MMZ-Written on Stars!! (Chapter 14)

Chapter 12.2
Sam’s POV
As I descended the stairs, I watched his eyes, they were examining me carefully. I had never saw Neil looking at me that way earlier. He was blinking his eyes in surprise that I was the same women who was his best friend from years.

When I reached the bottom stairs, he walked forward and slipped his arm around me in hug.

“You are looking extremely gorgeous, Sammy…..” he whispered near my ears

I felt tingling sensation which clearly means I was blushing. He handed me bouquet of flowers.

Really??? Neil and Flowers??? Did I was dreaming it?

HE never gave anybody flowers ever…cause girls ran behind him it didn’t required him to be romantic…But he brought flowers for me…OHHH God!! This guy could be death of me….

They were white roses wrapped in violet ribbon..Matching with my dress…

When shock were off..we took selfiees…groupees….and selfiees and more…After our unending photo session we all off with our respective partner.

Neil opened his car’s door for me like a perfect gentlemen…he pulled his car on drive way….

My parents were waiting for us as we reached at my home…My mom was all weepy and blubbering about how her little girl grown up and how she used to pull my hairs in ponytail while I was in KG..After clicking more pictures with them we leave.

We arrived at college at seven, he escorted me towards auditorium.

Tonight, auditorium hall wasn’t old but decorated beautifully like they shows in movies. White lights twinkled like stars and walls were covered in dark cloths and spread silver ribbons which a glitter resembles to starry night.

We went in, I met Radz, Nandini, Sid and Arjun . We really talked for so long and then we heard Mrs. D’Souza, announce the voting for Mr and Miss of Year. We went and voted, waited for result. The dance would gonna start after result. I know Neil would be the Mr. of the Year cause girls were drooling over him since we entered the party and I bet that Lara would be Miss of the year. And eventually he will spend whole night with her..Never mind Sam…

Some people started dancing but I was standing in a corner as I don’t want to embarrass myself falling on my face due to this heels.

“ Excuse me….”

The whole crowd went silent when we heard Mr. D’Souza again. All’s attentions were on her who was standing at center of the dance flower as everyone cleared the dance flower.

“It’s glad to announce the Mr. and Miss of the Year..Our Mr. of the Year is Neil Malhotra

The whole hall broke in a big round of applauds, especially from our group. I could see Lara from corner of my eyes standing and adjusting her dress , getting ready for her name to be announced.

Mrs. D’Souza continued.

“ This year’s Miss Night is Miss Samaira Khanna….”

The hall burst into a loud applaud and many whistles broke out as well. I was frozen but then Radz poked me in the side.

“Go on…Sam…”

I walked slowly towards Neil. I could see Lara glaring me like I snatched something from her which was rightfully her. I stepped besides Neil and Mrs. D’souza placed Tiara on my head. I felt Neil slipped his hand into mine.

“Now it’s time to dance…and the officially beginning of Night to remember …”

It was then music started. Neil pulled me towards the centre of the dance floor and he pulled me close to him. He would notice that my heart was pondering at the speed of light.

Dhak.Dhak.Dhak.

He leaned close to me and whispered into my ear.

“You deserved this Sam. Stay close to me. I won’t let you fall…”

He knew what I was thinking and worried for..And then lyrics started..

Tu aata hai seene mein
Jab jab saansein bharti hoon
Tere dil ki galiyon se
Main har roz guzarti hoon

Hawaa ke jaise chalta hai tu
Main ret jaisi udti hoon
Kaun tujhe yun pyar karega
Jaise main karti hoon

As we danced, he pulled me closer to him and he wrapped his arm around my waist. I wrapped my arm around his neck and then I laid my head on his shoulder, living the moment.

