MMZ- Married by Fate- Chapter 40 & 41

Hello there all the lovely people …missed you all…so finally back to work …and Rossie dear belated happy bday to you…and this one is dedicated to you my wonderful friend who has a beautiful heart…she is an amazing support and motivator to all of us …may almighty bless you all the happiness and million smiles

I have too much to read and comment …so guys will be late in replying…do let me know how was this one….crossroads on Thursday morning

Chapter 40

Bird Song

Radhika knocked Neil’s cabin door but there was response….she gently pushed the door and peeped in….Neil was sitting on his chair all lost….he had a little frown on his face….Radhika invited herself in…she went and stood next to him; ”Can I help”

Neil blinked coming back to the real world; ”Chashni Shiv called he got hold on the Arjun’s childhood pictures …but he said something which got me worried”
Radhika; ”And what’s that”

Neil; ”Chashni does Arjun really wants to know his past…I mean….he might not take it nicely…Shiv was worried about the same …he thinks Arjun might react in a negative manner …what if his parents are alive ….he might just decide never to go back to them…or might hurt them blaming them for his loneliness…what if he gets upset with you for digging something he left behind.”

Radhika smiled; ”Then leave that on me….I a just giving him a closure, I a prepared for his anger …but whatever happens he will not leave me…so shall we get back to work”
Neil watched her determined face and spoke; ”Ok so we speak the police commissioner …and…

Neil was cut by Radhika in the middle; ”we will do that but after your engagement…so mister groom…go home and take some beauty sleep…tomorrow is your engagement” Neil nodded and left…..Radhika checked the pictures Arjun must have been 3 or 4….she smiled and cursed the person and circumstances because of which Arjun lost his beautiful childhood….

Mumbai Airport

Shiv greeted Arjun with a big hug….ARjun gave Riddhima a side hug and a peck on Pari’s forehead…..he drove them to his place…he was enjoying a full house….Shiv got a loving welcome from all accept Nia…who made face at him and he just smiled at her childishness ….Pari who was hearing her name from every corner suddenly turned cranky…when Nia extended her arms…Pari turned her face away clutching SHiv tightly….Nia frowned and poked her tongue at Shiv….he cooed Pari and said; ”No one taking you…be a good girl”

Radhika was specially happy…..Riddhima had changed…she looked free…happy and content….her appearance had changed there was a kind of confidence in her which none of them had ever seen….Arjun had bought a big white teddy bear for Pari which was almost triple her size…he placed the teddy on the floor at a distance from Pari…she watched if it moved…Shiv made her touch it…Pari after few smiled wide…Shiv made her sit on floor near the Teddy bear and Pari went busy hitting scratching..pulling the toy all happy…Arjun pulled teddy bear away bribing Pari to come to him….Pari screamed loudly all angry making everyone laugh…Arjun brought the teddy bear close to her and extended his arm….this time Pari went to him….Arjun caressed her face ….

Riddhima; ”Lawyer’s daughter…she knows how to get what she wants”

Radhika; ”Di you look pretty”

Riddhima; ”really….SHiv’s effect” Riddhima smiled looking at ARjun playing with Pari; ” Plan a family ….Arjun love kids

Radhika looked at Riddhima; ”let me grow up first”

Riddhima gently slapped her; ”I am serious…think” Radhika nodded… her POV; ”first I will give him his real family….”

Neil had decided to speak to Prerna but then decided against it…he decided to find details on his own….and he got the opportunity when no one was home…Neil knew if anything he could get would be in store room….because that was the place he never had set his foot…and his mom knew…he got inside the store room…looked around…Neil gently moved the furniture away and then started looking for some storage….he searched an old cupboard…a small cabinet and finally decided to search in a wooden trunk….Neil found many albums….he smiled looking at old pictures…his mom and dad’s wedding…his Mama Mami wedding pics….Neil finally came across the album full of his childhood pics…he smiled looking at some pics with his father….Prerna …his trip to London to his Mama- Mami’s place ….Neil smiled at the proof of the memories….after searching through all the albums and then he found a wooden box …he opened it it had some pictures…..of his family with him and another kid may be a year older then Neil…Neil’s eyes widened his adam’s apple wobbled….this boy resembled Arjun’s child hood pics he had seen earlier….but Neil wanted to be sure…Arjun’s pics from orphanage were of 3-4 yrs … and the one in picture was may be a year old or less….Neil POV; ‘Should I tell Chashni ….no let me confirm this first….yes DNA test…wow Neil now you have to pluck hairs of two khadoos…God but what if this is true….how will Arjun react…’ Neil turned the picture around …there was his name with his brother Ajay with Neil in bracket was the date…neil made a note of the date… ….Neil blinked Ajay Mehra my elder brother….I have to meet police commissioner…he has get hold of records and soon….

