Mohabbatein….Twinj ki (#6)

Hey lovely ppl ……Here’s the 6th epi so let’s begin

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@Next Morning

All of them get ready and r all set to go for Jaipur sightseeing
They reach Hawa Mahal
Roina and Yuhi r walking together …….Unwantingly twinj had to walk with eo as they had no other company

T- Uv aur Mahi ek dusre ke saath kitne khush hain na…(UV and Mahi r so happy with eo)
K- Haan…..Aur ek yahan mai hun is Syappa Queen ko jhel raha hun( yes….and im here bearing this syappa queen)
T- tum kaun se kam ho mai bhi to majburi mein hi tumhe jhel rahi hu na( u r no less even im bearing u bcoz i dont have any other option)

Suddenly Twinkle sees something and screams
Kunj vo dekho moor(peacock) and jumps like a child when her leg twists and she falls down
Her leg is sprained and she is wincing in pain she’s not able to get up….Yuhi and Roina come to her aid
K- kar diya na phir se naya syaapa….. Vaise kuch sooch samajh ke hi maina rakha hai tera naam Syappa Queen( again created a new syappa……..after thinking only i would have kept ur name Syappa queen)

N- stop it kunj ….pehle uske help karo
Kunj lifts twinkle and places her on a nearby bench
K- waise tune zindagi mein moor(peacock) nahi dekha hai kya jo aise bacchon ki tharah kud(jump) rahi thi( havent u ever seen a peacock that ur jumping like a kid)
T- just shut up
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while teasing her Kunj suddenly presses her foot and pulles it resulting in a scream
T- aahhhhhhhh
T- ye kya kar rahe ho tum( what r u doing)
Then she realises all her pain is gone and in super excitement she stood up and hugs Kunj
T- thank u …..thank u…..thank u soooo much…..(breaking the hug) meri to jaan jaa rahi thi ye sooch sooch ke ki kal Naina ke sangeet mein dance kaise karoongi( I was so scared thinking that how will I dance in naina’s sangeet tmrw)
R- abhi chalen yahan se ya yahin par baitna hai( let’s leave or do u wanna sit here only)
K- chalo( let’s go)

After a whole long day of Jaipur sightseeing all of them reach back to their respective places

After some time Kunj calls Twinkle

K- Hiii…..
T- Hiii…….waise itni raat ko call kyun kiya????( y did u call so late at night???)
K- theere toote hue paair(leg) ka samachar poochne( to ask d condition of ur broken leg)
T- O hello …..pehle to mera paair toota nahi hai aur dusra ye ki main apna khud ka khayal rakh sakti hoon tumhe tension lene ki koi zarurat nahi( O hello
first of all my leg isn’t broken and secondly u don’t need to worry abt me I can take gud care of myself)

K- janta hoon par hai to tu Syaapa Queen na kahin bhi kabhi bhi kuch bhi kar sakti hai(I know that but after all ur Syaapa queen u can do anything anywhere at anytime)
T- Just shut up ………and she hangs up the call

K- (self talk) Syaapa Queen poori jhalli hai par hai dil ki aachi……
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Precap-Roina ka sangeet……..Twinkle faints

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Hey guys……back after a one whole day(I know zyada nahi hai but can’t stay away for anymore long) somehow managed to write this I wanted to make it a bit long but couldn’t I’m very very sorry but I hope u liked the epi

probably u guys rn’t liking my ff and that is completely evident from d comments…… and I’m not sad bcoz I know d ff isn’t as gud as many of those on TU…….so no problem but pls if u guys can suggest me something surely suggest all ur suggestions r most welcomed

but pls comment below at least to throw eggs and tomato’s on me by this I may get angry but kya pata angry mood mein kuch aacha likh doon so u never no u may get something gud to read aur aacha comment kiya toh happy mood mein kuch aacha likh doon so both d possiblities have high chances so feel free and comment below

Love u all♥♥

31 comments

  1. Sameera

    |Registered Member

    Hahaha krui it’s amazing yaar loved it twinj nok jhok 😘😘😘only one req plz make it bit longer and yea track is awesome so don’t do any changes

  2. Monica

    |Registered Member

    krutii ! don’t ever think your ff is boring because it is really awesome and regarding the comments, maybe some are busy so may not be able to comment. Don’t get disheartened. coming back to today’s part … it was amazing … kya kaha jaaye ? super se bhi upar ?😂 keep smiling and never imagine your ff is not good! in addition, your track rn is best and don’t pls don’t change it ! love you 💕 waiting for the next part eagerly 🙂

  3. Jisha

    |Registered Member

    Kruti,
    Twinj nok jhoks are so cute… loved it…ur ff is awesome… don’t be sad…I don’t think ur track needs a change.. this track is interesting….go ahead…may be due to busy schedule they are not able to comment…do continue… I wait for your next episode…

  4. Shatakshi

    |Registered Member

    Hey Kruti
    Its nothing Like that dear
    We all love ur ff…n I m happy that u r not saying that u will quit just becoz of comments…
    Just one suggestion…. Can u please show twinj interaction more….as their r 3 couples so they r dominating twinjs character…
    N ur dialogues r just Amazing…I love it very much
    ❤❤❤😊

    • Kruti

      |Author

      Thank u shatakshi…..and I’ll make sure from now on no one dominates over twinj and after 2or3 epi roina will b out of scene

  5. Baby

    |Registered Member

    are kruti yr amazing episode dear tume pta hai u r amazing yah if u ask fr sgstion den try a bit longr episode n a bit of sidmins romance n vaise toh yr u r gr8 n amazing rtr no need 2 change d trck u r rcking my girl i mean my dear frnd cm sissy

  6. Angita

    |Registered Member

    Your ff and boring?????? Who told you this???
    It was amazing and the peacock scene!!!
    Love you
    I know how you feels👍👍❤❤😘

  7. Shonaa...

    |Registered Member

    It’s not at all boring dear…. don’t say diz nd today’s episode was amazing awesome loved it…. continue….

  8. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Amazing episode… loved it …
    Twinj part was too cute ….
    Kruti don’t dare to think nd call ur ff as boring one it’s an awesome ff ..
    When u will proceed further ppl will surely like ur ff …nd I assure u that it will happen as I myself went through the same phase in my ff writing …so be happy .
    love u

  9. Romaisha

    |Registered Member

    Kruti !! Don’t u dare say this ff isn’t good ok? I love it yaar and plzz do post ur next epi soon im waiting ….

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