MMZ- Married by Fate- Chapter 4

Hello all wonderful people….thanks to all of you for appreciating my words and also for your suggestions…so here is the chapter 4…next one on thursday DPO I will post tomorrow…Bless you all stay healthy and happy and do let me know how was it 🙂 😀

Chapter 4

Arjun’s House- Pooja day

Nandini comes to Radhika; ‘’your prayers won’t save your marriage or you fate’’

Radhika; ‘’Who said I am praying for my marriage I am praying for your destruction so that I can move out of this marriage soon’’

Nandini walks dangerously close to Radhika and warns her in a low voice; ‘’People pray to receive blessings from the almighty….be alert Radhika you might lose something valuable today’’ Nandini looks in the direction of Mala…smirks and walks off . Radhika is worried for Mala now…she knows how low Nandini can stoop…she makes a silent prayer and walks to Arjun’s car…Radhika takes the back seat with Mala…Arjun adjusts the mirror …Nandini notices that… her POV; ‘’Arjun is in love with this Radhika….I have to do something before he seriously decides to keep his marriage’’

Arjun keeps on stealing glances at Radhika….who was busy smiling at talking to her mom…Radhika catches Arjun watching her she nervously tugs her hair and lowers her eyes…Arjun smiles at her blushing…Nandini burns

Sam reaches Birdsong and directly goes to Arjun’s cabin…she asks Zubin; ‘’where is Arjun’’

Zubin; ‘’On leave…performing pooja for his successful marriage’’

Sam POV; ‘which won’t last now’’

Radhika stands infront of the idol while pandit does the preparation for the ritual, she folds her hands closes her eyes and prays; ‘’Please God …give me some way to prove my innocence I want to end this sham as soon as possible’’ Arjun watches her innocently praying…Arjun loved her simplicity and truth fullness and somehow he enjoyed bickering with her…

Arjun; ‘’It’s just a stone idol….your prayers are falling on deaf ears’’

Radhika; ‘’ Sir…Are you the spokesman of God…that you are answering on his behalf’’

Arjun; ‘’What’s about being spokes person…its so simple…if he would have been there…there never would have been so much wrong around…innocent would have never suffered’’

Radhika; ‘’Sir who are you judge right or wrong, guilty or innocent…when you yourself are walking on a wrong path…let’s just not argue Sir…I don’t want to talk’’

Arjun; ‘’Why do you keep calling me Sir…we are married call me Arjun’’

Radhika; ‘’No I can’t…it’s not correct’’

Arjun; ‘’Why ??? it’s a simple sweet name A-R-J-U-N’’

Radhika; ‘’Sweet??? Coated with bitter gourd…’’

Arjun took steps toward Radhika ; ‘’Call me Arjun’’

Radhika pressed her lips; ‘’Sir Ma…’’Arjun turned and Radhika escaped…he smiled at her tactics….Radhika saw Nandini bringing Mala…she was worried for Mala…Radhika stood near the stairs as Mala approached her she slipped Radhika screamed ;’’Ma’’ Nandini caught her arm…and helped her once Mala was inside Nandini threatened Radika; ‘’Keep your eyes open Radhika…in the mission of saving Sam you might lose your loved one’’ Nandini walked off ….leaving Radhika worried…and angry..

Sam’s anger was at peak….she expected Arjun to join BS today but he went for a puja with his so called wife…why did he agree when this marriage meant nothing…but her clouded mind easily directed the blame on Radhuka- ‘that bhenji must have compelled Arjun….do whatever you like Radhika try as much as you want…I will take my Arjun away from you’’

Neil was sitting in his cabin rolling the pen….he was replaying all the events since Arjun walked into their lives…suddenly he called Piyali telling Samrat on the engagement day that Nandini is the same Nandini who worked with them in the initial years of BS…a smile covered his features…Neil thought; ‘time for history lessons…Chashni cannot be wrong…I have to get these records…but no one should know about it…Neil knew Mini a lady in her 50s…kept all the records she was there since Samrat started this company…she was too loyal to Samrat and Piyali..now how turn to her in his favour was all Neil had to think….Neil thought of having a cup of coffee he moved out as crossed the work stations he heard Zubin; ‘’Never expected Radhika to be so mean….she didn’t even care about Sam…her best friend’’