The Day of engagement

Arjun dropped Radhika and Mala at Sam’s place before driving off to Neil’s place with Riddhima…SHiv excused himself on the pretext of work….but in reality he was helping neil in getting hold of old records…Prerna welcomed Riddhima and Arjun ….Arjun looked around and asked; ”Aunty where is the groom”

Prerna huffed; ”He ran away early morning stating he has some urgent work….if he doesn’t turn up on time today….I am going to spank him bad”

Arjun laughed; ”don’t worry..I will get him back on time….now tell me what is pending” Prerna told Arjun and Riddhima what helped she required and all got busy…….Avantika just stood there watching Arjun….there was something that made her get emotional…her eyes would fill up…her heart felt amazing calmness looking at Arjun smiling…Arjun had noticed her gaze…he would return it with a smile…but he then excused himself as he was little uncomfortable.

Neil and Shiv entered commissioner’s office…. the old man asked not to be disturbed and took Shiv and Neil in….he handed them the file….it had list of missing children for the year Neil had shared with him….Neil went through all and stopped at Ajay Pratap Mehra….he caressed the picture….he extended the file to SHiv….Shiv wiped his face and looked at Neil; ”Arjun….”

Neil; ”Yes 80%….but I need to check the pictures from Mumbai orphanage and also the DNA…we have to be sure before spilling the beans”
Shiv; ”Have you shared with Radhika….”

Neil nodded negative; ”No…if Arjun is my brother ….I will have to share with my mom”

Shiv; ”No…it should be Radhika….only she can handle his reaction….” Neil thought and nodded…they walked out and Neil’s phone vibrated….he checked the id it was Arjun..he smiled and answered….Neil laughed hearing ARjun’s bossy tone asking him to come home immediately…or else be ready to face the consequences….Neil greeted Shiv and left for his place….

Shiva came back to Arjun house and found his princess annoyed…..it was difficult for Dilip and dadaji to handle her…Shiv smiled when she squealed loudly extending her arms….Shiv picked her…Pari she looked at him with an accusing eyes…Shiv rubbed her back; ”Sorry Angle…”

Dilip; ”Shiv she is really difficult……”

Shiv; ”No papa….she is just is habitual to see me or Riddhima…..my baby is very good girl” Pari kept her head on SHiv’s shoulder…now completely calm..Shiv kept rubbing her back…. Nia who had stayed back in order to take care of Pari smirked and gently spoke to Shiv; ”what an excellent plan to keep di with you….aren’t you ashamed of playing with Pari’s innocent emotion”

Shiv stared at Niya angrily…he had had enough of Nia’s sharp words ; ”I am many things….and you can call me names….but dare you question my love for my daughter…neither i will explain nor justify it…and I am warning you don’t put these thoughts in anyone head….if Riddhima went through so much pain you too are responsible ….had you told me then….I would have convinced her parents then….I am trying to mend the gap as you are my wife’s sister ….but you keep on raising your finger at me…..fine if you don’t like me stay away from me and my daughter” Pari who just was happy to be with her dad …made a perfect O with her lips…planting them on Shiv’s cheeks suddenly….Shiv returned it with a loving peck on her forehead…he hugged her tight and walked away….Dilip and Dadaji decided to talk to Niya on the same….

Mala helped Piyali in the preparations and Radhika with Manya was dressing Sam up…Sam was dressed in half saree in the combination of yellow and pink…..Sam was just looking at Radhika and Manya who were discussing animatedly discussing and finalising on makeup and jewellery ….Manya quickly gave Sam’s hair a soft curl look … she made her wear stone earings and bangles….Radhika dawned a thin waist chain on her waist…they moved her hair to one side and turned the chair around so the Sam can have a look of her final appearance… Sam blinked she was dressed in a simple yet elegant way…

She smiled at Manya and Radhika….Manya took the leave and walked out leaving 2 friends alone…Sam was nervous…she rubbed her palms and smiled wide Radhika held her hands; ”Sam its Neil ….why so nervous”

Sam; ”Don’t know chashni…but Neil was my friend till today..but now on words things will change…don’t know how and what will be the differences but I am nervous ..what if I am not successful as wife..”

