MMZ – Mr & Mrs. MEHRA (Episode 3)

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So Radhika hates Arjun to the core and she has given two days time to decide about her marriage with Arjun. Will she accept the condition kept by Arjun? Or what will she do to make her brother happy?

Saral is a very good friend for Radhika and loves her deeply but secretly. Will his love stay like this and keeps him calm or will he turn wild coz of Arjun trying to snatch her from him.

About Ardhika’s past, Will Arjun stay quietly after getting insult from Radhika, his junior?

I think i am giving so much hook on this story…ok pls keep on reading to know more further about their story.

MMZ – Mr & Mrs. MEHRA (Episode 3)

Episode 2

http://www.tellyupdates.com/mmz-mr-mrs-mehra-episode-2/

Recap: Arjun kissed Radhika and first look on Ardhika’s past.

Ardhika thinks about each other and gets drowns themselves in their past. Radhika remembers Arjun’s condition on Marrying him makes her more angry on him. Both gets a tough time in remeniscing their moments and after a long struggle, they slept thinking of each.

Next day, as usual Radhika gets ready for her office and finds Neil in tension and Prerna in upset seeing him. She understands what it could be and she silently goes to dining table and starts having her break fast. She did not even look at Neil for once, even she feels guilty seeing her brother in sad coz of her, her bl**dy past stops her brother’s love and she is helpless in uniting his love. Before she leaves from there Neil himself calls her, “Radhika, will everything turn good?”

Rads feels bad seeing him, she goes to him, hugs him saying, “Keep faith. All will set right”

Neil smiles at her and both leaves to office, Prerna as an emotional mother shed tears seeing her kids supporting each other in their tough phase.

Neil drops Radhika in her office and drives to his. Radhika is stalking by someone which she feels some sharps glares on her, she turns towards the road and looks at the surroundings to find someone but she couldn’t find anyone. She shrugs he shoulder and goes to her office which is on 5th floor. She is upset from morning and couldn’t concentrate on any of her work. Saral who also works with her in the same office, observes her dull face, he goes to her place and drags her to the Adda to talk to her peacefully.

He makes her sit opposite to him and holds her hands in a way of supporting, “Radhu, what happened? Y r u looking so dull? I can’t see you like this yar. Pls what is happening in your life? And who is that guy, who came and dragged you forcefully? What’s your relation with him? Why he said that you are his family?” he is shooting his question continuously to her which makes her irritates more.

Rads holds her head and shouts,”Enough Saral. How many questions you ask? Infact, you are making me more upset and irritate with your questions”

Saral face fell listening her and he did not utter a word after that but just starring her sadly. Rads notices him and felt very bad seeing him, she rubs her forehead once and says, “I..am..I am really sorry Saral. I just spoke in angry…pls don’t keep it in mind. I understand your care for me … but pls don’t ask me anything , i can’t tell you all and it is my problem and i will solve it. I am sorry for saying this but i don’t want to say anything now”

Saral again joins his hands with her saying, “Look at me Radhu”

Radhika also looks at him instantly and he continues, “I LOVE YOU RADHIKA” with a smile on his face.

Radhika is shocked listening him and stammers, “You…love..someone”

Saral, “That someone is none other than you”

Radhika is now speechless and immediately takes her hands out from him and gets tensed. Saral looks at her tensed mode and gets worries seeing her, “Radhika, relax. I just told what is there in my heart and i am not expecting you to reflect the same. Just calm down. Don’t get tensed”

Rads, “Saral, i don’t have…that kind of feeling on you”

Saral, “I know it. I know it Radhika. I am not asking you to love me back but i just spoke my heart out. Is there anything wrong in that?”

Rads, “I don’t know but i am not in a position to think anything now. I wanna go from here”

Saral without objecting her gets up and shows the way, “Come let’s go. Even i have some work”

Rads feels guilty of seeing him gives a fake smile and walks with him. After they goes, a pair of eyes watching them from nowhere, comes and sits on the same place where radhika sat and it is none other than Arjun sipping his Ice coffee while starring Saral & Radhika going.

