MMZ- Married by Fate- Chapter 45

Hello my dearies πŸ™‚ so here is the next one…..please ignore my mistakes πŸ˜€ ..there will be many πŸ™‚ do let me know how was this πŸ™‚ stay blessed dearies

Chapter 45

Radhika walked out of the wash room…she huffed at Arjun’s sleeping form on the king size plush bed….he was the Mehra prince…and his room proved that…Avantika gave Arjun the largest and the best room…it was full of his pictures some which she had and others what Radhika gave her…there was a gap…but they were filling it living all the moments….Radhika pulled open the heavy curtains off the huge window….Arjun squinted his eyes when sunlight filled his room…he pulled the comforter over his haed…Radhika shook her head and pulled the comforter from the other side…Arjun lazily opened his eyes watching her…she was ready for office….a towel tied around her wet hair…Radhika was using all her energy to pull comforter off…Arjun suddenly got up and pulled it harder..making her fall on him….he rolled her over…burying his face in her neck; ”You smell awesome”

Radhika pushed; ”not now… get up… Neil had asked for you atleast 10 times since 6”

Arjun lifted his torso on his elbows; ”6!!!! let me see what times he gets up after his wedding” Radhika for wriggling under him when they heard a knock…Arjun huffed ; ”I am seriously going to be a bone in his romance ” Arjun jumped out of the bed leaving a giggling Radhika behind…Arjun pulled the door open; ”yes little brother”

Neil moved in and gave a naughty smirk..he understood looking at Radhika why Arjun looked annoyed ……he joined his palms; ”Bhabhiji Good morning….please do us a favour and send the breakfast in this room”

Radhika nodded and left….Neil turned to Arjun…. ”Big bro please put a shirt on…I am not interested in your biscuits” Arjun glared and sliped into a tshirt…once Radhika was out of the view he spoke; ”Arjun go to Mamu and tell him that you will take over the Anuj’s project ”

Arjun; ”Ok …then we finish him… good Idea but bird Song too need us”

Neil smiled; ”BS we can work a little extra… please ask your wife not to travel alone”

Arjun thought ; ”Same goes to Sam….Anuj is planning something big…..” Neil was about to utter nandini when Radhika walked in….both turned quite…Radhika placed the tray on the table; ” Papa is calling you both and I am leaving…Sam is waiting for me”

Arjun; ”Ok you will have a bodyguard from now” Radhika wanted to protest but Neil closed her mouth; ”Hazards of being a mehra DIL….”

Sam was escorted to the main hall of the Mehra Mansion by one of the staff…she seated herself waiting for Radhika…Pratap walked in and greeted; ”Good Morning to you Sam…”

Sam got up; ”Good morning Uncle..”

Pratap; ”So how is everything going….well I have a bad news for you….hence forth Arjun Neil will be working with me…..I know how Arjun helped you in saving Bird SOng”

Sam rolled her eyes; ”Its Ok uncle…I don’t mind them leaving….but to be true it was Radhika who saved Bird Song…..till I have her…I am safe” Pratap watched Sam…..Sam returned his piercing gaze confidently…Radhika walked inside the room with a tray; ”Papa your medicines …Neil Arjun are waiting in the study” Pratap’s gaze moved to Radhika….he was piratically comparing the two….one was soft the other was fiery but they were friends …best friends of what he had heard…..that surprised him…he wished both the girls and walked away to his study…Sam wrapped an arm around Radhika’s shoulder; ”if he is proud of his boys ….I am proud of my girl”

Radhika smiled; ”You are impossible Sam” Sam winked before walking out with Radhika….they found two six feet strong physic men waiting for them…Radhika made a face…Sam chuckled; ”take it easy girl…we got our personal Aloo chat….lets enjoy” Radhika pressed her lips to hide her laughter

Delhi

Pari had started crawling and with this her mischief too were multiplying…she would throw anything and everything in her reach…or sometimes just crawl under the bed or a table when she felt Riddhima was angry… Riddhima entered the kitchen to find the lower shelf completely messed up….the vegetables were rolling all over the floor…and Pari was close to the refrigerator…trying to open the door…Riddhima pressed her temple…Kaki gently squeezed her shoulder telling her she will clean up….Riddhima picked Pari up made her sit into the crib….Pari stood up holding the crib and started screaming all annoyed…riddhima glared; ”Pari quite…..don’t annoy me” Pari went mute and sat in crib with a thud …her lower lip curled…

Riddhima went about cleaning….and did not notice Shiv walking in…Shiv walked into the room and found his naughty daughter dull….he lifted her up and held her to his face…Shiv gently hugged Pari to his chest; ”what angle….not happy to see your daddy today” Pari silently kept her head on Shiv’s shoulder….he didn’t like it…he tickled her…but she stayed quite….Shiv understood..he walked straight to the kitchen…he asked in a stern voice ; ”Did you scold her…..”

