Mohabbatein….Twinj ki (#21)

Hey lovely ppl…..kruti’s back…..nd as always late…..Sorry….Sorry….Sorry extremely Sorry
Kya karoon guys time is something which I lack d most in my life…..some how I manage to read all ur ff on my way to clg or way back home or during breaks….I have tried commenting on all d ff’s….Sorry if I missed any

And coming to d ff…..I m happy that u guys r liking it….but pls without any hesitation u can tell me if u arnt liking it…..I wouldn’t mind it

A bada wala THANK U to all d ppl who commented on my previous part…..nd even to d silent readers(if any)

Enough of bak bak…..ab direct epi….lekin usse pehle

Link to my previous chapter by chance if u missed it

Mohabbatein….Twinj ki(#20)

So lets begin with epi 21…….


Epi begins with Leela nd Usha entering Twinkle’s ward quarelling

L- nahi nahi mai nahi aa sakti( no no I cant come)
U- arre Leela ji aapki saheli hai vo itne saal baad mili hai….ek bar toh mil hi sakte ho na aap(leela she is ur frnd u have found her after many years….u can meet her atleast once)
L- mil leti agar yahan sab kuch theek hota( i would have met her if everything would have been fine here)
U- arre sab kuch toh theek hai….aur doctor ne bhi bola hai ki Twinkle theek hai( everything is fine…nd even d doctor has told that twinkle is fine)
L- haan par(but…)
(All d while they were walking in nd whole of there convo was heard by twinj who were trying to figure out what was happening)
T- maa…aunty stop it
K- haan ye kya bacchon jaise lad rahe ho aap log…nd pehle ye bolo kyun lad rahe ho(y r u both fighting like kids ….first tell us Y r u both fighting)
U- ab tum donno hi samjhao inhe(refering to Leela)( now u both only tell her)
T- haan lekin samjhana kya hai…????( yes…but what should we explain to her…???)
U- Kunj tumhe yaad hai Delhi wali Meera chachi( Kunj u remember ur delhi wali meera chachi)
K- haan…toh(so)

U- Unki beti Payal ki shaadi hai do din baad….invite karne ke liye kal video call kiya tha( her daughter payal is getting married after 2days….so to invite she had mad a video call ystrday)
K- toh…???(so…??)
U- unhone Leela ji ko mere bagal mein baithe hue dekha toh realise kiya ki ye unki College time ki bestfrnd hain( she saw leela sitting beaide me nd recognised her as her college bestfrnd)
T- what????
U- Haan….isliye unhone Leela ji ko bhi shaadi pe invite kiya hai taki vo shaadi bhi attend kar saken aur mulakat bhi ho jayegi( Yes… she invited her also to d marriage so that she can attend it as well as meet her)
T- iss mein kya prblm hai maa….???(what’s d prblm in this maa)
L- wah….tu cahti hai ki mai tujhe iss halat mein yahan akele chodke chali jaoon(wow…..u want me to leave u alone in this condition and go to delhi)
T- (a bit low tone) haan aur nahi toh kya( yes)
L- kya bola tumne(what did u just say)
T- arre kuch nahi….maa mai bilkul theek hoon ab toh doctor ne bhi bola na 3days ke baad back to home….aur mai kaunsa akeli hoon yahan Kunj hai Maasi hai Mahi Uv sab log toh hain yahan mere paas( nothing…maa I am perfectly alright nd even d doctors have told na after 3 days back to home……nd where am I alone Kunj Maasi Mahi Uv all r here with me)
L- lekin mere maan nahi manta( lekin I dont feel like leaving u and going)
T- baassss…..ab maan ko manao aur jaake packing karo warna mai sach mein khana aur dawai donno nahi khoongi…(fakes anger)(enough….just go nd do ur packing otherwise i will neither have food nor medicines)

After usha nd kunj convincing her a lot she agrees to go but on a condition that Twinkle wont show Tantrums for having food or medicine

