Mohabbatein….Twinj ki (#37)

Hey Lovely ppl…..I am back with d nxt part

Thanks for all d love and support that u gave me thru your comments….Every word meant a lot to me.

So here’s d nxt part

Happy Reading


A weekend morning….some surprise awaits for Twinkle. She was in her deep sleep until she wasnt disturbed by the sound of some utensils nd mixer.
She sat up rubbing the sleep from her eyes and probably a bit annoyed as well. She walked into the living area nd made way towards the Kitchen.

What she saw was something she felt was a dream but it wasnt. Kunj stood infront of the induction cooktop well dressed in a white apron nd toque blanche(the hat). Twinkle went forward nd sat on a shelf which wasnt messed up. The kitchen wasn’t messed up. Kunj had maintained the cleanliness unlike everyone else.

Twinkle sat there adoring him while Kunj gave her a few stares with a grin on his face still completing his unfinished work. Twinkle finally decided to break the silence.

T- What’s on the breakfast menu Mr.Sarna?

K- Everything that u would love u have

T- I would love to have it only if its not going to kill my tastebuds

K- Hopefully they wont….coz Its THE KUNJ SARNA(stressing upon it) preparing it

T- Lets hope that overconfidence doesn’t drown u

Saying this she walked out of the Kitchen with a bit of attitude and giggle on her face.

After 20min

Twinkle sat on the breakfast table waiting for the ‘hopefully tasteful breakfast’. After the wait of a few minutes Kunj walked out of the kitchen with a tray.

Keeping in mind the fact that twinkle loved Berries he had made Blueberry pancakes, Berry and yogurt smoothie, and some bread toast with raspberry jam. The food looked yummy. Twinkle’s mouth watered but she prefered to hide it from Kunj just to be a bit mischievous with him.

Kunj watched upon her while she started tasting the food. She ate a few bites of the pancake and some sips of the smoothie. Suddenly there was an outburst

T- What the hell is this….how could u even make this

Kunj looked at her. Anyone who looked at his face would surely question him “Did u encounter a hungry tigress?”

Twinkle walked forward while Kunj walked backward drenched in d sweat of fear.

T- Kunj how did u even make this

Kunj was stopped by the kitchen counter behind him that is when he realised where he stood. Kunj gulpped down the saliva in fear. Twinkle walked forward decreasing the proximity. They were milimeters away when Twinkle mumbled I never knew Mr. Sarna could cook like a chef.

After saying this she let out a laugh nd put some pancake batter present on the shelf on Kunj’s face. She walked backward laughing like a maniac. Kunj stood there a bit shocked and expression less and then realised what she did.

K- Twinkle ki bacchi….u are so dead today

Saying this he took the batter bowl nd walked forward.

T-(still laughing) No Kunj u are not doing this pls…No

When she understood he wasnt going to stop she started running around the Kitchen. Kunj ran behind her. Twinkle found some radish’s on a shelf which she threw on Kunj and it made the batter fall on d ground. Kunj gave a “What the hell” look while Twinkle gave a “Phir se syappa look” nd bit her tongue.

They stood still for a minute nd then suddenly Kunj threw the left over berries on Twinkle. Twinkle got irked. She picked the ketchup bottle nd splashed it on Kunj and ran out of the kitchen. Kunj ran behind her taking some tomatos nd green leaves in his hand.

Twinkle was sitting on d couch holding her stomach nd laughing. Kunj threw a tomato on her. ‘Oh wow targer achirved’ exclaimed Kunj as the tomato hit Twinkle. Twinkle stood up boiling in anger. She started throwing cushions on him. Kunj started throwing them back to her nd this continued.

After some while Twinkle walked towards d dinning table picked up d smoothie nd moved towards Kunj and yet again a tom and jerry chase began. The two of them kept throwing things nd running behind eachother.

When they finally had no enery to run they sat down all tiered on two couches places opposite to eachother. When they lifted their heads to look at the condition of the flat all they could find was Food splattered every where and a few feathers of the cusions flying here nd there. No soon did they see all this they started to laugh like maniacs.

