MMZ – The Modern Krishna (Shot 4)

Thank u so so so much for all ur lovely comments…i am very sorry for this update…honestly i am not getting the plot to write this up and that’s the reason for this delay. I got a plot for the 4th character and here am with the 4th shot.

I am dedicating this chapter to my dear lovey dovey darling friend Gauri…dear i am here with your lovely krishna ji…hope u like this shot. Love you πŸ™‚

Here is the next shot:

MMZ – THE MODERN KRISHNA (Shot 4)

Radha and Naradha started their journey but before that Radha sends the picture of 4th girl to Krishna ji and thinks for a while. Naradha notices this asking, “What happen Devi Radha? Are we not leaving?”

Radha, “We have to leave but before that we have to watch our krishna’s leela with that 4th girl”

Naradha, “Really? I am wonder thinking your trust on our almighty”

Radha smirks, “Afterall Man is a Man right and that too your almight is the best in dealing girls. So i don’t take a chance, infact we watched all the 3 na, then y we have to leave the last one. Will see that also?”

Naradha smirks, “Now i wonder, how krishna handled you here.”

Radha makes face saying, “That’s none of your business Naradha. Better be quiet and sit with me. Should not utter a word”

Naradha keeps pout face and sits quietly with her watching the atrocity of Krishna with the fourth girl.

Our Modern Krishna gets the picture and lost himself in starring the beautiful lady Jessie and gets disturbed hearing the beep sound. He looks at the picture of the 4th girl and says, “Oh my Krishna, being Arjun is far better than being as a Lord Krishna. Hmmmm very lucky Arjun. Fine now i ll show my charms.” he just disappear in a sec and appears infront of a building named as “Rock the Floor”. He just enters inside and hears the music everywhere and finally he reaches the place having a big auditorium and a group of people gathering there looking at someone who is dancing mesmerisingly.

Krishna ji walks towards the stage and stands little far to watch what’s going on and who is dancing. Now he is seeing only her back and everyone there cheers her and encourages her for her dancing. The music starts and she moves her body slowly according to the music and turns towards the people like a storm. Modern krishna is completely stunned seeing the girl infront of him and pinch his hand once to realize the truth.

He then moves his gaze to her and her dance moves, which makes him watch her with open mouth. She gently shakes her body and does the moves on kathak and dance perfectly according to the beats of the song. Everyone claps for her performance and gives her a huge applause at the end of the dance. Even krishna too mesmerized and claps for her performance. All her friends runs to her and appreciates for her performance. She feels so happy getting all the cheerful words from her friends and her master. Ofcourse she is in cloud nine.

Her Master, “So, now only one thing is pending. To find a partner for you and it looks like very tough finding a dancing partner for you”

She smiles saying, “Master, i have hope…i will surely get my partner and we both will win the competition”

Master, “Even i wish the same, but we have very less time now. Only a month is still pending to start the competition. We have so much to do. Find a partner, train him the dance styles and more than you i am very much nervous now.”

She too gets upset thinking about it and all gets surprised hearing a voice behind them saying, “May i join?”

All turns back to look at him, everyone starring him from top to toe and starts murmuring to themselves and to her, “Doesn’t look like he knows the spelling for the dance atleast.” and some peopl murmur, “How much attitude he has?” and few girls already adored him, “He is so handsome yar”.

Overall, so many thoughts are running on everyone’s mind. And he is none other than our Modern Krishna walks towards her without even taking his eyes off from her.

When he is nearing her, the people automatically gives way for him to go to her. She too stares him without blinking her eyes, for a second she feels like her heart skips a beat but why, she doesn’t have the answer for that.

Krishna ji walks to her and just give his signature smile seeing her, suddenly a girl from the group fainted and all are shocked seeing this. They see the girl fainted and krishna ji alternatively with open mouth. Few guys even gets jealous seeing other girls starts admiring him.

Krishna ji turns to the master saying, “May i join in the competition as her dance partner?”