Riddhima was super annoyed…she tugged her sari and turned with a broom in her hand; ”Yes I did….any problem”

Shiv blinked gulped looking at the dangerous posture; ”No….No problem….I was just asking”

Riddhima; ”Good for both of you….now till I and kaki are done cleaning this mess….both of you better stay in the room….I see one of you out…..you are dead”

Shiv smiled and quickly retreated; he got in the bed…and placed Pari on his chest….stroking her cheek….he knew she would look up…she always did since he first met her…Pari looked up…Shiv smiled …. gently tickling her tummy…and then came a squeal…she happily threw her arms on him…trying to peck him her way…..and by the time Riddhima walked into her room….it was a mess with pillows on the floor….Pari’s toys scattered… clothes which she had ironed just and hour back looked ready to be washed again….Riddhima was ready to explode…. she knew Pari was under the bed with Shiv as his half body visible to her confirmed it…Riddhima turned super mad; ”Shiv I am going to kill you…come out both of you this instant”

Shiv gave Pari a smile and crawled out with her….Riddhima stood there all furious with her arms folded to chest…Shiv gave Pari a cute peck..and placed her into the crib….he slowly walked to riddhima..and patted her head; ”Breathe wifey……breathe….take a deep breath and let go”

Riddhima jerked his hand away…she was about to fire him when he threw her over his shoulder carrying her under the shower…he let the cold water drench her completely; ”Shiv what was this for”

Shiv made an innocent face; ”I always had a fantasy of having a rain dance with you….so shall we” Riddhima tried holding her angry expression….but she couldn’t …after a minute she started laughing pulling Shiv under water … SHiv locked her to his chest ; ”Wifey you look super hot….in a drenched Sari…how about a honeymoon”

Riddhima; ”Wow you are bribing me for Pari… not bad….when”

Shiv; ”After Neil-Sam wedding….” Shiv pecked Riddhima’s cheek….they walked out and the view made Riddhima froze….Pari was half out of her crib…. she made sure she was smart enough on the bed side….she looked at Shiv; ”Don’t tell me she can get out on her own….” Riddhima held her head

Pari got out successfully falling on the bed….Shiv gave her one more peck awarding her for her effort and success.

Manya was in a hurry….she stuffed her bag and ran to parking , she quickly fired up the engine..but her car didn’t move….manya got down and found the tire punctured …. groaning in frustration….she pulled her hair….and then kicked the tire hurting herself in process…she kept jumping holding her foot cursing herself; ”Stupid ….. stupid …stupid…Manya….Sam and Radhika must be waiting and here I am stuck again…I hate myself…I can’t even do one thing correctly”

Ankush who watched this from his car…smiled he kept watching her antics for few minutes and then got down…Akush walked and stood behind jumping Manya leaning on the adjoining car watching her… she looked cute in her jump suit…her thin frame looked delicate like a twig…her wavy hair kept bouncing ….her flawless skin and sharp features made her look like a marble doll… Ankush out of the blue lifted her up; ”is is hurting bad”

Manya turned cold; ”ummm….yes…no…I mean I was getting late….Radhika…..Sam are waiting for me…..at the jewellery shop”

Ankush gave her a handsome smile…and made her sit in his car; ”I will drop you to your destination and get your car repaired….now smile”

Manya was on cloud nine…Ankush held her in his arms….her heart was dancing she felt her prayers suddenly got answered….she was not able to close her mouth…smiling like an idiot…

Pratap was hiring for his new office in India….he introduced Arjun and Neil to his staff …..Arjun was just looking at his watch…he and Neil wanted to reach Bird Song soon…they had few urgent clients to handle…. they took leave from Pratap after taking care of all the important work….more that work…they wanted to stay together….Neil ran and pressed the elevator button…the got in and came face to face with Anuj….who smirked; ”Wow Arjun without Radhika….shit I missed the chance to see her”