Soon, Radhika, Saral and other their colleagues has been informed to gather in the conference room for an important meeting. All gets puzzled seeing their chairman there, he greets everyone and waits for them to get comfortable. All are surprised seeing one more new person beside their chairman, except two.

Radhika and Saral are the two persons seeing the new person who sits beside their chairman starring them with a cold attitude. Radhika feels like her whole earth is spinning around her and Saral, his face becomes pale seeing Arjun starring Radhika continuously and Radhika who is standing in shock looking at him.

Chairman, “Welcome my dear employees, i am here to inform you all about the changes happened in our company at management level. I am so happy to introduce you all our New Managing Director of this company, Mr. Arjun Mehra who bought almost all the shares of this company and becomes the whole sole owner of this company. Please give him a warm welcome in our family”

All gives him a huge applause except Radhika, even Saral understands the situation but Radhika is completely lost in starring him knowing his plans to get her at any cost. Arjun smirks and gets up saying, “Thank you so much for your applauds. I am new entry to this venture and hope you all will support me in acheiving the target. I expect each and everyone’s coordination and team spirit in your work. All the best for you and for me to get what i want”

Arjun finishes his speech and glares Radhika without any expression on her face and she only knows the complete meaning of what he meant at the last. Soon all dispersed from there to their work. Radhika rushes out, takes her seat breathing heavily remembering Arjun’s face. Saral goes to his place but his gaze is on Radhika all the time. Soon, she completes her work and gets ready to leave…Saral comes to her and offers his company till parking. She agrees and both leaves together which is watching by Arjun from his cabin. All the time, his gaze is only on Radhika and her activities. He too immediately leaves from there and follows them to the parking area.

Saral, “Radhu, i guess you should come with me. I will drop you home..you are not in a position to go alone”

Rads already in irriation replies him, “Saral pls, don’t treat me like a kid. I know how to handle myself and pls leave me alone”

Saral holds her hand saying, “I won’t leave you alone Radhu”

Rads, “For god sake, leave me Saral. Why are you behind me like this? I really need to be alone”

Saral, “But Radhu..i can’t see you in pain”

Rads, “Please Saral, leave me..leave my hand”

Saral, “No”

Saral and Radhika both gets jerk listening another voice beside them, “Leave her hand Saral”

Arjun who shots him angrily looking at his hand on Radhika’s wrist, his body gets stiffen seeing it and he folds his fist to control his anger.

Saral is shocked but still he holds her hand and more tightly than before which makes radhika winces in pain, and that’s enough for Arjun to provoke his anger. He rushes to them and pushes Saral from her and takes her hand in his and looks at the place where she feels the pain.

Radhika immediately removes her hand from his and is about to walk but this time Arjun stops her saying, “Come with me, i will drop you home”

Rads screams, “For god’s sake, why don’t you let me leave peacefully. I don’t want to go with anyone and just leave..PLSSSSS”

Rads started walking and Saral calls her name and try to go behind her but Arjun stops him saying, “Leave her alone Saral. I don’t want you to be around her from now on”

Saral is shocked seeing his warning and Rads stopped listening them, she turns back seeing them and walks towards Saral. She takes Arjun’s hand from him telling, “You have no right to stop Saral. He is my friend and pls maintain your limit with us. Now you become our boss and that doesn’t mean that you can control us anywhere. PLs be away from me”

Arjun smirks, “The only reason i bought this company is just to be with you Radhika, otherwise i don’t have any plan or wish to buy this poor one which is running at loss. How can you ask me to be away from you?”

Rads fumes listening him and walks away from both cursing her fate. Arjun turns to Saral and warns him again, “So you love Radhika is it? Keep it as one sided only, she will never gonna be urs and do remember that don’t be around with her always”

He goes to his car and drives from there leaving Saral at loss of words.

