MMZ- Married by Fate- Chapter 6 & 7

hello guys so as promised here is the double Dhamaka … for mmz married by fate…pls let me know how was it … 🙂 next one can’t comment now as I haven’t even started Happy Sunday to all of you stay blessed 🙂

Chapter 6

Arjun entered his house all angry and went to his room…after 10 minutes he heard the bike sound and peeps through the window…Arjun burned looking at Radhika smiling and talking to Neil…Neil pulls her cheeks wishes her for the night…and leaves…Arjun changes and goes to personal Gym…he starts punching the bag…recalling all the events of the day…Radhika on Neil’s bike…Neil holding her hand…Neil and Radhika in cafeteria…Neil dropping her home…Neil’s words ‘’my Chashni’’…Radhika moves to her room when Mala calls her; ‘’Choti go and give this black coffee to Arjun’’

Radhika; ‘’Why me Ma?’’

Mala; ‘’because he is your husband…go now’’ Radhika huffs and takes black coffee to Arjun’s gym…she knocks enters Arjun who was standing leaning on the wall to catch his breath..looks at the door…Radhika moves to the table and keeps the coffee on the table…’’Sir Ma has send Black coffee…I am keeping it on the table…please have it’’

Arjun moves in Radhika’s direction and locks her to wall; ‘’ What are you trying to do…Radhika?’’

Radhika ; ‘’Sir I don’t know what are you talking about…and please let me go’’

Arjun; ‘’You and Neil….do you think you can make me jealous…stop playing cheap tricks’’

Radhika raised an eyebrow; ‘’Are you jealous? But why…I didn’t feel anything looking at you and Sam together…Oh! Now I get it…it hurts your male ego…to see your substitute wife with someone else or you are scared that I will gain the trust of others too and you will be unmasked…right Sir?’’

Arjun was hurt hearing she didn’t feel a thing when he was with the other girl…but he masked it; ‘’Do you really think I am jealous…pity you…I have a reputation Radhika…and won’t let anyone spoil it…till you have my name behave yourself…’’

Radhika; ‘’Reputation!….which will be crumbled to dust soon…You cannot stop or force me….I will do what I believe in…now move before your sister sees us together like this’’ Arjun kept looking at her face without blinking even once…in his head he was counting to 10 to calm his anger…if he loses his control now…then Radhika will not even get a chance to scream…Arjun walked backwards…Radhika quickly moved out of the room…but before she was completely out of the room a sudden thud made her turn…Arjun had punched the bag so heard that it came down on the floor….radhika looked at the bag and then at Arjun…who was still staring her…she just lowered her gaze and walked off…Arjun didn’t wanted to divorce her…he wanted to keep her for life…as only his.

Neil after dropping Radhika went to his friend’s place…he showed Neil some old pics of Nandini with Samrat and also told him that and she still holds a property in Panchgani…she keeps travelling there and if get access to it for few hours they can get more details…Neil kept staring at Samrat’s pic with Nandini his POV ;’’ Samrat Sir I have my answers…more chashni will give me….now I have to think about Panchagani…how?’ …Neil thanked his friend…and left for his house

Sam was lost…she felt something…but couldn’t understand what…The way Neil stood up for Radhika and the way he was paying attention on her was bothering her…Neil was neglecting Sam..atleast she felt that..Sam got up and started pacing in her room…her POV; ‘No not Niel…he is my Idiot….I will not lose him’ Sam dialled Neil; ‘’Neil are you free’’

Neil; ‘’just reached home’’

Sam shocked; ‘’But you left office at 6…its 9 why so late’’

Neil smiled; ‘’was with Chashni…had a good time…you tell me anything urgent’’

Sam; ‘’Wanted to meet you’’

Neil; ‘’Some other day Sammy…very tired…and even mom is waiting for dinner…good night’’

Neil disconnected and thought…you can’t have everything you want Sammy…you and Arjun tested me enough now its my turn…’’

Sam crashed on her bed…’’Why Neil…you were never so indifferent to me why now…what has changed? …yes how can I forget radhika…I wish I would have never met you…wish you never walked into our lives…its all because of you…I will punish you for my pain Radhika…and bad. Sam smashed vase on floor to give some satisfaction to her angry heart.

Nandini was frustrated…she could easily make out…how badly Arjun wanted Radhika…his eyes moved with her…and each growing day…he was getting distracted…radhika helped Mala in the kitchen…she knew Nandini was making Mala do all the work…she softly touched Mala’s shoulder; ‘’Ma you go…I will do the rest’’

Mala; ‘’Let me warm the milk for Arjun’’

Radhika ; ‘’Ma go…I will do it’’ Mala smiled and left…Nandini watched radhika cleaning the kicthen and warming Milk for Arjun…she went in the kitchen on pretext of getting water…Nandini took the hot vessel poured the milk in the glass and spoke; ‘’Give this to Arjun and don’t forget…’’ Radhika did not respond..Nandini kept the hot vessel close to where radhika was cleaning and walked out…Radhika…while wiping the slab…came in contact with the vessel and her delicate wrist was imprinted with a scarlet burn mark…she let out a painful groan…she knew Nandini did it…Radhika applied some ice and moved to her room….Radhika kept the milk on table; ‘’Sir please have…’’ she was continuously blowing breath over her burn wrist….