Master, “That’s possible but before that we should know whether you can dance or not?”

Krishna ji with so much of excitement, holds the master’s waist and takes his one hand in his saying, “I will show you my dance now”

All started laughing at them and the master immediately frees him from his grip saying, “Not with me. She is the one who gonna dance and you know what she is the best in this institute” by pointing the girl beside him who is laughing silently.

Krishna ji show his attitude smirk saying, “Then i am ready to dance with her. I don’t have any problem”

All are jaw dropped seeing his attitude and the girl who stares him saying, “For that first, you should win over me in dance and then i will think about dancing with you”

All the poeple claps for her and shouts to start the competition now itself. Krishna ji in his mind, “Without knowing my power, bechari this small girl calls me for the competition. Let me make her dance for my tunes”. Without knowing all this plan, the girl gets ready for the dance. They both stands at the center of the stage and the jugalbandi starts between them. Both are equally performing well and the masters, the students are all so impressed seeing krishna’s dance and they themself decided that he is the one who gonna dance with her. Even while dancing she herself admires his dancing skills and gets happy. The jugalbandi is over and even Krishna ji also impressed on her dance. The whole crowd gives them a huge applause and cheers them for one more dance and shouts, “ONCEMORE, ONCEMORE, ONCEMORE….”

Krishna ji smiles and comes to her asking her hands for a dance together. She simply looks at him and looks other, meanwhile Krishna ji leans little close to her saying, “Will you not give your hand to this Arjun, Miss.Sathya?”

That’s it, and that’s more than enough for her, she stuns hearing him and stares him without blinking her eyes. And whatever he said was audible to others also, even they get shocked listening his name as Arjun and the moment he said his name as Arjun, the whole group turns their gaze to look at the girl’s face with a shocking surprise. They are suprised and equally happy, because they all know how this girl is crazy on the name Arjun. Sathya is like daydreaming and faints immediately hearing his name as Arjun. They group around her knows her craziness, they all laugh seeing her and wakes her up. Now they think this guy is handsome and more than that his is name is Arjun and looks at her with their open mouth and murmurs as group chant, “Give your hand”.

Sathya’s eye balls are stuck at one place and it’s on his face which is not at all moving anywhere. Krishna ji smiles and extends his hands again and this time she herself gives her hand to him and he gently pulls her to him.

She is breathing heavily seeing him so close and Krishna ji smirks at her saying, “Before dancing only you fainted? What will happen if you dance with me?”

Facepalm for her…she is shocked and raise her eyebrows and tells her friends, “Start the music”

The music starts and it is famous Illaiyaraja’s one of the best bgm in the movie Punnagai Mannan.

(It’s my fav one and i danced for this in my college…so i added it. Below is the link for that…Non-Tamilians pls hear this once and i am sure you will definitely love this bgm.)

(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RmIKq7tB-Q4)

Once the music starts both stares each other and starts moving their bodies according to the music. She completely enjoys dancing with him and even krishna ji enjoys this new entertainment which he did not get it in heaven. At the end, he takes the control and gives a non-stop twirl for sometime, which Sathya did not expect it and when he stops the twirl, she is like wobbling side to side holding her head on her both hands, her eyes are also not steady and when she is about to fall, her friends helps her stand straight. It takes some time for her to be steady and in shock seeing him. They all enjoyed their dance and his naughtiness too. The dance is over and all are satisfied to have him as her dance partner and now they all more confident of winning the title of the dance competition.

Master, “So Mr.Arjun, we have to start our practice from day after tomorrow, pls be punctual for the practice and we are happy to have you in our dance school”

Arjun too smiles and agrees for it, and goes to Sathya, “It’s just a trailer, still the main picture is pending. C u later, Bye”, before going he pulls her cheeks making her blush and jaw dropped. Sathya is now definitely on cloud nine and with a blush on her face starring him going.