Arjun curled his fingers ..Neil held his hand and replied; ”Keep watching Anuj…you might miss few breaths too….and who knows you might just choke…” Anuj gulped….Arjun smirked he tapped Neil’s shoulder and they walked out….once in BS both went to their love…Arjun got to know from Zubin that Radhika wanted a break to think on a punch line…she was on the terrace…Arjun smiled and ran up…he tiptoed near her and hugged her from behind; ”Missed you”

Radhika smiled; ”Arjun it was just few hours and you missed me so much…how will you survive once yo start working full time for Mehra group….”

Arjun turned Radhika around plastering her front to his; ”I have my ways to reach you….you very well know that…there is nothing and no one who can keep me away from you…not even you”

Radhika blushed and lowered her head; ”Arjun its going to be a year…and you talk like teenagers …mad in love”

Arjun lifted her chin up; ”I am..MAD…for you…about you…this will never change even after 50 yrs of our marriage…” Radhika smiled looking into his eyes….Arjun held her tightly by waist caressing her face with the other hand….. ”Mrs Radhika Arjun Mehra…..you are drug to me…which has no cure…..and you deserve a punishment”

Radhika; ”what for…?”

Arjun replied sternly ; ”These days you are neglecting me”

Radhika justified herself innocently ; ”No its nothing like that….I am helping in Neil and Sam wedding….” Radhika noticed Arjum smiling….she pouted ..Arjun chuckled at her innocence he pecked her forehead…hugging her tightly.. ”By the way we are yet to complete what Neil interrupted in morning” Radhika hid her face in Arjun’s chest all shy

Neil watched as Sam excitedly showed him the shopping she did with Radhika….Sam stopped when she found Neil just staring her; ”Like what you see”

Neil smiled; ”Like???? …that’s a small word…..I am loving the view ….who wouldn’t love watching a cartoon show…”

Sam who was waiting for a compliment…was shocked; ”I look like a cartoon to you….?” Neil nodded all serious

Sam frowned then smiled….she picked up a paper weight; ”What will happen i I bang this on your head…what would be the result….”

Neil gave Sam a horrified expression; ”Why are talking like a sadist….that thing will open my head”

Sam like a child responded; ”Nope wrong answer….this will come back to me bouncing on your head…shall we try”

Neil got up and stood a little far from Sam; ”Sam keep that thing down…”

Sam followed him; ”I look like a toon to you right…so have it now…starting today I will be a toon…hitting you with every possible thing I get…and since toons never get hurt even being thrown of the buildings…I am not worried about you getting hurt…because all my weapons would be toon weapons” Neil kept running around the table apologising and Sam kept scaring him picking one or the other things…Neil zoomed around and enveloped Sam in his strong arm..before she could understand he place his lips on the throbbing nerve of her neck….Sam gasped…Neil took his time…when he lifted his head up to meet hers she was looking down…Neil brushed his knuckles on her cheek; ”I am in love with you my crazy toon”

The Sangeet

Khanna house was full of guests….Sam was dressed beautifully in a orange chaniya choli, Neil had dawned designer navy blue kurta…radhika accompanied Neil as his babhi getting glares from Sam…. the performances started one by one…kids performed first followed by Zubin Kritika…Nia and Teji’s performance was a show stealer they both were lost in each others eyes during the whole performance…and separated only once everybody started applauding..but it making Arjun Ankush raise a brow… Radhika and Arjun performed on ‘Suraj Hua madham…..’ heating up the environment…..

Manya Ankush were stealing glances at each other Sam was watching this for sometime now…she nudged Manya… ”if you keep moving in slow motion…someone else might steal him away”

Manya turned gloomy and turned towards Ankush….she found a girl interacting with him…even he was smiling at her ….Manya turned furious…she clutched her dress tightly not able to understand what should she do…..Ankush suddenly turned towards Manya and froze….he read pain in her eyes…Manya turned and walked away…Ankush cursed himself and followed….Sam smiled… last performance was of Neil- Sam…they performed on Kambhakat Ishq …at the end of the performance Neil pecked Sam’s forehead….