Radhika is seen walking towards her lane which is little isolated but she doesn’t think anything and lost in her own thoughts. She gets scared when she is grabbed by a a strong arm and dragging behind the tree. She struggling to get herself free from the grip but she couldn’t and she realised that the hands are moving on her body in a disgusting way and she wants to push him from her. She sees the man in hooded sweatshirt and his face is not even visible in that dark, she tries to remove it but he holds her hand tightly at her back which makes her screams in pain.

They both hear a vehicle sound there and soon rads biting his hands on her mouth and he immediately takes it out from her, Rads pushes him on the ground and runs towards the vehicle, she waves her hands in front of the vehicle which turns out to be the car and the person gets down is none other than Arjun. After seeing him there, she feels immense relax, runs to him and hugs him tightly, clutching his shirt tightly so that he will not move away from her and in sobbing voice calls his name, “Arjun”. Arjun’s body gets stiffen hearing his name from her mouth and he too reciprocate the hug rightly.

Arjun looks at her once, her torn dress on her hands, nail marks, her messed up hairs, he guessed it what would have happened? His anger rises in peak and removes her from his embrace asking, “Who the hell did this to you?”

Radhika is crying badly and in between her sobs, “I..i..don’t know. Some one pulled me towards that tree…he was forcing himself..he..he touched..me” and she finished the last sentence after bury her face in his chest.

Arjun holds her so close to calm her down and takes her to the place where she points keeping herself in his embrace still.

They did not find anyone there, he takes her with him and makes her sit in the front seat comfortably and covers her body with his jacket and he takes the driver seat. Radhika is still in fear and her hands are shivering, Arjun holds her hands tightly saying, “I am here with you. Nothing will happen. Just Relax”

Radhika just nods her head and suddenly her face expressions changed and asks, “BTW, how you are here? At this time?”

Arjun now finds answer for her question and before he does, she continues, “Are you following me?”

Arjun raises his eyebrows saying, “Well, may be and that’s y i came on right time to save you”

Radhika smirks at him saying, “Who knows? It might be your another plan in getting me? This is not new for you right”

Arjun’s expression gets changed listening her, his nerves becomes so tight and he is burning in anger.

Rads observes him and turns her face to outside saying, “Don’t react much. I said the truth only.”

Arjun has get enough of all her taunting and he drags her to him so closely by holding her shoulders tightly, she is pulling herself away from him, but he make it very tought for her to get released from his grip. He almost gets her close and he leans on her almost completely which makes her to lean back on seat.

Arjun whispers angrily, “I won’t stoop so low to get you. You are precious for me Radhika, i won’t allow anyone to harm you and you know that too. How can you say that i did this? and do you really think that i permit that guy to touch your body? I would have separated his hands from his body if i found him there. And you too very well know about this, but still your bl**dy ego and hatred on me doesn’t allow to think anything good about me right”

Rads still in his embrace and in his strong grip replies, “You haven’t done anything good to remember”

Arjun’s lips covers with a small curve and he says, “I have done Radhika. I have done one good thing which we both can remember for our whole life”

Radhika blinks at him in a shock and she understands what he tries to mention, she slightly struggles to get free but he leans on her more saying, “Don’t forget that you became Mrs. Mehra long back”

Radhika’s body gets freezed listening him, her views just stares only on him and tears oozing from her eyes. Arjun feels bad seeing her tears, wipes it saying, “Give me one chance radhika, i will set everything right”

Radhika, “Betrayer will never get another chance in their life. You betrayed me Arjun. I will never ever forgive you in my life. I just hate you from the bottom of my heart.”

By saying this, she pushed him back when he loosens the grip and gets down from the car, with no delay she started running to her house without even looking back.

Arjun is shattered hearing her hatred towards him, he felt bad and says, “I will not easily accept my defeat Radhika. I will make you Mrs. Mehra again infront of our family again and that’s my promise.”