@ Heaven,

All this are watching by Radha and Naradha, he looks at Radha saying, “Looks like, this is little over for her”

Radha, “Let her enjoy for sometime. After this no one can snatch my Krishna from me”

Naradha smirks, “Narayana Narayana, then are we ready now to step out from Heaven”

Radha gets up and looks at him with an attitude saying, “It’s time to Step into THE EARTH”

Naradha smiles widely, “Narayana…Narayana…”

Both Radha and Narayana steps out from Heaven and reaching the earth. Within a few mins, they are in earth in their usual attire and they forget to get into their new get ups.

Radha and Naradha walks into the busy streets looking at the people starring at them wierdly.

Some guys comments them asking, “What Naradha, any new TV program or what? All over, your bun is so cute” they all laughed seeing his bun on his head, where in Radha also laughed seeing sad Naradha’s face.

While walking further, few girls gang walks towards them, in that a girl smiles seeing Naradha and touches his bun saying, “How much time you took to put this bun? Is it original or Wig?” she tried to pull his hair and he starts screaming and shouting at that girl, they all are laughing badly.

Radha pulls him to a little lonely place and tells him, “Naradha, we forget our getup, first we will change into our new face”

In a few seconds, both gets their new face and get up. Radha as Radhika now and Naradha as Neil now.

(Now will call Radha as Radhika and Naradha as Neil)

They come to the public and Neil is walking by spreading his legs widely, he is not comfortable in his jeans he is wearing. Radhika notices this asking, “What are you doing?”

Neil, “Devi Radha, this…” and he stops by her asking him, “I am Radhika now”

Neil makes faces, “Devi Radhika…” again she stops him, “Cut that Devi and call me Radhika. Keep it in your dumbo mind. I will not repeat”

Neil is almost in crying state, “Radhika, i am not comfortable in this dress. How this people are wearing all this stupid dress. It’s so hot inside” (LOL)

Radhika, “Adjust it Neil”

Neil shouts, “No..it’s hot. I can’t walk with this”

Radhika stares him angrily and looks at the nearby shop having a Water in a glass kept outside. She takes the water and pours inside his pockets saying, “Now it is chill na. Just walk”

Neil smiles enjoying the chillness, his jeans becomes wet and he walks smilingly, but the people comes in front seeing him from top to toe and bangs their forehead scolding him in bad words. But both Radhika and Neil did not understand the meaning of the words, so ignored them and walks past to look for their Modern Krishna.

Precap: Modern Krishna meets Radhika and this time he really fall in love with her thinking, “I will talk to Radha and make a place for this girl in heaven”

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How is today’s chappy girls. Hope you had a nice time. And i am just blushing badly thinking about the dance with Krishna..sorry sorry with Arjun. LOL. NO offense girls…Dipu, SV and Jessie & Sathya …we are the girls gonna get our version of Arjun soon with the help of our modern krishna.

From next episode, we will have 5 heores and 5 heroines in this story. Didn’t understand?

Dipu – Arjun
SV – Arjun
Jessie – Arjun
Sathya – Arjun

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Finally Radhika – Arjun (yep, our krishna ji becomes Arjun again for Radhika, you know why, now he himself becomes crazy for this name Arjun and he gets to know that Arjun has some magic to get the girls drool over him. Isn’t it?)

More funny scenes are awaiting guys. Keep reading and enjoying. Pls don’t forget to pour your comments and i got very less comments for last episode πŸ™

39 comments

  1. Gauri

    |Registered Member

    Sathya Love you I asked and you posted thanks a million tons for this…OMG you dedicated this to me…..I am all jumping dancing….ahh Kathak my favourite dance…you bought it live with your words… krishna flat by her dancing…has to be after all its SATHYA…me flat too…. Radhaji is too awesome….smart move and Narad ji’s walk in jeans 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣 I was rolling like mad….hope I am the first one to comment …I want to be the first one desperately πŸ™‚ Sathya I just loved this sooooooooooooooo much just breath taking…BRILLIANT Love u😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Gauri…..you are the first …even m so happy seeing urs first. Even i love Kathak dance. ha ha ha he lost in Sathya’s dance..lol πŸ™‚ ha ha ha my favourite part is Narad’s walk in Jeans on the road…thanks a lot lot lot Gauri…you always gives me a cute pleasure smile on my face. Love you too πŸ™‚