Manya stood in a corner silently shedding tears…she kept chiding herself; ”No Manya…don’t cry…if he doesn’t care let him go to hell…it doesn’t matter to me either” She composed herself and then broke down hiding her face in her palms …..but she was staled hearing a voice

Ankush; ”I do care…..a lot” Manya turned around…she turned mute…Ankush took two steps towards her …he lifted manya’s chin up ; ”we are very different….I come from a middle class family and you are a Khanna Princess…born in luxury and studied abroad….I have led a simple life….it might be difficult for you…”

Manya; ”Can you please let me try….before just failing me”

Ankush cupped her cheek; ”I am scared….”

Manya held his hand between hers; ”Me too….but I can’t give up without trying…please give me a chance…” Manya kept her palms on Ankush’s chest ..she felt him going stiff ….Manya smiled and leaned placing her head on his chest….Ankush lifted his arms wrapping it around Manya… Manya relaxed….and Ankush tighten his arms…both closed their eyes forgetting everybody around them…..

Precap- Nandini is back…. the wedding…. and lot more

73 comments

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Lol…am.not….hahah…5 mins pe first place miss ho gaya…

      Heyya magician…..I simply adored this one… Ardhika😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘Arneil. 😘😍😍😍Sam1 and pratap…..πŸ‘πŸ‘Anuj and Arneil πŸ’ͺπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒAnkhush manya…πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†Pari…😘😘 Ridhi and shiv…πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ˜‰πŸ˜ˆπŸ˜‰Again ArdhikaπŸ˜‰πŸ˜NesamπŸ˜‚πŸ˜πŸ˜sangeet….suraj1 hua madham….Gauri….thats my fav1 ya…. haiyeeee…kitna1 khoob hoga…Main tairi rahi zameen chalte rahe..kya hai mera pehla pehla pyaar hai…sajnaaaa…….How would I sleep now……Arjun….😍😍😘😘😘we are in MBF land isn’t…oh god…I
      forgot….God…!! πŸ™πŸ™please..give me this goodwa cutewa Arjun…Remember my god…!! πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™This Gauri now made me to stay awake…am humming that song…everything out of focus…glad that you had it at last.. chalo…Magic fairy….love you loads…Muaaah….TC….this is one aweosomeofantasticaaexcellentica chap…
      you made me to say that…

      • Gauri

        Gauri

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        Jess I am smiling wideπŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€…my teeth are ready to jump out to do a hip hop in happiness after reading your comments….you never fail to make me feel special love u my friend πŸ™‚

  1. Neha

    Awesomeeee update….Aradhika and Nesam scene was superbbb…. last part Manya and Ankhush… sooo cute….totally loved it….waiting for next one post soon…love you…

  2. Nayan

    Nayan

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    Wow .. it was fabulous .. sorry for not commenting on any mmz ff … I’m stuck with assignments and exam … sorry guys once again … when I was stressed with all of these exam and assignments .. you’re story make me relaxed gauri di … coming to the today episode .. from the start to the end it was mind blowing … ardhika’s romantic scenes were to cute .. neil bad boy … he know how to irratate his big bro .. he he arjun going to be the big hurdle in nesam’s romance … too funny .. kadoos arjun mehera act as love stuck puppy .. radhika’s unconditional love make him teenage lover … sam gave good punch for pratap … prathap comparing rasam was too good … hope now he understands the value of his dil … if radhika is ice then sam is fire … totally agree with that… shiv and pari’s moments were adorable … shiv knows how to make his little angel happy .. pari loves shive more than riddima … riddima was really angry with shiv and his angle …. shiv proved that he is not only a good criminal lawyer but he is good in pacifying his angry wife by his own way … I hate anuj … he has no shame .. I’m sure that arjun going to nail him badly this time .. give anuj a good punishment that he won’t forget for the rest of his life … arjun and radhika’s sweet moments in birdsong was too nice … they are going to celebrate their 1st wedding anniversary yeppieeee waiting for that … nesam are not going to change …they are still fighting like tom and jerry .. I can imagine the status of mehera mansion after nesam’s wedding … I’m sure that ardhika will be the umpire between nesam and stop the fights…. finally another love story is started .. I’m really excited to watch ankush and manya’s love story … it will be really interesting … because they are two different characters … thrilling precap … hope nandani will not a negative character any more .. fingers crossed for that … stay blessed di πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ plz update soon I’m so excited to know about upcoming thrilling stories .. love you β™₯ β™₯ β™₯ β™₯

    • Gauri

      Gauri

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      Nayan darling thanks after reading your comment I feel I have written something good…thanks for boosting my confidence so much πŸ™‚ love u 😘😘😘😘😘

  3. KK123

    KK123

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    super duper once again…everything was good..nesam and ardhika moment were toooo cute…i just loved Shiv and his angel part..precap…raising eyebrows…
    waiting on your next dear…take care..love you stay bless.