A few minutes later reality flashed their minds that the mess created has to even be cleaned. They stopped laughing nd looked around the room with a tensed face.

K & T- ( together) Twinkle/Kunj u clean all this until I freshen up.

Both of them stood to walk away when they realised what the other person spoke.

T- Y will I clean it….u created it so better clean it

K- Oh hello miss taneja both of us have given equal contribution in this mess so it will be cleaned by both of us not by me.

Saying this he walked away nd came back with a broom nd some mops. Twinkle made a cry baby face nd went forward to start cleaning.

K- wait for a moment I tld both of us together.

He went nd brought his phone nd played a song.

Bin puchhe mera naam aur pataa
Rasmon ko rakh ke pare
Chaar kadam bas chaar kadam
Chal do naa saath mere

Bin kuch kahe, bin kuch sune
Haathon mein haath liye
Chaar kadam bas char kadam
Chal do na saath mere


Hey.. bin kuch kahe, bin kuch sune
Haathon mein haath liye
Chaar kadam bas chaar kadam
Chal do na saath mere

Raahon mein tumko jo dhoop sataye
Chaaon bicha denge hum
Andhere daraye to jaa kar falak pe
Chand sajaa denge hum
Chhaye udaasi latife suna kar
Tujhko hansa denge hum


Hanste hansaate yunhi gungunaate
Chal denge chaar kadam
Yea yeah.. na na nana…
La ra la.. ra.

Tumsa mile jo koi rehguzar
Duniya se kaun darey
Chaar kadam kya saari umar
Chal dungi saath tere

Bin kuch kahe, bin kuch sune
Haathon mein haath liye
Char kadam bas char kadam
Chal do na saath mere

Finally they were done with cleaning the mess. They stood staring and smiling at eachother.

T- the flat has been cleaned now let me clean myself.

K- ya.

Saying this he moved forward to sit on the couch nd rest for a while but Mr. Naught head got a naughty thought nd raised his one eyebrow. He ran into Twinkle’s room nd before she could close the door of washroom he stopped it by placing his foot.

T- Now what do u want Mr.Sarna.

K- Twinkle I wonder if cleaning together was so much funnn then…..(he winks)

Twinkle widened her eyes. Before she could respond Kunj slightly pushed the door nd entered in nd locked the door. Now Kunj was standing against the door nd Twinkle infront of him.

T- Kunj this is not happening u better move out from here.

Kunj started moving forward while twinkle walked back in nervousness.She walked until she wasnt stopped by the wall. Kunj walked forward decreasing the proximity b/w them. He entangled his hands with that of Twinkles. He brushed his cheeks against hers.

A few seconds later his lips brushing lightly against her cheeks and still that light touch sent shivers through her nerves, shivers that made her whole body tremble. ” If you want me to stop tell me now”he whispered. When she still said nothing he brushed his mouth against the hollow of her temple ” Or now.” He traced the line of her cheekbone.” Or now”. And finally his lips were against hers. A small yet a tender one.

The kiss made them one, rather than two separate entities. She knew she needn’t be alone ever again, and that her heart had been made whole, with the simple act of his lips touching hers. A smile crept up on her face, a smile so real and so radiant that she was sure she could ever feel sadness again, not truly, not while she was in his arms, safe and secure. 

Twinkle moved her hand to turn on the shower. This was probably an indication of Twinkle. Kunj moved his head beside hers nd slid the cloth off her shoulder. But before he could move ahead flashes occupied his mind. He remembered playing with girls in the past two years. He felt guilty about cheating upon them as well as cheating upon Twinkle

No sooner did he get these thoughts he walked out of the washroom leaving Twinkle astonished. Twinkle understood that his guilt was the thing which came in between them. She decided to talk to him later after freshening up.

After a while

She walked out of the washroom nd found Kunj standing in the Balcony. She went towards him nd held his hand.

K- I am really very sorry Twinkle….I have cheated upon you….Nothing can be more worse than cheating someone whom u love the most….nd I have done this worse deed.