Arjun noticed and caught hold of her hand ; ‘’Now How did you get this…why can’t you be little careful… come’’

Radhika pulled her hand with a jerk ;’’How many times do I have to tell you that I don’t need your help’’ Arjun rubbed his forehead and lifted her up…and bought her to the basin…Radhika kept protesting and blabbering…Arjun locked her body between his arms…plastering her back to his front…he pulled her burn wrist under the water stream…and locked her other hand to her waist…finally she stopped struggling…Arjun kept watching her…she was angry….but he liked everything about her…Arjun brought her back to the room and applied ointment…’’go sleep on the bed I will sleep on the couch’’

Radhika; ‘’I will take the couch….I don’t trust you….what if you change to bed in the night’’

Arjun observed her…then sat on his knees; ‘’Radhika …I know I am bad…but I am not a pervert…fine sleep where ever you feel safe’’

Radhika after a sec; ‘’Sorry Sir didn’t mean that…just don’t want to hurt myself anymore’’ Arjun looked at her bewildered Radhika…quickly lies on the couch and covers herself..turning her face away from him…Arjun took a deep breath and settles on his bed…time and again he turns and looks at sleeping Radhika…his POV..’you don’t know how much I want to hold you…be close to you…but I am the doomed one….I will bring you back to me …that’s a promise’ Arjun smiles and dozes off…

Neil parked his bike at the nearest bus stop and messaged radhika to come…he didn’t wanted Mala to worry on Radhika- Arjun’s relationship… Radhika was in washroom…Arjun heard the message tone…he looked at the washroom and picked her mobile…but before he could read the message Radhika snatched it; ‘’Bad habit’’

Arjun just smiled…radhika picked her bag up and walked out of the house after waving to Mala…Arjun followed her ….He unlocked the car ;’’Radhika I will drop you’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’Sir I don’t repeat my mistake…cant trust you now…if I trust you again…you might leave me at place from where I can never return…so I will take care of myself’’ Radhika walked off

Arjun felt as if someone stabbed his heart…he quietly took driver’s seat and fired the engine…Arjun drove in the minimum speed to check on Radhika…he found her walking to the bus stop…Neil was waiting for her…she sat behind him and they drove off…after reaching office Neil kept scratching his head as to how to get access to Nandini’s Panchgani house…Teji knocked…Neil gestured him to come in..

Teji; ‘’What’s the problem Boss?’’

Neil narrated everything….and then Teji smiled; ‘’Neil…we have to a shoot for a skin cream…Piyali ma’am was asking about the location…let’s suggest Panchgani…and since it’s your and Radhika’s project she won’t be able to refuse…Neil smiled widely hugged and gave a peck on Teji’s cheek…Teji was shocked…Neil moved to the door..’’ Teji …I will ask Piyali ma’am permission for you and Radhika to come with me..be prepared…and go and inform Radhika about the same…now go’’

Sam came to Radhika all angry ; ‘’What’s up with you Radhika…you seem to know some trick to trap guys…first Saral, Arjun and now Neil…aren’t you ashamed of yourself…people are talking about you …if not for you please pity your family’’ Teji who was coming to radhika to inform her on the Panchagani trip…felt miserable

Radhika with a calm posture responded; ‘’ Sam even if I speak the truth you will not believe me…so let it be…3 months I will be out of everybody’s life…now excuse me’’ Radhika went directly to the terrace…she wanted some time alone…Neil saw her going upstairs…he gave a hopeless look to Sam and followed Radhika up…

Arjun couldn’t find Radhika at her place….he kept looking for her he finally checked with Teji.. on Arjun insistence he informed what happened between Sam and Radhika….Arjun felt bad for her…he decided to follow her to terrace…

Radhika’s tears were continuously following….when she felt a hand on her shoulder…Neil turned her around; ‘’Chashni I told you its not going to be easy’’

Radhika; ‘’I know and I am not blaming anyone…it’s just that sometimes it hurts…and I am a human too’’

Neil patted her head; ‘’Once the truth is out…all will be sorry’’

Radhika; ‘’I know…but I won’t be here for their sorry’’…Neil lightly smiled…wiped her check and pulled her in an arm hug…Arjun entered the terrace and witnessed this hug…his heart broke into million pieces…he just wanted to pull her away from Neil into his arms…but he can’t …he decided to concentrate on is revenge…and left…Neil gently squeezed Radhika’s shoulder and said; ‘’Let’s go I have something important to discuss’’

Radhika nodded and accompanied Neil downstairs.

