mmz…DARK:an action flick…chapter 5

Dark chapter -5

Hiiii everyone…thanks a ton for constant support…here is the next…

P.s. Although radhika n Neil are not a pair but they played most important roles in this ff…their secret will reveal little by little with time…coz it is a major secret which can change everything…one clue there is no enmity between them…so have patience…??

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Anuj was happy with Arjun’s work,so he wanted to congratulate his son…as he entered Arjun’s room he saw a sight which he never witnessed before…Arjun was deeply lost in his own thoughts…he was looking pale rather than happy…

anuj patted his shoulder n asked: ” what happened to u today”? U did great job yet u didn’t show any excitement like u did before…

Arjun stared blank n said: ” dad , for the first time I felt for someone but what if she liked somebody else”…” What will i do”??I’ll be all alone again..

Anuj smiled n side hugged his son: My dear son,u forgot that u r a soldier,how could u accept ur defeat without facing it.. Its a small thing..u know u have to do big things in future…n my heart says she doesn’t like anybody till now…

Arjun face glowed with happiness: U sure dad…yes I’ll definitely win at last…thanks for ur encouraging words…

Both hugged each other…Arjun thought m so lucky have u as my father..

Radhika sitting on dining table waiting for the question bombs from Ankush..to her surprise Ankush didn’t ask her anything…when she was about to go her room Ankush just said ” I’ll never force u angel,I know there must be some solid reason that u hide about him from us,I’ll wait till u feel comfortable n share with me”… Radhika felt sad inside but didn’t say anything…Ankush went to Dilip…

Neil was all alone thinking about the last encounter with radhika…he was still in a denial mode that his chasini refused to know him…that hurted him…he thought about their childhood when Neil was 13 n radhika was 10…neil was a very shy natured n too much afraid of anything,totally cowardly type…he was only child of rich parent who didn’t have any time for him…he used to be a bullied item in school…one fine day after facing some pranks he was crying constantly sitting under a tree just then a football hit him…he looked a sweet little girl come to him n asked her ball…before she went she noticed his tears n asked the reason…this was the first time somebody asked Neil the reason behind his sadness..he cried more hugging her n tell everything to her…little girl assured him not to worry till radhika is with u by showing her fists…neil laughed seeing her bravo nature n offered her some chocolates…she was happily dance around him…from that day radhika kept her promise though Neil couldn’t believe his eyes first when she punched some guys who bullied him n warned them…he was smiling reminiscing those past moments but his thoughts interrupted by his door bell…he was irritated n think who might be here at this hour of night…

He was shocked to see samaira n teji with that girl…they came inside without being welcomed…samaira told officer we need ur help…teji exclaimed we r sorry to disturb u this hour but the matter is very serious n sensitive…neil asked the reason…teji told the girl to say what happened with her…the girl said she was Maya Sharma,one model com actress…she was less known coz she did some supportive roles…she was sobbing n afraid enough she couldn’t proceed further…samaira tried to console her indicated teji to go on…

Teji said ” Maya was working under XYZ entertainment which was owned by son of information n broadcasting minister…but behind the lime light he used to take advantage of those less known people n s*xually harassing them…at first when maya refused to do that lowy work she was given drugs n later blackmailed by them with her video tape spreading online”… To keep her shame n respect she did it further…but last time she was abused physically n being planned to sent away by human trafficking network…but somehow she escaped n went to her home but they refused to accept her…they already got threat if they will keep their daughter their family will see the destruction…being scattered she was committing suicide when we found her…

Neil asked if she complained against them in police or not…maya said she went but police refused to file case against them…neil asked if she had any evidence…maya nodded negative but she told those video tapes were kept at safe locker in that hell…neil adviced her to file complaints against them again n wait for sometime…because if he will do anything without proof immediately then that may b back fire them…he told them to keep calm n proceed wisely…Neil thought how to get that video tape…