He consoles himself and says, “You need some shock treatment Radhika. Let’s get ready for the shock tomorrow”

He smirks and drives to the way radhika ran and sees her from distance that she is rushing inside her house. He relaxes seeing her safe and drives back to his home.

Precap: Radhika gets worry seeing Neil on talking to someone about his loss in business. Saral kisses Rads forehead and Arjun beats Saral.

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How is the chappy guys? Like or not? Today no flashback. But in next part, it will start with the flash back part only. Hope you all enjoyed it and thanks for reading. Now it is time to comment.

Author Note SILENT READERS:
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You know what, our silent readers are so naughty, i saw more than 35 comments for first chappy after asking no..no i should say the word “pleading” them to comment, Well i was really happy but it automatically went down to 20 on second chappy. I really don’t know what to say. Everytime i can’t give that note asking you to comment. You took time to read but not giving time to comment and that looks very wierd for me which makes me to lose interest in writing the ffs and that’s y i am taking long gap to write the next part or other ffs. You people are asking to post this, that..but i am nowhere seeing your comments. You guys can think why now all the writers giving the note, because we are putting our effort to write one chapter of not giving time to our family and friends, inturn we are expecting something from the readers too. when you feel lazy to comment then automatically we will also feel lazy to write. I don’t know even now, the silent readers understood or not…pls spend sometime in commenting to make the writers feels good. If you don’t like the story and that’s the reason u r not commenting means, pls say that also..we will try to make it good. After all we are writing for you all and just have it as GIVE & TAKE policy yar. I am to be frank, we are craving for your comments, pls come out from the nest being as a silent reader and mingle with us…we will be very happy to have you all in contacts.

I think i spoke too much..sorry if it hurts some one. I just spoke my heart out, hope you understand.

111 comments

  1. maddy

    hi.. this is like a treat for me..no words..how could u write this better…amazing writing skills..waiting for the next episode..update it soon dear..

  2. Crazy Girl

    Hi sisy.. hw r u?? Its been a long time dear… n by the way the episode was amazing… both luv each othr bt stil radhika cnt able to cme bck frm the past… dats so sad… am flng bad fr arjun… bt his attitude was awsme… i guess that man s none othr than its Saral.. i guess so… awsme wala episode…

    OMG Saral s kissing on Radhika forehead… I think Saral s gonna get black n blue frm Arjun for kissing his love lady lol… really sisy aftr reading precap am gtng more excited to read nxt chapy.. luvd it to the core… N luv u sisy… teddy hug for u for giving such a wonderful episode… update nxt one ASAP Sisy… Tc…

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Thanks a lot for ur lovely comments humera dear… About Saral I won’t say anything now n u ll know it soon. And yes ardhika past is something which rads hate to the core n u ll know it soon. Teddy hug to u dear n yep vl update next soon. 😍😍😍

  3. Aditisyam

    |Registered Member

    Finally u updated i ws thinking nd waiting that wen will u update awesome chapter no words to say minblowing nd the precap ws also good try to update regurlarly plzźzz nd update soon will be waiting nd cn u tell me in which class u r studying so dat i can call u by ur name or dii PLZZZZ CMNTTT

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Thank u soooooo much aditi… Yep I m updating somewhat giving at least two days gap… N yeah I m a working lady… So it’s ur wish how to call me. N thanks again for ur lovely comments 😃😃😃

  4. arti viswanathan

    Awesome and marvellous episode sathya dear… I lived all scenes… But plz don’t separate arjun and radhika yaar… I know its difficult for radhika to accept arjun again… And i dont want saral to marry radhika to spoil her life….