  2. Chashni

    Akka I can’t control myself from laughter.aiyoo mudiyala.video joke paartha kooda ippadi sirikka maaten pola.thank you so much akka love you

  3. Chashni

    Krishna sethaaru.aiyoo pant pocket la water.kadavule .naa phone paathu sirichute irukken.enna veetla mentalnu thitranga.keep on rocking

  4. Jessie

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    hahahahhahh…….I so loved it…Short comments ke liye maafis…but caught it..super bgm..super dance…enada nadakudu inga nu Radha comes down…but I liked the last one…Arjun falls for Radhika…Ada….ada.. super..5 heros and heroines…you do girl!! you are a rock star already…Jus now I caught the old one…Jess..Event planner..wow…Arjun name and am Flat..super one…Finish..finish..finish..dialogue.heheheh…ana adhu ena, he got varmala from me unfortunately.!!..ena oru dialogue!!…Arggghhh…how dare that ARjun…. *Ratchakan Nagarjun mathiri en veins ellam raise aagudhu* hmmm…Dont leave him satzz…Punish him…!! Demanding jess!! lol….

    Eager for next one..you don’t get plots???? Ok…Naan nambiten….. Neil pant le water..gosh!! that bun super dialogue.. we got neil yay!! sam illada samurai mathiri Neillll…Neil..un mandaila evalo periya kondai *Vadivelu style* lolszz…glad i got this update today….tomo I will be in travel…nalla vela..OMK..this is super..

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Jaaaazzzz i missed ur comments in ur episode…correct timela ooru suthitu irukiye…. πŸ™‚ do you like your episode and your version of Arjun? he asked you for a date na? epo poga pora? seekiram sollu. ha ha ha yes 5 girls and 5 arjuns…semmaya irukum la πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

      he he he you are scaring krishna na…veins theriyudha unaku :P. Punish ah Arjun ah illa krishna va..mandhiram potu enna ethavathu panita…. :O

      Seriously girl, unoda plot ku apram enaku enna eluthanu theriyave ila..athan ivlo late…nambu nambu..naa unmai thavira vera ethuvum solvathillai. he he he enaku Neil jeans walk and bun than favorite…manda mela evlo periya konda…tamil na semma dialogue kuduthirukalam…. Thank a lot Jaaaaazzzzziiii for ur lovely words. love you too πŸ™‚

  5. Dipika

    |Registered Member

    Satzzzzz my senorita kyaaaaaaaaaaa episode hai…..maim to flat ho gayi….. U made me jealous huhh… First jugalbandi n then romantic dance with arjun.. Cherry on top…. God satz ur reaction after hearing a name arjun.. Lol.. Fainting… We knw thw effect of this magical name.. Full deewani….
    Radha devi now going to bcum radz… Poor naradhs.. Lol… Hot…. God.. Wht will happen if thy read it.. Hahahahahhaha.. Radz pour watee ij his pocket.. N tht cute bun… Lollll..what a imagination n narration yarrrrrr.. U rocked it baby….. N wowin next episode fise i gonna get my arjun… M to dancing dancing…. M so eager.. But sat at times tht this Awsome wala os gonna end.. It was fab journey to b part of it.. N i m thanking u specially for making me first girl.. M so on moon… Love you loads 😘 n loads n loads..
    😘 😘 😘 😘 😘