Next day news make upside down…samaira n teji broadcasted Maya’s news with enthusiasm but they didn’t know what danger awaits for them…neil warned them to take thing slowly n wisely but they couldn’t understand it…what Neil feared that happened…NDN just trying to gain its lost position but got notice of defamation n being sued…coz they have no evidence n other top medias spread the news in different way…they said Maya was a lowy girl who trapped rich guys n then blackmail them for money…

Samaira n teji got warning from their chief editor…he was a good person so he just let them go but advice them “do perfectly whatever u want to do,don’t let anyone to show fingers toward u”…sam n teji felt bad n they asked about amount of money for sue…their chief told them not to worry as he was ready to face consequences by himself…he thought I want to clear the sin which we committed six years ago…this is the golden opportunity to rectify…

Arjun was going to meet Neil…DM informed him the present PM’s interested to acquire new nuclear formula by which India can become more powerful n a respected country in the world…but it has to be secret between them as security is a vital matter…DM also said if possible keep radhika Mishra in ur security services n he would talk with nandini…Arjun was very happy that there is a chance he will meet his fire every day…only six people will have idea about nuclear energy test…it was a damn strict secret which they have to hold within themselves…one silliness, country have to pay high price…

Before crossing samaira house lane Arjun saw some goons tried to scare some people…he went near n saw Sam ,teji n Maya in danger…he saw the morning news n got the idea of attack…he warned the goons n told to leave all…but they ignored him and threatened him to stay away from the matter…later they had a big fight but it was a little difficult for him to handle around 25 peoples alone…teji,Sam n Maya also helped but that was not sufficient…when one of the goons was going to stab Arjun from back side ,a direct kick on goon n he fell down…Arjun shocked to see radhika there…she picked up the goon n said don’t u feel ashamed from attacking backside,be a man n show ur power…she gave a solid punch on his face…Arjun got double excited n fight back with 10x energy… they made fall down all most all goons…

radhika went near samaira n scolded her don’t u have any brain…before broadcasting a news specifically if that’s related to political power u have to check out nth time…ur silliness almost make all put in danger…Arjun also agreed with her…they were so busy with their talking they didn’t notice Maya went away from them n one goon going to hit radhika head but mean time Neil caught him n beat him mercilessly…he told how dare u to touch my chasini…all shocked n Arjun stopped Neil…the goons ran away but before they threatened that the game is not over now…neil went to radhika n caressed her face n said ” chasini r u all right, my house is near by,let’s go n do first aid”… Sam and Arjun both felt strange irritation inside them…Arjun thought if my fire is here to see this Neil??Sam thought I never see that this officer is interested toward anyone but this is something different,even he denied my friendship…

teji was in his dreamland coz his wish was if he could marry a police officer she would protect him from every danger…he looked at radhika without blinking his eyes…radhika pushed Neil’s hands n said I told u I don’t know u why u r after me…that’s quite shocking for Sam seeing Neil begged someone…neil tried to explain but got interrupted by teji that Maya is missing…all went to find Maya..they saw her standing near the same bridge but this time she was going to suicide by cutting her nerves…radhika pulled her n threw the paper cutter n give two solid slaps her…every one is shocked…neil tried to say something she signed to stop…

Radhika: What do u wanna proof,that u were a culprit not victim…if u will commit suicide then they can prove that they are right…

Maya crying: What can I do?? They snatched everything from me n today my character got smashed…

Radhika: U should have think that before u took ur job…why can’t girls b strong I can’t find any logic…if u didn’t do wrong then why should u get death…its them who should get punishment…don’t u have that little patience…

Maya: I have but u don’t know their power…they can do anything…

Radhika: They’re powerful but they are not almighty…suicide is a temporary solution for permanent problem…try to fight,m sure u will get justice…think about other girls who will be protected by this…

Neil: Yes ,don’t worry…we have to find out that video tape n give them their punishment…

Arjun: We r with u,its not involved a single u,its more than that…they are trying to create mess inside our country which we will never tolerate…

All went to Neil’s home for discussing further about their measures…they didn’t noticed someone listened all their conversation n transferred the news to other side…a devilish smirk crept in him….

