Mohabbatein….Twinj ki (#40)

Hllo everyone…..I’m back with d nxt part of d ff…I know I am pretty late….Extremely sorry for that.

Thank you for all d love and support thru your comments….all of those meant a lot to me.

And with regard To d sad ending…..Trust me U all will see a happy as well as a sad end….The happy end will be Twinj’s and the sad end wont be of Twinj but u will feel it is of Twinj…..I know bohat gol gol hai….But believe me I wont let u all down.

So here’s d nxt part


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It has been 3days since Kunj was hospitalized. Slight improvement in his heath but still survival chances were negligible. The whole family was undergoing an emotional turmoil. But the worst stiuation was Twinkle’s.

She dint want to break down nor did she have the strength to bare all this. The past years without Kunj had already made her realise that how difficult it would be for her to live without him. Though she was acting strong infront of Kunj but only her heart knew the pricking pain she was undergoing thru.

The Doctor entered into Kunj’s ward to do some check up’s before giving him a discharge. Twinkle had requested the doctor to give Kunj a discharge and had guaranteed them that she would take care of Kunj. Unwilingly the doctor had given a discharge and informed Twinkle to bring Kunj for his daily check up’s without fail.


Twinkle Kunj and Yuvraj drove back to the sarna mansion. But the sight in front of Kunj in the Sarna Mansion left him astonished.

In the centre of the hall was a simple mandap. The four pillars decorated with yellow nd red fabric and in b/w the mandap was a pedestal for the sacred fire.

Kunj gave a ‘what is this’ look to Twinkle while Twinkle just smiled back to him. They proceeded further to find their family standing near the mandap.

K- Bebe What is all this for??….who is getting married

While the reply came from Twinkle

T- We are getting married.

K- Are u in your senses…..”We are getting married”…..did u realise what u spoke

T-(with watery eyes) I am very much in my senses….Nd I know what I spoke

K- Twinkle by no chance this is happening….though u know the fact that I’ll di…

Before he could complete it Twinkle placed her hand on his mouth and nodded in a No….as she did this a tear made its way down her cheek.

Without speaking another word Kunj walked away to his room. Usha tried to go behind him but Bebe stopped her. After composing herself Twinkle made her way towards his(kunj’s) room.


‘Why do you want to do this’ questioned Kunj(standing leaning on d window)sensing the presence of Twinkle.

“Because I want to change my surname for the rest of my life” replied twinkle trying to lighten up the atmosphere. Within a fraction of second Kunj turned around grabbed her shoulders nd pinned her to the wall.

K- I am very much aware of the fact that my life is a gift of god just for a few days or weeks…..And if u think that I’ll do this act and spoil your life then you are wrong.

Tears silently and endlessly gushing out through their eyes.

T- And if you think that this is going to spoil my life then you are wrong….Kunj I have already undergone the pain of losing you….Infact I lost you once….but It was god’s grace that he returned you back to me….But only to take u away from me once again(she burst out into tears)

K-(wiping her tears) shhhhh….

T-(b/w the sobs) Kunj….maybe we arn’t destined to happily live with eachother….but I still want to live with you….Maybe Not in this birth but those holy vows will bind us together for the other seven births….I dont want to live as Twinkle taneja….I want to be MRS. KUNJ SARNA for the rest of my life….u may not be by my side….but your name will keep your presence alive….pls Kunj….I want to be all yours….pls.

Not knowing how to react Kunj stood in silence. Slowly he left his grip on her shoulders. Both looked up to see the pain in eachother’s eyes. Twinkle had completely broken down after speaking those words. She was histerically sobbing while silent tears made their way down Kunj’s cheeks. With that desperate plead in her eyes Twinkle kept on saying ‘Please’

When finally Kunj couldn’t see her cry anymore he cupped her face and placed his forehead against her’s

K- do you really want this

Twinkle slightly nodded in a yes.

K- then I am ready for it.

Within the blink of an eye Twinkle hugged him as tight as she could. A hug that was soft gentle and warm yet expressed their pain. A hug which could make u feel that it bonds the two souls together.