  4. arti viswanathan

    Awesome episode gauri… I loved it… I liked all scenes….. Omg ankush has fallen for manya…. Excellent, superb and marvelous episode gauri dear… Day-by-day it’s being intersting me to read ur written update…. Tc loads of love and teddy hug to u from me…..

  5. Brin

    Brin

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    Outstanding episode, Love it to the core, you are the queen of manmarziyan fabulous writing, I really enjoy reading it, wish this could have been on TV, eagerly waiting for the next episode, Gauri you nail it, well done. πŸ™‚

    Both of my ff mother’s diary and jealous, betrayal, mistake, redemption is updated on dec 10. πŸ™‚

  6. RituUshaM

    OMG…..I m in so much love with you gauri……u refresh my morning…..awww….pari…..super amazing kid…. I like all four couples….love is in the air……lol!!!!

  7. Manolove

    Manolove

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    The awesome update.. ..

    Let me get a chance to explain in detail..

    Fabulous part: when pari and shiv made the entire house messy and radi.. being the most annoying person..

    Romantic part: when Neil banged into the room and Arjun said I will surely be bone to his romance..

    Cute: when shiv complemented radi as hot and asking for honeymoon and Arjun saying punishment for Radhika to ignore her..

    Sad: when manya and ankush said they are scared about.. their love…

    Comedy part: Sam and Neil running behind with love but trying to hit each other…

    Best line : I am in love with crazy toon..

    And this is pretty long dear.. I hoped have said all.. sorry if I have missed anything..

    Love u loads and loads..😍😍😍😍😍

  8. Chinmayi

    Very bad tu.. I typed a loooong comment and it got deleted! 😑gauri di, superb update I liked everything… Ardhika romance, Neil’s interruption, Sam’s bold answer, sweet ankush-Manya, cute Nia-teji, lovely pari-Ridhi-Shiv… Luv u loads di..

  9. Shree

    Shree

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    what just happened? maamaaaa.. i think i need to run.. so much love!! ankush and manya finally!! shiv is crazy.. no doubt pari is his daughter.. ridhi lol.. pratap uncle.. want more? hehe neil.. toon.. get ready.. sam is awesome.. personal aloo chat! yipie.. bone in romance.. arjun i dont think so.. ur too good.. anuj get ready to buurrrnn.. teji n nia.. get ready.. ardhika… aww. one year.. teenagers.. hehe

    ting ting ta ting.. hehe.. love you di for this..

    bye .. update soon.. love you

  10. Sulbi

    Sulbi

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    Marvellous episode… i loved it… not only Sam even Neil is also a toon… lovely couple… Arjun and Radhika wont miss a single sec for romance… so hot couples… but Neil my buddy disturb his lovely bhabi and bhai during romance… hehe.. arjun will be bone to Neil romance… shiv and pari torturing ridhi.. lovely torture… Ankush and Manya fantabulous… they decided to try… sounds cool… waiting for Ankush and Manya romance lol… awesome update dear… i loved it… waiting for next part…. update ASAP… Love you dear tc….

  11. Rossy

    Rossy

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    Nadini back but why…for good or bad…chudel kabhi nahi …hope Pratap will find girls adorable and lovable…shiv n Pari rocked…lol…shiv gulped seeing Ridhi with groom…ayyyyiiii….every pairs are set up.. How will there life proceed…waiting to see that…πŸ˜ƒ

  12. Aasthu

    Aasthu

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    Sooooooo good……OMG Pari is sooo cute…..I want a little baby like her…..nesam was very funny…..mankush…..WOW……..nowadays noooooo ardhika……seems like after getting back family none have time for each other……..Pratap’s comparison of rasam…..good……loved Sam’s dialogue and her return glare……I don like Pratap……he doesn’t give a damn to Radhika…..Avantika is sweet……