Radhika; ”Sam don’t think just go with the flow and you will rock….and all other things I am there….if Neil’s trouble you…let me know will punish him”

Sam watched Radhika and hugged her; ”Thank you Chashni….you are reason for all my happiness….you always stood by me…..I promise I will do the same

Radhika turned serious; ”Really will you stand by me ….”

Sam lifted her chin; ”tell me now…what is it” Radhika narrated all about her search of Arjun’s real family…Sam patiently heard and softly spoke; ”Chashni your intention is not wrong….but only thing to fear is Arjun’s reaction….but don’t you worry ….we will together handle everything”

Radhika nodded and Piyali walked in; ”we need to leave for the venue….its late…Radhika I am taking your Mom along you come with Sam” Radhika nodded and walked out with Sam

Engagement Venue

The venue was a big hall of a luxury hotel Guests had started pouring in Samrat was busy welcoming them….Arjun entered as groom’s friend….he escorted Neil to the stage and was about to get down when Neil held his wrist; ”Can be my brother for today instead of being my best friend’s husband….or my boss…or any other person….please”

Arjun didn’t knew but he felt a sudden bond towards Neil….he hugged Neil tight; ”I am honoured to be that…why for today…here on I will be your brother I promise” Neil closed his eyes…his heart knew the truth but he wanted a confirmation……Avantika who witnessed this along with Prerna found anxiety building up in her body….she looked at Neil….but he averted his eyes…

Sam walked to wards the Dias with Radhika…Neil smiled….his best friend was now officially his life….Radhika brought the rings…and Neil-Sam exchanged them between the flower shower …..they gave each other one contented look before turning to their families for blessing….the DJ started playing the music and invited everybody to the dance floor…..Riddhima was dressed in lemon colour Saree…she walked to SHiv and extended her arm; ”I never got a chance to dance with you…I always wanted to….will you dance with me???”

Shiv turned to his doll who was dressed in white fluffy lace dress…with a cute butterfly clip in her well combed hairs…Shiv pecked her; ”Should Daddy go with mumma”

Riddhima frowned; ”Now I am jealous”

Arjun walked to SHiv; ”I will dance with Pari….I am her uncle too….and Riddhima don’t be jealous….Pari is in demand what to do” Arjun gently took Pari from SHiv….and pushed them for a dance….Radhika smiled ….Riddhima looked so happy and content….Shiv wrapped his arm around her and pecked her forehead…Riddhima kept her head on his chest closing her eyes…Shiv was sill disturbed…he asked Riddhima; ”Riddhi…do you think my love for Pari is fake”

Riddhima lifted her head from his chest and looked at him in a questioning manner; ”Why suddenly”

SHiv voice had pain; ”Yes I met Pari intially to be a habit for her ….to get you…but…but….she is my life now…how do I prove this”

Riddhima held his hands; ”You don’t have too….more than me…she trusts you…and stop thinking SHiv….I am happy after five years…please I trust you nothing more is required”

Shiv smiled and turned towards Arjun….who was busy dancing with Pari….as if she sensed her father’s eyes… Pari’s head moved in his direction..and she extended her arms wailing….Shiv shook his head smiling….Arjun brought Pari to him…she quickly caught hold of Shiv’s shoulder clinging to him …and then squealed happily…Riddhima watched smiling Shiv; ”you need more proof????” SHiv nodded negative pecking his daughter

Nia whispered to Radhika; ”Such a drama”

Radhika frowned; ”Enough…..stay out of Di’s life….can’t you see how happy she is …..her smile…her confidence…..open your eyes…and dare you spoke a single rude word to
SHiv.” Nia lowered her eyes…and Radhika walked of to Prerna to help her out…

Manya was continuously looking at the entrance waiting for Ankush he knew he would be late as he had a long meeting….and finally her wait was over…Akush stood their wearing a maroon silk kurta…his hair were naturally set without any gel and he had slight subtle…he looked rough and manly….but the way he greeted his elders was respectful….and then he took his darling niece in his arms….Manya lost her breath….this man was so simple and his attractiveness was in his simplicity….Manya’s POV ; ‘Ankush….you yourself don’t know how good you are….and how much I love you…but now I don’t know how to tell you don’t know if you will accept my feelings….” Nia walk past Manya…she heard her blabbering and waved infront of her….