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Precap: More danger…a trap…mask man entry

I just tried to portray the reality of today’s…don’t know how u people u liked it but I want all should be aware of what’s going on nowadays…do let me know ur views…

Credit to: Rosie

34 comments

  1. sammy

    Rosie di …aap kya ho ..nahi aap ho kya… Rosie di….now iam damn sure ki aap dusre planet se ho .. i mean I can never write like this…..just one thing di …telly updates is very very very…… …………………….very lucky to have you. . Jab bhi yeh ff upload hoti hai to bad lagta hai khatam na ho ..love u a lot di…di now I will surely steal your brain .. lol haha:-) 🙂 🙂

    • Omg ….Sammy m human being but what are u..u placed me on higher…n my brain…ur is more better in than mine…anyway m highly obliged dear…thanks a lot ??

  2. Supriya.

    Dil kyun Mera shor kare idhar nahi udhar nahi aapki ore chale…..lol m gone crazy after reading this di….aap ho kya di?…..m sure a supernatural thing…..wonderful update….. Loved Arjun a lot……raneil bond z making me happy nd curious at the same time…..plz reveal everything soon…..when z the next one?……love you….muaaah….tc

    • Dil mera dhadkana band kiya…pucho kyun…ur appreciation made that…thanks supu dear…can’t promise when will update…?? but very soon

  3. Roma

    Awesome, wowwww Rosieeeee lovely episode. …loved it soooooooo muchhhhhh. ..arjun worried for his fire…insecure with neil n rads relation….awwww…I loved anuj’s support for arjun…..neil’s fb with little rads was sooo cuteeee, she was macho girl in childhood too…lol…very lovelyyyy scene…maya’s story n fear do resemble todays reality…ardhika saved sam teji n maya….woww…loved rads words as suicide is not the solution of the problems…we should fight back for justice not end the life to escape from humiliation…..raneil bonding is lovely. .both arjun n sam felt awkward. ..lol……o my goodness TEJI fell for rads !!! …lol…rolf……love you sweetheart. ….you nailed it as always…..you’re doing marvellous job by making us smile while conveying very serious msg here….hat’s off to you my dear….tumhari sense of humour ka jawaab nahi……keep it up honeyyy. ..will wait for next episode. ..love you loads. …muaaaaahhhhhh ♡♡♡♡♡♡ 🙂 😉 🙂

    • Diii ….my sweet di…i love to read ur comments more than my ff…u r such a sweetheart….m running out of words for u….sweeeettiiiieeeeee diiiii…i loveeeeeee u sooooooooo much…?? always b happy…

  4. Gianna

    Omg omg omg Rosie everytime the story gets better and better i just love the thrill in this story. U give me an adrenaline rush everytime i read ur updates. Anuj is such a cool dad love him so much. So Radz helped rotlu from his bullies wow couldnt have imagined this. Teji wants to marry a police officer who will protect him LOL. Loved the fighting sequence and eveey other part of the update. Love uuuuuuuuuuuuuu kisses and hugs for u. Stay blessed.

    • Oh my my …giu baby thanks a lot…b cool…rotlu n chasini secret has a more way to go…lol …my teji…what I made him ??

  5. Sv

    Rosie that was a power pack. I felt like i was electrocuted. Im jumping as you know me how im an action movie maniac. I donno what you are going to do but i want more and more action sequence like this one. I just loved it to the core. Radhika is so rocking. Loved it. So Neil and Radhika were friends from childhood . Im really curious to know more. Arjun and his fire wow loved the name fire. she is seriously fire and the fight which radhika does and arjun gains 10 times more power god i enjoyed to the core .love you so much darling. Come up with more actions . I love you my dear. You are soo my twin. Love you always bear my hugs and kisses too.

    • Hey my twin I’ll give u more actions in future…totally 10x extra…lol…radz. Rocked here…raneil bond is very strong..m glad that u liked the name fire…??

