS CHARISMATIC PERFORMANCE…. THIS SONG HAS MALE AS WELL AS FEMALE VERSION…YOU CAN LISTEN TO THEM… AND I BET YOU WOULD LIKE THOSE TERI YADEIN SONGS….. LOVE YOU

  4. Mahaaijaz

    |Registered Member

    Good one Sujie and it wasn’t non-interesting at all infact it was so cute, loving the concerned nature of viplav😍😍 their long lasting eye locks plus cute and lovely tit bits are just epic!! Enjoying it a lot yaar❤
    You know I thought that the imagination was true and honestly I was so surprised but after knowing that it was all his SOCH then felt relieved😂😂
    Go on dear and sorry for late comment but you know the reason behind my absence😞
    Take care!

    • Sujie

      |Author

      Thank you so much Maha….. glad that you are back….yes I know the reason of your absence…and I would like to say…. life is like this….it must go on…. okay…cheer up now…. Honi ko toh koi nahi taal sakta…so I hope you will understand this…..

      Moving on ….Thank you for liking this one and commenting about this with full of TARIF…jagah nahi ab tarifon ko bator ke rakhne ki….but glad that this family of mine is supportive towards every one….love you all…..
      and haan….sooooo sorry uss imaginatioin ko reality mein badalne ke liye…thoda time abhi baaki hai……
      no need to apologize at all …okay….. and yes…thanks again for your good words… take care meri jaan 🙂

    • Mahaaijaz

      |Registered Member

      Yeah that’s true! Life is the name of all this, but with the passage of time seriously my sadness is increasing, I don’t want to think about it but then also it’s coming in my mind again and again. I feel like I’ve lost someone who was dearest in my life though I haven’t met him ever but.. I can’t explain yaar bus sabar karna bohat mushkil hai, he was such a nice person but till now his dead body isn’t found, I mean a man who was so good, so generous ended like this but I strongly feel that iss mai uper waly ke koi masleehat hai. I just pray for him and all shuhdaa!
      Maybe the grief will fade gradually but his absence will always made us sad whenever we’ll switch in the tv on Ramzan!
      May God rest their souls in peace!

      • Sujie

        |Author

        Indeed true Maha….jaanti hoon kisiko khone ka dard kya hota hai… I KNOW…. Ab yehi soch ke aage chalna padega ki unko iss duniya mein hona bhagwanko nabhaya….apni duniya mein unke jaise logon ki kami dekhi toh unki kami hame mehsoos karwake legaye woh …. Now don’t be sad….. Bhagwan pyaar ka bhookha tha toh legaya bina kuch soche samjhe…. WE CAN ONLY SAY THAT MAY THE DEPARTED SOULS REST IN PEACE…
        COME OUT OF THIS GRIEF AS SOON AS POSSIBLE OKAY… WILL WAIT FOR YOU TO COME BACK TO NORMAL….EK KHALIPAN TOH HAMESHA LAGEGA TUMHE…BUT ISE APNI KAMJORI MAT BANNE DENA…..
        smile please…..

  5. Meghs

    |Registered Member

    Hey sujie. U nailed it. Amazing i liked it infact loved it. Chal koi nahi late tho update mein vi karti hu😉 aur vo record koi le hi nahi saktha 😜 kyunki mujse late updates kon dega😉

    Its cute love stry of vidha. Go on

    Keep smiling

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