Nia looked in the direction Manya was looking she smiled…and turned to Manya; ”blabbering and ogling at bhai won’t help….you need to express”

Manya quickly lowered her gaze; ”I don’t know what you are talking”

Nia laughed; ” Really ??? but your pink face tells otherwise …anyways…do let me know if you need help”

Manya’s smiled wide…and jumped on Nia; ”thanks…..I was so bad with you….but you still are ready to accept me”

Nia hugged her… her gaze suddenly felt on Shiv and Riddhima….SHiv was busy talking to Par…who seemed to lost in the decorative lights and music…Shiv suddenly covered Pari’s ears when Dj changed into a loud song…Nia cursed herself for being so rude…yes she was wrong…Shiv loved Pari even more than Pari’s biological dad… Pari’s innocent heart could understand his love which Nia couldn’t …Manya found her lost and touched her shoulder ; ‘’You ok…???’’

Nia; ‘’Manya at times we all are bad….I judged some too quickly without realising it my effect my own family….I am repenting ….hence I decided not to be too judgemental from now and the day you apologised I felt it was from heart….. ….my bhai will disappear if he knows a girl is interested in him”

Manya; ‘’Means all ok….???’’

Nia laughed; ‘’Yes all normal and ok…he is just shy type… ummm … so now all the best….do let me know if you need help

Manya nodded and walked inside with Nia

Rana entered the venue….he knew it was the wrong time….but he had to see neil…tell him all…. Rana was frantically searching for Neil…he asked few people and then spotted Neil between his friends….he walked to him and turned Neil around; ”We need to talk”

.Avantika was talking to Neil and Sam when Sam suddenly got pushed and her drink got spilled on Avantika…Sam apologised…Avantika smiled and excused herself to clean the mess….as she crossed the garden area…she saw a know face….her fear and memories came back….but with it a hope came back….Avantika held her head and fainted.
Neil blinked looking at Rana….he was about to go with him…when Prerna called out his name; ”Neil..call doctor soon” everybody ran in Prerna’s direction…..Arjun helped in lifting fainted Avantika up and took her to the room…..meanwhile Pratap got glued to his place looking at Rana leaving the place in a huff…..Neil dialled the doctor …..Prerna walked out to attend the guests….Radhika and Sam rubbed Avantika’s palms….after doctor checked he stated the reason as stress…Avantika regained consciousness and asked for Pratap….as soon as he walked in…she said without wasting a minute ; ”Pratap…..he is alive…..this means my Ajju is alive too….”

Pratap was frozen….he was too shocked to react…he just sat next to Avantika; ”you were right we shouldn’t have given up on our search….now I will find my son”

Neil walked out….his POV; ”now its time….I have to close this….will ask Radhika to get me Arjun’s hair sample”

There were many questions….but everybody decided to leave Pratap and Avantika alone….after few minutes everybody walked out to join the party with numerous questions and confusions in their heads….
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Chapter 41

Arjun place

Arjun stood at the window…the way Avantika looked at him was melting his heart…he felt connected to her….he couldn’t understand…why her pain filled eyes bothered his heart….Arjun all frustrated hid his face in his palms…Radhika who was herself lost was thinking about bewildered Neil….he had asked for ARjun’s hair sample….when Radhika asked if he knew Arjun’s parents he said yes…but refused to disclose their identity…Radhika walked out of the washroom and found lost ARjun at the window…she wrapped her arms around his middle kissing his back…Arjun smiled; ”Why so distrub”

Radhika; ”Arjun do you trust me….will you hate me if you know that I did good for you without letting you know”

Arjun pulled her infront; ”Hey …..I might get angry but I know you will never do anything that might harm me….”

Radhika went on her toes and pecked his cheeks; ”Arjun I love you so much….but sometimes I am scared…what if I lose you”
Arjun moved his fingers through her dark hair; ”if you want to get pampered….you don’t have to be emotional….I can pamper you any day” Arjun cupped her face tilting it towards his face he moved close to her lips..”Radhika Arjun Mehra….no one can separate you from me….I fought to be with you…and I love you so much…its you who completes me….when you are around I don’t need anyone…” Arjun smiled at Radhika’s emotional eyes he covered her lips gently with his….pouring all his affection and love on her….Radhika’s lips moved in sync with his….Arjun moved to her jaw …and then neck planting numerous kisses….Radhika kissed his eyes his forehead …before hugging him tight…Arjun lifted her up and walked to his bed….Radhika kept her head on his shoulder…her POV; ‘I know you will be angry …hurt….but I will take all….I will keep your heart intact….’