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Thank u soooooo much arti… Okay so don’t worry no separation track here since already they got separated… Don’t worry… Oh no how can saral be.. Vl arjun leave him alive if that happens 😂😂😉😉😉

  5. Kavya

    As usual awesome akka..can’t wait for arjun’s shock treatment..happpaaa ivalo possessive arjun..but we always love guys who are possessive right and arjun possessiveness makes him even handsome illa akka..keep on doing the great work:):)

  6. Jaan

    Amazing. Loved it. Sooo radhika and arjun are already married. Wow. i just loved the possessiveness of arjun towards radhika. Waiting for next part.

  7. Jewel

    |Registered Member

    sathya, the chapter is amazing, rads situation, i feel sad for her. arjun even though he is loving her but he troubling her a lot. Poor saral, by seeing the precap i am sure that arjun will beat him so hard. and arjun and radhika are already married?? no one know about that?? this arjun is rude, he is going to trouble neil to get rads back. he is doing all this to get her back or is there some revenge or something to her?? anyway he cares her a lot, even though she hate him a lot he makes sure that she is safe. the last part i liked a lot. Eager to what exactly happen between them… waiting for next….

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Thank u so so much jewel for ur detailed comments 😍😍😍 yep arjuns motive is just to get Radhika by any way… He will do anything to have Radhika I his life n whether it s for revenge or love… That’s an upcoming one dear….

  8. Brin

    |Registered Member

    Outstanding episode, what did Arjun do in the past that is making Radhika not to forget or forgive Arjun, eagerly waiting for the flashback, Sathya, you nail it, well done. 🙂

  9. Chashni

    Wow super ardhika scenes.poor saral.raneil bond was nice.update it soon.akka I read your darkness bends to light.be careful akka.someone may steal your story and can make a film.I assure that it will cross hundred days.lovu you akka

  10. Dipika

    |Registered Member

    Satzzzzzzz my darling this is sooooo sooooooo marvelous update.. I can’t get enough of it yar.. Wanna read one more time… Aradhika driving me crazy.. You asked na will saral turn vile now m
    💯 sure ki he gonna b obsessed lover. Lol… I never expect he will propose her… ARJUN TO ARJUN hai.. Lol.. Never change. Stubborn for his love.. So he brought all the company just to see radz n to be with her…n m damn sure that huddievman must b saral.. God i so wanted to punch hid face.. Arjun reached on time.. N i like that hug they shared forgetting their fight.. N what what what.. Radz already is mrs mehra.. How come tht happens… Now m so eager.. Precap ne to pahele hi impatient banaya hai.. N u r right satz we hav to always ask silent readers to comment.. N we spend literally all our free time in writing instead of doing anything othr work.. I hope now silent reader wikl turn up… Love u lots bahottttt…
    😘 😘

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Dipu darling…. Ooooohoiiii m. Jumping.. Pls stop me na… Wow ur line byeine comments makes me crazy n smile widely yar… Thank u so much dear… N about saral… My reaction is just😯😯😯😯😯 n yeah arjun can beat only arjun… No one can touch him when he is in possessive mode… Lol… Yar I too love that hug… Dipu m. Not get enough of ur comments… Love u sooooooooo muchhhhhh dear😘😘😘😘😍😍💓💓💓💓

  11. Myra

    |Registered Member

    Satzz akka….such a brilliant episode….omg….arjun truly and inly loves radhika…i mean, he bought a loss making venture for her….man, thats love…*giggles..*
    Hope saral doesnt turn obsessive once, ardhika gets united….neil…i feel sad for him….
    Love you loads….
    And update quick…

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Sweeto.. Thanks s s ton dear… Yep arjun in one stubborn creature doing all the madness to get his girl at any cost.. Yep Neil. Bechara guy.. But don’t worry rads won’t make her brother suffer… Love u 😍😍😍😍

  12. Vasuraj

    |Registered Member

    Wow wow… Its so fantastic sathya… Chance less ….. I m almost reading all mmz ff’s 😆
    Will try to comment
    About this chappy u nailed it … Hats off sathya