Tears flowed down his cheeks. His guilt was clearly visible in his eyes. Twinkle could sense it. She made him turn around to look at her and cupped his face.

T- Kunj I know what u did was wrong….and even I am hurt bcoz of it. But every mistake is given a chance to be rectified. And it can be rectified only if u try to get over it.

K- Hmmmm

T- (wiping his tears) so Mr.Cry baby stop crying

Kunj smiled a bit and playfully slapped her cheek nd pulled her into a hug.

I just hope u all dint feel it was Bakwas. Coz I felt it to be very bad.

Affa di I tld u I am posting this only because of you. Nd agar bakwas laga toh dont worry aapki BAKWAS KI FACTORY ne likha hai so Bakwas hi hoga.

Pls comment below and share your views +ve or -ve. Both of them will only encourage me.

Will post the nxt part asap

Loads of Love

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  1. Aanya_pandey

    Soo cute that fight.. n that bathroom romance.. and kunj’s guilt loving that all scene

  2. SiyappaQUEEN

    Hii kruti or rather i should address you as kruti dii….
    Your silent reader commenting for first time none either than me. So want to tell you that you’re an amazing writer. I loved your writing. Waise i posted qn os please read it if you have time…

    Do comment.. So friends? ☺

  3. Affaa

    Fathi I’m speechless yaar… U made me blush… Amazing… I was able to their dance yaar outstanding… Fathi I’m not saying to make u happy…our relation promise… U did amazing work… And pieces of writing ufff… Marvelous… Bathroom romance…. It was hot… I just loved it… Yaar… I don’t know how to appreciate u baby… Bakwas ki factory hahahaha… U did great work… Love you sooooooo much for posting this wonderful epi…

  4. Sohi

    Episode was romantic, funny, emotional etc
    Every scene was nicely described
    Plz post next episode soon
    Do continue

  5. Presha

    Hey kruti loved it yaar nd it wasn’t bakwas it was cute awesome nd what not

  6. SidMin23

    Kruti it was nice and kunj cooking ? for his twinkle was cute and the ways twinkle scare him ?? and twinj romance was cute.

  7. Chiku

    Woaaaah!! Its lovely????loved it. Sooooooo cute???????amazing.
    Post soon?☺️

  8. Woaaah;its nice n lovly
    plsssssssssss cont soon

  9. RUTU.....

    Awesome episode dear just loved it

  10. SidMin

    Hey how dare you call my BB’ s work bakwas? this episode was just too good
    Loved the cleaning romance? …. The food fight ? and the bathroom scene…. Kunj’s guilt could be felt ?
    Loved the episode ❤
    Love you and post soon ????

  11. Baby

    di………….shoooooo cute soooo soooo very cute☺
    really luvd it to death………
    hayye aapko kisne bola bdw dat u cant write romance haan……….
    well yeah…..u always leave it in between…..hehe
    bt d romance wass soooo sizzling n hot ufff….aag lag gayii☺
    luvd it soo very mch speechless who said it was bakwaas………
    loved it dancing n cleanig hahaha food fight everything was perfect……….☺
    love u lods♥♥♥
    post nxt asap☺☺☺☺☺♥τ☺☺♥☺♥☺☻☻♪

  12. SidMinTwiNj

    Hey fatu from which angle it seems bakwas to you haan? It’s amazing… Kunj cooking for Twinkle is so cute… Food fight is so ???? the song dancing and cleaning and the dance and romantic moments in between is really a cherry on the cake… Ufff that bathroom romance tho ?????❤❤❤❤???? post next soon…

    Love you ??

  13. Ramya

    Better u don’t call my frnd asked bakwaas factory bcoz she is my sweetness aur cutness ki factory
    Get dat
    N episode woowww it was so funny n adorable I loved it
    Dey were playing like anything
    Love u keep smiling

  14. Kritika14

    Hey Kruti! This episode was amazing, as usual! Hoping you’ll post the next one soon! Love you! x

  15. Simiyy

    Hey Di
    sorry for the late comment i have been very busy
    try to post the next one soon

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