    • Sathya

      |Author

      LOL…dipu u got jealous ah…i know it πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› he he he u r right dipu..my reaction is universal truth na…:D πŸ˜€ :D. Deewani Mastani ho gayi :). They will run behind me to kill me if they read it dipu…crazy gods too πŸ™‚ especially Naradha determine to kill me for sure.
      thank u so so so much for ur lovely words. Yep again have to get ur versions..just first meeting had happened in a day…..still he has to follow you, you have to fall for him,..so many r there. Yeah dipu…no thanks…the credits should go to u and jaazzzz…because of you ppl only i got this plot…coz of our discussion some day..remeber? love you:)

  6. Sulbi

    |Registered Member

    OMG… i was laughing like a hell whike reading this episode… so cute sisy… so u too wanna be a Arjun gf…. Awww dats so cute of…

    Neil my smarty guy… Wow… What a reaction man??? Thought before itself Naradha will be Neil… My guess wasn’t wrong lol… Really lovely one…

    That last part pouring water in jeans omg cnt able to cntrol ny laugh… U know i scared my mom with my laugh… πŸ˜€ πŸ˜› so sad lol… i had tears in my eyes… aftr a long tym am laughing like this thanks a ton sisy…

    So frm nxt part 5 pairs… Wow… Waiting for that… love u.. Tc sisy…

    • Neha

      Same hr sulbhi….I too scared my mom with my laugh…..
      Awesomeeeeeee update…..I was laughing like hell…naradh is uncomfortable in jeans πŸ˜€ lololol…..Radha takes water n pours in his pocket n Naradh is enjoying the chillness….. Ohhh Godddd m still laughing madly….love you…keep rocking….

    • Sathya

      |Author

      ha ha ha meera dear πŸ™‚ lol don’t scare mom pls…they will scold me then :P. Actually me, dipu and SV & jaazz are Arjun’s deewani..we became long back and this ff is the result of that deewanis. LOL you are clever girl i know. even i laughed badly while writing it…thanks a lot for sharing ur lovely views. πŸ™‚

  7. arti viswanathan

    Sathya it’s extremely nice one dear… I am still laughing that naranda is still confused to wear a jeans….

  8. Shree

    |Registered Member

    lolololololololololol………………………… idha adichikute pogalam… lllooooooollll.. enna ya idhu? konjam overah poyiduche.. radha enna ragalai panna poralo.. wowwiiiee wow!! sathya flat.. illa neenga flat.. dance.. i love that song.. ada naradha.. sorry neil.. un mandaiya enga dhaan vitutu variyo.. hehe kondai.. reminded me of pokiri.. vadivelu.. karathe master.. hehe.. neil paavam.. lol hot it seams.. tani utita.. achacha.. ivangala ippo enna panradu.. what radha va convince pannanuma.. pochu da.. he doesnt know its radha only lol.. i will love to see them fight

    akka sirichi vayiru dhaan valikidu ponga.. naa oruti dhaan humor ezhuduradu illa nu nenakiren.. 5 heroes 5 heroines.. waiting for it.. akka avargale prepare for real version of your arjuns..

    seekram ka.. waiting waiting.. love you

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Shree…poite irukatum vidu…lol thaana :)naane than flat ayiten…mothama mayangi kila vilunthu manatha vaangiten. πŸ˜› he he he mandai mela evlo k=periya kondai :D. shree semma comedy la πŸ™‚ humor than naamale panitiu irukome..dailyum chat la :). i am always ready for my arjun πŸ™‚ arjun than innum varala

  9. we

    Wow sathya… Hmm so the fourth girl is none other than you…… Anyways I’m liking this story a lot…… No words to say yaar…upload the next one soooonnnnn… You donno how hard it is to keep waiting…
    😊😊😊
    And you changed ur dp …. cool . 😎

  10. Nayan

    |Registered Member

    I was waited for this episode to update so eagerly … finally you are here with a bang … wow it was mind blowing … arjun and sathya’s dancing scenes were too nice .. hope she didn’t get any fractures due to sudden faint … poor naradha … girls make fun out of his hair bun … lol … and complaining about his clothes to radha was too funny …. I think girls will go on their knees after seeing naradha’s new avatar as neil … I’m sure that radha going to nail lord krishna badly … arjun thinks to take radhika to heaven and get permission for that from radha was really funny … I really want to see lord krishna’s reaction after knowing radhika is actually devi radha …. interesting precap … hope next update won’t be the final one … plz don’t end this story that much soon .. you are indeed a great writer without any doubt πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ plz update soon πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ may god bless you dear β™‘β™₯β™‘β™₯β™‘β™₯