  13. Gauri

    |Registered Member

    Sathya the story is really interesting ….I am curious to know how Arjun betrayed Radhika…he loves her deeply ..that clear as crystal….now before I pull all my hair thinking please post the next one 🙂 Precap- Baapre – poor Saral ….post soon its difficult to wait and what about Krishna update waiting for that too… and yes I am 200% with you on the views you wrote about silent readers…after I finish 2 of my stories I will not be posting on TU anymore…will just read … waiting for your updates loads of love stay blessed 🙂

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Gauri darling… No no don’t pull. Ur hair…. I will next part soon… About modern Krishna.. M. Still thinking for my entry.. Lol.. Vl update soon..and thanks for support dear… We r in same wavelength n love u so much dear

  14. Naaga

    Yennaley nadakkudhu ingey, shock mela shock 😱😱😱😱 idhula shock treatment veravaa sutham, yenna panna poraano theriallayeee 😾

    And Arjun stubborn personnu sollamudiyadhu, apdi irundha ithana varudam radhu pirinchu irundhruka maataapla, he is Arrogant nota stubborn, radhuva paartha thaan stubborn madhri theridhu.

    Yevandaavan thaniya hpora ponnu kitta kalatta panni kadi vaanginadhu 🔪🔪🔪🔪 radhu nee kaiya kadichirukka koodadhu, koravalaiya pidichu kadichrikanum. Saraloda kaiya paartha therichidum adhu yaarunnu.

    Satz Overall Asathita maaaaaa ☺

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Naaga..dont get shock…innum neraya iruku shock aaga. ok Arjun ah pathi unoda analysis nalla irukee….arjun en arrogant or en stuborn nu koodiya seekirame therinjidum. Yes Radhu is now stubborn and why …have a reason for that. lol radhuku iruntha tension la ethu kidachutho kadichita…thanks for ur lovely words naaga

  15. Sravya

    hy I never commented on ur ffs.but I read ur one shots.modern Krishna is awsm.This is superb.I really love this ff.waiting for the next one eagerly.post soon…

  16. Sangee

    |Registered Member

    hi satz kalakita poma ….kizhi kizhi kizhi… saral proposed to rads… mavane matnada arjun ta…
    who is that culprit misbehaved with rads…wait iam thinking ummmm may be saral…ok ritu neengale reveal pannidunga… 🙂 rads how can u doubt arjun ? he is right he might have separated that hoodded mans… head if arjun know that he thought of touching you… one good thing..Mrs mehra so they got married super super..
    ore suspense ahve pogudu…shock treatment ah…intha treatment eh konjam bayangaram ah dan irruku idula shock vera ya…ritu rads pathu batharamma 🙂 🙂 waiting for next one… post soon take care bye…love u

  17. Chashni

    Akka. Don’t feel sad or upset.I started reading fan fiction only after diwali.that too your past stories like enemity to love and other story passion project,lot like love.I don’t know the current update of fan fiction.I m requesting my friends to give comment to your stories. I am trying my best to encourage you.so don’t feel dissapointed. we also craving for your awesome episodes.nowadays I avoided my favourite daily soaps.only waiting for your wonderful episodes.so keep on rocking.we always support you

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Thanks chashni..but i am not upset i just shared my thought..i know people are reading the stories but at times we are get into a thinking whether they are really reading our stories or not..we will come to know when we get comments otherwise not..that’s the only point i want to say. BTW i am not worry at all..just a loss of interest. and Thank u so so much for ur love and support dear 🙂

  18. Nayan

    |Registered Member

    Wow this episode is fabulous .. I’m feeling sad for saral … he is going to be hurt by arjun just because he love radhika … I think it is high time to control your anger arjun … you’re going to hurt radhika because of your anger .. poor radhika … she is stuck between her brother and arjun…. I felt shocked when arjun said that they are already married … you are going to kill me with suspense .. plz update soon … stay blessed dr 😀 😀 😀 😀

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Thank u so much Nayan dear 🙂 Yep Arjun wont leave him so easily of eyeing his girl…lol ha ha ha Arjun and Anger are twins Nayan 🙂 will update next soon

  19. ana

    Amazing.. Di…
    Really mazedaar…
    BT mysterious past… Waiting for the next …post soon..