Meri nazar ka safar
Tujhpe hi aake ruke
Kehne ko baaqi hai kya
Kehna tha jo keh chuke

The words of song echoed in my mind and they talked deeply in my heart, the heart which craved for this man that held me in his arms.
Meri nigahein hain
Teri nigahon ki tujhe khabar kya be-khabar

Main tujhse hi chhup chhup kar
Teri aankhen padhti hoon
Kaun tujhe yoon pyaar karega
Jaise main karti hoon

As the song wrapped up , I looked into his eyes and he was staring at me already. I could see the look that I never saw before. I couldn’t resist myself anymore. I leaned up and placed a chaste kiss on his cheek. He looked taken back, but he hugged me tightly.

“Thank you Neil for giving me one of the best nights of my life…” I said as mere whisper that anyone couldn’t hear it except him

He looked down at me, his black orbs shinning with shimmer in it..

“No Sam..Thank you for everything….”

The rest of the night was very fun. I danced with Radz and Nandini doing our crazy steps on the peppy songs while boys watching us and laughing then later they too joined to our craziness. Though Neil and I were spent most of the time together. I wondered at that. May be he was protecting me from Tony’s constant lustful stares as if he was waiting Neil to leave me alone.

At midnight the dance was over and after taking our dinner we left the hall. Neil again escorted me to his car.Today he was being perfect gentlemen. Prerna aunty would be proud if she saw him like that. He talked with me entire time. He also told me how he had heard Lara talking that she gonna be Miss of the year before the party to everyone…. I laughed at that.

He pulled the car to halt as we reached to my house, I slipped out of my heels and walked bare footed holding them in hand, but he held me by holding my wrist and pulled me closer.

“I’m very happy Sam that we spent this night together….” His voice was little bit shaky.

“Me too Neil….i think I should get inside..It’s too late na..I’m hell tired as I went through the whole craziness to get this look..”

“ You were most beautiful girl in there tonight. No one could compare to you…” his eyes sparkled as he spoke…

“I think you are not exaggerating , Neil “ I laughed as he rolled his eyes.

He leaned and wrapped arm around me in hug

“What I am I do to you, Samaira Khanna?”

I pulled myself as close as I could to him, I enhaled his cologne. I never wanted to forget this moment.we stayed like for I don’t know how long.But for me it would never be long enough.

“ Good Night , Sammy..” he whispered in my ears and then I felt his lips brushing against my cheeks….God, I was about to faint…

I could feel warming of my skin that I went crimson…

“Good Night, Neil…”

I watched him go back to his driver seat and drive away. I reached up to feel the skin that his lips had just touched. He kissed me!!!

Stop it, Sam..It was a kiss like you gave to your loved ones, not a girlfriend. But it didn’t matter to me at that moment. The fact was that his lips touched my skin. I couldn’t help but to chuckle at the thought …It was indeed A Night to Remember…….

As I went to my room after sharing the party events with mom and dad, I leaned on bed, I realized what he had done for me..Neil made this night special for me that I would carry it always . No matter where my life would take me but I will keep this night with me…The dancing, his arm around me, chaste and innocent kiss he gave me that I truly remember till last breath of my life……Yes, He gonna be in my heart till My Last Breath….

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Oh poor Sam……Please tell me guys how’s this?
Actually I had plan to come with double chappy having Neil’s POV..But I coundn’t wait more so I’m posting it…
I m half way with Neil’s POv..we are gonna find out what he was thinking, especially when he gave Sam that quick kiss….So you guys Excited for Next…
Special Thanks to Satz, Roma di, Jess and Sree for suggesting for this beautiful song….
Love you Alll…

34 comments

  1. Jessie

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    Deeeppppzzzzz……!!! Teddy hugs dear…!! I was like when will WOS be posted….u read my mind???? Muahh…Judwa behena….u rocked with ur unique style….!! Sam n Neil…and her pov…I was like no girl…don’t break down…but last part worked like crowning ceremony…what1 have you done to me Neil…A exact place to say that dialogue n to feel it…. perfect…yaar…this is the tough place…bringing simple things as A adorable one…you did it..!! My fav chap next to where Sam proposed him…chalo…here After WOS will be a benchmark on Nesam for me….!! Sam POV on Neil before party n her mom cute…then where she says she enjoyed with Nandu n Rads…perfect…!! She is gonna leave them…it’s like treasure of memories..!! Loved it to the extent it cud exceed….love u loads….TC…truly my judwa u are.muaaahh…😘😘😘😘