Piyali had asked all seniors to come for a meeting…she deliberately kept Radhika out…once everyone was seated…Neil was staring angrily at Samrat his POV; ‘If on that day you would have confessed your mistake….it would have saved everyone from pain’

Arjun was glaring at Neil with rage his POV; ‘If I wasn’t bound with my commitment to Nandu …I would have killed you for hugging and touching my Radhika’

Sam ‘s POV; ‘Radhika snatched everything from me…first my love arjun and now my idiot…my best friend…I will never forgive you Radhika’

Teji watched Radhika quietly working at her desk…she was turning quieter day by day… he decided to make her smile…Teju hopped and sat on the work station; ‘’Chashni what do love more…beaches or hills’’

Radhika looked up; ‘’All my life I have lived on hills…I like beaches but my first love will only be hills’’

Teji; ‘’then I have a surprise for you…you and me will accompany Neil for a add shoot to Panchagani for 2 days…what say’’

Radhika was surprised; ‘’2 days…ok but Neil didn’t tell me…and will Piyali ma’am allow me’’

Teji; ‘’leave everything on the BOSS’’ Radhika smiled and nodded…she herself wanted break from Arjun and BS..but didn’t wanted Mala to be alone with Nandini…Radhika quickly booked Mala’s tickets… called her and asked to pack her belongings…Mala was taken aback but she understood Radhika’s concern

Arjun lost his cool when Neil said that Teji and Radhika will accompany him to Panchagani for 2 days…he couldn’t utter a word…because of Sam’s presence ….but inside he was dying every second…Piyali did not like the decision; ‘’Radhika is too junior…she won’t be able to handle it’’

Neil smirked; ‘’Radhika got you this project….she wrote the rough idea of the add script…and you are saying she won’t be able handle…Radhika will accompany me’’

Sam; ‘’Why not Zubin or kritika’’

Neil; ‘’Samaira Khanna you forgot…they are not my team….if you guys really want this project to be completed it has to be my way…we leave in two days…I have done the hotel bookings for all 3 of us’’

Piyali and Sam wanted to further argue but Samrat stopped them; ‘’Fine Neil…as you wish’’ Neil left the board room with a smirk…and Arjun’s brain was running wild how to stop Radhika from going to Panchagani…Arjun hurriedly came out of the boardroom….and directly went to Radhika’s place …she wasn’t there neither her bag…Arjun checked with Teji again

Teji; ‘’Mala aunty is leaving for her home today…Radhika is going to drop her to the airport’’ Arjun felt strange…Radhika or Mala no one told him…he picked his car keys and left..

Radhika left a note for Neil…’’ …going to drop Ma to the airport..’’ Neil was surprised at the sudden departure of Mala from Mumbai.


Chapter 7

Radhika hugged Mala tightly ; ‘’Ma I am sorry…but its good if you go back…I can’t explain you but one day I will tell you the truth’’

Mala; ‘’I understand…just listen one thing Arjun is a good man…start concentrating on your marriage…he will keep you happy he cares for you’’ Radhika decided to keep quite she just smiled but was surprised when Mala’s face lit up with 1000 watt smile…Radhika turned around to find Arjun smiling at Mala…he came and touched Mala’s feet

Arjun; ‘’Ma you are leaving and you didn’t inform me’’

Mala; ‘’Even I didn’t knew till afternoon…choti asked me to pack…and its good only Ridhima needs me there…Arjun a request please take care of choti and if possible ignore her silly mistakes’’

Arjun wrapped and arm around Radhika’s shoulder and pulled her close; ‘’don’t worry Ma…I will keep her happy and this is a promise…please ring me once you are home’’ Mala nodded blessed them and went inside…Radhika wiped her tears…Arjun’s arm slid from her shoulder to her waist…and Radhika reacted…her body went alert…goose bumps rose all over her skin…Arjun could feel it he smiled in his heart at the way she shivered…Radhika tried pushing his hand away but he tighten it…and kept waving at Mala who was watching them from the glass wall all emotional…once Mala was out of sight…Arjun caught hold of Radhika ‘s wrist and dragged her to the car…Radhika protested

Radhika; ‘’No need of this drama Sir….Ma has already left and leave my hand..’’

Arjun; ‘’We both are going home…I will take you along’’

Radhika; ‘’I will take the bus or a taxi’’

Arjun was angry he walked to her and loomed on her dangerously; ‘’Sit inside the car at once…don’t make me do something bad’’ Radhika blinked and quietly took the passenger seat..Arjun took the wheel and drove off to his place with Radhika.

Sam was feeling as if someone was trying to snatch life from her….She couldn’t handle Neil with Radhika…she decided to save her friendship…Sam dialled Neil; ‘’Idiot…want to meet you and excuses today’’

Neil smiled; ‘’Fine Samrunder Singh…be ready will pick you in half an hour’’

Sam smiled…she happily jumped around and quickly ran to her cupboard to pull her best outfit out…Sam got ready and came out when Neil messaged her…he was standing there leaning against his car in a rugged jeans…deep blue half tugged shirt and his signature smile…Sam felt so happy looking at him that first she walked and then ran hugged him tightly…Neil blinked at her response; ‘’Sammy are you drunk’’

Sam broke the hug; ‘’Not now but will get drunk with you…let’s move’’

Neil and Sam drove to their favorite hangout…they danced and got drunk…Sam was very high on drinks Neil was still in control…Sam pulled Neil and innocently asked; ‘’do you hate me’’

Neil watched the sadness in her eyes…he softly responded; ‘’No Sammy I don’t”

Sam; ‘’Then why are you supporting Radhika and not me’’