    Nd when u will update ETL….plzzzzzz update that…plzzzz…
    Eagerly waiting for that…
    Love u…bye

  20. Aasthu

    |Registered Member

    Though Rads hate him…I loved their embrace……Arjun’s care for her………..now I’m curious when did she bcome Mrs Mehra in the past??????????????

  21. deepu

    Hi sathya akka don’t worry u’r unique from all n u’r story is always rocking
    We r glad to read u’r stories
    U know I always read few ff cox other plotting same boring concept .
    But u’r story just different from other n u just bring each n very scene infront of my eye n also emotional ,POV
    U’r always rocking …..
    I’m waiting for next part n
    this is my request can u pls mention when u’r next part will post
    Hi neenga n sangee may I join with u

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Thanks a lot deepu for ur comments…but i am not worrying dear..i just wanna convey that comments are boost for us..since we are not aware how many are reading n all…and yeah sure i will mention the day for sure in next part.

  22. Hemalattha

    |Registered Member

    awesome akka.thae way you describe radhika’s and arjun’s feeling sperb.is that radhika and arjun already married and they got separate?arjun’s love for radhika amazing di.continue di.

  23. Fanficoholic

    |Registered Member

    Hey sis. Amazingggg episode. I jst luvvvvvvvvv arjun. And wll always love him in his angry young man avatar. Seriuslyyyyyy akka hw cme u bring out so many amazingg ideas??? U ppl r all jst amazingggg. Hats off to u all. Who is that jerk who misbehaved wth radhika??? And wat is their pasttt??? Soooooo curious to knw it. Post soon akka love u loadss. By the way did u watch thani oruvan. I jst did on sunday. Its jst amazinggggg

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Hello dear 🙂 Arjun’s beauty is his angry and jealous nature..i love that too. i will post the next soon dear and yeah i watched multiple times..i love it too and i know it is remade in telegu with Ram charan teja as hero Dhruva… It’s amazing story…since story is good, whomever will act it will be block buster. Lvoe you too dear

  24. likii

    Hi guys this is liki n I’m one of the silent reader….first of all very sorry for not encouraging all the mmz writers being manmarziyan fan….all of you r great writers ….all ur stories are too good…awesome. ..now I’m feeling very bad for not encouraging you all…I’m sorry from the bottom of my heart. …realized my mistake. ..from now on i’ll make sure to comment on all ur updates. ..even I’m a big fan of mmz. …love you all….once again sorry. ..on this update it was awesome sathya

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Thanks for commenting Likii 🙂 am glad seeing your comment and yeah pls comment for all writers and it is a boost for us to write more and more. Thanks a lot dear 🙂
      Love you too

  25. S.v

    |Registered Member

    Aaahahhaaa super super super andha oru scene enga avan avala hig pandrala adhu dhan and avan companyey vangitana avalukkaga I mean enakkaga again we are in ardhika mode and haaa saral dai velagi nillu enakku nalla nalhaye unna pudikadhu idhula nee propose panna adhuvum arhun irukkumbothu een arjhn irukkum bodhu…. dai odj poidu loosu payaley…. kalakkal arjjn nee eppomey ipdi iru eena enakku adhu romba pudichurukku all shades of u dear ….. muhhhhhaaaaaaaa loveu my dear

    • Sathya

      |Author

      SV darling…thank u so much…we always in ardhika mode only 🙂 lol. Saral arjun ah vida unkita adi vaanga poran nall. :). Thank u so much dear 🙂