    • Dipika

      |Author

      Goddddd jesssss u got me blushing sooooo much… M so on the top of the world with ur gaga praising.. God… I m soooooo happy… Benchmark.. God this soo big words for me.. Thank u sooooo much dear.. I always look forward to read ur feedback on my work.. N u aleays makes me smile, blush wide.. Love u lots JB
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      😍 😘 😘 😘 😘

  2. Jewel

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    Wow this is superb dipika… Feeling so happy for Sam. May be Neil done all this as a friend bt he gave a beautiful night for her, a night to remember. When I was reading that miss night, I was praying that plz don’t select Lara, if Lara win Sam will hurt. When Sam got that, I was so happy. This night nothing bad happened to her….. Now eagerly waiting for neil’s pov. I am really excited. Bt I know, may be he kissed her with some feeling, then also I am sure that he will cover that in his friendship. And at last he will conclude that Sam is his bf nothing more than that, he is an idiot. Then also I want to know what was there in his mind when he saw Sam and kissed her…. Waiting for that…. Post it soon….

    • Jessie

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      Shona…I too demand with you girl….I too wanna know what was in his mind when he saw sam and kissed her….waiting together…heeh…Deepz…I am joining hands with Jewel demanding this… 😉

    • Dipika

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      Jewel my darling… Thank you soooop much this amazing words.. U guessed right.. He is gng to do the same u said.. Yup he is truly an idiot.. No doubt.. Lol… Love u lots dearyyy
      😘😘

  3. Sathya

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    Wowwwww m blushing hard thinking about Neil’s behavior today. The most expected night is it…. Oh gosh… Dipu m. N loss of words now….. What an episode yar… In between the song the lines u narrated Sam feelings are way ahead dear…. A perfect professional writing is reflected today…. I m totally madly n love with today’s chappy. NESAM IS Mr n Ms night of the year. Awww Neil is on right path now… Wooooooo… Love u dipu darling… 😍😍😍😍

    • Dipika

      |Author

      Satzzz darling im. In madly love witg ur words.. U makes me. Float in dreams by ur sooo. Lovely words.. Thank you sooooo much for ur unconditional love darling.. Love u lots 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍

  4. Brin

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    Outstanding episode, the prom night is beautifully written, I enjoy reading it, Dipika you nail the prom night, well done. 🙂

  5. farjana

    Mind blowing episode.. i think this is only the most beautiful night ever.. was waiting for wos for a long time.. now have to wait for Neil’s pov.. please post soon.

  6. Meen

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    Amazing dipika…..what a prom night…..lovely…girl I’m literally waiting for Neil’s POV…..please make it soon….muuuuha

  7. Gauri

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    The more I read The more I fall in love with this story….this really made me emotional Dipu….this dance was like Cinderella going for the Royal ball…and getting a chance to dance with the prince….so lovely so breathtaking and so amazing …love you Dipu for writing this one 😘😘😘😘😘

    • Dipika

      |Author

      Ohhhh comparing to cindrela god angel u hav words with u huhhh… U always encouraged me like anything.. Thank u sooooo much dearrrrr… Love u lots 😍 😍 😍 😍

  8. Aasthu

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    Hey Deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu…..missed me???????????????????

    A very good chappy………wow Neil kissed her!!!!!!!!!! but he is an idiot……he will not understand his love for her…………..he’ll only understand it in the last moment…..maybe a se b4 Sam enters the flight to GOA……………oh the ball was really nyc……………..I’m happy that Sam won the prize…….

    Deepu are you very busy now??????????? will u have time to write at least an OS on ardhika?????? plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz??????????????????????????