Kritika; ‘’All small town girls are like that…she saw a handsome rich guy…she trapped him…and left Sam heartbroken….Sam should have never trusted her’’

Teji frowned; ‘’Why are you blaming Chashini alone…Arjun sir is to be blamed too…may be there is something we are missing…and it’s not good to talk behind the back’’

Zubin was about to retort back but Neil stood in between; ‘’You guys seem to have all the time to talk about who is good who is bad…Now take this as a warning ….no more gossips on Arjun Radhika….you have close to 5 projects get on to it …I need reports by eod today….Teji I need to talk to you come with me’’

Teji followed Neil to cafeteria ….Neil started the conversation; ‘’Teji do you think Chashni can do something wrong or selfish’’

Teji; ‘’If you are talking about my honest opinion…a girl who broke all the the walls between Sam and Piyali ma’am…without thinking of her career can never hurt Sam…but why is she quite..”

Neil smiled; ‘’that’s what we have to find out …tell me Teji…you helped Radhika is stealing Bonnie’s keys right’’

Teji; ‘’Yes….but why are asking that now’’

Neil; ‘’because you are going to steal Mini’s pedestal keys…I need old records….to help both Radhika and Sam’’

Teji blinked; ‘’Boss you will get me fired…’’

Neil; ‘’Trust me nothing will happen ….pls Teji we have to do this for Radhika and Sam….help me’’

Teji thought for a moment; ‘’Fine when?’’

Neil smiled; ‘’today after everyone leaves meanwhile go and grab the Mini’s keys..and Teji Radhika will be joining back…please make sure Changu Mangu doesn’t hurt her rest I will take care…this should be between us’’

Teji nodded and left…Neil POV; ‘’Nandini Pandey…time to know your history’’

Pandit starts the ritual asking Arjun Radhika to keep their hands together….Radhika keeps her hand lifelessly in Arjun’s palm….but he gently curves his fingers to make a grip on her soft hand…leaving her little surprised…Radhika’s mind is completely on Nandini….as the Pooja completes Nanidini asks Mala to ring the temple bell….Radhika keeps looking at her Mom who is all happy about the successful Pooja, suddenly Radhika screams ‘’Ma’’ Arjun turns and with lightning speed….moves Mala aside saving her from falling bell…Radhika takes a sigh of relief …Arjun calms terrified Mala and takes her to his car…

Radhika turns to Nandini; ‘’today one thing is proved…that Arjun Sir has a heart….its you who have been polluting his mind since child hood …today I promise you one thing…before I free him off this unwanted marriage I will free him from you…and you said something about keeping my eyes open…now I am warning you to keep to keep your eyes open…because now I won’t give a single chance to hurt me or any of my loved ones…’’

Radhika folds her hand in front of Arjun to thanks him….Arjun looks at Radhika’s folded hands …bend head and wet cheeks..he hold her hands; ‘’No need for this Radhika…I did what should be done..lets go home now…Ma is waiting for us in the car’’ Radhika gave one warning look to Nandini and walked off.

At night Radhika replay all the events and request her mom to go back…she moves to her room still in her thoughts and collides with Arjun spilling all the water on his sleeping arrangement….Arjun bangs his head….Radhika quickly jumps on the bed covering her herself up..to avoid Arjun from sleeping on the bed….after few minutes she finds Arjun happily snoring in one corner…Radhika makes a pillow wall and doses off…somewhere in the night the wall between them crumbles and a strong arm pulls Radhika into a loving warmth…she mumbles but slips into a deeper slumber….Arjun opens his eyes and smiles watching Radhika…he caresses her head with the other hand…his POV; ‘’I wish time stops here…and I can watch you for eternity’’ But reality strikes him he gently tighten his grip…and buries his face in her dark hair.