2 days later

Neil knew his aunt had seen Rana…he had already submitted the hair samples ….report was due in few days…he knew the result but he wanted to know from Rana what was the reason he was hid the truth about Arjun for so long…Neil’s was so angry on Rana..that he was throwing away the belongings in his cabin just in search his bike keys….Sam stood at the door watching a disturbed Neil…she asked him; ”Neil…whats wrong”

Neil without looking at her answered; ”nothing….I am busy can you leave me alone”

Sam felt strange…she walked to him and held Neil’s arm; ”Talk to me…I can feel you are disturbed….share it”

Neil jerked his arm; ”U can feel right??? then why can’t you see I need to be alone…..we are engage dosen’t me you are free to dance on my head…” Sam was shocked…confused she couldn’t understand the reason for this out busts…she backed turned around and walked out of the cabin….Sam wiped her eyes but was surprised to see Arjun standing with his arms folded…she tried hiding but he stopped her; ”Its ok Sam….take a break” Sam gave him a thankful smile and walked off

Arjun barged inside Neil’s cabin; ”Now what was the reason for being so rude to Sam….”

Neil looked up….he felt his head would bursts ;he was concealing too many things….and being aware of his relationship with Arjun and not able to express it was killing him…..his brother had gone through a lot all his childhood….and Neil wanted him happy….he just walked to Arjun hugging him tight….Arjun was confused…but he responded the hug; ”Neil speak…you are scaring me”

Neil; ”Just trust me for 2 days….you will know all…please Arjun…don’t question me now”

Ajun held Neil tightly by his shoulders; ”Promise me you wil come to me ….and stop taking all out on Sam….where ever you are going…first go and make up to her” Neil wanted to protest but Arjun turned bossy….for first time Neil loved his bossy attitude….he pecked ARjun’s cheek leaving Arjun shocked….Neil ran to the terrace to pacify Sam

Sam stood on the terrace….with wet cheeks and her arms folded to chest… she was trying to pacify herself…Neil slowly walked to her and hugged her tight from behind; ”forgive me Sammy”

Instead of replying…Sam broke down….she sobbed uncontrollably …Neil turned her around hugging her tight….Sam wrapped her arms around him; ”please Neil never ask me to leave you it hurts..pains …it kills my heart….”

Neil rubbed her back pecked her forehead; ”Sammy I can’t survive without you…sorry I was rude…I will never ever speak to you in that manner again…but right now just don’t ask anything…I have to go somewhere will see you in the evening….love you” Neil ran out leaving Sam confused.

Neil knocked Rana’s door…there was no response….he was impatient he knew what he was thinking could land him in jail …but this was about his family ….Neil broke the door and moved in he found rana…frantically packing…he was shocked to find Neil….Neil locked the door and turned around giving rana a no nonsense look; ‘’Speak or police will make you speak….

Pratap used all his resources he had an old picture of his staff…and now police was in serach of rana…prerna found her brother pacing; ‘’Can you please tell why are you looking for rana…it was Shyam who ran away with Ajju…and we watched him die’’

Pratap’; ‘’because Shyam handed over my Ajju to Rana…his friend….but I though Rana died in that accident….but he is alive so is my Ajju’’

Prerna; ‘’I have heard of a guy name Rana….never met him….he is a father figure to Arjun ….’’

Avantika got up ….Arjun face flashed infront of her eyes; ‘’Arjun….Pratap….please be quick….I can’t wait longer’’

Pratap gulped; ‘’Can you call Radhika Prerna….don’t tell her anything….just call her here soon’’

Radhika was too startled hearing Prerna’s panic voice….but Prerna asked her keep this meeting a secret…she quickly took a cab to Neil’s place…as soon as she entered Prerna took her to the guest room…Radhika watched 3 worried faces and asked; ‘’What’s wrong’’

Pratap handed an old Picture to radhika; ‘’DO you know him’’

Radhika; ‘’its old …but he resembles Rana kaka…but how do you have this’’

Pratap; ‘’what is rana to Arjun’’

Radhika; ‘’he worked in the orphanage Arjun was’’ Avantika sobbed hearing orphanage….her son…who deserved all stayed in a n orphanage ….Radhika was now puzzled….’’please tell me what’s wrong’’

Pratap; ‘’Arjun can be my missing son’’

Radhika stammered; ‘’How can you be so sure….please don’t say a word to him till you are sure …I don’t want him hurt’’

Pratap looked at Radhika sharply….she was protective about her husband; ‘’because its rana…who ran away with my son….and I think its ARjun’’

Radhika countered; ‘’Rana kaka worked in an orphanage…any kid who was bought up there could be your son….why are you so sure on Arjun’’

Pratap; ‘’Because Rana came to meet neil on the day of his engagement…you tell me why’’

Radhika shook her head; ‘’That’s because Neil is helping me in finding Arjun’s parents…we have been grilling rana kaka for long…may be he made his mind up to us the truth…and he must have chosen Neil because I was with Arjun that time’’

Avantika; ‘’Pratap….end this discussion and get me my son’’

Neil who made is way into the room spoke; ‘’Arjun is your Ajay mamu…its confirmed…by Rana and genetically it will be proved in a day or two’’ Neil’s sentence left all four in shock….