    Love u a lotttttt……………………..missed u a lotttttttttttttttt………………………so many hugs to you….(take in a deep breath and then take my hug…..otherwise you may suffocate)….soooo many kisses toooooooooooooooooooo………………..mmmmmmmmmmmmmuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa…………………………….(ur face will be covered with my kisses…..don’t wipe it away)…..

    • Dipika

      |Author

      Ohhhhhhh my aasthu darling 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 thank you sooooo much for all this lovely words.. M dancing on moon.. Are i m lik bit busy but as i will b free i will write os or ff on aradhika.. On ur demand.. Lol…. Ur kissed r sweet thy wouldn’t suffocate me.. Love u lots 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍

      • Aasthu

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        thannkyouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu……………………..today is indeed a wonderful day for me………….Deepu its fest in my clg….and guess what? my friends and I bunked the afternoon section and went to roam about……we went to a shop….had lots of fun………….tomorrow also we are going out…………………..yippie………………….when’ll you be free???????? I’ll wait for that day …………..mmmmmmmmmmmmmuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh…………………….

    • Dipika

      |Author

      Awwww thats so grt. College life n that bunking session are always amazing… U had fun.. Wow… Buy something for me too.. Lol…little demanding… Hahah.. Hav fun blast today too… Ummm.. About me freeing.. I will always dear.. For u..

      • Aasthu

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        Hey Deepuuuuuuuuuuu………………..I will buy u a red velvet cake…….have u eaten it????? Today I went out with my frnds and had a plate of biriyani…………I norm don’t eat a plate………..oh nw I’m crawling like baby Pari in GAURI DI’S ff………….love u……..muahhhhhh…………………

        Deepu yest I wrote a swaragini few shots………..will u read it????? or are u busy???? Tday I’m gonna start writing mmz……after posting that I’ll post enemies frm childhood……I always want to come back with a bang……………like last time, this is also abt a girl who fought back………………….interested???????????

    • Dipika

      |Author

      Heyyyy aasthu wow red velvet cake… My mouth is dripping from. Water… Wow… N u had plate biryani.. Hahha.. Sounds u had so much fun… Yup i will definitely read ur ff.. Pls give link of ur swaragani ff.. N so excited for mmz n enemies frm. Childhood… Love u..

  9. Roma

    Dipsssssssssss….I’m going all crazyyyyy reading this beautiful amazing, marvellous, outstanding, stupendous, gorgeous episode. ….nothing could be better than this….u didn’t leave any stone unturned. …u nailed it my honeyyy again as always yet to the very perfection. …..awww…I was jumping in my mind reading neil’s reaction watching sam as gorgeous stunning princess. ….he became total gentle man n behaved so nicely…..she announced to be ms. of the year. ….wowwww. ..n that dance n sam’s emotions n feelings for neil…she wanted to steal all these precious moments n capture this treasure in her hearts very deeply……I was going through all of emotions ride with sam…..this song was so perfect for them n the lyrics fitted so well…..she kissed her cheek….n neil too seeing her veryyyyyyy differently. …n he kissed her cheek too…awwww…sooo pure n deep love…..all the feelings of nesam conveyed so beautifully. …u poured ur heart out….wowwww. ..muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug my sweeeeeetheart. …now I’m waiting for neil’s pov. …what’s going in his mind n heart seeing sam like in her stunning gorgeousness ….keep it up honeyyy . Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh. ..take care my lovely sweeeeeetheart darling sissyyyy ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ 😉 🙂 😀

    • Dipika

      |Author

      Roma diii god u made me speeches…. By ur sweet and loving words u made my day super rocking n grand…. Wow… Really…. U felt the every emotions of sam… Di u knw how to encourage motivate someone.. N i need this at this time… Reallllyyyy.. I love u loads di. For being my di n caring mr like swt child… 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 Thank you soooo much for Awsome words.. Love u lots 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍

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