At Birdsong…with Teji’s help Neil is able to get the pedestal keys of Mini…he starts his search for old records…Neil takes the responsibility of files and Teji of the computer…after 3hrs of search Neil gets a file with Nandini’s documents …he smiles; ‘’Nandini Pandey…your time starts now….Teji lets go ’’

After dropping Teji home…Neil comes back to his house and makes an excuse for being late…he quickly finishes his dinner and starts reading Nandini’s details….Neil gathers that Nandini is from Panchagani…he makes a note of her permanent address and few contacts…and decides to contact one of his friends who is a private detective…to get all details on Nandini…Neil smiles at his work and pats his back; ‘’Neil good job…first I need to get the history on Nandini…then Nandini and Samrat…and last Arjun…but before that I should think of saving Chashni from the anger of Piyali ma’am and Sam…she has to stay in Bird Song till this game ends…I need her…to target Arjun’’

Sam was angry that Arjun did not come to office neither he attended her calls…she felt defeated & calls Neil; ‘’Idiot can we meet…’’

Neil; ‘Now??? Sammy its 2:00 AM’’

Sam; ‘’Yes its 2:00 AM….I have been calling you since 7:00 in the evening but you seem to busy these days’’

Neil; ‘’Well we were in office together for 8 hrs…I tried to speak but you and your mood swings …Sammy everything cannot go according to your will…if you need be you talk…and if you don’t …you ignore me …sorry but I am a human too….and its late…you should sleep..tomorrow your Arjun is joining back…you should look beautiful…otherwise he might make a decision to stay with Radhika….Good night’’

Neil disconnected the call leaving Sam angry on Radhika and dejected by Neil…

Nandini got early and quickly freshen up…she wanted Arjun to join BS anyhow…Nandini knew Arjun’s marriage was lie and he never locked the room on her instructions..so she did not hesitate in entering Ajun’s room…but Nandini was about get surprised…Nandini gently pushed the door…and saw Arjun sleeping with his arm around Radhika’s waist and his front firmly attached to her back…Nandini anger was on the sky now …she mentally cursed Arjun for being stupid…Nandini left the room by closing the door with a bang…that made Radhika open her eyes…Radhika tried getting up but found Arjun’s hand on her waist..she hurled soft curses and removed his hand and left the bed…Arjun opened his eyes after she left and smiled…Radhika quickly got ready and went out to help Mala…Arjun directly went to Nandini’s room after getting ready; ‘’Nandu I am joining Bird Song today’’

Nandini with fake tears; ‘’Arjun…I don’t want to destroy your life for my happiness…if you want to settle down with Radhika go ahead….live a happy life’’

Arjun got worried ; ‘’Nandu…all my breaths are yours ….my life belongs to you…I have not forgotten my revenge…I will get to work from today’’ Arjun takes her blessings of Nandini and leaves Nandini smirks…Radhika quickly dresses up and leaves….she goes and stands infornt of Arjun’s car…Arjun irritated; ‘’Now what’’

Radhika; ‘’Sir…I am joining too …can I come with you’’ Arjun was about to refuse but watches Mala standing at the door…he agrees…Radhika messages Neil ‘I am joining BS today’… After driving of 15 min….Arjun suddenly stops the car…’’get down’’

Radhika all surprised; ‘’Sir …there is no taxi or bus stand here…how will I go’’

Arjun; ‘’None of my concern…I am dropping you here…so that you cannot interfere in my plans …Get OUT!!!’’ Radhika trembles at Arjun’s loud office…and gets down…Arjun drives off…leaving Radhika alone…Radhika closes her eyes in anger…and starts walking after few minutes she feels someone following her…Radhika picks up a stone to hit him….but the guys suddenly stops and pulls his helmet…it was Neil; ‘’Chashni…you would have injured me today…come I we are a team now’’

Radhika sits behind him; ‘’How did you know…he will leave me in between”