  6. hey Rosie darling Muhhaaa for you..u brilliantly described the real situation of showbiz industry.. how girls struggle.. i liked Radhika too much in this ff..she is no more lachar bichari..she’s tough..we girl must be like her..aa u said Raneil bond has secret which will change everything making me more curious now..can’t wait..Loved this epi soo much..you r superb dear?? hey rosie like radhika u too knw karate?? hehe..love u.tc

    • Thanks heroine…lol…i made radhika macho girl…i wish I could have some skills like her…but m head strong girl…no karate I know…??

  7. rosie darling its fab fab fab darling ?? loved it ? rads s superbbbbbb? dat too in flashback of raneil ✌? how she explained to b a strong. girl?? so now nesam n aradhika ll slove dat part ✌? waiting for dat darling??

  8. Gauri

    Rosie a tight hug for …this was brilliant….beyond my imagination ….you have a fantastic story…so brilliantly written…The way you are bringing the characters together…u stole my heart…don’t know what more to say…a big hug for you and million blessings 🙂 bas aisi hi khaniya likhe jao…hum padhte jaynge 🙂

    • Thanks abha dear..every time I saw ur comment my face glowed like 1000 volt bulb…tight hug for u…?? I stole yr heart…lol..m jumping ?

  9. Sweetie

    Rosie.. First a big hug to you.. 🙂 You showed the reality very nicely.. Many times people see the world with tinted glasses.. You are taking off those glasses and showing the reality.. 😀 I just love you for that.. <3
    Anuj is such a cool dad.. Arjun is really a lucky man.. 🙂
    I liked the equation between Ankush and Radhika.. He didn't force her to share something which she isn't comfortable with.. 🙂 love the bro-sis combo and their equation.. 😀
    Teji and Sam.. Josh me aake hosh kho baita dono ne.. 🙁 They tried to telecast something which they didn't have proofs.. Uff.. They should have listened to Neil's words..
    Arjun fighting the goons and Radhika helping him..Cool.. 🙂 What Radhika told to Maya is absolutely true.. If she commits suicide she is giving the opposition a power to insult her character.. I just love Radhika's character over here.. Maya is a victim and she should stay strong for her bright future and many other girl's future too..
    Hehe.. Meanwhile Teji is in La La land with Radhika.. Bacchu bachke rehna tumse pehle Arjun kadaa hai line pe.. 😉
    Now who's this mystery man?? Does he belong to the Minister son's gang??
    Mystery is getting intense with each passing update.. 😀 Keep writing 🙂
    Stay blessed and lots of love dear 🙂 <3

    • First a very big thanks sweetie…u just satisfied ur name…though u appreciate me a lot m not that much deserving yaar…you are so good that’s why u told all that things to me…a tight hug for u…just wait for mask man..we will see that…will post soon…it’s not a big ff…so I will end within 15-17 chapters…love u…??

  10. aastha

    Its superb di…………….I love this ff sooooooooooo much…………happy that Ankush didn’t force her to share her bond with Neil………………Arjun and his dad’s scene was really nyc………….most of the time its the girl who falls in love first and she is the one who thinks this stuff…………..bt I’m happy that you brought a change……….I felt really sad for Neil…………the FB was really cute……..loved ra-niel bond……………….sad that Sam’s and Teji’s plan to expose the guilty backfired………it always happens………..few days back you might have read the newspaper about the murder of a boy……poor boy he was killed by some minister’s son just bcoz he overtook his vehicle………..and the police have not been able to punish let alone capture the guilty……………..loved Rads stund………….ad her dialogue to Maya……………….

    • Aasthu dear first of all a big thank u for supporting me regarding this plot…yes I heard that boy case….so sad…now a days laws lost its own dignity…argh…m really pissed of with all these horrible things…lots of dear??