Neil; ‘’I am supporting no one…I am doing what I believe is right’’

Sam; ‘’No Neil you are wrong….Radhika is wrong…I am right…I want my revenge’’

Neil knew there was no point explaining her…she was drunk plus all emotional..he softly spoke; ‘’Sammy I know a beautiful place…will you come with me…you will like it’’

Sam smiled; ‘’I will come any where with you Neil…you are my best friend’’ Neil helped Sam up and took her to his car

Radhika quickly changed after dinner and picked her pillow and blanket and moves to the door…Arjun blocks her way…’’Where are you going’’

Radhika; ‘’I will sleep in the hall…Ma has also left so no need for this fake show’’

Arjun softly spoke; ‘’The sofa is not comfortable…sleep on the couch here itself’’

Radhika got irritated; ‘’Sir…please answer this what has suddenly got into you that you are caring about me…the fake promise you made to my mother….why?…its not required…Ma will understand what I did and why…please don’t take this relationship seriously…3 months I will prove my point and go far’’

Arjun frowned; ‘’fine then for these 3 months you will sleep here in this room…couch or bed decide and will take the other one…one more thing …you should not go to Panchgani’’

Radhika was angry; ‘’Sir…for the love of God! Stop behaving like a husband… I know you are doing all this so that you gain my trust…and succeed in your deeds…but I won’t let that happen…I sacrificed my reputation for my words now I will prove myself…I am leaving for Panchgani tomorrow with Neil and Teji’’ Arjun closed his eyes to control his anger…today she got on his nerves…Radhika adjusted herself on the couch and covered herself turning her back to Arjun…Arjun stared her for minute went to the bathroom and locked it…Arjun splashed cold water on his face…he felt so trapped…tears were streaming down his face toady…he just wanted a normal life with her…for once.

Neil took Sam to a place and blindfolded her…Sam was continuously buzzing him to let her lose the blind fold…finally Neil allowed her to open her eyes…they were somewhere out of the city…it was dark with thousands of fireflies around ….it looked as if stars have left their adobe in heaven to dance on earth…Sam jumped hopped squealed and started running after them….Neil watched her happily…Sam turned arong came to Neil and hugged him; ‘’Thank you idiot…I thought I lost you’’

Neil; ‘’We are buddies Sammy you will never lose me’’

Sam; ‘’Then why are you supporting Radhika?’’

Neil huffed; ‘’Did you call me to fight on the same thing?’’

Sam; ‘’No…it just hurts’’

Neil took Sam’s hand and placed her palm on his chest over his hearts; ‘’this breaks every time you say that you love Arjun…my heart had shed tears when you broke down on the day of your marriage….Sammy you trust Arjun….I trust Radhika…one of us is wrong…and who so ever it is will say sorry in future…so let’s make this a promise ..whoever is proved wrong will apologies…and we will no more discuss this topic till then’’ Sam smiled and agreed

Somewhere in the middle of the night…Arjun woke up his eyes fell on Radhika who was sleeping hanging her neck almost out of the couch…Arjun quietly went..gently lifted her head to put it back on the pillow…but Radhika suddenly moved locking his hand under her head…Arjun tried to pull…but she moved again…he smiled…sat on the floor leaned his head on th couch next to Radhika and closed his eyes…in morning when Radhika opened her eyes…first thigh she saw was Arjun’s sleeping face…she as if in a dream cupped his cheek…Arjun opened his eyes and looked straight into hers…Radhika felt his warmth…Arjun placed his palm on Radhika’s hand which cupped his cheek…he slowly bought her palm to his lips without breaking the eye lock…Radhika sprang from the couch and without turning back went inside the washroom…she closed the door and leaned against it. ‘’what just happened…what was I thinking…when will I stop embarrassing myself’’

Arjun smiled…stretched himself and took a deep sigh of relief ; ‘’you don’t hate me…I am happy…’’ Arjun touched his cheek where Radhika kept her palm…and then gently kissed his fingers.

Radhika quickly got ready and packed her suitcase for Panchagani…all the time she never looked straight into Arjun’s eyes…that amused him…Neil honked and Radhika left with him they had to attend office for half day and leave in the afternoon…after reaching office Neil gave Radhika an envelope…Radhika checked it it had some pictures…Radhika was shocked looking at Nandini and Samrat’s pic….she looked at Neil…he smiled; ‘’Chashni now speak the truth…and how come Mala aunty went suddenly…you are alone there’’

Radhika; ‘’Nandini tried to harm Ma in the temple…and I will be out for two days…couldn’t leave her alone here with Nandini’’

Neil was shocked; ‘’Is she that dangerous….I can’t believe she can kill someone?’’

Radhika took a deep breath; ‘’She was planning to kill Sam after her wedding with Arjun Sir’’

Neil started sweating …he didn’t knew it was about Sam’s life…he looked at Radhika cupped her face; ‘’Chashni…if required…I will give my life for you…you risked yourself for Sam…what are you?’’