Neil; ‘’Actually I had come to pick you…but saw you in his car…but something made me follow him…can’t trust his mood…he is worst than pregnant ladies…so here I am my lady’’ Radhika laughed…

Neil spoke again; ‘’Chashni hold on from today you will be ahead of him….we will reach BS before Arjun Mehra’’ Radhika held Neil’s shoulder tightly and Neil zoomed his bike to Bird Song

Pre cap- Neil stands up for Radhika infront of Sam and Piyali…Neil’s master plan

Credit to: Gauri

74 comments

  1. Hope

    Gauri.. Can i call u sis? I always wanted one..but i’m stuck wid an elder bro and 4 cousin bros..and one of dese days dey r gonna make me mad… Irritating and taunting.. But i love dem..still i feel d need of an elder sis to tell all dese girly stuff lyk crush,bf issues,bff matters,lovey dovey stuff,hot celebrities etc.
    I just read all d epi in 1 go..u r gr8… Dis one is amazing..but hate to see Sam jealous… And Bless u…

    • Gauri

      Hi Hope you can call me sis…will love that…yes u always need a sister to talk girly stuff…my sis is my best frnd…will love to be yours… 🙂 thanks for comment dear 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 love you 🙂

  2. Rg

    Hi gauri I was waiting for it since morning. I loved it. I couldn’t get enough of it. The sweet chemistry btw them r too gud.. I just felt as if am watching it. Though I really wish arjun should stop leaving radz stranded on roads .. It’s very mean. When will he stop it? But he seems to love her in d nights. Am happy radz ,Neil and teji r a team… Oh god I can’t wait to read wat samarj would do to her? … Thoz scenes u took frm d real one were gud.. U tempered it with your own other sweet ones which made d combination awesome and irresistible… Will the office scene of arjun choosing Sam and arjun proposing Sam will b thr? Will radz b there in both? Will she witness d bathroom scene? Whn will she start realising tat she has feelings for him? Oh gauri plz tell as much as possible … I can barely wait….
    Hey gauri u r too gud and a wonderful writer… Mmz will always b close to my heart as u took to writing it… Credit goes to u to have given us two such lovely sensations to read and cherish… U r truly a gifted writer. Pls let me know regarding ur new book… May u write many more such beautiful and fantastic fanfics. Take care. And hugs to u…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rg 🙂 Arjun will stop leaving her stranded when someone else will give her more importance…and he will have the fear of losing her completely…Sam arjun….well think what will RNeil will do with them… 😉 yes those washroom scenes will be there but with a twist… Well Arjun is clear on his feelings for Rads but is bound by the commitment to his sis…Radhika will not forgive him easily…still time for that because I am planning to make him cry 🙂 loads of love and hugs for you 🙂

    • feby

      hey rg….sry tat cudnt wish u on may 8th itself…i was not in a position to comment….so belated happy bday dear…..stay blessed and b happy always…. love u…

  3. I like this more n more…..omg this Arjun n Sam,they both get on my nerves argh,changu mangu give them a smack…nandini,I can’t say anything for this mad lady,send her mental asylum….omg neeelu sweetooo,can u plz make Arjun witness radhika sit back of a person on bike that to hold up that man tightly…let him burn to the ashes…n m not in a mood to tell anything….teji u proved why I liked u most…

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Rosie 🙂 well they never burned the way I wanted to so I will make my dream come true…RNeil will keep everyone on their toes….its time tit for tat 🙂 loads of love dear 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  4. It’s really cuteeeeeeee like u darling sissy ✌✌✌✌????? arjun s really cute ???? neil omg omg really he s a true frnd ????? teji did did his part very nicely ????? totally conplete ff ???? loved it ????? love u ??? take care ????

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Suga dear 🙂 Neil will prove to be the best frind for his Chashni 🙂 loads of love and million hugs for you 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  5. M

    A morning treat…….awwww…neil…..m turning to b insane for him……..mood swing like pregnant lady…lol…….he s d best!!!!! Nxt one??