Avantika; ‘’Pratap lets bring him home’’

Pratap nodded but stopped at Radhika’s voice; ‘’And tell him what….do you know how will he react…till its confirmed…I request you please don’t say a word to him’’

Pratap raised an eyebrow; ‘’you think you know him better…he is my blood’’

Radhika smiled at Pratap’s stubbornness; ‘’You are definitely his father …but your Ajay is Arjun now …he has gone through a lot…he won’t be able to take this lightly …please understand’’

Avantika folded her hands; ‘’Please radhika ….I want to meet him’’

Radhika held her hands; ‘’Aunty…if he is your son…I will bring him to you…we have to wait for the DNA reports’’

Neil; ‘’But Rana confirmed. Why this delay radhika…and here is another proof….his childhood pics from orphanage and the one I have from the family album’’

Radhika turned to face Neil; He rarely called her Radhika….his impatience was evident ; ‘’Because I don’t trust rana…proofs can be tampered what if he is hiding real Ajay…and tomorrow when Arjun is all settled with this family….one day one more truth turns his life into a lie…No I am risking his heart….and Neil this was about my husband… my life….I never expected that you will hide things from me when its about him….being my best friend… let me be Radhika from now for you …’’ radhika touched Avantika – Pratap’s feet and hugged Prerna…she walked out without even glancing at Neil…..who was just standing with his eyes on the floor

Radhika came back to Bird Song….she passed Sam without replying to her greetings….Sam had too much since the morning…she caught hold of Radhika’s arm and pulled her inside her cabin..; ‘’Enough without a single lie tell me all’’ Radhika narrated all.. how Neil knew about Arjun being his cousin…and kept the fact concealed from her …making Sam sink into her chair ….she rubbed her forehead and said; ‘’Hiding things from you about Arjun was wrong on Neil’s part…’’

Radhika; ‘’And now I don’t know how to break the news to him…’’

Sam got up and gave Radhika an assuring hug; ‘’Only you can do this no one else can…prepare him Chashni…it shouldn’t be a shock..he won’t be able to take that….and I am there to help you out when you need me..’’ radhika turned and hugged Sam tight…right now she needed a friend and Sam was doing a perfect job

Prerna; ‘’Wow Neil…you got your brother you forgot your friend..the friend who gave you Sam back’’

Pratap; ‘’Neil is right in his place….she is showing too much right on my son….’’

Prerna cut her brother off; ‘’because she has…she made your son a human…what she went through because your son you can’t even imagine….you lost Ajay…you gave up is your fault….he became a ruthless Arjun…who didn’t knew himself till Radhika walked in….and one more thing…if you want your son….its only radhika who can do this…she is Arjun’s life….accept this truth…’’ Prerna left the room…Pratap was in a deep thought …Avantika impatient and Neil was repenting as Radhika refused to take his calls at all….he knew she was hurt and deep.

Precap Thinking

67 comments

  1. Meen

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    Neil…..I want to hit his head now….seriously…. He of all people …..uuuuh…I love him….but right now I want to slap him right across his face…..ufff….hey gauri how r u?……I missed u….& as always it was an angelic update……..lovely…..emotional & everything was perfect beyond words angel…..love ya….muuuuha

  2. Brin

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    Outstanding episode, they should have showen this on TV, Gauri I feel lucky reading your story, you are completing Manmarziyan the way I wanted to see on TV, you nail it, well done. 🙂

  3. Jewel

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    When I saw this story I was really happy, u r back, missed ur stories a lot… After Nov 7 I was waiting for ur update….. This chapter was superb gauri, everything was beautifully written ri-shiv- Pari scenes, neil’s angry towards Rana, ardhika, nia’s angry towards shiv and realization everything was superb…. And why Rana kidnapped Arjun?? Why nandini select Arjun for her revenge?? Is there any reason for that?? Now I am waiting to see arjun’s reaction when he know everything….. Waiting for next one,and cr…. Post soon

  4. Jessie

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    Super…!! Now wonder what pratap thinks…so real…they will find it hard to accept it…Avantika..So emotional…Arjun…am waiting….Will he break down…Radhika…👏👏👏 she is correct..prena..sensible…!! Shiv..Super man..!! Nia and manya. So nice…waiting 4 nxt one ya….truly magical…my heart beats for Arjun’s reaction…!! Gosh…let pratap witness that I say.. he isnt realizing what Arjun would have gone through… I want to read that Gauri….Arjun..he is gonna prove his panoti is enough…Gauri…pls bring it on…gonna be a emotional one…I want that…nxt one soon plz

  5. RituM

    hohoho…..m glad u write such a long update….it was mind blowing…..everyone’s reaction is justified…..nia…shiv….manya….pratap….his wife…neil…sam and last but not the least radhika……obviously darling pari is amazing!!!