Finally all The preperations were done. The bride and groom sat infront of the holy fire ready to take the holy vows. The priest was chanting the spell’s.

[ Kunj was dressed in a simple red and cream Kurta while Twinkle was in a simple red and golden chudidar]

The moistness in their(Kunj and Twinkle’s) eyes was clearly evident. They stood up to take the 7vows promising to love honour and cherish eachother forever….asking god for the strength to share every happiness and pain with eachother. At then end of the seven rounds Kunj filled her hairline with vermillion and tied the Nuptial around her neck.

All the rituals were completed. Twinkle and Kunj were tied to eachother with that invisible thread not for today not for a week not for a month but for the next 7 births.


Twinkle stood in the balcony of Kunj’s room which had turned into their’s a few hours ago. She stared at the bright moon nd the twinkling stars with tears in her eyes. The day of Marriage is suppose to be the most joyous day for a girl but Twinkle couldn’t think of that little joy over the pain which she had infront of her.

Kunj walked in and stood beside her. He noticed the tears in her eyes and wrapped his arm around her shoulder to comfort her. Twinkle rested her head on his chest. The tears weren’t stoping. Kunj made lifted her head and cupped her face. Both of them looking at eachother with pain…passion…and love.

Tears rolling from Twinkle’s face….Kunj kisses her forehead and cheeks and sucked the tears flowing down.
After a few minutes of intense…deep…painful…passionate eyelock Twinkle spoke…..”You have the permission Kunj….You have it….I’m your wife….I’m all your’s”

“Only if you forget everything and live these moments” said Kunj with moist eyes. Twinkle slightly nodded in a yes and wiped her tears. Kunj grabs her waist….He makes his lips to get close to her….but not able to meet with her’s….Twinkle understands this and holds his hairs from back and made their lips meet….They kiss eachother passionately.

Kunj manages to unclip her hair….his one arm holding her tight around her waist and the other carressing her hair….Both of them are simply lost in the fabric of time.

Both were holding eachother tightly…Kunj caress her neck. Looking into her eyes he put a kiss on the area around lips….Slowly caressing her curves….he kissed her slowly and sucked her lower lip while she responded back by carressing his hair.

Both of them depart to inhail oxygen….He then makes his way towards her neck and places a hell lot of wet kisses.

He lifts her up and walks into d room nd places her on the bed. Kunj is on top of Twinkle…she hides her face with her hands…Kunj slowly removes her hand’s and plants a soft kiss on her forehead…he kissed her eye’s…ear lobes…and when he was about to proceed towards her lips…all the haunting deeds of his past…the seperation…twinkle’s sufferings….everything flashes before his eye’s….Tear drops from his eye’s and falls on Twinkle’s face….She opens her eyes….while Kunj moves a bit away from her.

She understood what could be his state of mind…her eyes became moist and all she spoke was

“There isn’t any world for me to live in, than your soul. Sow your seeds of love in me, and water them. Make my barren body bloom into a garden with your love. And let the divine wind kiss me. For once….breathe!”

Tears ran down both of their faces….Kunj couldn’t see her cry. Wiping away her tears he spoke

K- Don’t cry jaan….Till my last breathe I will always be by your side….

Soon the moans of pain and pleasure surrounded the atmosphere.

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A/N: I have lately been busy with the preperations of my paper presentation scheduled on 3rd March. So the nxt epi maybe posted only after that. I’ll try posting it before that if I can.

Share your views on d epi….eagerly waiting to read them.

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  1. toooo..awsm..marvelous..emot..epi

  2. Fatimaa.

    It was awesome kruti…
    I really lovedd it…..
    Amazing fabulous…fantastic…
    Love uh..
    Post soon

  3. Sohi

    Very emotional episode
    But was emotionally romantic too
    It was unique romance
    Do continue

  4. Purnima.agrawal30

    Amazing awesome emotional epi….

  5. emotional one….. Loved it…..