    • Gauri

      Thanks Maandey 🙂 I am already mad for Neil 😉 … next one on thursday 🙂 love you sweety 🙂

  6. Supriya

    Omg this was a killer update……. Di I have a small confession……..ur ff z the only thing which makes me happy and relaxed this days…..rads in ur both stories inspires me alot……u toh very well know how everything in my life z shaking my self confidence…… Nothing z hidden from u di…..u know on the top of the world after reading this…..I can’t explain it in words……..now my questions…….will arjun witness raneil on bike??will arjun know the guy with whom he saw rads was none other than Neil???will samrat get punishment???u know I want this nandini out of the scene as soon as possible……. Srsly she has disgusted a bro and sis relationship……. I mean how cud a sister who claims to love her bro be this selfish??…… I love my bro like anything…… can bear any pain for him….his happiness matters most for me……he z the only person to whom I can never say no even in my dreams…whom u will be using to make arjun jealous…… Neil or teji?????now toh I can think only of these questions…… If I get more I will eat ur head again…….nd u won’t be able to escape me……lol….srsly di nothing cud be better than this……u know the time we r not chatting naa I actually read ur updates….. becoz I miss u soo much…..srsly I do…..u know our stories r exact reflection of our thoughts….. opinions…u know every time I read ur stories I conclude that u r a very emotional person but u don’t show up…..I know it…..di this world z not like u sweetest than the the ice cream itself so pls don’t let anyone play with ur emotional now……..what compliment I can give u…..just feeling lucky to have such an amazing person in my life…..if I don’t stop here than I may end up writing an essay on u…….do update soon….love you dear….stay blessed??????

    • Gauri

      Love you Supriya for the lovely comment 🙂 just keep the right attitude and life will be easy 🙂 now your answers yes Neil will intentionally make him view that 🙂 Arjun will know its Neil and will grow more jealous it will be Neil…who will burn Arjun to ashes..Nandini pls bear her for some more time…them will throw her permanently 🙂 I am emotional tats true 🙂 I have hard shell which is hard to brk 🙂 thanks a ton for the amazing comment ) loads of love and hugs for you 🙂

      • Supriya

        Thanks for ur lovely answers now toh m more desperate to read next part…..I m not able to figure out which ff of yours z making me more curious dpo or this one……di pakka naa Thursday???? I m srsly desperate but I know u r busy too so won’t request u to update sooner than Thursday……well I hav attitude but I don’t have control over my tongue and it lands me in problems….. Loads of love…..tc

      • Gauri

        darling thursday is not far…I am biting my nail as I havent even started yet ….but wil do today 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  7. roshini

    Good one Gauri…I wanted to see this in the original story 🙂 love you for writing this 🙂

  8. Wo wowww wowwww….. Mind blowing…. Last scene made me all crazy girl lol… Neil and Radhu a team lovely.. Arjun and radhika’s new building up love.. Sam bechari always learning lesson from outr Gauri di!! :p 😉 … Neil to story ka hero nikla… 🙂 aaj dil chura liya … He is a character that can be very realistic.. Love him

    • Gauri

      Thanks Roshni 🙂 Sam is a kaan ki Kachi she believes what she shouldn’t cant blame her…her best frnd married the guy she was supposed to marry…her reaction is justified 🙂 I love Neil too 🙂 one request pls post Kindle aI am dying to read that and do let me know 🙂 love you 🙂

      • ohhhh goddd!!! i am unable to control my feet… Jumping feets high and dancing crazily.. It means so much to me that you want to read my ff… mde my day.. Im on top of the world diii…
        And yah sam is really heartbroken for now 🙁 but I know you will soon give her the happy happy life and love .. 🙂

      • Gauri

        you deserve it 🙂 I have fallen in love with your ff…though I have never watched the serial…g8 going love u

  9. Gayu

    I was eagerly waiting for this episode thanks for your wonderful episode it is a treat to read