  11. feby

    di … u know me… iam already a detective trying out to figure out such issues as human traficking and s*x racket….and iam damn happy tat u showed it through tis…all of thm know it..but everyone r soo much afraid to bring those culprits to public…but i can tell 100% tat these ppl can grow upto this level only with the help of some of our legislative and judiciary bastards… evn my secret research on all these r done without the awareness of my parents…i have started my work too wid the help of one ngo…i dont know i have to tell my parents on this or not..but as a citizen i want to help these girls… those ngo ppl who accepted my wish asked me to tell this to my parents..but no..they will restrict me…i know tat…. i know..all prefer to b in safer side..and many ppl take out their agony through such ffs and blogs..iam proud on u tat u took atleast tis small step to make us all aware of this….ok…now let me tell abt plot…lol…arjun seeing his fire before him…lol … soo interesting…and u know…i was mad for reading it…and as soon as it got posted i read it but didnt comment ;-p neils new behaviour towards chashni is soo cute..but radz avoiding his rohtlu is also sad…and the ending whn all join their hands as a united group was soo good to c… it was awesome….

    • Oh my feby baby u also know how much m proud of u…u initiate n took some measures in such a tender age…get ur parents support dear…the thing u r doing nobody even dare…u r very little to me but seriously I wanna salute u for such bravery…u will be always my little cute bravo girl like rads here…?? do continue ur work…god bless

  12. aastha

    Now a days crimes against women are at peak……..you know y ???? this is what my Sir shared it with us………….after reading you too will agree to it…………..the guy who associated with Abhaya case told to Lesslie Udwin the lady who directed the documentary ” India’s daughter” ….that Jyothi was a bad type of girl a sl*t coz she was wandering at the dead of ni8 through the streets…with a guy….he lived in a slum when he was little and his mom always used to give him a glass of milk b4 bed while his sis got only half………….this made him believe that men are above women and they are to be ruled………that’s the reason he brutally killed her and he said that he doesn’t regret it…………….this documentary was a revelation of “India- the land of different cultures” plight………..that’s y this was banned in India……………my Sir told that we should stop giving reservations to women…..this reservation system makes them feel that they are weak and that they needed the supporting hand of someone else…..and without that they couldn’t survive…………..moreover women is sometimes presented as a commodity that could be bought……..she is most of the time presented as half naked in ads………if you observe you’ll understand……….for example, in the ad of snikers why should that actress be presented that way ??????? what relation does her dressing style have with hunger ??????? and they say she becomes a heroin when she is hungry…..but who said a heroin should be dressed that way ??????????………I just don’t get it……………and the rules of the country should be made strict and every citizen should follow them……………..a few days back I read a post in face book that for eating beef a person goes to jail for 5 years and for rape case just 3 years………indeed cows are safe in this country than women……………

    • Aasthu dear u r so right…a cow is safer than women here…hope I could have some talent n power like rads…i told u that secret that radhika is my dream character…laws should b very tight…m agree with your that dressing scenes…when u made add on food items what is the necessity to show off ur body n that too girls…government should take some strict measures…n m agreed with ur teacher view….m blabbed much…

      M waiting for ur ff…not to forget that ??

  13. Jessie

    Superb story yaar.. Rosie.. u are truly talented to bring a action flick n u dont know how much I love rads here…she helped roltu from bullying?.. how cute…???. Always love d entry u give for Rads.. Haa.. Arjun is all lost in fire. Lol..I want rads also to be impressed.. Teji.. teji… Rofl.. Rofl… wants his gf to protect him.. Gosh… awesome thought ya.. I literally burst out all giggling… Waiting 4 nxt update…

    • Thanks a ton Jessie…rads is a power pack…she will impress later…lol…me also laughed thinking about teji…lots of love ??

  14. Woowwww…amazing…excellent. ..brilliant…lovely.,.awesome epi…I think these words are not enough to compliment ur ff…get words while reading ur story….iam surprised radhu’ s Angelina jolie avatar….she has shown incredible range in her role in this story….u give ur characters equal rights importance which is nice….precap superb…iam in curious now…can’t wait for next epi….keep rocking dear as usual…love u lot ….tc…muaaaahhhh…

    • Thank u very much Susi dear…i m always waiting for ur review…m not that much deserving how u give me credit…rads Angelina Jolie…lol…will post soon…u always been a great support for me…i mean it…lots of love dear…will post soon..??

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