  6. SidMin

    Just loved it the episode was a blend of emotions …. Love… care … concern…. wanting to be one … evrything …
    Just loved it …
    Love you … All the best for your exams … and try posting soon. …
    Love you …❤❤❤❤

  7. Simiyy

    Hey Di
    I have no words
    It was just too good
    Post soon
    Loads of love

  8. Presha

    Hey kruti awesome I just loved ut

  9. Amaya Bhardwaj

    Hey yrr I m speachless right now…Too emotional episode and romantic too…I loved it
    Best of luck for your exams…

  10. SidMin23


  11. You are late ? but you have given a superbbb episodee ???????? you have made all the emotions , alive you know ????? hatsoff? really…….
    Post nexttt soonn??? eagerly waiting.,…

  12. Yr mindblowing epi….
    Luvd it…
    Too much emotional….
    Really yr i cried while reading it….
    Luv u….post nxt asap….

  13. Emotional episode i loved it try posting soon and all the best for your paper presentation

  14. I cried almost the whole night reading the story.
    It was so touching.
    I don't know what else to say…as the update made me a bit emotional.Very well written. ?

  15. Affaa

    Fathi what to say Haan… U made me speechless today… Ya Allah I was able to feel their pain… And romance kiss was outstanding… A rocking episode… U know I had tears on my eyes when Kunj was not able to kiss her… So sad… Ur just amazing… Keep it up… I love soooooo much baby

  16. Chiku

    Lovely. Loved it. Amazing ❤️❤️❤️❤️
    Is kunj really going to die??
    Post soon❤️❤️?

  17. Topsecret

    Kruti… It was outstanding. Well written. Amazing, fabulous, mind blowing episode. The pain was clearly shown and romance ????. I loved it to the core. This is painful romantic episode. May be next episode will be separation. But this episode is just so….. No words.. Love it so much. And you know I am Topsecret. So try to guess who I am?
    Hint.. I am one of your friend. I hope so I am.. And I love you so so much…? bye and do tell if you’re able to guess who I am.?

  18. Ramya

    Awesome kruti amazing loved it
    So emotional n so romantic too
    I hope it have a happy ending I wish
    Love u keep smiling

  19. Kritika14

    So happy to see you back! Loved the episode completely, so uniquely romantic! Loving the way how the story is shaping up! Hoping for the next episode to be up soon! Much love x

  20. Hey kruti it was fantastic

  21. Baby

    Kruti dii pata hai pheli baar romance padne ka mann nhi kia….bas tears were coming out romance padte hue bhi 🙂
    Hehe pagal hun mein bhi bt srsly too emotional episode I mean ohhh god twinjs convo was beautifully emotional n den d marriage n wen romance was on d emotions all we ere beautifully portrayed. …..
    Lods of love di….♥♡★☆♥♡★☆
    Amazing update srsly everything is gol mol…….n even my tears r gol mol hehe…. 🙂
    Post soon dii… 🙂

  22. Mia12

    Hey kruti…
    Sorry 4 late cmnt lacking of time… But truly ur jus AMAZING..??? Ur jus FABULOUS writer,,??????? koi words nai hai kuch describe karne ke liye,,???? U knw maine 6 time read kia hai yeh epi phir bhi man nai bhara mera yarr,,???….. But truly twinjs every emotional talks,their speech jus made me cry,,??? and sacchi romance ke time pe bhi rona agaya yarr,,???? very heart touching episode yarr,,???? but m feeling like end mai tum twinkle ko bhi mardoge but plzzz 1 rqst I jus can’t bear anyones death…I cried hard.???? every n each epi was going n m feeling fear of don’t no maybe end mai mera breaking heart milega muje???…plzzzz I begging u don’t kill twinj..????OK but all overall it was out of word’s..?????? well plzzzz post next soon,,??
    With lotsss of love..❤❤

  23. Sameera

    Hey kruti sooo amazing yaar loved it …
    So emotional ??????

  24. Shalini15

    Hi Kruti firstly very sorry for late comment ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? actually too so not getting time to read ffs.

    Wellepisode was awesome mind blowing superb emotional. Loved it too much.?. Twinj romance was emotional romance hayeeeee yaar pehli baar romance ko padhkar rona aya ??????????? feeling very bad for twinj. But please yaar twinj ko separate mat karna nd kunj ko marna mat . I’ll cry if this happens. Well do continue soon.

    Lots of love ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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