Radhika; ‘’I did what I felt was right’’

Neil; ‘’If she can plan to kill Sam…attack Mala aunty…then she can harm you too…we need to end this…we are leaving now…you go the parking…I will get Teji along…Radhika nodded and left

Radhika went to her place switched off her system picked her bag and walked to the exit…Arjun kept an eye on all movements…it was not just Arjun even Sam wanted to stop Neil and Radhika from travelling together…she kept on biting her nails out of irritation…Neil’s friendliness to Radhika was killing her every minute….Nandini called Arjun she knew Radhika will be out of station for 2 days she was happy about…Arjun immediately answered his call; ‘’Yes Nandu’’

Nandini; ‘’Make use of the opportunity….radhika will be out of station for 2 days…do whatever it takes to make Sam yours…’’

Arjun felt disgusted…The revenge he had been living for suddenly was suffocating him…he quickly moved out to get some fresh air…Arjun came and stood at the entrance of BS…he found Radhika talking to Teji …Arjun’s face was lit up with a smile…her animated hand movements…her expressions everything made him fall for her…Arjun was lost…Neil observed …he smiled he knew Arjun would make use of the opportunity of his and Radhika’s absence…he knew what should be done…he walked causally to Radhika and Teji…and suddenly pulled Radhika in a hug…he spoke something and Radhika laughed like a child Arjun went mad at the sight…Neil unlocked the back seat door of the car for Radhika and got in next to her to burn Arjun to death….He gestured Teji to sit with driver…as they drove off….Arjun’s brain started working on the plan to get to Radhika…not just Arjun Sam witnessed this from her office window…she could not hold more and barged into Piyali’s office…’’ Mom I am going to Panchagani for 2 days…I don’t trust Radhika or Teji can help Neil ….and Mom give me there hotel details’’

Piyali; ‘’Fine I will book you a cab…and regarding hotels…Neil himself did the booking…I don’t know where they are staying’’

Sam ; ‘’fine but we have the details of the models and the crew….it must be the same’’

Piyali; ‘’No…I checked…its not the same…and I am not getting this over protectiveness of Neil towards Radhika….Sam I don’t want you to go alone’’

Arjun who was looking for Sam and heard Sam Piyali’s conversation ….he spoke; ‘’I will go with her’’

Piyali agreed…both decided to leave in the afternoon…Neil on his way updated Radhika that they were planning to break into Nandini’s property…

Radhika went into shock… ‘’Neil how will we do that’’

Neil; ‘’Its only me and Teji… you will remain at the hotel’’

Radhika frowned; ‘’Then why the hell I am coming with you’’

Teji and Neil smiled at each other; ‘’because…we need you will know what to do ‘’ Neil knew Arjun will follow them…as Radhika was his need…and he wanted him to come…so that he stays away from Sam…but he was not aware that Sam was following him too

As Sam and ARjun started their journey to Panchgani…they both were quite being occupied in their respective thoughts…Arjun closed his eyes to calm his mind and in some minutes he dozed off… Sam looked at him smiled and turned her head to enjoy the view…

Radhika Neil and Teji went along the way smiling laughing and singing…the driver took a break ….Teji to went out to stretch in one hr they would reach their hotel…Neil was looking at Radhika lovingly…he kept his palm on Radhika’s and gently squeezed it Radhika looked at him surprised…Neil smiled cupped her face from one side and spoke; ‘’Chashni …If I would have met you before Sam …I would have fallen for you…Radhika leave Arjun….stop worrying about Sam…come to me…we will make a beautiful life together far from here”…

Radhika had tears in her eyes she smiled and nodded…Neil smiled wide and pulled Radhika into a close hug…Radhika felt complete ….Neil broke the hug cupped Radhika’s face and moved close to kiss her….Arjun woke up with a jerk….he was sweating profusely …what if this dream comes true….Sam got worried; ‘’Arjun are you ok’’

Arjun looked around like a maniac; ‘’Yes where are we…how much time will it take us to reach???’’

Sam; ‘’2 hrs….we were stuck in traffic on the highway’’ Arjun was going wild…he took two minutes break got out of the car…and dialled Teji…Teji looked at his phone and then Neil; ‘’This is the 20th time this khadoos is calling me…’’

Neil smiled; ‘’it’s time to answer…and don’t forget to pretend scared…and if he asks about Radhika…tell him she is in a important meeting with Neil in her room’’

Teji; ‘’Why are you sacrificing Chashni…have seen how he changes around her…he will take everything out on her’’

Neil; ‘’He cannot hurt her he loves Radhika…but to stop him from executing his plan and to make ours work we have to do this…don’t worry I will explain Chashni…go answer him or else he will kill you’’

Teji smiled and did exactly as Neil said….Arjun after speaking to Teji was as angry as a bull he poured whole bottle of water on his head…his POV; ‘I know you are doing this because I snatched Sam from you ….Radhika is innocent…she believes everyone to be good…if you touch her Neil…I swear I will rip you off with bare hands’

Precap: Radhika faces Arjun’s ire…Neil breaks into Nandini’s house with Teji.