  10. feby

    diiiiiiiiiiii..awesome aesome awesome…loved it….and di…will u do me one favor..my plan is cancelled for going to native today coz of harthal in state for the justice for jisha…. so i will leave only tomorrow..will u plz update dpo today night itself…..and di…u were waiting for my nata score na…i got merit score in tat….aftr many days my parents were happy…i was happy…. i cud prove tat my hands cud do wonders in sketches …. i was soooo happy strday….love u di

    • Supriya

      Hey feby dear congratulations…… srsly very happy for u…..enjoy ur success…. Srsly nata z hard to crack my cousin had given last year…….I have seen her struggle so know what it means to crack it…..tc

      • feby

        thank u soo much dear…..ya..iam enjoying….i didnt find it hard to crack…coz i used to draw and paint a lot…and its based on tat skill….i havnt evn gone for coaching..i was dumbstruck whn i saw my result…i didnt expect tis…all othr students who wrote wid me used to go for coaching..and their result were lesser than mine…now i was thinking if i wud have gone for tis coaching i cud hav scored much better coz the coaching i went for ..i didnt crack it and tis one i did…all happns opposite in my case..lol….

    • Gauri

      Yipeee congrats Feby…a big hug for you …I will try and update dpo tonight …but not promising …and thanks for the lovely comment 🙂 stay happy) stay blessed 🙂 love u

    • Rg

      Hi tat is grt news… Congrats dear feby.. enjoy ur success and stay blessedly happy always. Hugs to u. Take care.

      • feby

        tq rg….. iam waiting for my cbse results now…thn everythng will b decided na….for now iam enjoying….lol…little sad coz frm now onwards i have to leave my chocolates forevr…..

      • feby

        tq aasthuuuuu…whr were u??? i didnt c ur comments recently..and did u notice…a new aastha in TU….lol…..iam happy to make u proud dear..but still many probs reg admission is thr…..

  11. Aastha

    Hello Gauri
    I am new to your story….. U gave an awesome start to the story….. I m very big fan of Ardhika …….the way story is going to be I m very excited…… Arjun’s care n concern……… Raneil bonding too good.. ….. .. Waiting for Nandini’s true revelations
    Update soon.

    • Gauri

      Hi Aastha 🙂 my childhood frns name is also aastha she is a swt hrt 🙂 thanks for the lovely comment dear 🙂 will post next one soon 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  12. ❤?Natasha?❤

    Hi…….gauri di…….can i call u di???????……..pls….rply….in comment…..i will not call u gauri di if u dont lyk it…………todays epi was sooooooooo cute………..waiting to see arjun jealous……………pls updatr the nxt part sooon……and wen r u updating the nxt chappy???????…..pls reply….

    • Gauri

      Natasha dear 🙂 you are most welcome to call me di or Gauri whatever pleases you…and I dont feel bad about anything so chill 🙂 thanks a ton dear for the lovely comment 🙂 soon you will see Arjun on flames 🙂 will update thursday for sure 🙂 bless you 🙂

  13. chandan

    Nice epi Gauri…waiting for the office scenes to start…
    Gauri a small suggestion…make an attempt to get some PH mail IDs/ Cvs and send them your stories… I want your stories to get noticed …I wish and hope u get recognized too…my best wishes to you…

    • Gauri

      Chandan a thousand thanks to you 🙂 well I will be sharing a small prologue of the book I am planning to write with dpo….pls pls pls read that and let me know how was it 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  14. Wow Gauri dear….superb!! Outstanding !!! Anything i say it will be less…really u r amazing writer …keep it up dear…my fav mandir scene ….Ardhika’s cute knok jokes loved it.. Even he want to realize her she is his wife…soo cute arjun… I always like Neil …he is gem of person…n teji too..their team superb…nandni drama Queen how sis she is ..pls kill her…raneil bike ride osm.. Reminder me real mmz when he helped her to reach airport bid goodbye her papa n dadaji …really loved raneil bond….precap superb…waiting for next one…iam very happy to read this chapter…thanx Sweety for lovely ff…llots of loves n hugs for u…tc…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Susi for the lovely comment 🙂 will post the next one soon 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  15. Gianna

    Awesome amazing brilliant and so on. Loved this very very much. ‘Coated with bitter gourd’ laughed hard at that. Oh how I would have love to see Nandini’s face walking up to that bedroom scene. Waiting to know Neil’s master plan. TC dear and God bless u. Love u ???