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Thank u so much Nayan πŸ™‚ lol arjun is there to save me na…so no fractures. Yep u r correct Nayan…Radha & Narad knows Krishna but Krishna doesn’t know them…he will played bythem badly….but funny one. Thank u so so so much for ur lovely words dear. ending..even i haven’t think about it….and thanks a lot for ur support

  11. Meen

    |Registered Member

    Here comes my fav story….u know what sathya I love each & every single of ur story…..but this one is so close to my heart……my amazing Krishna…..hmmm so now radha ji came on earth in d form of radhika….& Krishna fell for her….amazing…..muuuuuuuuha

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Thanks a lot Meen πŸ™‚ awww u just blowed my heart by ur lovely words…thank u so so much dear πŸ™‚ love you πŸ™‚

  12. Viprida

    |Registered Member

    Whoa Sathya!! Such an interesting take on Krishna leela!! Loving this to the core!! Let’s see how Arjun-Radhika’s meeting goes!! It’s sad that Neil has become Naradha for he’ll have to remain a bachelor all his life or do you have any plans to make him fall for someone?? Please post the next one soon!! Take care happie day!!

    • Sathya

      |Author

      vipu darling…semma la. ha ha ha thank u so much yar. hmm Ardhika meeting than think panitu iruken..that should be epic la. ha ha ha this Neil aka Naradha has to be single but i kept a twist for that too. happie day to you too dear πŸ™‚

  13. Jewel

    |Registered Member

    sathya, u made me laugh a lot…. neil, he really funny. and u r the fourth girl…. now radhika is also there, krishna thinking about taking radhika to heaven, by asking radha’s permission…. sathya this story is getting more interesting in each chapter…. liked it a lot…. waiting for the next….

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Jewel …. yes i want that only…a hearty laugh. yep naa than 4th girl. lol inimie innum galatta va irukum. enjoy πŸ™‚

  14. S.v

    |Registered Member

    super super awesome me as heroine ?? im jumping super awesome sorry for the small and late comment lovely sathya waiting for the next love u lods….

  15. Roma

    Oyeee hoyeeee…my satzzz n arjun…wowwww. ….loved the dance scene N the bgm was very beautiful. ..I heard it first time n got mesmerized. ..I imagined satzzzz n arjun dancing on it….awwww….I’m blushing tooo…thinking of it….actually me too dancing with my version of arjun…in my imagination. …lol…ur Roma gone mad….n I loved radha n Narada convo n leg pulling sooooo muchhhhhh. ….enjoying this story very much. …satzzzz…my sweeeeeetu sissy. ..ur just amazingly awesoooooome. …my all worries run away after reading this refreshing story…..n upcoming episodes will be more fun….precap is awesome. ..rads n arjun….wowwww….n where is sam…for our neil……make our gauri as sam…what say?….. I’m totally addicted to Youuuuuuuuu and Your stories my dear……don’t know whether you will read my comment or not…sorry honeyyy I’m soooo late……but u know I was busy…..but now catching up. …keep it up honeyyy. . Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘ πŸ˜‰

    • Sathya

      |Author

      Roma…u caught my point really πŸ˜› i wont say anything will ping u seperately…but how can you say that i am not reading ur comments…your comments are like a energy booster for me….i always wait for ur comments…love you so much roma for showering me this much love. I am so blessed to have you all with me always..love u love u love u love u….sooooooooo much

      You gave me a great comment yar…i am so happy that i am one of the reason for ur happiness and yes that music was done by Ilaiyaraja starred by Kamal and Revathi. Love you so much dear

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