Usha nd Leela smile at eachother

After watching Twinj enjoying with eachother d mothers plan something

L- usha ji aapko nahi lagta ye donno ek dusre ko maan hi maan pasand karte hain….????(Usha ji dont u think somewhere these two like eachother)
U- Haan Leela ji….lekin inko samjhyega kaun ki inki shaitani aur inki ladai sirf dosti hi nahi usse bhi baad kar hai( yes leela ji but who will make them understand ki their naughtiness nd their fights arn’t just friendship….but something more than that)
L-soo toh hai….hum bhi seedhe se jaakar nahi bol sakte….saaf saaf mana kardenge( thats true we cant even tell it to them directly…..they will deny it)
U- hmmmm
(After thinking for a while)
U- ek idea hai…..agar hum in donno ko kuch din akela chod den toh( theres one way what if we leave them alone for a few days)
L – Accha hai…par ye hoga kaise(its nice but hows this possible)
U- dekhiye leela ji 2din baad Delhi mein mere ek rishteydar ki shaadi hai….hum donno kuch din Delhi jaate hain….hum bhi kuch mazza kar lenge aur bacche bhi kuch….aap samajh rahi hai na( After 2 days theres a marriage of one of my relatives in delhi… we both can go to delhi for a few days….we can also enjoy a bit nd even d kids)
L-lekin aapke rishteydar ke yahan mai
U- toh kya hua….aap fikar mat karo….baas in bacchon ka soocho
L- haan rab kare ye donno apne dil ki baat bayan kar den……(😂😂bechari ladies they dont know kab ka bayan kar chuke hain)

Flashback ends———-

@Next day
Usha nd Leela have left for Delhi

Twinkle was feeling bored all alone in d Hospital
Kunj had gone out fr some work nd Mahi was busy with her phone talking to Uv… bechari twinkle all alone😔😔

After sometime a group of children enter into her ward with balloons nd chocolates in their hand screaming “Yaaaaayyyyaaaaa”
Behind them was our hero Kunj
The kids were actually d ones who stayed in their colony nd with whom twinkle had spent most of her time in d recent past

The kids start jumping around nd playing….twinkle couldnt play with them as she was adviced rest….after a while Kunj joins d kids nd he too turns into one
Twinkle eyes him lovingly

Haan aa o…

Main jaan ye vaar doon
Har jeet bhi haar doon
Keemat ho koi tujhe beinteha pyaar doon

Saari hadein maine meri, ab maine tod di
Dekar mujhe pataa awaargi ban gaye

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

[ Days passing by Kunj trying to keep Twinkle happy]

Aa o… aa…

Kya khoob Rab ne kiya
Bin maange itna diya
Warna hai milta kahaan
Hum kaafiron ko Khuda

[Kunj dances with d nurses….nd twinkle laughs at him]

Hasratein ab meri tumse hai jaa mili
Tum duaa ab meri aakhiri ban gaye

[Kunj feeds Twinkle a soup….she is constantly staring at him…..kunj asks what thru his eyes Twinkle replies nothing nd gives a flying kiss…..Kunj catches it and acts to faint…..Both of them burst into laughter]

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

Screen freezes on their happy nd smiling faces

So guys how was d epi….do drop down ur comments below…..if ur tooo busy a single word will also workout…..but pls comment for sure

Nd with regard to continuing d ff i will continue until i lack ideas just like I am lacking time now

Comment below nd share ur views….+ve or -ve both r whole heartedly welcomed
Sorry if there were any mistakes…coz I havent done any proof reading

Love u all


  1. SidMin

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    Kruti Loved it Awesome sach meh bechare ladies confession tho hogaya hai kab ka 😂😂
    But its good they are gone my Twinj can spend some good time together 🙂
    Post soon 🙂
    Love you 🙂

  2. Sameera

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    Hahahah kruti yaar sooo cute epi confession to already hogaya par koi nahi twinj ko privatr time milega wow yaar soo cute kunj coming with children’s n everything

  3. Ranabulbul

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    Krutiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii it was beyond excellent I loved every bit of it and especially the song part…
    Loved it and confession kab ka hogya

  4. Anayaali

    Hi kruti
    I was a silent reader but i comment on ur ff plzzzzzzzzz don’t end ur ff i really loved it and epi it was awesome plzzz post cont soon……

  5. Chiku

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    Bichaari aunties. Samajhti hin nahi kuch 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
    Loved the episode
    It was so awesome cutieee
    I was going to ask u wen ull upload amd u did it today. It was a shock for me.
    Loved it sweetheart
    Tym mille toh jaldi upload karna
    Love u❤️

  6. sujina

    it was really wonderful n lovely
    uslee plan was fab
    n loved caring nature of kunj…
    post nxt asap
    love u…😙💕💕

  7. Romaisha

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    Yaar it was too cute!! 😍😍
    The mothers were just 😂.. Ahh ..
    Really amazing di!
    Can’t wait for u to post soon
    Love you!

  8. Affaa

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    Fathi…. What a epi… Fantastic yaar… So cute walli epi… I had a simle while reading ur epi… I love it sooooooo much… Outstanding.. Seriously ur very talented…
    If I’m saying ur personality ur mind blowing… Yaar I really love u… In less time.. U became very good sister… Take care

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