  16. aastha

    loved it di…………my fav part: Neil giving Rads lift………….plzz in the next epi make Arjun see Rads going in Neil’s bike…………………I want to see him burn due to jealousy…………….. I’ll comment rest after my results come and if it is good………………

    • Gauri

      Thanks Aastha darling 🙂 Arjun will see Radhika and Neil together and many times…I will make him lose his appetite 😛 . All the very best for your result 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  17. pankh

    amazing as always.. want arjun nd sam to burn 2 d core..i always like a jealous arjun… u r jst superb.. waiting desperately 4 d nxt.. luv u..tc..

  18. Rg

    Gauri I will await eagerly for this one on Thursday . Can u plan a double damaka on this one too sometime soon? I know ur busy… So if time permits pls try. And regarding ur New book can u give me a hint? Am very curious to know abt it? Will u kindly share it with me too? Thanks.. love all ur stories…

    • Gauri

      Rg darling , I will write double dhamaka for this one may be over the weekend…and regarding the book I will share with all of you its just a brief para…do let me know your feedback 🙂

  19. aastha

    well as usual you rocked it di……….now I’m gonna say my fav parts:
    1) Arjun adjustig his rear view mirror to see Rads……n Rads blushing and adjusting her hair to hide her nervousness………..
    2) Nandini is a horrible hag……..I hate her sooooooooo much……never thought she would stoop so low as to kill Mala…………..happy that Arjun saved her in neck of time n that Rads realized that Arjun has a heart of gold……………
    3)Loved their nok-joks in temple………..esp this line :
    Arjun : Why ???? its a sweet simple name A-R-J-U-N…….
    Rads: Sweet ??? its coated with bitter guard………
    4) Ardhikia at night…….loved Arjun’s acts once she was asleep……..and Nandini’s anger filled face in the morning……………
    5) Din’t like Kritika-Zubin talk abt Rads……..hw can they talk like that??? found it very disgusting………..loved Teji……..happy that he stood by her…….
    6) Liked Teji-Neil plans to snatch the key……
    7) The car scene…….I din’t understand y Arjun shouted at Rads to get out ???? last ni8 he was all amiable and good and nw y the sudden change ????
    8) Rads picking stone to throw was very nice……very happy reading Neil’s dialogues……..happy that you’ll make Arjun burn down in jealousy…………I want to see all that very badly………………….

    Thanks for such a lovely chapter………………my results are good and I’m satisfied…..I expected more for Maths….but din’t get it……and my physics mark was something unexpected……I never dreamed of that mark………..nw I’m going…..I asked whether you worked in white field coz ri8 nw my sis is in banglore and she is doing internship in some company in white field………….anyway…………love u……………TC….

      • Gauri

        Soory cld not reply u in detail was hell tired yesterday…congratulations on your result…
        I work in Sarjapur outer ring road…far from white filed well I have never been to white field…tc love an enjoy the success 🙂

  20. Roma

    Awesome, wowwww lovely episode gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweeeeeet darling friend. …it’s really superbbbb n dynamite episode. …
    Soooooooo sorry for late comment. …I just loved the way neil investigating about nandini n trusting rads….neil rads n teji one team wowwww. …loved it…muaaaaahhhhhh. …I wanted to see exactly this in the real series. ….but now you are making our dream true…arjun loving rads but bound with nandini’s revange….nandini very evil…rads gave very good challenge to her…..San burning on jealousy n anger
    ….neil playing very well….awesoooooome reply to Sam’s call at night…gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my dearrr…muaaaaahhhhhh…I love you soooooooo muchhhhhh. ….my dear you’re amazing God gifted writer….be like this always….God bless you with lots of success and happiness….keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads.

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