Credit to: Gauri

92 comments

  1. I am gonna read this now but wont be able to comment di.. I know it will be as usual fabulous… No need to tell you right? 😉
    See ya soon..will miss you

  2. ❤?Natasha?❤

    Mindblowing….. fantabulous……… awesome……… i am in lack of words………..u keep me hooked to this ff…..luv ur ff……….i’m getting crazy thinking about the upcoming epi’s……….. pls update soon dearie…….will be waiting for ur nxt update……. luv ya?????❤❤❤❤

  3. Supriya

    Di I srsly don’t have words to praise u…..first toh sorry for pestering u yesterday really I mean it……I realized later how much I irritated u…..abt this update it z worth the wait…..now arjun will vent his anger on rads god save her…….Neil I love him but don’t worry I love u more so m sacrificing for u…..lol…..u know dat sentence Neil leaned to kiss rads left me shocked thank god it was arjun’s dream……what cheap things he dreams…..srsly….sam I don’t like her that much always confused abt whom she wants in her life…….we can’t step on two stones at a time…..if we do we r sure to fall….she wants arjun but wants to keep Neil to herself…… Rads my darling how much this girl will bear…..teji z rockstar I don’t know y they did not give him deserved screen space in series….. they were so busy in portraying angry bird arjun that they forgot there r other talented ppl too…….di u pls tell me when u will update next one…..if this time I pester u I won’t be sorry…..well u know I was awake whole night….. Call me stubborn…..I know I am if I decide something than no one can stop me…..I know I deserve a good scolding from u but m helpless u have created a spell on me…..can’t help it now…… Di now my questions……when will nandini ka truth will be out?I want raneil to dance together making arjun and Sam jealous….. Plz put this in upcoming updates….my request….. When will rads start trusting arjun? Will Neil tell rads abt his plans to make arjun jealous? Will arjun hurt rads in his jealousy? Will he hurt himself? Di I want him to burn more…..update soon….love you dear……muaaaaahhhhhh…… Tc?????????????????

    • Gauri

      Supriya darling thanks for the lovely comment and thanks a ton for sacrificing Neil for me lol 😛 now your answers 🙂 Nandini’s truth will be out in the same way but with a twist…. Rneil dance yes I have planned that and it will happen soon … making Arjun lose his senses completely…she will be leaving Arjun…Arjun will be punished for his deeds along with Nandini Sam and Samrat 🙂 will update soon 🙂 tc loads of love and big hug for you 🙂

      • Supriya

        Thanks for the ossum answers di but plz tell me when u will update next one even if it z late then too plz tell me the day…..u know how impatient I m…..loads of love….tc baby….

  4. nita

    Nice one… They should hve played your story instead of original one….. Neil they gvn any preference to his role thre…..here he turned to be hero just love raneil bond….waiting for Nxt one

  5. Oh my god darling dis s really awesome ??? oh please suggest some more words from dictionary ?? u r incredible darling ?? everthing s just superb k??? i really dono how to explain the things ?arjun really. a poor soul stuck b/w revenge n love ? oh neil is really awesome ? u r really using him. well which mmz missed to do??✌rads sacrifice queen ?? she s really pure?sam sorry for her……. 🙂 i loved each ones pov in board room. ? aradhika morning moments?neil idea how. to keep arju away. from sam ?and above all dis arjun dream (neil n. rads)✌?? i loved d way u explained about d fireflies ? loved it? love u? take care?

  6. ab

    Awesome di amazing ? Arjun is totally in love with radhu o god …and that dream so interesting di …agr sach maisa ho to …..oh I love it and love you to ? next update soon I am waiting…….tc di

  7. This one is my personal fav coz this is the extension of original series…n u show us what I want…Arjun n Sam hope one day they’ll completely become ashes…neil n teji very good…zubin n kritika hope they will get good lesson from Neil…they never utilize Neil n teji characters…argh…nadu i love her so much that I can’t explain…u know??

  8. Raaga

    superrrrb gauri
    wonderful
    mind blowing
    fabulous
    Arjun should suffer so that onr day he ll come out of revenge once in all
    niel good going
    teji caring for chashni s so cute
    thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you soooooooo muchh
    love u loads 🙂

  9. Joona

    Arjun and his dreams… Ha ha…I loved it…
    He really need such shocks…gauri di..u rocked it…
    Di..can u plz tell me the names of ur whole ff(both completed and ongoing)…I don’t want to miss anyone of it…

  10. Sv

    Im struggling to breath now. God such a great update. I never knew jealousy would do this much.
    Loved it. U know what it is giving me an immense pleasure to see sam and arjun in jealous. Burn babies burn. Im falling for ur ff di. Soo great.

    Soo neil knew that arjun is in love with radhika but why always sam is a dumboo cant she feel that she is in love with neil.
    Radhika is also falling for arjun without her sense . Her heart is also filled with arjun as his heart is with radhika. Nandhini Arghh she never change teji a great supportive friennd wish everone has a friends like teji and neil.

    Loved it to the core. Love u di and ur words. Take care di and bear hugs and kisses. Muuhhhaaa

    • Gauri

      Thanks Sv darling 🙂 I always love your comments 🙂 Neil could see the change in Arjun’s behaviour and Sam her mind is clouded with anger…till she has anger and hatered she won’t be able to see the truth 🙂 million hugs and a bucket full of kisses for you 🙂

      • Sv

        Make sure that no one is spared. Neither arjun, sam samrat nandhini and evwn zubin and karthika . No one and I wanted them to die in pain for hurting lil radhika. Pls its my request. Tear the mask of nandhini. Amd so the others would come to know how mean they were to the person who always thinks about others goodness.