  26. Mercy

    Sathya comments don’t come close to describing your amazing talent. That’s why mostly we read and feel as well as admire the good stories you write. Nothing is greater than the reader’s feeling after reading a story. Don’t ever underestimate your amazing talent. When you felt the adrenaline flow while you where writing then you don’t need comments to stamp or approve your talent. When the reader can feel it you also know you did justice to your talent. Salute to you and hats off to your incredible writing skills 😘😘😘😘😘🙌🙌👍👍👍👍

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Thanks for ur lovely words Mercy…my only point was we are not completely aware who is reading and who is not? We don’t have any way to know whether people are reading or not and the only way is to comment. That’y we all are asking the readers to comment. It just gives a hope thinking that ppl like our work…we cannot be in a blind hope right… 🙂 how do i know whether you get adrenaline flow or not unless you comment about it.. 😛 and yeah many many thanks for commenting and pls do comment for all updates you read.

  27. Mercy

    Sorry for not commenting but I feel the adrenaline when I read what you write. Your vocabulary is so amazing. I am Zulu but did English as my first language at school as well as English literature so I know what am talking about when I say you’re good am not buttering you to make you feel good but am telling it straight up😉

  28. Dev

    |Registered Member

    Hey satya…ha i kept my promise……..even though late
    D epi was osm…n rads is mrs mehra..o my gosh….n i think its saral who was d intruder.
    Waiting 4 d nxt yaar….love u

  29. shankari

    Sathya akka, awesome update…i mean Mrs. Mehra??? Tats a shocking revelation… Tat guy who harassed radhika …who would it be??thinking may be saral?? And y dont u post it wattsy??this story is amazing… And it deserves much more appreciating readers…

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Thanks a lot for ur amazing words shankari 🙂 Watty for this..i am still thinking on it. Will post soon dear and thanks for encouraging me a lot

  30. Chashni

    Akka may be this will be the altime record in fan fiction .you are obviously right akka.our comments shows that how much we love you and your story.

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Chashni….altime record is already set by our darling Gauri for her DPO. If not, pls go and read that FF, you will just go crazy reading it and that was the first FF in TU history which crossed more than 100 comments and she deserved it. 🙂 🙂 🙂

  31. Aastha

    Sathuuuu di.. awesome awesome
    Arjun purchased Radz CO to get her… how lovely…
    Saral confessed his feelings..but sorry sAral you don’t have any chance….
    And who was that guy ??
    Radz still has feelings for Arjun but her hatred always overcame it… and what’s that..” you already has become Mrs. Mehra..???
    Di update soon.. I wanted to know their past.. ?? Why so hatred ??
    Di…am happy my comment made smile and will take OS story from Wattpad..
    Love you di…😘😘😘

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Thank u so much Aastha dear :). lol Saral vl never ever get any chance of Radhika. about the intruder,vl reveal little later. Ofcourse she badly want to hate him but she couldn’t. I will update dear 🙂 keep reading. Love u too 🙂

  32. Roma

    Wowwww Satzzzz….I’m soooooooo happyyyyyy to see soooooooo manyyy comments. ..105… congrats!!! 😀 ….kudos my darling…..the chappy was really superbbbb. …arjun n saral fight n rads anger this scene was quite interesting. ….n somebody is trying to hurt rads…but who if that’s not arjun….arjun consoled her so lovingly…n she too found her solace in his embrace n broke down….but soon she again doubted on him….but the major shock for me was that she is already Mrs. Mehra. …that’s really a big news….is that hooded guy could be Saral? Or some other enemy of ardhika? ….omg I’m so curious to know. …loved your note to our silent readers….ur words made the impact
    …love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug. .. ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ 😉 😀

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Thank u so much Romaaaaaa darling…whoooo :)yeah romaaa…its really surprising for me too. yep some intruder is hurting her and soon Arjun will find it. Yep her solace is only on Arjun. but her anger again arised and hurts him. Yep vl reveal that little later or may from the past u can get it. all the secrets vl be revealed slowly dear. lol i liked the imapact too 🙂 love u too 🙂 teddy hugs muaaahhhhhhhh

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