  6. arti viswanathan

    Loved it Gauri. Wow now neil is Arjun’s brother nice to hear it. And now arjun’s parents will try to separate arjun and radhika but their relationship be more stronger than his own parents. Will be waiting for next episode dear Gauri excellent work dear….

  7. amita

    excellent chappy gauri di finally arjun ko real parents mil payenge ………..n kya koi bta skta have sammy kha h i mean unka koi update ni aya she is ok na I miss her ff. ……

  8. Myra

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    Gauri diiii….a surprise double dhamaka…..
    You know what….i was thinking to send you a message requesting for a double dhamaka…a couple of days back….but then, i dropped the odea thinking that you might be busy in your native….but see, my wish got fulfilled automatically….yaya!

    Coming to the update, i can feel a violent storm brewing up….its gonna be fun when arjun gets to know….and neil…well, i am disappointed in him. And prerna….glad, she is on radhika’s side….i am so happy she shut her brother down. He deserved it, i guess….nobody has a right greater on arjun than radhika….
    You know, your update always leaves me thinking for a couple of hours more…..i am forever lost after reading this…Update soon..
    Love you….😍😍😍

  9. Rossy

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    Thank u very much abha…u r back…that’s a great gift…awwww…yeh Arjun’s parents bade khatarnak log hai….apni bete Ki Khusi barbad karne pe tule hue hai…aaargh…prerna one awesome lady….neil…feel his mental condition was not right now…aargh…Nia…girl what’s her problem with shiv…but she got a good return…pari rocks…awwww….superb dear…wating for crossroads…😉😊😊

  10. Dipika

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    My angel u r blessed writer.. I always said this but i really meant it yarr..i always engrossed in ur update.. N giving double dhamaka means treat to enjoy.. N i thoroughly enjoyed.. And i never tired reading ur stories time n again… Sach me..my angel is truly magician.. I like to get shower by tht magic of splendid words which directly touched my heart ..Neil hiding truth from rads was felt strange.. But y he is so tensed abt the truth.. He should hav inform rads..she is thr one who initiated tht search na….ok..nia..thank god she got her righy mind back else i was gonna punch her for her irritating tounts to shiv…n finally truth was out..Sam id super understanding prsn here..she acted well..whn she said leaving neil..a mere thought make her pain..was a showstopper dailouge… Rads..god wht gotten in pratap to not hav faith on her..if he would hav met prev arjun..thn only he knew wht rads made him now..but thank god though neil didn’t trust hr but prerna support s her.. Ahe is coolest n sweetest lady…m very excited for arjunsl’s reaction now..post soon.. Love you bahot..muhha

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks a ton Dipu 🙂 you are an amazing friend who has blessed my life ….thanks a ton darling loads of love stay blessed 😍😍😍😍😍

  11. Nayan

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    Thanks for the double dhamaka Gauri di … mind blowing outstanding epi …. riddima asking radhika to think about children lol … today neil was awesome but feeling sad for sam … neil should not take out his frustration from her … also neil should tell about the truth to radhika after all she is the one who really wants to get info about Arjun’s parents… Nia behave badly with shiv and I think she should apologize for her behavior … I felt bad when shiv asked riddhima whether he is bad person …we shouldn’t judgmental about any one based on their past … hope arjun will react positively … plzzzzzzz don’t make him suffer again …. plz pratap behave with radhika well …they lost their son that’s true but as radhika said they cann’t tell truth to arjun without confirming it ..it might make him shattered and broken … loved the way prerna stand for radhika against her own brother .. as prerna said Radhika is the only reason that arjun turn to a good human being from monster .. she gave him a family which he longing for .. prathap and awanthika should thankful to radhika for what she did for arjun selflessly … one question where is nandani and what happen to anuj ? are they coming back to ardhika’s life? update soon … God bless you di 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 Luv di<3 <3 <3