  11. Rg

    Hi gauri. Thank u for d double damaka. It was fantastic. And I loved it. I loved raneil bond. Arjuns possessivenes is always a treat to watch. I noticed smth today she too seems to hurt him with words but does seem to realize it. Radhika us genuinely intuitive then y doesn’t she realize it. Though I do completely agree arjun does deserve them dearly. Has rads started feeling for arjun? If so pls tell me. I loved teji s care for rads. I hope samrat, arjun and Sam plus nandini all pay dearly for doing this. Wat any d dinner btw Sam and arjun? Wat abt d office scene where by Sam thoroughly insults rads is it thr? When will rads start feeling possessive abt arjun. Today she said she didn’t get hurt. But will she get hurt in d future If she sees them together. I don’t want arjun ,Sam to b forgiven soon. Also nandini and samrat should pay for their deeds…. Will rads come to know tat arjun loves her? Pls tell me gauri. Am too curious. By d way u isn’t Neil telling rads tat arjun loves her and not sam? Superb story. Lovely writing skills. Too gud… Pls update asap. If possible let me know when u can update this.
    Sam’s words were cruel. I hope rads come out of it soon. Thank u. Take care stay blessed.

    • Gauri

      Hi Rg, Thanks a ton for the amazing comment and now you answers 🙂 I just want to show Radhika normal … she was called with various names and insulted and because of Arjun… she can’t be too polite to him…sometimes even she can give it out to him…Radhika will realise her feeling but will not forgive Arjun…she will leave him….Samrat Nandini Arjun Sam all will be punished …Sam will insult her more wait for that yes …She will know of Arjun’s love soon … will update soon 🙂 loads of love and pls don’t say sorry for typos even I do that 🙂

  12. chandan

    This is awesome Gauri…this is how it could have been…but i am enjoying more here reading your writings…Neil came to know the truth nice…Nesam part at fireflies scene and Neil’s dialouge there is lovely…Arjun n his dreams…Radz is innocent so is Sam Arjun…when will you realize…Todays epi’s are so good Gauri…tc

  13. gayu

    Thanks a lot i was waiting eagerly for this gauri u r the best. I can visually see everything. U r my favourite writer. I can proudly say that I am your fan. When u will upload next one?

    • Gauri

      Thanks Gayu 🙂 I am speechless at your words but smiling wide while replying you 🙂 I am yet to start will try to post soon 🙂 love you 🙂

  14. M

    i hv something in my heary who jumped…..hehe….arjun’s dream…….lol……
    the time radhika n arjun’s eyelock…..wow…….
    neil……ops my neil….hehe……huhu….haha…….super…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Maandey 🙂 you keep on teasing me on Neil…. never mind… I love you more than Neil 🙂 muhaaa 🙂

  15. Mygod super episode..I was taken into that world..just want run to you and giv u a hug..just ur making me curious ,crazy,enthusiastic nd what not …I can’t say hw much I admire u…ur an unique piece created by God….
    You play with portraying characters..Neil wow yaar just awesome in today’s episode nd arjun turning with anger …niel nd radhika bond..everything was superb

    • Gauri

      Thanks Priya 🙂 a big hug for you to make me feel on the top of the world 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  16. Gauriiiii it just outstanding yarrr…i was just lost in this update..n don’t want to come to reality… you are superb yarrrr…Neil is best…loved how Arjun cated about rads wound…love u baby…take care..n tight hug dear

  17. lavanya

    loved it to the power of infinity…really enjoyed reading this version of manmarziyan…it fills in the gaps of the original story perfectly…wish the production house had approached you…and adapted your story…arjun’s insecurity and hidden love coming out seeing radhika and neiltogether. ..happy that radhika has teji and neil by her side..wish arjun gives up his thirst for revenge and does his best to make radhika love him with a true heart…please keep going di…day by day…your level of writing is increasingand we can see how best writer you are turning out to be…I will wait for the moment when your book gets published…and I can’t you release the Destiny..Passion…Obsession story itself as your subject…it’s gonna become a mania for the novel reader’s …I can proudly say then…gauri di…the author of the book is my di..and we used to talk…ohhh..what a thrilling feel it is…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Lavanaya 🙂 so nice of you to compliment my words in such a beautiful way 🙂 I will burn arjun to ashes 🙂 I will release a book…hope it turns out good 🙂 thanks for motivating me everytime :)stay blessed dear 🙂 and when my book is a success we will party together 🙂

  18. Kanika Kamboj

    This ff is also amazing as the other one…You are a great writer…!! The feeling while reading your ffs can’t b explained in words…
    All th very best dear.. Hopefully one day i get to read a book written by you…!! Stay blessed..!!