  13. Naaga

    Naaga

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    Gauri _ U.R. Impossible πŸ‘

    Ha ha ha Nesam portions r very funny πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    Ardhikaz part asusaul awesome 😍😍😍

    Radsam …that Aloo chat shot ha ha ha supper πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    And shiv , Pari, ridhimma scene awhhhh it ws the best πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

    So overall today_ full & full _comedy update πŸ˜ƒ ….Thanks for putting smile on my face Gauri☺

  14. Dipika

    Dipika

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    Angellllll i never get tired of reading your stories time n again.. You are born to write.. Every time i felt. M. Lucky to read ur words.. I just loved this chap soooopp much… Every bit of it was soooo beautiful…. Aradhika morning romance.. Neil ka interruption.. Lol.. Neil. Beta u gonna pay fir this disturbance.. Sam supporting radz.. Aww… She grown up now… Sangeet was Awsome… N ankush n mamya.. Wow… They r mind blowing today.. Loved it..post soon darling.. Love u lots 😍 😍 😍

    • Gauri

      Gauri

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      Oh Dipu you never fail to take me to the moon….your words pump in a different kind of energy in me πŸ™‚ loads of love sweety stay blessed 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  15. Sathya

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    “FABELHAFT” ONE GAURI…YOU ARE JUST AN EXCEL IN EVERYTHING WHAT YOU ARE DOING. I don’t have words to praise your work dear…we can’t judge it by our words.

    My most favourite part in this whole episode is Sam gave a mocking answer to Pratap supporting her friend Radhika and He just stood there and analysing both. That’s a best part according to me…the friendship between them makes others jealous always….

    I hope Pratap will understand the Rad’s importance in everyone’s life soon. Ardhika is always special in everything what they do. Neil is seriously a villain for Arjun and his romance. I want Arjun to disturb him after his marriage..it will be really fun to watch them. πŸ˜› :P:P

    I am so much in love with this story and CR…i will always read it whenever it gets posted but am sorry for commenting late..these days na i too have lot of ffs pending in my list…we are sailing in the same boat πŸ™‚

    Love you dear πŸ™‚ bear hugs πŸ™‚

    • Gauri

      Gauri

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      One thing is for sure I am improving on the vocabulary part because of your unique comments Sathya πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ Thanks a million time and darling pls don’t be sorry …..that word should not exist between us loads of love 😍😍😍😍😍😍

  16. saran

    Mindblowind episode gauri…. Ardhika scene awesome….wait 4 next and ardhika moment…. Pls update next soon….

  17. Aastha

    hey Gauri di…awesome chappy…loved ardhika moments…arjun.” I’m gonna be bone in his romance”..lol…nesam lovely…shiv n pari..the best jodi…Riddhima with a broomstick and Shiv pleasing her for Pari..lol….Ankush n Manya…good
    now from where Anuj n Nandini came..??..ardhika dance awesome..lovely song di..waiting for next one….loads of love..take care.. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
    di ..i would comment at crosssroads when completed reading..

  18. _Ritu

    _Ritu

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    Wow…amazing update Gauri.. πŸ™‚ Shiv scared from Riddhi.. πŸ˜‰ lol.. πŸ˜ƒ Pari antics r always adorable 2 read πŸ™‚ 😊 I guess u mentions ur antics which u did in childhood πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ lovely epi.. πŸ™‚ hope Nandini nd Anuj won’t create any problem for the couples… πŸ™‚ waiting for nxt…loads of love πŸ™‚

  19. Meen

    Meen

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    I actually don’t know today for whom to drool…..I mean Neil & Arjun r all time hot & fav……but ankush…..haiiiiiii…..today I loved him….d way u described d scene when he took manha in his embrace….. I loved it…..plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz…write a scene like this for me sometime in future…..I can’t tell u….how much I loved it..it was nothing extraordinary….. But it touched my heart…..I know I sound crazy…. But pretty plz….
    Update as usual was outstandinggggggg….love u….muuuha

  20. Jewel

    Jewel

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    Paransh is so cute… I loved their scenes… Manya and Ankush, finally they united. Ardhika as always superb. Loved the chapter a lot gauri…. Waiting for next….

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