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks Nayan 🙂 Arjun will be emotional 😀 ….. Pratap is same as Arjun so little friction will be there 😀 loads of love to you stay blessed 😍😍😍😍😍

  12. heena

    yar why everybody makes me restless i want to know what happened next pls pls pls pls update soon yar pls pls pls
    and todays update is very Very emotional to me yar and i loved it buddy

  13. Starz

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    Di…after a long time…missed ur ff badly….and today’s treat of double damaka was npmindblowing and fantabulous….loved it…eagerly waiting for next one…sorry for late comment…love you and take care di

  14. Fanficoholic

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    Whoaaaaaa yooooo finalllyyyyy di u r bck. I hav been waiting fr so lng fr ur updates. Idk bt its lyk its been ages since u hav updated. And u r soo goood. U came bck wth a double update. I loved this one. Esp ardhika scenes. Bt i am waiting fr crossroads. Its making me restless. Amazing epi i tell u. Lovd prerna supporting radhika. Didnt like neil taking his frustration out on sam. Loved arneil scenes and their brotherly bond. Loved the bond of shiv pari and shiv ridhimma. Lovd manya and ankush. Glad nia has realised her mistake. Soory fr the short comment as a lil busy.
    Wll be bck
    Love u loadss
    ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

  15. KK(Krishna)

    ohh my dear Gauri….1st of all thank you for the double dhamaka. ..it was beyond outstanding….can’t find word to describe. waiting on next one already…thanks again dear…TC

  16. Manolove

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    Gauri thanks for the double damaka.. wat a emotional part.. I just can’t believe these parents if Arjun…

    Gauri please don’t break Radhika and arjun.. and shiv promised raddi on a date but that was missing? 🤗🤗🤗

    I really missed you a lot gauri every day I think u might surprise us with a update.. but u are back now. I am really happy for that.. love u loads gauri 😃😃😃😃😃

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks a ton Manolove 😀😀😀😀 I am not breaking Radhika Arjun….just a little emotional …they one …Shiv-Riddhi-Pari will have a date …..will post soon 🙂 loads of love and stay blessed 🙂

  17. Sathya

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    Gauri dear.. What a bang u back with…. Absolutely fantastic… I can see the competition between the parents n wife now… Lol pratap is so confident that he k own his son better than Radhika… Lol prerna gave good reply to him n hope they will understand… N about Neil can’t scold him. Now just because he didn’t believe Radhika…. It’s just the curiosity developed on him about arjun n he reacted that way… N yes rads gets hurt n soon they will be one again like before. Ardhika scenes are so beautifully narrated dear… N finally Rivansh n Parinsh moments r spectacular… Nia got a good blow from Shiv.. I loved it… N Manya poor girl have to work hard… Lol… Overall bang on episode Dear. Love u 😘😘😘😘

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks a ton Sathya 🙂 your comments always bring smile on my face…yup Pratap would be cold towards Radhika…but Radhika has Prerna Neil and Sam…..thanks a ton again dear 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 loads of love

  18. Aastha

    Hello Gauri di… how are you ??
    missed you sooooo much …..
    How was your Diwali ??
    Your pic is very cute..

  19. Roma

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    Wowwww gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweeeeeetheart princess. …welcome back…..I missed you sooooo muchhhhh. …n u came with a baaaanggg of double dhamaaka episodes. …wowwww. ..how much I praise you for your flawless talent is never enough…..your narration of each n every character’s expressions, dialogues, actions n behavior is perfectly brilliant…….rads n Neil’s search for arjun’s parents, Rana’s appearance at nesam engagement….the engagement ceremony, decoration, dances, bonding of ppl…..shiv n nia confrontation n Nina’s realization of her wrong justification….manya’s deep love for ankush n her hesitation….manya n Nina’s bond…..ardhika moments n rads undying eternal love for arjun….wowwww n also avantika’s heart vibes for her son arjun…arjun n neils bromance….all the research done by neil for making sure arjun’s real identity….raneil argument n rads protectiveness for arjun…rads n sam bonding n Sam’s true support for rads…even prerna’s trust n love rads……..all of this was extremely marvellous. …standing ovation from me to youuuu for your tremendously beautiful thinking n phenomenal writing. ….I always bow down in respect for you…..I’m totally addicted to Youuuuuuuuu and Your stories…. u know this…n you never fail to make me smile with your excellent remarkable Devine nature. ….in your extremely busy schedule…u find time n write this beautiful. …i know n understand how hard it is….but your love for us make u do it….u have very pure soul n precious heart….God bless you always my sweeeeeetheart. …keep it up honeyyy. ..love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ 😉

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