    • Gauri

      Thanks Kanika 🙂 I am keeping my fingers crossed regarding my book 🙂 love you 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  19. Gianna

    Wow Gauri what a dhamaka. Arjun was only haunted by Radhika’s dream now he dreams of Neil too. Neil is gonna end up giving him a heart attack? loved this very very much. Love uuuu ????

  20. Feby

    Di…awesome…well dpo aur iska saath me comment kar dethi hun..i dont know wat black magic has been done in my phone tat my comments r not gettng accepted in dpo…well…di..u rocked it…and arjuns possessiveness and neils way of instigating arjun is awesom..i havnt watched evn a single episode of mmz in strplus..plus frm nov..tats the time whn i strted reading it..i got to know of its plot sooo perfectly and wid tis i feel as if iam seeing tat.. and dpo…i hav to say…u r awesome..i hav no words to tell…my dictionary have no words to appreciate u..iam really addicted to dpo…evryday i read it…and i wait for next one…i will b waiting tat whole night to read it..last time i hav to say..my sneezing plus irritation and also my comment not getting posted…so tis time i only tried once..i knew u will update tis..so tat only…if u feel irritated u tell me..well…i loved ur prologue of ur book…now itself plz tell me the estimated cost of book so tat i can save my pocket money…i will b the first one to buy it…and di..in dpo i liked the way arjun was behaving like a kid…aww..it was sooo cute…and will neil oppose thm really…means its always said na arjun was his bestfrnd cum bro…tats y…anyhow…i lovd it…di i know iam a bit ovr but still asking u..will u update two chappy togethr fot the next dpo update…ok…only if u can…well…here in my native it was fully raining wid soo much lighting and thunderbolt…enjoying rain …lol…and tomorrow its election here too…but still iam feeling awkward here …love u lots di…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Feby darling 🙂 hope now u got relief from ur allergy …thanks for such beautiful words for both the updates love you for that ….and regarding book..let it come I will send you a copy myself… and now abt dpo..yes Neil and Arjun are best frnds but Radhika is Neil’s family and he wont let me take advantage of her…I am terribly missing rain looking forward to few cooling showers ….loads of love and hugs for you stay healthy and fit 🙂

  21. aastha

    oh di what should I say ???? words fall in short to describe this wonderful epi………………..I feel like hugging you……………….today I felt sad for Arjun………loved his care towards Radhika……………Neil you are amazing man…………..I love u…………..he cleary understood that Arjun loves Rads………………….hated Sam’s dialogues to Rads………….poor girl…….I don’t understand y Samrat is being quite……can’t he understand that Rads life is in danger??????? all the khanna’s are selfish…………………………Ardhika scene at airport was very nice…………..I loved the morning wake up scene very very much……………..reading that I was jumping with joy……………….reading Arjun’s dream I was laughing………………nesam scene was also nice……esp the pact btw them…………..Neil knows how to silence Sam………Neil is the hero……you are making me fall in love with him as every episode goes by………………the precap looks interesting……………….plzzzz update soooooooooooon……………………love u………TC…………….

  22. Aastha

    Sorrrry sorrrry Di
    I was busy so didn’t read your DPO. … It was awesome….. Radhika very cleverly stopped Neil from meeting Arjun…waiting for Arjun – Neil encounter…

    And your (6yrs ) prologue is very nice….plot of your story seems different and amazing…… about suggesting name of story… honestly I don’t know….. not getting any idea….
    Congratulations ..!!!!Di for your book…I am verrrrrry happppy you are writing a book…….!!!
    What name u have thought for the book..??

    Mmz…. loved it…Arjun was all the way jealous…. waiting for Nandini’s true face to come out….. how could she control her brother’s life …only for her stupid revenge…. … Arjun’s dream was very funnnnyyyy….

    Update soon
    Love u ….tc
    🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

    • Gauri

      Aastha dear no need for sorry 🙂 its ok I understand and thanks for the beautiful comment…love u tc 🙂

  23. Rg

    Hi gauri regarding the title for 6 yrs my suggestions are
    1) my repressed love
    2) waiting to be mine.
    I also liked gianna title remnants.. I got inspired from tat particular word. Not sure y it affected me so. But it was an apt word….

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rg 🙂 will start framing the story and characters and accordingly chose one 🙂 but do let me know if more comes to your mind 🙂

  24. Wow Gauri dear….amazing one… Each every part sooper Dooper hit…I loved it to d core…waiting for next one…love u …tc..

  25. Roma

    Awesome really superbbbb n dynamite double dhamaaka episodes. …I’m totally addicted…..lots of lots of praising words for your mind blowing flawless talent of writing. …the story is going really superbbbb…arjun n sam r burning in jealousy n soon will be ashes…lol….neil my lovely buddy doing awesome job to make arjun n sam taste the pain….rads n sam fight, neil consoling rads n arjun watched…lol…showing his anger in punching bag….wowwww. ..teji was also so good…panchgani trip will be fun….arjun’s dream….o my goodness….gauri. I was just laughing like maniac. ..you really have such a Devine powers to magically drawn all of us to your dreamland. . God bless you always….I’m enjoying it very very muchhhh. ..precap is very exciting. …keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads….muaaaaahhhhhh…lotssssss of hugsssssss n kissesssss ♡♡♡♡♡♡

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